-Shiro- wrote:

Thanks for special thanks =D

Yes wrote:

n_n Here's some things I thought would be nice to add~ [Just suggestions!!!]

[Hard]

00:13:53 (11) - Finish (or another hitsound?) Clap
00:16:42 (11) - ^ ^ XD
00:26:90 (5) - Too close Fixed
01:12:37 (3) - Start slider at 01:12:33 instead Ok
01:31:56 (6) - Whistle Interesting. Ok, I did that
01:33:01 (6) - ^ ^
01:40:59 (1) - End Spinner at 01:41:138 and finish I think it's better not use this one .__.
01:55:22 () - Add note here Ok
02:32:07 - Maybe insert break here I don't think so .__.
02:41:28 (1) - Clap (I think)
02:41:64 (3) - ^
02:42:00 (5) - ^
02:42:36 (7) - ^
02:42:72 (9) - ^
02:43:08 (11) - ^
02:47:06 (1) - ^
02:47:42 (3) - ^
02:47:78 (5) - ^ etc, etc.
02:50:67 (5) - Clap? I don't know xD
02:52:12 (5) - ^
03:21:01 (1) - Finish?
Used the half of these guys up here


STAR! Cute hit circles, hehe.

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

Video: Yes
Custom Skin: Yes (Please fix the spinner art. It doesn't look right.) I'll fix it later ^^
[Current] Size: 10.60 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags.)

[Easy] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.) Fixed =] Fixed
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40 (Looks a bit too fast for an easy difficulty...) Well, now it's Normal, right? ^^
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?) It's not that, i used Distance Snap, but i used to the Medium Grid. But don't worry, fixed the Distance using the Small Grid now ^^
[Current] Objects: 236 ( 174 Circles / 56 Sliders / 6 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 420
[Current] Max Score: 1,741,876
[Current] Star Rating: 2.96 (Quite high for an "easy" difficulty...)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 4

Here are the options.... either tone down the difficulty of the map or just change it to [Normal]. This map is NOT easy. Also, get the spacing checked through the whole map.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos where it is not needed. Ok
00:33:56 (B) - Delete and replace break. Done
01:10:97 (1,2) - Its kinda hard to see yellow notes with a spinner that has a yellow background... Took off a New Combo back there =]
01:41:51 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok
02:25:60 (B) - ^ Ok
02:31:20 (1) - Not mathcing with the lyrics... u think? õ.o
03:00:84 (B) - Delete and replace break.
03:20:36 (1,1,1) - Single note combos.... ok =/


Notes: This map is going to need some work. Check into the timing, the spacing, and the slider velocity. Also, i'd rather call this "normal' than "easy" to make things easier, but you need to make an easier difficulty.


[Hard] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?) It's not that, i used Distance Snap, but i used to the Medium Grid. But don't worry, fixed the Distance using the Small Grid now ^^
[Current] Objects: 429 ( 370 Circles / 54 Sliders / 5 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 576
[Current] Max Score: 5,892,882
[Current] Star Rating: 4.64
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 7

Double check the spacing in the map. Its not distance snapped.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Single note combos... Fixed
00:33:65 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok õ.o
01:40:68 (1) - Does not start or end properly. Move the starting point of the spinner to 01:40:59 then extend to 01:41:68. Don't forget to replace the break in the process. Thanks, way better ^^
02:28:27 (1) - Doesn't sound right... I changed it but i cant find a good timing .__.
02:31:16 (1) - ^
02:33:51 (1,2,3,4) - Looks really odd having the notes over the slider like that... Ok ^^
03:00:79 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok =]

Notes: This difficulty is going to need some work as well. Make sure to go through the whole map using the distance snap.Also, check into the timing as well.

Overall: The map is okay, but still needs more work before pushing to be ranked. First off, the difficuly list gap isn't too reasonable. Have a [Easy] then a [Hard] is a bit intimidating for newer players. Also, [Easy] looks more like a normal-hard to me. Its better to concider turning it into [Normal] instead and make an easier difficulty. Make sure to have the spinner art check since it doesn't look neat. Make sure to add in the Source and Tags for all difficulties. I'll drop my star in then.

Wojjan wrote:

Ok, but run the changes by me once, mkay? I wouldn't want my style to disappear.

GbL wrote:

New version:

thefuriouschemist wrote:

I want to see this ranked! ^^
Are you planning on doing the other there she is steps?
No problems I found really...
It could just be my skin, but the combo finishes are normal, not the skin you used. I think this is only for the 300 finishes, not a 100 finish...i'm not really sure...
Star for you!!!

Leorda wrote:

[General]
Source? I don't know what to put here ;__;

[Attraction]
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from right, release it Ok~
00:50:007 (2,3,4) - Hold Shift Button and move it. If you spot some lines from left, release it Same here~
01:40:608 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:42:054 Ok~

[GbL's Love]
00:26:087 (4,6) - Allign with 3 Ok~
00:32:029 (x) - Place note here and activate the new combo Ok~
00:32:065 (1) - No new combo Ok~
01:36:099 (3,4) - A little confusing I think it's easy to see ._.
01:56:014 (2) - Allign with 1 (end of slider) Ok~
02:11:069 (3) - Allign with 2 (end of slider) This one... I don't think so :/
02:12:041 (4) - Allign with 3 (end of slider) This one I can do ^^

[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:059 (x) - Place note here Sorry, I like the way that is now >_<
00:15:049 (x) - ^ Same here >_<
01:11:069 (1) - Allign with 3 Not really my style but ok~
01:57:005 (7) - Extend this slider to white tick WTF!? O_O How could I let this happen!? Thanks a lot!!

Perfect SONG!!!!
STAR

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Hi DjPop. I were thinking if u could make a diff for my beatmap...
You see, i'm not really good at making Insanes and i know that you are ^^
Do it if you want to, ok? =3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/7330

thankz for reading this message

DJPop wrote:

~Attraction~
Fine.

~GbL's Love~
Many notes are lacked of hitclaps :<
02:35:064 - delete 2 timing sections Ow, I didn't saw that o.o
End Kiai at the end of the map Ok~

~Forbidden Passion~
01:05:730 (5,1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2) Right!!!!
01:40:608 (1,2) - add some hitfinish Done


+Star


I still remember this XD Ow god! I forgot about that!!!! O__________________O

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Hi DjPop. I were thinking if u could make a diff for my beatmap...
You see, i'm not really good at making Insanes and i know that you are ^^
Do it if you want to, ok? =3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/7330

thankz for reading this message

tmokb93 wrote:

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Use 1/4 Snap Divisor.
Use Grid Level 3.
Add a Source.

Now i'll mod with the 1/4 Snap Divisor.
[Attraction]
Ok.

[GbL's Love]
ok too.

[Forbidden Passion]
00:12:599 (x) Add a Circle here. Sorry, I like the way that is now ;_;
00:15:490 (x) ^. ^

And that's all I can do for your map! Starred.

Lokamp wrote:

Attraction
00:47:839 (4,4,4) - clap here Sorry, don't like it .__.

Gbl's Love
01:33:379 (1,3) - clap here Ok~
01:56:872 (spinner) - set hitsounds's volume to 0 for this spinner Good idea
02:10:968 (2,3) - clap these sliders's end Ok~
02:12:775 (5) - clap this slider's start and 4th repeat, finish its end good good good!
02:52:894 (1,3) - clap here Ok~

Forbidden Passion
00:20:731 (2) - clap here Sorry, no >_<
01:12:326 (2) - silence this slider (no hitsounds) ^
02:15:667 (3) - fill the break after this slider with a spinner now there is a spinner here


... easier modes doesn't mean shorter modes, remember! In most part of the ranked maps, yes it does o.o

1. Copy the SB code into osb. file and delete osb. file
2. there's a diffculty (-Shiro- and roxkyuubiforever) in the song file, but no notes in it, delete it please

1. 00:55:429 (3), 00:56:152 (5), 00:56:513 (6) - remove clap and add clap at 00:55:790 (4) to make the rhythm same to previous notes
2. 01:15:579 and 01:15:850 - unused timing section? delete they

1. 02:57:954 (5) - slider finish here
2. I think there are too many break period in this diffculty, reduce some, my suggestion is to leave some long break and delete short break

1. 00:30:128 (1) - this jump is hard to read
2. 02:03:740 (1) - finish here

1. 01:12:326 (2) - Move this 1/4 later, then decrease slider length by 1/4.

1. 01:04:649 (x) - Extra note (?)

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by 2 or 3 please.

Breeze wrote:

OK, let's mod go go go~
The hit0.png I would do it when I back school (I mod your map in home, and there's no photoshop in my home's computer)

[General]

1. Copy the SB code into osb. file and delete osb. file
2. there's a diffculty (-Shiro- and roxkyuubiforever) in the song file, but no notes in it, delete it please I don't see it ._. I'll re-upload to see if it will be fixed

[Attraiction]

1. 00:55:429 (3), 00:56:152 (5), 00:56:513 (6) - remove clap and add clap at 00:55:790 (4) to make the rhythm same to previous notes I think it's better the way that is now >_>
2. 01:15:579 and 01:15:850 - unused timing section? delete they You are right o_o

[GbL's Love]

1. 02:57:954 (5) - slider finish here Ok~
2. I think there are too many break period in this diffculty, reduce some, my suggestion is to leave some long break and delete short break Filled a few

[Forbidden Passion]

1. 00:30:128 (1) - this jump is hard to read I like it but if anyone else say this, I'll fix it
2. 02:03:740 (1) - finish here Ok~

star~

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

BPM: 166 Sorry, how gave me that 006 before the offset were a BAT so I think that I shouldn't change it >_<

[Attraction]

00:27:597 (x) - Add a break
01:00:489 (x) - ^
01:09:163 (x) - ^
01:12:055 (x) - ^[/color]

[GbL's Love]

Slider Tick Rate: 1 [/color]

[Forbidden Passion]

I love it <3

Starred~

Armin wrote:

Add the tag GbL on all the difficulties D:
Optimize the offset: 10964

[Attraction]

00:45:670 Remove the whistle in the middle, add a whistle at the start instead Ok~
00:48:562 As above Ok~
00:51:453 As above Ok~
01:28:319 Whistle Sorry, like the way that is now
01:29:042 Whistle ^
01:29:403 Remove the whistle here, if you want Sorry, no >_<
01:30:488 Whistle+finish at the start, then add a whistle on the second repeat Ok~
01:34:825 Whistle Sorry, like the way that is now
01:36:271 Finish at the start Ok~

GbL's Love

No problems.

[Forbidden Passion]

00:21:084 Place a hitcircle here, then move 1/4 to the right the spinner, and reduce it of 1/4 Got it!
00:32:116 (1,2,3,1) Replace better these hitcircles, like in the picture:

NIIICE! Thanks

Starred, good map. D:

Gladi wrote:

[General]
The music of this map is really weird, making this point 'off beat'
00:22:538 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2).
It should be snapped almost 1/8 back.
Fix that place with some one who is good with timing. I think it's funny too but I don't think that I should reesnap it 1/8 later =/ I'll ask a BAT about that

[Forbidden Passion]

1. 01:12:326 (2) - Move this 1/4 later, then decrease slider length by 1/4. Nice :]

[GbL's Love]

1. 01:04:649 (x) - Extra note (?) Yeah, I think it's a good idea :]

[Attraction]

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by 2 or 3 please. Ok >_<

Starred.

Lizbeth wrote:

You don't need the name of the song in the tags Fixed~
comboburst must not exceed 500 px of width Fixed~

Forbidden Passion
no problems, cool map

GbL's Love
fine

Attraction
dicrase Overall diff
i find the spacing a lil too big for easy. Decreased 1 >_>

nice work
have star

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

.osb file references a nonexistant image file.
Comboburst is too big, should be under 500px wide, I think.
hit0.png looks a bit pixelly around the edges.

Remove the title from the tags. Weird title though; check the capitalization and the (step 1)? I'm not sure... I'll take a look

[Attraction]

00:20:731 (1,1) - Might be a bit too close, but should be okay. I think it's ok >_>
00:47:116 (2,3,4) - Center? Ok~
00:50:008 (2,3,4) - ^ (thus allowing them to stack) Ok~
00:55:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'd move them a grid closer to the middle (except 4, of course); right now 3-4 looks farther than 2-3. Ok~

[GbL's Love]

Preview time is different here, albeit very slightly.

00:18:924 (3) - Consider shifting this to the left a bit to be in line with 2? Did it :]
01:59:041 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't fit the music very well, in my opinion. I think it's cool ._.
02:11:691 (3) - Line this up with 2's endpoint? Moved the (1) and the (2) to fix that~

[Forbidden Passion]

00:57:597 - This break probably should be removed; it's so short that the arrows appear before the break even starts. Ok~
01:00:489 - ^ Ok~
01:03:561 (2) - Didn't really like this jump much, but it's okay as a whole. I like it ,__,
01:17:838 - Short break. Ok~
01:23:440 (5) - A grid up and left will keep the staircase formation in shape. RIGHT!
01:29:223 (5) - ^ (up and right, of course) Ok~~
01:37:716 (5) - Move the repeat upwards a bit so it doesn't touch the 4? Looks better, in my opinion. Fixed DD
02:02:655 - Short break. Ok
02:04:101 - ^ Ok
02:37:353 - ^ Ok
02:42:955 (5) - Same as before. Ok~~
02:48:738 (5) - ^ Ok~~

Star~

Lissette wrote:

This map is really good, but after reading Zekira's mod post, i can't proto-bubble T.T I wish I could help you on that >.< but I'm not as good as Zekira on timing....

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

I think it's ready. Follow the rhythm of the song very well.

And the genre of this song is Pop (Korean).

Star for u.

Teara wrote:

No problems found

Have a star :>

Kinesia wrote:

Nice one!!

Bittersweet wrote:

Pt-Br Gibe Moni Plox, okay? ._.

Uhn. Sobre a skin, acho que os corações que substituem a star estão meio exagerados. E acho que a imagem do miss poderia ser diferente, meio que não combina. E~ tinha skin no spin antes? Tirou pq? D: Pq tava escrota D:

Well, das dificuldades em si, eu não tenho o que falar do easy a não ser te dar os parabéns por não fazer o que eu chamo de easy pra pessoas saidas da apae. Sabe, aqueles que parece que o cara pensa "dels, se aparecerem dois beats na tela ao mesmo tempo eles surtam" e.e' [Eu tbm odeio isso >_> Confundem easy com beginer ¬¬ mas mesmo assim, ta bem facil, eu acho.] e as outras tão divertidas pacas de jogar *o* Parabéns de novo! *o*

E só pra constar, ADORO esse flashzinho <3 Adorei a idéia de mapear ele e tal *o*

E, óbvio, Staaaaar~~~