-Umi- wrote:

Oh oh oh ~ Merry Christmas or not

Normal

- 00:33:552 (1) - this rythm is kinda strange imo, what about this ? fixed

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- 01:01:787 (1) - ^ fixed

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- 01:11:199 (1) - nicu =w=b thank you xD
- 01:18:846 (2,3) - i think you can improve this blanket >.< fixed~
- 01:58:258 (1) - same as 00:33:552 (1) - k
- 02:07:669 (1) - xD =w=
- 02:26:493 (1) - same as 00:33:552 (1) - you should really use a normal rythm k..><
- 02:35:905 (1) - what about this shape, it fit with the beat '-' good~!

286,154,155905,6,0,B|337:126|354:33|354:33|390:122|469:118|469:118|390:180|415:251,1,450,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- 02:45:316 (1,3) - symmetry no ? copy/paste (1) ctrl+H k
- nice diff :3

Hard

- 00:18:552 (1,2,3) - like this better flow imo fixed

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- 00:19:434 (1,2) - move them a bit to make 00:20:022 (2) - stack with 00:18:846 (3) - 's end no><
- 00:30:905 (4,1,2,1,2) - try this pattern o3o wow

276,157,30905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
122,157,31199,5,6,0:0:0:0:
250,248,31493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,31787,5,8,0:0:0:0:
199,95,32081,1,0,0:0:0:0:

- 00:49:434 (8) - slider 1/2 instead ><?
- 00:53:993 (5) - delete ? i hear nothing who need a note nope;w;
- 01:08:552 (5,6) - delete these notes and start the spinner at 01:08:405 - fit really better imo hmm..you'r right ;_;
- 01:13:405 (2) - same as 00:53:993 (5) - (well i'll skip the others, i think you understood what i mean after it's up to u :3)
- 01:15:316 (1) - it should be a triplet instead here hmm...
- 02:00:022 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i prefer this pattern i'll think about it

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- the diff is a bit overmapped imo, i mean there is lot of triplet who aren't really needed but except this it play well

cute song *-*

good luck on rank

Melan Blue wrote:

Sure, I wanna help. c;

[General]

• *The clap is too quiet, I can barely hear it over the music. Maybe you can find a better hit-clap file? hmm..

[Normal]

• 02:07:669 (1) - move it to x192 y104 ok
  02:12:375 (1,2,3) - move them to the center like this http://puu.sh/5KKhZ fixed
  02:19:434 (1) - curve it like this http://puu.sh/5KFEz fixed~
  02:44:140 (2) - flip it vertically and place it and (3) like this http://puu.sh/5KFNB ok
  02:48:258 (4) - maybe replace this slider with a single note right in the center? hmm...no need><

[Hard]

• 00:31:787 (1) - remove nc
  00:33:552 (6) - add nc
  01:00:022 (1) - remove nc
  01:00:610 (2) - move it to x172 y124
  01:00:905 (3) - move it to x112 y236
  01:08:552 (5,6) - remove these notes and move the spinner like this http://puu.sh/5KJvc
  02:32:081 (4) - stack it under the previous (2)
  02:33:258 (4,5) - remove these sliders and instead place a spinner like this http://puu.sh/5KJwG
  this way you can keep a better flow and the nc at 02:35:022 (1) - makes more sense.

all fixed as your said in Hard!>o<

Good luck! Ho ho ho!

smallboat wrote:

Hi,yanlu,Forum PM req.

1. Red words: Should be fix it.
2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:33:552 (1) - 這個是應該可以blanket吧? 都快要blanket了。 呃 有啊D:
00:35:905 (1,2,3) - 感覺這兩個用圓弧比較容易表達歌曲，個人意見:

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嗯...不用吧><
00:48:552 (2,4) - 這兩個跟長條尾擺成圓弧狀應該很好看? 現在這樣也可以..
00:57:081 (1,3) - 前面有對稱，這邊怎麼沒對稱? 我沒有故意對稱哦
01:04:140 (1,2,3) - 同00:35:905 (1,2,3)
01:07:081 (1) - 妳這邊節奏跟這邊02:03:552 (1,2,3) 一樣呢，可是間距怎不一樣? 被發現惹lol fixed
01:19:434 (3,1) - 一看就知道兩個不一樣，用對稱? changed
01:24:434 (4) - 蓋到一點不太好看。 fix
01:32:375 (1,2) - 這邊就用的蠻適合，所以不用改這裏。
01:58:258 (1) - 跟前面Blanket? ^
02:31:199 (1) - 同 01:07:081. ok

[Hard] 我覺得紅線後面應該可以放幾個note和滑條? 可以試試:)

00:18:552 (1,2,3) - 似乎連打放的不太好看，好像隨手擺出來的，放個圓弧? ok
00:31:493 (2) - 微調一下跟00:31:199 (1,1) 呈對稱? 已修改
00:47:375 (1,2,3) - 同00:18:552 ^
00:49:434 (8) - 微調上面點比較好看。 k
00:55:905 (7) - 前面有疊到，這邊怎沒疊? 啊?
00:57:081 (1,2,3,4,1) - 似乎可使用ctrl+g跳位一下比較好玩。 不了這樣會變難~
01:13:552 (1) - 這個是在大白線上，覺得應該能放遠點作跳。 這是梗
01:36:493 (6) - Blanket
01:38:552 (6,7) - ^ fix
01:41:787 (1) - ^
01:48:552 (1) - 這個結尾在大白線有點奇怪。 o_o;照人聲走的
02:07:375 (1,2,3) - 不太好看的形狀 改了一點弧度

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.