哇啦克絲yaaヾ(*´∀`*)ノ"
Oh, ok ><BeatofIke wrote:
Wow! Your BPM and offset is literally Perfect (even while test playing).
Your timing is in perfect condition!
No kudosu please! :3
Hard你說的幾乎都改了> <m1223961117 wrote:
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Hard點我打開Difficulty
AR8
01:22:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 5連打就好,和前面一樣 k
01:43:846 (7) - 換成一個circle就好了 ok
01:44:140 (1,2) - 前面都是接裡來的,這裡分開會混淆,做的和01:57:081 (3,4) 一樣比較好 fix
01:47:963 (7,8) - 讓這兩個保持平行 hmm...沒必要
01:51:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 和前面一樣,不解釋了 k
02:02:963 (5) - NC fixed
02:09:434 (7,8,1) - 不建議連打做成這樣,這首歌是很溫和的歌,這樣就沒有聖誕的感覺了。後面有這樣的連打我就不多講了 我是故意做得越來越難的><
02:19:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 和前面一樣 k
02:25:905 (1) - del NC k
02:35:022 (1,2,3) - 1/8 beat snap ...?!不懂意思
02:44:140 (1) - del NC k
就我看,Hard前半段都沒什麼問題...後半段加油啊>口<
Normal點我打開我先說好了,整個難度都沒什麼問題
但...大大你有用Distance Snap去做Normal圖嗎??
我看的出大大部分有用Snap做,但是要整張圖都是用一種Snap做吧
Snap定好數值就不要去亂動了,基本上應該是用1.3 snap spacing去做的
General
不像是Normal,改成Easy比較好吧
Difficulty
CS3 AR3 OD2
還有把音效加上去吧
286,154,155905,6,0,B|337:126|354:33|354:33|390:122|469:118|469:118|390:180|415:251,1,450,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 02:45:316 (1,3) - symmetry no ? copy/paste (1) ctrl+H
276,157,30905,1,2,0:0:0:0:- 00:49:434 (8) - slider 1/2 instead
122,157,31199,5,6,0:0:0:0:
250,248,31493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,31787,5,8,0:0:0:0:
199,95,32081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Thank you Umi~<3-Umi- wrote:
Oh oh oh ~ Merry Christmas or notNormal
- 00:33:552 (1) - this rythm is kinda strange imo, what about this ? fixed
- 01:01:787 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:11:199 (1) - nicu =w=b thank you xD
- 01:18:846 (2,3) - i think you can improve this blanket >.< fixed~
- 01:58:258 (1) - same as 00:33:552 (1) - k
- 02:07:669 (1) - xD =w=
- 02:26:493 (1) - same as 00:33:552 (1) - you should really use a normal rythm k..><
- 02:35:905 (1) - what about this shape, it fit with the beat '-' good~!286,154,155905,6,0,B|337:126|354:33|354:33|390:122|469:118|469:118|390:180|415:251,1,450,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 02:45:316 (1,3) - symmetry no ? copy/paste (1) ctrl+H k
- nice diff :3Hard
- 00:18:552 (1,2,3) - like this better flow imo fixed
- 00:19:434 (1,2) - move them a bit to make 00:20:022 (2) - stack with 00:18:846 (3) - 's end no><
- 00:30:905 (4,1,2,1,2) - try this pattern o3o wow276,157,30905,1,2,0:0:0:0:- 00:49:434 (8) - slider 1/2 instead ><?
122,157,31199,5,6,0:0:0:0:
250,248,31493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,31787,5,8,0:0:0:0:
199,95,32081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:53:993 (5) - delete ? i hear nothing who need a note nope;w;
- 01:08:552 (5,6) - delete these notes and start the spinner at 01:08:405 - fit really better imo hmm..you'r right ;_;
- 01:13:405 (2) - same as 00:53:993 (5) - (well i'll skip the others, i think you understood what i mean after it's up to u :3)
- 01:15:316 (1) - it should be a triplet instead here hmm...
- 02:00:022 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i prefer this pattern i'll think about it
- the diff is a bit overmapped imo, i mean there is lot of triplet who aren't really needed but except this it play well
cute song *-*
good luck on rank
Thank you for modding~<3Melan Blue wrote:
Sure, I wanna help. c;
[General][Normal]
- *The clap is too quiet, I can barely hear it over the music. Maybe you can find a better hit-clap file? hmm..
[Hard]
- 02:07:669 (1) - move it to x192 y104 ok
02:12:375 (1,2,3) - move them to the center like this http://puu.sh/5KKhZ fixed
02:19:434 (1) - curve it like this http://puu.sh/5KFEz fixed~
02:44:140 (2) - flip it vertically and place it and (3) like this http://puu.sh/5KFNB ok
02:48:258 (4) - maybe replace this slider with a single note right in the center? hmm...no need><all fixed as your said in Hard!>o<
- 00:31:787 (1) - remove nc
00:33:552 (6) - add nc
01:00:022 (1) - remove nc
01:00:610 (2) - move it to x172 y124
01:00:905 (3) - move it to x112 y236
01:08:552 (5,6) - remove these notes and move the spinner like this http://puu.sh/5KJvc
02:32:081 (4) - stack it under the previous (2)
02:33:258 (4,5) - remove these sliders and instead place a spinner like this http://puu.sh/5KJwG
this way you can keep a better flow and the nc at 02:35:022 (1) - makes more sense.
Good luck! Ho ho ho!
謝謝小船~<3smallboat wrote:
Hi,yanlu,Forum PM req.
- Red words: Should be fix it.
- Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my personal opinion.
[General]
None.
[Normal]
00:33:552 (1) - 這個是應該可以blanket吧? 都快要blanket了。 呃 有啊D:
00:35:905 (1,2,3) - 感覺這兩個用圓弧比較容易表達歌曲,個人意見: 嗯...不用吧><
00:48:552 (2,4) - 這兩個跟長條尾擺成圓弧狀應該很好看? 現在這樣也可以..
00:57:081 (1,3) - 前面有對稱,這邊怎麼沒對稱? 我沒有故意對稱哦
01:04:140 (1,2,3) - 同00:35:905 (1,2,3)
01:07:081 (1) - 妳這邊節奏跟這邊02:03:552 (1,2,3) 一樣呢,可是間距怎不一樣? 被發現惹lol fixed
01:19:434 (3,1) - 一看就知道兩個不一樣,用對稱? changed
01:24:434 (4) - 蓋到一點不太好看。 fix
01:32:375 (1,2) - 這邊就用的蠻適合,所以不用改這裏。
01:58:258 (1) - 跟前面Blanket? ^
02:31:199 (1) - 同 01:07:081. ok
[Hard] 我覺得紅線後面應該可以放幾個note和滑條? 可以試試:)
00:18:552 (1,2,3) - 似乎連打放的不太好看,好像隨手擺出來的,放個圓弧? ok
00:31:493 (2) - 微調一下跟00:31:199 (1,1) 呈對稱? 已修改
00:47:375 (1,2,3) - 同00:18:552 ^
00:49:434 (8) - 微調上面點比較好看。 k
00:55:905 (7) - 前面有疊到,這邊怎沒疊? 啊?
00:57:081 (1,2,3,4,1) - 似乎可使用ctrl+g跳位一下比較好玩。 不了這樣會變難~
01:13:552 (1) - 這個是在大白線上,覺得應該能放遠點作跳。 這是梗
01:36:493 (6) - Blanket
01:38:552 (6,7) - ^ fix
01:41:787 (1) - ^
01:48:552 (1) - 這個結尾在大白線有點奇怪。 o_o;照人聲走的
02:07:375 (1,2,3) - 不太好看的形狀 改了一點弧度
[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
208,96,127678,2,0,B|216:56|267:58|304:44|304:44|332:140|364:204|364:228|352:244|316:264|255:295|255:295|152:344|124:232|176:172|196:208|247:213|256:208|240:184|232:148|220:120,1,720,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:02:19:149 (4,2) - lower stack leniency to make this look neater
Thank you blissfulyoshi~<3blissfulyoshi wrote:
Okay then, lets try a full mod. (No kds, since I posted before)
If I am not mistaken, this is not an im@s bg, so pls use an im@s related Christmas bg. hmm It isn't. but-but these girls' bg is fit with the song~ thats ok? OAQ
Normal:
00:24:149 (1) - make symmetrical ok
01:18:855 (2,3) - have 3 blanket the end of 2 better fix o _o
01:48:855 (1) - same as 00:24:149 (1) ok
02:07:678 (1) - I think you make this slider more smooth and defined in shape like: (a quick edit, so you can definitely do better
oh...>_<208,96,127678,2,0,B|216:56|267:58|304:44|304:44|332:140|364:204|364:228|352:244|316:264|255:295|255:295|152:344|124:232|176:172|196:208|247:213|256:208|240:184|232:148|220:120,1,720,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:02:19:149 (4,2) - lower stack leniency to make this look neater hmm,can't understand ur clearing means..
02:19:443 (1) - make this blanket 02:19:149 (4,2) better (it looks too sharp right now) fix
02:43:561 (1) - I felt a slider would be more apporpriate here than a circle sure~
Hard: (some of the jumps in hard are a bit questionable at times, but it is probably just me
00:33:414 (7) - move 7 down and rightward to make a smooth curve with 1 ok fixed
02:46:355 (2) - basically same as above this too~
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I have no idea what Dans plans are with this map, so I'll wait till he replies
There's endless work for everyone (:Dangaard wrote:
I wanted to bubble it, lol.