PROGUY wrote:
Alright. As requested, here's my recheck.
[Hard]
- ...I assume you didn't take my advice on attempting to balance between both hands? Remember that if one hand has to do most of the work in your charts, you're gonna make the players suffer A LOT rather than enjoying them. Anyways, some of these below will help you guide parts of it to assure the correct balance.
00:12:613 (12613|2,12787|1,14000|4,14174|5) Try to mirror these notes like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061215 mirror it
00:23:538 I recommend doing either this or this. fixed
00:29:087 (29087|2,29434|2,29781|2,30128|2) Move to 5th column. do other way
00:30:474 Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061229 do other way
00:32:902 (32902|1,32989|3,33076|1) Try this. You can also move these notes to the left by a column if you like from the screenshot. fixed
00:33:943 (33943|2,34116|1,34289|4,34289|3) Personally I don't think these notes are based on anything in the song (because it's a sudden silence part, aside from vocals). I will only recommend removing all of these and then adding two normal notes at this time (for the drum). fixed
00:34:983 (34983|1) Move to 5th column. ...I think I said this before? Must be some deja vu... Oh well. moved
00:35:503 (35503|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. moved
00:36:370 (36370|5) Move to 3rd column. moved
00:37:064 (37064|1) Move to 5th column. moved
00:37:758 (37758|0) Either move this to 7th column or add a new normal note at this time on the 5th or 7th column. added
00:38:451 (38451|4) Move to 3rd column. moved
00:40:359 Add note in 5th column (to match drum beat). added
00:40:532 (40532|2) Move to 4th column. moved
00:41:573 (41573|3,41746|4,41920|1) Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061262 (Also try rearranging this a bit. Looking at this makes me feel uncomfortable.) fixed
00:46:081 (46081|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. move to 2nd
00:46:255 (46255|3,46602|4) Move left by one column. moved
00:47:469 (47469|1) Move to 5th or 7th column. moved
00:47:989 (47989|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. move to 2nd
00:49:550 (49550|2) Move to 2nd column. moved
00:51:284 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061289 fixed but different position
00:52:671 Same as above, but mirrored. fix and added
00:53:191 (53191|4) Move to 3rd column.moved
00:56:833 The patterns you used here with combinations of normal and long notes on either sides make it really awkward. I highly recommend trying to balance them out like this. Keep doing this for the next few measures until 01:16:255. fixed but until 01:06:544 -
01:18:509 (78509|1,78856|2) Remove these notes as they don't fit the song at all. At this same time, add a normal note in 3rd column.
01:21:804 (81804|4,81977|5,82151|3,82324|5) Move left by either 2 or 3 columns. moved 3 column
01:24:578 (84578|2,84752|1,84925|3,85099|1) Move right by either 2 or 3 columns. moved 3 column
01:26:659 (86659|5) Move to any column that the left hand uses (1st to 3rd). moved
01:27:353 (87353|4) Move to 3rd column. moved
01:30:128 I believe I seen this before in the first verse, except it's mirrored. You can use the recommendation from 00:23:538 above, just mirror it. fixed
01:35:677 This and the next measure doesn't fit the song at all, and the short long notes already made it ugly. Delete everything and try this instead. You can alter the patterns any way you like here, but this is my recommended pattern. This pattern also works. fixed
01:40:532 (100532|4,100706|5,100879|2,100879|3) Delete all of these notes, and at this same time add two normal notes in any columns.
01:41:226 Wait, this is the second chorus? Okay, now I understand why this is much more difficult. Compared to the first chorus at 00:34:636, this part is way harder due to the long note in the way. I will recommend two methods to solve this issue (just use either one). Method One: Delete about a third or half of the normal notes in measures that has a long note inside, then rearrange the pattern. Method Two: Delete the long notes, then rearrange the normal notes' patterns. fixed
01:50:937 (110937|4) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. already change pattern
01:52:324 Continue with either one of the two methods in 01:41:226. fixed
02:02:209 Add a normal note in 3rd column. not do
02:02:555 ^ added
02:02:902 (122902|1,123076|2,123076|3) Delete these notes as, again, they don't fit in the song.where's this issue ?
02:12:266 (132266|5,132613|5) Move to 3rd column. moved
02:24:578 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061354 didn't change it
02:27:006 Third chorus. Use what I've suggested above since the patterns are similar (or exactly the same?) as the ones used in the first chorus.keeping like this
[Maximum]
- I noticed that you use two long notes with different timings and lengths in various parts of this chart. IMO this is usually fine in an Insane chart, but this specific song doesn't feel to deserve that kind of treatment. The first example at 00:24:752 does not make any sense at all with the purpose of these long notes. The solution to some of this is to make the first long note end at the time where the second long note starts. As for the ones from 00:56:833 onwards, have them end at the same times as the other long note like this.
00:10:185 (10185|1) Move to 5th column.
00:17:295 (17295|3) Move to 3rd column. pairing with this note 00:17:295 (17295|3,17295|6,17642|3,17642|5,17989|4,17989|3) -
00:28:220 Remove this timing section. remove all
01:34:810 ^
02:25:619 ^
- As for the rest, apply similarly to what I've suggested in Hard above (especially deleting notes that makes no sense at all and rebalancing patterns for both hands).
That's all for now. Good luck!