yanaginagi - Yukitoki (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

OblivioN

OblivioN 2013-10-08T03:56:44+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[OblivioN'S normal]

打開Aimod，2個 kiai time錯誤-fixed
SPOILER
00:02:476 (4) - 尾端whistle-done
00:07:748 (1) - 怎麼感覺開頭放在紅線怪怪的。建議跟後面這個00:10:839 (1)-done
00:15:203 (1) - 間距-done
00:17:748 (1) - ^-done
00:18:839 (3) - ^-done
00:21:775 (2) - 跟1的尾端可呈個弧形不錯呀。-done
00:23:230 (1) - 開頭w-done
00:25:411 (2) - 跟尾端呈弧形-done
00:27:593 (5,6) - 不怎好看，6的間距也錯。-done
00:37:030 (3) - 跟前面的2，後面的00:37:758 (1) 呈個弧形。
00:43:567 (8) - 沒疊好-done
00:46:839 (1) - 2沒包好1-done
00:49:020 (4) - 尾端f 好像前面的人說過了(?-done
00:51:208 (3) - 呈個弧形?-done
00:52:299 (2) - +f-done
00:54:480 (7) - 間距-done
01:05:384 (5) - 我覺得往外面呈弧型比較看。-done
01:07:566 (2) - 2的尾端 +個soft的finish試試?-done
01:09:747 (3) - 間距，擺個三角形。-done
01:10:838 (6) - 這能跟01:11:929 (2) 尾端重疊。 -done
01:13:020 (4) - 跟前面的跟01:11:929 (2)看過來明顯很擠再擺個三角形吧。-done
01:17:020 (5,6,7) - 可呈弧形-done
01:20:657 (2) - 間距，盡量0.8。-done
01:21:384 (3) - 沒對準缺口。呈個三角形比較好看。-改了排列/.\
01:22:111 (4) - 往下一點對準缺口。 ^
01:23:566 (2) - 沒對準缺口。^
[Other]

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.Good Luck,祝Ranked.

thank you a lot /.\

Normal 2013/10/8

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Yukitoki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ユキトキ (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:S o a p
Version:OblivioN's normal
Source:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Come wa Machigatteiru
Tags:OniJAM Fycho OblivioN
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Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-08T05:06:58+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[General]奇怪哩..每一個kiai都不一樣..還是現在沒規定了?

GD的话kiai可以不一样（不过一样的话最好）

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-10-08T11:28:48+00:00

Flower wrote:
m4m :3

[General]
打了一遍 Hard比Insane难 Easy比Normal难是我叒还是要怪star system

[Insane]
flow有点怪
音效全是Normal排满感觉有些啪啪啪建议参考Hard
00:02:294 (1,2,3) - 这边莫名减速其实要减速还不如00:01:385 (5) - 就减no
00:17:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 串丑fixed
00:26:139 (1,2,3) - 这个flow不好，建议：
SPOILER
fixed
00:31:593 (1,2,3,4) - 这不是1/2间距么怎么做成像1/3一样fixed
00:37:030 (5,6,7) - 可以对称fixed
00:40:667 (1) - 形状丑减小扭曲的弧度fixed
00:43:929 - 有个音可以考虑下不漏掉它fixed
00:49:390 (3) - 同上建议延长1/2fixed
00:58:475 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - 看一下这个flow
SPOILER
有些强迫的感觉，试试看这样：fixed
SPOILER
01:01:565 (8) - x190,y132？也是flowfixed
01:05:747 (4) - ctrl+G，理由同上fixed

[Fycho's Hard]
00:18:658 (3,4) - 在红线开始的kick slider会让人判断失误，我老是断在这里。建议合成一个。
00:34:849 (1,2,3) - 边缘碰到一起了，考虑下00:35:758 (3) - 移动到126,190做成一个正三角形。
00:35:394 (2,3,4,5,1) - 这个也可以做成一个正五边形
00:50:662 (4,5) - flow有些怪建议平行
00:51:753 (7,1) - blanket
01:03:566 (4,3) - 没叠好

[Normal]
没啥问题

[Easy]
只有这个是STR2的建议改回1

[Oni]
我的mod并不专业。除了指出unrankable外，都只是风格建议，如果不符合你的想法请不用犹豫来拒绝。
所有的ooxxO xxooX貌似都是unrankable的，考虑到五连并不算stream，这会导致读图的困难。
00:13:385 (60,61) - d k？这样节奏比较紧凑
00:14:476 (66) - 如果之前你用k来表示重音的话建议这里也改成k
00:19:294 - 00:19:385 - 00:19:476 - 加d？背景有音。参考GO MY WAY!!最后（根本毫无关系
00:58:475 - ggt了还漏drum是不是有点那啥了，建议这里加上三连，后面的漏音同理。
01:25:657 (1) - 晚1/4开始？和muzu相同

[Muzu]
作为一个右红左蓝炒菜党来说真是打的累人，而且这难度和Oni差距也有点小了貌似
大概没啥问题

Good luck~!

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2013-10-20T06:28:31+00:00

taiko mod request from OniJam~

Muzukashii

00:07:930 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - OooOooO with 1/2 beat snap divisor isn't recommended for muzukashii diff, and this song has 165BPM. well, just see from another modders at this problem. but if i were you, i would change them
00:13:930 - delete this. there's not any sounds appear at here :/ hear it carefully
00:18:112 - delete too
okay, i changed two of them because it's much better if we just followed the string sounds. i saw you followed two of them, the string sounds and drum hits. just follow one for Muzukashii diff, because it'll not be complicated for it. Rememeber, we should make muzukashii diff easier and not give complicated patterns and notes. as simple as it can
00:23:230 - don here. you must be consistent with pattern. look at 00:20:294 - which has same pitch sound like 00:23:230 - , you put don at 00:20:294 - . so, because it should be consistent, you should change it to same pattern or note
00:29:048 ; 00:29:593 - ; 00:29:775 - << change them to be dons. you can hear the vocal sounds are low at here, and they are lower too than the notes before them! but why did you use kats for the lower sound? :/
i can't comment anything from 00:31:940 - until 00:43:566 -. i should change them, because those notes are too complicated for Muzukashii diff. try to use at most 5notes only with 1/2beat snap divisor notes, like o o o o o or you can use o o o or just o. when i saw your patterns, i was quite shock o.o . and then, try to not use too many triplets which are not usefull, use them wisely. okay, i will give you one example about my explaniation http://puu.sh/4Uvl6.jpg
00:45:202 - don, because the vocal sound becomes quite lower at here from 00:44:838 - and 00:45:566 -
00:47:747 - kat here. hear carefully the pitch sound! it is still high and it has same pitch sound like 00:47:566 -
00:51:026 - don, the reason same like above
00:52:299 - finsiher here (big kat). the song gives finisher at here
00:52:480 - delete this if you use my previous mod ^
the slider ends at 00:54:299 - , not at 00:54:844 - . because you should be consistent! look at the notes before at 00:52:299 - until 00:53:571 - , you followed the drum hit sounds, not the vocal sounds. and you must hear it again. the drum hits end at 00:54:299 -
00:56:480 - delete, there's not any reason to add a note here =w=
from 00:56:657 - until 01:02:657 - same like the 7th mods. too complicated for muzukashii diff. change them
01:03:384 - don. the vocal sound becomes lower here than 01:02:657 - and 01:03:020 - , doesn't it?
01:03:747 - kat hereeeee. where's your consistency? first, the vocal sounds have same like 01:03:747 ; 01:03:929 ; and 01:04:111 - . those three vocal sounds have same pitch sounds. and the second, after i looked from the previous notes at 01:02:293 ; 01:02:475 ; and 01:02:657 , they are kat kat kat too!
01:04:838 - don too and 01:05:202 - kat too
okay i just mod until them, because after i gave you many mods above, you can change the next part until end by yourself. and the parts are same like the first parts and the first kiai part too, so you can change them by yourself

Oni

wohoo unrankable notes here 00:07:930 (30) - . kkddK << ?? what did you use that finisher at the last note? remove it! if you don't want change them, let see from the Taiko BAT's comments too
delete 00:13:930 - . same like at 00:16:839 - 's part which you didn't add any notes
00:23:230 - don. the reason is same like muzukashii
00:29:048 ; 00:29:593 ; and 00:29:775 - same like muzukashii too. dons
00:31:940 - change to don, to follow the string sounds which become lower and lower. btw not finsiher too again at here
00:43:566 - remove finsiher
00:45:202 - same like muzukashii mod, don
00:47:747 - kat, same like muzukashii mod
00:51:026 - don, same like muzukashii mod
00:52:299 - big kat, same like muzukashii mod
00:52:480 - delete, same like muzukashii mod
inconsistent pattern again like muzukashii diff. delete 00:54:480 ; 00:54:662 ; 00:54:753 ; 00:54:844 ; and add finisher at 00:54:299 - . the reason same like muzukashii diff. look it
01:08:293 - remove finisher
01:19:929 - ^

Comment

for the finsiher after stream can be used if the streams have a long different notes. for example like ooooooooooooO , okay it can. but, i never see any maps which use it._. and taiko in osu used same rule like Taiko no Tatsujin patterns and rules too. try to play it before you start mapping taiko

it's really rare if i comment something after mods lol
okay that's all, goodluck

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-21T07:08:01+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
taiko mod request from OniJam~

Muzukashii
00:07:930 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - OooOooO with 1/2 beat snap divisor isn't recommended for muzukashii diff, and this song has 165BPM. well, just see from another modders at this problem. but if i were you, i would change them
00:13:930 - delete this. there's not any sounds appear at here :/ hear it carefully
00:18:112 - delete too
okay, i changed two of them because it's much better if we just followed the string sounds. i saw you followed two of them, the string sounds and drum hits. just follow one for Muzukashii diff, because it'll not be complicated for it. Rememeber, we should make muzukashii diff easier and not give complicated patterns and notes. as simple as it can
00:23:230 - don here. you must be consistent with pattern. look at 00:20:294 - which has same pitch sound like 00:23:230 - , you put don at 00:20:294 - . so, because it should be consistent, you should change it to same pattern or note
00:29:048 ; 00:29:593 - ; 00:29:775 - << change them to be dons. you can hear the vocal sounds are low at here, and they are lower too than the notes before them! but why did you use kats for the lower sound? :/
i can't comment anything from 00:31:940 - until 00:43:566 -. i should change them, because those notes are too complicated for Muzukashii diff. try to use at most 5notes only with 1/2beat snap divisor notes, like o o o o o or you can use o o o or just o. when i saw your patterns, i was quite shock o.o . and then, try to not use too many triplets which are not usefull, use them wisely. okay, i will give you one example about my explaniation http://puu.sh/4Uvl6.jpg
00:45:202 - don, because the vocal sound becomes quite lower at here from 00:44:838 - and 00:45:566 -
00:47:747 - kat here. hear carefully the pitch sound! it is still high and it has same pitch sound like 00:47:566 -
00:51:026 - don, the reason same like above
00:52:299 - finsiher here (big kat). the song gives finisher at here
00:52:480 - delete this if you use my previous mod ^
the slider ends at 00:54:299 - , not at 00:54:844 - . because you should be consistent! look at the notes before at 00:52:299 - until 00:53:571 - , you followed the drum hit sounds, not the vocal sounds. and you must hear it again. the drum hits end at 00:54:299 -
00:56:480 - delete, there's not any reason to add a note here =w=
from 00:56:657 - until 01:02:657 - same like the 7th mods. too complicated for muzukashii diff. change them
01:03:384 - don. the vocal sound becomes lower here than 01:02:657 - and 01:03:020 - , doesn't it?
01:03:747 - kat hereeeee. where's your consistency? first, the vocal sounds have same like 01:03:747 ; 01:03:929 ; and 01:04:111 - . those three vocal sounds have same pitch sounds. and the second, after i looked from the previous notes at 01:02:293 ; 01:02:475 ; and 01:02:657 , they are kat kat kat too!
01:04:838 - don too and 01:05:202 - kat too
okay i just mod until them, because after i gave you many mods above, you can change the next part until end by yourself. and the parts are same like the first parts and the first kiai part too, so you can change them by yourself

Oni
wohoo unrankable notes here 00:07:930 (30) - . kkddK << ?? what did you use that finisher at the last note? remove it! if you don't want change them, let see from the Taiko BAT's comments too
delete 00:13:930 - . same like at 00:16:839 - 's part which you didn't add any notes
00:23:230 - don. the reason is same like muzukashii
00:29:048 ; 00:29:593 ; and 00:29:775 - same like muzukashii too. dons
00:31:940 - change to don, to follow the string sounds which become lower and lower. btw not finsiher too again at here
00:43:566 - remove finsiher
00:45:202 - same like muzukashii mod, don
00:47:747 - kat, same like muzukashii mod
00:51:026 - don, same like muzukashii mod
00:52:299 - big kat, same like muzukashii mod
00:52:480 - delete, same like muzukashii mod
inconsistent pattern again like muzukashii diff. delete 00:54:480 ; 00:54:662 ; 00:54:753 ; 00:54:844 ; and add finisher at 00:54:299 - . the reason same like muzukashii diff. look it
01:08:293 - remove finisher I removed 01:08:202 - instead
01:19:929 - ^ I removed the stream here

Comment
for the finsiher after stream can be used if the streams have a long different notes. for example like ooooooooooooO , okay it can. but, i never see any maps which use it._. and taiko in osu used same rule like Taiko no Tatsujin patterns and rules too. try to play it before you start mapping taiko

it's really rare if i comment something after mods lol
okay that's all, goodluck

Except two parts I mentioned (changed in my way), others all fixed

Very big thanks for modding

有理有据，令人信服（Justified, convincing）

Muzukashii

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256,192,55935,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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aabc271

osu! Alumni

1,334 posts

Joined August 2009

aabc271 2013-10-21T16:24:48+00:00

As requested by S o a p, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[General]

I guess the timing ( multiple red lines ) should be accurate enough because they seem to be based on the 3 ranked versions of this song ? ( Seen here )

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[

OniJAM's Oni]

• 00:31:230 (120~128) - Because of the red line at 00:31:940, 128 looks visually closer to 127, which can be misleading ( See this ). However, I can't think of a perfect solution to this. Maybe the best one is to leave at least 1/2 space ( Delete 127 ) so that such cluster doesn't look so obvious ?

• 00:42:843 (194~202) - Although 1/4 finish of this pattern is rankable, I'd prefer leaving 1/2 space ( Delete 201 ) because it could be quite sudden to players and imo it doesn't look good. Having kkddkkd K also fits the song well so I think you should consider that ~

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:00:658 (1~24) - I guess this section's hitsounds can be further refined to improve on the following aspects:
1. Background instrument/pitch ( eg 6~11. They don't clearly follow either one of them, which makes me feel a bit random )
2. Hitsound consistency between 1~11 and 12~24 ( Since both parts of the music are very similar, I'd prefer hitsounds with higher similarity or symmetry )
( But since the current one is also acceptable, I think I'll leave this recommended but optional )

00:14:658 (64~71) - ooo o o ooo? ( This follows the rising and falling pitch of music better. Since I didn't find any significant drum hits supporting dkd, I think ddk and kkd should fit the music better )

00:19:203 (92) - Red note ? ( Compared with 91, 92 has a lower instrumental pitch. So imo k -> d fits better imo )

00:21:775 (97~100) - oo oo ? ( At 93~116, I guess you're trying to fit the vocal ? Increasing pitch of vocal at 97~100 makes me think dk dd is a better choice to accommodate the vocal pitch changes. 97->98 is an increasing pitch while 99->100 is constant pitch which is lower than 98 )

00:24:502 (105) - Blue note ? ( Once again, dk is a better choice if you decide to fit the vocal pitch, since it indicates a pitch increase )

00:29:048 (114) - Blue note ? ( Still similar reason. 114 has a higher pitch than 115~116 )

00:44:293 (204) - Red note ? ( Since 204~217 are more like vocal-based, you can try using d here to make the pattern ddkk, which fits the pitch of vocal better. I understand your current k is for fitting the drum, so decide yourself whether to apply this )
00:50:117 (226) - ^ ( Basically the same thing )

00:46:293 (211) - Blue note ? ( Similar to 204 and 226. 211 has the same level of pitch as 212, so maybe kkd fits better )

Overall nice.
The patterns are used appropriately and the hitsounds fit the song quite well too. Keep it up

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[

OniJAM's Muzukashii]

No issues found. So I'll move on to the minor patterns mod ~

Suggested patterns ~

Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:03:021 (8,9) - Consider deleting these notes ? Since it's the soft opening part of the song + muzu diff, imo it'll be better to include some more rests to this section ~
00:05:930 (17,18) - ^

00:21:593 (70,71) - o o ? ( Similar suggestion is mentioned in oni. Reasons are both following the vocal pitch even better. If you plan to map this section by vocal, consider this change :3 )
00:24:502 (78,79) - ^ ( Basically the same reason, so I'm not gonna repeat here )
00:29:048 (87) - Blue note ? ( Very similar reason )

00:44:293 (149) - Red note ? ( Again same as oni. So that the pattern becomes ddkk )
00:50:117 (171) - ^

00:46:293 (156) - Blue note ? ( ^, so that the pattern becomes kkd )

Also overall quite nice
I can feel that this muzu is like a cropped version of oni, but still the hitsounds and patterns fit rather well

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I'll say both taiko diffs should be ready to go :3

Find me when you've checked the above, since I'll taiko icon this afterwards ~

Star and good luck ~

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-22T12:37:32+00:00

aabc271 wrote:
As requested by S o a p, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

-----------------------
[General]

I guess the timing ( multiple red lines ) should be accurate enough because they seem to be based on the 3 ranked versions of this song ? ( Seen here )

-----------------------

[ OniJAM's Oni]

• 00:31:230 (120~128) - Because of the red line at 00:31:940, 128 looks visually closer to 127, which can be misleading ( See this ). However, I can't think of a perfect solution to this. Maybe the best one is to leave at least 1/2 space ( Delete 127 ) so that such cluster doesn't look so obvious ? Agree

• 00:42:843 (194~202) - Although 1/4 finish of this pattern is rankable, I'd prefer leaving 1/2 space ( Delete 201 ) because it could be quite sudden to players and imo it doesn't look good. Having kkddkkd K also fits the song well so I think you should consider that ~ Yes, fixed

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:00:658 (1~24) - I guess this section's hitsounds can be further refined to improve on the following aspects:
1. Background instrument/pitch ( eg 6~11. They don't clearly follow either one of them, which makes me feel a bit random )
2. Hitsound consistency between 1~11 and 12~24 ( Since both parts of the music are very similar, I'd prefer hitsounds with higher similarity or symmetry )
( But since the current one is also acceptable, I think I'll leave this recommended but optional )
Changed.. Now follow instrument this part

00:14:658 (64~71) - ooo o o ooo? ( This follows the rising and falling pitch of music better. Since I didn't find any significant drum hits supporting dkd, I think ddk and kkd should fit the music better ) make some changes, but keep 00:15:203 (70) - don

00:19:203 (92) - Red note ? ( Compared with 91, 92 has a lower instrumental pitch. So imo k -> d fits better imo ) Fixed

00:21:775 (97~100) - oo oo ? ( At 93~116, I guess you're trying to fit the vocal ? Increasing pitch of vocal at 97~100 makes me think dk dd is a better choice to accommodate the vocal pitch changes. 97->98 is an increasing pitch while 99->100 is constant pitch which is lower than 98 ) Okay

00:24:502 (105) - Blue note ? ( Once again, dk is a better choice if you decide to fit the vocal pitch, since it indicates a pitch increase ) I think you mean 00:24:684 (106) - kat?

00:29:048 (114) - Blue note ? ( Still similar reason. 114 has a higher pitch than 115~116 ) Fixed

00:44:293 (204) - Red note ? ( Since 204~217 are more like vocal-based, you can try using d here to make the pattern ddkk, which fits the pitch of vocal better. I understand your current k is for fitting the drum, so decide yourself whether to apply this ) Well, I decided to kat here
00:50:117 (226) - ^ ( Basically the same thing ) ^

00:46:293 (211) - Blue note ? ( Similar to 204 and 226. 211 has the same level of pitch as 212, so maybe kkd fits better )
Fixed

Overall nice.
The patterns are used appropriately and the hitsounds fit the song quite well too. Keep it up Thanks~

-----------------------

[ OniJAM's Muzukashii]

No issues found. So I'll move on to the minor patterns mod ~

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:03:021 (8,9) - Consider deleting these notes ? Since it's the soft opening part of the song + muzu diff, imo it'll be better to include some more rests to this section ~ Deleted
00:05:930 (17,18) - ^ ^

00:21:593 (70,71) - o o ? ( Similar suggestion is mentioned in oni. Reasons are both following the vocal pitch even better. If you plan to map this section by vocal, consider this change :3 ) Fixed
00:24:502 (78,79) - ^ ( Basically the same reason, so I'm not gonna repeat here ) Yes
00:29:048 (87) - Blue note ? ( Very similar reason ) Okay

00:44:293 (149) - Red note ? ( Again same as oni. So that the pattern becomes ddkk ) Same as Oni, keep kat
00:50:117 (171) - ^ ^

00:46:293 (156) - Blue note ? ( ^, so that the pattern becomes kkd ) Fixed

Also overall quite nice
I can feel that this muzu is like a cropped version of oni, but still the hitsounds and patterns fit rather well

-----------------------

I'll say both taiko diffs should be ready to go :3

Find me when you've checked the above, since I'll taiko icon this afterwards ~

Star and good luck ~

Thanks for modding, aabc

aabc271

osu! Alumni

1,334 posts

Joined August 2009

aabc271 2013-10-23T14:46:42+00:00

Now both taiko diffs look really nice, so I'm here to shoot the Taiko icon

Good luck on ranking this

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2013-10-23T14:52:37+00:00

aabc271 wrote:
Now both taiko diffs look really nice, so I'm here to shoot the Taiko icon
Good luck on ranking this

Thanks

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-10-24T11:04:35+00:00

aabc271 wrote:
Now both taiko diffs look really nice, so I'm here to shoot the Taiko icon
Good luck on ranking this

thank you>3<

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2013-11-13T07:43:52+00:00

Hi, :3

[Easy]

Remove 'Widescreen Support"
00:07:567 (1) - Remove finish on head and finish on tail
00:10:839 (1) - finish
00:19:567 - add greenline (Volume 5%)
00:54:117 (7) - finish on tail
01:14:111 (1) - finish on head
01:20:838 (1) - This spin is too short in Easy I think...How about end at 01:22:475 - ?

[OblivioN's normal]

Hmm...OblivioN's normal → OblivioN's Normal ?
Remove 'Widescreen Support"
00:13:748 (1) - finish
01:22:838 (4) - ^ and finish on 3rd arrow

[Fycho's Hard]

Remove 'Widescreen Support"

Good

[Insane]

00:15:021 (7,1) - too close I think...
00:18:112 (9) - NC?
00:20:112 (1,2) - blanket
00:21:775 (6) - Make rhythm like 00:24:685 (5,6,7) - ?
00:36:121 (2) - 150|182
00:41:757 (4) - 172|144
01:07:566 (7) - NC?
01:19:202 (4) - ^

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-11-24T02:01:34+00:00

hihi

Black is suggestion
Blue is hihgly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
fix what the above mod pointed out (widescreen sb support and the title for Normal)
also uncheck letterbox in breaks for all diffs since there are no breaks
01:28:111 - i think this is a better place to end the spinners, its where the violins fade

[Easy]
00:05:748 (1) - the spinner doesnt really fit here, plus the next object is too soon after the spinner for Easy. Delete this spinner and try this instead:

SPOILER

00:07:567 (1) - finish should be on the slider end to match the music
00:10:839 (1) - shorten this to 00:13:021 and add a note at 00:13:748; this is so that players can have more time to react after completing the spinner
00:20:321 (1) - missing NC after spinner
00:30:139 (1) - for similar reasons as above, remove this spinner and try a rhythm like this:

SPOILER

00:38:485 (2) - forgot clap on end; same with 00:39:940 (4)
00:44:293 (1) - starting from here consider using claps on every 3rd white line e.g. 00:44:293 00:45:747 00:47:202
00:52:299 (3) - use NC here to indicate beginning of the new musical phrase
00:54:480 (1) - though this fits really nicely here its just hard to react to for an Easy diff, consider shortening it to 00:55:935
00:58:838 (4,1) - watch for spacing here
01:02:111 (4) - this is a bit hard to read and play for beginners, just a circle here would suit the diff much better
01:02:475 (5,1,2) - spacing and rhythm is quite inconsistent, 01:05:202 (2) should start at 01:05:384 and spacing here should be increased to hint the 3/2 rhythm
01:06:293 (1) - try this instead of the spinner:

SPOILER

01:08:293 (1) - finish on start?
01:14:111 (1,2,3,4) - would advise you to follow vocals here, this is quite difficult for newbies:

SPOILER

01:19:929 (2) - NC here instead of 01:18:657 (1) to keep the comboing consistent

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:00:658 (1,2,3,4) - how bout center this on the y-axis? would look quite nice as the start
00:07:566 (1,2) - the emphasis on the clicking is a bit aganist the music here; would advise you to start it at 00:07:930 and move the spinner to 00:09:021
00:10:839 (2) - missing NC after spinner
00:13:748 (1) - probably want a finish here
00:24:684 (1) - remove NC and place it at 00:26:139 (3) to keep the comboing pattern consistent
00:31:940 (4) - NC to indicate start of new musical phrase
00:54:299 - there is a strong beat here, so cover this with something would be cool; you can move 00:54:480 (7) here and make it into a long slider ending at 00:54:844
01:05:384 (5) - NC here and take off NC at 01:06:838 (1)
01:17:020 (5) - like above, NC at 01:18:475 (1) instead
01:20:657 (2) - this is not recommended for a Normal, there is no way to know how many repeats there are and players will most likely let go too early when they see the next note approaching. you should try to do what you did at 00:07:930 (1) here
01:22:838 (4) - this too, except you can try to map this part normally, something like this:

SPOILER

im a bit concerned about the beginning when you used only whistles where there are drums in the music; you can use the soft-clap to cover those like what soap did on Easy

[Hard]
00:05:748 (1) - seems more natural if you ended the spinner at 00:07:567, currently it feels like a forced difficulty addition with 00:07:930 (1) appearing so soon relative to the spinner end
00:19:385 - maybe add a short 1/4 slider here so the proper drum end 00:19:476 can be covered
01:07:384 - i would add a note here, maybe stacked under the end of 01:06:657 (1), to mimic the instrumental repeat sound in the music
01:21:020 (5,1) - this pattern felt a bit weird to play for me, mostly because the only stress is at 01:21:020 but there is another clicking action for 01:21:202; try this rhythm instead:

SPOILER

nice and clean diff, though i find the beginning a tad bit on the difficult side of things

[Insane]
unsnapped green lines at:
00:20:231 - snap to 00:20:203
00:32:203 - snap to 00:32:212

00:07:567 (2) - missing NC after spinner
00:11:930 (5) - try starting the NC here instead of 00:12:658 (1) and do another one at 00:13:021 (5), fits better with the music imo
00:13:748 (1) - finish on start?
00:17:930 (8) - NC here, got a bit confused after having to read all of them being the same colour, so this is a good place to refresh it a bit
00:31:593 (1,2,3,4) - was this spacing intentional? this is really hard to read and seems to be accidental...also NC on 00:31:593 (1) since its after spinner
00:43:566 (11) - NC here instead of 00:44:293 (1); also for this section consider the clap pattern addition i suggested in Easy diff
00:46:292 (8) - feels a bit awkward to skip the vocals here, can rearrange the rhythm to cover for it:

SPOILER

00:54:935 (1) - clap for the end sounds quite nice here
01:05:020 (1) - the current position is a bit weird flow wise, put it under the blanket of 01:04:657 (9) or on 01:03:202 (3)
01:09:384 (4,5) - i think you reversed the clap here
01:15:566 (6) - NC here
01:21:020 (7) - forgot a clap here
01:24:656 (3) - for this one i would shorten the slider to 01:24:838 and add a note at 01:24:929, because the 1/4 is actually present in the music here and this place nicely leading to the square

Hard and Insane are fine, but Easy and Normal could probably use more work. If you have any questions pm me and we can sort it out. Good Luck~

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-11-27T09:17:09+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
hihi

Black is suggestion
Blue is hihgly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
fix what the above mod pointed out (widescreen sb support and the title for Normal)
also uncheck letterbox in breaks for all diffs since there are no breaks
01:28:111 - i think this is a better place to end the spinners, its where the violins fade

[Easy]
00:05:748 (1) - the spinner doesnt really fit here, plus the next object is too soon after the spinner for Easy. Delete this spinner and try this instead:
SPOILER
00:07:567 (1) - finish should be on the slider end to match the music
00:10:839 (1) - shorten this to 00:13:021 and add a note at 00:13:748; this is so that players can have more time to react after completing the spinner
00:20:321 (1) - missing NC after spinner
00:30:139 (1) - for similar reasons as above, remove this spinner and try a rhythm like this:
SPOILER
00:38:485 (2) - forgot clap on end; same with 00:39:940 (4)
00:44:293 (1) - starting from here consider using claps on every 3rd white line e.g. 00:44:293 00:45:747 00:47:202
00:52:299 (3) - use NC here to indicate beginning of the new musical phrase
00:54:480 (1) - though this fits really nicely here its just hard to react to for an Easy diff, consider shortening it to 00:55:935
00:58:838 (4,1) - watch for spacing here
01:02:111 (4) - this is a bit hard to read and play for beginners, just a circle here would suit the diff much better
01:02:475 (5,1,2) - spacing and rhythm is quite inconsistent, 01:05:202 (2) should start at 01:05:384 and spacing here should be increased to hint the 3/2 rhythm
01:06:293 (1) - try this instead of the spinner:
SPOILER
01:08:293 (1) - finish on start?
01:14:111 (1,2,3,4) - would advise you to follow vocals here, this is quite difficult for newbies:
SPOILER
01:19:929 (2) - NC here instead of 01:18:657 (1) to keep the comboing consistent
all fixed. thank you very much

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:00:658 (1,2,3,4) - how bout center this on the y-axis? would look quite nice as the start
00:07:566 (1,2) - the emphasis on the clicking is a bit aganist the music here; would advise you to start it at 00:07:930 and move the spinner to 00:09:021
00:10:839 (2) - missing NC after spinner
00:13:748 (1) - probably want a finish here
00:24:684 (1) - remove NC and place it at 00:26:139 (3) to keep the comboing pattern consistent
00:31:940 (4) - NC to indicate start of new musical phrase
00:54:299 - there is a strong beat here, so cover this with something would be cool; you can move 00:54:480 (7) here and make it into a long slider ending at 00:54:844
01:05:384 (5) - NC here and take off NC at 01:06:838 (1)
01:17:020 (5) - like above, NC at 01:18:475 (1) instead
01:20:657 (2) - this is not recommended for a Normal, there is no way to know how many repeats there are and players will most likely let go too early when they see the next note approaching. you should try to do what you did at 00:07:930 (1) here
01:22:838 (4) - this too, except you can try to map this part normally, something like this:
SPOILER

im a bit concerned about the beginning when you used only whistles where there are drums in the music; you can use the soft-clap to cover those like what soap did on Easy

[Hard]
00:05:748 (1) - seems more natural if you ended the spinner at 00:07:567, currently it feels like a forced difficulty addition with 00:07:930 (1) appearing so soon relative to the spinner end
00:19:385 - maybe add a short 1/4 slider here so the proper drum end 00:19:476 can be covered
01:07:384 - i would add a note here, maybe stacked under the end of 01:06:657 (1), to mimic the instrumental repeat sound in the music
01:21:020 (5,1) - this pattern felt a bit weird to play for me, mostly because the only stress is at 01:21:020 but there is another clicking action for 01:21:202; try this rhythm instead:
SPOILER
nice and clean diff, though i find the beginning a tad bit on the difficult side of things

[Insane]
unsnapped green lines at:
00:20:231 - snap to 00:20:203
00:32:203 - snap to 00:32:212 ok

00:07:567 (2) - missing NC after spinnerok
00:11:930 (5) - try starting the NC here instead of 00:12:658 (1) and do another one at 00:13:021 (5), fits better with the music imook
00:13:748 (1) - finish on start?ok
00:17:930 (8) - NC here, got a bit confused after having to read all of them being the same colour, so this is a good place to refresh it a bitok
00:31:593 (1,2,3,4) - was this spacing intentional? this is really hard to read and seems to be accidental...also NC on 00:31:593 (1) since its after spinnerok
00:43:566 (11) - NC here instead of 00:44:293 (1); also for this section consider the clap pattern addition i suggested in Easy diffok
00:46:292 (8) - feels a bit awkward to skip the vocals here, can rearrange the rhythm to cover for it:
SPOILER
00:54:935 (1) - clap for the end sounds quite nice hereok
01:05:020 (1) - the current position is a bit weird flow wise, put it under the blanket of 01:04:657 (9) or on 01:03:202 (3)ok
01:09:384 (4,5) - i think you reversed the clap hereok
01:15:566 (6) - NC hereok
01:21:020 (7) - forgot a clap hereok
01:24:656 (3) - for this one i would shorten the slider to 01:24:838 and add a note at 01:24:929, because the 1/4 is actually present in the music here and this place nicely leading to the squareok
all fixed in insane and easy!!!!!
Hard and Insane are fine, but Easy and Normal could probably use more work. If you have any questions pm me and we can sort it out. Good Luck~

;w; thank you very much!!!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-11-27T09:52:16+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Hard]
00:05:748 (1) - seems more natural if you ended the spinner at 00:07:567, currently it feels like a forced difficulty addition with 00:07:930 (1) appearing so soon relative to the spinner end ok
00:19:385 - maybe add a short 1/4 slider here so the proper drum end 00:19:476 can be covered fixed,but change a bit
01:07:384 - i would add a note here, maybe stacked under the end of 01:06:657 (1), to mimic the instrumental repeat sound in the music 这个就不加了，为了表示音乐的停顿虽然这有音不过我觉得空拍不错,
01:21:020 (5,1) - this pattern felt a bit weird to play for me, mostly because the only stress is at 01:21:020 but there is another clicking action for 01:21:202; try this rhythm instead:
SPOILER
fixed
nice and clean diff, though i find the beginning a tad bit on the difficult side of things

thx~

SPOILER

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OblivioN

OblivioN 2013-11-30T05:33:07+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[OblivioN's Normal]
00:00:658 (1,2,3,4) - how bout center this on the y-axis? would look quite nice as the start-fixed
00:07:566 (1,2) - the emphasis on the clicking is a bit aganist the music here; would advise you to start it at 00:07:930 and move the spinner to 00:09:021 -fixed
00:10:839 (2) - missing NC after spinner -fixed
00:13:748 (1) - probably want a finish here-fixed
00:24:684 (1) - remove NC and place it at 00:26:139 (3) to keep the comboing pattern consistent-fixed
00:31:940 (4) - NC to indicate start of new musical phrase-fixed
00:54:299 - there is a strong beat here, so cover this with something would be cool; you can move 00:54:480 (7) here and make it into a long slider ending at 00:54:844 -fixed
01:05:384 (5) - NC here and take off NC at 01:06:838 (1) -fixed
01:17:020 (5) - like above, NC at 01:18:475 (1) instead -fixed
01:20:657 (2) - this is not recommended for a Normal, there is no way to know how many repeats there are and players will most likely let go too early when they see the next note approaching. you should try to do what you did at 00:07:930 (1) here -fixed
01:22:838 (4) - this too, except you can try to map this part normally, something like this:
SPOILER
-get&fixed
im a bit concerned about the beginning when you used only whistles where there are drums in the music; you can use the soft-clap to cover those like what soap did on Easy

Thank you a lot,and I fixed all things

OblivioN's Normal

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256,192,85566,12,0,88657,0:0:0:0:

Vita-VVA

58 posts

Joined March 2013

Vita-VVA 2013-12-01T04:35:57+00:00

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself

Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[general]
歌曲前加两秒左右的前黑（之前有这个功能不过现在不见了只能手动改长度）然后改offset要不太突兀了！
spinner用的太多了点……

[normal]
00:07:566 (1) - 这里不是33分的啦是24分

00:10:839 (1) - ^
00:21:775 (2,3) - 太难了啦，滑条后接note什么的是我入坑时候的噩梦
举个栗子

00:43:205 (7) - 太难了？
01:17:020 (1) - NC
01:22:838 (1) - NC

[Insane]
连打之前都要切指是我的错觉吗
00:05:658 (1) - 转盘在这里停好一些？
00:11:385 (3) - 会不由自主的去

这个位置……
00:22:866 - 如果跟着节奏的话这里就要加note
如果跟着vocal的话 00:27:412 (4) - 00:28:866 (8) - 这里的note就去掉吧
00:37:576 (6) - 移动一下（因为超过了2.0所以不知道间距是怎么放的总之用

的prev和next检查吧
比如

00:40:667 (1,3) - 好好的对齐啦
00:53:572 (1) - 去掉NC加在00:53:753 (2) -
01:07:929 (8) - 这个微小的位移meaningless
01:11:929 (5,1) - 到底要不要对齐啦
01:14:111 (1,2) - 这个1总感觉没必要出现（或者改一下排列吧）
01:21:202 (8) - 换成

that's all

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-01T12:12:35+00:00

Vita-VVA wrote:
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[general]
歌曲前加两秒左右的前黑（之前有这个功能不过现在不见了只能手动改长度）然后改offset要不太突兀了！
spinner用的太多了点……

[normal]
00:07:566 (1) - 这里不是33分的啦是24分
00:10:839 (1) - ^
00:21:775 (2,3) - 太难了啦，滑条后接note什么的是我入坑时候的噩梦
举个栗子
00:43:205 (7) - 太难了？
01:17:020 (1) - NC
01:22:838 (1) - NC

[Insane]
连打之前都要切指是我的错觉吗
00:05:658 (1) - 转盘在这里停好一些？有什么问题吗...
00:11:385 (3) - 会不由自主的去这个位置……ok
00:22:866 - 如果跟着节奏的话这里就要加noteok
如果跟着vocal的话 00:27:412 (4) - 00:28:866 (8) - 这里的note就去掉吧
00:37:576 (6) - 移动一下（因为超过了2.0所以不知道间距是怎么放的总之用的prev和next检查吧
比如
00:40:667 (1,3) - 好好的对齐啦ok
00:53:572 (1) - 去掉NC加在00:53:753 (2) - 这边没改不过我加上了后面那个变速滑条的NC
01:07:929 (8) - 这个微小的位移meaningless没改
01:11:929 (5,1) - 到底要不要对齐啦没对齐吗……？
01:14:111 (1,2) - 这个1总感觉没必要出现（或者改一下排列吧）o.O长白线空着不太爽啦
01:21:202 (8) - 换成蓝线那儿没音啊o.O

that's all

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2013-12-02T09:35:14+00:00

[Easy]

00:13:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有那么点紧凑，加上遮挡的话= =。。试试这种 http://puu.sh/5zHuR.jpg
00:53:390 (4,5) - 节奏对应的不是很好。试试这种 http://puu.sh/5zHJ6.jpg 或者干脆 http://puu.sh/5zIgP.jpg 自己感觉一下

[Normal]

00:03:203 - 为什么不加个note呢= =
00:41:758 (5,6) - 滑条尾最好不要压白线，节奏不舒服。可以对应把5改成单点，6变成以白线开头的长滑条 http://puu.sh/5zHUu.jpg
00:53:753 (6,7) - 改成和我Easy里提到的一样试试 http://puu.sh/5zHXE.jpg
01:07:566 (5) - 改成两个单点好一些
01:18:475 (4) - 这个音明显要往后一格。。
01:19:202 (5) - 这个对应歌词改成单滑条吧后面的节奏都很乱，重新做一下这之后的部分，滑条尾尽量不要压大白线

hard和insane好像基本没啥问题其实是比我做的好我不知道怎么mod了。。

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-02T12:22:21+00:00

We did a little irc mod on Easy diff

log

19:41 Fycho: 00:54:480 (1) -
19:41 Fycho: 吵
19:42 Fycho: 00:16:658 (1) -
19:42 Fycho: 吵
19:42 S o a p: 卧槽转盘
19:42 Fycho: 00:20:321 (1) - 开头加whistle
19:42 S o a p: 你也能听出声音啊【
19:42 Fycho: 00:29:048 (3,4) -
19:42 Fycho: 真难看
19:42 Fycho: 我又不是聋子啊啊啊
19:43 Fycho: 00:29:048 (3,4) - 做个对称的blanket
19:43 Fycho: 00:33:394 (3) - 包好
19:43 Fycho: 00:31:940 (1) - 这个尾部略难看了
19:43 Fycho: 最后一个描点往右上去点
19:44 Fycho: 00:42:482 (2,3) -
19:44 Fycho: 这个怎么变成normal音效了？？？
19:44 Fycho: 这里应该还是soft
19:44 Fycho: 00:42:121 - 这个
19:44 Fycho: 你那个红线音效看看
19:44 Fycho: 00:44:293 (1) - 滑条尾节奏不对没对上移
19:44 Fycho: 没对上音
19:45 Fycho: 00:22:139 (2) -
19:45 Fycho: 这也没对上音
19:45 Fycho: 滑条头
19:45 Fycho: 00:25:048 (4) -
19:45 Fycho: 一样的
19:45 S o a p: 那放哪儿啊
19:46 Fycho: 00:26:139 (1,2) - 滑条头的音效呢
19:46 Fycho: 00:30:502 (4) - 音效
19:46 Fycho: 00:31:940 (1) - 首finish呢
19:46 Fycho: 各种漏音效自己查
19:47 S o a p: TvT
19:47 Fycho: 00:54:480 (1) - 音效吵
19:47 Fycho: 音效你和hard一样保证没问题
19:47 Fycho: 00:57:747 (3) - 这啥节奏，别跨大白线啊
19:47 Fycho: 换成1/1折返或者note加滑条
19:48 Fycho: KIAI音效你用默认的clap干嘛
19:48 Fycho: 你看hard怎么加的
19:48 Fycho: 默认的难听死l
19:49 Fycho: 00:58:838 (4,1) - 平行啊卧槽，注意细节
19:49 Fycho: 用复制粘贴保证平行而且方便
19:49 Fycho: 01:02:475 (4) - 音效呢
19:50 Fycho: 01:11:202 (1) - 这3/2下的真的不对
19:50 Fycho: 老实的用2/1或者1/1
19:50 Fycho: 中间红线上是个十分微弱的音根本别跟
19:50 Fycho: 01:14:111 (4) - 音效
19:50 Fycho: 01:18:657 (1,2) - 这音效怎么比KIAI还抄
19:51 Fycho: KIAI应该是高潮部分别主次不分啊
19:51 S o a p: TvT猴猴猴
19:51 S o a p: 我妈叫我吃饭了啊啊啊
19:51 Fycho: 01:19:929 (2) - 这是什么畸形滑条
19:51 Fycho: 为什么中间的描点那样
19:51 Fycho: 宝宝好
19:51 Fycho: 包包好
19:51 Fycho: blanket
19:51 S o a p: 好好好T.T
19:52 Fycho: 吃完继续不继续没了
20:05 S o a p: _(:з」∠)_
20:05 S o a p: 吃完了
20:06 S o a p: （煎饺好好吃
20:06 Fycho: ？
20:06 S o a p: 继续呀
20:09 Fycho: vewewwd
20:10 Fycho: 最后的转盘结束时间不对
20:10 Fycho: 太长这转盘
20:10 S o a p: 那怎么办
20:10 Fycho: 01:18:657 (1,2) - 这个包好
20:10 Fycho: 然后没了都是细节问题
20:10 Fycho: 01:19:929 (2) - 这个滑条删了重拉
20:10 S o a p: 拉完了
20:11 Fycho: 你肯定是搞过红点滑条
20:11 Fycho: 然后没了
20:11 S o a p: 最后转盘分成一个好不好啊
20:11 S o a p: 呸
20:11 Fycho: 其他细节的东西
20:11 S o a p: 分成两个
20:11 S o a p: T.T
20:11 Fycho: 什么叫分成一个
20:11 Fycho: 别分啊
20:11 Fycho: 和hard一样就可以了
20:11 Fycho: 01:25:566 -
20:11 Fycho: 这个之前用物件放上
20:12 Fycho: 别用转盘根本没必要
20:12 S o a p: 哦哦哦好
20:12 Fycho: 跟鼓点下
20:12 Fycho: 四维修改
20:13 Fycho: HP2 OD2 AR3
20:13 Fycho: 你这四维被喷死
20:13 S o a p: ;w;

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2013-12-02T14:53:42+00:00

Fycho <3

Random mod

General

add やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている & opening in tag
add video .v. ?
i think BG so sad Orz , change to this or this or Other

Easy

00:03:930 (2) - whistle last silde
00:04:658 (3) - whistle head slide
00:05:748 (4) - ^
00:16:658 - change custum hitsound to soft
00:36:667 (2,4) - so close x_x

need more whistle ><

OblivioN

00:07:930 (1) - finish head slide & remove finish last slide
00:08:476 (2) - ^
00:11:385 (2) - ^
00:31:940 (1) - ^
00:42:301 (6) - ^
00:50:480 (2) - so... change to other pattern Orz

Nice kiai part!

Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-

I love you ><!! Fycho <3

Insane

00:07:839 (4) - move up one scale
00:07:930 (5) - move left [your left] on scale
00:12:203 (2,3,4) - don't have stream in song overmap

it's OK ><

that all , GL
Ps. love you Fycho <3

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-02T15:39:32+00:00

to soap: kantokun提供的背景因为大陆要翻墙，所以我帮传到puush外链了，你自己看吧

SPOILER

Last edited by Fycho 2013-12-03T08:13:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

S o a p

359 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-03T03:17:34+00:00

Fycho wrote:
to soap: kantokun提供的背景因为大陆要翻墙，所以我帮传到puush外链了，你自己看吧
SPOILER
SPOILER

will edit this when I check the mod:>

哇太感谢你了

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-12-03T08:12:32+00:00

kantokun wrote:
Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
fixed
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved fixed
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-nope

I love you ><!! Fycho <3 <3

thanks for modding

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: TV.Size(OP).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56475
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Yukitoki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ユキトキ (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:S o a p
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Come wa Machigatteiru
Tags:OniJAM Fycho OblivioN
BeatmapID:308534
BeatmapSetID:120029

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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S o a p

359 posts

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Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-03T08:19:10+00:00

kantokun wrote:
Fycho <3

Random mod

General

add やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている & opening in tag fix
add video .v. ?
i think BG so sad Orz , change to this or this or Other
thank you very much,nice pic XD

Easy

00:03:930 (2) - whistle last silde fix
00:04:658 (3) - whistle head slide fix
00:05:748 (4) - ^ fix
00:16:658 - change custum hitsound to soft fix
00:36:667 (2,4) - so close x_x xxxxx_xxxxxx

need more whistle ><

OblivioN

00:07:930 (1) - finish head slide & remove finish last slide
00:08:476 (2) - ^
00:11:385 (2) - ^
00:31:940 (1) - ^
00:42:301 (6) - ^
00:50:480 (2) - so... change to other pattern Orz

Nice kiai part!

Fycho <3

00:01:930 (6) - try this
SPOILER
00:43:024 (4,5,6,7,1) - it hard diff , take it curved
SPOILER
00:54:299 (3) - remove clap head slide -.-

I love you ><!! Fycho <3

Insane

00:07:839 (4) - move up one scale fix
00:07:930 (5) - move left [your left] on scale fix
00:12:203 (2,3,4) - don't have stream in song overmap fix

it's OK ><

that all , GL
Ps. love you Fycho <3

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

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jonathanlfj 2013-12-04T03:26:51+00:00

我来拯救南京吧
no kd

[General]
disable letterbox on all diffs
01:28:111 - makes more sense to end the spinners here for all the diffs, this is where the violin comes to a halt in the music (applies to guest diffs)

[Easy]
00:38:849 (4) - clap on end
00:44:293 (1,2) - the spacing here might be a bit confusing, try something like this:

SPOILER

00:54:480 (1) - start this spinner at 00:54:299? also its best to lower the volume of the end since it doesnt really land on a loud beat
00:57:747 (3) - missing claps
01:02:475 (4) - add NC
01:05:929 (1) - shorten to 01:07:566 to give more reaction time for the next note
01:14:111 (4) - NC

[OblivioN's Normal]
missing video on this diff
00:26:139 (6) - NC here to follow your NC pattern
01:08:293 (1) - add a finish on the start?
01:19:929 (1) - ^
01:22:838 (5) - NC

[Fycho's Hard]
add video
(b'-')b

[Insane]
video wwww
use S:C1 sample in the beginning to get rid of the slider slide sound
00:04:294 (1) - no need for the NC here, its the same as 00:00:658 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be one combo, more colours interfere with reading the stream
00:44:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way this flows is a bit awkward in gameplay, maybe adjust it to something like this:

SPOILER

00:53:753 (6) - use the normal sample set on this note
01:15:566 (1) - remove the finish? sounds a bit random
01:21:020 (7,1) - tbh the transition here plays a bit bad, its better of you just make this into a slider to rid having to click at 01:21:202 (1)
01:24:929 (4) - whoa is that an inaudible note? make it atleast 20% volume pls
i could have picked more on hitsounds here, but its not really noticeable in game play so i will let that go

fix the stuff in red and whatever else and call me back~

S o a p

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Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-04T08:54:16+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
我来拯救南京吧
no kd

[General]
disable letterbox on all diffs
01:28:111 - makes more sense to end the spinners here for all the diffs, this is where the violin comes to a halt in the music (applies to guest diffs)

[Easy]
00:38:849 (4) - clap on end
00:44:293 (1,2) - the spacing here might be a bit confusing, try something like this:
SPOILER
00:54:480 (1) - start this spinner at 00:54:299? also its best to lower the volume of the end since it doesnt really land on a loud beat
00:57:747 (3) - missing claps
01:02:475 (4) - add NC
01:05:929 (1) - shorten to 01:07:566 to give more reaction time for the next note
01:14:111 (4) - NC

[OblivioN's Normal]
missing video on this diff
00:26:139 (6) - NC here to follow your NC pattern
01:08:293 (1) - add a finish on the start?
01:19:929 (1) - ^
01:22:838 (5) - NC

[Fycho's Hard]
add video
(b'-')b

[Insane]
video wwww
use S:C1 sample in the beginning to get rid of the slider slide sound
00:04:294 (1) - no need for the NC here, its the same as 00:00:658 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be one combo, more colours interfere with reading the stream
00:44:293 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way this flows is a bit awkward in gameplay, maybe adjust it to something like this:
SPOILER
00:53:753 (6) - use the normal sample set on this note
01:15:566 (1) - remove the finish? sounds a bit random
01:21:020 (7,1) - tbh the transition here plays a bit bad, its better of you just make this into a slider to rid having to click at 01:21:202 (1)
01:24:929 (4) - whoa is that an inaudible note? make it atleast 20% volume pls
i could have picked more on hitsounds here, but its not really noticeable in game play so i will let that go

fix the stuff in red and whatever else and call me back~

thank you !!all fixed XD

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2013-12-04T10:18:59+00:00

fixed some more hitsounds and NCs and stuff, i think this is good to go

Bubbled~

少年（女？）快去拯救南京！

S o a p

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Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-04T10:20:33+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
fixed some more hitsounds and NCs and stuff, i think this is good to go

Bubbled~

少年（女？）快去拯救南京！

QUQ蟹蟹!!!
(我是少女←喂

lkx_Shore

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lkx_Shore 2013-12-04T11:07:40+00:00

Kamio Misuzu

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Kamio Misuzu 2013-12-04T13:37:31+00:00

小板凳

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-12-06T12:50:17+00:00

~General~

It would be nice if you can use the same kiai time on all of the difficulties.

~Easy~

Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels a bit too fast for an Easy.

01:20:838 (1) - This spinner seems a bit too short for the easieast difficulty of the mapset, I would start it on the previous white tick so it's a bit longer at least.

~OblivioN's normal~

Capitalize the N on Normal of the difficulty name.
Increase HP and OD by 1 tick and reduce AR by 1 tick, settings are way too bad right now.

00:10:839 (1,2) - Place these two objects a bit more to the center, they're way too tricky right now to hit after spinner.
00:20:321 (1,2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:43:567 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this circle under the previous slider, it might be confusing to read for beginners, I suggest you to place it somewhere else instead.
00:56:657 (1) - Same as 00:10.

~Fycho's Hard~

00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.

~Insane~

Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for an Insane difficulty right now.

00:11:930 (1) - This slidertick here it's a bit annoying to hear, I suggest you to lower the volume on this slider.
01:01:202 (7) - Remove the clap from the slider start and add it to the slider end, seems like a mistake.
01:06:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet here flows pretty bad, try making it a bit more curve for giving it a better flow.
01:14:656 (3) - Reverse arrow of this slider is somehow hidden to see, try to place it a bit more down.
01:23:929 (1,2) - Do not completely silence these sliderends, it's unrankable and not acceptable anymore.

Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

S o a p

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Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-07T04:43:21+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~General~
It would be nice if you can use the same kiai time on all of the difficulties.
~Easy~
Reduce AR by 1 tick, it feels a bit too fast for an Easy.
01:20:838 (1) - This spinner seems a bit too short for the easieast difficulty of the mapset, I would start it on the previous white tick so it's a bit longer at least.
~OblivioN's normal~
Capitalize the N on Normal of the difficulty name.
Increase HP and OD by 1 tick and reduce AR by 1 tick, settings are way too bad right now.
00:10:839 (1,2) - Place these two objects a bit more to the center, they're way too tricky right now to hit after spinner.
00:20:321 (1,2,3) - Spacing is wrong here, fix it properly with distance snap enabled.
00:43:567 (8) - I don't think it's a good idea to stack this circle under the previous slider, it might be confusing to read for beginners, I suggest you to place it somewhere else instead.
00:56:657 (1) - Same as 00:10.
~Fycho's Hard~
00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.
~Insane~
Increase OD by at least 1 tick, it's way too low for an Insane difficulty right now.
00:11:930 (1) - This slidertick here it's a bit annoying to hear, I suggest you to lower the volume on this slider.
01:01:202 (7) - Remove the clap from the slider start and add it to the slider end, seems like a mistake.
01:06:475 (1,2,3) - This triplet here flows pretty bad, try making it a bit more curve for giving it a better flow.
01:14:656 (3) - Reverse arrow of this slider is somehow hidden to see, try to place it a bit more down.
01:23:929 (1,2) - Do not completely silence these sliderends, it's unrankable and not acceptable anymore.
Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

insane normal easy are all fixed. thank you

Last edited by S o a p 2013-12-07T05:18:43+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-12-07T05:08:41+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Fycho's Hard~
00:19:203 (6) - Adding another repeat to this slider fits better to the music, try listening with 25% enabled.
Sadly I have to pop this, call me back once everything is ready again.

this beat is very weak,and just not following it is better for me ,sorry,thanks

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2013-12-07T13:16:54+00:00

Okay, we fixed an hitsound mistake, this is ready again now. :3

Re-Bubbled~

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2013-12-08T05:05:30+00:00

[Insane]
00:07:930 (5,6,7,8) - i guess you could make it in a more consistent way, example: http://puu.sh/5FHVI.jpg
00:10:839 (1,2,3,4) - similar to ^ (you can take a look at how Fycho did in the hard diff too)
00:11:930 (1) - gradually increase the volume may sounds better, (25%-30%-35%-40%-45% at the last for example), it starts at a place not so regular and this could make people get used to it.
00:14:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure what you are trying to do here. (when playing you won't fell anything more than triangle since it's just a group of notes)
00:17:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar, also i'm not sure why you need such a big spacing here...
00:34:121 (3,4,5,6) - guess you could make the spacing equal and looks better...
00:36:121 (2,3) - make the two notes right/down a bit (maybe x232, y304), don't forget when playing, the place you see is after stacked.
00:42:301 & 00:42:482 - don't get why the consistent clap suddenly stop here...(if you want to follow the drums, 1 should be a reversed slider or something like that)
00:44:838 (5) - http://puu.sh/5FIkp.jpg maybe, also in this part, maybe you should consider use 0.75x slider speed.
00:53:390 (4,5) - should probably be a slider like 3

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...?
Generally good.

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:32:667 (2,3,1) - personally, is it a bit too crowded for a Normal? (especially when you use 0.8x distance spacing)
01:06:838 (4) - obviously should be 1/2 later. you're not just hitting 1/1s when play some music, do you?
01:18:475 (4) - ^similar.

[Easy]
00:07:930 (2) - extend it by 1/2
00:44:293 (1) - the blanket could be better

gxytcgxytc

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gxytcgxytc 2013-12-08T05:05:39+00:00

rank预感

S o a p

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Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

S o a p 2013-12-08T05:07:23+00:00

gxytcgxytc wrote:
rank预感

no

Fycho

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Fycho 2013-12-08T05:19:18+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...? fixed but add some other hitsound,now I think it's ok
Generally good.

SPOILER

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S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-08T07:30:56+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Insane]
00:07:930 (5,6,7,8) - i guess you could make it in a more consistent way, example: http://puu.sh/5FHVI.jpgfix
00:10:839 (1,2,3,4) - similar to ^ (you can take a look at how Fycho did in the hard diff too)fix
00:11:930 (1) - gradually increase the volume may sounds better, (25%-30%-35%-40%-45% at the last for example), it starts at a place not so regular and this could make people get used to it.fix
00:14:112 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - not sure what you are trying to do here. (when playing you won't fell anything more than triangle since it's just a group of notes)我玩起来感觉这段比较爽，还是不改了吧
00:17:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar, also i'm not sure why you need such a big spacing here...^
00:34:121 (3,4,5,6) - guess you could make the spacing equal and looks better...fix
00:36:121 (2,3) - make the two notes right/down a bit (maybe x232, y304), don't forget when playing, the place you see is after stacked.fix
00:42:301 & 00:42:482 - don't get why the consistent clap suddenly stop here...(if you want to follow the drums, 1 should be a reversed slider or something like that)fix
00:44:838 (5) - http://puu.sh/5FIkp.jpg maybe, also in this part, maybe you should consider use 0.75x slider speed.fix
00:53:390 (4,5) - should probably be a slider like 3fix

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:839 (1,2,3) - the hitsounds in this part confused me a bit... maybe remove the claps...?
Generally good.

[OblivioN's Normal]
00:32:667 (2,3,1) - personally, is it a bit too crowded for a Normal? (especially when you use 0.8x distance spacing)fix
01:06:838 (4) - obviously should be 1/2 later. you're not just hitting 1/1s when play some music, do you?fix
01:18:475 (4) - ^similar.fix

[Easy]
00:07:930 (2) - extend it by 1/2 感觉保持现在这样比较贴合音乐o.O
00:44:293 (1) - the blanket could be better

fix

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2013-12-08T08:10:02+00:00

rebubbled.

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Aurele 2013-12-10T03:48:20+00:00

Savelog

22:20 S o a p: so..would you like to check my map?lol
22:21 S o a p: wow you are looking my map!i like you so much! 
22:21 Gabe: Insane
22:21 Gabe: 00:11:930 (5) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, to indentify the slow down
22:21 S o a p: ok~
22:22 Gabe: 00:16:658 - I suggest you to add a finish here, to emphasize the bass like you did for 00:13:748 - 
22:23 Gabe: 00:31:940 (5,7) - make them perfectly stacked
22:24 Gabe: 00:41:394 (3,4) - would you prefer doing a blanket here instead? It's not so bad to be honest, but it could be improved with the blanket
22:25 S o a p: ;w;ok
22:26 Gabe: from 00:45:747 -  to 00:51:571 - , we can hear some drums, but, there's no hitsounds to emphasize those sounds. I highly suggest you to add drum samplesets on those loud sounds
22:27 Gabe: 01:11:929 (5,1) - you might wanna do a better stack here
22:29 S o a p: fixed
22:31 Gabe: on Fycho's Hard, 00:19:203 (6) - can you delete one reverse arrow? There's actually nothing to emphasize on 00:19:476 - , so it's better to delete one
22:32 S o a p: Hmm
22:32 S o a p: let me tell him xd
22:33 S o a p: anything else in fycho's hard xd?
22:33 Gabe: nope
22:33 S o a p: : )
22:35 Gabe: Obli's Normal: 00:57:384 (2,3) - Spacing inconsistency
22:36 S o a p: fixed~
22:37 Gabe: Talked about it with another team member: 00:09:021 (1,1) - /  00:11:930 (1,1) - / 00:55:026 (1,1) - those notes are placed too soon after the spinner. it would be prefered to end the spinner 1/4 before
22:39 S o a p: umm
22:39 S o a p: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1160514 like this?
22:39 S o a p: change to like this ;w;?
22:41 Gabe: seems fine
22:42 S o a p: ok~
22:42 S o a p: fixed
22:43 Gabe: you can now update

What we have fixed
Normal: Spacing inconsistency, objects appearing too soon after a spinner (3x)
Insane: Some blanket, stacks, added a new combo to indicate a slowdown.

S o a p

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S o a p 2013-12-10T03:55:33+00:00

Gabe wrote:

Savelog

22:20 S o a p: so..would you like to check my map?lol
22:21 S o a p: wow you are looking my map!i like you so much! 
22:21 Gabe: Insane
22:21 Gabe: 00:11:930 (5) - I suggest you to add a new combo here, to indentify the slow down
22:21 S o a p: ok~
22:22 Gabe: 00:16:658 - I suggest you to add a finish here, to emphasize the bass like you did for 00:13:748 - 
22:23 Gabe: 00:31:940 (5,7) - make them perfectly stacked
22:24 Gabe: 00:41:394 (3,4) - would you prefer doing a blanket here instead? It's not so bad to be honest, but it could be improved with the blanket
22:25 S o a p: ;w;ok
22:26 Gabe: from 00:45:747 -  to 00:51:571 - , we can hear some drums, but, there's no hitsounds to emphasize those sounds. I highly suggest you to add drum samplesets on those loud sounds
22:27 Gabe: 01:11:929 (5,1) - you might wanna do a better stack here
22:29 S o a p: fixed
22:31 Gabe: on Fycho's Hard, 00:19:203 (6) - can you delete one reverse arrow? There's actually nothing to emphasize on 00:19:476 - , so it's better to delete one
22:32 S o a p: Hmm
22:32 S o a p: let me tell him xd
22:33 S o a p: anything else in fycho's hard xd?
22:33 Gabe: nope
22:33 S o a p: : )
22:35 Gabe: Obli's Normal: 00:57:384 (2,3) - Spacing inconsistency
22:36 S o a p: fixed~
22:37 Gabe: Talked about it with another team member: 00:09:021 (1,1) - /  00:11:930 (1,1) - / 00:55:026 (1,1) - those notes are placed too soon after the spinner. it would be prefered to end the spinner 1/4 before
22:39 S o a p: umm
22:39 S o a p: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1160514 like this?
22:39 S o a p: change to like this ;w;?
22:41 Gabe: seems fine
22:42 S o a p: ok~
22:42 S o a p: fixed
22:43 Gabe: you can now update

What we have fixed
Normal: Spacing inconsistency, objects appearing too soon after a spinner (3x)
Insane: Some blanket, stacks, added a new combo to indicate a slowdown.

thank you gabe xd

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Aurele 2013-12-10T03:56:32+00:00

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