yurunneram wrote:

Sorry for late mod~ and lol haven't seen a map with this timing in a long time Is it bad?

Easy

I suggest decreasing slider velocity. This makes longer sliders, doesn't it?
Also have more interesting sliders~ ^^ Play around a bit, it's easy diff. And you need to fill it up more. It's slightly boring Tried to fill a bit more

00:10:130 (3) - Irrelavant point in the middle Moved slider

00:47:716 (3) - Make it bend at a significant time. Thus I recommend you to shift the middle point to x248 y336 Done

00:55:966 - use an inheriting timing point instead of a red one. same for 01:09:717 Done

00:59:632 - Having a break during kiai time is a bit stupid don't you think? Suppose so... made more play in the Kiai Time

Hard

I have no problem here but it looks like the map was made in 2007 :/ Just saying. Try making the sliders curve I like 2007, it's a good year

You have to improve on the rhythm way more. But as a modder I don't think I can help you there. I see you deleted normal. You will have to keep the others. Try using curved sliders more, that's one way for it to be more fun I'll put curved sliders in another map, but I don't wish to add curved sliders in this map.

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello M4M Mod From My Queue
Thanks For Your Modding Its Useful. No problem, we all want Ranked Maps

The responses to your mod are inside the spoiler boxes.

General

1. Since This Song Is Short. Try To Make More Diff. Ask For Guest Diff Or Make One. I'll ask, but I don't know how many responses I'll get
2. Untick Enable CountDown (since You didn't Use It) Done
3. Add Normal Diff Bcoz Without Normal It's Unranked! Actually, the minimum is 2 difficulties, and of those 2, 1 is an Easy / Normal. I appreciate your suggestion, but I'm not making a normal. If someone else wants to, that's up to them.

Easy

00:11:963(1) Move To x:168 y:40 Done
00:12:880(2) Move To x:472 y:40 Done
00:14:713(4) Move To x:168 y:328 Done
00:19:297(1) Move To x:184 y:52 y:52 isn't there, moved to y:56
00:20:214(2) Move To x:456 y:52 Done
00:21:131(3) ^ x:456 y:336 Done
00:22:047(4) ^ x:184 y:336 Done
00:22:964(1) ^ x:320 y:192 Leaving where it is, thanks.

Hard

00:10:130(7,8) Make Like This? Show me how to - Co-ordinates from Notepad or show me the slider lines please

00:31:215(3) Move 2 grid down Done
00:53:216(3,8) Add Whistle Sound Done
01:09:717(10) End With Whistle Sound Done

Straight Lines ~ Straight Lines ~ Are the best sliders
Good Luck ! Hope Go Ranked ! Thank you!

jtd1 wrote:

yurunneram wrote:

Sorry for late mod~ and lol haven't seen a map with this timing in a long time Is it bad? Lol, not bad, interesting ^^

Easy

I suggest decreasing slider velocity. This makes longer sliders, doesn't it? Shorter. It's slower and shorter
Also have more interesting sliders~ ^^ Play around a bit, it's easy diff. And you need to fill it up more. It's slightly boring Tried to fill a bit more

00:10:130 (3) - Irrelavant point in the middle Moved slider

00:47:716 (3) - Make it bend at a significant time. Thus I recommend you to shift the middle point to x248 y336 Done

00:55:966 - use an inheriting timing point instead of a red one. same for 01:09:717 Done

00:59:632 - Having a break during kiai time is a bit stupid don't you think? Suppose so... made more play in the Kiai Time

Hard

I have no problem here but it looks like the map was made in 2007 :/ Just saying. Try making the sliders curve I like 2007, it's a good year Haha ok then

You have to improve on the rhythm way more. But as a modder I don't think I can help you there. I see you deleted normal. You will have to keep the others. Try using curved sliders more, that's one way for it to be more fun I'll put curved sliders in another map, but I don't wish to add curved sliders in this map. Nn, okie

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

I appreciate your mod. Thank you for it.

jtd1 wrote:

No-one appreciates straight sliders any more -_-

11t wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue.

[Easy]

00:22:964 (1) - Avoid this anti-jump if possible. The spacing is deceiving, and newer players tend to pay less attention to things like approach circles. Done

01:01:467 (1,2,3) - Space out more from previous combo; see above for reasoning. This especially applies because this is a fast section. From my experience, newer players tend to like to spam buttons when they see closely arranged hit objects. Moved away a bit more

01:08:801 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

Use Grid Level 4 and recheck all of your snappings. You have some asymmetry in your distances between objects; a more detail-oriented player may pick up on this during gameplay from even the very start (00:00:963 (1,2,3)). Considering how important symmetry is to your mapping organization, this is something you should pay attention to. I'll sort the spacing out within the next few days

00:47:105 (1,2,3) - The timing here is hard to read. I would recommend turning 1-2 into a slider (like you did with Easy), or moving 2 down to form a sort of triangle shape, which will be indication to players that this section is different. Either way, one thing that you should definitely fix is the spacing between 1-2 and 2-3. They should be even. Changed 1 and 2 into a slider. Will fix spacing within a few days

There are no other real issues that I see here. Yay

[General]

Overall, it's a pretty good mapset. Impressive work if it's your first one! Thanks! Took lots of remaps
To be honest I personally don't enjoy "rectangular" maps as much. From your submission comments:

jtd1 wrote:

No-one appreciates straight sliders any more -_-

And there is some truth to that, and there are some reasons behind it too. Players tend to get bored playing through the same straight lines and right angles. I think your maps can really improve by adding a wider variety of lines and shapes, like you did with this section of your Hard difficulty: 00:08:755 (2,3,4,5,6,7). Don't limit your creativity and imagination to rectangles!

Tbh I put that there just because everyone's comments says to add curved sliders, and I can't be bothered when I think that the straight sliders will do. This is my first beatmap, and when I have somehow got this ranked, I will add curved sliders into the next one that I do. But for this one, the square / rectangle patterns will do. But I appreciate your suggestion and response to the comment.

Good luck with ranking!

Chronotakular wrote:

Hello! Mod4Mod! (Sorry this took so long!) No problem

General: Haha. Heeyyy. I love this game, and game series. Well the PS1 game series, I should say. I know what you mean, after Twinsanity the series went downhill rapidly -_-
If you are trying to get this map ranked, I'm aware Easy and Hard are the only required difficulties, but it helps for a map to get ranked with more difficulties. I'm not making any more difficulties. Unless anyone wants to make another, there will only be these 2 difficulties

[Easy]

General: Is your beat-snapping really a 1/3? I guess it fits the song but most of the time a 1/4th is the way to go. For this difficulty, 1/3 works because almost all the notes are on white ticks which are the same in 1/3 and 1/4. 1/3 is also better for the Kiai section, which doesn't work in 1/4 very well.

00:30:756 (1) - Don't stack notes on Easy difficulties. Stacked notes are very hard to read for those that are learning the game. Done
00:35:869 (1) - Same as above. Done
00:47:105 (2) - I would move this note just a little bit further away from the note before it. I kept hitting it early. (Refer to the Hard difficulty mod for this as well.) Done, moved spacing to 1.27x spacing

[Hard]

General: Again, 1/3 beat-snapping? I think it works better, because in 1/4 some of the notes are in the middle and they sound better there. But if others notice this, I'll change it and remap this difficulty
I would turn up the approach rate by 1 or 2. Done, now AR7

00:05:546 (2,4) - Ctrl+G these? Done
00:09:213 (3,4,5,6,7) - I would use wider spacing here. Like 0.9, or 1.0 I prefer it as it is, looks a bit better imo. But again, if someone comments on this, I'll sort it out
00:09:213 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. If you mean 00:16:090 (3,4,5,6,7), then I'm afraid it's the same as above
00:34:270 (5) - New combo? Done
00:35:798 (1) - If you do the suggestion above, remove this new combo. Ok
00:39:771 (5) - New combo. Done
00:47:105 (1) - This slider again. Giving me issues like the last difficulty. I don't think it fits the beat now, actually. Consider removing. I've replaced this slider with 2 beats, so hopefully that'll make a difference
01:03:300 (1) - This circle comes up quick. I kept missing. I don't know, maybe remove it? It would give the player a nice short break, too. I think the note there matches the sound of percussion or something at that point, but again, if others say the same, I'll happily remove it.
[]

I guess that's all for me! I hope this helped! Good luck! (:

It helped a lot, thank you for your mod

ax_pokl wrote:

From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix. I'll mod this today

[General]
If find the color not suitable for the map, you may use some color which is not so colorful instead. (such as gray, pink..) Changed the colours

[Easy]
(add some hitsound after 00:15:630 and 00:47:105 and ...) Added some whistles on the sliders and some extra claps
00:15:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - use the same thing might be boring. use Ctrl+G instead. (mind the distance snap) I've swapped the direction of the square at 00:19:252 (1,2,3,4), hopefully this should make it interesting
00:29:381 (4,1) - it is better not to snap things in Easy beatmap. What do you mean by this?
00:28:464 (3) - nc(new combo). Done
00:32:131 (3,6) - add some nc here. Ok, done
00:37:632 (3) - nc? Right, done
00:49:091 (4) - nc Done
00:57:800 (5) - nc? Done
01:06:967 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ctrl+G? Sounds good, done

[Hard]
(there are too many circles at this beatmap, try use some more sliders.) I think the circles fit the soundtrack better than sliders, but I'll have a look into this
00:36:715 (1,2) - (conbine?) No, (2) is placed where a drumbeat is in the soundtrack
00:41:299 (1,1) - too short time between these, end the slider 00:44:049 and add a note 00:44:966 This is where a spinner is, have you got the time wrong?

Good map, good luck.

ax_pokl wrote:

[Easy]

00:29:381 (4,1) - it is better not to snap things in Easy beatmap. What do you mean by this?
I mean this slider is a slightly snap with the next circle, move the circle to 192,224 and the next slider 280,336.
Ok, done
[Hard]

00:41:299 (1,1) - too short time between these, end the slider 00:44:049 and add a note 00:44:966 This is where a spinner is, have you got the time wrong?
(I had type the wrong word..)
00:44:049 is the time where your spinner should ending, that means you should drag the end of the spinner from 00:44:966 to 00:44:049.
And of course, naturally add a note (a circle or a spinner) on 00:44:049.

Ok, done this. Thank you for clarifying what you meant earlier

yachiru4 wrote:

Hi from my queue!


Make the Distance shorter, and it should be fine for newbies. What would you suggest? 0.9x Distance Snap?


I didn't want to do a retry. Looks boring, and really lacks style in the flow Even though your map's rhythm and hit sound is all good, if your map doesn't look good then people won't want to play it. Ok ;_;

Try looking at recently ranked maps to see how an interesting flow should look like. I will give the straight sliders a few more chances, and if it doesn't work out, I'll ask you back for retry, if you don't mind.

Cheers!

Thanks for your honesty

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ Random mod! That's very kind of you. Sorry I took a while to get back to this, I'm starting university atm

[General]

1. If you're going to have an Easy and Hard diff, then you'll need a Normal diff as well in order for this to be rank able. Not true, a mapset can have 2 difficulties, one of which is 3 stars or less. If you want to make me a normal difficulty, then feel free, but I'm not making another difficulty.
2. Clap sounds a bit messy. Try to use this hitsound pattern for those claps:
   
   Objects that appear on the ticks marked with an x should have a clap.

Apply this to all your diffs Unless I'm mistaken, this picture is for 1/4, not for 1/3. Would you mind explaining a little bit please?
[Easy]

1. Hmm you should lower the slider velocity a bit :S Doesn't look too fast, but for a new players eyes it may be. Try tuning it down to 1.00 - 1.20?

It is 1.00x.......... Still want me to turn it down?
00:27:089 (2,1) - move them to the right, so that 00:27:089 (2) - will start at 00:27:548 instead for consistency. No, it sounds out of place, and as it is, it fits the sound imo.
00:33:048 (3) - Change whistle on the tail to a clap instead. If you unsure how to, simply double click on the head, until it's highlighted in red like this one for example: Done

00:39:924 (3) - Add clap. Done
00:47:105 (2) - Sounds completely off, remove and place a hit circle at 00:47:257. Done
00:49:091 (1,2) - Add a clap on the head. Done
00:55:966 - 01:09:717 I know you purposely made the rhythm more intense to match the music,but I still think this is too much for a new player to handle:( Idk, it's the only non-boring part of this difficulty... What to do...
00:55:966 - 01:01:925 Try this rhythm?
Done and sorted out spacing in between

Still need sa lot of work I'm afraid Especially for Kai. I'll get there in the end, I hope.

[Hard]
00:00:963 (1) - Change clap to finish. Done
00:01:421 (2) - Add clap. Done
00:17:464 (7) - NC Not a lot of point doing this for 1 circle before the next new combo
00:27:853 (4) - ^ Done
00:28:770 (8) - ^ Done
00:35:798 (5) - ^ Done
00:38:548 (5) - ^ Done
00:50:772 (6) - ^ Done
01:08:801 (7) - ^ Did this at (6)

Re-check you hit sounds please, I didn't note them just take a glance back at the clap pattern I showed above.

Will do in the next few days

Hope this helps~!

Very helpful, thank you

ichivictus wrote:

From #modreqs

Easy

00:10:130 (3,4) - and 00:17:464 (3,4) - I'd style it differently personally. Something as simple as this http://i.imgur.com/6GZM1tM.png may make a difference. I've restyled the sliders, hopefully they look alright

00:57:494 (2) - Flow feels broken. CTRL+G would fix this but since it's an easy diff there should probably be no jumps. I suggest to move this slider to the center like this: http://i.imgur.com/a9hkrha.png Done
00:58:411 (3) - If you do the above suggestion, then you should move this circle of course. http://i.imgur.com/qyBzzPr.png Done

01:00:856 - Add slider just like the one before this time. Something like this? http://i.imgur.com/mBTjyOe.png Done
01:02:689 - ^ Done

01:03:300 - Why the break? I think you can still map it even though the music got a little subtle. BECAUSE I AM A LAZY FAG - I'll think of something to add in in the next week or so

01:08:189 - Add slider Done

Hard

00:01:421 (2) - Consider deleting. It feels random while playing since there's no music or rhythm to match it. Done
00:03:254 (2) - ^ ^

00:04:629 (1,2,3,4) - This feels like an easy/normal diff. I'd add circles where there's nothing. Like this http://i.imgur.com/iOx5Fpw.jpg Fixed according to picture, sounds good

00:09:213 (3,4,5,6,7) - This looks shaped poorly. I'd try something different. I like the curve, I'm keeping that in
00:16:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ and also maybe do more to the sliders since straight doesn't match the music that well. ^ and curved some sliders
00:19:603 - Add circle here and stack it under (2), do so behind each circle for 00:19:755 (2,3,4,5,6) - Done

00:10:130 (7) - Remove the red http://i.imgur.com/oWLhVhK.png >>> http://i.imgur.com/tNX5XgT.png How? I can't do this without reshaping the slider, and I can't get it to make that shape again...
00:11:047 (8) - ^ ^

00:35:187 - Add circle Sounds out of place imo
00:55:202 (9) - Instead of a long reverse slider, maybe add circles and make it a stream? Done


Overall for both diffs you should try less of a box-style.

Example would be just about all of kiai time in the hard diff. I feel like I'm constantly drawing a box. Try to add more patterns and rhythms that change direction without breaking flow. Make it interesting.

Good luck

Thank you for your opinion, I'll try and change things a bit over the next week or so

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue.

Easy

00:10:130 (3,4) - The way this flows and is shaped is distracting. Turn the 4 slider into the other direction so it is mirrored? I think I've done this, you may have to recheck, if you don't mind
00:29:381 (2,1) - The placement and flow is weird here. The circle is too far up to actually play good. Move it lower and to the sider so its a curved movement. I've curved a few sliders and changed the spacing of all the notes up to the spinner to fit in Distance Snap, hopefully it looks OK in your eyes *fingers crossed*
00:45:882 (1,2) - The slight overlap is not fitting and also looks weird. Move it more lower to fix this. My mistake, forgot to move it down. Fixed now
00:54:591 (3,1) - You should make this spacing larger. This is no break between 3 and 1 so it should have normal spacing. Done this, and changed the spacing from here until the end, and again, I hope you think it's acceptable
00:55:966 - Your comboing is messed up a little at the kiai part. Recombo it. Done this, looks a bit better now
00:59:633 (1,3) - If you would move 3, 1 grid up and 1, 1 grid down it would make a better shape. Currently it looks a little off. Changed spacing
01:00:244 (3,4) - Make the 3 slider curved so it goes better with the next element. Done this
01:02:689 (4,1) - Spacing mistake here, too big. Done
01:09:717 (3,1) - Spacing issue here as well. You need to fix this. ^
00:38:548 (2,3) - This is too far (0,2x) from your previous slider. Move it closer to avoid spacing changes. Same with this 00:47:257 (2,3) - Fixed, I think

Hard

- You could really make more curved sliders and other shapes. There are so many straight ones, which gets bored after a little. Yes I could, but I probably won't. Don't take this the wrong way, it's not meant to be an offensive comment, I'm not ignoring your good opinion. I just like straight sliders, and maybe in my next map (if I make another map), I'll add more curved ones. I did originally want this to have straight sliders, as I believe it sounds like an army-ish piece of music, so I made it rigid with straight sliders. But, if people continue to say otherwise, then I will change them. Just give me good suggestions and I'll fix for you.

00:04:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What to say... This song does not have any kind of rythm relating to streams, so you shouldnt use them. These songs are ok for big spacing but no streams. That's too much of overmapping. Remap this. Done this
00:10:130 (7,8,1) - Spacing changes here, why? I don't really know, changed to fix this
00:17:234 (6,7) - Slight spacing difference is not needed, so make normal spacing please. Fixed this
00:38:548 (1) - Shape this better. This can be prettier. I hope you like my seagull slider then
00:55:966 (6,1) - Make normal spacing here, this can be played as part of the stream so it gets confusing. Make same spacing as 00:56:272 (1,2) - Done
01:06:967 (1,2) - That's the only jump in the stream and looks weird. Why dont you make normal spacing or add another jump somewhere so it doesnt feel so cut. Done this

Good luck o/

Thank you for your mod, very helpful with spacing

1. Well, this map could need another difficulty, seeing as it's only a 1 min long song with 2 diffs atm. It's not a requirement, but hey, it'd make the mapset more interesting
2. Your Easy plays more like a Normal in this mapset, mostly due to how easy Hard is in comparison. One of the reasons is probably due to the fairly high spacing in Easy at some places, and both diffs using 1.40x SV.
3. Oh yeah, your map isn't bad or anything, but it's some points you can keep in mind if/when you map another song. You should make either an Easy or an Insane though.

1. Overall, the distance between notes is very close, so the map itself feels a bit "slow" while playing. Since you also follow distance snap very strictly (which isn't bad in itself), some patterns are also harder to read, since the spacing look similar. If you feel up to it, I really recommend trying a slightly higher slider velocity, as well as turning the distance snap up a notch or two.
2. 00:04:629 (1,2,3,4) - Try using inherited sections to turn the volume up gradually for this part.
3. 00:08:755 (2,3,4,5,6) - The timing of these notes are pretty hard to read, as they look very similar in spacing, but (2,3) is a 1/3, while the rest is 1/2. You should space out (3,4,5,6) more.
4. 00:16:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above^
5. 00:23:270 - Add a note here. You should follow the same rhythm as 00:25:103 - , since both parts of the song are similar.
6. 00:25:714 (4,1) - The note is really close. Since you did a jump earlier at 00:23:881 (3,1) - , it'll feel a bit weird when there isn't one here. Also, the spacing isn't consistent either. You could do http://puu.sh/5JHAC.jpg , or whatever else you feel comfortable with.
7. 00:35:187 - I think you should map this note. The song doesn't have a lot of instruments going, so skipping the few notes that are being played feels a bit weird.
8. 00:47:105 (1,2,3) - This is one of those places where the close distance between notes makes it hard to distinguish between 1/3 and 1/2. Anyhow, you should fix the spacing between 00:45:882 (4,1) - ,
9. 00:55:966 - Add a finish on this note. Same for sliderhead of 00:59:633 (1) - and 01:06:967 (1) - , as well as 01:03:300 (1) - . Actually, there are a few symbal crashes earlier as well, like 00:08:296 (1) - or 00:11:963 (1) - . Consider adding finishes on those as well.

1. As I said earlier, this feels a bit like a Normal. Consider renaming this to Normal.
2. Also, for future maps, you should use a lower slider velocity for Easy, as well as smaller distance between notes without changing it too much/at all. I'll be pointing out stuff that feels too hard for an Easy imo, though they should be fine if you rename this to Normal.
3. Add finishes as in Hard.
4. 00:29:381 (2,1,2) - Irregular spacing might be hard. Also the distance in general for these 1/2's are pretty big.
5. 00:45:882 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing seems to be increasing here, which is generally a bad idea when you're mapping something simple and easy. It also makes the map look a bit more messy than necessary, as the song doesn't seem to call for any spacing increase.
6. 00:55:966 - Constant 1/3 like this is probably pretty hard for a new player, especially since it's a mix of sliders and notes. it's probably fine for a Normal, but yeah.

CXu wrote:

SPOILER

2013-12-08 01:11 CXu: so hey
2013-12-08 01:11 CXu: what should I mod tomorrow
2013-12-08 01:17 MillhioreF: sky balls
2013-12-08 01:17 CXu: wat
2013-12-08 01:17 CXu: oh wow
2013-12-08 01:18 CXu: there is actually a song
2013-12-08 01:18 CXu: called sky balls
2013-12-08 01:18 CXu: wow
2013-12-08 01:19 MillhioreF: yes

And tomorrow totally means 4 days later.

Hi. Hi

[General]

1. Well, this map could need another difficulty, seeing as it's only a 1 min long song with 2 diffs atm. It's not a requirement, but hey, it'd make the mapset more interesting I may do or ask for a GD from someone.
2. Your Easy plays more like a Normal in this mapset, mostly due to how easy Hard is in comparison. One of the reasons is probably due to the fairly high spacing in Easy at some places, and both diffs using 1.40x SV.
3. Oh yeah, your map isn't bad or anything, Yess but it's some points you can keep in mind if/when you map another song. You should make either an Easy or an Insane though.

I'll bear this in mind for next time

[Hard]

1. Overall, the distance between notes is very close, so the map itself feels a bit "slow" while playing. Since you also follow distance snap very strictly (which isn't bad in itself), some patterns are also harder to read, since the spacing look similar. If you feel up to it, I really recommend trying a slightly higher slider velocity, as well as turning the distance snap up a notch or two. I'll test this out over the next few days, and I'll post when decided
2. 00:04:629 (1,2,3,4) - Try using inherited sections to turn the volume up gradually for this part. Done
3. 00:08:755 (2,3,4,5,6) - The timing of these notes are pretty hard to read, as they look very similar in spacing, but (2,3) is a 1/3, while the rest is 1/2. You should space out (3,4,5,6) more. Done
4. 00:16:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above^ Done
5. 00:23:270 - Add a note here. You should follow the same rhythm as 00:25:103 - , since both parts of the song are similar. Done
6. 00:25:714 (4,1) - The note is really close. Since you did a jump earlier at 00:23:881 (3,1) - , it'll feel a bit weird when there isn't one here. Also, the spacing isn't consistent either. You could do http://puu.sh/5JHAC.jpg , or whatever else you feel comfortable with. Done
7. 00:35:187 - I think you should map this note. The song doesn't have a lot of instruments going, so skipping the few notes that are being played feels a bit weird. Done
8. 00:47:105 (1,2,3) - This is one of those places where the close distance between notes makes it hard to distinguish between 1/3 and 1/2. Anyhow, you should fix the spacing between 00:45:882 (4,1) - , Done
9. 00:55:966 - Add a finish on this note. Same for sliderhead of 00:59:633 (1) - and 01:06:967 (1) - , as well as 01:03:300 (1) - . Actually, there are a few symbal crashes earlier as well, like 00:08:296 (1) - or 00:11:963 (1) - . Consider adding finishes on those as well.Added to some, and I'll add more in the next few days

[Easy]

1. As I said earlier, this feels a bit like a Normal. Consider renaming this to Normal.
2. Also, for future maps, you should use a lower slider velocity for Easy, as well as smaller distance between notes without changing it too much/at all. I'll be pointing out stuff that feels too hard for an Easy imo, though they should be fine if you rename this to Normal. Nope, I've changed this to make it Easier, so no Normal yet (if at all )
3. Add finishes as in Hard. See Hard
4. 00:29:381 (2,1,2) - Irregular spacing might be hard. Also the distance in general for these 1/2's are pretty big. Fixed
5. 00:45:882 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing seems to be increasing here, which is generally a bad idea when you're mapping something simple and easy. It also makes the map look a bit more messy than necessary, as the song doesn't seem to call for any spacing increase. Fixed
6. 00:55:966 - Constant 1/3 like this is probably pretty hard for a new player, especially since it's a mix of sliders and notes. it's probably fine for a Normal, but yeah. Done

Overall it's a nice first map (or idk, is it? ). It's a bit rough around the edges, but making things look neat and tidy is something that usually just comes with experience. My biggest gripe is that it only has two difficulties though, where the Easy is kinda hard, and the hard is kinda easy You really should consider adding another diff to ballance the spread a bit more (or two diffs /me runs). I've pointed out the more "major" things that should be fixed, though overall some tidying up of spacing could do wonders, as well as maybe avoiding some overlaps like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1164688 . Try getting some mods that focus on Aestethics, as your rhythm is mostly fine, and good luck with your map!

Yes, this is my first map. Thank you for your comments, it's a pity I can't make it look as professional as others do, but hopefully it will be fine in the end. I don't think I'll make another difficulty, (or two ). However, I've made some patterns in the Hard difficulty, and lowered the distance snap in Easy and remapped this difficulty, since I didn't realise you could lower the set Distance Snap . Thanks for the mod, and I might need the luck, this map needs adjustments and remaps all the time

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from .....wait, didn't I mod this map b4?
LOL w/e, consider this a re-check then o̿ ̭ o̿ I think you're right. Silly me, Hope you don't mind

[Easy]
00:27:089 (2) - lol whats the point of having that curve anchor point in here?
Not really an error, I recommend you just remove it. Done
00:59:633 (3,4,1,2) - These mini-sliders are way to hard to read for new players. You want to keep the rhythm as simple and basic as possible.
I suggest changing the slider to a full 1/1 slider, like this:
That way, players will at least be able to see the slider ball clearly. Done
01:06:967 (1) - Add finish on the head? Done

[Normal]
00:08:755 (2) - Can't you make it blanket 00:09:671 (3) - for smoother flow? I've tried, but it might be a bit bad. See what you think after I update it, if you don't mind
00:16:089 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:33:965 (1,2) - Needs better blanket. Here's what I manage to make for you:

416,304,34423,2,2,P|360:200|264:208,1,200

It's very nice, thanks very much
00:55:966 - 01:09:717 all the objects in this time is too much, I mean there's no 1/2 breaks or anything between the objects. It's a full run-on rhythm here, which I don't think can be handled by those who are still a bit in the beginners level.
Try leaving a blank at 00:58:105, 01:00:550, 01:04:522, and 01:07:884. See how it works I'll test these out, see what others think of the breaks

[Hard]
00:35:645 (5,1) - This is difficult to read. Try putting the NC on 00:35:187 (3) - instead of 00:35:798 (1) - Done, thanks

Overall, I'd definitely say that you've improved However, there are still certain parts of the map that contains an awkward flow (mainly in your Hard diff). Keep working on it!

Good luck.

tellertheworld wrote:

1. 00:01:765 (3) - no voice here. and the voice start at 00:01:879 - . Sorry, but I will leave it, because it fits the drums in that part.
2. 00:12:765 (3) - add circle. It can look ur map faster right? Done
3. 00:13:682 (3) - ^ and done.
4. 00:23:270 - not a accent . 00:23:422 - is more obvious so try to use the slider here. I don't quite understand what you mean and I like it the way it is, so I think I'll leave it as it is now. Sorry.
   
5. 00:41:299 - to 00:44:966 - this part should be more fast in rhythm. (add note and jump etc.) Done.
6. 01:11:436 (6) - no voice here. and the voice start at 01:11:551 - Same as the first point.
   ~

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tellertheworld wrote:

From Teller's team modding queues ( ･´ω･｀)

ous size bg

It says in the rules it doesn't have to be a specific size.

Bashing SpajdeR

1. 00:01:765 (3) - no voice here. and the voice start at 00:01:879 - .
2. 00:12:765 (3) - add circle. It can look ur map faster right?
3. 00:13:682 (3) - ^
4. 00:23:270 - not a accent . 00:23:422 - is more obvious so try to use the slider here.
   
5. 00:41:299 - to 00:44:966 - this part should be more fast in rhythm. (add note and jump etc.)
6. 01:11:436 (6) - no voice here. and the voice start at 01:11:551 -
   ~

Hard

1. 00:22:964 - the voice change here so you should not keep circle here. It is surprising. I'm leaving this one here thanks
   
2. 00:47:105 (1,2) - try to put it far. it is not like slowly. I've moved (1,2,3) a bit further apart
   

Normal

• 
  Open the DS to map this difficulty. It does use Distance Snap?
  ~

1. 00:08:755 (2) - blanket it I think I've done it
   

Easy

1. 01:10:634 (1) - blanket it Fixed
   

Thanks for your mod

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Insane]

DS.......a little confuse

00:07:380 (1,2,3) - do as 00:05:852 (3,1,2,3) Uhhh I think I moved that on accident... It wasn't supposed to be there hehe... ^^' Fixed.

00:11:047 (2) - ctrl+g Fixed.

00:14:561 (4,5) - i think silder will be better Done.

00:16:394 (3) - ctrl+g Done.

00:22:353 (1,3) - stack better ? I think I've fixed that. ;P

00:23:881 (4) - should ctrl+g Okay.

00:25:103 (1,2) - stack plz like 00:26:937 (5,1) Changed that a bit.

00:27:853 (1,1) - exchange (select those ,ctrl+g I'm not sure about this one. I think I'll leave it for now.

00:41:604 (2) - .... Uhhhh... Changed. ^^'

00:41:451 i don't think speed up is good I think it matches the music there, so I just made the SV 1.50 instead of 2.00.

01:05:439 (8,9,10) - 8(352,96)then 9 10 exchange Fixed.

01:06:967 (1,2) - do the same like after34567 Fixed.

01:12:467 (8) - ......try I like it! Done.

SPOILER

good luck

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moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Easy]

AR-1？I don't think this is a good idea, leaving as it is.

end....

[Normal]

HP4 AR4or5 OD4 Leaving as it is for now, will test these settings later on

00:05:546 do the same as 00:04:629 (1) like hard diff Done

00:07:380 ^ ^

00:11:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too many notes , change some to sliders? Done

00:19:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

00:16:776 and 00:17:234 add note No, that's for Hard only. I'm not switching between 1/3 and 1/4 in a Normal difficulty.

00:45:424 (1) - delete , for Normal diff,after spinner should break a while to click next note Moved the spinner back, hopefully it should be fine

00:52:758 (1,2,3) - try this

SPOILER

This doesn't fit to the music at all.

00:55:966 (1,2,3) - try this

SPOILER

Done

01:04:522 add slider Done

01:07:577 (3) - change to silder Done

[Hard]

00:00:963 (1,2,1,2) - try this

SPOILER

I prefer the rectangle I have made...

00:55:050 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this

SPOILER

I'll keep this in mind, it's a nice idea

00:56:272 - 01:09:717 need more work.. I know, that's why I'm doing M4M's. Any suggestions?

01:11:780 add note No

01:11:092 add note No

01:12:926 and 01:12:811 add note No

how about this to end?

SPOILER

The diamond is better imo

good luck

Thanks very much

rfandomization wrote:

Hi! Random mod, if you don't mind. I do mind. No, not really :p. Thanks for the random mod Hope it wasn't too bad to mod
General
Have you considered adding a spinner after your last note in all difficulties? It makes the map end a little less abruptly I don't think it needs it tbh. I'll leave it up to MrSpajdeR for his difficulty, but I think the diamonds / squares are fine atm

Easy
00:10:130 (3)- Since the next slider has an anchor point in the middle, why not make this a pointy slider too? I saw a few of these in the map, and since it's an Easy, patterns and recognizability (argh) I know what you mean... are important. Done.
00:18:380 (4) - Same here, cept it's the previous slider this time which is pointy. ^
00:35:798 (1) - New combo isn't really necessary here ^
01:08:801 (2) - This slider should be somewhere above the previous one, to make it symmetrical. I don't really want it to be so symmetrical, because it'll overlap with 01:05:134 (2), and I really don't want that.

Normal
00:02:796 (3) - Maybe move this note to x-152, y-208 to make a triangle with the two previous notes, and change the next note's position accordingly. Thanks for this, much better idea
00:20:214 (3) - This is a little too close to the previous note. Move it a bit to fix the spacing and make a straight line with the two previous notes. Fixed
00:29:381 (3) - Put an anchor point in the middle of this slider as well, to make a pattern with the previous one.^
01:00:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure how well this pattern goes with the beat here. The previous pattern, and the next, are fine, but for this bit, I think you should use repeating sliders to emphasize the music. Done
01:06:662 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same as above. Done

I'm still not happy about the Kiai Time notes in Normal. It goes without saying that the mods so far have really helped, but if any future mappers or anyone else has any ideas for a better style / flow / play / whatever else there is that newbie mappers like me don't know about, please share them here so I can make this difficulty better.

Hard
00:02:796 (1,2) - Don't put a new combo here. First four notes here should be part of the same combo. Done
00:04:629 (1,2,3,4) - Since you already did this in Normal, maybe do something different here? Hitcircles instead of sliders, or something. I like these sliders though. These will stay, simply because I really don't like quadruplets.
00:10:130 (7) - Curve this slider more, so it goes with the beat better. Done
00:11:047 (8) - Same as above Done
00:56:272 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Instead of a giant oval, make it look better as a circle. Done
01:05:439 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above, kinda- make the notes curve right a little less quickly, so it looks more circular. ^

I've also changed the other parts of the Kiai Time in Hard difficulty, into octagon style shapes. It's probably worth mentioning this here, just because.

Overall, not a bad mapset. I believe that with a few more mods, it'll be on its way to being ranked. I wish you the best (and sorry for my horrible mod XD)

rfandomization wrote:

Hi! Random mod, if you don't mind. Hello! \o
General
Have you considered adding a spinner after your last note in all difficulties? It makes the map end a little less abruptly I don't really think it fits the music too much. It seems a bit awkward to me to be honest.

Bashing SpajdeR
I think the name of this difficulty has to be changed to SpajdeR's Insane or something similar. "A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set.", so I think it should be good.
00:03:102 (3,4) - Maybe swap the positions of these two notes- makes more sense to me. Done. I also put them a bit closer to each other.
00:12:727 - Add note? Done.
00:13:644 - Add note? Done.
00:42:521 (3) - Not sure if you did this purposely to screw with people, but the spacing here messed me up XD. For an Insane, I think little tricks like this are OK, but maybe shift it a little bit to make it less sudden. Not sure about that one. I moved it a bit, though.
01:13:079 - Add note? I think it sounds better without that note, so no.

Overall, not a bad mapset. I believe that with a few more mods, it'll be on its way to being ranked. I wish you the best (and sorry for my horrible mod XD)

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TheForgotten5 wrote:

From queue, sorry for the late reply

[Bashing SpadjeR] SpajdeR*
00:00:963 (1) - Add finish here? The song starts with a cymbal crash anyways.
00:05:546 (1) - Add clap here
00:07:380 (1) - ^ I assume you mean to add clap to the beggining of the slider.
00:20:214 (2) - ^
00:20:978 (1) - Add clap on slider end

Done everything! Thank you! :3

Everything else looks fine, I think this map should be close to getting ranked!
Good luck!

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Crash Bash - Sky Balls.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 8280
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Sky Balls
TitleUnicode:Sky Balls
Artist:Steve Duckworth
ArtistUnicode:Steve Duckworth
Creator:jtd1
Version:Bashing SpajdeR
Source:Crash Bash
Tags:bandicoot playstation 1 SpajdeR
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SpajdeR wrote:

TheForgotten5 wrote:

From queue, sorry for the late reply It's one of the quickest responses so far, don't worry :p

[Bashing SpadjeR] SpajdeR* I laughed in real life. Best typo ever

Everything else looks fine, I think this map should be close to getting ranked!
Good luck!