Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Not necessary to put 'Taiko' in diff name

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Use default hitsounds and delete unnecessary timing points. Recommend using Nardo's timing points but remember to change to default.
00:54:280 (1) - Add finish
01:31:454 (1) - k
01:31:889 (1,2,1) - ddk, following your pattern

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
Use default hitsounds.

nice map~
good luck for rank~

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Not necessary to put 'Taiko' in diff name (will reconsider later)

[Taiko Muzukashii]
Use default hitsounds and delete unnecessary timing points. Recommend using Nardo's timing points but remember to change to default. (done)
00:54:280 (1) - Add finish (not necessary)
01:31:454 (1) - k (fixed)
01:31:889 (1,2,1) - ddk, following your pattern (sure)

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
Use default hitsounds.

nice map~
good luck for rank~

thanks for mod~

Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Muzukashii]
01:03:628 (5) - K > k
01:09:715 (1,2,3) - kkk
01:18:845 (3,1,1) - It's a Muzu, your 1/4 streams should only be ddd or kkk. So here, it would be better if you did kkk
01:20:150 (2,3,1) - ^ The same, but here, ddd
01:58:628 (1) - d > k
02:35:584 (2) - D > d Remove this finish, it has nothing to do in a Muzu's 1/4 stream
02:36:671 (1,1,1) - The same as before, it's unrankable. So kkk
02:54:498 (3) - ... Another finish in a 1/4 stream, remove this
03:01:454 (3) - ^
03:08:411 (3) - ^
03:23:193 (1,2,1,2,1) - Try something like this ? http://puu.sh/5zJit.jpg
03:39:280 (2,3,4) - ddd or kkk, but NOT A kdk
04:02:324 (1) - D ?

[Oni]
The Oni seems very good.
01:56:888 (60) - Remove finish ?
02:09:279 (122) - Remove finish, wrong placement.
03:02:976 (375) - ^
03:08:411 (398) - K > D
03:09:932 (405) - K > k
03:18:845 (12,13,14,15) - It would be better with d d d k

Totoro le Pacha wrote:

Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Oni]
The Oni seems very good. Thanks~
01:56:888 (60) - Remove finish ? Nope. Stressed sound occurs here.
02:09:279 (122) - Remove finish, wrong placement. The stressed note is similar to 00:52:758 - remain unchanged.
03:02:976 (375) - ^ Nope. Stressed sound occurs here.
03:08:411 (398) - K > D fixed
03:09:932 (405) - K > k This note is similar to 03:02:976 - no change
03:18:845 (12,13,14,15) - It would be better with d d d k Good idea to try to follow the vocal. But in this case, I want to map the violin, which gives the higher pitch.

Thanks for your mod~
Update: http://puu.sh/5zR7V

Totoro le Pacha wrote:

Ayo. Totoro le Pacha from Pacha's Taiko Modding Queue. Love me, and I'll love you

Let's begin. ♫

[Muzukashii]
01:03:628 (5) - K > k (fixed)
01:09:715 (1,2,3) - kkk (nope, I like it)
01:18:845 (3,1,1) - It's a Muzu, your 1/4 streams should only be ddd or kkk. So here, it would be better if you did kkk (oops, I forgot about this one, thanks)
01:20:150 (2,3,1) - ^ The same, but here, ddd (fixed)
01:58:628 (1) - d > k (it would sounds off, so I'll leave this one)
02:35:584 (2) - D > d Remove this finish, it has nothing to do in a Muzu's 1/4 stream (sure)
02:36:671 (1,1,1) - The same as before, it's unrankable. So kkk (fixed)
02:54:498 (3) - ... Another finish in a 1/4 stream, remove this (fixed)
03:01:454 (3) - ^(fixed)
03:08:411 (3) - ^(fixed)
03:23:193 (1,2,1,2,1) - Try something like this ? http://puu.sh/5zJit.jpg (um.. I'm following the violin here, so that one isn't good)
03:39:280 (2,3,4) - ddd or kkk, but NOT A kdk (fixed)
04:02:324 (1) - D ? (sure)

thanks for mod and love you too~
(will update after the next mod to reduce update spam orz)

From my queue
Your map is nice,so I can just do short checks,sorry

[General]
Nice storyboard,plz teach me how to make it!

[Easy]
00:05:802 (3) - no NC
00:15:367 (2,3,4) - different distance
00:21:019 (4) - why not stack with 00:17:541 (5)
00:24:932 (5) - NC
00:55:367 (1) - no NC
00:56:237 (2) - NC
00:11:019 (1,1) - too close in Easy
01:34:932 (5) - NC
01:48:845 (5) - NC
02:07:976 (4) - not a good blanket
02:14:498 (3) - ^
02:30:150 (5) - ^ and NC
02:49:715 (3,2) - a little stacked
03:05:367 (5) - NC
04:11:019 (5) - NC

[Normal]
Same NC problems

[Insane]
ar+1? Otherwise the spread is not good.
Some part are just like Hard.Check Andrea's map and get some tips.
Some rhythm suggestions

btw,包子ts8zs's hard is pretty well.

GL

Thx&fixing hard,But busy now:3

615915887 wrote:

From my queue
Your map is nice,so I can just do short checks,sorry (np, I respect all your thought :3)

[General]
Nice storyboard,plz teach me how to make it! (thanks, there are many pro chinese who can make much more better than mine though >.<)

[Easy]
00:05:802 (3) - no NC (fixed already)
00:15:367 (2,3,4) - different distance (fixed)
00:21:019 (4) - why not stack with 00:17:541 (5) (it's not good to stack in easy diff)
00:24:932 (5) - NC (fixed)
00:55:367 (1) - no NC
00:56:237 (2) - NC (fixed)
00:11:019 (1,1) - too close in Easy (not a big problem)
01:34:932 (5) - NC (fixed)
01:48:845 (5) - NC (fixed)
02:07:976 (4) - not a good blanket (fixed)
02:14:498 (3) - ^ (fixed)
02:30:150 (5) - ^ and NC (fixed)
02:49:715 (3,2) - a little stacked (maybe you means overlapped, fixed anyway)
03:05:367 (5) - NC (it would become NC spam that way)
04:11:019 (5) - NC (fixed)

[Normal]
Same NC problems (I'll look for it)

[Insane]
ar+1? Otherwise the spread is not good. (maybe it's the opposite. the hard diff that should be ar -1 because the song itself is slow)
Some part are just like Hard.Check Andrea's map and get some tips. (I don't think it's that much the same, but thanks for the suggestion)
Some rhythm suggestions

such as

00:04:281 (4,5) - the sound begins at 00:04:498 and 00:04:932 ,on your slider tail,that;s not comfortable in Insane.So you can just begin your slider at those points.

btw,包子ts8zs's hard is pretty well.

GL

thanks for modding :3

Hello~:3
req SB mod


so good~SB and map~lol

Star~

[ Yuki ] wrote:

Hello~:3
req SB mod

IRC

19:53 [ Yuki ]: Hello~:D
19:53 El SolarBeam: hi yuki >.<
19:53 *[ Yuki ] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/315738 Nakae Mitsuki - Pure Love, True Love]
19:53 [ Yuki ]: this SB so good
19:53 [ Yuki ]: but
19:54 El SolarBeam: yes?
19:54 [ Yuki ]: one opinion
19:54 [ Yuki ]: 00:38:411 - 
19:55 El SolarBeam: it's not smooth enough?
19:55 [ Yuki ]: yes!
19:56 El SolarBeam: ah, i see owo
19:56 [ Yuki ]: Fade < 2 time
19:57 El SolarBeam: will try
19:57 [ Yuki ]: oh 1 time
19:58 El SolarBeam: yes?
19:58 [ Yuki ]: um whit..
20:00 [ Yuki ]: i'll fix
20:05 [ Yuki ]: um
20:06 El SolarBeam: how's it going?
20:06 [ Yuki ]: 00:38:302 - SB/sb34 this Fade 1
20:07 [ Yuki ]: 00:37:976 - SB/sb34 this Fade 0
20:07 El SolarBeam: ok, changed the script
20:08 El SolarBeam: oh, and there's something bothering me
20:08 [ Yuki ]: 00:37:976 - and move same SB/sb6
20:09 [ Yuki ]: soft feel :D
20:09 El SolarBeam: alright, i feel the same /o/
20:10 El SolarBeam: there's one thing i want to ask
20:10 El SolarBeam: 00:41:128
20:11 [ Yuki ]: yes
20:11 El SolarBeam: should the transition here be changed or keep it the same?
20:12 El SolarBeam: i mean between sb8 and sb9
20:12 [ Yuki ]: yes
20:12 [ Yuki ]: and 01:10:150 - 
20:13 [ Yuki ]: and 01:41:128 - 
20:13 [ Yuki ]: 02:26:780 - 
20:13 El SolarBeam: whoa, i forgot those XD
20:14 [ Yuki ]: ww
20:14 [ Yuki ]: 03:53:628 - 
20:14 [ Yuki ]: so good SB!!
20:15 El SolarBeam: ^ i think that last won't be really appealing because of the white flash /o/
20:15 El SolarBeam: and thanks, i like your SB too >.<
20:15 El SolarBeam: especially in map inertia~
20:15 [ Yuki ]: thanks~:D
20:17 El SolarBeam: you could post the chatlog if you want a kudosu, well it's up to you :3
20:18 [ Yuki ]: oh~lol
20:20 El SolarBeam: anyway, thanks a lot yuki \:D/

so good~SB and map~lol

Star~

thanks a lot for the mod yuki >.</

that storyboard oggghhhh >.<
Gila! Star :3

Let's go modding! M4M asked from me :3 denoiso angry fark






Just that ._.
Good luck~~

Groumiezi wrote:

Let's go modding! M4M asked from me :3 denoiso angry fark (hell yeah \8D/)

[General]

?

All of this must be fixed!

(have noticed recently and fixed)

[Easy]

• 00:24:932 (5) - NC (fixed already)
  wat

[Normal]

• 00:03:193 (4) - Whistle in head? (nope, it's better on the tail)
  00:07:541 (6) - NC (fixed)
  00:31:889 (8) - ^ (put it on 9, fixed)
  00:35:802 (15) - ^ (fixed)
  00:36:671 (17,18) - i look there, blanket is fail, fix the stack. (it doesn't meant to be blanketed, but mirrored)
  00:38:411 (19) - stack fail, fix the stack (fixed)
  00:39:280 (20) - NC (doesn't necessary here)
  00:52:758 (7) - Blanket fix and ^ (fixed)
  00:53:628 (8) - stack fix (doesn't really need to stack if the time gap is quite far)
  00:56:237 (3) - NO Distance snap i look at here. fix it. (nope, i place it so that it has 1.3x spacing in chorus)
  00:58:845 (2) - Bad overlap? (it's just applied in easy diff, but not in normal lol)
  02:49:280 (2) - try to stacking with 02:51:019 (1) (fixed)

[Hard]

• 01:18:845 (4) - Stack with 01:17:976 (2) head slider?
  no more >.<

[Insane]

• 00:42:324 (1) - v (fixed)
  00:42:758 (2) - setek eh stack i mean (fixed, lol)
  00:57:324 (4) - remove clap, then add clap at 00:57:324 (4) (nope, because you could already hear a bass sounds here)
  00:58:846 (1) - fix the stack (fixed)

Just that ._.
Good luck~~

thanks for mod~
I'm sure you'll be a good modder someday

(and thanks all for the rain of stars XD)

Hai
Just a little thing that you need to delete
"Taiko" on Nardo's Taiko Oni
and
on Taiko Muzukashii

ok, will do.

thanks, updated~

this map must be ranked! xdxdxd

Jekate wrote:

this map must be ranked! xdxdxd

oh you ww, go for it /o/

-Man wrote:

[Easy]

• 01:10:150 (6) - Ubah Combo Baru (forgot that one, fixed)
  01:10:584 (1) - Matikan Combo Baru (fixed already)
  01:19:715 - 01:19:932 - Tambahkan slidder (will reconsider if other modders mention this later)
  02:36:237 - 02:36:454 - ^ (will reconsider if other modders mention this later)

thanks, simple and easy to understand~

goodluck~
stars /o/

whoa ada mas THS o/

thanks again for the rain of stars \o/

The BPM and offset is are slightly early while test playing, around (15~17 ms early)
By ear however, the current offset is sounds spot on with the metronome.
Maybe it's just the music itself
Good luck with your map!
No kudosu please!

oh, it's okay as long as the BPM and offset still sounds fit~
actually I feel the intro time is just too short, but well, let's see if I could edit the mp3
anyway, thanks a lot BeatofIke!

Hello :3
From my queue :3

1st of all, have a . I really love the SB, and i checked E N H, well nicely done (rank please) compare on your insane , so ill just gonna focus modding insane

• [Insane]

1. 00:15:151 (2,3,4) - some sliders are really curved too much, it doesnt look good to me
   
   SPOILER

   BeforeAfter
   you can see the difference right? yeah, it has a good blanket, better flow, very clean to see
   not only on that part, i saw many sharp curved slider in other parts, try to do the same as you did here
2. 00:00:586 (1,2,3,4) - do it something like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   better flow
3. 00:03:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong rhythm here, you missed the violin sound, do it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - make them slider instead, it fits the rhythm in the violin sound
5. 00:58:411 (7,1) - stack properly
6. 00:59:281 (3,4,5,3) - stack?
7. 01:34:280 (5,1) - make this triples instead
8. 02:05:584 (1) - it was perfectly stack with 02:04:716 (4) - , move this at least 1grid, dont stack slider specially by itself
9. 02:12:107 (2,2) - stack properly
10. 02:18:411 (3,4) - lol, this is way too far, just replace the 1/4 with a circle
11. 03:50:802 (4) - ctrl+g
12. 03:59:933 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
    
    SPOILER

    

• 
  Overmapped Issue

1. 00:23:846 (1,2,3) - i cant see any reason to put triples here, no rhythm that follows the triple, just remove the note on the blue tick or just replace it with a slider, no need to overmap to make it insane
2. 00:45:584 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:48:194 (3,4,5) -
4. 00:48:629 (6,7,8) -
5. 01:12:324 (2,3,4) -
6. 01:13:193 (2,3,4) -
7. 02:07:325 (1,2,3) -
8. 02:07:758 (4,5,6) -
9. 02:28:846 (7,8,9) -
10. 02:32:759 (3,4,5) -
11. 02:35:368 (6,7,8) -
12. 03:55:150 (5,6,7) -
    

Ill recheck the map after you applied the mod
Call me in-game for IRC mod recheck (need to explain things) want to rank this badly

-Asagi wrote:

Hello :3
From my queue :3

1st of all, have a . I really love the SB, and i checked E N H, well nicely done (rank please) compare on your insane , so ill just gonna focus modding insane

• [Insane]

1. 00:15:151 (2,3,4) - some sliders are really curved too much, it doesnt look good to me (I see, thanks fixed)
   
   SPOILER

   BeforeAfter
   you can see the difference right? yeah, it has a good blanket, better flow, very clean to see
   not only on that part, i saw many sharp curved slider in other parts, try to do the same as you did here
2. 00:00:586 (1,2,3,4) - do it something like this (sure, it has better flow)
   
   SPOILER

   
   better flow
3. 00:03:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wrong rhythm here, you missed the violin sound, do it like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:07:542 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - make them slider instead, it fits the rhythm in the violin sound (well I'm following the combination between piano and the violin for that part, so doesn't matter)
5. 00:58:411 (7,1) - stack properly (fixed)
6. 00:59:281 (3,4,5,3) - stack? (I think this one doesn't really necessary)
7. 01:34:280 (5,1) - make this triples instead (I like that crossover)
8. 02:05:584 (1) - it was perfectly stack with 02:04:716 (4) - , move this at least 1grid, dont stack slider specially by itself (fixed)
9. 02:12:107 (2,2) - stack properly (fixed)
10. 02:18:411 (3,4) - lol, this is way too far, just replace the 1/4 with a circle (sure, fixed)
11. 03:50:802 (4) - ctrl+g (nice flow, fixed)
12. 03:59:933 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - (good idea, fixed)
    
    SPOILER

    

• 
  Overmapped Issue

1. 00:23:846 (1,2,3) - i cant see any reason to put triples here, no rhythm that follows the triple, just remove the note on the blue tick or just replace it with a slider, no need to overmap to make it insane (it's fine for this one since the sound still fit)
2. 00:45:584 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:48:194 (3,4,5) -
4. 00:48:629 (6,7,8) -
5. 01:12:324 (2,3,4) -
6. 01:13:193 (2,3,4) -
7. 02:07:325 (1,2,3) -
8. 02:07:758 (4,5,6) -
9. 02:28:846 (7,8,9) - (still sounds fit to me)
10. 02:32:759 (3,4,5) -
11. 02:35:368 (6,7,8) - (still sounds fit to me)
12. 03:55:150 (5,6,7) - (this one as well)
    

(the rest are fixed~)

Ill recheck the map after you applied the mod
Call me in-game for IRC mod recheck (need to explain things) want to rank this badly

sure, I'll poke you later if I see you online owo/
and thanks for the star!

From my queue~

[General]

1. ac.png: 中恵光城　

[Easy]

1. 01:12:758 (6) - NC
2. 01:55:802 (2) - move to x:182 y:136 (stack correctly)
3. 02:16:237 (1,3) - it is better to make symmeric pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:49:715 (3,5) - too close
5. 03:37:976 (3) - I prefer to end at 03:38:193

[Normal]

1. For normal-diff, it is better to conform DS as much as possible
2. 00:39:280 (6) - NC
3. 00:43:628 (2,3) - it is better not to blanket
4. 00:45:367 (4) - NC
5. 00:49:063 (1) - the following is better
   
6. 01:12:758 (5) - NC
7. 02:29:280 (5) - ^
8. 02:51:019 (1,3) - stack correctly
9. 02:52:758 (3) - the whistle of slider body is on purpose?
10. 02:56:671 (3) - move to x:310 y:206 (stack correctly)
11. 03:34:932 (7,8) - I prefer this
    

[Insane]

1. 00:31:671 (4) - move to x:148 y:207 (stack correctly)
2. 00:36:890 (6,7,8) - how about symmetric rotation?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   172,140,36889,2,0,P|153:76|171:11,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,140,37324,2,0,P|126:187|60:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,140,37759,2,0,P|236:156|284:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:40:150 (6) - I prefer not to reverse, but normal slider: 00:40:150~00:40:367
4. 00:58:845 (1) - move to x:197 y:220 (stack correctly)
5. 02:07:325 (1,2,3,4) - increase DS. That's difficult to keep rhythm
6. 02:24:715 (6) - I prefer Ctrl+G
7. 02:30:803 (4) - it is better to be convex downward
8. 03:11:020 (3,2) - stack ?
9. 03:37:541 (3,4) - exchange each position
10. 03:39:607 (4,5) - conform DS to previous notes
11. 03:49:715 (2,4) - stack correctly
12. 04:00:369 (3) - Object isn't snapped!
13. 04:01:671 (4) - move to x:122 y:102

[Ts8zs' Hard]

1. 00:50:367 (5) - how about curving and blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:16:454- add a note
3. 02:48:193 (2) - same as 00:50:367 (5) -
4. 03:47:541 (2,3) - I prefer to increase angle more

Great SB!!! ~☆
~Good Luck~

hi

try offset 595 (+10). that sounded and played a little more solid to me

good luck!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. ac.png: 中恵光城　

（ええと、どこで間違いましたか？）
[Easy]

1. 01:12:758 (6) - NC　（はい）
2. 01:55:802 (2) - move to x:182 y:136 (stack correctly)　（はい）
3. 02:16:237 (1,3) - it is better to make symmeric pattern　（はい）
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:49:715 (3,5) - too close　（いえいえ、タイミング間はちょっと遠いだから）
5. 03:37:976 (3) - I prefer to end at 03:38:193

　（ドラムに通じて、そのままいい）
[Normal]

1. For normal-diff, it is better to conform DS as much as possible　（私ただ１．０と１．３を使いますだから、問題ありません）
2. 00:39:280 (6) - NC　（はい）
3. 00:43:628 (2,3) - it is better not to blanket　（はい）
4. 00:45:367 (4) - NC　（はい）
5. 00:49:063 (1) - the following is better　（いい）
   
6. 01:12:758 (5) - NC　（はい）
7. 02:29:280 (5) - ^　（はい）
8. 02:51:019 (1,3) - stack correctly　（はい）
9. 02:52:758 (3) - the whistle of slider body is on purpose?　（忘れてしまいましたｗ）
10. 02:56:671 (3) - move to x:310 y:206 (stack correctly)　（はい）
11. 03:34:932 (7,8) - I prefer this　（distanceは１．５になってだけど、まいっか）
    

[Insane]

1. 00:31:671 (4) - move to x:148 y:207 (stack correctly)　（はい）
2. 00:36:890 (6,7,8) - how about symmetric rotation?　（いい）
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   172,140,36889,2,0,P|153:76|171:11,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,140,37324,2,0,P|126:187|60:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,140,37759,2,0,P|236:156|284:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:40:150 (6) - I prefer not to reverse, but normal slider: 00:40:150~00:40:367 （ドラムに通じて、そのままいい）
4. 00:58:845 (1) - move to x:197 y:220 (stack correctly)　（はい）
5. 02:07:325 (1,2,3,4) - increase DS. That's difficult to keep rhythm （でもそれは面白いだから）
6. 02:24:715 (6) - I prefer Ctrl+G　（うん、それはいい考え）
7. 02:30:803 (4) - it is better to be convex downward　（けどflowは悪くなりますよ）
8. 03:11:020 (3,2) - stack ?　（いえ、そのままいい）
9. 03:37:541 (3,4) - exchange each position　（いえ、そのままいい、flowはすでにいいだから）
10. 03:39:607 (4,5) - conform DS to previous notes　（ちょっと治しました）
11. 03:49:715 (2,4) - stack correctly　（はい）
12. 04:00:369 (3) - Object isn't snapped!　（忘れてしまいましたｗ）
13. 04:01:671 (4) - move to x:122 y:102 （はい）

Great SB!!! ~☆ (ありがとうございます！）
~Good Luck~

thanks for modding~

captin1 wrote:

hi

try offset 595 (+10). that sounded and played a little more solid to me

good luck!

ok, this one sounds better, will use this offset~
thanks captin!

lanjutan~
no kudosu pls.

[Ts8zs' Hard]

1. 00:14:942 to 00:28:203 - why don't you use the soft-hitclap on this part? you did it on 01:31:681 to 01:42:768, and I think it would be good to emphasize the bass sound. try to add clap whenever you hear loud bass, like 00:16:029 (4) on both start and end, 00:19:290 (4) slider end and repeat arrow, 00:22:986 (4) same with previous. well, I know the bass is loud enough to hear so we may didn't have to emphasize that anymore, but I think it is better to emphasize it more so you can make an unforgettable feeling when player play this map xD. I'm serious. please consider this.
2. 00:37:768 (7) - whistle on repeat arrow?
3. 00:38:638 (2) - same ^
4. 00:41:247 (3) - why don't you make this as a repeat slider? sounds better and fits the rhythm very well.
5. 00:44:508 (6) - this...when I play this map, this slider really annoying. I often break combo on this slider. it just because you usually use a jump on previous slider just like 00:31:464 (3,4) . see? so I suggest you to make it further. maybe move it to (200;144) ?
6. 00:56:246 - why don't you increase the volume here? to 65% maybe? I think you should make it louder since this is kiai time, an epic part of the song. if you do, please do it on every kiai time.
7. 01:10:051 (5) - remove whistle maybe?
8. 01:16:463 - add note here? feels empty.
9. 01:31:681 to 01:42:768 - why not make it same as 00:14:942 to 00:28:203 in which has whistle to emphasize the piano?
10. 01:37:768 (6,1) - how about this?
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:47:986 (1) - uh...how about add whistle on repeat arrow?
12. 01:51:681 (5) - whistle on slider end?
13. 01:54:508 (6) - whistle on slider head?
14. 01:55:377 (2) - this too ^
15. 02:26:573 (7) - remove whitsle?
16. 02:28:855 (7) - uh...maybe change this to a slider and a note or vice versa or 1/2 repeat slider?
17. 03:39:073 (2) - I think finish is better at the slider end.
18. 03:53:638 (1) - why don't you make it like this?
    SPOILER

    

well, that's all. took me 1 hour to mod this hard diff. *no one care though. xD
[Insane]

• 00:06:029 (8,9) - whistle on this sliders are not consistent with previous slider

1. 00:06:899 (10) - no...whistle should be 00:07:551 (1)
2. 00:09:942 (6) - add whistle here to keep hitsound pattern?
3. 00:20:377 (4) - try adding whistle on slider end
4. 00:21:029 (6) - finish should be on slider end I think.
5. 00:21:681 (1) - remove clap?
6. 00:22:551 (4,5,6) - how about this pattern?
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:36:899 (6,7,8) - this pattern?
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:41:029 (2,3) - switch position?? I find this too hard to read 2 below the slider.
9. 00:42:225 - add note?
10. 01:01:247 (6,8) - uh...add finish on both slider head?
11. 01:10:051 - add a note and make a stream just like on hard?
12. 01:12:334 (2,3) - I don't think the whistle fits here. remove it?
13. 01:15:160 (6) - finish on slider head?
14. 01:16:029 (8) - this too?
15. 01:18:855 (5) - finish here?
16. 01:20:377 (4) - remove finish?
17. 01:36:029 (5,6) - I personally think this jump is too harsh. and this part is calm so I suggest to not make a jump.
18. 01:43:203 (1) - add finish on this spinner.
19. 02:03:855 (1,2) - make it same as 02:03:203 (6,7) ?
20. 02:11:464 (9) - uh....stack to 02:10:812 (8) - slider end?
21. 02:17:768 (2) - finish on slider head?
22. 02:18:638 (4) - this too?
23. 02:22:334 (1,2,1,2) - how about this? well, it's not perfect yet.
    SPOILER

    
24. 03:29:290 (6) - NC here?
25. 03:39:616 (4) - remove finish~
26. 03:39:725 (5) - finish should be here and new combo, thus remove NC here 03:40:594 (1) . and hey, you have increase the volume on this kiai time, why don't you do the same to the previous 2 kiai time?
27. 03:53:203 (3,1) - finish? on slider head too?

uh...that's it. the rhythm is fine on this map I suppose. please review your hitsound, especially your usage of whistle and finish.

[]
yosh~ finally done.
epic SB, good map.

sorry, I can't mod taiko.

I hope my mod can help you. good luck for rank!
also, here..take my star for your great effort in SB.

raheta_adi wrote:

lanjutan~
no kudosu pls.

[Insane]

• 00:06:029 (8,9) - whistle on this sliders are not consistent with previous slider (added whistle on the previous slider instead, fixed)

1. 00:06:899 (10) - no...whistle should be 00:07:551 (1) (fixed)
2. 00:09:942 (6) - add whistle here to keep hitsound pattern? (found a new hitsound pattern, but fixed anyway)
3. 00:20:377 (4) - try adding whistle on slider end (fixed)
4. 00:21:029 (6) - finish should be on slider end I think. (fixed)
5. 00:21:681 (1) - remove clap? (fixed)
6. 00:22:551 (4,5,6) - how about this pattern? (nope, the previous pattern gives a nice flow)
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:36:899 (6,7,8) - this pattern? (not really gives a nice flow when I try it)
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:41:029 (2,3) - switch position?? I find this too hard to read 2 below the slider. (it's just some kind of repetition, but well let's see if others mention it later)
9. 00:42:225 - add note? (doesn't really fit imo, moreover I don't want to overmap this part)
10. 01:01:247 (6,8) - uh...add finish on both slider head? (fixed)
11. 01:10:051 - add a note and make a stream just like on hard? (I just prefer it as is, but well I use this kind of pattern on the other chorus section)
12. 01:12:334 (2,3) - I don't think the whistle fits here. remove it? (fixed)
13. 01:15:160 (6) - finish on slider head? (fixed)
14. 01:16:029 (8) - this too? (fixed)
15. 01:18:855 (5) - finish here? (fixed)
16. 01:20:377 (4) - remove finish? (fixed)
17. 01:36:029 (5,6) - I personally think this jump is too harsh. and this part is calm so I suggest to not make a jump. (found a new pattern, fixed)
18. 01:43:203 (1) - add finish on this spinner. (fixed)
19. 02:03:855 (1,2) - make it same as 02:03:203 (6,7) ? (I think these already look similar enough, but well)
20. 02:11:464 (9) - uh....stack to 02:10:812 (8) - slider end? (I like this one, so won't change orz)
21. 02:17:768 (2) - finish on slider head? (it will sounds noisy though)
22. 02:18:638 (4) - this too? (this as well)
23. 02:22:334 (1,2,1,2) - how about this? well, it's not perfect yet. (well, I think it would be hard to make a circle flow if the spacing is that far)
    SPOILER

    
24. 03:29:290 (6) - NC here? (sure)
25. 03:39:616 (4) - remove finish~ (move the finish to the slider's head instead, fixed)
26. 03:39:725 (5) - finish should be here and new combo, thus remove NC here 03:40:594 (1) . and hey, you have increase the volume on this kiai time, why don't you do the same to the previous 2 kiai time? (lol I forgot about that one)
27. 03:53:203 (3,1) - finish? on slider head too? (fixed)

uh...that's it. the rhythm is fine on this map I suppose. please review your hitsound, especially your usage of whistle and finish.

[]
yosh~ finally done.
epic SB, good map.

sorry, I can't mod taiko.

I hope my mod can help you. good luck for rank!
also, here..take my star for your great effort in SB.

thanks a lot!
asik dapet star lagi \:D/

F2 and see this again lol, have a little recheck, much better now.

some small suggestions on Insane:
00:01:029 (2,3,4) - you are http://puu.sh/5KicZ.jpg , but I think http://puu.sh/5KidX.jpg is better when playing. Also change 00:02:334 (2) - plz.
00:24:073 (3) - remove the finish sounds better imo
00:33:638 (1) - ctrl+g
00:34:073 (2) - ctrl+g
00:54:290 (5) - clap on the end
01:04:290 (1,2,3,4) - make 4 not in shape on purpose?
01:11:681 (5) - no need to use 1/4 slider here
01:51:464 (8) - why not clap and remove the clap on the head of 01:51:029 (7) -
02:14:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this jump really doesn't fit the song, I still recommend to change the pattern
04:02:334 (6,7) - these two should be a big jump, but you jump at 04:01:899 (5,6) - , which let me feel weird

Normal
01:45:377 (1) - Add nc manually, that's a bug.

Hard
FCKING AR 8 WITH THIS BPM?
——
something:
you should look for a pro modder on hitsounds to help you.
although the map is much better than before, it still need some improvement.
good luck and have my star

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

F2 and see this again lol, have a little recheck, much better now.

some small suggestions on Insane:
00:01:029 (2,3,4) - you are http://puu.sh/5KicZ.jpg , but I think http://puu.sh/5KidX.jpg is better when playing. Also change 00:02:334 (2) - plz. (sure)
00:24:073 (3) - remove the finish sounds better imo (fixed)
00:33:638 (1) - ctrl+g (I think the upbeat can be heard at (1) instead of (2) so probably it would be better if the jump is put at (1) instead)
00:34:073 (2) - ctrl+g (same reason)
00:54:290 (5) - clap on the end (fixed)
01:04:290 (1,2,3,4) - make 4 not in shape on purpose? (fixed a bit)
01:11:681 (5) - no need to use 1/4 slider here (I like that one though, but well, will reconsider later)
01:51:464 (8) - why not clap and remove the clap on the head of 01:51:029 (7) - (added clap on (8), but I don't see any reason to remove clap on (7) since I can still heard a bass sound there)
02:14:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this jump really doesn't fit the song, I still recommend to change the pattern (lol seems you still bothered with that one, I'll surely change that pattern if others mention that so be patient)
04:02:334 (6,7) - these two should be a big jump, but you jump at 04:01:899 (5,6) - , which let me feel weird (now that you mention it, seems like a flow destroyer somehow. well, I hope I can find more fitting pattern, otherwise I'll leave it as is)

Normal
01:45:377 (1) - Add nc manually, that's a bug. (lol I've just realized, fixed)

Hard
FCKING AR 8 WITH THIS BPM? (um.. well, will tell him later)
——
something:
you should look for a pro modder on hitsounds to help you. (sure, I hope I can find it soon)
although the map is much better than before, it still need some improvement.
good luck and have my star

thanks for the star ><
and whoa, I'm impressed that you've checked my map 3 times, thanks a lot!

yo! tadi sih niatnya inggris (akhirnya aku ganti semua jadi indo karena takut kurang jelas kalo disampaikan)
maaf kalo nulis panjang bener gini dan semoga ga males bacanya lol
overall ini SBnya bagus, niat bener itu fireflynya lol

[SB Load]
aku pentelengin dari depan sampe belakang ga mencapai 5, view design agak ngebug (show lebih dari 5 padahal aslinya kalo di play ga segitu)

[Images File]

1. effect/firefly.png perlu di crop, pinggirannya banyak transparent yang gak kepake
2. effect/Mask-sys.png karena kamu nga nge-check "Widescreen Support", ini file sebenernya gak kepake, buang ini buat ngurangi beberapa SB load, delete filenya dari folder dan dari code osb
3. SB/20.jpg sebaiknya di resize ke 800x450, karena resol 850 itu unrankable.. lalu tambahin value scaling(S) di codenya (dikali 1.0625 dari scaling currentmu, ini udah aku hitung rasio perubahan resolusi dan jangan lupa restart osu client, karena kalo ganti resolution image kadang masih nge-catche size yang lama)
   contoh SB/20.jpg >> S,0,104932,,1.107355 ganti ke >> S,0,104932,,1.1765646875
4. SB/sb2.jpg ^
5. SB/sb3.jpg ^
6. SB/sb4.jpg ^
7. SB/sb6.jpg ^
8. SB/sb7.jpg ^
9. SB/sb8.jpg ^
10. SB/sb13.jpg ^
11. SB/sb17.jpg ^
12. SB/sb18.jpg ^
13. SB/sb21.jpg ^
14. SB/sb22.jpg ^
15. SB/sb24.jpg ^
16. SB/sb25.jpg ^
17. SB/sb26.jpg ^
18. SB/sb27.jpg ^
19. SB/sb32a.jpg ^
20. SB/sb32b.jpg ^
21. SB/sb33.png ^
22. SB/sb34.jpg ^
23. SB/sb35.jpg ^
24. SB/sb36.jpg ^
25. SB/sb37.jpg ^
26. sb16.jpg ^

[.osb Code]
kalo size of osb is not to your concern, bisa ignore mod yang ini
tips: lebih simple tanpa harus rubah code, main keyframe control lewat design (:

untuk code, kalo misal value nya tidak kerubah, contoh:

S,0,219715,233628,0.85

lebih baik garis 1 aja seperti ini:

S,0,219715,,0.85

lalu kalo Scaling valuenya 1, lebih baik ga usah dipasang karena defaultnya udah 1
pasang kalo valuenya dimodif
contoh yang perlu dibuang:

 S,0,4932,6671,1

menghemat dikit lol

aku ga yakin kenapa kamu pake Vector Scale di kedua file gambar ini:
sb32a.jpg & sb32b.jpg
Scaling lebih baik harusnya, parameternya gak sebanyak VS

terus ada beberapa line code yang nyampah, contoh:

F,0,130584,,0.3328221,0
F,0,130584,131019,0,1

M,0,146671,,351,240
M,0,146671,155584,351,240,426,240

itu baris yang pertama dibuang karena gak kena effect, ke overwrite sama baris kedua
hindari penggunaan garis full di ujung, contoh:


yang ini lebih dianjurkan:

mengapa? nanti saat mau ngerubah value di point tertentu, kadang mereka gak mau ngikut karena stuck,
jadi sebaiknya selalu clean half di tiap ujungnya

ini aku lihat juga nga kepake, perubahannya gak kelihatan karena letak dia di akhir gambar tersebut:

V,0,130802,,0.8596129,1.016516

default value, delete them:

V,0,x,,1,1

yang ini karena "Sprite,Background,Centre,"xxx.jpg",320,240" << letaknya udah di 320 240

M,0,x,x,320,240

adalah default, jadi ini ga diperlukan

waste lines:

F,0,10476,11001,1,0.03314918
F,0,11001,11019,0.03314918,0

rubah jadi ini lebih efisien:

F,0,10476,11019,1,0

lol keulang, delete them

 S,0,257976,,0.7935486
 S,0,257976,,0.7935486
 S,0,257976,,0.7935486

yang ini similar component, how about merging them? posisinya sama, dan karena Fade gak nampak, jadi bisa di merge

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83954,84063,0,1
 S,0,83954,84171,0.744
 F,0,84063,84171,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,84389,84498,0,1
 F,0,84498,84606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,84498,84607,0,1
 S,0,84498,84715,0.7109677
 F,0,84607,84715,1,0

menjadi

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83954,84063,0,1
 S,0,83954,,0.744
 F,0,84063,84171,1,0
 F,0,84389,84498,0,1
 F,0,84498,84606,1,0
 F,0,84498,84607,0,1
 F,0,84607,84715,1,0

terus ini

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83411,83519,0,1
 M,0,83411,83845,220,165
 S,0,83411,83845,0.5623226
 F,0,83519,83737,1
 F,0,83737,83845,1,0

menjadi

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",220,165
 F,0,83411,83519,0,1
 S,0,83411,,0.5623226
 F,0,83519,83737,1
 F,0,83737,83845,1,0

after flash 02:26:681 - glow pertamanya gak di fade out? dan glow keduanya gak di fade in? agak aneh disini

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\glow.png",320,240
 F,0,132758,133193,0,1
 S,0,132758,146237,1.619354
 M,0,132758,146671,41,240,520,240
 F,0,133193,146237,1
 F,0,146237,146671,1,0
 S,0,146237,146671,1.619354
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\glow.png",320,240
 M,0,146671,155367,54,240,532,240
 S,0,146671,155367,1.611097
 F,0,146681,147116,0,1
 F,0,147116,154932,1
 F,0,154932,155367,1,0

ha2.png sengaja digemukkan? or nga sengaja? kalo ga sengaja, V scalenya di delete

banyak yang similar, delete linenya / dari keyframe saja. end resultnya what I did was decreasing 3.1 kb lol
this is the download link, silahkan compare and contrast dan mungkin bisa lebih kecil lagi, sapa tau ada miss (ini aku belum rubah scalingnya, karena image filenya aku ga resize)
SBku yang lama2 gak hemat size karena dulu cuma asal pasang aja - yang belakangan ini aja mulai mengurangi size .osb lol

good luck for ranked! kalo ada yang nga ngerti PM in-game aja

Setsurei wrote:

yo! tadi sih niatnya inggris (akhirnya aku ganti semua jadi indo karena takut kurang jelas kalo disampaikan)
maaf kalo nulis panjang bener gini dan semoga ga males bacanya lol (quality post selalu saya baca nyampe habis ko \:D/)
overall ini SBnya bagus, niat bener itu fireflynya lol (thanks~)

[SB Load]
aku pentelengin dari depan sampe belakang ga mencapai 5, view design agak ngebug (show lebih dari 5 padahal aslinya kalo di play ga segitu) (saya juga kurang ngerti kenapa bisa gitu orz)

[Images File]

1. effect/firefly.png perlu di crop, pinggirannya banyak transparent yang gak kepake (hm.. mungkin maksudnya ditrim, ok fixed)
2. effect/Mask-sys.png karena kamu nga nge-check "Widescreen Support", ini file sebenernya gak kepake, buang ini buat ngurangi beberapa SB load, delete filenya dari folder dan dari code osb (ini maksudnya sebenernya sih biar bisa ngecek SB tanpa harus ganti tab dari design ke compose, anyway saya pikir" dulu )
3. SB/20.jpg sebaiknya di resize ke 800x450, karena resol 850 itu unrankable.. lalu tambahin value scaling(S) di codenya (dikali 1.0625 dari scaling currentmu, ini udah aku hitung rasio perubahan resolusi dan jangan lupa restart osu client, karena kalo ganti resolution image kadang masih nge-catche size yang lama) (sebenernya sih banyak contoh SB map yg resolusinya lebih dari itu tapi tetep dirank, contohnya https://osu.ppy.sh/s/53785, tapi karena udah cape" dibantuin ngitung, well I'll take it as notification kalo misalnya nanti disuruh ganti sama BAT :3)
   contoh SB/20.jpg >> S,0,104932,,1.107355 ganti ke >> S,0,104932,,1.1765646875
4. SB/sb2.jpg ^
5. SB/sb3.jpg ^
6. SB/sb4.jpg ^
7. SB/sb6.jpg ^
8. SB/sb7.jpg ^
9. SB/sb8.jpg ^
10. SB/sb13.jpg ^
11. SB/sb17.jpg ^
12. SB/sb18.jpg ^
13. SB/sb21.jpg ^
14. SB/sb22.jpg ^
15. SB/sb24.jpg ^
16. SB/sb25.jpg ^
17. SB/sb26.jpg ^
18. SB/sb27.jpg ^
19. SB/sb32a.jpg ^
20. SB/sb32b.jpg ^
21. SB/sb33.png ^
22. SB/sb34.jpg ^
23. SB/sb35.jpg ^
24. SB/sb36.jpg ^
25. SB/sb37.jpg ^
26. sb16.jpg ^

[.osb Code]
kalo size of osb is not to your concern, bisa ignore mod yang ini
tips: lebih simple tanpa harus rubah code, main keyframe control lewat design (:

untuk code, kalo misal value nya tidak kerubah, contoh:

S,0,219715,233628,0.85

lebih baik garis 1 aja seperti ini:

S,0,219715,,0.85

(hm.. sebenernya sih ini gara" imagenya kadang" ngebug, terus tiba" keyframe ga berfungsi di detik selanjutnya, jadi buat sementara saya biarin kaya gitu dulu)

lalu kalo Scaling valuenya 1, lebih baik ga usah dipasang karena defaultnya udah 1
pasang kalo valuenya dimodif
contoh yang perlu dibuang:

 S,0,4932,6671,1

menghemat dikit lol (ok fixed)

aku ga yakin kenapa kamu pake Vector Scale di kedua file gambar ini:
sb32a.jpg & sb32b.jpg
Scaling lebih baik harusnya, parameternya gak sebanyak VS (soalnya gambar originalnya keliatan wide, jadi saya pake VS buat menghasilkan image dengan square-resolution love shape)

terus ada beberapa line code yang nyampah, contoh:

F,0,130584,,0.3328221,0
F,0,130584,131019,0,1

M,0,146671,,351,240
M,0,146671,155584,351,240,426,240

itu baris yang pertama dibuang karena gak kena effect, ke overwrite sama baris kedua
hindari penggunaan garis full di ujung, contoh:


yang ini lebih dianjurkan:

mengapa? nanti saat mau ngerubah value di point tertentu, kadang mereka gak mau ngikut karena stuck,
jadi sebaiknya selalu clean half di tiap ujungnya (ok fixed)
ini aku lihat juga nga kepake, perubahannya gak kelihatan karena letak dia di akhir gambar tersebut:

V,0,130802,,0.8596129,1.016516

(fixed)

default value, delete them:

V,0,x,,1,1

yang ini karena "Sprite,Background,Centre,"xxx.jpg",320,240" << letaknya udah di 320 240

M,0,x,x,320,240

adalah default, jadi ini ga diperlukan (hm.. yg itu sih udah secara default ada disitu, mungkin ga terlalu wajib buat dibuang)

waste lines:

F,0,10476,11001,1,0.03314918
F,0,11001,11019,0.03314918,0

rubah jadi ini lebih efisien:

F,0,10476,11019,1,0

(fixed)

lol keulang, delete them

 S,0,257976,,0.7935486
 S,0,257976,,0.7935486
 S,0,257976,,0.7935486

(fixed)

yang ini similar component, how about merging them? posisinya sama, dan karena Fade gak nampak, jadi bisa di merge (oke)

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83954,84063,0,1
 S,0,83954,84171,0.744
 F,0,84063,84171,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,84389,84498,0,1
 F,0,84498,84606,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,84498,84607,0,1
 S,0,84498,84715,0.7109677
 F,0,84607,84715,1,0

menjadi

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83954,84063,0,1
 S,0,83954,,0.744
 F,0,84063,84171,1,0
 F,0,84389,84498,0,1
 F,0,84498,84606,1,0
 F,0,84498,84607,0,1
 F,0,84607,84715,1,0

terus ini

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",320,240
 F,0,83411,83519,0,1
 M,0,83411,83845,220,165
 S,0,83411,83845,0.5623226
 F,0,83519,83737,1
 F,0,83737,83845,1,0

menjadi

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\flash.png",220,165
 F,0,83411,83519,0,1
 S,0,83411,,0.5623226
 F,0,83519,83737,1
 F,0,83737,83845,1,0

after flash 02:26:681 - glow pertamanya gak di fade out? dan glow keduanya gak di fade in? agak aneh disini (ceritanya sih biar 2 efek glow itu keliatan saling bersambung orz)

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\glow.png",320,240
 F,0,132758,133193,0,1
 S,0,132758,146237,1.619354
 M,0,132758,146671,41,240,520,240
 F,0,133193,146237,1
 F,0,146237,146671,1,0
 S,0,146237,146671,1.619354
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"effect\glow.png",320,240
 M,0,146671,155367,54,240,532,240
 S,0,146671,155367,1.611097
 F,0,146681,147116,0,1
 F,0,147116,154932,1
 F,0,154932,155367,1,0

ha2.png sengaja digemukkan? or nga sengaja? kalo ga sengaja, V scalenya di delete (fixed)

banyak yang similar, delete linenya / dari keyframe saja. end resultnya what I did was decreasing 3.1 kb lol
this is the download link, silahkan compare and contrast dan mungkin bisa lebih kecil lagi, sapa tau ada miss (ini aku belum rubah scalingnya, karena image filenya aku ga resize)
SBku yang lama2 gak hemat size karena dulu cuma asal pasang aja - yang belakangan ini aja mulai mengurangi size .osb lol

good luck for ranked! kalo ada yang nga ngerti PM in-game aja

ok makasih banyak buat SB checknya owo/
dan maaf lupa pake bold requestnya XD

General
decent SB

Easy
Your hitsounds are inconsistent and I don't want to nazi so I hope you will improve for your maps in future.

Normal
AR4 here because AR5 is way too fast.
00:35:377 (7) - two timing points at the same point here which is unrankable.

Hard
AR7 is enough for this map and since the Insane is using AR8 either.

Insane
Everything I point out in this diff must be fixed. I don't force you if you don't want to fix but you need to provide a good reason behind it.
00:05:377 (6) - This kind of slider jump as such spacing is unacceptable. I recommend you fix this way.
00:23:855 (1,2,3) - This is too close to the previous so it isn't good to play when you didn't have spacing in this way before this point.
I suggest you move these notes to somewhere else like this
01:34:290 (5) - same as above, just make things simple
02:07:334 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump is confusing because you have similar pattern like this on the way before it reaches here.
02:36:681 (3,4) - fix it please
03:11:464 (1,2) - ^
03:32:551 (10,1) - ^
03:35:812 (3,4) - ^
just do something like 03:53:203 (3,4,5) -
I believe they can be fun without those tricky patterns (slider jump)

feel free to call me back once your every point in Insane is addressed.

Seems late for a mod.. Sorry..
Have my ticket for another free mod..
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 2 stars for the map and especially for the Storyboard.

Frostmourne wrote:

General
decent SB

Easy
Your hitsounds are inconsistent and I don't want to nazi so I hope you will improve for your maps in future. (ok, give me some time to fix this one)

Normal
AR4 here because AR5 is way too fast.
00:35:377 (7) - two timing points at the same point here which is unrankable.
(fixed)

Hard
AR7 is enough for this map and since the Insane is using AR8 either.

Insane
Everything I point out in this diff must be fixed. I don't force you if you don't want to fix but you need to provide a good reason behind it.
00:05:377 (6) - This kind of slider jump as such spacing is unacceptable. I recommend you fix this way. (fixed)

SPOILER

00:23:855 (1,2,3) - This is too close to the previous so it isn't good to play when you didn't have spacing in this way before this point. (fixed)
I suggest you move these notes to somewhere else like this (fixed)

SPOILER

01:34:290 (5) - same as above, just make things simple (fixed in a different way)

SPOILER

02:07:334 (1,2,3,4) - This anti-jump is confusing because you have similar pattern like this on the way before it reaches here. (I think this one is fine, and the spacing is also functional to differentiate the volume around 02:09:290 (1,2,3,4,5) so I don't need to use more timing point to manipulate the volume)
02:36:681 (3,4) - fix it please (fixed)
03:11:464 (1,2) - ^ (fixed)
03:32:551 (10,1) - ^ (fixed)
03:35:812 (3,4) - ^ (I want to keep this one for variation)
just do something like 03:53:203 (3,4,5) -
I believe they can be fun without those tricky patterns (slider jump)

feel free to call me back once your every point in Insane is addressed.

need some time to solidify the easy and normal diff
sure, I'll poke you when everything is ready

Atrue wrote:

Seems late for a mod.. Sorry..
Have my ticket for another free mod..
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 2 stars for the map and especially for the Storyboard.

hi atrue owo/
I thought you rejected my map without any notification lol
anyway, thanks for star and ticket >.<

In fact I have a list in my user page and I had been modding your map for about 3 days.. A little longer than I thought.. 233.. Then yesterday I found your map modder by frost and I think maybe he want to bubble the map so I choose to skip the map, which may be better for bubbling it. Feel free to send me reqs with your ticket and don't forget to see my list on my user page if you requested a mod. Good luck!