mingmichael wrote:
black : suggestion
red : unrankable issue, you should change thisQ-H's Platter
- 00:07:458 (1) - NC
- 00:12:510 (5) - NC
- 00:13:458 (5) - move to x:64 y:192 << it to follows the same pattern like 00:12:510 (1) - . it'll have a same range
- 00:14:405 (9) - move to x:448 y:192 << same like 00:12:510 (1) -
look this if you have use my mods- 00:14:721 (1) - remove NC
- 00:15:037 (2) - NC
- 00:17:563 (11) - add NC
- 00:20:405 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - << the patterns are too boring :< hmmm let see.. how about change the place?
- 00:20:405 (1) - NC
- 00:21:668 (11) - NC
- 00:22:932 (11) - NC
- 00:25:142 (4) - NC
- 00:29:879 (12) - move to x:416 y:64 << to make a distace with (12) and (1) *from (11) to (12) isn't too long jump. so don't worry
- 00:30:195 (1) - add finisher
- 00:31:774 (6) - move to x:352 y:192 >> to not give high jump to (7)
- 00:32:721 (1) - NC
- 00:36:195 (4) - NC
- 00:36:826 (9) - NC
- 00:37:458 (14) - NC
- 00:38:089 (6) - NC
- 00:45:353 (9) - NC
- 00:45:353 (1,2,3,4) - too high jump for Platter diff D: move 00:45:353 (1) - and 00:45:984 (3) - to x:384 y:192 and move 00:45:668 (2) - to x:128 y:192.
- 00:46:616 (1) - remove NC
- 00:47:879 (7) - add NC
- 00:48:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - these streams are quite hard for Platter diff the distances are too far for it. okay see this to decrease for the distance of streams
- 00:48:826 (1) - add NC
- 00:49:458 (6) - add NC
- too monotonic pattern :/ 00:49:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - << it just in 1grid. hmmm let's see. move 00:49:537 (2) - to x:208 y:192 and move 00:49:695 (4) - x:304 y:192
- 00:52:932 (6) - NC and finsiher
- how about at 00:53:563 (3,4,5,6) - >>
- 00:55:458 (8) - NC
- 00:59:563 (12,13,14) - and 01:00:195 (15,16,17) - << change position
- 00:58:932 (7) - NC
- 00:59:563 (6) - NC
- 01:00:195 (9) - NC
- 01:03:037 (8) - NC
- 01:04:932 (1) - NC
- 01:08:089 (5) - NC
- 01:18:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - not allowed for Platter :< it'll use full dash. you should change this
- 01:23:247 (4,5,6) - all NC
All checked~
btw, it still needs 1ctb diff to be rankable Done~
Thanks for the mod mingmichael and ZHSteven~ZHSteven wrote:
Mod for CTB as requested
Flow and rhythm in these 2 diffs are well to me in general. Gladly we have a lot good CTB map here lol
Comments:
Platter:
the pattern of the whole map is great, but please make sure your connection to your patterns are valid, now there is still some jumps seems too sudden for player.
I dont know it is your style or not, just I am feeling like your flow is play 1 pattern, then stand to wait for next pattern.... maybe it is your flow but for me this is not a good kind of style.
[Platter]
- 00:01:142 (1) - if you want to make a spinner start, I guess it is better to place it here 00:00:668 - Great idea, checked~
- 00:05:879 (3,4) - I dont like this stand. ...Anyway if it is your style. But please at least make it right symmetrical as 00:07:142 (7,8) - Checked
- 00:07:458 (1) - exchange the position this note and 00:07:774 (2,3) - this 2 set will give you a better flow. Checked
- 00:09:668 (8) - center it, since you also centered 00:11:879 (3) - this note Checked
- 00:12:195 (4,1) - remove this weird Hyperdash. make it a linear pattern is well enough. Checked
- 00:16:932 (9,10) - reduce this jump just a little bit, to connect the two pattern well. Checked
- 00:28:300 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - remove hyperdash. too hard for this map. Checked
- 00:39:984 (3) - add a note then move the slider to the long white tick. you dont need to make these 2 slider perfect same, just the spacing inside is same will be good enough. Checked
- 00:43:458 (4) - center it and ctrl+G, better flow. Checked
- 00:44:721 (8) - ^ Checked
- 00:45:353 (1,2,3,4) - try this. now your current jump is too sudden.
Checked- 00:46:616 (5,6) - if you apply the change above please Ctrl+G these slider to fit the flow. Checked
- 00:52:458 - to prevent rhythm repetition, please add a note here. Checked
- 00:52:932 (1,2) - increase a little bit this jump, to make a difference with your previous jump. Checked
- 00:53:563 (3,4,5,6) - i will do a small hyper here, like this
Checked
- add note: 01:02:879 - in the middle of 7 and 1. Checked
- 01:04:616 (3) - center it and add note: 01:04:774 - to connect the 2 object. stand here is boring. Checked
- 01:06:195 (2) - also center it, and add note: 01:06:353 - . here is because the jump between 2 and 3 is too big as reference to your previous pattern. Checked
- 01:07:458 (3,4) - I will make these 2 slider a stand jump. Nice one, checked~
- 01:18:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard pattern and too sudden here imo. try something different
I'll look for this
(P/S: Sorry for my late reply, I was waiting for the Rain part.)