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ZHSteven

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ZHSteven 2013-08-16T19:08:12+00:00

Call me back when the whole set is finished. cant wait XD

Spectator

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Spectator 2013-08-19T09:05:30+00:00

New BG!

link : http://puu.sh/45s7t.jpg

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-08-19T09:24:07+00:00

got this.

Updated. Thanks for support!

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-08-20T05:57:00+00:00

Final update. Let's go.

ZHSteven

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ZHSteven 2013-08-26T01:56:53+00:00

CTB modding

I remembered you map this before, but the overdose diff seems not here now u_u

Generally this set is one of the best set i've ever seen recently. not only the extreme diff, but also the easier diff is still well made.
Dont want to say any good point this time, there is too much, can't count, and i guess that is not what you want.
So sorry this time the comment is all about something might need to improve..

CUP.
this diff gives me a feeling that is too hard with first look, but actually not. I struggled a long time and finally realized the reason is your note density is too high, especially in kiai. yes, note density not affecting the difficulty in CTB that much, but since it is easy... I still suggest get good use with pause, that will make it "looks" much more like an easy.

Salad.
same with upper diff, but i want to say could you make cs lower? ~~that will make the HRer much more happy.~~ just my opinion.
and also, why break at 03:19:710 - 03:28:832 - ??? you've mapped this part even in cup=.=

Platter(by newtoniorock8)
quite a unique platter. but I guess the flow for the whole map could improve. and 1 more point, please use 1/4 wisely. especially your slider plus 1/4 note, they are not that easy to use. and also, when you want to add "XOXXOXX" this kind of pattern, it is better use unique note instead of short slider. slider cannot shows this move well in most of the conditions.

Rain
the best rain diff in my mind could be this way. anyway, 3 points: 1. triples can improve, though they are good now. 2. the long stream part, maybe rearrange, plays well but looks not that good. 3. jump intensity. i will clarify this in mod below.

OK lets start

AIbat wrote:
missing kiai in cup: Starts on 02:56:903, ends on 03:18:657

snapping in Platter: @newtoniorock8
03:08:834 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:09:536 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:10:062 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
03:11:641 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:11:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:12:343 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
03:12:869 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:14:448 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:15:150 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:17:255 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:17:606 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:17:957 (2) - Unsnapped circle.

[CUP]
tick rate -1 or you should do something with the tick sound. it is really noisy imo.

00:35:148 (1,2) - try this

some as previous 1/2. better keep it constant in easy diffs.
00:40:762 (1,2,3) - also try this

just make some difference as previous, as this part is obviously 1/2, and shows an "end" feeling.
00:45:850 (3,4) - personal opinion is ctrl+G will better shows the flow.
00:51:990 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion
here a reverse is too much. just make it smooth.
01:05:499 (3) - vertical it.
01:06:552 (2) - 45°upwards.
01:06:552 (2,1) - continious x2.5 spacing for easy is too much imo. consider lower it a bit. (maybe about x2.0)
01:13:043 (1,2,3) - try this
a small reverse would be better show the rhythm
01:15:850 (1,2,3,4) - think twice before you put this kind of rhythm in easy...could be strange to newer
01:25:675 (3) - drug it toward the top right. make full use of the space.
01:44:622 (3,4) - lower the spacing in between. too much for a easy
01:46:026 (3,4) - ^
01:48:832 (3) - remove the reverse could be better.(and make the slider longer)
02:03:569 (1) - a reverse like 02:00:762 (1) - could be better.
02:15:148 (2) - move it more towards right.
02:18:131 (2) - left a bit. not good to overlap with 1 according to your previous pattern.
02:19:535 (2) - ^
02:39:710 (2) - make it small left jump.
1
02:42:867 (1,2) - suggestion
better performing an increasing feeling
02:52:692 (1,2,3,4) - why you dont use slider? i think it will be better.
02:58:131 (2) - right a bit

Am I too meddlesome?....sorry..

[Salad]
as I state above, cs-1 could be better imo.

00:15:148 (3) - overlap with (1)?
00:16:552 (3) - ^
00:30:938 (1,2,3) - why you not use the pattern as 00:16:903 (1,2,3) - this?
why=.=
00:36:552 (1) - make a same angle as 00:31:464 (3) -
00:37:955 (1) - ^
00:42:166 (1,2) - you totally can make the spacing larger. why not?
00:43:569 (1,2) - ^
00:45:850 (2) - and make single note instead of slider then increase spacing. will get better performance.
00:50:587 (1,2) - not a good pattern in CTB. consider move (2) left a bit.
00:52:692 (2) - remove reverse arrow. useless here.
01:11:639 (1,2) - consider change it to horizontal pattern? too much vertial here.
01:19:710 (3,4,1) - triangle this triplet?
01:25:675 (1) - again useless last reverse.. you yourself already make it silence then why keep it?
01:32:692 (1,2,1) - keep it same spacing as 01:31:289 (1,2,3) -
01:35:499 (1,1,1,2) - suggestion:
by this way you can make the pattern hyper and hyper, with the song goes.
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01:43:920 (1,2) - i will ctrl+G on these 2 notes.
01:46:727 (1,1) - make angles for these 2 slider,(make it more horizontal)and note at 01:48:306 - and 01:48:657 -
01:49:534 (1) - Really Really no need to follow the vocal. it feels strange when you use 1/4s. other sliders also, i dont want to point out all of them cause they are too much..
02:27:078 (3) - horizontal this. others fine.
02:32:692 (4) - horizontal this.
02:38:657 (1,2,3) - intend? make it smooth
02:50:938 (2) - make it jumper.
02:52:692 (1) - try this (x352,y208)(sorry too lazy for a sc, and sc cannot show properly)
03:01:815 (7) - horizontal to left.
03:05:148 (2) - overlap with 03:03:920 (1) - end.
03:05:850 (2) - ^
03:06:552 (4) - overlap with 03:06:025 (3) - start.
03:06:727 (1) - remove the last 2 reverse and try this
1
03:15:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - horizontal stream?
03:18:306 (1,2) - meaningless pattern... maybe try something other.
and last is the strange break. why there is a need to leave it blank?

[Platter]
first of all, i want to point out some of the strange 1/4 end slider. They are not suitable for your patterns, and they will make 1 of the note squeeze with the note before, which is really ugly when playing. you can shorten 1/4 length for each slider, or make a triple at each slider end.
here is all of them
00:21:815 (4) -
00:27:429 (4) -
01:06:025 (2) -
01:08:832 (2) -
02:13:393 (2) -
02:16:200 (2) -

00:12:341 (1,2) - too much. a 1/2 is enough to show. use 1/4 makes everything strange.
00:19:710 - add note
00:32:517 (1) - move it to 00:32:517 (1) - ? since you like to follow vocal.
00:34:008 (2) - ^
00:35:148 (4) - short a 1/4 length in order to follow the vocal.
00:38:131 (2) - you know =.= follow the vocal.
00:39:359 (1) - ^
00:43:745 (2) - ^
00:49:534 (2) -
ok 1st break. the above suggestion is I made just for you to follow the vocal. if you want to make it, then please make every possible note be it. otherwise dont do it at all.(actually I like you follow the vocal). i will not point out same thing on the rest part but, try to make it constant.
01:17:078 (1,2) - meaningless hyper..
02:24:446 (1,1) - ^
01:18:657 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - check the rhythm here.
02:25:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
i personally think this would be better
01:21:727 (2) - add a reverse
01:23:130 (2) - ^
02:29:095 (2) - ^
02:30:498 (2) - ^
01:31:815 (1,2) - increase this jump
01:34:622 (4,5) - decrease this jump
01:37:429 (1,2) - increase this jump(maybe hyperdash this jump)
01:43:920 (1) - go towards right instead of left
01:44:622 (2) - add note (since you got note 01:45:148 (3) - here)
02:55:675 (3,4,1) - make the jump bigger.(maybe including 02:56:201 (2,3) - )
03:26:025 (3,4) - remove hyperdash
03:30:236 (1,2,3,4) - ....better make a normal stream instead, and dont forget to add note 03:29:183 (1) -

[Rain]
the best rain I have ever played recently. great job.

00:40:762 (1,2,3,4) - little bit strange. keep it to next modder.
01:06:025 (1,2,3,4) - keep spacing constant.
01:07:078 (6) - better not to use 1/4 at this slider.
01:09:183 (3) - overlap with (1) better.
01:09:885 (6) - try extend this slider to 01:10:236 (1) - , and delete 01:10:236 (1) - . this note
01:14:096 (9,10,11) - try to reduce a bit, but keep the hyperdash
01:15:499 (4) - shorten to 01:15:675 - or extend to 01:15:850 -
01:32:867 (2) - better use note than slider, and make the spacing larger,
01:33:569 (5) - ^
01:33:569 (5,6) - remove hyperdash and keep 01:34:096 (1,2) - this hyperdash
01:36:025 (3) - horizontal this
01:36:025 (3,4,5) - remove hyperdash
01:36:727 (6,1) - create hyperdash
01:37:604 (3,4) - intend? i dont like this 1/4 end..
01:41:815 (4,5) - create hyperdash(probably make 5 vertical)
01:43:920 (1,2,3) - why not make a move here?
01:49:534 (6) - make this note at center.
02:19:183 (8,9,10,11) - horizontal these sliders.
02:42:341 (6) - you can make a horizontal triple here.
in order for player get a hint in your following patterns
02:44:973 (5) - do not use 1/4 slider ends... and create jumps here? 02:44:973 (5,6) -
02:53:394 (5,6,7) - make movements
03:10:411 (4,5,6) - starts here the triples better use triangles. because this is the last part of the song, make a different!!!(triangles means 03:08:306 (2) - this kind of pattern)
03:18:569 (4,5) - create jump here.
03:29:183 (1,2,3,4) - make the jump more and more hyper.

wow it seems i got a looooooooot of things here......
i have a hobbit that i want to talk much more if i like map very much... sorry
wonderful set. can tell much. another star here.

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-08-28T01:51:03+00:00

Thanks steven!

That mod was really, really helpful for me.

Tons of parts Fixed.

Sey

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Sey 2013-08-30T09:44:12+00:00

Working on my mod right now, sorry for the huge delay.
I will edit this post later, so you can check it out. nvm.

The difficulty spread is pretty low between the Cup and Salad. Try to focus especially now on making the difference bigger.
Please give me a detailed reply of what you changed!

A few things about hitsounding:

00:30:938 (1) - Finish hitsound could fit here.
01:04:622 (1) - Finish hitsound could fit here.
03:29:183 (1) - Finish hitsound for the spinner could fit here (check out in which difficulties you had a spinner at this part).

[Cup]

00:15:499 (1) - , 00:33:745 (1) - , 00:36:552 (1) - , and so on (please check it out, there are a lot more in this difficulty). Why were you using straight sliders like this so often? You use almost always 100% vertical or 100% horicontal sliders. You know that you can also rotate them by for example 45° or whatever. Those sliders are not really creative and look like a copy&paste. Here JUST A FEW suggestions how sliders in CtB difficulties can look much more interesting, also some interesting shapes are possible to create with a lower grid size (look for this throughout the whole difficulty, please): http://puu.sh/4cWcZ.jpg, http://puu.sh/4cWeB.jpg, http://puu.sh/4cWki.jpg. And of course not all should be straight, you can change their positions as for example here: http://puu.sh/4cWl0.jpg.
00:35:148 (3) - I listened to the rhythm here and find it better if you delete (4) and give this slider a reverse arrow instead.
00:41:815 (2) - 2 grids more right to center it between the sliders.(x=288)
01:35:499 (2,3,1,2) - Very boring to play. What can be done here? CTRL+G of 01:36:201 (3) - and 01:37:604 (2) - could be working here to make this more challenging, especially cos it's in the Kiai.
01:43:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much copy & paste here. It has to be more interesting and challenging. My advice. Make the distance of (3) and (4) a bit higher than the distance of (1) and (2).
03:07:078 (2,3,1,1) - Everything too squeezed and unreadable because of too many triplets in one slider. Have you already thought of Slider Tick Rate 1? It is your decision but I personally find it better.
03:16:552 (1) - Why a spinner here? On which sound did you orientate? Doesn't that look better if it's mapped with notes?
03:27:780 (1) - For the ending of this song pretty boring. You can also make 4 single notes and raise their distance a bit from note to note but keep in mind that no dash should appear here.

[Salad]

00:47:780 (1,2) - and 00:49:183 (1,2) - Personally find this part much cleaner if each slider has the same grade because you used it everywhere else as well.
01:13:043 (1) - Why a spinner here? I would map this part with notes, it is just not making any sense. Vocals are still going here and you can map perfectly on them.
01:25:675 (1,2) - That is an unrankable issue! You are not allowed to put ANY HDashes in a Salad! (Dashes can appear but rules say no HDashes!)
01:15:850 (1) - , 01:17:253 (1) - , 01:21:464 (1) - , 01:22:867 (1) - Using for times exactly the same pattern is extremely boring, especially I already saw better patterns (It should be not so wide). What can be done here? A stream for example, but an easy one since this is still a Salad.
01:32:692 (1) - , 01:34:096 (1) - Everything too squeezed together, make more notes out of this and use less reverse arrows, also increase distance to make this section more readable.
01:35:499 (1) - , 01:36:201 (2) - , 01:36:903 (1) - , 01:38:306 (1) - , 01:39:008 (3) -, 01:39:710 (1) - , 01:40:411 (3) - , 01:41:113 (1) - , 01:41:815 (3) - , 01:42:517 (1) - , 01:43:219 (3) - , 01:49:534 (1) - , 01:50:060 (2) - All of these sliders have exactly the same grade. There's simply no variation. First of all: Use different grades which means rotate them differently, your whole Kiai (also counts for the part after this Kiai) is a simple Copy & Paste, secondly: check out some other Salads to get inspirations of how they are done, please...
03:15:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distances might be a bit too high here for a Cup, this is already a very tricky and jumpy part.
03:19:710 - Why is this not mapped from here anymore? Highly suggest you to add notes here as in the other difficulties.

[newtoniorock8's Platter]

Hi newtonio... again
The Platter is quite okay though it REALLY could be less dashy.
00:19:359 (1,2,3,4) - I would not include something like this just at the beginning of the song. Try this out: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956633
00:20:236 (2,3) - HDash here, according to rhythm it would have to appear here as well: 00:21:639 (3,4) - I suggest you the HDash and keep the distance constant between those sections.
00:47:779 (2,1,2) - Very weird to play, how about a simple slider with reverse arrow? Makes more sense.
01:17:078 (1,2) - Too rush movement, move (1) more to the right, so there's an easier connection between the streams.
01:30:411 (4) - I'd center that between (3) and (5), jump is too unexpected. x: 244 would work well here.
02:24:446 (1,1) - Same as above, HDash has a too rush movement. Uhm anyway: Did you just copy&paste the streams from before? How about if you think of something else here? Stream is fine but maybe differently than the ones before?
02:44:972 (3,4,1) - The movement you have to do here is crazy for a Platter. A Dash fits with the rhythm but not through the whole screen. Move (4) more to the right, please. (I also expected a HDash from 3 to 4 and not from 4 to 1, listen to the rhythm)
03:26:025 (3,4) - Pretty calm part at the ending compared to the rest of the song and I cannot feel a special moment here that suits with a HDash, would you mind making this part more simple?
03:30:236 (1,2,3,4) - looks strange when I play it. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956661 (looks very weird in editor but plays nice)

[Rain]

The Rain is really nice. That's how a good Rain should be like, so I only make a few suggestions because I cannot mod anything special here.
00:40:675 (7,1,2,3,4) - What is that? o.o You could make 1 and 2 / 3 and 4 symmetrical to each other to give this part a better flow. I hope you change that part somehow at least but I have not a good idea right now.
01:37:604 (3,4) - I personally don't like HDashes that lead into the wall of the screen. I would reduce it and give slider (4) a little triangular scape to slow down the Ryuuta a bit. I mean this: http://puu.sh/4eDgS.jpg
02:28:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too difficult, also counts for the first Kiai since you copy & pasted it here again. However, it is your decision.
Sorry, I won't touch this difficulty because I would destroy your mapping style with that. I normally would deal differently with a Rain than you but that's up to the mapper. I can at least say that this is a pretty solid Rain.

Good luck~

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-09-02T07:41:04+00:00

Sey wrote:
Working on my mod right now, sorry for the huge delay.
I will edit this post later, so you can check it out. nvm.

The difficulty spread is pretty low between the Cup and Salad. Try to focus especially now on making the difference bigger.
Please give me a detailed reply of what you changed!

A few things about hitsounding:
00:30:938 (1) - Finish hitsound could fit here.
01:04:622 (1) - Finish hitsound could fit here.
03:29:183 (1) - Finish hitsound for the spinner could fit here (check out in which difficulties you had a spinner at this part).
Checked all, but not 3rd one.
[Cup]
00:15:499 (1) - , 00:33:745 (1) - , 00:36:552 (1) - , and so on (please check it out, there are a lot more in this difficulty). Why were you using straight sliders like this so often? You use almost always 100% vertical or 100% horicontal sliders. You know that you can also rotate them by for example 45° or whatever. Those sliders are not really creative and look like a copy&paste. Here JUST A FEW suggestions how sliders in CtB difficulties can look much more interesting, also some interesting shapes are possible to create with a lower grid size (look for this throughout the whole difficulty, please): http://puu.sh/4cWcZ.jpg, http://puu.sh/4cWeB.jpg, http://puu.sh/4cWki.jpg. And of course not all should be straight, you can change their positions as for example here: http://puu.sh/4cWl0.jpg. For me, these sliders suck and don't fit as my mapping style. I think(yea my mapping style is) ryuuta must follows the rhythm and moves while playing, but these sliders demand irregular movements, not rhythmical.(There're no vocal or instrumental sounds when you move while catch the droplets) Some parts will be fixed, but not every suggestions.
00:35:148 (3) - I listened to the rhythm here and find it better if you delete (4) and give this slider a reverse arrow instead. fixed
00:41:815 (2) - 2 grids more right to center it between the sliders.(x=288) changed to other way
01:35:499 (2,3,1,2) - Very boring to play. What can be done here? CTRL+G of 01:36:201 (3) - and 01:37:604 (2) - could be working here to make this more challenging, especially cos it's in the Kiai. fixed
01:43:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much copy & paste here. It has to be more interesting and challenging. My advice. Make the distance of (3) and (4) a bit higher than the distance of (1) and (2). fixed
03:07:078 (2,3,1,1) - Everything too squeezed and unreadable because of too many triplets in one slider. Have you already thought of Slider Tick Rate 1? It is your decision but I personally find it better. Ctrl+H'ed
03:16:552 (1) - Why a spinner here? On which sound did you orientate? Doesn't that look better if it's mapped with notes? not really for me.
03:27:780 (1) - For the ending of this song pretty boring. You can also make 4 single notes and raise their distance a bit from note to note but keep in mind that no dash should appear here. 2 sliders with small jumps. fixed.
[Salad]
00:47:780 (1,2) - and 00:49:183 (1,2) - Personally find this part much cleaner if each slider has the same grade because you used it everywhere else as well. fixed
01:13:043 (1) - Why a spinner here? I would map this part with notes, it is just not making any sense. Vocals are still going here and you can map perfectly on them. added
01:25:675 (1,2) - That is an unrankable issue! You are not allowed to put ANY HDashes in a Salad! (Dashes can appear but rules say no HDashes!) ofcourse
01:15:850 (1) - , 01:17:253 (1) - , 01:21:464 (1) - , 01:22:867 (1) - Using for times exactly the same pattern is extremely boring, especially I already saw better patterns (It should be not so wide). What can be done here? A stream for example, but an easy one since this is still a Salad. fixed first 2, but others are not changed.
01:32:692 (1) - , 01:34:096 (1) - Everything too squeezed together, make more notes out of this and use less reverse arrows, also increase distance to make this section more readable. no change
01:35:499 (1) - , 01:36:201 (2) - , 01:36:903 (1) - , 01:38:306 (1) - , 01:39:008 (3) -, 01:39:710 (1) - , 01:40:411 (3) - , 01:41:113 (1) - , 01:41:815 (3) - , 01:42:517 (1) - , 01:43:219 (3) - , 01:49:534 (1) - , 01:50:060 (2) - All of these sliders have exactly the same grade. There's simply no variation. First of all: Use different grades which means rotate them differently, your whole Kiai (also counts for the part after this Kiai) is a simple Copy & Paste, secondly: check out some other Salads to get inspirations of how they are done, please... 2 sliders are fixed.
03:15:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distances might be a bit too high here for a Cup, this is already a very tricky and jumpy part. Challenging part of the map, but decreased 1 grid each circles.
03:19:710 - Why is this not mapped from here anymore? Highly suggest you to add notes here as in the other difficulties. I don't like to set same options as other diffs. This one is special.
[newtoniorock8's Platter]
Hi newtonio... again
The Platter is quite okay though it REALLY could be less dashy.
00:19:359 (1,2,3,4) - I would not include something like this just at the beginning of the song. Try this out: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956633
00:20:236 (2,3) - HDash here, according to rhythm it would have to appear here as well: 00:21:639 (3,4) - I suggest you the HDash and keep the distance constant between those sections.
00:47:779 (2,1,2) - Very weird to play, how about a simple slider with reverse arrow? Makes more sense.
01:17:078 (1,2) - Too rush movement, move (1) more to the right, so there's an easier connection between the streams.
01:30:411 (4) - I'd center that between (3) and (5), jump is too unexpected. x: 244 would work well here.
02:24:446 (1,1) - Same as above, HDash has a too rush movement. Uhm anyway: Did you just copy&paste the streams from before? How about if you think of something else here? Stream is fine but maybe differently than the ones before?
02:44:972 (3,4,1) - The movement you have to do here is crazy for a Platter. A Dash fits with the rhythm but not through the whole screen. Move (4) more to the right, please. (I also expected a HDash from 3 to 4 and not from 4 to 1, listen to the rhythm)
03:26:025 (3,4) - Pretty calm part at the ending compared to the rest of the song and I cannot feel a special moment here that suits with a HDash, would you mind making this part more simple?
03:30:236 (1,2,3,4) - looks strange when I play it. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956661 (looks very weird in editor but plays nice)
[Rain]
The Rain is really nice. That's how a good Rain should be like, so I only make a few suggestions because I cannot mod anything special here.
00:40:675 (7,1,2,3,4) - What is that? o.o You could make 1 and 2 / 3 and 4 symmetrical to each other to give this part a better flow. I hope you change that part somehow at least but I have not a good idea right now. fixed
01:37:604 (3,4) - I personally don't like HDashes that lead into the wall of the screen. I would reduce it and give slider (4) a little triangular scape to slow down the Ryuuta a bit. I mean this: http://puu.sh/4eDgS.jpg moved 2nd slider to center, but keep hyperdashes.
02:28:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too difficult, also counts for the first Kiai since you copy & pasted it here again. However, it is your decision. no change
Sorry, I won't touch this difficulty because I would destroy your mapping style with that. I normally would deal differently with a Rain than you but that's up to the mapper. I can at least say that this is a pretty solid Rain.
Good luck~

Seems I suck at cup and salad mapping. Thank you so much~

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-09-02T09:42:15+00:00

ZHSteven wrote:
CTB modding

Platter(by newtoniorock8)
quite a unique platter. but I guess the flow for the whole map could improve. and 1 more point, please use 1/4 wisely. especially your slider plus 1/4 note, they are not that easy to use. and also, when you want to add "XOXXOXX" this kind of pattern, it is better use unique note instead of short slider. slider cannot shows this move well in most of the conditions.

AIbat wrote:
snapping in Platter: @newtoniorock8
03:08:834 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:09:536 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:10:062 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
03:11:641 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:11:992 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:12:343 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
03:12:869 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:14:448 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:15:150 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
03:17:255 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
03:17:606 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
03:17:957 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
[Platter]
first of all, i want to point out some of the strange 1/4 end slider. They are not suitable for your patterns, and they will make 1 of the note squeeze with the note before, which is really ugly when playing. you can shorten 1/4 length for each slider, or make a triple at each slider end.
here is all of them
00:21:815 (4) -
00:27:429 (4) -
01:06:025 (2) -
01:08:832 (2) -
02:13:393 (2) -
02:16:200 (2) -

00:12:341 (1,2) - too much. a 1/2 is enough to show. use 1/4 makes everything strange.
00:19:710 - add note
00:32:517 (1) - move it to 00:32:517 (1) - ? since you like to follow vocal.
00:34:008 (2) - ^
00:35:148 (4) - short a 1/4 length in order to follow the vocal.
00:38:131 (2) - you know =.= follow the vocal.
00:39:359 (1) - ^
00:43:745 (2) - ^
00:49:534 (2) -
ok 1st break. the above suggestion is I made just for you to follow the vocal. if you want to make it, then please make every possible note be it. otherwise dont do it at all.(actually I like you follow the vocal). i will not point out same thing on the rest part but, try to make it constant.
01:17:078 (1,2) - meaningless hyper.
02:24:446 (1,1) - ^
01:18:657 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - check the rhythm here.
02:25:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
i personally think this would be better
01:21:727 (2) - add a reverse
01:23:130 (2) - ^
02:29:095 (2) - ^
02:30:498 (2) - ^
01:31:815 (1,2) - increase this jump
01:34:622 (4,5) - decrease this jump
01:37:429 (1,2) - increase this jump(maybe hyperdash this jump)
01:43:920 (1) - go towards right instead of left
01:44:622 (2) - add note (since you got note 01:45:148 (3) - here)
02:55:675 (3,4,1) - make the jump bigger.(maybe including 02:56:201 (2,3) - )
03:26:025 (3,4) - remove hyperdash
03:30:236 (1,2,3,4) - ....better make a normal stream instead, and dont forget to add note 03:29:183 (1) -

thanks! >.<

Sey wrote:
[newtoniorock8's Platter]
Hi newtonio... again hello! o.o/
The Platter is quite okay though it REALLY could be less dashy.
00:19:359 (1,2,3,4) - I would not include something like this just at the beginning of the song. Try this out: nah.. >.< i prefer like this.. so no change https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956633
00:20:236 (2,3) - HDash here, according to rhythm it would have to appear here as well: 00:21:639 (3,4) - I suggest you the HDash and keep the distance constant between those sections.
00:47:779 (2,1,2) - Very weird to play, how about a simple slider with reverse arrow? Makes more sense.
01:17:078 (1,2) - Too rush movement, move (1) more to the right, so there's an easier connection between the streams.
01:30:411 (4) - I'd center that between (3) and (5), jump is too unexpected. x: 244 would work well here.
02:24:446 (1,1) - Same as above, HDash has a too rush movement. Uhm anyway: Did you just copy&paste the streams from before? How about if you think of something else here? Stream is fine but maybe differently than the ones before? ok >.<
02:44:972 (3,4,1) - The movement you have to do here is crazy for a Platter. A Dash fits with the rhythm but not through the whole screen. Move (4) more to the right, please. (I also expected a HDash from 3 to 4 and not from 4 to 1, listen to the rhythm)
03:26:025 (3,4) - Pretty calm part at the ending compared to the rest of the song and I cannot feel a special moment here that suits with a HDash, would you mind making this part more simple?
03:30:236 (1,2,3,4) - looks strange when I play it. How about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/956661 (looks very weird in editor but plays nice)
Good luck~

thanks! :3 ~

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uh.. i really need to improve this..

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-09-02T12:19:57+00:00

Updated.

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-09-14T11:20:03+00:00

Just one thing: wowaka made the song but Nico Nico Chorus sings to it.. so I think it's actually right to keep wowaka into Tags and Nico Nico Chorus as Artist. Otherwise you also could do "Nico Nico Chorus ft. wowaka" but the first suggestion would be better.

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-09-16T08:27:25+00:00

Checked.

I'm going to update this issue after someone's modding :3

ZHSteven

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ZHSteven 2013-10-28T16:27:41+00:00

bump. maybe finally we need someone check this.

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-10-30T07:19:59+00:00

*resurrected*

some changes on rain diff.

ok let's start to gather mods.

Seph

Seph 2013-10-30T16:31:07+00:00

hold on lol

Seph

Seph 2013-10-30T17:14:50+00:00

Cup

00:03:569 (1) - should start at previous red tick
01:06:025 (1) - this is better if moved at x400 y192
01:48:832 (3) - make this a repeat slider since a normal slider doesnt fit here
02:03:218 (2) - remove this and add a repeat on 02:02:166 (1) -
02:26:901 - unsnapped
02:27:428 - ^
02:28:480 - ^
02:53:743 - ^

i guess thats it

Salad

00:03:569 WHERE DA SPINNER HERE
01:54:094 - unsnapped
01:54:620 - ^
01:56:901 - ^
01:57:427 - ^
01:59:708 - ^

its already good atm

Rain

00:03:395 (1) - should start from the red tick
00:29:797 (2) - ctrl+g for added movement
00:36:201 (5) - would be better if it was a slider
00:39:008 (6) - ^ something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069527
I still prefer you map the break part at 00:53:737 since you can still do much in here
01:20:762 (1,2) - give this some increase in spacing? like 2 grids more but its up to you
01:44:622 (5,6,7) - i suggest you keep this pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069556
02:46:376 (5,6) - something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069559

i miss the old diff u.u

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-10-31T11:14:21+00:00

Seph wrote:
Cup

00:03:569 (1) - should start at previous red tick fixed
01:06:025 (1) - this is better if moved at x400 y192 fixed
01:48:832 (3) - make this a repeat slider since a normal slider doesnt fit here fixed
02:03:218 (2) - remove this and add a repeat on 02:02:166 (1) - ok
02:26:901 - unsnapped
02:27:428 - ^
02:28:480 - ^
02:53:743 - ^ wut
i guess thats it

Salad

00:03:569 WHERE DA SPINNER HERE uh
01:54:094 - unsnapped Clicked 'Resnap all notes' hard
01:54:620 - ^
01:56:901 - ^
01:57:427 - ^
01:59:708 - ^
its already good atm

Rain

00:03:395 (1) - should start from the red tick ah
00:29:797 (2) - ctrl+g for added movement good
00:36:201 (5) - would be better if it was a slider uh, I don't think so..
00:39:008 (6) - ^ something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069527 :(
I still prefer you map the break part at 00:53:737 since you can still do much in here Well I have no idea to map this part.
01:20:762 (1,2) - give this some increase in spacing? like 2 grids more but its up to you Steven and Sey pointed out this part.
01:44:622 (5,6,7) - i suggest you keep this pattern like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069556 seems nice. fixed.
02:46:376 (5,6) - something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1069559 I won't add 9+ grid distance jumps.. so fixed to a bit different way.
i miss the old diff u.u

Dankeyou!

Deif

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Deif 2013-11-03T16:39:48+00:00

wowaka belongs to Artist and Nico Nico Chorus to Tags, as in any other Vocaloid song. wowaka composed the song, but this version is "arranged" by "Various Nicosingers, Kagamine Rin/Len, Hatsune Miku, and Megurine Luka", which should be included in Tags. They're just the voice used of the synthetiser and not real people who can sing!

Source: Vocaloid Wiki.

Also, the other alias of wowaka, Genjitsutouhi-P (you have already the kanji name 現実逃避P) shall be included in Tags as well.

Seph

Seph 2013-11-03T16:51:06+00:00

I asked NoHitter and he said its Nico Nico Chorus - World's End Dancehall, Nico Nico Douga on source and wowaka and the other contributors on tags.

I don't see a reason to put wowaka as artist, maybe he can go to source (since he composed) and NND on source as well since the singers came from NND

Seph

Seph 2013-11-05T03:09:58+00:00

greato mappu

CLSW

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CLSW 2013-11-08T06:46:38+00:00

Updated.

Let's go again o/

SUBSTAC9

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SUBSTAC9 2013-11-16T12:31:54+00:00

Yo! CLSW and newtonio sorry for my modding very lately!
my turn with M4M

General

General seems fine

Cup
I play about Cup or Easy very rarely. I haven't idea to create new style for you to improve it but overall look pretty good thought

00:36:552 (1) - there is so confusing and far from 00:35:148 (3) move there to right side
01:10:236 (1) - there is too far again I think this diff would be smooth and easy to play you might make it to closer or re-stack it
01:46:376 (4) - make this to close ><'
02:02:166 (1) - move right side 2 step
02:03:569 (1) - Ctrl+H and move Leif Side 3 step
02:14:446 (3,1,2) - In my Opinion,there are so very far and previous style is really confuse thought, I think you need them come little close
02:22:166 (2) - stack from 02:22:517 (3)
02:22:517 (3) - stack from 02:21:815 (1)
02:22:867 (4) - stack from 02:22:166 (2)
02:54:096 (1) - need this note to closer?

Salad
Good job that's nice map and I have some suggestions which you can improve to this diff or not that's up to you.

00:52:692 (2) - Ctrl+G and make first slider to center
00:53:394 (1) - move to X:16 Y:192
01:19:183 (2) - need more spacing to challenge. move this slider to right 2 step or more
01:19:710 (3) - this is too, but move to 4 step or more than
01:24:973 (2,1) - reduce the angle to close next slider It's can run fit.
SPOILER
01:27:078 (1,2) - increase the angle out next note
01:44:973 (4) - Ctrl+H?
01:45:324 (1) - when you fixed previous mod issue you try make there to center?
02:59:008 (3) - increase angle to anti-clockwise for continuous to next notes

newtoniorock8's Platter
Good map newtonio all pattern and style not problem found in your map
and this is a some suggestion to your decision for take it.

00:42:166 (1,2) - follow by vocal music, need them to more spacing?
01:05:148 (2) - more spacing?
02:33:745 (2) - ctrl+H? and move to left a little step for clam movement
03:09:359 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - proud to present this style
SPOILER
03:14:973 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ If you want to re-style

Rain
really good difficult and I can't play this diff well. lol It's might to be Overdose?
so I just give some suggestions which I think it should be in this difficult style.

00:16:552 (3) - same previous style, make there to difference?
01:08:832 (1,2,3) - In my playing, I feel confuse if those are in first music perhaps you should re-make them for suit and easy.
01:09:359 (4,5) - I think these notes aren't fit from vocal music. make long slider? and make them to HDash.
01:41:113 (1,2,3) - find the way to make only one HDash in center. maybe you Increase more slider 01:41:113 (1) to clockwise
02:07:253 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this?
SPOILER
02:44:797 (4) - replace to X:192 Y:64 ?
02:48:306 (9,10,1) - umm next should be different grid It's so Dizzy lol Ctrl+G and replace them like this
SPOILER
03:24:008 (4,5,6,7) - make them closer?
03:30:236 (5) - In timeline 03:30:280 need Increases more volume sound a little bit. (15%)

ok overall look pretty good and I can't mod your hitsound and colour combo that I try to learn it.
If my language are bad or wrong I'm sorry at here.

and last, good job for your map style

StickyPicky

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StickyPicky 2013-11-18T06:26:45+00:00

SUBSTAC9 wrote:
Yo! CLSW and newtonio sorry for my modding very lately!
my turn with M4M

newtoniorock8's Platter
Good map newtonio all pattern and style not problem found in your map :3
and this is a some suggestion to your decision for take it.
00:42:166 (1,2) - follow by vocal music, need them to more spacing? ok :3
01:05:148 (2) - more spacing?
02:33:745 (2) - ctrl+H? and move to left a little step for clam movement applied :3
03:09:359 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - proud to present this style
SPOILER
03:14:973 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ If you want to re-style
ok overall look pretty good and I can't mod your hitsound and colour combo that I try to learn it.
If my language are bad or wrong I'm sorry at here.

and last, good job for your map style

Thank you for modding ~ o/

SPOILER

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CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-20T16:42:08+00:00

SUBSTAC9 wrote:
Yo! CLSW and newtonio sorry for my modding very lately!
my turn with M4M

General
General seems fine
Cup
I play about Cup or Easy very rarely. I haven't idea to create new style for you to improve it but overall look pretty good thought
00:36:552 (1) - there is so confusing and far from 00:35:148 (3) move there to right side
01:10:236 (1) - there is too far again I think this diff would be smooth and easy to play you might make it to closer or re-stack it
01:46:376 (4) - make this to close ><'
02:02:166 (1) - move right side 2 step
02:03:569 (1) - Ctrl+H and move Leif Side 3 step
02:14:446 (3,1,2) - In my Opinion,there are so very far and previous style is really confuse thought, I think you need them come little close
02:22:166 (2) - stack from 02:22:517 (3)
02:22:517 (3) - stack from 02:21:815 (1)
02:22:867 (4) - stack from 02:22:166 (2)
02:54:096 (1) - need this note to closer? - fixed everything except this
Salad
Good job that's nice map and I have some suggestions which you can improve to this diff or not that's up to you.
00:52:692 (2) - Ctrl+G and make first slider to center ok
00:53:394 (1) - move to X:16 Y:192 I moved this to center
01:19:183 (2) - need more spacing to challenge. move this slider to right 2 step or more I think that's enough
01:19:710 (3) - this is too, but move to 4 step or more than
01:24:973 (2,1) - reduce the angle to close next slider It's can run fit. fixed
SPOILER
01:27:078 (1,2) - increase the angle out next note fixed to different way
01:44:973 (4) - Ctrl+H? no. It doesn't fit for me.
01:45:324 (1) - when you fixed previous mod issue you try make there to center? added some movements.
02:59:008 (3) - increase angle to anti-clockwise for continuous to next notes
okay

newtoniorock8's Platter
Good map newtonio all pattern and style not problem found in your map
and this is a some suggestion to your decision for take it.
00:42:166 (1,2) - follow by vocal music, need them to more spacing?
01:05:148 (2) - more spacing?
02:33:745 (2) - ctrl+H? and move to left a little step for clam movement
03:09:359 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - proud to present this style
SPOILER
03:14:973 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ If you want to re-style
Rain
really good difficult and I can't play this diff well. lol It's might to be Overdose?
so I just give some suggestions which I think it should be in this difficult style.
00:16:552 (3) - same previous style, make there to difference? uh..
01:08:832 (1,2,3) - In my playing, I feel confuse if those are in first music perhaps you should re-make them for suit and easy. sorry, I love this.
01:09:359 (4,5) - I think these notes aren't fit from vocal music. make long slider? and make them to HDash. fixed
01:41:113 (1,2,3) - find the way to make only one HDash in center. maybe you Increase more slider 01:41:113 (1) to clockwise Calavan Palace - Dragons, and many others' reference. Subjectively I like this.
02:07:253 (2,3,4,5,6) - try this?
SPOILER
fixed
02:44:797 (4) - replace to X:192 Y:64 ? fixed
02:48:306 (9,10,1) - umm next should be different grid It's so Dizzy lol Ctrl+G and replace them like this oops sorry.
SPOILER
03:24:008 (4,5,6,7) - make them closer? seems fine
03:30:236 (5) - In timeline 03:30:280 need Increases more volume sound a little bit. (15%) fixed
ok overall look pretty good and I can't mod your hitsound and colour combo that I try to learn it.
If my language are bad or wrong I'm sorry at here.

and last, good job for your map style

\o/
thanks!

ZHSteven

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1,012 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHSteven 2013-11-21T00:05:42+00:00

marked. going to recheck this in weekend.
Edit: rechecking:
[Cup]

01:11:639 (1,2) - give a small movement here
01:29:534 (3,1,1,2) - now your flow here seems a bit confusing for cup. suggestion:
rhythm
placement: (3) (1)
http://puu.sh/5qzNj.jpg
placement: (1) (2)
http://puu.sh/5qzNT.jpg
03:00:060 (2,3) - short a little bit here, need to dash already -.-
03:19:008 (1,2,1) - a bit unflow, i suggest to more (1) more towards right. your choice.

[Salad]

00:47:780 (1,2) - you can increase the jump here.
00:49:183 (1,2) - ^
01:17:253 (1) - move more towards right to make symmetrical patterns here.( with previous (1))
01:25:675 (1,2) - can put these 2 horizontal?

[Platter]

01:19:710 (3) - try overlap with 01:18:920 (4) - start. can get better a flow
02:49:885 (2,3,4,1,2) - try this
1
makes it much jumper than before.
02:55:850 (10,1,2) - increase the spacing inside to create a hyper. i will suggest x1.75.
03:11:808 - note?

[Rain]

01:06:464 (3,4,5,6) - hyperdash seems not suitable here. I suggest to use a zz formation:
1
and... the last spinner... we really need this?

call me back after checking these

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-24T02:45:56+00:00

all fixed, wait for newtonio

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-11-24T06:40:38+00:00

ZHSteven wrote:
[Platter]
01:19:710 (3) - try overlap with 01:18:920 (4) - start. can get better a flow
02:49:885 (2,3,4,1,2) - try this
1
makes it much jumper than before.
02:55:850 (10,1,2) - increase the spacing inside to create a hyper. i will suggest x1.75.
03:11:808 - note?

call me back after checking these

all fixed ~ thanks :3
yay 200posts Shoot a kudosu star!

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ZHSteven

osu! Alumni

1,012 posts

Joined July 2009

ZHSteven 2013-11-24T07:44:59+00:00

fine. take my first bubble~~

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-24T07:46:19+00:00

damn nice :O

now wait for him

edit : I want to add original PV of this song but the video in Nico Nico Douga has been deleted..

Hope someone can support this.

nvm

Seph

Seph 2013-11-24T14:49:02+00:00

ITS HAPPENING

THS

1,024 posts

Joined November 2011

THS 2013-11-24T16:16:23+00:00

goodluck~

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-11-24T17:51:23+00:00

Heya CLSW!

[General]

00:03:218 (1) - Lower the playback rate of the melody, and you'll hear that the spinner should start at 00:03:394.

[Cup]

01:26:552 - That timing line doesn't affect anything, hence it could be removed.
02:29:183 (2) - Incline that slider. With the 1/2 repetitions, you're forcing the player to stay in a relatively accurate position for a new player.
02:30:587 (2,3) - That could be applied to those sliders as well. If only you could Ctrl-G the 2nd one, you'd make a better flow there.

[Salad]

01:13:043 (1,2,3) - A bit extreme for this level of difficulty?

[Platter]

00:19:710 - Add a note to make a nice 5-plet?
00:34:096 (2) - Shouldn't this note go in the previous blue tick (00:34:008), as other similar notes nearby?
01:21:727 (2) - Could that slider be splitted into notes? Seems to be quite static atm. Same would go to 01:23:131 (2).
01:22:166 (1,2,3) - The dash required to catch those notes is sharp enough, and also conditioned with the jump with the previous note. Could you try reducing the distance a bit? Check out the twin pattern 01:23:569 (1,2,3) as well.
02:28:832 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Those are also their "twin" patterns :p
02:00:762 until 02:21:464 - In that section, there's an overuse of New Combos (I can almost only see 1s and 2s!). Try making the combos there a bit longer.
03:12:867 (1,2) - With the intensity of that note, a wider jump between those notes would be appreciated.
03:18:482 (1,2) - Another jump here? (byebye).
03:30:587 - Another note here, please.
03:30:938 - Delete that timing section. Your difficulty ended a few ms ago ^^"

[Rain]

03:02:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I see what you tried there, but the distance (4,5) is not as big as the (3,4) one. What about doing Ctrl-G to (5,6,7)? Maybe you'll need to move a bit the next note (8).

[]

Seph wrote:
ITS HAPPENING

IT'S GONNA HAPPEN!

eldnl

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

2,930 posts

Joined March 2010

eldnl 2013-11-24T23:17:17+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125311 first try

such an amazing map, take all my love

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-25T01:46:07+00:00

all done

Seph

Seph 2013-11-25T05:45:54+00:00

RANK IT DAVID

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-11-25T06:50:55+00:00

Deif wrote:
Heya CLSW!

[General]
00:03:218 (1) - Lower the playback rate of the melody, and you'll hear that the spinner should start at 00:03:394.
[Platter]
00:19:710 - Add a note to make a nice 5-plet?
00:34:096 (2) - Shouldn't this note go in the previous blue tick (00:34:008), as other similar notes nearby?
01:21:727 (2) - Could that slider be splitted into notes? Seems to be quite static atm. Same would go to 01:23:131 (2).
01:22:166 (1,2,3) - The dash required to catch those notes is sharp enough, and also conditioned with the jump with the previous note. Could you try reducing the distance a bit? Check out the twin pattern 01:23:569 (1,2,3) as well.
02:28:832 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Those are also their "twin" patterns :p
02:00:762 until 02:21:464 - In that section, there's an overuse of New Combos (I can almost only see 1s and 2s!). Try making the combos there a bit longer. idk what happened w/ this part. but now its fixed.
03:12:867 (1,2) - With the intensity of that note, a wider jump between those notes would be appreciated.
03:18:482 (1,2) - Another jump here? (byebye).
03:30:587 - Another note here, please.
03:30:938 - Delete that timing section. Your difficulty ended a few ms ago ^^" ohh sorry -.- removed.

done. ~

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Title:World's End Dancehall
TitleUnicode:ワールズエンド・ダンスホール
Artist:Nico Nico Chorus
ArtistUnicode:Nico Nico Chorus
Creator:CLSW
Version:newtoniorock8's Platter
Source:Nico Nico Douga
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376,88,203569,6,0,L|304:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,204096,2,0,L|208:232,1,160
16,232,204622,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,208,204973,6,0,B|104:248|104:248|184:320,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,205499,2,0,B|408:248|408:248|328:320,1,160
408,344,206025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,344,206201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,88,206376,6,0,L|208:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,206903,2,0,L|304:232,1,160
496,232,207429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,192,207780,6,0,L|512:192,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,240,208306,2,0,L|216:240,1,160
80,240,208832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,240,209008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,192,209183,6,0,L|0:192,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,209710,2,0,L|296:240,1,160
468,240,210236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,240,210324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,240,210411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,240,210499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,240,210587,1,0,0:0:0:0:

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-25T07:05:09+00:00

updated.

+ fixed 'kagamine len' tag from 'kagamine ren'

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2013-11-25T10:48:44+00:00

Before you rank this, Deif, just a little thing:

Shouldn't the first spinner end at 00:08:218 - in every difficulty? This guitar voice definitely ends a bit later and suits much better with the rhythm like that. About gameplay, this is still fair enough even if the distance between note and spinner isn't 1/1 anymore.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

CLSW 2013-11-25T11:45:58+00:00

updated

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-11-25T13:24:29+00:00