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wring

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-07T09:21:51+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Hard]
00:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - make it same shape with 00:14:792 (4,5,6,7) no, I like this form
00:39:392 (2,3) - unstacked
00:40:992 (5,6) - ^
02:42:592 (2,3,2,3) - ^ umm, I think it's stacked..
01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - too far jump imo k, I will think another pattern.
suggestion
02:46:792 (4) - you can use red point to make it more pretty sorry no.

Guy wrote:
[wring's Hard]
01:27:392 (3) - (1)の始端にスタックしてあるため流れが悪くなっていると思います。x160 y80あたりに移動して円を描くような流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？変えておきます
01:44:192 - こっちはadd noteしない感じですか？02:43:392 - こっちとbackの音は同じだと思うので入れてみてはどうでしょうすみません、わざとです

finishの提案
00:51:592 (1,5,1) -
00:57:992 (3,5) -
01:05:992 (1) - ^
01:09:192 (1,2,3,5) -
01:17:192 (1) -
01:36:392 (1) -
01:39:592 (1,2,3,5) - 5はheadとend両方
01:55:592 (1,5,1) -
02:01:992 (4,6) -
02:09:992 (1) -
02:13:192 (1,2,3,5) -
02:35:592 (1) -
03:17:192 (1,5,1) -
03:23:592 (1,3) -
03:31:592 (1) -
03:34:792 (1,2,1,3) -
参考にさせていただきます！

~~boxが機能しない~~ huehuehue

thanks mod

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-08T06:19:56+00:00

@CakiP

CakiP wrote:
さてらいとさんのりくえすと？

[litoluna's Normal]
00:37:192 (1) - Ctrl ＋Gの形のほうが流れにあっている気がします! もし直す場合はスペーシングも調整したほうがいいです。下から上がってくるほうが流れ的にいいかなとおもうのでno
00:52:592 (2) - Normalだとちょっと難しいかも？です。簡単にしました~!
00:55:592 (3) - 音取りの提案です。個人的にこうしたらしっくりきました。 http://puu.sh/5aO6t.jpg スライダー2つ使って簡単にしてみました。
01:05:392 (2) - ^　^
01:08:992 - 一つノートを置いてみるといいかもです。 no

指摘されているところと同じパターンを使っているところは一緒に見直してみてください!
配置が綺麗で、良いと思います!

どのdiffも綺麗ですごくいいと思いました
すごく量が少なくなってしまい、内容も役立つかわかりません・・・、ごめんなさい～～～。
ランクド期待してます。がんばってください！

Easy向けにRhythmを簡単にしたので音取り等の提案が通せず申し訳ないです。
Moddingありがとうございました。

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-11-09T02:26:30+00:00

M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
Placement
00:38:792(1) nazi, 360:284あたりにもってくると、前のスライダーと等間隔になっていいかも
01:47:592(3)もう少し上手く囲めると思います　e.g.)

SPOILER

03:01:192(1) ここだけNCかけるのもちょっと妙なのでNC削除
Hit Sonud
00:01:992(2) 音無いので終点のwhistle削除
00:13:192(1)始点のwhistle→finish
02:56:392~03：08：792　全部の白線にwhistleつけようとしても音取り上一定に刻めないので、1,3拍目の白線にのみwhistleを付けてみては？
[Hard]
Placement
01:04:792(2,3) 囲むように配置してみては e.g.)

SPOILER

01:08:792(5,6) CTRL+Gすると回りこむ流れのまま打てるのでいいと思います
01:20:392(1,2,3,4) 似たような提案

SPOILER

01:27:392(3) 無理にスタックさせるよりも弧を描くように配置したほうが打ちやすいです

SPOILER

01:58:792(1) nazi,前のスライダーと囲むようにしてみるといいかも
Rhythm
00:13:192　不要な緑線
Hit Sonud
もっとfinish付けてもいいような気が、意図的なら構いません

[Satellite]
Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど

SPOILER

01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう

SPOILER

01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては

Good Luck!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-09T17:49:31+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど
SPOILER
あえてスタックさせてます :3
01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
これは指摘ミスでしょうか？少し的外れな場所になるような・・
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう
SPOILER
Fix
01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
バックを拾ってます
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
３が強調されてるように聞こえたのでこのままで
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
こちらもバックの音を主体として拾ってます
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
Fix
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては
Fix

Good Luck!

modとstarありがとうございました!!
助かりました>w<

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-10T02:41:39+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hard]
Placement
01:04:792(2,3) 囲むように配置してみては e.g.) 違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:08:792(5,6) CTRL+Gすると回りこむ流れのまま打てるのでいいと思いますジャンプさせたいのでこのままで
01:20:392(1,2,3,4) 似たような提案違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:27:392(3) 無理にスタックさせるよりも弧を描くように配置したほうが打ちやすいです違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:58:792(1) nazi,前のスライダーと囲むようにしてみるといいかも参考にしました
Rhythm
00:13:192　不要な緑線　oops
Hit Sonud
もっとfinish付けてもいいような気が、意図的なら構いません多分これで寂しくないはず...

Thanks mod

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-10T04:44:11+00:00

as requested

Naryuga's Normal Here!

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no kudosu please!

normal-hitclap.wav が使われてるところパッと見無かったので消しても良いのでは(あったらごめんなさい)
tagsに"Sokubaku Anemonation" "Naryuga"があると検索するとき見つけやすいです(Sokubakuだけでもゲーム画面では検索利きますが、webページで検索かけると出てこなかったり…… yuuhei satelliteについても同じことがあったり　気にならないならいいんですが)
難易度Satellite 01:56:392 (4) - whistle -> finish?

thanks!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-10T06:01:32+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Move Pending Beatmaps

ready for mod

:3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-10T06:04:28+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
as requested

[some small things]

no kudosu please!
normal-hitclap.wav が使われてるところパッと見無かったので消しても良いのでは(あったらごめんなさい)
OK
tagsに"Sokubaku Anemonation" "Naryuga"があると検索するとき見つけやすいです(Sokubakuだけでもゲーム画面では検索利きますが、webページで検索かけると出てこなかったり…… yuuhei satelliteについても同じことがあったり　気にならないならいいんですが)
"sokubaku" を追加しました
難易度Satellite 01:56:392 (4) - whistle -> finish?
OK
thanks!

thanks awesome normal diff

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-10T07:03:57+00:00

*fixed some issues
あっぷでーとおねがいしまゆ

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
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Creator:Satellite
Version:Naryuga's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:chen dagger-gazel litoluna naryuga wring yuuhei iceon kamasetora otodama The Fantastic Legend of Tohno Perfect Cherry Blossom Kouroumu 9 sokubaku
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328,212,114192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,328,115192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,224,115592,2,0,L|240:168,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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140,68,117192,5,4,0:0:0:0:
100,104,117392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,240,118392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,327,118792,2,0,P|270:269|312:228,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,152,120792,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,136,120992,2,0,P|404:104|408:72,2,60
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288,268,122392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,152,122792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,124,123192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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264,304,126792,6,0,P|244:329|220:344,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,336,130592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,60,133592,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,60,135192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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64,112,145992,5,4,1:0:0:0:
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232,58,146792,1,4,1:0:0:0:
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196,233,147592,5,4,1:0:0:0:
300,292,147992,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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236,212,166792,2,0,B|252:123|252:123|196:88|200:24,1,210,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,168392,6,0,B|440:148|472:196|472:196|424:268,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,169992,2,0,B|328:128|344:188|344:188|312:236|312:236,2,180,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
228,60,171592,6,0,P|180:44|140:40,2,90,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,172392,2,0,P|252:160|248:212,2,90,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,244,193792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,140,194792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-10T07:31:23+00:00

@kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
Placement
00:38:792(1) nazi, 360:284あたりにもってくると、前のスライダーと等間隔になっていいかも ok
01:47:592(3)もう少し上手く囲めると思います　e.g.) fixed
SPOILER
03:01:192(1) ここだけNCかけるのもちょっと妙なのでNC削除 ok delete
Hit Sonud
00:01:992(2) 音無いので終点のwhistle削除　ok
00:13:192(1)始点のwhistle→finish ok
02:56:392~03：08：792　全部の白線にwhistleつけようとしても音取り上一定に刻めないので、1,3拍目の白線にのみwhistleを付けてみては？ last (6,7)にはつけてたほうがしっくりきたので、ほかは1,3拍に付け直しました。

Good Luck!

modding ありがとうございました~!

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-11-11T14:19:15+00:00

[litoluna's Easy]
nice Normal
Skip

[Wring's Hard]
00:05:192 (1) - Ctrl+J？
00:17:192 (5) - ctrl+Gしても面白いと思います

SPOILER

01:05:192 (3) - こっちの形はどうでしょう。次へもスムーズかと思います

SPOILER

02:09:992 (1) - Ctrl+Gはどうでしょうか
03:14:792 (5) - Ctrl+G?

[Satellite]
00:05:192 (1) - 流れを意識してたのでもう少し曲げてあげると入りやすいかもです。曲げたら次の(2)も同じようにするのを忘れないでください:3

SPOILER

00:35:592 (1) - 始点にwhistleあってもいいと思います
00:36:392 (4) - ^
00:51:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?　場所はx:196y:120あたりかな
00:53:192 (1) - こんなのはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

00:56:392 (1) - 流れ殺してる気がする・・・Ctrl+Gで00:57:592 (5)に終端スタック？

SPOILER

01:33:992 (4,5,6) - 大きなジャンプを作ってあげても面白いかも

SPOILER

01:37:592 (5) - 少し曲げてあげるときれいかも
01:40:192 (3) - x:304y:216くらいとかどうですか
01:53:392 (4) - aimをふわっとさせる感じで横向きのスライダーでもう少し右にずらしてもいいと思います

SPOILER

02:05:592 (3) - (2)(3)(4)で三角形を作るといいと思いました

SPOILER

02:50:992 (3) - 02:52:392 (3) にスタック？
03:14:592 (3) - この配置ならもう少し左の飛ばしてジャンプにしたいかも？

超少ないmodでごめんなさい・・・　-3-;A
Normal Hardはまた追記しておきます！→少ないですが追記しました！

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-11-13T00:13:26+00:00

HI~ Satellite

General:

Clean

Satellite:

00:06:592 (4,5) - Nothing in the music support this two beats there I suggest you to remove them better for following the song better.
00:06:792 btw this need NC following your stanzas pattern also I make more emppathize to then of a section Imo
00:18:492 Fell kinda weird how you ignore this beat bu you map all the other symilars ones this rhythm feel better:
SPOILER
00:19:192 (9,10) - I test this multiple times and It feel awkward for me need more distance why? cuz after the 1/4 jumps in 00:18:792 (7,8,9) - the distance in 00:19:192 (9,10) - feel to short and can be confuse for player thinking is a 1/4 jump too
00:21:592 (2,3,1) - I really preffer If you use the same distance here maybe 1.60 will fit perfect
00:24:792 (4) - 1/4 Slider will fit better this part like you did on 00:25:192 (7,8) -
00:35:992 (2,3,4) - feel kinda strange when you play it maybe use the same distance (1.70) look better like:
SPOILER
00:45:192 (1) - omg this slider ♥ i love it owo but the end sound pretty strong compared to the song maybe you want to reduce the volume just a little imo
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern dont look good (visual) why you don try to make it more symetrical:
SPOILER

If you like it here is the code:

204,64,48392,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,192,48592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,48792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,48992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,320,49192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,252,49392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,49592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,49792,1,2,0:0:0:0:

00:52:392 (4,5) - kinda nazi but you can improve this blanket moving a little the red control point of the slider imo
00:59:492 this beat sound really overmapped is better if you remove it for follow the music properly
01:11:692 I'll like if you add a circle here since sound alot better with it actually the gap between 01:11:592 (3,4) - sound really empty and dont represent the song correctly imo
01:12:392 same as 00:06:792
01:23:192 (9,10) - this need more distance imo is easily to get confused thinking is a 1/4 jump when the gap is 1/2 one
01:24:392 (4) - really nazi stack this 01:24:392 (4) - with 01:25:192 (1) - perfect
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really a fan of copy past tough you can variate this a little imo
01:51:592 (3) - stack this perfect with 01:52:392 (1) -
02:16:392 same as 00:06:792
02:31:392 (3) - why you dont stack this beat in the center of the grid make more sense in the pattern look:
SPOILER
03:32:992 (5) - this is touching 03:33:592 (2) - and dont look good maybe try to avoid it

Hard:

Up HP and OD by 1 (6) cuz it will make a better spread with the normal and Insane
00:14:792 look like you forget NC here since it follow your combo pattern and make more empathize in that part imo
00:16:392 (1,2) - this tow circles dont fit pretty well the rhythm also the vocals is better if you convert them in a 1/2 slider you can hear how it empathize alot better the music
00:19:192 (4,5) - use a properly distance here it feel awkward
SPOILER
00:21:192 same as 00:14:792
00:26:792 (3,1) - stack this perfect better instead of the manual stack stacking them perfect will make the antijump more noticeable to play imo
00:43:592 (3,4) - will play better in this way:
SPOILER
00:48:592 (2,3) - If you fix the distance here this will play alot better like:
SPOILER
00:57:992 yup again i really will like if you add NC in this kind of patterns cuz it will bring more readability and more empathize with the music imo
01:06:792 (3,1) - same as 00:26:792
01:03:592 (1,2,3,4) - will look alot better if you do a perfect square here like:
SPOILER
01:12:392 add a circle with finish here then start the spinner in 01:12:492 in this way you will follow the music alot better
01:20:992 (4) - really nazi but this one need one grid to the left to improve the whole pattern 01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) -
01:23:392 (6) - remove whistle here take in consideration it sound bad and also u have one in 01:23:592 (1) - making that double whistle sound pretty bad thougt
01:38:792 (6,7) - consider move both sliders a little down the jump in the previous 5 and 6 is kinda to much for a hard diff
01:47:592 (3,4) - same suggestion as 00:43:592
01:52:192 (4,2) - remove whistles sound kinda weird imo is better if you just keep one in 01:52:392 (1) - (if you apply this do it on the next pattern too
02:16:392 same suggestion as 01:12:392
02:38:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - the patter look pretty bad (visual) why you dont make a perfect star shape instead of the current one?
02:46:792 (3,1) - try to blanket this bettter just move 02:48:392 (1) - x:460 y:184 will look alot better:
SPOILER
02:49:592 I preffer if you do ctrl G here is consistent with what u do in 02:50:792 (4,5) -
03:04:192 (4) - following the music and vocals this have to be nc and remove it from 03:04:392 (1) -
03:05:992 (1) - same here remove NC and add it on 03:06:592 (2) - make more sense with the music
03:13:992 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of straight patterns try to curver the shape instead will look and play better IMO
03:37:992 (1) - same as as 01:12:392
02:56:394 - unsnaped green line snap to 02:56:392

Normal:

Hp and Od +1 (4) to balance settings and the spread of the mapset.
00:35:592 (1,2) - Fix the distance
00:43:592 (3,1) - i see its intencional owo but the gap is not that big for ignore the distance so better use the properly one
00:50:792 (2,3,4) - kinda hard for a normal I preffer if you use a 1/2 repeat slider instead
00:56:392 (1,2) - Fix the distance here you are using 1.10 in kiai but this one just have 1.0 will feel awkward to play
01:03:592 (2,3,4) - same as above reducing and increasing the distance in a normal diff is not suitable for a normal diff
01:05:992 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:392 (5,6,7) - and here why you reduce it to 0.90? kinda weird imo
01:24:992 move this to x:436 y:172
01:33:192 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fix the distance to 1.0 really hard to read in 0.90 thougt
01:50:392 maybe convert this one in 2 circles since the chorus start in 01:50:792 and it need an action (circle or slider head) so the player can have a better feedback with the music imo
01:51:992 (3,1,2,3) - use a properly distance
02:26:592 (2,3) - consider to use a slider instead of the stacked circles they play really bad for a new player
02:27:392 (4,1) - ^
02:53:192 (3,1) - well this jump is really big for a normal O.O reduce the distance?
03:16:392 (2,3,4) - this dont flow good with previous slider since newbies tend to move in a circular way this will break theirs hand IMO using a repeat slider or rearrange the shape will be better
03:21:192 (6,7,8) - is the first time you use a triple stack in all the diff this can be surprising for players and not readable in first time betterunstack them and use a properly distance
I like this normal but I dont agree with the distance changes in various points them play weird imo

Easy:

00:24:392 (1) - really nazi move this 1 grid down to fix the little distance error there
01:50:392 maybe you forget the drum sampleset in the tail here
03:21:192 (3,2) - stack this perfect look kinda bad in game

AI mod say:
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:790 - snap to 00:38:792
01:42:790 - snap to 01:42:792
02:41:990 - snap to 02:41:992
Nice easy

Nice map Gl Satellite c:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-13T12:46:11+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Satellite]
00:05:192 (1) - 流れを意識してたのでもう少し曲げてあげると入りやすいかもです。曲げたら次の(2)も同じようにするのを忘れないでください:3
SPOILER
00:35:592 (1) - 始点にwhistleあってもいいと思います
OK
00:36:392 (4) - ^
OK
00:51:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?　場所はx:196y:120あたりかな
00:53:192 (1) - こんなのはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:56:392 (1) - 流れ殺してる気がする・・・Ctrl+Gで00:57:592 (5)に終端スタック？
SPOILER
01:33:992 (4,5,6) - 大きなジャンプを作ってあげても面白いかも
SPOILER
曲調にあわせてジャンプさせてます
01:37:592 (5) - 少し曲げてあげるときれいかも
ここも曲調にあわせてます。変わりに終点にwhistleいれました
01:40:192 (3) - x:304y:216くらいとかどうですか
01:53:392 (4) - aimをふわっとさせる感じで横向きのスライダーでもう少し右にずらしてもいいと思います
SPOILER
次の１のスライダーと平行に配置してます＞＜
02:05:592 (3) - (2)(3)(4)で三角形を作るといいと思いました
SPOILER
これはこういう形なのです！
02:50:992 (3) - 02:52:392 (3) にスタック？
03:14:592 (3) - この配置ならもう少し左の飛ばしてジャンプにしたいかも？

記載のないところはすみませんが主観でno changeです。
moddingありがとうございました :)

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Satellite

3,683 posts

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Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-13T13:07:54+00:00

Natsu wrote:
HI~ Satellite

General:
Clean
Satellite:
00:06:592 (4,5) - Nothing in the music support this two beats there I suggest you to remove them better for following the song better.
OK
00:06:792 btw this need NC following your stanzas pattern also I make more emppathize to then of a section Imo
awesome idea
00:18:492 Fell kinda weird how you ignore this beat bu you map all the other symilars ones this rhythm feel better:
SPOILER
sorry. I don't think >.>
00:19:192 (9,10) - I test this multiple times and It feel awkward for me need more distance why? cuz after the 1/4 jumps in 00:18:792 (7,8,9) - the distance in 00:19:192 (9,10) - feel to short and can be confuse for player thinking is a 1/4 jump too
OK. Unified pattern~
00:21:592 (2,3,1) - I really preffer If you use the same distance here maybe 1.60 will fit perfect
OK
00:24:792 (4) - 1/4 Slider will fit better this part like you did on 00:25:192 (7,8) -
sorry. I don't think >.>
00:35:992 (2,3,4) - feel kinda strange when you play it maybe use the same distance (1.70) look better like:
SPOILER
sorry I like this pattern~ > <
00:45:192 (1) - omg this slider ♥ i love it owo but the end sound pretty strong compared to the song maybe you want to reduce the volume just a little imo
OK volume down :3
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern dont look good (visual) why you don try to make it more symetrical:
SPOILER
If you like it here is the code:
204,64,48392,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,192,48592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,48792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,48992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,320,49192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,252,49392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,49592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,49792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Really really awesome suggestion! Fixed~
00:52:392 (4,5) - kinda nazi but you can improve this blanket moving a little the red control point of the slider imo
OK
00:59:492 this beat sound really overmapped is better if you remove it for follow the music properly
OK a mini change~
01:11:692 I'll like if you add a circle here since sound alot better with it actually the gap between 01:11:592 (3,4) - sound really empty and dont represent the song correctly imo
OK volume down
01:12:392 same as 00:06:792
~
01:23:192 (9,10) - this need more distance imo is easily to get confused thinking is a 1/4 jump when the gap is 1/2 one
OK maybe.
01:24:392 (4) - really nazi stack this 01:24:392 (4) - with 01:25:192 (1) - perfect
OK~
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really a fan of copy past tough you can variate this a little imo
sorry.I think before kiai time. It should be a simple rhythm.
01:51:592 (3) - stack this perfect with 01:52:392 (1) -
OK
02:16:392 same as 00:06:792
~
02:31:392 (3) - why you dont stack this beat in the center of the grid make more sense in the pattern look:
SPOILER
Yes. I preferred the stack.
03:32:992 (5) - this is touching 03:33:592 (2) - and dont look good maybe try to avoid it
~
Nice map Gl Satellite c:

thanks for modding
It's very helpful <3
red = Fix Blue = No

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-13T14:52:04+00:00

@Natsu

Natsu wrote:
HI~ Satellite

Easy:
00:24:392 (1) - really nazi move this 1 grid down to fix the little distance error there ok.
01:50:392 maybe you forget the drum sampleset in the tail here ok
03:21:192 (3,2) - stack this perfect look kinda bad in game ok! change placement

AI mod say:
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:790 - snap to 00:38:792 fixed
01:42:790 - snap to 01:42:792 fixed
02:41:990 - snap to 02:41:992 fixed
Nice easy

Nice map Gl Satellite c:

thanks modding Natsu~!

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2013-11-14T06:31:32+00:00

More Senya! ^_^

putigame

25 posts

Joined March 2012

putigame 2013-11-14T07:06:37+00:00

mod

いやぁ～！まじ神曲です>w<
そんなことはさておき＾＾；
下からmodです！

Easy

00:00:392~00:06:992　ここの部分っていらないような気がします。実際にプレイしてみたのですが、いきなりスライダーが来てびっくりしました。
01:45:992~01:48:292　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　③のスライダー。①のスライダーと③のスライダーの始点が縦線一本分だけずれてます。
01:55:592~01:58:792　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　①の往復スライダー。①のスライダーの終点と①の往復スライダーの始点（終点）の高さはそろえたほうがきれいだと思います。

Normal

AR5はちょっと高い気がします。normalといえばAR3か4というイメージがあるのでこの曲もAR4ぐらいがいいと思います。
02:08:392~02:09:192　ここの⑤のスライダー。このスライダーの中心は中央の縦線上に持っていったほうがきれいな配置になると思います。
03:21:192~03:21:592　ここの⑥⑦⑧のサークル。この３つのサークルは重ねない配置にしたほうがいいと思います。

Hard

00:39:392~00:39:992　ここの②③のスライダー。②のスライダーの終点と③のスライダーの始点は少しだけずらしたほうがいいと思います。00:40:992~00:41:592
01:43:392~01:43:992　01:44:992~01:45:592　02:42:592~02:43:192　02:44:192~02:44:792も同様
01:59:592~02:00:192　ここの③④⑤⑥のサークル。斜めまっすぐの配置になっていますが、DT HDでやると少しきついような気がしました。ただ僕がこういう配置苦手なだけかもしれませんが＾＾；　じぐざぐにしたり半円を描くような配置にしたほうがいいと思います。03:13:992~03:14:592も同様。
02:33:992~02:35:392　ここの①のスライダー　②③のサークル　④のスライダー　⑤⑥のサークル。④のスライダーの始点は①のスライダーの始点の上に置いたほうがいいと思います。それに伴い⑤⑥のサークルの配置も変えたほうがいいです。

Satellite

実際にプレイしてみたのですが、連打が少ないんじゃないかと思いました。特に前半ですね。恐らくinsaneに匹敵する難易度で作っているのだろうと思うので、もう少し連打を使ってもいいんじゃないでしょうか？

00:52:392~00:52:792　ここの④のスライダー。個人的な意見ですが、この部分は５連打１つか２連打２つにしたほうがいいと思います。僕は２連打２つのほうがいいと思いました。01:05:192~01:05:592も同様。

以上です。

Last edited by putigame 2013-11-15T05:23:11+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Satellite

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Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-14T07:15:28+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
More Senya! ^_^

thanks star! :3

To putigame

thanks modding :3
waiting mod >.>

Last edited by Satellite 2013-11-15T13:55:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-11-14T07:27:13+00:00

damn i forgot to star this
not anymore

Satellite

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Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-14T11:13:22+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
damn i forgot to star this
not anymore

a ri ga to u ~ :3/

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-14T11:19:02+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hard:
Up HP and OD by 1 (6) cuz it will make a better spread with the normal and Insane umm....I think that doesn't matter so I'll leave it to Satellite.
00:14:792 look like you forget NC here since it follow your combo pattern and make more empathize in that part imo no, it's just not using NC here (to be procise include another parts like this)
00:16:392 (1,2) - this tow circles dont fit pretty well the rhythm also the vocals is better if you convert them in a 1/2 slider you can hear how it empathize alot better the music sorry I like this rhythm because four notes of 1/8 could follow the four notes of 1/4.
00:19:192 (4,5) - use a properly distance here it feel awkward ok
SPOILER
00:21:192 same as 00:14:792
00:26:792 (3,1) - stack this perfect better instead of the manual stack stacking them perfect will make the antijump more noticeable to play imo Player must stop here if I used perfect stack, but that's not my intent. The reason I used the subtle gap is showing the music flow and a blank here.
00:43:592 (3,4) - will play better in this way:sorry, my feeling music flow isn't that.
SPOILER
00:48:592 (2,3) - If you fix the distance here this will play alot better like:oops, my mistake, change the distance between (4,5) to x1.3.
SPOILER
00:57:992 yup again i really will like if you add NC in this kind of patterns cuz it will bring more readability and more empathize with the music imo ok, added NC cuz in kiai
01:06:792 (3,1) - same as 00:26:792
01:03:592 (1,2,3,4) - will look alot better if you do a perfect square here like: no
SPOILER
01:12:392 add a circle with finish here then start the spinner in 01:12:492 in this way you will follow the music alot better I know your pointing, but I thought note object finished here was better.
01:20:992 (4) - really nazi but this one need one grid to the left to improve the whole pattern 01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - just considered (3,4,5).
01:23:392 (6) - remove whistle here take in consideration it sound bad and also u have one in 01:23:592 (1) - making that double whistle sound pretty bad thougt no
01:38:792 (6,7) - consider move both sliders a little down the jump in the previous 5 and 6 is kinda to much for a hard diff slider to slider jumping is not too hard imo.
01:47:592 (3,4) - same suggestion as 00:43:592
01:52:192 (4,2) - remove whistles sound kinda weird imo is better if you just keep one in 01:52:392 (1) - (if you apply this do it on the next pattern too
02:16:392 same suggestion as 01:12:392 no
02:38:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - the patter look pretty bad (visual) why you dont make a perfect star shape instead of the current one? It's needless imo, and perfect shape sometimes become difficult to play smoothly (especially I guessed in this placement).
02:46:792 (3,1) - try to blanket this bettter just move 02:48:392 (1) - x:460 y:184 will look alot better:ok
SPOILER
02:49:592 I preffer if you do ctrl G here is consistent with what u do in 02:50:792 (4,5) - no, for the reason I put parallel here, so I used diagonal sliders there.
03:04:192 (4) - following the music and vocals this have to be nc and remove it from 03:04:392 (1) - That may be strange, cuz considering music phrase.
03:05:992 (1) - same here remove NC and add it on 03:06:592 (2) - make more sense with the music
03:13:992 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of straight patterns try to curver the shape instead will look and play better IMO jump here
03:37:992 (1) - same as as 01:12:392
02:56:394 - unsnaped green line snap to 02:56:392ok

Thanks mod

Suzully

osu! Alumni

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Suzully 2013-11-14T13:05:47+00:00

ﾖｲﾖｲ

[litoluna's Easy]

01:04:392 (1) - ココにNew comboは要らないんじゃないかなーって気がしますん。
02:08:392 (1) - ^

[Naryuga's Normal]

00:25:992 (1) - whistleはちょっと耳についてヤだなー
01:29:992 (1) - ^
綺麗にまとまっててイイね！
whistleの置き方にもう少し統一感があるとベター！

[錆びた釘's Hard]

03:29:192 (5,6,7,8) - スペーシングのメリハリの付け方が中途半端でキモイ（☝ ՞ਊ ՞）☝

[Satelite]

00:21:192 (1) - これはプレイしたときに感じたまったくの好みなんだけど、00:35:192 (6,1)みたいに重ねるか、アンチジャンプで置いた方が、今風で良いプレイ感になると思う。
00:30:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:24:592 (2,3,4,5,6,7)に比べて間が狭く見える(スペーシングはどっちも同じなんだけどね)から、(7,8,9)のタイミングがやや読みづらい。(2,3,4)の3連打の向きを変えてみるとか、少し工夫してみるといいかも？譜面の難易度的に、レベルの高くないプレイヤー層もプレイするだろうしね。
00:45:192 (1) - 音楽と合っててイイね！
01:32:192 (3,4,5) - スタック分、(2)と(3)の間が詰まって見えるから、もう少し右下に置いてもいいかもね。
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 自分は一部分のコピペでも気になってしまう(譜面の魅力を減らしてしまうと考えてる)頑固人間なので、できたら1番と違うバリエーションで作って欲しいなーと思ったり思わなかったり。
03:03:392 (3,4,5) - すごーく細かいんだけど、(2)→(3)で微ジャンプした後に(3)と(4)のノート同士が触れ合うくらい狭いのが詰まってるように見えてヤな感じ。(1,2)と同じスペーシングで微調整できないかな？

文句なし！

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-14T15:18:47+00:00

Suzully wrote:
ﾖｲﾖｲ (/・ω・)/

[Satelite]
00:21:192 (1) - これはプレイしたときに感じたまったくの好みなんだけど、00:35:192 (6,1)みたいに重ねるか、アンチジャンプで置いた方が、今風で良いプレイ感になると思う。
OK いい感じになりました！
00:30:992 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:24:592 (2,3,4,5,6,7)に比べて間が狭く見える(スペーシングはどっちも同じなんだけどね)から、(7,8,9)のタイミングがやや読みづらい。(2,3,4)の3連打の向きを変えてみるとか、少し工夫してみるといいかも？譜面の難易度的に、レベルの高くないプレイヤー層もプレイするだろうしね。
配置を少し考えて見ます～
00:45:192 (1) - 音楽と合っててイイね！
D: ありがとうございます :3
01:32:192 (3,4,5) - スタック分、(2)と(3)の間が詰まって見えるから、もう少し右下に置いてもいいかもね。
OK
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 自分は一部分のコピペでも気になってしまう(譜面の魅力を減らしてしまうと考えてる)頑固人間なので、できたら1番と違うバリエーションで作って欲しいなーと思ったり思わなかったり。
今までの譜面は殆どさび前は単調なリズムで反転配置してるのでこのままで～
03:03:392 (3,4,5) - すごーく細かいんだけど、(2)→(3)で微ジャンプした後に(3)と(4)のノート同士が触れ合うくらい狭いのが詰まってるように見えてヤな感じ。(1,2)と同じスペーシングで微調整できないかな？
OK
文句なし！

的確なご指摘ありがとうございます
Starも頂いて助かります＞＜

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-11-14T16:05:12+00:00

More senyallite again lol
Go! Go! <3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-15T05:32:51+00:00

putigame wrote:
mod

いやぁ～！まじ神曲です>w<
そんなことはさておき＾＾；
下からmodです！

Satellite

実際にプレイしてみたのですが、連打が少ないんじゃないかと思いました。特に前半ですね。恐らくinsaneに匹敵する難易度で作っているのだろうと思うので、もう少し連打を使ってもいいんじゃないでしょうか？
確かにご指摘通り連打は結構少なめとなっております・・・しかし3/4スライダー+単発の組み合わせで複雑にしているつもり(?)なので現状キープでお願いします！

00:52:392~00:52:792　ここの④のスライダー。個人的な意見ですが、この部分は５連打１つか２連打２つにしたほうがいいと思います。僕は２連打２つのほうがいいと思いました。01:05:192~01:05:592も同様。
ここの2箇所はメロディの伸ばしている部分をフォローしているためこのスライダーを使用しておりますorz
たとえば 01:05:192 (3) - ここでしたら、歌詞の「の～」ってところにあわせているのでこのような形になっており、裏の音をフォローしますと
01:05:192 - 01:05:192 - 01:05:592 - この3箇所に音が入るだけなので、5連打や2連打はプレイ上楽しいかもしれませんがメロディを重視しますと
入らない音?だと思うので今回は見送りさせて頂きます＞＜

以上です。

thanks for modding

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-15T07:48:48+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Wring's Hard]
00:05:192 (1) - Ctrl+J？悩みましたがこのままで
00:17:192 (5) - ctrl+Gしても面白いと思います　流れを重視したつもりなのでジャンプを入れようとは考えてなかったです
SPOILER
01:05:192 (3) - こっちの形はどうでしょう。次へもスムーズかと思います　わざとです
SPOILER
02:09:992 (1) - Ctrl+Gはどうでしょうか
03:14:792 (5) - Ctrl+G?　^

putigame wrote:
Hard

00:39:392~00:39:992　ここの②③のスライダー。②のスライダーの終点と③のスライダーの始点は少しだけずらしたほうがいいと思います。00:40:992~00:41:592
01:43:392~01:43:992　01:44:992~01:45:592　02:42:592~02:43:192　02:44:192~02:44:792も同様　スローパートという曲調で少しずらすことも考えましたが終点で止まってほしいと思ったので、このような配置にしてます。
01:59:592~02:00:192　ここの③④⑤⑥のサークル。斜めまっすぐの配置になっていますが、DT HDでやると少しきついような気がしました。ただ僕がこういう配置苦手なだけかもしれませんが＾＾；　じぐざぐにしたり半円を描くような配置にしたほうがいいと思います。03:13:992~03:14:592も同様。1:59のところはちょっと変えます。
02:33:992~02:35:392　ここの①のスライダー　②③のサークル　④のスライダー　⑤⑥のサークル。④のスライダーの始点は①のスライダーの始点の上に置いたほうがいいと思います。それに伴い⑤⑥のサークルの配置も変えたほうがいいです。重ねた場合AR7ということもありスライダー表示に少しズレが生じたり重ねるという心理が動くので、ジャンプになりますがあえて離して置いてます。

Suzully wrote:
[錆びた釘's Hard]
03:29:192 (5,6,7,8) - スペーシングのメリハリの付け方が中途半端でキモイ（☝ ՞ਊ ՞）☝
(◞≼ ⌒ ≽◟◞౪◟◞≼ ⌒ ≽◟)x1.3で再び見参

Thanks mod

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-15T07:55:56+00:00

Update.

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-15T10:28:43+00:00

@putigame

SPOILER

putigame wrote:
mod

いやぁ～！まじ神曲です>w<
そんなことはさておき＾＾；
下からmodです！

Easy

00:00:392~00:06:992　ここの部分っていらないような気がします。実際にプレイしてみたのですが、いきなりスライダーが来てびっくりしました。　break time は全diff統一させたいのでここはkeepで。
01:45:992~01:48:292　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　③のスライダー。①のスライダーと③のスライダーの始点が縦線一本分だけずれてます。　(3)のSliderは(1)のSliderより短くなっているので始端終端と意図的に一本ずつずらしています。
01:55:592~01:58:792　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　①の往復スライダー。①のスライダーの終点と①の往復スライダーの始点（終点）の高さはそろえたほうがきれいだと思います。　確かにそうなのですが、流れが急になってしまうのでここはあわせていないです。

以上です。

thanks modding!

@Suzully

SPOILER

Suzully wrote:
ﾖｲﾖｲ

[litoluna's Easy]
01:04:392 (1) - ココにNew comboは要らないんじゃないかなーって気がしますん。 fixed
02:08:392 (1) - ^　fixed

thanks modding~!

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-15T14:40:08+00:00

Sorry for the late reply due to real life and enjoying leagueoflegends

The replies are in the spoilerbox below! Thank you for modding!

SPOILER

Natsu wrote:
Normal:
Hp and Od +1 (4) to balance settings and the spread of the mapset. - same to wring, I leave it to Satellite :/ +1ing the difficulties while the Hard is not looks unbalance, too
00:35:592 (1,2) - Fix the distance - well the 2 is placed in very long time (approx 800ms) after the (1) ends, so even beginner can catch up the a bit far spacing
00:43:592 (3,1) - i see its intencional owo but the gap is not that big for ignore the distance so better use the properly one - adjusted.
00:50:792 (2,3,4) - kinda hard for a normal I preffer if you use a 1/2 repeat slider instead
00:56:392 (1,2) - Fix the distance here you are using 1.10 in kiai but this one just have 1.0 will feel awkward to play - fixed this and some places where were used 1.0x spacing in kiais
01:03:592 (2,3,4) - same as above reducing and increasing the distance in a normal diff is not suitable for a normal diff
01:05:992 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:392 (5,6,7) - and here why you reduce it to 0.90? kinda weird imo
01:24:992 move this to x:436 y:172 - done
01:33:192 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fix the distance to 1.0 really hard to read in 0.90 thougt - rearranged and fixed this problem. the pattern itself did not look so great...
01:50:392 maybe convert this one in 2 circles since the chorus start in 01:50:792 and it need an action (circle or slider head) so the player can have a better feedback with the music imo
01:51:992 (3,1,2,3) - use a properly distance
02:26:592 (2,3) - consider to use a slider instead of the stacked circles they play really bad for a new player - fixed
02:27:392 (4,1) - ^
02:53:192 (3,1) - well this jump is really big for a normal O.O reduce the distance? - the actual distance is 1.25x, but yeah it looks big so reduced
03:16:392 (2,3,4) - this dont flow good with previous slider since newbies tend to move in a circular way this will break theirs hand IMO using a repeat slider or rearrange the shape will be better - re-arranged
03:21:192 (6,7,8) - is the first time you use a triple stack in all the diff this can be surprising for players and not readable in first time betterunstack them and use a properly distance - okay
I like this normal but I dont agree with the distance changes in various points them play weird imo

- Well I do not think the changing spacing in some places in kiais is bad. The triplets in 1/2 rhythm is slightly hard (you mention this, too) so I've reduced the spacing and made the cursor moving a bit easier. the spacing changes are not so huge and the rhythm is fairly simple so Normal players could manage it. And as you can see some harder difficulties with streams in narrower spacing, and I think this diff is to be a step-up for harder diffs. I hope this explanation is good enough. Thank you for pointing out though, I could have a good opportunity to consider about this

Suzully wrote:
ﾖｲﾖｲ

[Naryuga's Normal]
00:25:992 (1) - whistleはちょっと耳についてヤだなー
01:29:992 (1) - ^ - removed both whistles
綺麗にまとまっててイイね！
whistleの置き方にもう少し統一感があるとベター！ありがとうございます！

putigame wrote:
mod

Normal

AR5はちょっと高い気がします。normalといえばAR3か4というイメージがあるのでこの曲もAR4ぐらいがいいと思います。 ARが難易度順に3->5->7->8となっているので十分良いバランスだと思われます。3 diff構成ならNormalのはだいたい3か4程度になりますが、ここではEasyがあるためそのような構成のNormal diffよりは多少むずかしくセッティングしてあります
02:08:392~02:09:192　ここの⑤のスライダー。このスライダーの中心は中央の縦線上に持っていったほうがきれいな配置になると思います。- たしかに次の02:09:992 (1) - の角度を見るとこっちのがよさそう...? とりあえず指摘どおりに
03:21:192~03:21:592　ここの⑥⑦⑧のサークル。この３つのサークルは重ねない配置にしたほうがいいと思います。- 変えました

To Satellite:

Updates

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200,332,186792,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,308,187192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,189192,12,0,191992,0:0:0:0:
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140,260,193192,2,0,P|200:264|260:260,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,217992,12,2,221192,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-15T14:45:06+00:00

Update.

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2013-11-15T20:05:04+00:00

おはようございます。朝です。

[Satellite]
03:28:392 (1) - ここと 03:15:592 (1) - ここは同じ音なのでこの音取りで合わせたほうがいいような

他はないです。
頑張ってください(TAT)b

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-15T20:05:41+00:00

Lecana wrote:
おはようございます。朝です。

[Satellite]
03:28:392 (1) - ここと 03:15:592 (1) - ここは同じ音なのでこの音取りで合わせたほうがいいような

あわせました
他はないです。
頑張ってください(TAT)b

thanks for modding

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2013-11-16T11:06:39+00:00

うぉおおおおおおおおおおおおお＼( 'ω')／

[Naryuga's Normal]

●ブックマークの線が微妙にずれているのがありました。（別に直さなくてもいいです( 'ω')
●00:18:792 (5) - ここだけwhistleがついているのは違和感を感じる。

●00:24:192 (4) - 終点にwhistleを追加。
-00:26:792 (3) - ^
-00:28:792 (7) - whistleを追加。
-00:33:192 (3) - 真ん中にwhistleを追加。
-00:35:192 (6) - whistleを追加。
これらをセットに考えてください。何の音かわかりませんが、ピアノみたいな音が強くなっているので、追加することをおすすめします。 clapと被っていても、普通につけてもありかと思います。

●00:37:992 (2) - スペーシングがここだけ1.20xなのはおかしいと思います。今まで、1.00xあたりになっているけど、ここだけ急に1.20xはないと思います。 1.00xくらいに変えても全然問題はないと思うので、変えてください。　このように、1.00xでもいい感じな配置ができます　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104959
●00:45:192 (1) - 終点の音( ・∀・) ｲｲﾈ！

●00:47:592~00:50:792 - スペーシングがバラバラなのがとても気になります。　HardやInsaneならまだしも、バラバラなのはおかしいのではないかと思います。1.10xや0.90xなど、分けている理由も私にはわかりますが、ここはNormal diffっていうことなので、基本スペーシングは統一されるべきだと思います。　ただ、例外がありまして、 00:46:792 (1)のような見た目のために、しょうがないっていう場合は問題ないと私は思っていますが、この部分については、スペーシング統一させるほうがbetterだと思います。　もしスペーシングが広いなぁーって思っている場合、0.8xまたは0.9xなどでこの部分以外も合わせて、全部なおすといいかもです。
●00:51:592~00:59:192 ^
●01:00:992~01:11:592 ^

●01:28:192 (3) - 終点にwhistleを追加。
-01:30:792 (2) - ^
-01:32:792 (6) - whistleを追加。
-01:37:192 (3) - 真ん中にwhistleを追加。
-01:38:792 (5) - whistleを追加。　（つけ忘れだと思います）
1番と同じ理由です。

●01:31:592 (3,4,5,6) -　これと次の（１）の始点で★みたいな形つくるといいかもです：３　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1105010
Code入れとくんで、気に入ってくれれば使ってくださいな。

350,82,91592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,28,91992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,111,92392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,215,92792,1,10,0:0:0:0:

●01:43:392 (2) - しっかりとスタックされてない。　細かいことだけど、右上のスペーシング見て調整オナシャス！
●01:44:992 (4) - ^
●01:50:792 (1,2) - 1番と同じ理由でスペーシング。
●01:51:992 (4) - ここも。
●01:52:392 (1,2,3) - 01:51:592 (3)がスペーシング1.00xなのに、ここはスペーシングが0.90xっていうのはおかしいと思います。
●01:53:592~01:55:592 - ここも。
●01:57:192~02:00:792 - ^
●02:02:392~02:03:592 - ^
●02:05:192 (1) - ^ わざわざ、スペーシングを0.1x+しているのは変かな。。 1.00xでおk
●02:05:992 (3) - ^
●02:06:792 (1) - ^
●02:07:592 (3) - ^
●02:08:392~02:09:992 - ^
●02:13:592~02:15:592 - ^
●02:29:992 (2) - 始点にwhistleを追加。　曲にフィットしちゃいます。
●02:30:792 (3) - ^
●02:31:592 (5) - ^
●02:35:192 (6) - whistleを追加。　上と同じ理由～
●02:37:192 (4) - 始点にwhistleを追加。　同じく～
●02:37:792 (5) - ^
●02:39:592 (2) - whistleを追加。　o/
●02:39:992 (3) - ここも欲しいかも。
●02:41:592 (4) - ^
●02:40:792 (2,3,4,1) - スペーシング D: 1.00x がb
●02:54:792 (1) - 静かなスライダーを演出したいのに、tickの音が聞こえて台無しになっていると思います。　そのため、tickの音を小さくする緑線を追加することをおすすめします。音量は20%くらいがいいかもですー
●03:09:192 (1) - 終点、音量小さいほうが素敵です。音量20%をキボンヌ。
●03:12:392 (1,2) - スペーシング：３　１番や２番と同じ～
●03:14:792 (5) - ^
●03:16:392~03:24:792 - ^
●03:28:392~03:33:592 - ^
●03:35:592~03:37:192 - ^
●03:22:792 (2) - 始点にwhistleを欲しい。

x_x

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-18T13:27:57+00:00

litoluna is kawaii (sorry for a bit late reply)

-Gamu- wrote:
うぉおおおおおおおおおおおおお＼( 'ω')／

[Naryuga's Normal]

●ブックマークの線が微妙にずれているのがありました。（別に直さなくてもいいです( 'ω') - いろいろと面倒なので最後にひとつだけ青線引きました
●00:18:792 (5) - ここだけwhistleがついているのは違和感を感じる。 - removed

●00:24:192 (4) - 終点にwhistleを追加。
-00:26:792 (3) - ^
-00:28:792 (7) - whistleを追加。
-00:33:192 (3) - 真ん中にwhistleを追加。
-00:35:192 (6) - whistleを追加。
これらをセットに考えてください。何の音かわかりませんが、ピアノみたいな音が強くなっているので、追加することをおすすめします。 clapと被っていても、普通につけてもありかと思います。- clap+whistleの発想はなかった、、、　試してみます

●00:37:992 (2) - スペーシングがここだけ1.20xなのはおかしいと思います。今まで、1.00xあたりになっているけど、ここだけ急に1.20xはないと思います。 1.00xくらいに変えても全然問題はないと思うので、変えてください。　このように、1.00xでもいい感じな配置ができます　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1104959 - re-arranged
●00:45:192 (1) - 終点の音( ・∀・) ｲｲﾈ！ - 正直これ以外にどうしようか悩むレベルでフィットしたので気に入ってます

●00:47:592~00:50:792 - スペーシングがバラバラなのがとても気になります。　HardやInsaneならまだしも、バラバラなのはおかしいのではないかと思います。1.10xや0.90xなど、分けている理由も私にはわかりますが、ここはNormal diffっていうことなので、基本スペーシングは統一されるべきだと思います。　ただ、例外がありまして、 00:46:792 (1)のような見た目のために、しょうがないっていう場合は問題ないと私は思っていますが、この部分については、スペーシング統一させるほうがbetterだと思います。　もしスペーシングが広いなぁーって思っている場合、0.8xまたは0.9xなどでこの部分以外も合わせて、全部なおすといいかもです。
- umm the second person who pointed out this with resonable words... ok 1.00xでkiaisをリマップしました
●00:51:592~00:59:192 ^
●01:00:992~01:11:592 ^

●01:28:192 (3) - 終点にwhistleを追加。
-01:30:792 (2) - ^
-01:32:792 (6) - whistleを追加。
-01:37:192 (3) - 真ん中にwhistleを追加。
-01:38:792 (5) - whistleを追加。　（つけ忘れだと思います）
1番と同じ理由です。　- done

●01:31:592 (3,4,5,6) -　これと次の（１）の始点で★みたいな形つくるといいかもです：３　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1105010
Code入れとくんで、気に入ってくれれば使ってくださいな。 - そのまんま使ってみます ty and sorry for code stealing
350,82,91592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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●01:43:392 (2) - しっかりとスタックされてない。　細かいことだけど、右上のスペーシング見て調整オナシャス！- あるぇーーここ直したはずなのに…
●01:44:992 (4) - ^ - こっちはどう動かしてもこれが限界、のはず…
●01:50:792 (1,2) - 1番と同じ理由でスペーシング。
●01:51:992 (4) - ここも。
●01:52:392 (1,2,3) - 01:51:592 (3)がスペーシング1.00xなのに、ここはスペーシングが0.90xっていうのはおかしいと思います。
●01:53:592~01:55:592 - ここも。
●01:57:192~02:00:792 - ^
●02:02:392~02:03:592 - ^
●02:05:192 (1) - ^ わざわざ、スペーシングを0.1x+しているのは変かな。。 1.00xでおk
●02:05:992 (3) - ^
●02:06:792 (1) - ^
●02:07:592 (3) - ^
●02:08:392~02:09:992 - ^
●02:13:592~02:15:592 - ^
●02:29:992 (2) - 始点にwhistleを追加。　曲にフィットしちゃいます。
●02:30:792 (3) - ^
●02:31:592 (5) - ^
●02:35:192 (6) - whistleを追加。　上と同じ理由～
●02:37:192 (4) - 始点にwhistleを追加。　同じく～
●02:37:792 (5) - ^
●02:39:592 (2) - whistleを追加。　o/
●02:39:992 (3) - ここも欲しいかも。
●02:41:592 (4) - ^　- この辺はギターに合わせて指摘のようにwhistlesを置くと雑多に聞こえてかえって少々うっとうしい感じがしてきました……逆に1かたまり分だけ変な感じのがあったのでそっちのwhistleを削除しました、soft-normal hitsoundの音でシンプルに行きたい気分といいますか感じがします
●02:40:792 (2,3,4,1) - スペーシング D: 1.00x がb - ok fixed
●02:54:792 (1) - 静かなスライダーを演出したいのに、tickの音が聞こえて台無しになっていると思います。　そのため、tickの音を小さくする緑線を追加することをおすすめします。音量は20%くらいがいいかもですー
●03:09:192 (1) - 終点、音量小さいほうが素敵です。音量20%をキボンヌ。- applied both mutes
●03:12:392 (1,2) - スペーシング：３　１番や２番と同じ～
●03:14:792 (5) - ^
●03:16:392~03:24:792 - ^
●03:28:392~03:33:592 - ^
●03:35:592~03:37:192 - ^
●03:22:792 (2) - 始点にwhistleを欲しい。 - done #1kiaiも同じことしました

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Thank ゅ!!!! ('､3[__

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208,224,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,276,204392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
264,164,204792,2,0,L|228:104,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,60,205192,6,0,P|316:32|368:60,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,112,205992,2,0,B|408:156|436:192|436:192|408:228|396:272,1,180
348,308,206792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,276,206992,2,0,L|296:216,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,52,209392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,136,211792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Satellite

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Satellite 2013-11-18T17:43:55+00:00

Update.

ayaka2000

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ayaka2000 2013-11-25T11:41:34+00:00

はじめまして。更新お疲れ様でした。
全体的に、よく仕上がっているように思いました。
もうすぐrankdになりそうで楽しみです。

指摘できるような身分ではないですが、気になった点を書いておきます。

Normal 01:48:292 ③の終わりに違和感を覚えました。

ハード 00:39:792この②と③がどうしても叩きにくいです。
私が、下手だからかもしれませんが　笑。

ayaka2000

55 posts

Joined June 2013

ayaka2000 2013-11-26T04:47:16+00:00

はじめてkudosuが貰えました。
あなたの譜面をとても気に入っています。rankdになるのが楽しみでもあります。
えっと、このkudosuをあなたに差し上げたいと思うのですが、その場合は、どこから
プレゼントをすればいいのでしょうか？
初心者ですいません、どなたかわかる方いらっしゃったら、お返事いただけると助かります。

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-11-29T00:32:18+00:00

[General]
You should try adding more volume changes to fit with the song. The volume of some hitsounds some too closely related.

[Satellite]
The beginner part, until the first break, is rather TOO symmetrical
00:45:192 (1) - You should make this slider's end silent
01:41:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - THIS IS THE SAME AS LAST TIME, WHY NOT SOMETHING NEW?

[wring's Hard]
00:39:792 (3) - Resnap this
00:41:392 (6) - Same as above
01:43:792 (3) - ^
01:45:392 (6) - ^
01:49:192 (1) - Suggestion: Why don't you make the spinner until 01:50:792 ? I think it'll match with the guitar, since the guitar this time don't end. I think this means you'll have to arrange the hit objects again
02:42:992 (3) - Resnap
02:44:592 (3) - ^
02:56:392 - Try reducing the volume to a 20-45 range, you didn't make many change to the volume. It was 70 up until 03:09:292

[litoluna'a Easy]
03:09:192 (1,2) - Make the slider's ends silent

Yeah

wring

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Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-29T10:38:19+00:00

-APXH wrote:
[wring's Hard]
00:39:792 (3) - Resnap this
00:41:392 (6) - Same as above
01:43:792 (3) - ^
01:45:392 (6) - ^
01:49:192 (1) - Suggestion: Why don't you make the spinner until 01:50:792 ? I think it'll match with the guitar, since the guitar this time don't end. I think this means you'll have to arrange the hit objects again Because I followed main melody that was vocal. I know what you said but 01:50:792 - starts the main, so I didn't choose guitar.
02:42:992 (3) - Resnap
02:44:592 (3) - ^
02:56:392 - Try reducing the volume to a 20-45 range, you didn't make many change to the volume. It was 70 up until 03:09:292 umm... I like the hitsounds even if it's a slow and quiet part. If another pointed this again, then I will consider it again.

The stack won't be matter I think.

Naryuga

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Naryuga 2013-11-29T11:11:11+00:00

@ayaka2000

How to present your kudosu

kudosuを持っていることを確認し、好きなPending譜面のforumの上のほうにいきます
Shoot a kudosu star! を押すと確認画面が出ます
OKを押すとkudosuがひとつ消費され、kudosuをプレゼントされた譜面はpriorityが増え注目を少し浴びやすくなります

Very easy!!!!!

Normalの 01:47:592 (3) - ですが、リズムはボーカルに添う形が一番自然かなと思ったのでこのようにしています
スライダーの形などの話でしたら…… any ideas?

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