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Satellite

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-14T00:52:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月11日 at 10:45:42

Artist: senya
Title: Bondage Anemonation
Source: Touhou
Tags: chen dagger-gazel litoluna naryuga wring yuuhei iceon kamasetora otodama The Fantastic Legend of Tohno Perfect Cherry Blossom Kouroumu 9 sokubaku
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6778kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:

litoluna's Easy (2.05 stars, 197 notes)
Lunatic (5 stars, 621 notes)
Naryuga's Normal (3.8 stars, 294 notes)
wring's Hard (4.78 stars, 478 notes)

Download: senya - Bondage Anemonation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Title: 束縛アネモネーション
Arrangement: iceon
Lyrics: かませ虎
Vocals: senya
Circle: 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite)
Album: Bondage Anemonation / 束縛アネモネーション
Original Source: 遠野幻想物語 / The Fantastic Legend of Tohno
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mapset

Easy by litoluna

Normal by Naryuga

Hard by wring

Satellite by me
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Guest thanks you
litoluna
Naryuga
wring
Thanks Modding Help!!

SPOILER

Delis
Losertic
Hanabi-
Guy
CakiP
kajiyatta
Pandiar
Natsu
putigame
Suzully
Lecana
-Gamu-
ayaka2000
-APXH
10nya
jonathanlfj
Scorpiour

Last edited by Satellite 2014-05-19T07:28:34+00:00, edited 106 times in total.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-10-19T06:52:18+00:00

1st! Ganbattee :3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-19T12:26:44+00:00

10nya wrote:
1st! Ganbattee :3

OMG
thanks star~ >w<
~~10nya rename so good~~

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2013-10-27T09:29:40+00:00

random mod

[General]

disable countdown and letterbox during breaks '^'

[Satellite]

00:19:592 (1) - 頭にfinishあってもいいんじゃないかなー？
00:33:192 (4) - CTRL+Gのほうが若干良くなる気が！
00:40:792 - サークル追加、かなり叩きやすくなるかと思います。
00:51:592 (1,2,3,4) - なんかSatelliteさんっぽくない....
01:10:792 (1) - もうちょっとまっすぐにしたほうが良くないかな？
SPOILER
01:44:792 - add a circle !_!
01:49:192 (1) - うしろにwhistleわすれてる・・？
01:55:992 (3) - 終点1glid 左にずらして直線にしたほうが、綺麗になるような！
02:03:192 (4) - スライダーの代わりにサークル2個のほうが、~~DoubleTime的に~~面白くなるかと！
02:16:392 (7) - ちゃっとスタックされてますし提案なんですけど、x332 y196ぐらいまで飛ばしてみるのはどうでしょうー。難しくはなりませんし、面白くなるような。
02:47:992 (5,3) - 曲げたほうが見た目よくならないかなー？
SPOILER
02:53:192 (1,2,3) - わざとかも知れないけど、こんな感じだと思います。ｗ。
SPOILER
03:01:192 (1,2,3,4) - こういう配置どうでしょう、現在の配置に少し違和感を感じたので。(4は1の下)
SPOILER
一応こーども
```
220,44,181192,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,172,181392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,181592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,44,181792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
03:10:792 (1) - tickのvolumeが少し大きいかなー？と感じたので、03:10:892 - ここに50~60%くらいの緑線置いてもいいような！
03:15:592 (1,2) - 1番、2番と同じように音を取ったほうが、叩きやすいんじゃないでしょうか？少し違和感ありました。
03:37:592 (4) - 直前のスライダーの角度的に、直線スライダーは合ってないように思いました。95度くらい回転させてみては。
lastのkiai,1番、2番と比べて全体的に連打が少ないような..＞＿＜

[litoluna's Normal]

00:13:192 (1) - あんまり見た目良くないかな？と思ったのでこういうようにしてみては！
SPOILER
01:50:792 (1) - スライダーの終点を10glidくらい..下げたら私の好きな形になるんですけどどうでしょう～
02:15:592 (3) - こういう音取りどうですか！最後と同じ感じで。
SPOILER
03:00:792 (5) - 私の好みですけどwhistleどうですかー
03:04:792 (2) - これも！
03:07:992 (6) - ^
かくことない・・・

~~star~~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-10-27T10:38:49+00:00

Delis wrote:
random mod

[General]
disable countdown and letterbox during breaks '^'
[Satellite]
00:19:592 (1) - 頭にfinishあってもいいんじゃないかなー？ Nooo
00:33:192 (4) - CTRL+Gのほうが若干良くなる気が！
00:40:792 - サークル追加、かなり叩きやすくなるかと思います。
00:51:592 (1,2,3,4) - なんかSatelliteさんっぽくない....
01:10:792 (1) - もうちょっとまっすぐにしたほうが良くないかな？
SPOILER
01:44:792 - add a circle !_!
01:49:192 (1) - うしろにwhistleわすれてる・・？ Nooo
01:55:992 (3) - 終点1glid 左にずらして直線にしたほうが、綺麗になるような！
02:03:192 (4) - スライダーの代わりにサークル2個のほうが、~~DoubleTime的に~~面白くなるかと！
02:16:392 (7) - ちゃっとスタックされてますし提案なんですけど、x332 y196ぐらいまで飛ばしてみるのはどうでしょうー。難しくはなりませんし、面白くなるような。
02:47:992 (5,3) - 曲げたほうが見た目よくならないかなー？
SPOILER
02:53:192 (1,2,3) - わざとかも知れないけど、こんな感じだと思います。ｗ。
SPOILER
03:01:192 (1,2,3,4) - こういう配置どうでしょう、現在の配置に少し違和感を感じたので。(4は1の下) Nooo
SPOILER
一応こーども
220,44,181192,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,172,181392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,181592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,44,181792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
03:10:792 (1) - tickのvolumeが少し大きいかなー？と感じたので、03:10:892 - ここに50~60%くらいの緑線置いてもいいような！
03:15:592 (1,2) - 1番、2番と同じように音を取ったほうが、叩きやすいんじゃないでしょうか？少し違和感ありました。 Nooo
03:37:592 (4) - 直前のスライダーの角度的に、直線スライダーは合ってないように思いました。95度くらい回転させてみては。

lastのkiai,1番、2番と比べて全体的に連打が少ないような..＞＿＜
~~star~~

記載のないところはAll fixed.
Generalと緑線などはあとでdiffがそろってからまとめてやります！
thanks modding!

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-10-29T04:15:19+00:00

@Delis

Delis wrote:
random mod

[litoluna's Normal]
00:13:192 (1) - あんまり見た目良くないかな？と思ったのでこういうようにしてみては！
SPOILER
01:50:792 (1) - スライダーの終点を10glidくらい..下げたら私の好きな形になるんですけどどうでしょう～
02:15:592 (3) - こういう音取りどうですか！最後と同じ感じで。
SPOILER
03:00:792 (5) - 私の好みですけどwhistleどうですかー
03:04:792 (2) - これも！
03:07:992 (6) - ^
かくことない・・・
~~star~~

allfixed
thanks modding Delis chan~ \^^/

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: sokubaku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46800
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6800,13200,75600,77200,139600,149200,176400,221200
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bondage Anemonation
TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Satellite
Version:litoluna's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:dagger-gazel
BeatmapID:317729
BeatmapSetID:122416

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,6992,11872
2,139792,147872
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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272,76,67992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,32,68392,2,0,P|362:75|350:118,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,69192,6,0,P|244:244|272:328,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,71192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,160,71592,2,0,P|444:204|432:248,2,90,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72492,12,2,75592,0:0:0:0:
104,68,77192,6,0,P|72:152|104:232,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,78392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,232,78792,2,0,P|300:220|344:232,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,280,79592,2,0,L|468:260,2,45,2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,326,80392,6,0,P|299:338|256:328,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,280,81192,2,0,P|157:240|156:191,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,112,81992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,52,82392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,112,82792,2,0,L|372:112,2,45,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,83592,6,0,L|190:237,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,84392,2,0,P|192:320|272:280,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,85592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,132,85992,2,0,L|412:132,2,45,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,86792,6,0,P|236:120|192:132,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,87592,2,0,P|192:220|236:208,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,212,88392,6,0,P|433:214|370:125,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,89992,6,0,P|210:76|122:74,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,212,91992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,288,92392,2,0,P|320:300|276:288,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,93192,6,0,P|188:201|145:213,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,292,93992,2,0,P|147:302|190:290,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,94792,2,0,L|297:146,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,60,95592,2,0,L|208:123,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,196,96392,6,0,P|145:283|204:351,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,124,98392,2,0,L|304:124,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,99192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,36,99592,2,0,P|468:80|456:124,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,100392,2,0,P|376:216|332:204,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,101192,6,0,P|183:115|241:208,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,204,102792,6,0,P|372:257|375:324,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,104392,2,0,P|211:106|208:39,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,212,105992,6,0,P|252:252|176:208,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,107192,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,104,107592,2,0,P|252:72|184:104,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,292,109192,6,0,P|219:349|256:236,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,110792,6,0,P|128:120|40:140,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,112792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,312,113192,2,0,P|348:304|390:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,113992,6,0,L|464:140,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,324,115192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,280,115592,6,0,P|312:231|224:220,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,116592,2,0,L|184:292,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,117192,6,0,P|68:176|23:97,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,220,119192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,164,119592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,164,119792,2,0,L|348:176,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,136,120392,2,0,P|255:92|267:47,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,92,121192,6,0,P|384:104|432:92,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,50,122392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,92,122792,2,0,P|172:140|184:180,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,244,123592,6,0,P|332:264|420:244,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,200,125592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,128,125992,2,0,P|104:80|112:36,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,126792,6,0,P|236:88|280:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,40,127592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,80,127992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,124,128392,6,0,P|286:174|235:248,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,129392,2,0,L|284:320,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,276,129992,6,0,P|105:281|29:329,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,131992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,132392,2,0,P|372:292|360:248,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,133192,6,0,P|208:151|118:139,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,135192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,332,135592,2,0,P|360:344|316:332,2,90,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136492,12,0,139592,0:0:0:0:
316,168,149192,6,0,P|400:144|488:168,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,151192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,151592,2,0,P|152:316|112:304,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,152392,6,0,P|56:148|120:88,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,153592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,116,153992,2,0,P|368:208|256:236,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,155592,6,0,P|117:152|55:146,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,157192,2,0,P|318:275|380:281,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,158792,2,0,P|240:104|252:60,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,159592,2,0,P|344:148|332:192,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,160392,6,0,P|255:345|343:280,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,189,161992,6,0,P|391:153|459:141,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,163592,2,0,P|197:272|129:284,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,190,165192,6,0,P|377:118|333:42,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,166392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
229,190,166792,2,0,P|192:260|228:324,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,168392,6,0,P|411:128|402:65,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,169992,2,0,P|264:283|273:346,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,171592,6,0,P|240:96|160:132,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,172792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,276,173192,2,0,P|228:312|308:312,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,174792,6,0,P|256:72|136:128,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,176392,6,0,P|157:252|241:253,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,178392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,178792,2,0,P|176:56|224:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,140,179592,2,0,P|312:146|356:138,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,180792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,181192,6,0,P|188:268|260:224,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,182192,2,0,L|345:118,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,182792,6,0,P|454:119|485:201,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,184792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,156,185192,2,0,P|208:200|220:244,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,292,185992,2,0,P|308:248|296:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,186792,2,0,P|176:144|132:156,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,206,187992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,248,188392,2,0,P|388:204|376:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,189192,6,0,P|196:66|109:165,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,190792,2,0,B|170:277|231:240|231:240|292:203|359:229,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,192392,6,0,P|460:184|440:96,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,194392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,194792,2,0,P|232:268|188:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,195592,2,0,P|104:280|116:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,196392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,196792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,56,197192,6,0,P|279:107|282:193,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,198192,2,0,L|275:284,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,198792,6,0,P|133:207|82:278,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,200792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,292,201192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,292,201392,2,0,L|380:336,2,45,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,252,201992,6,0,P|412:208|400:164,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,108,202792,2,0,P|320:64|332:20,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,166,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,244,204392,2,0,P|400:256|356:244,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,176,205192,6,0,P|225:127|136:115,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,245,207192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,324,207592,2,0,P|360:336|316:324,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,264,208392,2,0,P|209:253|166:265,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,325,209592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,264,209992,6,0,P|428:192|384:116,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,88,210992,2,0,L|348:40,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,116,211592,6,0,P|221:96|166:32,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,80,213592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,36,213992,2,0,P|484:80|472:128,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,176,214792,6,0,P|312:156|228:176,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,228,215992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,308,216392,2,0,P|156:320|200:308,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,217192,2,0,P|272:200|260:156,2,90,4|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,218092,12,0,221192,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-03T06:50:36+00:00

Move Pending Beatmaps

ready for mod

:3

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-11-03T08:33:23+00:00

Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

Pass.

litoluna's Normal

00:06:792 (1) - ....NC??
00:35:592 (1) - remove NC like 00:22:792 (4,5) - 00:29:192 (4,5) -
00:52:592 (2) - move (256,121)?? 0.94x → 0.98x and 00:53:192 (1) - move (292,148)?
01:33:192 (1) - remove NC, 01:34:792 (1) - NC. like 00:29:192 (4,5,1,2) -
03:02:192 (2) - remove this slider..?? hmm
03:02:792 (1) - move (376,88)

wring's Hard

00:18:792 (3) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077221

[*]00:20:392 (2) - change slider shape? (same '1' slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077223
[*]00:29:792 - add note?
[*]00:51:192 (5) - move slider axis? ex) (84,319) umm.
[*]03:01:992 (4) - ctrl+h?
[*]03:15:192 (6) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077233

Insane

no problem....maybe? nice mapset. really.

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-03T11:59:29+00:00

@Losertic

Losertic wrote:
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding
General
Pass.
litoluna's Normal
00:06:792 (1) - ....NC??
00:35:592 (1) - remove NC like 00:22:792 (4,5) - 00:29:192 (4,5) -
00:52:592 (2) - move (256,121)?? 0.94x → 0.98x and 00:53:192 (1) - move (292,148)?
01:33:192 (1) - remove NC, 01:34:792 (1) - NC. like 00:29:192 (4,5,1,2) -
03:02:192 (2) - remove this slider..?? hmm
03:02:792 (1) - move (376,88)

all fixed
thanks modding~!

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-11-05T07:28:09+00:00

Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Normal]
00:05:192 (4) - try this shape

00:52:792 (2) - quite hard to newbeies. try this rythm

01:05:392 (2) - ^
00:55:592 (3,4) - quite hard to notice unstack. try to change 2 sliders
01:59:592 (3,4) - ^
01:28:392 (1) - use mute slidertick
02:43:592 (2) - 265||249 for flow
02:54:792 (1) - use mute slidertick
02:15:592 (3) - this fits exatly with music

03:37:192 (4) - same with above

[Hard]
00:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - make it same shape with 00:14:792 (4,5,6,7)
00:39:392 (2,3) - unstacked
00:40:992 (5,6) - ^
02:42:592 (2,3,2,3) - ^
01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - too far jump imo

suggestion

02:46:792 (4) - you can use red point to make it more pretty

[Satellite]
00:00:392 (1,2,3) - distance
00:59:892 - remove note?

try this :>

01:50:792 (1) - 400||68
03:32:192 (3) - hiw about place at 256||352
03:35:592 (3,4) - ctrl + g on each for better flow / ctrl + h on 03:36:392 (1,2,3,4)

i love this map :> good luck~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-05T12:57:50+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Satellite]
00:00:392 (1,2,3) - distance
OK
00:59:892 - remove note?
try this :>
OK remake
01:50:792 (1) - 400||68
OK
03:32:192 (3) - hiw about place at 256||352
Kept
03:35:592 (3,4) - ctrl + g on each for better flow / ctrl + h on 03:36:392 (1,2,3,4)
OK

i love this map :> good luck~

thanks for modding

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-11-05T13:55:07+00:00

Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Satellite]

00:05:192 (1) - 1grid右に移動しましょう　終端の位置が綺麗になります。　変えたらこっちも00:05:792 (2,3) - お忘れなく
00:36:192 (3,6) - clap合いそうだけどどうだろう
00:45:192 (1) - 音楽に合っててセンスを感じました。ただ個人的には終端の音をSampleset Drumにしてほしい・・・
01:16:392 - ここadd noteしてカッコイイ音取りしたい
01:23:192 (9,10) - backの音的にここも1/4スライダー入りそうだけど俺は入れたほうが好きです。
01:49:192 (1) - ちょっとbackの音が１番と違うけどdrumでもよさそう。　あと１番はないけど２番は01:50:592 - ここにも音があるし完全コピーってのもちょっとなあって思いました。
02:28:392 (1,2) - リピート１個減らす？ 1/8はなるべく繋がってないほうが良かったような
03:15:592 (1,2) - ボーカルに合わせる感じでスライダーを1/2にして単発２個置いたほうがあってます。ほかのパートもそんな感じでした。

[wring's Hard]

01:27:392 (3) - (1)の始端にスタックしてあるため流れが悪くなっていると思います。x160 y80あたりに移動して円を描くような流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？
01:44:192 - こっちはadd noteしない感じですか？02:43:392 - こっちとbackの音は同じだと思うので入れてみてはどうでしょう

finishの提案
00:51:592 (1,5,1) -
00:57:992 (3,5) -
01:05:992 (1) - ^
01:09:192 (1,2,3,5) -
01:17:192 (1) -
01:36:392 (1) -
01:39:592 (1,2,3,5) - 5はheadとend両方
01:55:592 (1,5,1) -
02:01:992 (4,6) -
02:09:992 (1) -
02:13:192 (1,2,3,5) -
02:35:592 (1) -
03:17:192 (1,5,1) -
03:23:592 (1,3) -
03:31:592 (1) -
03:34:792 (1,2,1,3) -

~~boxが機能しない~~
[litoluna's Normal]

00:05:192 (4) - もっと包み込むようにしよう
SPOILER
00:38:792 (1,2) - 終端のfinishはちょっと煩い気がするのでclapでいいと思いました。
00:43:592 (3) - (1)のふくらみに合わせてblanketを作りましょう。
SPOILER
00:45:192 (1) - 終端にdrum sampleset入れてみてはどうでしょう？
00:51:592 (1) - tickにclap & 終端はfinishが合うと思います
01:04:392 (1) - ^
01:19:592 (4) - リピート部分のwhistleは合わないので削除?
01:42:792 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
01:55:592 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
02:08:392 (1) - ^
02:41:992 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
03:17:192 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
03:29:992 (1) - ^
03:37:192 (4) - 1サビ2サビは始端にfinishありませんでしたが統一してみてはどうでしょう

頑張ってください

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-05T15:45:44+00:00

@Sana

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Normal]
00:05:192 (4) - try this shape ok!
00:52:792 (2) - quite hard to newbeies. try this rythm I think no problem. but I will heal you are pointed out to other modder
01:05:392 (2) - ^ ^
00:55:592 (3,4) - quite hard to notice unstack. try to change 2 sliders change Rhythm and unstack~!
01:59:592 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:28:392 (1) - use mute slidertick no. Back Sound Waves
02:43:592 (2) - 265||249 for flow ok
02:54:792 (1) - use mute slidertick ok.volume10%
02:15:592 (3) - this fits exatly with music ok!
03:37:192 (4) - same with above ok!

i love this map :> good luck~

thanks modding Sana ~!

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-05T15:51:53+00:00

@Guy

Guy wrote:
[litoluna's Normal]

00:05:192 (4) - もっと包み込むようにしよう
collapsed text

00:38:792 (1,2) - 終端のfinishはちょっと煩い気がするのでclapでいいと思いました。
00:43:592 (3) - (1)のふくらみに合わせてblanketを作りましょう。
collapsed text

00:45:192 (1) - 終端にdrum sampleset入れてみてはどうでしょう？
00:51:592 (1) - tickにclap & 終端はfinishが合うと思います
01:04:392 (1) - ^
01:19:592 (4) - リピート部分のwhistleは合わないので削除?
01:42:792 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
01:55:592 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
02:08:392 (1) - ^
02:41:992 (1,2) - 00:38:792 (1,2) - と同じ
03:17:192 (1) - 00:51:592 (1) - と同じ
03:29:992 (1) - ^
03:37:192 (4) - 1サビ2サビは始端にfinishありませんでしたが統一してみてはどうでしょう

Quote機能が出てこなく、使えなかったのでおかしな部分ありますが気にしな....
~~Blanketが上手くできていれば~~Allfixed!!
moddingありがとうございました~!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: sokubaku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 46800
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bondage Anemonation
TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Satellite
Version:litoluna's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:chen dagger-gazel litoluna wring yuuhei iceon kamasetora otodama The Fantastic Legend of Tohno Perfect Cherry Blossom Kouroumu 9
BeatmapID:317729
BeatmapSetID:122416

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.9
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328,108,107592,2,0,P|252:72|184:100,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,292,109192,6,0,P|219:349|256:236,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,110792,6,0,P|128:120|40:140,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,112792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,312,113192,2,0,P|348:304|390:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,113992,6,0,L|464:140,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,324,115192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,280,115592,6,0,P|312:231|224:220,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,116592,2,0,L|184:292,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,117192,6,0,P|96:148|112:60,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,119192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,324,119592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,292,119792,2,0,P|340:248|328:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,120392,6,0,P|283:132|295:87,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,132,121192,2,0,P|412:144|460:132,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,122392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,44,122792,2,0,P|204:92|216:132,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,204,123592,6,0,P|356:180|444:204,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,256,125592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,204,125992,2,0,P|112:156|120:112,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,126792,6,0,P|236:72|280:64,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,36,127592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,84,127992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,124,128392,6,0,P|286:174|235:248,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,292,129392,2,0,L|284:320,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,276,129992,6,0,P|105:281|29:329,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,131992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,132392,2,0,P|372:292|360:248,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,200,133192,6,0,P|208:151|118:139,2,180,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,135192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,332,135592,2,0,P|360:344|320:336,2,67.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136392,12,2,139592,0:0:0:0:
316,168,149192,6,0,P|400:144|488:168,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,151192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,304,151592,2,0,P|152:316|112:304,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,236,152392,6,0,P|56:148|120:88,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,153592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,116,153992,2,0,P|368:208|256:236,1,270,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,155592,6,0,P|117:152|55:146,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,157192,2,0,P|318:275|380:281,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,158792,2,0,P|240:104|252:60,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,159592,2,0,P|344:148|332:192,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,160392,6,0,P|255:345|343:280,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,189,161992,6,0,P|391:153|459:141,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,248,163592,2,0,P|205:284|137:296,2,135,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,190,165192,6,0,P|377:118|333:42,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,116,166392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
229,190,166792,2,0,P|192:260|228:324,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,168392,6,0,P|411:128|402:65,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,220,169992,2,0,P|264:283|273:346,2,135,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,171592,6,0,P|240:96|160:132,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,172792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,276,173192,2,0,P|228:312|308:312,1,157.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,128,174792,6,0,P|256:72|136:128,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,176392,6,0,P|157:252|241:253,2,180,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,178392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,178792,2,0,P|176:56|224:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,140,179592,2,0,P|312:146|356:138,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,180792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,181192,6,0,P|188:268|260:224,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,182792,6,0,P|458:119|489:201,2,180,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,96,184792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,156,185192,2,0,P|208:200|220:244,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,292,185992,2,0,P|308:248|296:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,186792,2,0,P|176:144|132:156,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,206,187992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,248,188392,2,0,P|388:204|376:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,88,189192,6,0,P|196:66|109:165,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,190792,2,0,B|170:277|231:240|231:240|292:203|359:229,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,192392,6,0,P|460:184|440:96,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,316,194392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,280,194792,2,0,P|232:268|188:280,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,195592,2,0,P|104:280|116:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,196392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,196792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,56,197192,6,0,P|279:107|282:193,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,198192,2,0,L|275:284,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,198792,6,0,P|133:207|82:278,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,260,200792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,336,201192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,308,201392,2,0,P|380:260|368:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,188,201992,6,0,P|328:144|340:100,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,60,202792,2,0,P|432:104|420:148,2,90,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,20,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,60,204392,2,0,P|214:63|177:90,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,205192,6,0,P|110:247|30:289,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,207192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,60,207592,2,0,P|304:48|348:60,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,208392,2,0,P|427:104|438:61,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,209592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,136,209992,6,0,P|172:208|216:284,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,312,210992,2,0,L|252:360,2,45,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,211592,6,0,P|380:271|453:312,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,312,213592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,356,213992,2,0,P|116:312|128:264,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,192,214792,6,0,P|244:140|332:152,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,196,215992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,272,216392,2,0,P|408:284|364:272,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,217192,2,0,P|277:260|278:291,2,67.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217992,12,2,221192,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-05T16:04:44+00:00

Guy wrote:
Satellite

◾00:05:192 (1) - 1grid右に移動しましょう　終端の位置が綺麗になります。　変えたらこっちも00:05:792 (2,3) - お忘れなく
OK
◾00:36:192 (3,6) - clap合いそうだけどどうだろう
OK 後ろにも追加
◾00:45:192 (1) - 音楽に合っててセンスを感じました。ただ個人的には終端の音をSampleset Drumにしてほしい・・・
OK
◾01:16:392 - ここadd noteしてカッコイイ音取りしたい
休憩のつもりなのであけておきます！
◾01:23:192 (9,10) - backの音的にここも1/4スライダー入りそうだけど俺は入れたほうが好きです。
忙しすぎると思ったのでそのままで！
◾01:49:192 (1) - ちょっとbackの音が１番と違うけどdrumでもよさそう。　あと１番はないけど２番は01:50:592 - ここにも音があるし完全コピーってのもちょっとなあって思いました。
OK
◾02:28:392 (1,2) - リピート１個減らす？ 1/8はなるべく繋がってないほうが良かったような
BATさんに言われたら変えます！リピート減らしたらさびしいような・・・
◾03:15:592 (1,2) - ボーカルに合わせる感じでスライダーを1/2にして単発２個置いたほうがあってます。ほかのパートもそんな感じでした。
OK

もっどとすたーありがとうございました！

and Normal update~

CakiP

384 posts

Joined February 2012

CakiP 2013-11-06T23:26:43+00:00

さてらいとさんのりくえすと？

[litoluna's Normal]
00:37:192 (1) - Ctrl ＋Gの形のほうが流れにあっている気がします! もし直す場合はスペーシングも調整したほうがいいです。
00:52:592 (2) - Normalだとちょっと難しいかも？です。
00:55:592 (3) - 音取りの提案です。個人的にこうしたらしっくりきました。 http://puu.sh/5aO6t.jpg
01:05:392 (2) - ^
01:08:992 - 一つノートを置いてみるといいかもです。

指摘されているところと同じパターンを使っているところは一緒に見直してみてください!
配置が綺麗で、良いと思います!

[wring's Hard]
nothing~

すっごく良いです＞＜

[Insane]
02:33:992 (1) - ここのスライダーも連打に変えてみるとかどうです？

ん～～、指摘するところが見つかりません・・・。良いdiffです。

どのdiffも綺麗ですごくいいと思いました

すごく量が少なくなってしまい、内容も役立つかわかりません・・・、ごめんなさい～～～。
ランクド期待してます。がんばってください！

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-07T09:21:51+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi Satellite, litoluna, wring o/

[Hard]
00:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - make it same shape with 00:14:792 (4,5,6,7) no, I like this form
00:39:392 (2,3) - unstacked
00:40:992 (5,6) - ^
02:42:592 (2,3,2,3) - ^ umm, I think it's stacked..
01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - too far jump imo k, I will think another pattern.
suggestion
02:46:792 (4) - you can use red point to make it more pretty sorry no.

Guy wrote:
[wring's Hard]
01:27:392 (3) - (1)の始端にスタックしてあるため流れが悪くなっていると思います。x160 y80あたりに移動して円を描くような流れを作ってみてはどうでしょう？変えておきます
01:44:192 - こっちはadd noteしない感じですか？02:43:392 - こっちとbackの音は同じだと思うので入れてみてはどうでしょうすみません、わざとです

finishの提案
00:51:592 (1,5,1) -
00:57:992 (3,5) -
01:05:992 (1) - ^
01:09:192 (1,2,3,5) -
01:17:192 (1) -
01:36:392 (1) -
01:39:592 (1,2,3,5) - 5はheadとend両方
01:55:592 (1,5,1) -
02:01:992 (4,6) -
02:09:992 (1) -
02:13:192 (1,2,3,5) -
02:35:592 (1) -
03:17:192 (1,5,1) -
03:23:592 (1,3) -
03:31:592 (1) -
03:34:792 (1,2,1,3) -
参考にさせていただきます！

~~boxが機能しない~~ huehuehue

thanks mod

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-08T06:19:56+00:00

@CakiP

CakiP wrote:
さてらいとさんのりくえすと？

[litoluna's Normal]
00:37:192 (1) - Ctrl ＋Gの形のほうが流れにあっている気がします! もし直す場合はスペーシングも調整したほうがいいです。下から上がってくるほうが流れ的にいいかなとおもうのでno
00:52:592 (2) - Normalだとちょっと難しいかも？です。簡単にしました~!
00:55:592 (3) - 音取りの提案です。個人的にこうしたらしっくりきました。 http://puu.sh/5aO6t.jpg スライダー2つ使って簡単にしてみました。
01:05:392 (2) - ^　^
01:08:992 - 一つノートを置いてみるといいかもです。 no

指摘されているところと同じパターンを使っているところは一緒に見直してみてください!
配置が綺麗で、良いと思います!

どのdiffも綺麗ですごくいいと思いました
すごく量が少なくなってしまい、内容も役立つかわかりません・・・、ごめんなさい～～～。
ランクド期待してます。がんばってください！

Easy向けにRhythmを簡単にしたので音取り等の提案が通せず申し訳ないです。
Moddingありがとうございました。

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-11-09T02:26:30+00:00

M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
Placement
00:38:792(1) nazi, 360:284あたりにもってくると、前のスライダーと等間隔になっていいかも
01:47:592(3)もう少し上手く囲めると思います　e.g.)

SPOILER

03:01:192(1) ここだけNCかけるのもちょっと妙なのでNC削除
Hit Sonud
00:01:992(2) 音無いので終点のwhistle削除
00:13:192(1)始点のwhistle→finish
02:56:392~03：08：792　全部の白線にwhistleつけようとしても音取り上一定に刻めないので、1,3拍目の白線にのみwhistleを付けてみては？
[Hard]
Placement
01:04:792(2,3) 囲むように配置してみては e.g.)

SPOILER

01:08:792(5,6) CTRL+Gすると回りこむ流れのまま打てるのでいいと思います
01:20:392(1,2,3,4) 似たような提案

SPOILER

01:27:392(3) 無理にスタックさせるよりも弧を描くように配置したほうが打ちやすいです

SPOILER

01:58:792(1) nazi,前のスライダーと囲むようにしてみるといいかも
Rhythm
00:13:192　不要な緑線
Hit Sonud
もっとfinish付けてもいいような気が、意図的なら構いません

[Satellite]
Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど

SPOILER

01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう

SPOILER

01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては

Good Luck!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-09T17:49:31+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M

Placement
00:49:192(5,6,7,8) 同じとこにスタックさせてばかりなのもやや窮屈かなと思うので、少し飛ばしてこんな感じなど
SPOILER
あえてスタックさせてます :3
01:20:992(3) 116:264あたりに持ってきた方が次のスライダーを打ちやすいかも
これは指摘ミスでしょうか？少し的外れな場所になるような・・
01:25:592(2,3) ここも下に落とさず回す感じに配置すると打ちやすそう
SPOILER
Fix
01:37:592(5)　前のノートからボーカルが伸びている部分なので、ここはジャンプさせずDSの方が合っていると思います
バックを拾ってます
03:31:792(2,3,4) スペーシングを等間隔にしてみては
Rhythm
３が強調されてるように聞こえたのでこのままで
00:36:392(4) このスライダーは00:36:592で終わらせた方がいいです、ボーカルがここで終わってるので
こちらもバックの音を主体として拾ってます
Hit Sonud
00:39:392(2,1) whistleはあんま合わないような感じなのでDrumのclapとかに置き換えた方が聞こえいいです、後の同じ部分も同様に
Fix
02:41:592(5)　whistleが連続するのがやや気になるので、終点のwhistle削除してみては
Fix

Good Luck!

modとstarありがとうございました!!
助かりました>w<

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-10T02:41:39+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
[Hard]
Placement
01:04:792(2,3) 囲むように配置してみては e.g.) 違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:08:792(5,6) CTRL+Gすると回りこむ流れのまま打てるのでいいと思いますジャンプさせたいのでこのままで
01:20:392(1,2,3,4) 似たような提案違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:27:392(3) 無理にスタックさせるよりも弧を描くように配置したほうが打ちやすいです違う組み合わせに変えました
SPOILER
01:58:792(1) nazi,前のスライダーと囲むようにしてみるといいかも参考にしました
Rhythm
00:13:192　不要な緑線　oops
Hit Sonud
もっとfinish付けてもいいような気が、意図的なら構いません多分これで寂しくないはず...

Thanks mod

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-10T04:44:11+00:00

as requested

Naryuga's Normal Here!

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some small things

no kudosu please!

normal-hitclap.wav が使われてるところパッと見無かったので消しても良いのでは(あったらごめんなさい)
tagsに"Sokubaku Anemonation" "Naryuga"があると検索するとき見つけやすいです(Sokubakuだけでもゲーム画面では検索利きますが、webページで検索かけると出てこなかったり…… yuuhei satelliteについても同じことがあったり　気にならないならいいんですが)
難易度Satellite 01:56:392 (4) - whistle -> finish?

thanks!

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-10T06:01:32+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Move Pending Beatmaps

ready for mod

:3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-10T06:04:28+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
as requested

[some small things]

no kudosu please!
normal-hitclap.wav が使われてるところパッと見無かったので消しても良いのでは(あったらごめんなさい)
OK
tagsに"Sokubaku Anemonation" "Naryuga"があると検索するとき見つけやすいです(Sokubakuだけでもゲーム画面では検索利きますが、webページで検索かけると出てこなかったり…… yuuhei satelliteについても同じことがあったり　気にならないならいいんですが)
"sokubaku" を追加しました
難易度Satellite 01:56:392 (4) - whistle -> finish?
OK
thanks!

thanks awesome normal diff

Naryuga

782 posts

Joined October 2010

Naryuga 2013-11-10T07:03:57+00:00

*fixed some issues
あっぷでーとおねがいしまゆ

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:束縛アネモネーション
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Creator:Satellite
Version:Naryuga's Normal
Source:Touhou
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228,60,171592,6,0,P|180:44|140:40,2,90,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,172392,2,0,P|252:160|248:212,2,90,4|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,100,173192,2,0,B|104:136|104:136|72:188|104:248,1,210,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,196,174792,6,0,B|380:164|304:196|228:228|172:196,1,270.000010299683,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,92,176392,6,0,P|116:56|32:68,2,180.000006866455,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,56,178392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,92,178792,2,0,L|448:76,2,45.0000017166138,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,179592,6,0,L|492:192,2,45.0000017166138,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,292,180392,2,0,L|448:308,2,45.0000017166138,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,181192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,181992,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,92,182792,6,0,P|312:64|264:48,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,32,183592,2,0,P|120:88|148:192,1,180.000006866455,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,184792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,185192,2,0,P|392:240|396:276,2,90.0000034332277,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,186792,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,308,187192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,200,187592,2,0,P|68:132|60:112,2,90.0000034332277,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,189192,12,0,191992,0:0:0:0:
316,128,192392,6,0,P|256:124|196:128,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,193192,2,0,P|196:260|256:256,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,244,193792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,276,193992,2,0,L|420:312,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,194792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,108,194992,2,0,L|420:72,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,195592,6,0,B|316:28|316:28|276:44|232:40,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,28,196392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,76,196592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,124,196792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,252,197192,2,0,P|144:276|80:272,2,120,6|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,198392,2,0,P|368:148|432:152,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,199192,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,276,199392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,199592,2,0,P|232:312|184:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,240,200192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,188,200392,2,0,P|244:164|292:188,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,201192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,204,201392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,201592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,60,201992,6,0,P|324:96|264:60,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,60,202792,2,0,L|144:164,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,296,203592,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,224,203992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,292,204392,1,4,0:0:0:0:
264,164,204792,2,0,L|228:104,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,60,205192,6,0,P|316:32|368:60,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,112,205992,2,0,B|408:156|436:192|436:192|408:228|396:272,1,180
348,308,206792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,276,206992,2,0,L|296:216,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,308,207592,2,0,L|244:368,2,60,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,208392,6,0,P|108:156|104:92,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,209192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,56,209392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,209592,2,0,P|388:60|440:80,2,120,8|6|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,172,210792,2,0,P|324:192|272:172,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,211592,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,140,211792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,192,211992,2,0,L|140:252,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,320,212792,2,0,L|236:260,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,213592,2,0,L|400:252,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,214192,2,0,L|296:164,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,214792,6,0,P|384:80|340:40,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,215592,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,40,215992,2,0,P|21:81|6:138,2,120,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,217192,2,0,L|204:172,2,90,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217992,12,2,221192,0:0:0:0:

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-10T07:31:23+00:00

@kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
fine
[Easy]
Placement
00:38:792(1) nazi, 360:284あたりにもってくると、前のスライダーと等間隔になっていいかも ok
01:47:592(3)もう少し上手く囲めると思います　e.g.) fixed
SPOILER
03:01:192(1) ここだけNCかけるのもちょっと妙なのでNC削除 ok delete
Hit Sonud
00:01:992(2) 音無いので終点のwhistle削除　ok
00:13:192(1)始点のwhistle→finish ok
02:56:392~03：08：792　全部の白線にwhistleつけようとしても音取り上一定に刻めないので、1,3拍目の白線にのみwhistleを付けてみては？ last (6,7)にはつけてたほうがしっくりきたので、ほかは1,3拍に付け直しました。

Good Luck!

modding ありがとうございました~!

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-11-11T14:19:15+00:00

[litoluna's Easy]
nice Normal
Skip

[Wring's Hard]
00:05:192 (1) - Ctrl+J？
00:17:192 (5) - ctrl+Gしても面白いと思います

SPOILER

01:05:192 (3) - こっちの形はどうでしょう。次へもスムーズかと思います

SPOILER

02:09:992 (1) - Ctrl+Gはどうでしょうか
03:14:792 (5) - Ctrl+G?

[Satellite]
00:05:192 (1) - 流れを意識してたのでもう少し曲げてあげると入りやすいかもです。曲げたら次の(2)も同じようにするのを忘れないでください:3

SPOILER

00:35:592 (1) - 始点にwhistleあってもいいと思います
00:36:392 (4) - ^
00:51:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?　場所はx:196y:120あたりかな
00:53:192 (1) - こんなのはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

00:56:392 (1) - 流れ殺してる気がする・・・Ctrl+Gで00:57:592 (5)に終端スタック？

SPOILER

01:33:992 (4,5,6) - 大きなジャンプを作ってあげても面白いかも

SPOILER

01:37:592 (5) - 少し曲げてあげるときれいかも
01:40:192 (3) - x:304y:216くらいとかどうですか
01:53:392 (4) - aimをふわっとさせる感じで横向きのスライダーでもう少し右にずらしてもいいと思います

SPOILER

02:05:592 (3) - (2)(3)(4)で三角形を作るといいと思いました

SPOILER

02:50:992 (3) - 02:52:392 (3) にスタック？
03:14:592 (3) - この配置ならもう少し左の飛ばしてジャンプにしたいかも？

超少ないmodでごめんなさい・・・　-3-;A
Normal Hardはまた追記しておきます！→少ないですが追記しました！

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-11-13T00:13:26+00:00

HI~ Satellite

General:

Clean

Satellite:

00:06:592 (4,5) - Nothing in the music support this two beats there I suggest you to remove them better for following the song better.
00:06:792 btw this need NC following your stanzas pattern also I make more emppathize to then of a section Imo
00:18:492 Fell kinda weird how you ignore this beat bu you map all the other symilars ones this rhythm feel better:
SPOILER
00:19:192 (9,10) - I test this multiple times and It feel awkward for me need more distance why? cuz after the 1/4 jumps in 00:18:792 (7,8,9) - the distance in 00:19:192 (9,10) - feel to short and can be confuse for player thinking is a 1/4 jump too
00:21:592 (2,3,1) - I really preffer If you use the same distance here maybe 1.60 will fit perfect
00:24:792 (4) - 1/4 Slider will fit better this part like you did on 00:25:192 (7,8) -
00:35:992 (2,3,4) - feel kinda strange when you play it maybe use the same distance (1.70) look better like:
SPOILER
00:45:192 (1) - omg this slider ♥ i love it owo but the end sound pretty strong compared to the song maybe you want to reduce the volume just a little imo
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern dont look good (visual) why you don try to make it more symetrical:
SPOILER

If you like it here is the code:

204,64,48392,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,192,48592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,48792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,48992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,320,49192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,252,49392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,49592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,49792,1,2,0:0:0:0:

00:52:392 (4,5) - kinda nazi but you can improve this blanket moving a little the red control point of the slider imo
00:59:492 this beat sound really overmapped is better if you remove it for follow the music properly
01:11:692 I'll like if you add a circle here since sound alot better with it actually the gap between 01:11:592 (3,4) - sound really empty and dont represent the song correctly imo
01:12:392 same as 00:06:792
01:23:192 (9,10) - this need more distance imo is easily to get confused thinking is a 1/4 jump when the gap is 1/2 one
01:24:392 (4) - really nazi stack this 01:24:392 (4) - with 01:25:192 (1) - perfect
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really a fan of copy past tough you can variate this a little imo
01:51:592 (3) - stack this perfect with 01:52:392 (1) -
02:16:392 same as 00:06:792
02:31:392 (3) - why you dont stack this beat in the center of the grid make more sense in the pattern look:
SPOILER
03:32:992 (5) - this is touching 03:33:592 (2) - and dont look good maybe try to avoid it

Hard:

Up HP and OD by 1 (6) cuz it will make a better spread with the normal and Insane
00:14:792 look like you forget NC here since it follow your combo pattern and make more empathize in that part imo
00:16:392 (1,2) - this tow circles dont fit pretty well the rhythm also the vocals is better if you convert them in a 1/2 slider you can hear how it empathize alot better the music
00:19:192 (4,5) - use a properly distance here it feel awkward
SPOILER
00:21:192 same as 00:14:792
00:26:792 (3,1) - stack this perfect better instead of the manual stack stacking them perfect will make the antijump more noticeable to play imo
00:43:592 (3,4) - will play better in this way:
SPOILER
00:48:592 (2,3) - If you fix the distance here this will play alot better like:
SPOILER
00:57:992 yup again i really will like if you add NC in this kind of patterns cuz it will bring more readability and more empathize with the music imo
01:06:792 (3,1) - same as 00:26:792
01:03:592 (1,2,3,4) - will look alot better if you do a perfect square here like:
SPOILER
01:12:392 add a circle with finish here then start the spinner in 01:12:492 in this way you will follow the music alot better
01:20:992 (4) - really nazi but this one need one grid to the left to improve the whole pattern 01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) -
01:23:392 (6) - remove whistle here take in consideration it sound bad and also u have one in 01:23:592 (1) - making that double whistle sound pretty bad thougt
01:38:792 (6,7) - consider move both sliders a little down the jump in the previous 5 and 6 is kinda to much for a hard diff
01:47:592 (3,4) - same suggestion as 00:43:592
01:52:192 (4,2) - remove whistles sound kinda weird imo is better if you just keep one in 01:52:392 (1) - (if you apply this do it on the next pattern too
02:16:392 same suggestion as 01:12:392
02:38:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - the patter look pretty bad (visual) why you dont make a perfect star shape instead of the current one?
02:46:792 (3,1) - try to blanket this bettter just move 02:48:392 (1) - x:460 y:184 will look alot better:
SPOILER
02:49:592 I preffer if you do ctrl G here is consistent with what u do in 02:50:792 (4,5) -
03:04:192 (4) - following the music and vocals this have to be nc and remove it from 03:04:392 (1) -
03:05:992 (1) - same here remove NC and add it on 03:06:592 (2) - make more sense with the music
03:13:992 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of straight patterns try to curver the shape instead will look and play better IMO
03:37:992 (1) - same as as 01:12:392
02:56:394 - unsnaped green line snap to 02:56:392

Normal:

Hp and Od +1 (4) to balance settings and the spread of the mapset.
00:35:592 (1,2) - Fix the distance
00:43:592 (3,1) - i see its intencional owo but the gap is not that big for ignore the distance so better use the properly one
00:50:792 (2,3,4) - kinda hard for a normal I preffer if you use a 1/2 repeat slider instead
00:56:392 (1,2) - Fix the distance here you are using 1.10 in kiai but this one just have 1.0 will feel awkward to play
01:03:592 (2,3,4) - same as above reducing and increasing the distance in a normal diff is not suitable for a normal diff
01:05:992 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:392 (5,6,7) - and here why you reduce it to 0.90? kinda weird imo
01:24:992 move this to x:436 y:172
01:33:192 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fix the distance to 1.0 really hard to read in 0.90 thougt
01:50:392 maybe convert this one in 2 circles since the chorus start in 01:50:792 and it need an action (circle or slider head) so the player can have a better feedback with the music imo
01:51:992 (3,1,2,3) - use a properly distance
02:26:592 (2,3) - consider to use a slider instead of the stacked circles they play really bad for a new player
02:27:392 (4,1) - ^
02:53:192 (3,1) - well this jump is really big for a normal O.O reduce the distance?
03:16:392 (2,3,4) - this dont flow good with previous slider since newbies tend to move in a circular way this will break theirs hand IMO using a repeat slider or rearrange the shape will be better
03:21:192 (6,7,8) - is the first time you use a triple stack in all the diff this can be surprising for players and not readable in first time betterunstack them and use a properly distance
I like this normal but I dont agree with the distance changes in various points them play weird imo

Easy:

00:24:392 (1) - really nazi move this 1 grid down to fix the little distance error there
01:50:392 maybe you forget the drum sampleset in the tail here
03:21:192 (3,2) - stack this perfect look kinda bad in game

AI mod say:
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:790 - snap to 00:38:792
01:42:790 - snap to 01:42:792
02:41:990 - snap to 02:41:992
Nice easy

Nice map Gl Satellite c:

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-13T12:46:11+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Satellite]
00:05:192 (1) - 流れを意識してたのでもう少し曲げてあげると入りやすいかもです。曲げたら次の(2)も同じようにするのを忘れないでください:3
SPOILER
00:35:592 (1) - 始点にwhistleあってもいいと思います
OK
00:36:392 (4) - ^
OK
00:51:792 (2) - Ctrl + G?　場所はx:196y:120あたりかな
00:53:192 (1) - こんなのはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:56:392 (1) - 流れ殺してる気がする・・・Ctrl+Gで00:57:592 (5)に終端スタック？
SPOILER
01:33:992 (4,5,6) - 大きなジャンプを作ってあげても面白いかも
SPOILER
曲調にあわせてジャンプさせてます
01:37:592 (5) - 少し曲げてあげるときれいかも
ここも曲調にあわせてます。変わりに終点にwhistleいれました
01:40:192 (3) - x:304y:216くらいとかどうですか
01:53:392 (4) - aimをふわっとさせる感じで横向きのスライダーでもう少し右にずらしてもいいと思います
SPOILER
次の１のスライダーと平行に配置してます＞＜
02:05:592 (3) - (2)(3)(4)で三角形を作るといいと思いました
SPOILER
これはこういう形なのです！
02:50:992 (3) - 02:52:392 (3) にスタック？
03:14:592 (3) - この配置ならもう少し左の飛ばしてジャンプにしたいかも？

記載のないところはすみませんが主観でno changeです。
moddingありがとうございました :)

Last edited by Satellite 2013-11-13T13:10:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-13T13:07:54+00:00

Natsu wrote:
HI~ Satellite

General:
Clean
Satellite:
00:06:592 (4,5) - Nothing in the music support this two beats there I suggest you to remove them better for following the song better.
OK
00:06:792 btw this need NC following your stanzas pattern also I make more emppathize to then of a section Imo
awesome idea
00:18:492 Fell kinda weird how you ignore this beat bu you map all the other symilars ones this rhythm feel better:
SPOILER
sorry. I don't think >.>
00:19:192 (9,10) - I test this multiple times and It feel awkward for me need more distance why? cuz after the 1/4 jumps in 00:18:792 (7,8,9) - the distance in 00:19:192 (9,10) - feel to short and can be confuse for player thinking is a 1/4 jump too
OK. Unified pattern~
00:21:592 (2,3,1) - I really preffer If you use the same distance here maybe 1.60 will fit perfect
OK
00:24:792 (4) - 1/4 Slider will fit better this part like you did on 00:25:192 (7,8) -
sorry. I don't think >.>
00:35:992 (2,3,4) - feel kinda strange when you play it maybe use the same distance (1.70) look better like:
SPOILER
sorry I like this pattern~ > <
00:45:192 (1) - omg this slider ♥ i love it owo but the end sound pretty strong compared to the song maybe you want to reduce the volume just a little imo
OK volume down :3
00:48:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern dont look good (visual) why you don try to make it more symetrical:
SPOILER
If you like it here is the code:
204,64,48392,5,2,0:0:0:0:
220,192,48592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,48792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,48992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,320,49192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,252,49392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,192,49592,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,132,49792,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Really really awesome suggestion! Fixed~
00:52:392 (4,5) - kinda nazi but you can improve this blanket moving a little the red control point of the slider imo
OK
00:59:492 this beat sound really overmapped is better if you remove it for follow the music properly
OK a mini change~
01:11:692 I'll like if you add a circle here since sound alot better with it actually the gap between 01:11:592 (3,4) - sound really empty and dont represent the song correctly imo
OK volume down
01:12:392 same as 00:06:792
~
01:23:192 (9,10) - this need more distance imo is easily to get confused thinking is a 1/4 jump when the gap is 1/2 one
OK maybe.
01:24:392 (4) - really nazi stack this 01:24:392 (4) - with 01:25:192 (1) - perfect
OK~
01:42:792 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - not really a fan of copy past tough you can variate this a little imo
sorry.I think before kiai time. It should be a simple rhythm.
01:51:592 (3) - stack this perfect with 01:52:392 (1) -
OK
02:16:392 same as 00:06:792
~
02:31:392 (3) - why you dont stack this beat in the center of the grid make more sense in the pattern look:
SPOILER
Yes. I preferred the stack.
03:32:992 (5) - this is touching 03:33:592 (2) - and dont look good maybe try to avoid it
~
Nice map Gl Satellite c:

thanks for modding
It's very helpful <3
red = Fix Blue = No

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2013-11-13T14:52:04+00:00

@Natsu

Natsu wrote:
HI~ Satellite

Easy:
00:24:392 (1) - really nazi move this 1 grid down to fix the little distance error there ok.
01:50:392 maybe you forget the drum sampleset in the tail here ok
03:21:192 (3,2) - stack this perfect look kinda bad in game ok! change placement

AI mod say:
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:790 - snap to 00:38:792 fixed
01:42:790 - snap to 01:42:792 fixed
02:41:990 - snap to 02:41:992 fixed
Nice easy

Nice map Gl Satellite c:

thanks modding Natsu~!

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2013-11-14T06:31:32+00:00

More Senya! ^_^

putigame

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Joined March 2012

putigame 2013-11-14T07:06:37+00:00

mod

いやぁ～！まじ神曲です>w<
そんなことはさておき＾＾；
下からmodです！

Easy

00:00:392~00:06:992　ここの部分っていらないような気がします。実際にプレイしてみたのですが、いきなりスライダーが来てびっくりしました。
01:45:992~01:48:292　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　③のスライダー。①のスライダーと③のスライダーの始点が縦線一本分だけずれてます。
01:55:592~01:58:792　ここの①のスライダー　②のサークル　①の往復スライダー。①のスライダーの終点と①の往復スライダーの始点（終点）の高さはそろえたほうがきれいだと思います。

Normal

AR5はちょっと高い気がします。normalといえばAR3か4というイメージがあるのでこの曲もAR4ぐらいがいいと思います。
02:08:392~02:09:192　ここの⑤のスライダー。このスライダーの中心は中央の縦線上に持っていったほうがきれいな配置になると思います。
03:21:192~03:21:592　ここの⑥⑦⑧のサークル。この３つのサークルは重ねない配置にしたほうがいいと思います。

Hard

00:39:392~00:39:992　ここの②③のスライダー。②のスライダーの終点と③のスライダーの始点は少しだけずらしたほうがいいと思います。00:40:992~00:41:592
01:43:392~01:43:992　01:44:992~01:45:592　02:42:592~02:43:192　02:44:192~02:44:792も同様
01:59:592~02:00:192　ここの③④⑤⑥のサークル。斜めまっすぐの配置になっていますが、DT HDでやると少しきついような気がしました。ただ僕がこういう配置苦手なだけかもしれませんが＾＾；　じぐざぐにしたり半円を描くような配置にしたほうがいいと思います。03:13:992~03:14:592も同様。
02:33:992~02:35:392　ここの①のスライダー　②③のサークル　④のスライダー　⑤⑥のサークル。④のスライダーの始点は①のスライダーの始点の上に置いたほうがいいと思います。それに伴い⑤⑥のサークルの配置も変えたほうがいいです。

Satellite

実際にプレイしてみたのですが、連打が少ないんじゃないかと思いました。特に前半ですね。恐らくinsaneに匹敵する難易度で作っているのだろうと思うので、もう少し連打を使ってもいいんじゃないでしょうか？

00:52:392~00:52:792　ここの④のスライダー。個人的な意見ですが、この部分は５連打１つか２連打２つにしたほうがいいと思います。僕は２連打２つのほうがいいと思いました。01:05:192~01:05:592も同様。

以上です。

Last edited by putigame 2013-11-15T05:23:11+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Satellite

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Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-14T07:15:28+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
More Senya! ^_^

thanks star! :3

To putigame

thanks modding :3
waiting mod >.>

Last edited by Satellite 2013-11-15T13:55:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2013-11-14T07:27:13+00:00

damn i forgot to star this
not anymore

Satellite

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Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-11-14T11:13:22+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
damn i forgot to star this
not anymore

a ri ga to u ~ :3/

wring

596 posts

Joined February 2010

wring 2013-11-14T11:19:02+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hard:
Up HP and OD by 1 (6) cuz it will make a better spread with the normal and Insane umm....I think that doesn't matter so I'll leave it to Satellite.
00:14:792 look like you forget NC here since it follow your combo pattern and make more empathize in that part imo no, it's just not using NC here (to be procise include another parts like this)
00:16:392 (1,2) - this tow circles dont fit pretty well the rhythm also the vocals is better if you convert them in a 1/2 slider you can hear how it empathize alot better the music sorry I like this rhythm because four notes of 1/8 could follow the four notes of 1/4.
00:19:192 (4,5) - use a properly distance here it feel awkward ok
SPOILER
00:21:192 same as 00:14:792
00:26:792 (3,1) - stack this perfect better instead of the manual stack stacking them perfect will make the antijump more noticeable to play imo Player must stop here if I used perfect stack, but that's not my intent. The reason I used the subtle gap is showing the music flow and a blank here.
00:43:592 (3,4) - will play better in this way:sorry, my feeling music flow isn't that.
SPOILER
00:48:592 (2,3) - If you fix the distance here this will play alot better like:oops, my mistake, change the distance between (4,5) to x1.3.
SPOILER
00:57:992 yup again i really will like if you add NC in this kind of patterns cuz it will bring more readability and more empathize with the music imo ok, added NC cuz in kiai
01:06:792 (3,1) - same as 00:26:792
01:03:592 (1,2,3,4) - will look alot better if you do a perfect square here like: no
SPOILER
01:12:392 add a circle with finish here then start the spinner in 01:12:492 in this way you will follow the music alot better I know your pointing, but I thought note object finished here was better.
01:20:992 (4) - really nazi but this one need one grid to the left to improve the whole pattern 01:20:392 (1,2,3,4) - just considered (3,4,5).
01:23:392 (6) - remove whistle here take in consideration it sound bad and also u have one in 01:23:592 (1) - making that double whistle sound pretty bad thougt no
01:38:792 (6,7) - consider move both sliders a little down the jump in the previous 5 and 6 is kinda to much for a hard diff slider to slider jumping is not too hard imo.
01:47:592 (3,4) - same suggestion as 00:43:592
01:52:192 (4,2) - remove whistles sound kinda weird imo is better if you just keep one in 01:52:392 (1) - (if you apply this do it on the next pattern too
02:16:392 same suggestion as 01:12:392 no
02:38:792 (1,2,3,4,1) - the patter look pretty bad (visual) why you dont make a perfect star shape instead of the current one? It's needless imo, and perfect shape sometimes become difficult to play smoothly (especially I guessed in this placement).
02:46:792 (3,1) - try to blanket this bettter just move 02:48:392 (1) - x:460 y:184 will look alot better:ok
SPOILER
02:49:592 I preffer if you do ctrl G here is consistent with what u do in 02:50:792 (4,5) - no, for the reason I put parallel here, so I used diagonal sliders there.
03:04:192 (4) - following the music and vocals this have to be nc and remove it from 03:04:392 (1) - That may be strange, cuz considering music phrase.
03:05:992 (1) - same here remove NC and add it on 03:06:592 (2) - make more sense with the music
03:13:992 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan of straight patterns try to curver the shape instead will look and play better IMO jump here
03:37:992 (1) - same as as 01:12:392
02:56:394 - unsnaped green line snap to 02:56:392ok

Thanks mod

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