From
my queue of normal mod
Sorry for late.
[General]
Looks fine.
[Easy]
00:35:622 (1) - 00:37:507 (1) - RNC (remove NC)
00:36:479 (2) - NC
00:41:107 (1,2,1) - ^
00:49:850 - to 01:08:707 - too much similar flow, be creative~
01:13:507 (1) - RNC
01:18:993 (1) - ^
01:24:479 (1) - ^
01:29:965 (1) - ^
01:30:993 (2) - delete the note and begin the spinner
01:51:565 (1) - RNC
01:53:965 (1) - ^
01:52:936 (3) - NC
01:55:679 - to 01:55:679 - Also too much similar flow, make some changes will be better
02:38:193 (1) - RNC
03:41:279 (2) - former sliders use NC, so please NC this
Objects are placed in a same style makes the map looks boring maybe.
[Normal]
4.5★ Normal ..
AR 5 pls with 175bpm
Suggest that every 2 long white lines, use NC
remove NC in 00:29:279 (1) - ,00:32:022 (1) - ,00:35:107 (1) - ,00:37:507 (1) - and so on
NC 00:36:479 (2) - and so on.Remap with DS×1.0 pls
(just change the flow)
01:30:993 (2) - Also delete the note and begin the spinner
02:38:193 (1) - Not beautiful
If you'd like to make a 4.5 stars' normal, you can try more like 02:32:707 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
01:30:993 -
02:05:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - a little hard to play in a hard diff
02:39:222 (1) - RNC
03:00:479 (4,5,6) - make like this pls
03:06:650 (1) - RNC and 03:06:993 (2) - NC
03:22:765 (1,2,3) - a little hard to play in a hard diff, suggest like this
[Lunatic]
Nice diff but some problems and some my suggestions.
importantput some notes/sliders (bottom/top) (left/right) to make your map not too close together.
00:49:165 (1,2,3,4) - - make players too easy to miss combo here(with the breaktime before, easy to make players fail), although 00:49:165 (1) - fit the rhythm, I suggest to change it to a 1/4 slider
03:22:765 (9) - NC
03:32:536 (4) - ^
That's all.
Good Luck with your song wwwwwwwwwwwwww.