Hi, banvi san :3
[General]
Call me back for recheck when you are ready
[General]
- The Source should be " Colorful Kiss ~12 ko no Mune Kyun!~ ". http://vndb.org/v1472
- Why don't you to put " opening eroge visual novel " to tag ? i often see these things on ranked map. so consider adding it.
- 00:15:841 - , 00:32:762 - ,02:08:924 - These are unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line.
- 00:35:874 (2,3) - Rhythm suggestion : this part would not fit well with this kind of music. i agree your #2 part at here 01:49:589 (2,3,1) - .it will be able to follow the vocal , also you can add a clap to the tail of the slider. so please try my suggestion like this
at last, If you follow my suggestions, don't forget to remove green sections of this part. - 00:58:374 (1) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note down like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally.
- 01:01:374 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here.
- 01:41:231 (1,2) - As you can see here, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural flow. i recommend you to use ctrl + G like this
- 02:04:803 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard, i hope you remove it and remake some sliders.
- 02:15:089 - same as here. 01:01:374 -
- 02:54:946 (2) - a bit nazi mod, how about adding a new combo here ? Because you put kiai time to here. Try comparing this to the other diffs :3 and you should put more volume around 65~75% for the climax!
- HP Drain rate -1. I think " 4 " is a little difficult for beginners
- 00:18:731 (4) - ,00:19:589 (2) - missing clap here.
- 00:33:517 (3) - ,01:47:446 (3) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum.
- 00:37:374 - i want to add a clap here, so why don't you extend previous slider ?
- 01:18:731 (4) - ,01:19:589 (2) - same as here. If you follow my suggestions, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
- 01:53:874 - you should follow the vocal "pun pun" lol because this voice feels so sweet. so consider adding a note here.
- 01:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - remove drum sound to this part since it follows nothing.
- 02:47:231 (3) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider right for the flow ? so the slider repeat will flow more naturally and beautifully.
- 02:54:946 (3) - Same as Easy diff.
- /me eats this girl :3
- 00:19:803 (3) - hmm... this repeat is same as normal diff. it is better to put more sound on this difficulty imo. so why don't you put 3 hits ? like this
- 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:445 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
- 01:33:517 (3) - same as here.00:19:803 (3) -
- 01:54:089 (8) - i expect something related to previous slider. i recommend you to use a curve slider in place of straight slider. it looks better to me.
- 01:59:446 (3) - it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you can put a clap to the tail of the slider. try my suggestion like this
- 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:446 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
- 00:46:803 (4) - i want to put a new combo on this stream, like your previous part 00:40:160 (1) -
- 01:06:946 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: i recommend you to put more jump at (3) -> (4) , try my suggestion like this
- 01:13:803 (1,2,3) - ^
- 02:02:660 (1) - i feel it doesn't need new combo here. so consider removing it like your previous part. 00:48:088 (1,2,3,4) -
- 02:54:303 (1,2) - ctrl + G, As you can see here, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. The jumps will flow more naturally.
Call me back for recheck when you are ready