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Habi's Easy:
Normal:
Zzz's Hard:
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !
Habi's Easy:
- 00:07:853 (1) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with the next note, but you made the slider a bit ugly, so how about making it like this?
- 00:09:995 (4) - this slider kinda followed the beat bad since you left the strong beat on its body...so how about doing something like 2 1/1 sliders or 1 1/1 and a note? it'll be better imo..and btw you forgot to add finishs on this slider too, i can hear it clearly in the music
- 00:23:567 (3) - making so many liner sliders on easiest diff's is kinda boring imo, so how about doing something like this instead with this slider?
- 00:30:710 (1) - ^
- 00:37:853 (3) - move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, so it'll blanket better with other slider~
- 00:40:706 (3) - well...you followed the voice good, untill you added the repeat maybe remove it and make 1 1/1 and a note? it'll follow it better if you ask me o3o
- 01:02:138 (1) - another bad blanketing, how about doing something like this instead of leaving it like this?
- 01:03:566 (3) - make a curve slider here like i said on here 00:23:567 (3) -
- 01:22:137 (1) - well...move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, it'll make perfect blanket with the center note
Normal:
- 00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
- 00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
- 00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
- 00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
- 01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?
Zzz's Hard:
- 00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
- 00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
- 01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
- 00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
- 00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
- 00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
- 00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
- 00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
- 00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
- 00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
- 00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
- 01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly
Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !