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Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-11-02T16:42:43+00:00

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captin1

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2011

captin1 2013-11-02T16:48:39+00:00

hey m4m

took a careful look through the timing since it's variable, here's what I have. make sure all gders apply this as well

SPOILER

Offset: 712ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 4,283ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 4,993ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 37,850ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 39,270ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 47,841ms	BPM: 167.50
Offset: 49,990ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 50,700ms	BPM: 167.00
Offset: 52,137ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 84,994ms	BPM: 159.00
Offset: 85,560ms	BPM: 143.00
Offset: 86,304ms	BPM: 143.00

[Habi's Easy]

I feel like the difficulty in this should be reduced noticeably, since it is a tv size map, having a 3 star easy is not very considerate of the newer players who just play this game to play anime songs they know. Distance snap being 1.2 is not that great, would recommend sticking to 1.0 especially if you're doing 1/1 rhythms, which I would recommend you cut down on considerably.

00:13:208 (3,4) - please don't use stacks in an easy
from 00:16:421 - to 00:27:850 - I think you should take out most of the filler beats, like 00:20:351 (2) - , 00:23:208 (2) - and turn beats like 00:18:565 (2) - into just single circles. Simplification will go a long way here, since the song is very soft.
00:27:851 (1,2,3) - would like to see a pattern where the flow is in a straight line, like doing a ctrl+g on 3 and then moving notes afterwards to compensate.
00:30:351 (4,1) - again, please don't use stacks
00:35:708 (4) - would recommend removing and putting a circle where the slider end was, 00:36:064 - here

I think you have an idea. The patterning and flow is all fine, rather nice overall, but I think to start this diff was not mapped in a way that would best help the spread as a whole.

[Normal]

00:05:531 (3) - perhaps you could curve this, to flow with slider before
00:22:495 (1) - would probably work best flipped ctrl+h and then moved back into spacing
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - I think some more consistent patterning could be done here, they just seem like randomly placed linear sliders
00:56:423 (1,2) - move 1 down and then above
01:00:709 (4,5,1) - This pattern may end up being confusing due to the 1/2 spacing and then a stack, might want to unstack
01:04:995 (2) - small thing, but move this to x356 y340 so it's symmetrical with the end of 01:03:923 (3) -

[Zzz's Hard]

00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Silent notes are unrankable. Please add at least some sound to these
00:04:291 (7) - would recommend a NC on this note so there isn't a long and slow slider trail through the short pause
00:07:138 (6) - while I see that you would like to stack this with the notes before, it doesn't play the best as a result, I think moving to about x256 y220 so that the spacing increases with the music but is still nice to play will work
00:16:424 - yep, can't have 0% volume
00:26:960 (5) - some very weird spacing on this note, I would recommend in the x268 y244 area so that it's much more readable
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - sjoy just mentioned this and I'm going to agree, this seems quite uneventful for this difficulty
01:07:138 (6) - flip the curve for this? it's possible to do so and keep your pattern, so I think you should so it flows into the next slider well

[Insane]
AR-1, this is not fast or have many jumpy parts to justify AR 9
HP -1 as well, again this map does not need large difficulty settings

00:03:213 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did not like this transition at all, the slider is extremely short and the stream that starts way off from the center where almost all insane players will spin is pretty bad, so it comes as a very unwelcome surprise. try this perhaps

SPOILER

00:15:174 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing may easily end up confusing, as 4 is a very similar distance from
00:17:674 (4,5) - would recommend curves on these two, or at least 4, so that the flow between them is much nicer
00:29:103 (5,1) - I think a ctrl+g here would make this a pretty cool slight jump pattern, instead of being a simple curved flow
00:38:209 (2,3,4) - please do about the same spacing that you did 00:37:495 (7,8,1) - here for consistency
00:39:278 - to 00:44:990 - this will be a longer explanation, will try to use pictures with bad paint skills to help

In this part, you have a lot of Slider -> Circle with short distance, and then Circle -> Slider with large distance, so it looks like this
http://puu.sh/56ijT.jpg or this http://puu.sh/56iHZ.jpg

I think you should try and do either the opposite or keep even spacing, will feel much better to play, like this

http://puu.sh/56DHa.jpg and this http://puu.sh/56DLW.jpg

The reason for this is you can see the area for the slider circle is large, so it creates what we call "slider leniency" basically making it so that large spacing after sliders is easier to play than large spacing after circles. I think that if you applied this idea to mainly this section, but also most of the map, it will improve the feel of playing it much more

00:46:775 (7) - ctrl+g here? will feel better coming from previous section's flow, and there is enough space after this note to make next note fine to hit
00:52:852 (3,4,5) - would recommend rotating this a bit and moving it closer to 00:53:388 (6,7,1) - the jump is a bit sudden right now
01:14:102 (2,3,4) - perhaps this arrangement will be a bit more fun to play

SPOILER

I love the circle flow in the kiai, nice job

good luck!

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-02T18:40:09+00:00

captin1 wrote:
hey m4m

took a careful look through the timing since it's variable, here's what I have. make sure all gders apply this as well
SPOILER
Offset: 712ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 4,283ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 4,993ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 37,850ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 39,270ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 47,841ms	BPM: 167.50
Offset: 49,990ms	BPM: 169.00
Offset: 50,700ms	BPM: 167.00
Offset: 52,137ms	BPM: 168.00
Offset: 84,994ms	BPM: 159.00
Offset: 85,560ms	BPM: 143.00
Offset: 86,304ms	BPM: 143.00
[Normal]

00:05:531 (3) - perhaps you could curve this, to flow with slider beforefix
00:22:495 (1) - would probably work best flipped ctrl+h and then moved back into spacingfix
00:53:566 (1,2,3,4) - I think some more consistent patterning could be done here, they just seem like randomly placed linear slidersfix
00:56:423 (1,2) - move 1 down and then aboveOther fix
01:00:709 (4,5,1) - This pattern may end up being confusing due to the 1/2 spacing and then a stack, might want to unstackfix
01:04:995 (2) - small thing, but move this to x356 y340 so it's symmetrical with the end of 01:03:923 (3) - fix

[Insane]
AR-1, this is not fast or have many jumpy parts to justify AR 9
HP -1 as well, again this map does not need large difficulty settingsfix

00:03:213 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did not like this transition at all, the slider is extremely short and the stream that starts way off from the center where almost all insane players will spin is pretty bad, so it comes as a very unwelcome surprise. try this perhapsfix
SPOILER
00:15:174 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing may easily end up confusing, as 4 is a very similar distance fromfix
00:17:674 (4,5) - would recommend curves on these two, or at least 4, so that the flow between them is much nicerfix
00:29:103 (5,1) - I think a ctrl+g here would make this a pretty cool slight jump pattern, instead of being a simple curved flowfix
00:38:209 (2,3,4) - please do about the same spacing that you did 00:37:495 (7,8,1) - here for consistencyfix
00:39:278 - to 00:44:990 - this will be a longer explanation, will try to use pictures with bad paint skills to help

In this part, you have a lot of Slider -> Circle with short distance, and then Circle -> Slider with large distance, so it looks like this
http://puu.sh/56ijT.jpg or this http://puu.sh/56iHZ.jpg

I think you should try and do either the opposite or keep even spacing, will feel much better to play, like this

http://puu.sh/56DHa.jpg and this http://puu.sh/56DLW.jpg

The reason for this is you can see the area for the slider circle is large, so it creates what we call "slider leniency" basically making it so that large spacing after sliders is easier to play than large spacing after circles. I think that if you applied this idea to mainly this section, but also most of the map, it will improve the feel of playing it much more fix

00:46:775 (7) - ctrl+g here? will feel better coming from previous section's flow, and there is enough space after this note to make next note fine to hitfix
00:52:852 (3,4,5) - would recommend rotating this a bit and moving it closer to 00:53:388 (6,7,1) - the jump is a bit sudden right nowfix
01:14:102 (2,3,4) - perhaps this arrangement will be a bit more fun to playfix
SPOILER

I love the circle flow in the kiai, nice job

good luck!

very good...wow.. good mod thanks!!

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-02T22:13:24+00:00

[Navy] wrote:
안녕하세요~ ㅋ ( 네 안녕하세요~!! )

[ZZZ's Hard]

00:04:467 (8,1)
00:07:317 (7,1) - 안겹치게 하는게 좋지 않을까요..? ( 음.. 제취향이라 .. ㅠㅠ ... 그리고 괜찮아보여요.. 이정도는 ... )

00:10:263 (5,6) - 5를 6, 6을 5자리로 ( 올!! 일부러 저렇게했지만 바꿔도 괜찮을듯 싶네요!! 좋은!!! )

00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - 약간 이상한 듯 한데..

보통 리듬대로 하시는게 어떨까요 ( 이것도 노린거라서 ㅠㅠ... 별 문제는 없을꺼같아요! )

01:00:530 (4,5) -

(4)는 조금올리고 (5)는 내리면 조금더쉬워질듯 해요 ( 음 ... 별 문제는 없는거같아요 ... 흨흨... )

(전이런거 많이틀려서 ㅜㅜ)

직선 슬라이더가 너무많아여!
조금만 바꿔주시면 완벽할듯 (: 헤헤 ... 직선슬라이더는 제 매핑스타일이라서 'ㅂ'!! )

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-02T22:19:32+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
[Hard]

00:00:714 - 소리를 키워주세요. ( 네~ )

00:16:424- ^ ( ^ )

01:19:102 (9) - 슬라이더 보다는 연타로 하시는게 어떨까요? ( 제 취향이라서 ... 사람들도 이게 더 재미있다고하고 ㅇㅇ!!! )

역시 다들 잘 만드신다니까 ( 님도 잘만드시자나옄!!! )

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-02T22:29:09+00:00

sjoy wrote:
FROM M4M
[Zzz's Hard]
tags is conflict with other diff
00:04:291 (7) - NC ( yes )
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - a lit boring on hard diff ( umm.. no... )
00:16:424 you don't use the %0 hitsounds.It's unrankable.PLZ at leat 30% ( yes )
01:12:852 (5,1) - try this http://puu.sh/56dE5.jpg ( no... )
01:26:295 (3) - move on 01:26:400 spinner start on 01:26:505 ( no... )

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-02T22:31:58+00:00

DropTimes wrote:
첫모딩이네요~ 으어 ;w;

[Zzz's Hard]
이것도 1.4로 맞춰주세요 ( 음... 지금도 디스턴트 매우넓고 ... 점프도 힘들어하는데 .. 1.4로 맟춰버리면..좀 그러네요 ... 이건 거절하겠습니다 ... ) 지금 이대로도 랭크는 충분히 되는것같고 .. 큰문제는 없어보이니 ... 그리고 괜한 참견인거같지만.. 인세인에 디스턴트 1.6이면 .. 좀 ..차라리 기본 0.8~1.2에 점프를 넣으면 더 좋을꺼같은...

처음이라 이것만 해드려도 될지 모르겠네요
부탁드려서 감사합니다

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-02T23:07:10+00:00

captin1 wrote:
hey m4m

[Zzz's Hard]

00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Silent notes are unrankable. Please add at least some sound to these ( umm.. Done )
00:04:291 (7) - would recommend a NC on this note so there isn't a long and slow slider trail through the short pause ( yes. Done )
00:07:138 (6) - while I see that you would like to stack this with the notes before, it doesn't play the best as a result, I think moving to about x256 y220 so that the spacing increases with the music but is still nice to play will work ( no...I Now is good ... )
00:16:424 - yep, can't have 0% volume ( yes. Done )
00:26:960 (5) - some very weird spacing on this note, I would recommend in the x268 y244 area so that it's much more readable ( no...I Now is good ... )
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - sjoy just mentioned this and I'm going to agree, this seems quite uneventful for this difficulty ( umm.. no... I Now pending )
01:07:138 (6) - flip the curve for this? it's possible to do so and keep your pattern, so I think you should so it flows into the next slider well ( no... )

태그 바뀌시고 태고겟난넣으신거보고 리다운로드 후 수정했어요!! 완료!!!

osu file format v12

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jogfi2002

189 posts

Joined July 2009

jogfi2002 2013-11-03T02:57:12+00:00

[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags

[Habi's Easy]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 01:25:558 - snap to 01:25:561

00:30:353 (4,1) - It's not proper to use overlapping in an Easy
00:37:495 (2,3) - ^
01:08:923 (2,3) - ^
01:18:923 (3,1) - ^

[Normal]

00:03:571 (4) - New combo
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:

[Zzz's Hard]

00:02:142 (4) - New combo
00:04:291 (7) - ^
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider
00:47:490 (5) - New combo
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note

[Insane]

00:07:317 (6) - New combo
01:01:602 (4) - ^

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2013-11-03T04:59:22+00:00

M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요

[Easy]
00:07:495 (4) - 여기에 노트 넣는것도 괜찮다고 봄
00:09:995 (4) - 뭔가 음악이랑 안어울리는거 같은데...
01:17:495 (2) - 여기다가 노트 놓는것도 나쁘지 않다고 봄

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요
00:29:638 (4) - Delete
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거

[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL

로리 만세!

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T05:24:26+00:00

jogfi2002 wrote:
[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags

[Normal]

00:03:571 (4) - New combofix
00:19:638 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange like this:fix

[Insane]

00:07:317 (6) - New combono
01:01:602 (4) - ^no

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.

thanks~^^

GasTheJuice

20 posts

Joined April 2013

GasTheJuice 2013-11-03T05:48:19+00:00

Zzz's hard difficulty

00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo

ririco

6,376 posts

Joined February 2011

ririco 2013-11-03T07:51:42+00:00

hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Habi's Easy:

00:07:853 (1) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with the next note, but you made the slider a bit ugly, so how about making it like this?
SPOILER
00:09:995 (4) - this slider kinda followed the beat bad since you left the strong beat on its body...so how about doing something like 2 1/1 sliders or 1 1/1 and a note? it'll be better imo..and btw you forgot to add finishs on this slider too, i can hear it clearly in the music
00:23:567 (3) - making so many liner sliders on easiest diff's is kinda boring imo, so how about doing something like this instead with this slider?
SPOILER
00:30:710 (1) - ^
00:37:853 (3) - move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, so it'll blanket better with other slider~
00:40:706 (3) - well...you followed the voice good, untill you added the repeat maybe remove it and make 1 1/1 and a note? it'll follow it better if you ask me o3o
01:02:138 (1) - another bad blanketing, how about doing something like this instead of leaving it like this?
SPOILER
01:03:566 (3) - make a curve slider here like i said on here 00:23:567 (3) -
01:22:137 (1) - well...move the last slider point 1 grid to the right, it'll make perfect blanket with the center note

Normal:

00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
SPOILER
00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
SPOILER
00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
SPOILER
01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?
SPOILER

Zzz's Hard:

00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;

Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo

00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
SPOILER
00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
SPOILER
00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
SPOILER
00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly

Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-11-03T08:06:25+00:00

Almost Fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Habi's Easy
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:318015
BeatmapSetID:124689

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Fate Kaleid.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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714,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
4291,352.941176470588,4,2,3,60,1,0
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50704,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
52138,357.142857142857,4,2,1,85,1,1
84995,377.358490566038,4,2,1,60,1,0
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85558,419.58041958042,4,2,1,40,1,0
85561,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
88917,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 171,86,86
Combo2 : 255,140,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128

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256,192,14995,12,6,16424,0:0:0:0:
152,96,17138,6,0,L|32:84,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,44,18567,2,0,P|268:60|316:60,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,60,19281,6,0,P|448:120|440:208,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,20353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,20710,2,0,L|200:228,1,80
140,156,21424,2,0,L|60:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,236,22138,6,0,P|56:304|140:332,1,160
220,296,23210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,256,23567,2,0,L|396:268,1,80
468,212,24281,2,0,P|480:172|476:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,68,24995,6,0,P|336:92|260:60,1,160
168,40,26067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,132,26424,2,0,L|12:120,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,27853,6,0,P|216:296|296:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,212,28924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,204,29281,2,0,P|332:128|252:120,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,128,30353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,128,30710,6,0,L|88:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,208,31424,2,0,P|28:248|36:288,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,340,32138,2,0,P|208:356|272:316,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,33567,6,0,P|276:140|212:180,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,34638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,188,34995,2,0,P|20:148|20:104,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,48,35710,2,0,L|192:36,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,72,36424,6,0,P|348:100|428:76,1,160
472,164,37495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,164,37853,2,0,P|488:216|464:280,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,39278,6,0,L|224:204,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,124,40349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,176,40706,2,0,P|68:252|80:332,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,60,42848,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,43205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,184,43562,2,0,P|432:204|504:160,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,44633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,184,44990,6,0,L|332:348,1,160
256,284,46061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,344,46418,2,0,L|156:185,1,160
144,92,47490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47847,12,0,49632,0:0:0:0:
48,112,50704,6,0,P|108:164|192:160,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,162,52138,2,0,P|405:163|464:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,53566,6,0,L|280:284,1,160
204,240,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,176,54995,2,0,P|92:168|48:180,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,56423,6,0,P|352:104|428:92,1,160
480,172,57495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,260,57852,2,0,L|364:264,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,58566,2,0,L|200:312,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,280,59280,6,0,P|52:224|32:132,1,160
76,60,60352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,40,60709,2,0,P|256:24|336:32,1,160
416,68,61780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,62138,6,0,B|428:196|440:224|440:224|488:252|488:300,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,63209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,352,63566,2,0,L|220:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,312,64280,2,0,P|112:272|116:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,168,64995,6,0,P|104:148|32:184,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,66780,2,0,L|336:240,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,284,67495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,208,67852,6,0,P|488:128|456:48,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,68923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,44,69280,2,0,L|200:52,1,160
112,92,70352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,184,70709,6,0,P|84:256|220:352,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,72138,2,0,P|406:297|427:183,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,104,73566,6,0,P|256:76|132:104,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,74995,2,0,L|80:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,336,75709,2,0,P|172:344|220:328,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,76423,6,0,P|364:256|428:304,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,220,77495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,116,77852,2,0,P|396:128|332:80,1,160
248,48,78923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,48,79280,6,0,L|80:48,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,124,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,220,80709,2,0,L|116:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,81423,2,0,L|288:220,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,82137,6,0,P|448:200|488:268,1,160
392,276,83209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,368,83566,2,0,P|336:352|296:284,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,200,84637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,124,84995,6,0,L|120:116,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,184,85980,2,0,P|36:220|40:272,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86609,12,0,88917,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,703 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-11-03T08:11:30+00:00

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldiff
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Habi's Easy]
Nothing to Say.

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:04:996 (1) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow
00:13:210 (6) - try CTRL+G.
00:49:632 (1) - remove Nc 00:49:990 (2) - add Nc.
01:03:209 (3) - Please used distance snap.
01:07:852 (1) - add Finish. Because it is part of kiai.
01:19:102 (9) - I don't like 1/2 slider. Why can't use this?

01:26:295 (3) - I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please
this note Move 01:26:400 - here. and add Nc is better.

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkward

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T09:03:47+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Normal:
00:06:246 (4) - i don't like how you made this slider, it's kinda odd if you know what i mean, how about making it like this instead?
SPOILER
00:08:745 (2,3) - you were trying to blanket them? if that so it turn out bad so, how about fixing them like this?
SPOILER
00:20:174 (2) - well...it's kinda hard to follow this slider, since the next note is a bit down so how about making the last slider's point to here x:84 y:136
00:42:134 (1,2) - I know you were trying to make a nice blanket with those slider, but it turn out kinda bad imo, so how about making them like this?
SPOILER
01:04:995 (2,3) - those two slider kinda flowed badly, since you made the first curved slider on the wrong way so how about making the (2) slider like this?
SPOILER
Insane:
AR9 is a bit too fast for this song and for your diff, i suggest you lower it down by 1 since it'll follow better imo
00:03:035 (3) - I suggest you to stuck this note under 00:02:678 (2) - like you did here 00:01:249 (2,3) - it'll flow and play better
00:09:638 (5,2) - not stucked perfectly under the slider so you might want to move them to here x:161 or fix the slider instead o3o you have many ways to fix it
00:10:531 (3) - atm it's too close from the (1) and it's insane make fun jumps instead so, how about doing something like this?
SPOILER
00:15:710 (x) - I hear i beat here, and you kinda missed it with the sudden triples... so how about adding a note here so it'll flow better
00:44:276 (8,9) - I don't think it's gonna be fun, if there is so many liner sliders >< so how about making this two curved like this so it'll look fun and not boring while playing
SPOILER
00:52:852 (3) - move this slider to x:144 y:240 since it's overlapping with the other slider, it'll be better not to overlap
00:54:638 (5,6) - I don't like how you placed this two notes, looked kinda random to me, and it'll be better if you move them like this instead
SPOILER
00:57:495 (5,6) - how about making a fun pattern instead of just copying and pasting, well stuck the (5) on 00:56:959 (2) - and stuck the (6) on 00:57:138 (3) - so it'll make more fun to play and so pro players have fun and has more challenges
01:04:459 (7) - its seems you missed a note here, since i also here a beat here and you shouldn't have stoped so suddenly

Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !

wow!! very good mod..All Clear
Thanks!!

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T09:37:26+00:00

Satellite wrote:

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks check. alldifffix
AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 please

[Normal]
00:04:643 (1) - remove Nc and 00:04:996 (2) - add Nc. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.fix
00:20:174 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and this part is pretty quiet. I guess reduce the circle better.fix

00:26:424 (1,2) - hummm....Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I think 00:26:424 (1) - this slider more return. try this. and the interval between then, please fix.fix

01:02:138 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please used distance snap.fix

[Insane]
00:02:678 (2,3) - humm... I think slider follow better.no

01:04:637 (1) - This spacing is really awkwardOther fix

thanks~:D good mod

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-11-03T10:55:50+00:00

From my queue~

[Habi's Easy]

01:00:709 (3) - how about making horizonal correctly?
SPOILER
```
169,40,60709,2,0,P|257:24|337:45,1,160
```

[Normal]

00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888
00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctly
SPOILER
00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?
01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^
01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192

[Zzz's Hard]

Good!

[Insane]

00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)
00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DS

00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?

SPOILER

404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?

wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~

apl-

190 posts

Joined January 2013

apl- 2013-11-03T11:39:05+00:00

From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty.

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T12:10:34+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Normal]
00:20:531 (3) - I prefer to end at 00:20:888fix
00:40:884 (2) - curve more and blanket correctlyfix
SPOILER
00:50:704 (1,4) - stack correctly?fix
01:07:852 (1,1,2) - ^fix
01:19:816 (3,4) - a little confusing, imo. for example, move 01:20:530 (4) - to x:368 y:192fix
[Insane]
00:33:567 (4) - move to x:84 y:112 (for smoother cursor moving)fix
00:39:635 (2) - move to x:28 y:148 (an extension of 00:39:278 (1) - ) and adjust DSfix
00:54:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular triangle x2 ?fix
SPOILER
404,148,54102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,32,54280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,148,54459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,32,54816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:24:995- how about redusing SV like intro?????
wow, many modder got togetter for a brief period~
~Good Luck~

thanks and your so fun ww img ww

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T12:12:47+00:00

TestApple wrote:
From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Normal]
00:03:571 (1) - Spinner instead of slider.you see the old map
01:12:495 (1) - Careful the slider shape it's bending a bit too high.^

[Insane]
00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Woah watch the shape of the stream here from the looks of it it'd be better to follow the shape of the next slider.??
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ and also NC.??

thanks mod

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-11-03T12:23:12+00:00

엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.

AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T12:28:30+00:00

Losertic wrote:
엇, 지금 보니까 인세인 AR8이네요.

AR 9 어떠세요ㅋ

그게 저도 원래 AR9로 설정했었는데 모딩받으면서 3명이나 AR8로 하라고 해서 어쩔수 없이..내림..

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T13:59:26+00:00

Lolicore_Komari wrote:
M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요

[Normal]
00:15:531 (2) - 좀더 곡선으로 만들어주세요넵
00:29:638 (4) - Delete노
01:17:852 (1) - NC 제거넵

[Insane]
00:07:317 (6) - NC넵

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL

로리 만세!

감사합니다ㅋㅋ 제가 정신이 없어서 님 모딩을 그냥 지나쳤네여ㅋㅋㅋ;;;;;
죄송합니다..and 감사합니다ㅎ

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-11-03T15:07:51+00:00

From my queue + PM + IRC

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

AImod

깔끔 ^^

Habi's Easy

00:07:853 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스
00:26:424 - 00:26:960 - 휘슬빼시고 피니쉬로. (왜 커스텀 피니쉬에 휘슬 사운드를 넣었는지 잘 모르겠네요)
00:31:424 (2,3) - 디스턴스
00:34:995 (3,4) - ^
00:43:562 (3,4) - 조금 더 구부리면 잘 감싸질듯
01:04:995 (1) - ^
01:00:709 (3) - 동선을 위해

01:03:566 (3,4) - 디스턴스
01:07:852 (1,2) - ^
01:17:495 (2,3) - ^
01:25:980 (2) - 30||149

Normal

00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선

00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천

00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요

01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Zzz's Hard

00:06:781 (5,6,7) - 디스턴스 2.05 다음에 같은 방향으로 무빙하려면 하드 치고는 좀 어렵지 않을까요? 사진처럼 평범하게 하는걸 추천드려요

00:25:888 (3) - 아무 소리도 안들려서 예측하기 힘든 박자네요 D:
00:44:633 (6)가 144||272자리에 오고, 00:44:990 (1)가 204||100자리에 오는게 더 동선이 좋지 않을까요?
01:01:423 (6,7) - 6번 써클 마주보게 해주세요
01:12:852 (5,1) - 약간 헷갈리는데 137||298정도로 겹쳐보이게 하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:19:102 (9) - 뜬금없는 1/4 슬라라니; 그냥 써클로 바꾸는걸 추천

Insane

00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!

00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천

00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요

00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정

00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?

1번 슬라 복사 후 ctrl + R -> -120 도 회전

01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-03T16:46:50+00:00

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General

AImod

깔끔 ^^

Normal

00:13:567 (2) - 333||213
00:20:353 (2) - 00:20:353 에 있는 편이 플레이할때 편하네요
00:19:638 (1,3) - 그닥 보기 안좋아요. 다른 곳에 배치하는걸 추천
00:23:210 (2) - 동선

00:29:638 (4) - 제거
00:31:424 ,00:31:781 슬라이더 틱 이용해주세요
00:38:387 (5) - 박자추천

00:46:240 (2) - 169||209
00:46:775 (3) - 114||362
00:50:704 (1,4) - 잘 스택해주세요
01:01:602 (5) - 동선이 흐트러지네요ㄷ 사진처럼 바꿔보세요

01:04:995 (2,3) - 크게 문제되지않지만, 딱히 보기 안좋아요. 슬라이더 끝과 머리가 마주보도록 하는걸 추천 (01:07:138 (6,1) 이렇게요)
01:23:923 (4,1,2) - 마무리 대칭으로 추천 ->

Insane

00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 스트림 예쁘게 내는법!

00:07:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:09:995 (1,2,3,1) - 모양추천

00:15:531 (3) - 이렇게 슬라이더 처리하는게 박자,디스턴스가 안헷갈리게 할 수 있어요

00:19:281 (3) - 195||299
00:23:210 (4,5,6) - 노래랑 잘어울리는 박자로 수정

00:26:424 (1,2) - 피니쉬
00:32:674 - 노트 추가
00:42:669 (3,5) - 같은 슬라로 바꿔주세요
00:53:566 (1,2) - 디스턴스
01:01:066 (2) - 1번슬라 복사후 ctrl + g
01:01:602 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 스트림 부드럽게 해주세요.(모딩 맨 위 참고)
01:02:138 (1,2) - 두 슬라가 감싸는 정도와 01:02:673 (2,3) 두 노트가 감싸는 정도가 비슷해야 보기 좋겠죠?

1번 슬라 복사 후 ctrl + R -> -120 도 회전

01:22:316 - 갑자기 허전해져요. 이전슬라를 연장하거나 노트추가
01:25:980 (3) - 곡선 슬라로 바꾸는 걸 추천

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>[/quote]

제가 머 고쳤는지 까먹었네여ㅋㅋ(거의 다 수정 완료)

감사합니닿

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,425 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2013-11-03T20:43:53+00:00

Hey! m4m time

[General]
~~Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii.~~ Well, fixed. lol

[Easy]
00:39:278 - 00:44:990 - The soft Hitsounds (except Finish) are pretty weird and noisy. You should keep the SC:1 like you did before, about the Finishes: Keep them in.
00:44:990 (1,3) - You could do at the end of the Sliders the Normal Sampleset, it fits great with the guitar riff.

Nothing more to add, fine Easy.

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:

408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Hard]
00:04:467 (2) - That feels extremly bad and weird to play. Please try this out: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078641
00:07:317 (7) - Here too.
00:47:490 (5,6) - I'd to see a more diagonal curve with these two circles, I tried out and it feels better as the current: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078652
01:01:602 (7) - Same as 00:04:467 (2).
01:19:102 (9,1) - I don't get the flow here.. I think you can use two circles instead the (9) Slider here.

Nothing to say, nice Hard Diff.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Sonico Makaron 2013-11-04T06:33:52+00:00

Hi

[Genera]
looks fine

[Habi's Easy]
00:00:714 (1) - NC since the bug
00:04:996 (1) - maybe use standart soft finish? sounds more better imo
00:06:424 (3) - remove clap at the end slider, since clap not fit here imo
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:13:567 (4) - please don't use stacks in an easy, since it hard to read for beginners
00:26:424 (3) - NC?
00:27:853 (1) - same suggestion as 00:04:996 (1)
00:30:710 (1) - same as 00:13:567 (4)
00:52:138 (3) - remove clap at the end slider
01:04:995 (1) - remove clap at he repeat slider
01:13:566 (1) - maybe use same form slider as 01:12:138 (2) -

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)

[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1) - add NC
00:02:142 (4) - maybe NC?
00:25:888 (3) - delete note, it will be better follow for vocal

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NC
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finish
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clap
01:01:602 (4) - NC

good map~
good luck

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-04T09:42:53+00:00

Stefan wrote:
Hey! m4m time

[General]
~~Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii.~~ Well, fixed. lol

[Normal]
00:32:317 (3,4) - A smoother curve will let it look a bit nicer. Move (3) to 28;280 and (4) to 52;224.
00:48:740 (3) - Change the way more like this: http://puu.sh/57ArM.jpg
00:49:990 - 00:53:209 - That part looks a bit messy.. try this code and tell if you like how I changed this:
408,256,49990,5,2,0:0:0:0:
460,148,50347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,68,50704,6,0,P|310:71|259:98,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,51421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,208,52138,2,0,P|380:200|428:164,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,92,53209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:01:602 (5,1,2) - Stack (5) at the end of (4) and make (1,2) to a better curve: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078067
01:04:995 (2,3) - Personally it looks better if you rotate the Curve sliders like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078071
01:16:959 (3) - Move it to 236;308 for a smoother curve with (2).
01:18:566 (2,1) - (2) leads to nothing, the Flow suffers under that so you should change this more like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078116

well, the Diff needs some Nazi Modding and that.. but it goes on a good way.

[Insane]
01:01:602 (4,5,9) - I think the Stream fits more with the Music if you remove the Claps here.
01:07:405 (2,3) - Strg+G?

Looks fine.

Good Luck \:3

All fix!!

very good mod +_+b thank you

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-04T09:45:18+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hi

[Genera]
looks fine

[Normal]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:04:996 (1) - add soft standart finish?fix
00:09:995 (4) - add NC?no
00:16:424 (1) - same as 00:04:996 (1)fix

[Insane]
00:00:714 (1) - NCfix
00:12:317 (5) - citrl+g?fix
00:16:424 (1) - use soft standart finishfix
00:27:495 (3) - add whistle and remove clapfix
01:01:602 (4) - NCfix

good map~
good luck

thanks~ good mod

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2013-11-05T10:03:18+00:00

taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[

Muzukashii]

General

☞ nothing~

Notes Structure

☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.

☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.

Notes

• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 -

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 -

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there

====================

[

Oni]

General

☞ nothing~

Notes Structure

☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up

Notes

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods.

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 -

====================

okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo

keep it up~!

Sonnyc

7,776 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-11-05T16:18:02+00:00

Zzz's Hard:

00:02:142 (4) - 뉴콤?
00:10:263 (5) - 엇박이니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요. 헷갈릴수 있을듯
00:22:674 (9,1) - 가사 따르시려면 (9) 부터 뉴콤?
00:25:888 (3) - 삭제하는게 가사와 자연스러울듯요.
00:26:067 (4) - 악기 강조 뉴콤?
01:14:816 (4) - 랜덤 점프 느낌이 나요 개인적으로.
01:19:102 (9) - 그냥 일반적 연타가 더 나을거 같아요.

Insane:

00:02:678 (2,3) - (316,148)이 슬라이더와의 흐름상 더 나을거 같습니다.
00:09:638 (5) - (384,224)에 놓는건 어때요? 다음 노트와 간격을 짧게 해 놓은게 살짝 안어울리는거 같고, 좀 거리 두는게 나을거 같아요.
00:16:781 (2) - 뉴콤? 이거도 앞 노트랑 가까운게 약간 이상한거 같아요. 점 띄워 주시는게 어떠실지.
00:20:353 (5,1) - 여기는 점프 없는게 나을듯요
00:35:353 (6) - (252,176)이 더 부드러운 흐름이 될거 같아요
00:47:668 (2) - 앞과 점프 좀 어색한듯요
01:07:673 (3,1) - 많이 가까워서 어색한듯 합니다.
01:24:816 (3,1) - (1) 부터는 약간 부드러운 구간인데 이 사이에 점프가 있는게 좀 부담스럽게 느껴졌습니다.
01:26:400 (1) - 마지막에 거의 소리가 안나니까 5% 처리 해주세요.

제법 괜찮게 만드신듯요

~~내일 완성을 <<~~

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-05T17:35:24+00:00

My 200th post~ \:D/

mingmichael wrote:
taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ nothing~

Notes Structure
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.
☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.

Notes
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 - I followed the snare drum strikes there, so no change~

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent fixed

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now OK

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here fixed

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here. The vocal is of the same pitch as 00:24:995 - that's why I used kat there.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes fixed

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only fixed

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 - Nice~ :3

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o fixed

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too changed to k d kkk d

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there fixed

====================

[ Oni]

General
☞ nothing~

Notes Structure
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up

Notes
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song fixed

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods. fixed

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break fixed

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before fixed

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 - The strings are of the same pitch, and I used kats to map the snare drums there, so no change~

====================

okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo keep it up~! Thanks >_<"

Thanks for your mod michael~~

>Update<

DreaM117er

1,596 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2013-11-06T05:17:59+00:00

OK...I'm late...
From Queue...after midterm exam...

Insane

Open to read

No more problem. make better look^^

00:07:853 (1) - move to x136 y232
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - a little close
00:37:317 (6,7,8) - How about this↓ I test this better than before.

00:58:388 (2) - move to x56 y236
00:59:816 (3) - move to x284 y268
01:00:709 (1) - move to x396 y296, and bending point add x421 y332
01:01:066 (2) - copy 01:00:709 (1) , rotate +170 and move to x504 y192
01:01:423 (2) - move to x308 y148
01:03:745 (5,7,1) - move to x448 y288
01:06:066 (6,9) - move to x300 y204
01:06:245 (7) - move to x368 y144
01:06:423 (8) - move to x300 y28
01:07:673 (3,1) - too close, 01:07:673 (3) stacking 01:07:852 (1) better or change like↓
01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - ↓

01:10:173 (4) - rotate +18 and move to x280 y224
01:10:709 (1) - bending point move to x356 y64
01:14:995 (1) - bending point move to x96 y196
01:18:566 (5) - add bending point better
01:20:173 (6) - move to x92 y200
01:21:602 (6) - ^
01:24:637 (2,3) - How about move to x256 y348
01:24:995 (1,2) - too close

Zzz's Hard

Open to read

00:06:781 (5,6) - get close
00:25:531 (2,3) - change a slider better
01:11:423 (3,4,5,1) - make nice!!!
01:24:816 - follow lyric better

Normal

Open to read

00:03:571 (1) - del
00:04:291 (4) - add new combo circle
01:00:709 (4,5) - two no reverse slider better

Habi's Easy

Open to read

00:00:714 (1) - no reverse slider end 00:01:606
00:03:571 (3) - del
00:04:291 (3) - add new combo circle
00:39:278 (1) - slider end 00:39:813
00:42:848 (1,2) - sound strange
01:07:495 (3) - del better, 'cause voice start blue line

OK, little problem.

I very like this song, before you ask me for mod.
So I'll watch you= =+
and star for you.
Good lock

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-06T05:33:56+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
My 200th post~ \:D/

mingmichael wrote:
taiko mods come as nardo request~

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it

[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ nothing~

Notes Structure
☞ try to mixed background and vocal sounds as well, but don't make them to be inconsistent pattern. i saw you just followed the vocal sounds, but when the vocal sounds don't appear, you didn't put any notes. so, it'll like an awkward moment to get a breaks more than 1/4.
☞ do not use o o o notes for many times at the kiai parts. try give some a single note only or try with 5-notes and more variation stuctures.

Notes
• change 00:15:888 - to be don. well, to make same pattern like 00:12:495 - until 00:13:210 - which are oo and o o. it'll be same if you use my mod from 00:15:353 - until 00:16:067 - I followed the snare drum strikes there, so no change~

• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . so from 00:18:03 - until 00:18:567 - will be o o o o . this makes a great failing pitch sounds (for vocal sounds) at there and it's much better too than previous notes that you used at this part. and then, don at 00:18:567 - will follow the drum hits also. you didn't put any notes there, so the break which is given is 2/4 bearks. it's not efficient. and you used them too at 00:18:031 - until 00:18:567 - too :c be more consistent fixed

• add kat at 00:21:781 - to follow the drum hit from the background song. much better than you didn't use it like yours now OK

• inconsistent pattern. 00:22:674 - should be don, same as 00:16:960 - . they have a same part of song and same pitch sounds too as well fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . so it'll be o o o o. much better too to follow the background song as well. and you can looked at yours before. it just two notes at 00:23:745 - and 00:24:103 -. they will follow the vocal sounds, but it seems akward because they will have 2/4 bearks again after the last note. consider again at here fixed

• don at 00:25:531 - . the vocal sound that you followed already becomes low at here. The vocal is of the same pitch as 00:24:995 - that's why I used kat there.

• add don at 00:29:995 - . sounds weird if you just followed the vocal, but when the vocal sound doesn't appear, you didn't put any notes fixed

• delete 00:52:316 - . try to make a single note only fixed

• move 01:02:048 - to 01:01:870 - and change it to be don. so it'll be ooo triplet. and change 01:01:870 - to be don. those suggestions to follow the vocal sound at 01:02:138 - and mixed by background too at 01:01:423 - until 01:01:959 - Nice~ :3

• delete 01:09:459 - . same like the previous mod too the reason. try to use single note, not always o o o fixed

• 01:18:566 - until 01:19:280 - , same like the previous part too changed to k d kkk d

• don 01:24:816 - to follow the vocal sound which still appear at there fixed

====================

[ Oni]

General
☞ nothing~

Notes Structure
☞ kats are used wisely and nicely~! keep it up

Notes
• add kat at 00:18:210 - and don at 00:18:567 - . same reason like Muzukashii diff. it's quite weird if you just follwed the vocal sounds. but, when there are not any vocal sounds, you didn't put anything there. try mixed vocal with background song fixed

• delete 00:21:513 - here. it's really weird to use triplet there. and also it's weird too if you used triplets when the song is calm, like at here. try to hear the part of the song, do not overmapped fixed

• add kat at 00:23:924 - and don at 00:24:281 - . the reason is same too like Muzukashii and the first mod Oni mods. fixed

• 00:25:888 - don here. seems an awkward break too there with 2/4 break fixed

• change 00:47:936 - to be kat. ooo gives stronger triplet than ooo triplet that you used before fixed

• 01:18:745 - still don at here. the string sound becomes higher at 01:18:923 - not at 01:18:745 - The strings are of the same pitch, and I used kats to map the snare drums there, so no change~

====================

okay that's all from me
btw, your mapping skills have been improved, nardo keep it up~! Thanks >_<"
Thanks for your mod michael~~
>Update<

update lol

Last edited by [ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-06T09:11:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[ Yuki ]_old

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[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-06T06:38:51+00:00

m1223961117 wrote:
OK...I'm late...
From Queue...after midterm exam...

Insane
Open to read
No more problem. make better look^^

00:07:853 (1) - move to x136 y232
00:09:995 (1,2,3) - a little close
00:37:317 (6,7,8) - How about this↓ I test this better than before.

00:58:388 (2) - move to x56 y236
00:59:816 (3) - move to x284 y268
01:00:709 (1) - move to x396 y296, and bending point add x421 y332
01:01:066 (2) - copy 01:00:709 (1) , rotate +170 and move to x504 y192
01:01:423 (2) - move to x308 y148
01:03:745 (5,7,1) - move to x448 y288
01:06:066 (6,9) - move to x300 y204
01:06:245 (7) - move to x368 y144
01:06:423 (8) - move to x300 y28
01:07:673 (3,1) - too close, 01:07:673 (3) stacking 01:07:852 (1) better or change like↓
01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - ↓

01:10:173 (4) - rotate +18 and move to x280 y224
01:10:709 (1) - bending point move to x356 y64
01:14:995 (1) - bending point move to x96 y196
01:18:566 (5) - add bending point better
01:20:173 (6) - move to x92 y200
01:21:602 (6) - ^
01:24:637 (2,3) - How about move to x256 y348
01:24:995 (1,2) - too close

Normal
Open to read
00:03:571 (1) - del
00:04:291 (4) - add new combo circle
01:00:709 (4,5) - two no reverse slider better

I very like this song, before you ask me for mod.
So I'll watch you= =+
and star for you.
Good lock

thank you mod and star

:D

[ Yuki ]_old

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[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-06T11:11:33+00:00

Insane:

00:02:678 (2,3) - (316,148)이 슬라이더와의 흐름상 더 나을거 같습니다.
00:09:638 (5) - (384,224)에 놓는건 어때요? 다음 노트와 간격을 짧게 해 놓은게 살짝 안어울리는거 같고, 좀 거리 두는게 나을거 같아요.
00:16:781 (2) - 뉴콤? 이거도 앞 노트랑 가까운게 약간 이상한거 같아요. 점 띄워 주시는게 어떠실지.
00:20:353 (5,1) - 여기는 점프 없는게 나을듯요
00:35:353 (6) - (252,176)이 더 부드러운 흐름이 될거 같아요
00:47:668 (2) - 앞과 점프 좀 어색한듯요
01:07:673 (3,1) - 많이 가까워서 어색한듯 합니다.
01:24:816 (3,1) - (1) 부터는 약간 부드러운 구간인데 이 사이에 점프가 있는게 좀 부담스럽게 느껴졌습니다.
01:26:400 (1) - 마지막에 거의 소리가 안나니까 5% 처리 해주세요.

제법 괜찮게 만드신듯요

~~내일 완성을 <<~~[/quote]

모딩 감사합니다ㅎ and별도 감사합니다 ㅠㅜ 모두 고쳤습니다

헐 저같은 초보가 님한테 이런 소리를 듣다니!!감격 감사합니다!!

[ Zzz ]

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:06:20+00:00

jogfi2002 wrote:
[General]
Try to add audio lead-in

- Consider adding "Habi" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Nardo" to all of your tags

[Zzz's Hard]

00:02:142 (4) - New combo ( yes )
00:04:291 (7) - ^ ( yes )
00:10:263 (5,6) - This jump is a bit nazi ( umm.. no... )
00:24:638 (5) - Change it to a 1/8 reversing slider ( no... )
00:25:531 (2,3) - Make it into a slider ( no... )
00:47:490 (5) - New combo ( no... )
00:47:847 (1) - If you accepted the previous advice, remove new combo here ( no... )
00:48:382 (2) - Make this slider half length, then add one note(New combo) at 00:48:740 ( no... )
01:26:295 (3) - I think it's better if you remove this note ( umm.. )

Good map, hope to see it ranked soon!
Since you have got many stars already, I won't shoot a star.

Thanks~ jogfi2002

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:07:38+00:00

Lolicore_Komari wrote:
M4M 왔습니다! 너무 늦었네요

[Hard]
00:04:291 (7) - 이거랑 전노트랑 간격이 좀 넓은데 NC 넣어도 괜찮을듯 ( 네~ )

노래 맵 둘다 좋네요!
GL

로리 만세!

모딩 감사합니다~

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:08:56+00:00

GasTheJuice wrote:
Zzz's hard difficulty

00:44:990 Not sure why you are stacking, might want to space it out
00:47:132 New combo

all no...

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:23:50+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote:
hey found this in Mod Requests, And ChouCho <3

Zzz's Hard:
00:10:263 (5,6) - wow...this jump is a bit too high for the hard diff, so you might want to make less ds
00:14:906 (5) - I don't this note follows anything is just overmapped, i suggest you to remove it
01:19:102 (9) - wtf? you followed the beat nicely untill here? why did you do that lol remove it and add 1 note instead, don't make overmapped stuff ;w;
( umm.. I Now More like it!
no change, sorry.. )

Good map so far, and good song choice >w< good luck i hope this helps you !

Thanks~ Sekai-nyan

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:36:22+00:00

Satellite wrote:

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:04:996 (1) - Missed finish on purpose? I think a finish fits better anyhow
00:13:210 (6) - try CTRL+G.
00:49:632 (1) - remove Nc 00:49:990 (2) - add Nc.
01:03:209 (3) - Please used distance snap.
01:07:852 (1) - add Finish. Because it is part of kiai.
01:19:102 (9) - I don't like 1/2 slider. Why can't use this? ( ..... )

01:26:295 (3) - I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please
this note Move 01:26:400 - here. and add Nc is better.

All Done

Thanks!!

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T00:39:14+00:00

TestApple wrote:
From Lion's Queue~ Rawr!

[Zzz's Hard]
00:03:392 - Add a spinner? It feels really REALLY empty. ( It is a good suggestion. Players will feel much difficulty. ) no...

Thanks~ TestApple

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:05:32+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
From my queue + PM + IRC

편의상 한국어로 할게요.

General
AImod
깔끔 ^^

Zzz's Hard
00:06:781 (5,6,7) - 디스턴스 2.05 다음에 같은 방향으로 무빙하려면 하드 치고는 좀 어렵지 않을까요? 사진처럼 평범하게 하는걸 추천드려요 ( 올올!! 좋네요!! 이런모양이 있었다니!! 미처 생각을 못함 ㅠㅠㅠ.. ) ok~
00:25:888 (3) - 아무 소리도 안들려서 예측하기 힘든 박자네요 D: ( D: ... 음.. 잘 들어보면 들리긴 하는데 .. 되도록 개인적으로 저거 바꾸고 싶지 않아서요 ... 죄송... )
00:44:633 (6)가 144||272자리에 오고, 00:44:990 (1)가 204||100자리에 오는게 더 동선이 좋지 않을까요? ( 음 ..지금 이대로도 괜찮아보여요!! )
01:01:423 (6,7) - 6번 써클 마주보게 해주세요 ( 만약 마주보게 하면 슬라이더 모양이랑 바꿔야 될꺼같고 지금도 문제없어보여서 바꾸지않을깨요!. )
01:12:852 (5,1) - 약간 헷갈리는데 137||298정도로 겹쳐보이게 하는게 더 좋아보여요 ( ㅠㅠ... 개인적으로 지금이 더 보기좋아서 ... 다른모딩도 거절하는중.. )
01:19:102 (9) - 뜬금없는 1/4 슬라라니; 그냥 써클로 바꾸는걸 추천 ( ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 이 모딩만 10번은 더받은듯 ... 지겨워서 고쳤어요!! )ok~

별은 이미 쐈으니, 굳럭 :>

모딩 감사합니다~

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:14:36+00:00

Stefan wrote:
Hey! m4m time

[General]
~~Please fix the Tag "Nardoxyribonucleic" in Nardo's Muzukashii.~~ Well, fixed. lol

[Hard]
00:04:467 (2) - That feels extremly bad and weird to play. Please try this out: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078641
00:07:317 (7) - Here too.
00:47:490 (5,6) - I'd to see a more diagonal curve with these two circles, I tried out and it feels better as the current: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1078652
01:01:602 (7) - Same as 00:04:467 (2).
01:19:102 (9,1) - I don't get the flow here.. I think you can use two circles instead the (9) Slider here. ( yes.. Done )

Nothing to say, nice Hard Diff. ( ohoh! Thanks~ ) It's okay the way you are.

Good Luck \:3

Thanks~!! Stefan

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:16:38+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hi

[Genera]
looks fine

[Zzz's Hard]
00:00:714 (1) - add NC ( yes )
00:02:142 (4) - maybe NC? ( yes )
00:25:888 (3) - delete note, it will be better follow for vocal ( no... )

good map~
good luck

Thanks~ Sonico Makaron

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:20:36+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Zzz's Hard:

00:02:142 (4) - 뉴콤? ( ㅇㅇ )
00:10:263 (5) - 엇박이니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요. 헷갈릴수 있을듯 ( 흑.. 역시 !!! ㅇㅋ )
00:22:674 (9,1) - 가사 따르시려면 (9) 부터 뉴콤? ( 음 .. 이건 개인적으로 10부터 뉴콤하고싶어서요!!! )
00:25:888 (3) - 삭제하는게 가사와 자연스러울듯요. ( 역시 그런가요 ... 어쩔수없죠 ..삭제 ㄱㄱ! )
00:26:067 (4) - 악기 강조 뉴콤? ( ㅇㅋ )
01:14:816 (4) - 랜덤 점프 느낌이 나요 개인적으로. ( 노림!!! )
01:19:102 (9) - 그냥 일반적 연타가 더 나을거 같아요. ( 흑 .. 자꾸 질리도록 모딩와서 ... 이미 ㅇㅋ함! )

제법 괜찮게 만드신듯요

~~내일 완성을 <<~~

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:21:57+00:00

m1223961117 wrote:
OK...I'm late...
From Queue...after midterm exam...

Zzz's Hard
Open to read
00:06:781 (5,6) - get close
00:25:531 (2,3) - change a slider better
01:11:423 (3,4,5,1) - make nice!!!
01:24:816 - follow lyric better

I very like this song, before you ask me for mod.
So I'll watch you= =+
and star for you.
Good lock

Thanks~ m1223961117

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Sonnyc 2013-11-07T01:23:01+00:00

크흠,, 이왕이면 코맨트는 한 포스트에 다 해주시는게 나을거 같아요

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[ Zzz ] 2013-11-07T01:24:59+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
크흠,, 이왕이면 코맨트는 한 포스트에 다 해주시는게 나을거 같아요

네네~

유키님, 전부 모딩 다고쳤어요!!

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic
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17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-07T07:32:53+00:00

매니아 겟난 by request 완성..

~~4키는 쉬우니 오늘내로 금방 만들어드릴게요...~~

7키 인세인

http://puu.sh/5b8dt.osu

4키 이지

http://puu.sh/5b8CP.osu

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-07T10:57:53+00:00

17VA wrote:
매니아 겟난 by request 완성..

~~4키는 쉬우니 오늘내로 금방 만들어드릴게요...~~

7키 인세인

http://puu.sh/5b8dt.osu

4키 이지

http://puu.sh/5b8CP.osu

오오!! 정말 해주시다니! 감사합니다!

Super Creek

2,540 posts

Joined July 2012

Super Creek 2013-11-07T17:10:28+00:00

mania mod from 17VA request .
1st.
volume 0% , adjust this plz

[4k NM]
i think this is normal+
00:09:281 (9281|2,9638|3) - ctrl + j
00:18:210 (18210|0,18567|0,18924|0,19281|0) - move to 2nd collumn , try arrange different collumn every measure if its repeating too much
00:27:495 - add at 4th
00:44:276 (44276|3,44276|0,44276|1,44276|2,44633|2,44633|3,44633|0,44633|1) - D: why suddenly 4 notes

[7K Starlog]
00:00:535 (535|2,624|3) - snap this to 1/6 00:00:594
00:04:467 (4467|2,4555|1,4643|0) - end this LN at here 00:04:820 looks a bit nicer
00:07:317 (7317|2,7406|1,7495|0) - ^
00:15:531 (15531|5) - move to 4
00:17:853 - same as 4k issue, arrange bass in diff collumn
00:26:424 (26424|0) - ends here 00:26:960
00:33:567 (33567|0) - make this LN as well? till here 00:34:103
00:45:704 - add at 1st collumn
00:48:740 (48740|0,48918|2) - snap on 1/2 plz
01:01:602 (61602|0,61602|3,61691|1,61691|4,61780|2,61780|5,61870|3,61870|6,61959|4,61959|0,62048|5,62048|1,62138|6,62138|2) - try this? http://puu.sh/5boGM.jpg
01:26:295 (86295|2,86295|0) - should be here
01:26:330 (1/6)

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-08T00:32:51+00:00

Well, I set the volume to 0 but real volume is 5 I will check when I am on a desktop.

HabiHolic

5,462 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-11-08T07:41:47+00:00

늦어서 ㅈㅅ합니다!..ㅠㅠ

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468,260,13567,2,0,P|480:208|460:128,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,14995,12,6,16424,0:0:0:0:
152,96,17138,6,0,L|32:84,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,44,18567,2,0,P|268:60|316:60,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,60,19281,6,0,P|448:120|440:208,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,20353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,20710,2,0,L|200:228,1,80
140,156,21424,2,0,L|60:148,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,236,22138,6,0,P|56:304|140:332,1,160
220,296,23210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,256,23567,2,0,L|396:268,1,80
468,212,24281,2,0,P|480:172|476:128,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,68,24995,6,0,P|336:92|260:60,1,160
168,40,26067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,132,26424,2,0,L|12:120,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,27853,6,0,P|216:296|296:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,212,28924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,204,29281,2,0,P|332:128|252:120,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,128,30353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,128,30710,6,0,L|88:136,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,212,31424,2,0,P|28:252|36:292,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,340,32138,2,0,P|204:356|268:316,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,33567,6,0,P|276:140|212:180,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,34638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,188,34995,2,0,P|20:148|20:104,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,48,35710,2,0,L|192:36,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,72,36424,6,0,P|348:100|428:76,1,160
472,164,37495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,164,37853,2,0,P|488:216|464:280,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,39278,6,0,L|224:204,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,124,40349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,176,40706,2,0,P|68:252|80:332,2,160,0|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,60,42848,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,43205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,184,43562,2,0,P|432:204|504:160,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,44633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,184,44990,6,0,L|332:348,1,160
256,284,46061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,344,46418,2,0,L|156:185,1,160
144,92,47490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,47847,12,0,49632,0:0:0:0:
48,112,50704,6,0,P|108:164|192:160,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,104,51780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,162,52138,2,0,P|405:163|464:112,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,53566,6,0,L|280:284,1,160
204,240,54638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,176,54995,2,0,P|92:168|48:180,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,56423,6,0,P|352:104|428:92,1,160
480,172,57495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,260,57852,2,0,L|364:264,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,58566,2,0,L|200:312,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,280,59280,6,0,P|52:224|32:132,1,160
76,60,60352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,40,60709,2,0,P|256:24|336:45,1,160
416,68,61780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,160,62138,6,0,B|428:196|440:224|440:224|488:252|488:300,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,63209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,352,63566,2,0,L|220:356,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,316,64280,2,0,P|116:276|120:236,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,168,64995,6,0,P|104:148|32:184,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,66780,2,0,L|336:240,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,284,67495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,208,67852,6,0,P|488:128|456:48,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,44,68923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,44,69280,2,0,L|200:52,1,160
112,92,70352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,184,70709,6,0,P|84:256|220:352,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,72138,2,0,P|406:297|427:183,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,104,73566,6,0,P|256:76|132:104,1,240,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,74995,2,0,L|80:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,336,75709,2,0,P|172:344|220:328,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,268,76423,6,0,P|364:256|428:304,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,220,77495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,124,77852,2,0,P|388:136|324:88,1,160
248,48,78923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,48,79280,6,0,L|80:48,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,124,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,220,80709,2,0,L|116:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,81423,2,0,L|288:220,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,82137,6,0,P|448:200|488:268,1,160
392,276,83209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,368,83566,2,0,P|336:352|296:284,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,200,84637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,124,84995,6,0,L|120:116,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,184,85980,2,0,P|36:220|40:272,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86609,12,0,88917,0:0:0:0:

richardfeder

1,062 posts

Joined March 2013

richardfeder 2013-11-08T13:01:14+00:00

Here comes mania \:D/
From queue XD

4K NM

Consider this is the easiest diff in this mapset,
HP -1 and remove speed change. Speed change is really hard to catch for newbie.

The following aim at make this diff more concise and focus on the sound that could be concentrated most XD
00:10:710 (10710|0) - stop at 00:10:888 -

00:11:781 (11781|3) - add

From 00:12:138 (12138|0) - to 00:14:995 (14995|0) -
I suggest you use LN all the way this part to maintain the continuously showing up violin. The reasons is drums patterns could be used anywhere and if you have any chance to get rid of it(most of this diff is doing drums actually), then do something different to highlight the difference between this part and the rest since violin is obviously the easiest sound to catch. Up to you XDD

Try this:
00:14:995 (14995|0) - prolong to 00:15:531 -
00:15:353 (15353|2,15353|1) - delete
00:15:531 (15531|3) - prolong to 00:16:424 - and delete 00:16:067 (16067|0) - ,00:16:424 (16424|1,16424|3) -
00:15:353 (15353|1) - move to 00:15:531 (15531|1) -
00:15:888 (15888|1) - move left, 00:15:888 (15888|2) - to 00:15:978 (15978|1) - and add at 00:16:067 (16067|2) -
00:16:424 (16424|0) - add
Now this becomes clear and easier

00:22:138 (22138|0,22495|0,22853|0,23210|0,23567|2,23567|0,23924|0,24103|1,24281|0,24638|0,24995|0,24995|3,25353|0,25531|2,25710|0,26067|0) - mirror. do not need to stick to the "left to right" direction since mirror also makes sense

00:27:495 (27495|0) - move to 0/1/2/3

00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|0,44633|1,44633|0) - delete. really should not appear in this diff

01:01:423 (61423|0,61780|3) - confusing. suit neither voice nor rapidly hit drum. not very sure about this part

01:06:959 (66959|2) - delete

01:18:745 (78745|3,78923|1) - same as previous. make them more easy to understand

overall is good

7k starlog

00:00:535 (535|2) - and 00:00:624 (624|3) - left and add at 00:00:669 (669|3) -

00:04:643 (4643|0) - delete and move 00:04:643 (4643|5) - to 0

00:05:174 (5174|4) - delete

00:05:531 (5531|4) - ^

00:07:495 (7495|5,7495|0) - same as previous

00:08:745 (8745|1) - delete

00:10:888 (10888|2) - delete

00:11:067 - http://puu.sh/5c9lg.jpg

00:14:995 - to 00:16:424 - i cannot understand any LN... also 00:15:353 (15353|1,15353|0,15353|6,15531|5) - seems reverse. try this maybe? http://puu.sh/5c9DF.jpg

00:30:888 (30888|4) - move one column left(3) to parallel 00:31:067 (31067|1,31245|3,31424|5,31603|3,31781|1) -

00:31:960 (31960|4) - same

00:33:745 (33745|5) - move to 1

00:33:924 (33924|1) - to 3

00:34:103 (34103|4) - to 5

00:39:456 (39456|4) - add
drum. following are the same
00:39:635 (39635|5) - add

00:39:278 (39278|6,40527|4,41063|3) - strongly suggest delete voices. not suitable

00:40:527 (40527|3) - add

00:40:706 (40706|5) - add

00:49:990 (49990|6) - from here you map voice for LN... if it's me i will map both violin and cello for LN. from here, in fact, nothing was wrong but everything back to LN for voice and notes for drums and it last for nearly 40s... a little boring and uncreative. maybe try to map LN for violin and cello and add element for piano will make this part more interesting and give player a feeling that they are really following the music, not just going after the constantly unchanged, drums. Remap some will make a big difference. now it is not so fun and seems copy of a boring style. There are more choice! just pick sound that more likely to be follow and play XD

overall it is good

Nice song
Good luck~

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-08T13:15:45+00:00

http://puu.sh/5caCV.osu

http://puu.sh/5caD6.osu

여기요.

thanks for your mod

Roxas

osu! Alumni

1,354 posts

Joined August 2011

Roxas 2013-11-08T17:26:14+00:00

[General]
Change the source in "Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA*ILLYA", the ☆ is not permitted since it's a non-ASCII char (if I'm not wrong), but I'm sure it's not permitted.
@17VA: Change your diffs in "17VA's NM" and "17VA's Starlog"? You know the key amount it's written in osu!

[Habi's Easy]
01:00:709 (3) - Make a thing like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087536
01:19:280 (1) - Put a red dot like in the screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087539

Nice diff!

[Normal]
00:32:495 (4) - Make a bit curve like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087544
00:40:884 (2) - I don't like how this follows the (1), change this slider in another way.
00:56:423 (1) - Make this more curved.
00:57:852 (1) - Curve this in the opposite, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087552
00:59:816 (3) - Do the same, curve in the opposite way.

[Zzz's Hard]
00:44:990 (1) - Move in 132|160.
00:45:704 (2) - Move in 136|164.
00:46:418 (3) - Move in 140|168.
01:26:295 - Add a circle in 256|272?

[Insane]
00:57:852 (1) - Move this farther.
01:08:745 (4) - Curve a bit.
01:25:561 (2) - Move this farther, with 1.2x DS.

[17VA's NM]
HP Drain -1 and OD-1 because you use holds.

00:06:781 - Add note.
00:07:138 - Remove note.
00:25:531 (25531|0) - Move in 2.
00:35:531 (35531|1) - You should move left for pattern consistency.

[17VA's Starlog]
There are some LNs unsnapped. Before apply this mod, resnap all notes.

00:00:594 (594|2) - This should be in 00:00:565 (565|2) - I think (1/12 snap)
00:48:740 (48740|0,48918|2) - Make them 1/2 long maybe?
01:26:400 - Add another LN in 7?

Unfortunately, I can't mod Taiko.

Nice mapset! Take my star!

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-08T18:01:04+00:00

fixed . thanks

http://puu.sh/5cloh.zip

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-08T18:21:41+00:00

Roxas wrote:
[General]
Change the source in "Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA*ILLYA", the ☆ is not permitted since it's a non-ASCII char (if I'm not wrong), but I'm sure it's not permitted.
@17VA: Change your diffs in "17VA's NM" and "17VA's Starlog"? You know the key amount it's written in osu!

[Normal]
00:32:495 (4) - Make a bit curve like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087544
00:40:884 (2) - I don't like how this follows the (1), change this slider in another way.
00:56:423 (1) - Make this more curved.fix
00:57:852 (1) - Curve this in the opposite, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1087552
00:59:816 (3) - Do the same, curve in the opposite way.

[Insane]
00:57:852 (1) - Move this farther.
01:08:745 (4) - Curve a bit.
01:25:561 (2) - Move this farther, with 1.2x DS.fix

Unfortunately, I can't mod Taiko.

Nice mapset! Take my star!

thank you!!!!!! and star +_+* very good~0~

Sorarei

1,420 posts

Joined August 2012

Sorarei 2013-11-09T03:34:17+00:00

Here's a some suggest 17VA

[17VA 4K]
00:10:710 - add note here
00:27:495 (27495|0) - delete ?
its already perfect i think

[7K 17VA Starlog]
00:04:467 (4467|2,4555|1,4643|0,4643|3,4732|4,4820|5,4908|6) - this style isn't fit to this song
00:39:278 (39278|0,39278|1) - to long LN , maybe replace to 00:39:635 - , do this to same things
01:11:066 (71066|6) - delete
01:20:709 (80709|2) - delete
01:23:745 (83745|2) - this LN like following vocal ?
01:24:280 (84280|3,84310|4,84310|5,84637|3,84667|4,84667|5) - i think re-arrange this to triple (this like a joke type :3)

if this not help you please don't kudos

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2013-11-09T06:44:06+00:00

Hello~ Yuki, Nardo~~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

[General]

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is finish. Big Notes ..

“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)

[Oni]

00:04:285 (10) – unsnapped.
00:22:674 (98) - d
00:32:942 – add note?
00:33:478 (148) -delete ? if add 32:942
00:43:919 (207) – d cause, hearing vocal. it sounds better
00:44:812 (211) – delete?
00:49:632 (235) - add finish cause hearing backsounds louder than surroundings , and want to accent.
Either change k 01:04:995 (325) - , 01:04:816 (324) - , 01:04:727 (323) – *I think 01:04:995 (325) – k is the best.

[Muzukashii]

bg location is not same as diff. Oni.
00:13:745 (44) – try to move 00:14:103 (45) –
00:26:603 (95,96) – k? sounds better I think… cause, can heari many high pitch sounds from surroundings(vocal, piano).. and cannot hear low pitch sounds .
00:41:063 (155) – k change same oni.
00:49:632 (192) – add finish the reason is same diff.Oni.
00:58:388 (226) – d?
…and 00:59:459 - add d?
01:15:530 (295) – d?
…and 01:16:602 - add d?
01:25:980 (335) – delete?

That’s all! I thank you for reading it through

Good Luck!

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,490 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2013-11-09T06:56:01+00:00

~popner's modding team~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine

[Insane]

00:00:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –The whistles you used at this part don’t fit well. Try use S;C2 sampleset；
00:06:960 (4) –this jump is strange, maybe you can set jump at 00:06:781 (3) –because 00:06:781 (3) –is stronger than(4);
00:09:817 –triplet can be set at here;
00:15:531 (3,4) –I suggest you use larger spacing.It will be better;
00:26:245 –adding a note here is more natural because there is a vocal here;
00:33:567 (5) –Jump can be set at here,your spacing between 00:33:388 (4,5) –is too small for an Insane diff.I suggest you stack00:33:567 (5) -to00:33:924 (1) –‘s head;
00:43:205 (5) –Ctrl+G is better imo;
00:52:673 (2,3) –Ctrl+G, 00:52:138 (1,2) –the spacing is too small;
01:00:352 (5,6) –Ctrl+G for better flow and fit song better;
01:06:423 (8,9) –make a larger spacing；
01:07:405 (2,1) –They are overlapped and don’t look good;Stack01:07:405 (2) -to01:07:852 (1) -;
01:11:245 (2,3) –Ctrl+G ,the same reason as above;
01:24:637 (3,1,2) –try equaling their spacing;

[Zzz's Hard]

00:21:781 (8) –add nc here and remove nc at 00:22:853 (1) -;
00:30:353 (1) –Since you follow vocals at many times,so 00:30:531 –here is a vocal too0.0,maybe try this,http://puu.sh/5ceeS.jpg
00:35:531 –try this rhythm to follow vocals better. http://puu.sh/5ceiK.jpg
00:37:674 (4) –how about using a 1/2 reverse slider to follow vocals?
00:41:955 –add a note to follow vocal
00:44:812 -^
00:47:668 (6) –remove this to make a transition;
01:17:316 (3) –this is hard to be read that it’s a 1/1 rhythm since your other similar patterns all are 1/2;Maybe add a nc or move it far way from (2);
01:24:280 (6,2) –finish the blanket?

[Normal]

00:17:853 (4,5) –since you follow vocals at this diff,please try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cg6o.jpg
00:23:745 (3) –extend this to white tick.3/2 slider fits vocal and drums better;
00:28:567 (2) –stack this to 00:26:424 (1) –’s end?
00:35:531 (4) –try this rhythm to follow vocals better, http://puu.sh/5cVo7.jpg
00:48:740 (3) –Use a note like 00:47:490 (1) -?
01:04:637 (1) –move this to 01:04:816 –since you follow vocals?

[Habi’s Easy]

00:09:995 (4) –I suggest you use this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cVY4.jpg,If you change this ,also add nc at(4);
00:13:210 (3,4) –Stack maybe too hard to read for a easy player;
00:39:278 (1) –maybe something like this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cW96.jpg
This rhythm (also you can change some other rhythms)fits music better.You can hear00:39:813 -00:40:884 –etc,there is beat at these tick;
00:52:138 (3) –remove clap at sliderend;
01:04:995 (1) –remove clap at reverse arrow;

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2013-11-09T10:17:30+00:00

Hi there, mania mod by req (srry for late) :3/

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
Awesome map, already good modded, think I can help anyway~
4K 17VA's NM

Inside :3

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3)

From 00:16:424 to 00:26:424 - I suggest to to switch beat column every 4 ticks accordingly 0>1>2>3 it looks better coz pushing same button ~6-7 sec it's little boring

From 00:39:278 to 00:44:633 - you can rearrange some chords, it's a TV size so I recommend to make your patterns more various

01:01:423 (61423|0) - move to 1st column, it's better for NM coz after and before there are single notes in same column

01:24:816 - you can add note here to 2nd column for example according to the syllable here

7K 17VA's Starlog

Inside :3

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)

00:03:035 (3035|3) - delete this one and start here 00:03:213 (3213|5) this LN, there's no adding sound

00:03:571 - I suggest to add one more LN from here and end it at 00:04:285 - according to the sound

00:05:888 (5888|5) - move to 1st column, more comfortable for this pattern

00:15:531 (15531|5) - move to 3rd or 6th column, this shield note looks weird here

From 00:16:424 to 00:26:067 - I suggest you to rearrange this pattern again, it's boring to press same two keys all 10 seconds

01:07:673 (67673|0) - move to 5th column, make more comfortable chord change

Finally add 1/6 notes here 01:24:876 and here 01:24:935 and make triplet according to the sound

Hope it'll be useful ^w^
Good luck :3/

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-09T13:45:26+00:00

업뎃

http://puu.sh/5das9.zip

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,009 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-09T14:23:37+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
Hello~ Yuki, Nardo~~ :3 hi~ >w<
Here's a Taiko Mod via My Takio Moding Queue
I am glad if it becomes helpful.

[General]

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D , K is finish. Big Notes ..

“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?)
[Oni]
00:04:285 (10) – unsnapped. shifted the note to 00:04:291
00:22:674 (98) - d fixed
00:32:942 – add note? no change
00:33:478 (148) -delete ? if add 32:942 ^
00:43:919 (207) – d cause, hearing vocal. it sounds better fixed
00:44:812 (211) – delete? no change
00:49:632 (235) - add finish cause hearing backsounds louder than surroundings , and want to accent. fixed
Either change k 01:04:995 (325) - , 01:04:816 (324) - , 01:04:727 (323) – *I think 01:04:995 (325) – k is the best. fixed

[Muzukashii]
bg location is not same as diff. Oni. fixed
00:13:745 (44) – try to move 00:14:103 (45) – fixed
00:26:603 (95,96) – k? sounds better I think… cause, can heari many high pitch sounds from surroundings(vocal, piano).. and cannot hear low pitch sounds . The vocal itself is low there, so I used d.
00:41:063 (155) – k change same oni. fixed
00:49:632 (192) – add finish the reason is same diff.Oni. fixed
00:58:388 (226) – d? no change, high-pitched vocal.
…and 00:59:459 - add d? fixed
01:15:530 (295) – d? no change
…and 01:16:602 - add d? fixed
01:25:980 (335) – delete? fixed
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through
Good Luck!

Thanks for your mod JuDa~

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-09T14:31:56+00:00

[quote="Fycho"]~popner's modding team~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine

[Insane]

00:00:714 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –The whistles you used at this part don’t fit well. Try use S;C2 sampleset；
00:06:960 (4) –this jump is strange, maybe you can set jump at 00:06:781 (3) –because 00:06:781 (3) –is stronger than(4);
00:09:817 –triplet can be set at here;
00:15:531 (3,4) –I suggest you use larger spacing.It will be better;fix
00:26:245 –adding a note here is more natural because there is a vocal here;
00:33:567 (5) –Jump can be set at here,your spacing between 00:33:388 (4,5) –is too small for an Insane diff.I suggest you stack00:33:567 (5) -to00:33:924 (1) –‘s head;fix
00:43:205 (5) –Ctrl+G is better imo;fix
00:52:673 (2,3) –Ctrl+G, 00:52:138 (1,2) –the spacing is too small;fix
01:00:352 (5,6) –Ctrl+G for better flow and fit song better;fix
01:06:423 (8,9) –make a larger spacing；
01:07:405 (2,1) –They are overlapped and don’t look good;Stack01:07:405 (2) -to01:07:852 (1) -;fix
01:11:245 (2,3) –Ctrl+G ,the same reason as above;fix
01:24:637 (3,1,2) –try equaling their spacing;fix

[Normal]

00:17:853 (4,5) –since you follow vocals at this diff,please try this rhythm, http://puu.sh/5cg6o.jpg
00:23:745 (3) –extend this to white tick.3/2 slider fits vocal and drums better;
00:28:567 (2) –stack this to 00:26:424 (1) –’s end?fix
00:35:531 (4) –try this rhythm to follow vocals better, http://puu.sh/5cVo7.jpg
00:48:740 (3) –Use a note like 00:47:490 (1) -?
01:04:637 (1) –move this to 01:04:816 –since you follow vocals?

thank you~^^

-xNaCLx-

363 posts

Joined April 2012

-xNaCLx- 2013-11-10T23:38:25+00:00

Taiko mod from my queue >.0

overall quite nice map, so i'll just give some minor suggestions, ignore them if you don't like it.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:33:567 - add k at 00:33:388 and 00:33:478 to make it same as 00:27:853. You may delete k at 00:33:388 and 00:33:478 in order to shorten the sentence. (imo this pattern fits the melody flow better)

00:44:276 (209) - add finish? As i see you use the similar pattern of 00:39:278. and 00:41:420 (191) got finish.

01:24:816 - add a note here? as i think you're mapping according to vocal.

01:26:295 (1) - imo the spinner start at 01:26:400 would be better.

[Nardo's Muzu]
00:08:210 - change k kdk ddk to kk d kddk? like this. As this could emphasize those hard syncopation beats.

00:41:420 (157) - add finish? it would not be so difficult to muzu and it fits the music
00:44:276 (171) - ^

01:26:295 (1) - same as Oni :3

Nice map >.0" good luck to rank

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-11-11T01:36:44+00:00

Roxas wrote:
[General]
Change the source in "Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA*ILLYA", the ☆ is not permitted since it's a non-ASCII char (if I'm not wrong), but I'm sure it's not permitted.
@17VA: Change your diffs in "17VA's NM" and "17VA's Starlog"? You know the key amount it's written in osu!

[Zzz's Hard]
00:44:990 (1) - Move in 132|160.
00:45:704 (2) - Move in 136|164.
00:46:418 (3) - Move in 140|168.
01:26:295 - Add a circle in 256|272?

Unfortunately, I can't mod Taiko.

Nice mapset! Take my star!

I Change There is no need That Think.

Thanks!! Roxas ^~^!!

Fycho wrote:
~popner's modding team~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine

[Zzz's Hard]

00:21:781 (8) –add nc here and remove nc at 00:22:853 (1) -; ( yes! It's a good suggestion! )
00:30:353 (1) –Since you follow vocals at many times,so 00:30:531 –here is a vocal too0.0,maybe try this,http://puu.sh/5ceeS.jpg
00:35:531 –try this rhythm to follow vocals better. http://puu.sh/5ceiK.jpg
00:37:674 (4) –how about using a 1/2 reverse slider to follow vocals?
00:41:955 –add a note to follow vocal
00:44:812 -^
00:47:668 (6) –remove this to make a transition;
01:17:316 (3) –this is hard to be read that it’s a 1/1 rhythm since your other similar patterns all are 1/2;Maybe add a nc or move it far way from (2); ( yes! It's a good suggestion! )
01:24:280 (6,2) –finish the blanket?

I Your Other Mod
I do not need to change I thought.

Thanks~ Fycho

유키님 리다운로드 하고 모딩끝내놨어요!! : ) !!!

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic 17VA
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[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-11-11T06:52:15+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Roxas wrote:
[General]
Change the source in "Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA*ILLYA", the ☆ is not permitted since it's a non-ASCII char (if I'm not wrong), but I'm sure it's not permitted.
@17VA: Change your diffs in "17VA's NM" and "17VA's Starlog"? You know the key amount it's written in osu!

[Zzz's Hard]
00:44:990 (1) - Move in 132|160.
00:45:704 (2) - Move in 136|164.
00:46:418 (3) - Move in 140|168.
01:26:295 - Add a circle in 256|272?

Unfortunately, I can't mod Taiko.

Nice mapset! Take my star!

I Change There is no need That Think.

Thanks!! Roxas ^~^!!

Fycho wrote:
~popner's modding team~

Black: Suggestions
Blue: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
Fine

[Zzz's Hard]

00:21:781 (8) –add nc here and remove nc at 00:22:853 (1) -; ( yes! It's a good suggestion! )
00:30:353 (1) –Since you follow vocals at many times,so 00:30:531 –here is a vocal too0.0,maybe try this,http://puu.sh/5ceeS.jpg
00:35:531 –try this rhythm to follow vocals better. http://puu.sh/5ceiK.jpg
00:37:674 (4) –how about using a 1/2 reverse slider to follow vocals?
00:41:955 –add a note to follow vocal
00:44:812 -^
00:47:668 (6) –remove this to make a transition;
01:17:316 (3) –this is hard to be read that it’s a 1/1 rhythm since your other similar patterns all are 1/2;Maybe add a nc or move it far way from (2); ( yes! It's a good suggestion! )
01:24:280 (6,2) –finish the blanket?

I Your Other Mod
I do not need to change I thought.

Thanks~ Fycho

유키님 리다운로드 하고 모딩끝내놨어요!! : ) !!!

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Fate_Kaleid Liner Prisma-Illya OP_OPENING HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49990
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:[ Yuki ]
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya HabiHolic [ Zzz ] Nardoxyribonucleic 17VA
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[Difficulty]
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256,184,64995,6,0,L|396:184,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,148,65530,2,0,P|480:220|432:268,1,140
396,184,66066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,100,66245,2,0,L|220:100,1,140
128,100,66780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,275,67138,2,0,P|200:224|176:180,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,67852,6,0,L|400:336,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,336,68388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,68566,2,0,L|448:184,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,96,68923,2,0,P|396:44|332:44,2,140,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,128,69816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,69995,2,0,L|132:128,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,70530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,208,70709,6,0,P|84:280|36:328,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,244,71245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,312,71423,2,0,L|308:312,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,152,72138,2,0,L|256:152,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,312,72852,2,0,L|308:312,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,152,73567,6,0,L|256:152,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,152,74102,2,0,P|108:96|108:40,1,140
196,64,74637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,74816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,216,74995,2,0,P|88:288|40:336,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,292,75530,2,0,L|316:292,1,140
399,255,76066,2,0,P|408:289|399:323,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,172,76423,2,0,P|364:100|412:52,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,136,76959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,76,77316,6,0,L|204:76,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,76,77673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,156,77852,2,0,P|160:228|112:276,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,78387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,156,78566,2,0,L|232:156,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,156,78923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,192,79102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,192,79191,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,192,79280,6,0,P|404:120|356:72,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,68,79816,2,0,L|128:68,1,140
36,68,80352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,148,80530,2,0,P|80:220|32:268,1,140
76,348,81066,2,0,L|148:348,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,272,81423,2,0,L|336:272,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,272,81959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,82137,6,0,P|384:120|432:72,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,82673,2,0,L|152:104,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,104,83209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,172,83387,2,0,P|0:244|48:292,1,140
84,208,83923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,272,84280,1,6,0:0:0:0:
428,208,84637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,360,84995,6,0,P|292:360|340:312,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,85561,2,0,P|220:184|172:232,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86400,12,0,88917,0:0:0:0:

Update~lol

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-11T12:02:35+00:00

NewibornCLivee wrote:
Taiko mod from my queue >.0

overall quite nice map, so i'll just give some minor suggestions, ignore them if you don't like it.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:33:567 - add k at 00:33:388 and 00:33:478 to make it same as 00:27:853. You may delete k at 00:33:388 and 00:33:478 in order to shorten the sentence. (imo this pattern fits the melody flow better) Nice~

00:44:276 (209) - add finish? As i see you use the similar pattern of 00:39:278. and 00:41:420 (191) got finish. Good idea, but 00:44:276 does not have the cymbal sound like 00:41:420 - remain unchanged.

01:24:816 - add a note here? as i think you're mapping according to vocal. added d.

01:26:295 (1) - imo the spinner start at 01:26:400 would be better. umm...fixed

[Nardo's Muzu]
00:08:210 - change k kdk ddk to kk d kddk? like this. As this could emphasize those hard syncopation beats. Good suggestion, but may be a bit hard for beginners to follow as this does not map the drums.

00:41:420 (157) - add finish? it would not be so difficult to muzu and it fits the music fixed
00:44:276 (171) - ^ no change, reason is the same as Oni

01:26:295 (1) - same as Oni :3 fixed

Nice map >.0" good luck to rank Thanks >.0"

Thanks for your mod NCL~

>Update<

Nwolf

2,627 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2013-11-12T16:56:45+00:00

woof

[Muzukashii]

00:10:710 (33) - K fits music more
01:01:780 (240,241) - kkk would be easier to play and you don't have these kind of triplets anywhere else in the map

[Oni]

00:10:710 (44) - Same as Muzu
00:36:245 (363) - Technically a kat would fit the kats better but I don't know if it would destroy the way the map has been made too much

short mod yayay

gl for rank^^

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2013-11-13T12:36:51+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
woof

[Muzukashii]

00:10:710 (33) - K fits music more Here I used D instead of small kat, no change
01:01:780 (240,241) - kkk would be easier to play and you don't have these kind of triplets anywhere else in the map Umm...retained the ddk triplet. Btw, I have used two kkk triplets in the map @@

[Oni]

00:10:710 (44) - Same as Muzu ^
00:36:245 (363) - Technically a kat would fit the kats better but I don't know if it would destroy the way the map has been made too much Good suggestion to follow the vocal. However, as I changed the mapping pattern from vocal-based to vocal-drum starting from 00:27:853 - remain unchanged.

short mod yayay

gl for rank^^

Thanks for your mod~

indyinyou

887 posts

Joined June 2009

indyinyou 2013-11-16T04:56:14+00:00

for mania hitsounds

0 % volume can t ranked / set 30 % for mania

i add hitsounds for mania diff

http://puu.sh/5jHh2

(add cymbol hitsound for mania)

plz check note before update

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-16T05:02:08+00:00

업뎃

http://puu.sh/5jHK4.zip

Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-11-22T09:18:21+00:00

Hi..
As requested~

[General]

Actually there're no different between hitnormal and hitwhistle on S : C1 . So pls delete one of them so we can point the different.
Frequently Kiai toogle on Taiko diffs.
Looks like Aimod was complain about letterbox in the mapset. But i checked the whole mapset but i found nothing wrong. Looks like Aimod was going tsundere xD

[Insane]

00:01:606 (3,1,2) - When you rotate it . It will shown that it doesn't diagonal'ed correctly, Use this code to be perfectly made. I've rechecked it on straight line. and don't forget to restack the next note
```
196,224,1606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,122,2142,6,0,L|440:93,2,60.0000022888184,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,157,2678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
```
00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Polishing this stream a bit will be better. Why not use "convert slider to stream" option to make it neater ? current spacing it's a bit untidy
00:04:467 (1) - Replace with drum finish ? it fit better imo
00:07:674 (5) - Nazi, The spacing Before it's 0.82 but suddenly reduced to 0.76 , Make it 0.80 for consistency with the stream
00:08:388 (2,3,4) - Drag them to 300 62 to provide better blanket to (1)
00:12:317 (5) - This slider shape was not fit at all. Why not replace this slider with 00:11:781 (4) - that scaled and got rotate 120* so it will make nice pattern ? Like this
SPOILER
00:13:210 (7) - 256 92 for tail point to make the slider perfect U shape and better blanket with the next straight slider
00:16:781 (1) - I feel this NC was not needed, because 00:16:424 (1) - was already cover up the change phase of this song.
00:18:388 (5,1,2) - This pattern will flow more better if you place (1) at 100 288 and (2) at 156 212. So (5) 's end will align correctly to the next note, that it will make sweet triangle pattern to the next slider.
00:21:424 (1,3) - It was same like i said in general. What's the point with pile up those hitsound ? It doesn't affect anything but higher volume at all
00:27:495 (3) - Add clap in this slider, I can hear drum sound here beside of that echo sound. It fit nicely
00:29:103 (5) - Move 2 grid left so 00:29:103 (5,1,2) - will make drop off pattern that really sweet in gameplay. Don't forget restack :3
00:32:138 (1) - This slider suddenly break the vocals. You've followed the vocals until now you and it will feels really awkward if you suddenly. I recommend you to replace that 1/1 slider with a 1/2 slider and note. Like this to keep the blanket :
SPOILER
00:31:960 (6,6,1) - Better stack them, it will make the editor more clean. Beside, you stacked the next 1/2 slider ( 00:32:853 (4,2) - ) , More consistency was a nice thing to do :3
00:36:781 (5) - Nazi, move middle point to 240 104 to be perfect blanket
00:37:853 (1,4) - The instrument on the music was really loud on this part. So the head of these slider really need cymbal finish emphasize imo, try to change 00:37:853 - and 00:38:565 - with other timing points that have cymbal finish ( ex = S / S : C 2 )

-------Okay.. i'll try to make this part more fun to play, I can hear drum sound here 00:39:456 - , 00:39:635 - , 00:39:992 - 00:40:170 (4) - , etc
Do you get it ? for this phase ( 00:39:278 - until 00:44:812 - )
Add whistle on all hitnote that doesn't have "clap sound" except 00:41:955 (10,8,9) -
If you don't understand or you curious with my idea. Use this code xD

160,288,39278,6,0,L|103:231,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,148,39635,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,144,39813,2,0,L|209:103,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,44,40170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,136,40349,2,0,L|368:216,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,328,40706,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,264,40884,2,0,L|219:207,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,128,41241,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,192,41420,2,0,P|361:263|392:334,1,160,12|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,260,41955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,320,42134,6,0,L|208:347,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,42491,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,168,42669,2,0,L|179:195,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,43026,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,152,43205,2,0,L|373:125,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,244,43562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,232,43740,2,0,P|213:279|165:343,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:46:775 (7) - Bad blanket here.. move the middle point to 140 284 and tail point to 60 316 to make it nicer
00:52:673 (2,3) - I suppose this is a mistake, so switch the whistle ? the drum was louder at 00:52:852 - o.o
00:57:852 (1) - Remove clap from slider's head. The sound was really not fit and bother my ears during gameplay
01:01:691 (2) - The sream sound has already started here. So add clap on this note to emphasize it
01:02:673 (2) - Remove whistle from head
01:09:816 (2,3) - ^
01:09:816 (2,3) - Unnatural jump, Ctrl + G them maybe ?
01:19:102 (1,2) - Add clap on these note to emphasize the triplet drum sound on the music
01:22:316 - I feel that this part was really empty here, yeah because you use end of reverse slider for the stanza. it will make this spacing really awkward in game play, Why not try to add note here or change the rhytm 01:21:780 (1,2) - a bit ? 1/1 slider from stanza will fit nice imo
01:25:980 (3) - Add whistle on the end. It will give more strong beat that you can hear on the music

[Zzz Hard]

Personally i don't be a big fan of pattern like this 00:04:467 (2,1) - , as you know the end of 00:04:467 (2) - is pointing the opposite side of the 00:04:996 (1) - 's head. This will make novice Hard player confused , to make this pattern more readable. I recommend you to do a manual stack to make the (1) more visible so other players can read it more easily. ( ex : moving (2) to 332 236 )
Yeah i see other things like over all part of the map. I hope you can consider this.
00:06:246 (4) - Nazi, move this 1 grid left to be perfect aligned symmetrical with (2) and (3) will be placed correctly between them
00:09:281 (4) - Replace the whistle on the reverse point with a finish. More fitting like the Insane diff
00:10:263 (1) - The rhytm you use has already difficult here, consider use normal spacing instead
00:14:906 (5) - Change to clap instead ? it will emphasize the triplet on the music more nicely instead of whistle that just give a high beat on it
00:20:531 (4) - Having the piano beat skipped on stanza was really weird even it's follow the vocal. Try to change this with 1/2 slider and note.
00:21:424 (7) - Move the middle point 1 grid left to be blanket better with the previous note
00:23:567 - Consider add a note :3 , same reason as before
00:26:067 (1,2) - I can hear bell sound at this time. So add finish to the (1)'s slider tail and (2) to emphasize them ?
00:27:495 (3) - Should make the spacing same, the delay jump to (1) was a bit bother me, Try this pattern instead ? looks nice IMO, and it keep the DS consistent to avoid misunderstanding and cool delay stack to 00:27:853 (1) - :3
SPOILER
00:30:353 (1) - Move the middle point to 92 148 and last point to 48 104 so it will make the blanket neater
00:31:960 (4) - Again, it was really awkward that you skipped the piano on the white tick. But you didn't skipped it on the next pattern ( 00:32:853 (6) - ) So might you consider change the rhytm here like a 1/2 and notes to follow the vocal properly and emphasize the piano too ?
00:37:853 - You should add note with finish add 00:37:853 - and 00:38:565 -
00:44:990 (1,2,3,4) - This long stack delay notes really boring for me. Why not add spacing with particular pattern (ex : Star pattern ) to give the player more fun ?
00:47:847 - Add new green line with more volume , current is too low that i almost can't hear anything at 00:48:918 (3,5,1) - . According to ranking guide all note must be audible.
00:48:382 (2) - Finish to the start of slider, you can hear crash cymbal here

[Normal]

00:03:035 (3,1) - The spacing between them was a bit unnormal like often that might make a misunderstanding, why not change slider (1) to a spinner? it will make it easier
00:26:424 (1,2) - Stack them correctly -w-
00:46:240 (2) - Add clap on the tail of the slider to emphasize the drum
00:46:775 (3) - Remove clap on head and change it to whistle instead, there're no such sound on the music to emphasize and it sounds really weird
00:59:816 (3) - 1 grid down on last point to make it U shape correctly and fix the Distance Spacing
01:00:709 (4,5) - No.. this 1/2 stack on end of a slider just really difficult to read for beginners. Use normal spacing instead
01:05:530 (3,5) - Avoid slight overlap like this on normal diff. Better move (5) left a bit

[Habi Easy]

00:07:853 (1) - Move the red point 1 grid up to make better blanket with (2)
00:13:210 (3) - Why not move it to 376 236 to make sweet triangle instead of stack ? it will make easier to read for Beginners.
00:26:424 (3) - Change whistle to finish on reverse slider. The beat doesn't that loud that need to be emphasized with whistle

[17k Starlog]
Check Aimod, there's some unsnapped object on your diff

Good Luck ~

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2013-11-23T15:38:34+00:00

[17VA's Starlog]
Optional = Italic
00:00:594 (594|2,654|3) - They are on 1/4 lines - rearrange them to 00:00:535 and 00:00:624 (Highly Recommended)
01:00:352 (60352|4) - I assume you are mapping for the vocals for this section with sliders, this slider would be unnecessary in that case
01:17:495 (77495|4) - ^
01:18:566 - Map in vocals (Za - Ne)?

[17VA's NM]
No problems

Both Diff.s have the same HP/OD, consider changing them.

woc2006

409 posts

Joined September 2011

woc2006 2013-11-24T03:01:49+00:00

mania check.
=====
Volume 0% is not allowed, 30% at least.

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-11-24T03:25:23+00:00

well it needs yuki's updated

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-12-09T12:56:23+00:00

Starlog 난이도 업데이트 http://puu.sh/5H7gI.osu

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-12-09T19:54:51+00:00

17VA wrote:
Starlog 난이도 업데이트 http://puu.sh/5H7gI.osu

업데이트 완료~

17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2013-12-11T13:50:16+00:00

랭크룰 바뀌어서..

제 스타로그 난이도 명

7K 17VA's Starlog [MX] 이렇게 바꾸어주세요.

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-12-14T04:45:49+00:00

17VA wrote:
랭크룰 바뀌어서..

제 스타로그 난이도 명

7K 17VA's Starlog [MX] 이렇게 바꾸어주세요.

아 늦게 봤네요 ㅎㅎ; 넵ㅇ

DropTimes

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Joined October 2012

DropTimes 2014-10-15T07:13:53+00:00

이거 언제 랭되나요?;

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