hi!
[General]
from 00:24:888 to 00:35:888 - imo there should be a kiai here
care http://puu.sh/5200F.png
[Insane]
00:40:888 - this pause would be very interesting, i would have let unmapped with an antijump. But mapping it, stream is the best choice, so it's good, i would just decrease its volume a bit. it's 70-55-40-25% now, how about 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%? http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1,2) - i'm aware that you are following synthesizer here, but i would find it nicer something like this http://puu.sh/51X7u.jpg (with (1) overlapped on (2) would be awesome)
from 00:46:222 to 00:56:888 - i find it nicer if you reduce the slider velocity to 0,5x in this part.
00:52:222 (3) - http://puu.sh/51XFH.jpg nicer! if you changed sv to 0,5x you don't even need to change this slider
00:57:555 (3,4,5,6) - take this as an observation: I don't like 3/4 sliders if the hitsound on the blue tick isn't necessary or sounds bad; in fact here you had to reduce its volume. Btw it plays fine with the pattern you made so w/e
01:30:555 (8) - remove finish
01:34:555 (2) - ctrl+g this with some changes on 01:34:222 (1) to correct flow would be really cool
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4) - volume 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%
01:52:888 (4) - http://puu.sh/51Y7N.jpg
01:55:805 (2) - i prefer 2 circles instead of a slider starting on blue tick http://puu.sh/51Yd3.jpg
[Yuki's Insane]
00:36:555 (5,1) - weird spacing but it's ok
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H and it's AWESOME > you create antijump between 00:38:055 (4,1) and 00:39:222 (5,1) is very cool to play
00:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - volume is too high, i would make something like Insane diff http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51YZa.jpg and ctrl+G 00:43:888 (1,2) (don't forget to switch hitsounds too if you do this)
00:58:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i had difficulties reading this, idea seems nice but it's not as fun when it comes to play it. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/51YGv.jpg - http://puu.sh/51YKd.jpg (they are the same, second pic is to make you understand the logic)
01:06:888 (1,2) - ctrl+G
01:07:138 (3) - delete this
01:30:888 (3,4,5) - cool!
01:50:055 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same volume thing as 00:40:888 (1,2,3,4)
01:52:888 (1) - http://puu.sh/51Z6w.jpg
[Hard]
00:35:555 (3) - http://puu.sh/51ZtW.jpg
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZxP.jpg
01:04:222 (7) - clap
01:05:555 (1) - clap
01:45:222 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZH6.jpg or http://puu.sh/51ZKd.jpg
01:47:888 (1,1) - same for these too, but they sound much better than the previous one
[Normal]
00:20:388 (1) - why is this starting on red tick? it has no reason to and it plays awful. if you really want it to start on a red tick, it should be this one 00:20:722, not the previous one
01:05:555 (2) - this shape is ugly lol
01:09:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5206J.jpg (2) 256|140; (3) 372|8
01:11:555 (1,2,3) - ^if you made that, you'll need to correct spacing here
01:53:222 (1) - this is too low imo, you can overlap it on (2) http://puu.sh/520jP.jpg..that's not an easy so you can do it
I guess rank is near, make sure you let me know when it happens!
[General]
from 00:24:888 to 00:35:888 - imo there should be a kiai here
care http://puu.sh/5200F.png
[Insane]
00:40:888 - this pause would be very interesting, i would have let unmapped with an antijump. But mapping it, stream is the best choice, so it's good, i would just decrease its volume a bit. it's 70-55-40-25% now, how about 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%? http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1,2) - i'm aware that you are following synthesizer here, but i would find it nicer something like this http://puu.sh/51X7u.jpg (with (1) overlapped on (2) would be awesome)
from 00:46:222 to 00:56:888 - i find it nicer if you reduce the slider velocity to 0,5x in this part.
00:52:222 (3) - http://puu.sh/51XFH.jpg nicer! if you changed sv to 0,5x you don't even need to change this slider
00:57:555 (3,4,5,6) - take this as an observation: I don't like 3/4 sliders if the hitsound on the blue tick isn't necessary or sounds bad; in fact here you had to reduce its volume. Btw it plays fine with the pattern you made so w/e
01:30:555 (8) - remove finish
01:34:555 (2) - ctrl+g this with some changes on 01:34:222 (1) to correct flow would be really cool
01:50:222 (1,2,3,4) - volume 50-35-20-5% or 55-40-25-10%
01:52:888 (4) - http://puu.sh/51Y7N.jpg
01:55:805 (2) - i prefer 2 circles instead of a slider starting on blue tick http://puu.sh/51Yd3.jpg
[Yuki's Insane]
00:36:555 (5,1) - weird spacing but it's ok
00:38:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H and it's AWESOME > you create antijump between 00:38:055 (4,1) and 00:39:222 (5,1) is very cool to play
00:40:888 (1,2,3,4) - volume is too high, i would make something like Insane diff http://puu.sh/51X0m.png
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51YZa.jpg and ctrl+G 00:43:888 (1,2) (don't forget to switch hitsounds too if you do this)
00:58:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i had difficulties reading this, idea seems nice but it's not as fun when it comes to play it. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/51YGv.jpg - http://puu.sh/51YKd.jpg (they are the same, second pic is to make you understand the logic)
01:06:888 (1,2) - ctrl+G
01:07:138 (3) - delete this
01:30:888 (3,4,5) - cool!
01:50:055 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same volume thing as 00:40:888 (1,2,3,4)
01:52:888 (1) - http://puu.sh/51Z6w.jpg
[Hard]
00:35:555 (3) - http://puu.sh/51ZtW.jpg
00:43:555 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZxP.jpg
01:04:222 (7) - clap
01:05:555 (1) - clap
01:45:222 (1) - http://puu.sh/51ZH6.jpg or http://puu.sh/51ZKd.jpg
01:47:888 (1,1) - same for these too, but they sound much better than the previous one
[Normal]
00:20:388 (1) - why is this starting on red tick? it has no reason to and it plays awful. if you really want it to start on a red tick, it should be this one 00:20:722, not the previous one
01:05:555 (2) - this shape is ugly lol
01:09:555 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5206J.jpg (2) 256|140; (3) 372|8
01:11:555 (1,2,3) - ^if you made that, you'll need to correct spacing here
01:53:222 (1) - this is too low imo, you can overlap it on (2) http://puu.sh/520jP.jpg..that's not an easy so you can do it
I guess rank is near, make sure you let me know when it happens!