Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedycake Remix)‬ · forum‬

cyanberryio

Joined August 2008

cyanberryio 2009-06-07T02:52:53+00:00

This one is more fun that the other one I'd say!

STAR!

01:21:625 - 01:22:356: Suggestion: Fill this space with note in the proper places, just like the old one?
General: Have inherited timing sections for sound added 1/4 before they happen. Maybe have that 0.5x section on the start of the soft part, just suggesting.
Kiai Suggestion: Push the section for Kiai on the stream closer together so it has a continuing effect?

I'm not going to say anything about the hit sounds, since you're probably still adding them.

Heh, once I saw this in the Latest Posts I instantly clicked.

Lesjuh

Elite Mapper

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Lesjuh 2009-06-25T06:49:13+00:00

~~/me will probably come up with some difficulty too.~~

Insane difficulty that is

Not going to star this because it's in desperate need of hitsounds, unfinished, has no background. In other-words, a work-in-progress.

ohshit offset is way off
There ya go: 16.615

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-06-26T20:32:57+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

eee

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Joined January 2008

eee 2009-06-27T02:25:34+00:00

0_0
o_o
0_o ah, that's it
anyways, eeemod GO!!!

[Normal]
01:24:53 (1) - extend this further a whole beat
01:26:54 (1) - delete this prior to the above mod, if the above is not done, this can stayz
02:13:497 (timing section) - lands directly on the note with a volume change, move back (even 5 milliseconds) in order to hear the volume intended. I'm guessing it has to be done, cause I've been told not once, but many tine tayneeez. P.S. notes can land directly on a timing section when a kiai section, BPM change, within slider, or spinner, practically anything but a volume change

[Hard]
01:25:26 (1) - begin 1/2 later?
02:50:03 (7) - finish?
02:50:39 (9) - ^
02:50:76 (10) - ^

tis all, starred (even though I would wait 4 a BG, maybe I haven't seen one, idk) doesn't matter, starring anyways

0_o

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0_o 2009-08-04T17:31:28+00:00

Thanks eee, made all the changes I think

Ekaru

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Ekaru 2009-08-04T20:52:01+00:00

Easy:
Fine, though spinner after a break some ways through felt weird, but worked.

Normal: Same here. I would move the note before that spinner.

Hard: Increase HP Drain by 1.

Insane: Increase HP Drain by 1.

1 can be replaced by "2" if you so wish in both of those scenarios. However, as is, it's too low in both.

Map doesn't suck. Star! Fun fun fun.

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-08-06T22:58:54+00:00

Eh... I think sound effect volume is bit low

[Easy,Normal]
Sound effects=WIP?

[Hard]
Sound effect is so low that I can't hear any finish sound effects......
00:53:84 (6) - I can't hear the sound effect.
00:59:69 (5) - Same
01:43:53 (7) - Same
01:46:46 (7) - Same
02:36:14 (7) - Add finish on here. But it's hard to listen.
02:39:07 (4) - Finish

[Insane]
Nice

Anyways, your map is fine!
Kudosu star for you

sesito71

398 posts

Joined July 2008

sesito71 2009-08-08T18:54:29+00:00

0_o, this is better than the other version

[Easy]

02:27:01 (3) - New combo here?

[Normal]

00:41:06 (4) - Move this 1 square down (align with the other notes before

), then align 5
02:03:63 (4) - Move a bit down, and a bit to the left.
02:04:72 (1) - I think clap doesn't sounds well here

[Hard]

looks fine

[Insane]

00:43:43 (4) - Move a bit up

Star*

rust45

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Joined May 2009

rust45 2009-08-08T19:40:29+00:00

[Insane and Hard]
Kiai after Kiai broke my eyes, but otherwise it's all good.

Solid maps. I like it better then the first. Star for you.

Edit: Forgot to say this, but I feel the hitsound volume is a bit quiet.

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2009-08-11T07:54:55+00:00

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0_o

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0_o 2009-08-11T16:04:56+00:00

Lybydose wrote:
Insane:

02:08:93 (3) - Slow BPM seems kind of random. Why not make this entire section (between the break and 02:14:95) slow BPM instead of just half of it? hmm, I'll wait for a second opinion here.

Hard:

00:30:83 (7) - Awkward. I missed this when I played it. Maybe put circles at 00:30:46 and 00:30:64. did something else here

bearing019

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bearing019 2009-08-25T01:44:32+00:00

Wow, it's been such a long time since I enjoyed playing osu that much!

Easy

What's with the break at 2.09?

Normal

Er... you win? Really, really perfect. And I found myself smiling playing it.

Hard

1.38.422 - No new combo, put it on the 2?

Insane

1.20.884 - Can't help feeling you need a repeat slider here.
1.32.576 - ^^

In my opinion, the half bpm is, in fact, fine. And I rather like the kai... koi... flashy thingies.

Star for you.

mrtn

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mrtn 2009-08-25T15:48:28+00:00

set a preview point

[easy]
01:13:76 (?) - note here?

[normal]
fine with me

[hard]
no probs

[insane]
01:29:28 (10,1) - i don't like this jump
02:02:17 (1) - remove new combo
02:50:03 (1) - ^

0_o

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0_o 2009-08-25T18:34:39+00:00

mrtn wrote:
set a preview point done

[easy]
01:13:76 (?) - note here? nah, I don't want notes 1/2 apart in this diff

[normal]
fine with me

[hard]
no probs

[insane]
01:29:28 (10,1) - i don't like this jump moved it closer
02:02:17 (1) - remove new combo I like it like this
02:50:03 (1) - ^ ^

Thanks!

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-08-27T06:47:57+00:00

Find a background, it's necessary to have one for a map to be ranked~ I don't really like your usage of spinners, but that's more to do with the song structure. 02:28:11 - Move kiai to here. 01:36:23 - Remove break.

Easy:

00:38:50 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:03 (1) - Spacing.

Hard:

00:39:42 - Add circle with clap stacked on previous circle.
00:48:92 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 00:50:01.
01:33:49 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 01:34:22.
01:35:68 - Add circles to off beats, remove break.

Insane:

Hard's modding.

0_o

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0_o 2009-08-31T03:25:07+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2009-09-02T18:46:00+00:00

Easy:
Only thing I can suggest is make the hit circle bigger. Up to you.

Normal:
00:41:06 (4) - Spacing,Move a bit to the left and down, going to have to move 00:41:42 (5) - too the left some
A bit too much whistle at the end, starting around 02:28:47 (2) - ahh my earsss

Hard:
00:50:55 - This could use a note here, it's a hard difficulty. It's doable and sounds better.
01:23:62 - ^
01:37:32 (1,2,3,1) - Make this into a little mini-jump? Starting on the left x-axis, then bottom y-axis, then right x-axis, and ending 1 on the top y-axis where it is now. Space the other ones relative to where 01:38:42 (1) - is. SS under the box

SPOILER

Insane:
01:38:42 (1) - Mirror this to 01:37:69 (2) - and place 01:38:78 (2) - in the middle, fix necessary spacing on 01:38:97 (3) -
The claps are fine at the end, but the whistle again.. a bit too much I think. my earssssss

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-09-04T03:41:33+00:00

All checked and it checks out fine
Bubble

Yuukari-Banteki

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-09-04T15:21:57+00:00

;-; i was mapping this until the map vanished from the world...

[Easy]
02:07:83 - why is this break here?

[Normal]
02:07:83 - why the break?
02:28:11 (1) - whistle to go with the rest of the phrase

[Hard]
01:20:88 (1,2) - put something in the dead space
break T_T

[Insane]
ok...

0_o

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0_o 2009-09-12T02:09:47+00:00

Tis done (except the whistle) Thanks

~~btw I asked Mogs to have a look at the hitsounds, so please don't rank until he does~~

w/e, I changed a few hitsounds, feel free to bubble/rank/mod etc.

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-09-14T19:16:52+00:00

Bubble

EDIT re bubble for the BAKA <3
don't edit posts it pops bubbles

0_o

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0_o 2009-09-15T04:34:01+00:00

Made a few hitsound changes, requesting bubble repair.. again

Yuukari-Banteki

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-09-21T03:32:06+00:00

[Easy]
k...

[Normal]
02:04:36 (4) - spacing

[Hard]
k

[Insane]
k...

fix that call me back and ill bubble

Yuukari-Banteki

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-09-26T23:07:48+00:00

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ztrot

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ztrot 2009-09-27T02:50:13+00:00

Ranked

peppy

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Here since the beginning

peppy 2009-09-27T04:01:06+00:00

Just wow. Go take a break from modding you two o.o. As per usual, this map needs to be checked by two BAT members who haven't had anything to do with it thusfar before being ranked again.

0_o

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0_o 2009-09-27T04:08:12+00:00

OK, Normal is updated.

asdfgafjdhsfjasf

machol30

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machol30 2009-09-27T04:34:44+00:00

Just something quick... I believe BPM should be 164.180 and not 164.220.
Please do not reward this post with kudosu.

XepherX3

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XepherX3 2009-10-21T18:28:51+00:00

Starred

whymeman

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whymeman 2009-11-08T05:56:57+00:00

Hmm....

[Easy]

01:38:42 (1,2,3) - Please checking into the spacing here. (1) and (2) are too close together and this would confuse the new players easily.

Also... the background is kinda pixelated, please look into finding a neater one.

[Normal]

The only thing I see that looks a bit odd on this difficulty is the small jumps inbetween the combos at different points of the map. Its kinda on and off like its randomly done. Just make sure to check into that please.

[Hard]

00:50:37 (1,2) - Too close together.

The BG images are also in different formats as well. 3 in .png and 1 in .jpeg. Make sure to check into their quallity and when you check into these issues, let me know to do a recheck.

Edit: Seems to be good enough so far. Bubble for you then.

Gabi

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Gabi 2009-11-10T21:14:07+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2009-11-12T03:40:15+00:00

...Almost...>A<

I'm very sorry I have to pop this bubble here, but the song definitely feels to be a bit early. This might either be because of an early offset, a fast BPM, or both. >:

I'm not very good at timing, but burai might be on the right trail when suggesting to slow down the BPM. I'm not quite sure though. It's best for you to experiment, though I did seem to play better with the BPM change (Albeit some sliders became shorter from recalculations).

Sorry !

0_o

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0_o 2009-11-12T04:07:37+00:00

Don't apologize for finding a timing problem

Thanks!

EDIT: Aww I was hoping my 1000th post would be more epic ;_;

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-11-20T17:03:06+00:00

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.)
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain.

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.

[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing.

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo.
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place.

yaya

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yaya 2009-11-20T18:59:10+00:00

yo~
some suggestion.

for colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,128
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 51,138,255
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 255,255,62

all diff:
from 02:02:187 - 02:07:669 .hitsound whistle is better i think
insane:
02:02:370 (2) - without hitsound
02:03:832 (5) - ^
02:06:755 (4) - ^
02:10:095 (2) - add whistle.

nice map .

0_o

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0_o 2009-11-21T04:43:44+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.) Sure
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain. Not really necessary

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.[/color]

[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing. I think it's fine
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing. Oops, that was supposed to be longer but it got shortened after a timing change

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo. Hmm, not a bad idea
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo. I see what you mean but I'll keep it like it is.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place. ok

yaya thanks for the suggestions, but I think I'll keep it like it is now.

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-11-21T10:06:35+00:00

What's Insane 2 difficulty? It confuses me. http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41627

Timing is aiorhaoasrgaoig lol
btw Offset: I suggest +5.

[Easy]
00:47:082 (2) - Uh it can be kinda nazi but how about making this 1/2 beat later to make simple rhythm?

Sure

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Sure 2009-11-21T10:47:33+00:00

Where is Normal diff and Insane2 ?
I DLed it 2 times, but there is no Normal and Insane2.
Please submit again. I'll mod it when all diffs exist.

0_o

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0_o 2009-11-22T03:40:27+00:00

Oops, sorry the Insane2 was for testing, I thought I deleted that >_> Should be good now.

minyeob I changed the offset but I'll keep Easy like it is, I think the circle sounds better on the lyric.

Sure

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Sure 2009-11-22T09:34:19+00:00

I suggest just hitsound.

[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
00:43:099 (3) - clap
01:19:007 (3) - ^
01:30:040 (3) - clap at end of slider
01:46:048 (5) - ^
02:36:017 (5) - whistle at start of slider
02:38:018 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:35:004 (3,4,5) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]
00:34:067 (3) - clap at end of slider
00:35:040 (5,6) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^
01:39:072 (5) - whistle at start of slider

star~*

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-11-22T09:39:13+00:00

<,<

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2009-11-22T13:31:08+00:00

Hello~

[Easy]
01:36:248(1) Remake Spinner which of length is 01:35:700 - 01:37:710

[Normal]
01:36:066 (1) Same [Easy]

[Hard]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979?
02:14:982 (1,2,3,4) All Finish.

[Insane]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979, too? (Same [Hard])
02:14:982 (1,2) Finish.

Starred~

0_o

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0_o 2009-11-22T19:50:32+00:00

Thanks for the suggestions guys ^_^

Kerensa

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Kerensa 2009-11-26T06:30:12+00:00

hello 0_o!!

easy, normal, hard:
fine >_<

insane:
00:40:706 [5]i think it looks better up one tiny square D:
01:41:912 [3]one tiny square to the left >_<

wahhh ~~

star star for you you ^^

Jointhemasters

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Jointhemasters 2009-11-30T02:25:11+00:00

this is a great song, and its well mapped. thumbs up from me!

luke0719

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luke0719 2009-12-02T07:32:04+00:00

are you considering making a more challenging difficulty?
or perhaps invite some guest mapper for this
I think this epic song deserve a more challenging diff (but S able)
that give some reasons for those topnotch players to practice the map again and again

I'm not good at mapping a challenging diff
but lots of people does
ex: V2b. osu_CN_yaya. ignorethis. kirby or even Alace ....etc

just a personal suggestion

also, somewhere around
2:27:233 - 2:28:123
the beating rythm of the song is very appealing, maybe put some notes for that will be great!

by the way, this is a very good map
Caramelldansen is always my all time favourite in osu!

SATR!

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-04T07:52:06+00:00

Thanks for the input luke. I won't be making a more challenging difficulty since I am not very good at making particularily challenging maps for songs that aren't crazy themselves, but if anyone does feel like making a "true" Insane difficulty, they can let me know (hopefully before it gets ranked

)

Gens

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Gens 2009-12-08T20:56:38+00:00

This map is getting old.

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-08T21:33:46+00:00

Alright lesjuh is making a real Insane diff so back to WIP/Help

Teara

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Teara 2009-12-11T03:52:41+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-11T04:22:49+00:00

Teara wrote:
[Normal]
01:34:042 (2) - Move back to white tick and end on a white tick =p I see why you would said this, it would technically fit the lyrics, but slider currently starts on the stronger syllable, and it also starts at the same time it does in the other parts of the song like this.

[Insane]
00:35:040 (5) - Finish ? nah I think it's fine)

ty ^_^

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-12-13T13:09:00+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedycake Remix) (0_o) [Lesjuh].osu

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-13T20:30:51+00:00

AWESOME

DerekMcD

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DerekMcD 2009-12-14T23:58:46+00:00

*star*

Lesjuh

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Lesjuh 2009-12-15T11:13:29+00:00

Oh could you please add my username in the tags?

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-15T17:11:13+00:00

^done

Ephemeral

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Ephemeral 2009-12-21T20:49:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Skyripper

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Skyripper 2009-12-22T17:54:26+00:00

In my opinion hitsounds are good until insane and Lesjuh, at which point there is an incredible amount of whistle spam. I suppose that is well within both yours and Lesjuhs interpretation of musicality.

As such, ranking this.

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-22T18:19:02+00:00

\o/

It seems like the Beatmap info page isn't updating though, and I think this should be moved to the top of the beatmap list. Could a BAT look into this?

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2009-12-23T04:20:56+00:00

0_o wrote:
\o/

It seems like the Beatmap info page isn't updating though, and I think this should be moved to the top of the beatmap list. Could a BAT look into this?

It just moved to the date this was first ranked (it says "Sept 27, ranked by ztrot") and its "Not ranked" on the beatmap info page, x.x

Ganna be hard for people to notice this was reranked with that date, though it (when I posted this) is first in User rating xD

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2009-12-23T12:28:22+00:00

oh, I see it's like Shinxyn said > <

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-12-23T12:33:22+00:00

Issue resolved.

0_o

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0_o 2009-12-23T14:42:51+00:00

Is this gonna be moved to the top of the beatmap listings though? This map was moved when it got reranked, so I would think this map would be moved too..

Lilac

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Lilac 2010-01-01T22:54:30+00:00

This map still doesn't have a date of ranking for me...

...Can anyone explain that?

Instead of it saying

"Ranked: Not yet."

it says...

"Ranked: "

animegirl3xx

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animegirl3xx 2012-01-29T19:36:35+00:00

"404 not found"

Not Found

The requested URL was not found on this server.
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D:

lumpyr0bl0x

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lumpyr0bl0x 2013-07-30T18:23:01+00:00

Guys, this is obviously a bot .-.

0_o

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