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Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedycake Remix)

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Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Find a background, it's necessary to have one for a map to be ranked~ I don't really like your usage of spinners, but that's more to do with the song structure. 02:28:11 - Move kiai to here. 01:36:23 - Remove break.

Easy:

00:38:50 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:03 (1) - Spacing.

Hard:

00:39:42 - Add circle with clap stacked on previous circle.
00:48:92 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 00:50:01.
01:33:49 - Add circles to the off beat from here to 01:34:22.
01:35:68 - Add circles to off beats, remove break.

Insane:

Hard's modding.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
0_o
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Easy:
Only thing I can suggest is make the hit circle bigger. Up to you.

Normal:
00:41:06 (4) - Spacing,Move a bit to the left and down, going to have to move 00:41:42 (5) - too the left some
A bit too much whistle at the end, starting around 02:28:47 (2) - ahh my earsss

Hard:
00:50:55 - This could use a note here, it's a hard difficulty. It's doable and sounds better.
01:23:62 - ^
01:37:32 (1,2,3,1) - Make this into a little mini-jump? Starting on the left x-axis, then bottom y-axis, then right x-axis, and ending 1 on the top y-axis where it is now. Space the other ones relative to where 01:38:42 (1) - is. SS under the box

SPOILER

Insane:
01:38:42 (1) - Mirror this to 01:37:69 (2) - and place 01:38:78 (2) - in the middle, fix necessary spacing on 01:38:97 (3) -
The claps are fine at the end, but the whistle again.. a bit too much I think. my earssssss
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
All checked and it checks out fine
Bubble
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
;-; i was mapping this until the map vanished from the world...

[Easy]
02:07:83 - why is this break here?


[Normal]
02:07:83 - why the break?
02:28:11 (1) - whistle to go with the rest of the phrase


[Hard]
01:20:88 (1,2) - put something in the dead space
break T_T


[Insane]
ok...
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
0_o
Tis done (except the whistle) Thanks :)

btw I asked Mogs to have a look at the hitsounds, so please don't rank until he does

w/e, I changed a few hitsounds, feel free to bubble/rank/mod etc.
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
Bubble

EDIT re bubble for the BAKA <3
don't edit posts it pops bubbles
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
0_o
Made a few hitsound changes, requesting bubble repair.. again
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
k...

[Normal]
02:04:36 (4) - spacing

[Hard]
k

[Insane]
k...

fix that call me back and ill bubble
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
Ranked
peppy
19,374 posts
Here since the beginning
peppy
Just wow. Go take a break from modding you two o.o. As per usual, this map needs to be checked by two BAT members who haven't had anything to do with it thusfar before being ranked again.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
0_o
OK, Normal is updated.

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machol30
osu! Alumni
1,134 posts
Joined January 2008
machol30
Just something quick... I believe BPM should be 164.180 and not 164.220.
Please do not reward this post with kudosu.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Starred :P
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Hmm....

[Easy]

01:38:42 (1,2,3) - Please checking into the spacing here. (1) and (2) are too close together and this would confuse the new players easily.

Also... the background is kinda pixelated, please look into finding a neater one.

[Normal]

The only thing I see that looks a bit odd on this difficulty is the small jumps inbetween the combos at different points of the map. Its kinda on and off like its randomly done. Just make sure to check into that please.

[Hard]

00:50:37 (1,2) - Too close together.


The BG images are also in different formats as well. 3 in .png and 1 in .jpeg. Make sure to check into their quallity and when you check into these issues, let me know to do a recheck.

Edit: Seems to be good enough so far. Bubble for you then.
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Gabi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
...Almost...>A<

I'm very sorry I have to pop this bubble here, but the song definitely feels to be a bit early. This might either be because of an early offset, a fast BPM, or both. >:

I'm not very good at timing, but burai might be on the right trail when suggesting to slow down the BPM. I'm not quite sure though. It's best for you to experiment, though I did seem to play better with the BPM change (Albeit some sliders became shorter from recalculations).

Sorry !
0_o
2,155 posts
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Topic Starter
0_o
Don't apologize for finding a timing problem :P Thanks! :)

EDIT: Aww I was hoping my 1000th post would be more epic ;_;
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.)
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain.

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.

[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing.

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo.
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place.
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
yo~
some suggestion.

for colors

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,128
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 51,138,255
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 255,255,62


all diff:
from 02:02:187 - 02:07:669 .hitsound whistle is better i think
insane:
02:02:370 (2) - without hitsound
02:03:832 (5) - ^
02:06:755 (4) - ^
02:10:095 (2) - add whistle.

nice map .
0_o
2,155 posts
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Topic Starter
0_o

osuplayer111 wrote:

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Add some source if you can.)
Tags: No. (Same here.) Sure
File Size: 3,17MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing is fine. Well done.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase overall difficulty by 1 tick for balance with HP Drain. Not really necessary

02:10:059 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:087 (2) - New combo.[/color]

[Normal]

01:34:059 (2,3) - Spacing. I think it's fine
02:16:043 (1) - Add a repeat on this slider and adjust spacing. Oops, that was supposed to be longer but it got shortened after a timing change :P

[Hard]

01:05:000 (4) - New combo. Hmm, not a bad idea
01:10:084 (5) - ^
02:18:008 (5) - ^
02:23:092 (5) - ^

[Insane]

00:36:013 (8) - New combo. I see what you mean but I'll keep it like it is.
02:50:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Seems out of place. ok
yaya thanks for the suggestions, but I think I'll keep it like it is now.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
What's Insane 2 difficulty? It confuses me. http://osu.ppy.sh/b/41627

Timing is aiorhaoasrgaoig lol
btw Offset: I suggest +5.

[Easy]
00:47:082 (2) - Uh it can be kinda nazi but how about making this 1/2 beat later to make simple rhythm?
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Where is Normal diff and Insane2 ?
I DLed it 2 times, but there is no Normal and Insane2.
Please submit again. I'll mod it when all diffs exist.
0_o
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0_o
Oops, sorry the Insane2 was for testing, I thought I deleted that >_> Should be good now.

minyeob I changed the offset but I'll keep Easy like it is, I think the circle sounds better on the lyric.
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
I suggest just hitsound.


[Easy]
Fine


[Normal]
00:43:099 (3) - clap
01:19:007 (3) - ^
01:30:040 (3) - clap at end of slider
01:46:048 (5) - ^
02:36:017 (5) - whistle at start of slider
02:38:018 (3) - ^


[Hard]
00:35:004 (3,4,5) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^


[Insane]
00:34:067 (3) - clap at end of slider
00:35:040 (5,6) - clap
01:21:081 (2,3,4) - ^
01:39:072 (5) - whistle at start of slider


star~* :)
orioncomet
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orioncomet
<,<
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~

[Easy]
01:36:248(1) Remake Spinner which of length is 01:35:700 - 01:37:710

[Normal]
01:36:066 (1) Same [Easy]

[Hard]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979?
02:14:982 (1,2,3,4) All Finish.

[Insane]
01:35:700 Make Spinner here until 01:36:979, too? (Same [Hard])
02:14:982 (1,2) Finish.

Starred~ :)
0_o
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Topic Starter
0_o
Thanks for the suggestions guys ^_^
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
hello 0_o!!

easy, normal, hard:
fine >_<

insane:
00:40:706 [5]i think it looks better up one tiny square D:
01:41:912 [3]one tiny square to the left >_<


wahhh ~~

star star for you you ^^
Jointhemasters
1 post
Joined November 2009
Jointhemasters
this is a great song, and its well mapped. thumbs up from me!
luke0719
40 posts
Joined June 2008
luke0719
are you considering making a more challenging difficulty?
or perhaps invite some guest mapper for this
I think this epic song deserve a more challenging diff (but S able)
that give some reasons for those topnotch players to practice the map again and again

I'm not good at mapping a challenging diff
but lots of people does
ex: V2b. osu_CN_yaya. ignorethis. kirby or even Alace ....etc

just a personal suggestion ;)

also, somewhere around
2:27:233 - 2:28:123
the beating rythm of the song is very appealing, maybe put some notes for that will be great!

by the way, this is a very good map
Caramelldansen is always my all time favourite in osu! :)

SATR!
0_o
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0_o
Thanks for the input luke. I won't be making a more challenging difficulty since I am not very good at making particularily challenging maps for songs that aren't crazy themselves, but if anyone does feel like making a "true" Insane difficulty, they can let me know (hopefully before it gets ranked :P)
Gens
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Gens
This map is getting old. :|
0_o
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0_o
Alright lesjuh is making a real Insane diff so back to WIP/Help :P
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
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Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
0_o
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Topic Starter
0_o

Teara wrote:

[Normal]
01:34:042 (2) - Move back to white tick and end on a white tick =p I see why you would said this, it would technically fit the lyrics, but slider currently starts on the stronger syllable, and it also starts at the same time it does in the other parts of the song like this.

[Insane]
00:35:040 (5) - Finish ? nah I think it's fine)
ty ^_^
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Caramell - Caramelldansen (Speedycake Remix) (0_o) [Lesjuh].osu
0_o
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0_o
AWESOME
DerekMcD
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Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
*star*
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
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Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Oh could you please add my username in the tags?
0_o
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0_o
^done
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,963 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
In my opinion hitsounds are good until insane and Lesjuh, at which point there is an incredible amount of whistle spam. I suppose that is well within both yours and Lesjuhs interpretation of musicality.

As such, ranking this.
0_o
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0_o
\o/

It seems like the Beatmap info page isn't updating though, and I think this should be moved to the top of the beatmap list. Could a BAT look into this?
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
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Shinxyn

0_o wrote:

\o/

It seems like the Beatmap info page isn't updating though, and I think this should be moved to the top of the beatmap list. Could a BAT look into this?
It just moved to the date this was first ranked (it says "Sept 27, ranked by ztrot") and its "Not ranked" on the beatmap info page, x.x

Ganna be hard for people to notice this was reranked with that date, though it (when I posted this) is first in User rating xD
orioncomet
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orioncomet
oh, I see it's like Shinxyn said > <

Andrea
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Andrea
Issue resolved.
0_o
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0_o
Is this gonna be moved to the top of the beatmap listings though? This map was moved when it got reranked, so I would think this map would be moved too..
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
This map still doesn't have a date of ranking for me...

...Can anyone explain that?

Instead of it saying

"Ranked: Not yet."

it says...

"Ranked: "
animegirl3xx
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animegirl3xx
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lumpyr0bl0x
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lumpyr0bl0x
Guys, this is obviously a bot .-.
0_o
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0_o

lumpyr0bl0x wrote:

Guys, this is obviously a bot .-.
what
Stefan
Global Moderator
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Stefan
Maybe he means the 1st place in the hardest Difficulty but I don't think that it's one since SnowWhite is a legit player.
0_o
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0_o
Ah.
kwea_old
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kwea?
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