yanlu wrote:

Hi~ M4M :3 (我好像mod錯不是你給的那張圖orz) 是的...不過沒關係 而且這張更長 辛苦了

[Hard]

00:23:049 (8,1) - 對著x256軸比較好看:3(x256/y296)如果改了00:23:996 (2,3,4) - 也改一下間距~ Fixed
00:24:943 (1,2,3) - 這種藍線的三連拍我覺得有點開...(尤其你是用95bpm不是2倍>~<)不過現在這樣其實也可以lol whatever 原来没有这么开的，如果还有mapper提意见我就remap
00:27:942 (3,4) - 放遠離00:26:521 (5,6,7) - (像http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583088)原因是開hid我會以為是三連lol(? 前面有二連提示了，我想應該問題不大
00:29:362 (2,3) - 可以被 00:28:416 (5) - blanket 保持原狀其實也行
00:29:837 (4) - 往前一格做三連比較適合節奏吧(?
^(然後00:30:153 - +一個note) Fixed
00:35:207 (2) - 往下放不要整個疊..有點不好看:x 想往下也下不去了..已經到底了..不過還是稍微改進了形狀
00:36:153 - 感覺可以加1拍 在前面加了一拍
00:37:891 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 試試用多邊行工具產生的5角星星~ 已改
00:42:470 (2) - blanket (1) 包的不太好 Fixed
00:43:575 (4) - 被(2)擋了 往上放一點? Fixed
00:45:942 (5) - 不要這個? Removed
00:44:522 (1,2) - 疊到了 Fixed
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4) - 做2 2連比較fit :3 這裡鼓點是三下啊 QAQ
00:53:521 (2) - dele 因為後面好空o.o.. Fixed
00:57:470 (2) - 可以包覆(1)的尾巴包的更好~ Fixed
00:58:100 (3) - 中間的點也許用1~2個拉就好 你用3個可是沒有用平衡.. Fixed
01:13:574 (7) -

368,148,73574,2,0,P|296:188|296:188|244:140|168:180|172:248,1,260

Fixed
01:09:470 (1) - 這個spin不知道是按什麼設的><?(如果是"ku"...01:09:153 - 這裡) Fixed
01:16:733 (5) - stack (3) 可以更好 Fixed
01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1) - 做正五邊形吧! Fixed
01:29:049 (5) - blanket 01:27:154 (1) - 's head Fixed 其實這個AR下已經看不到了啦
01:30:785 (2) - snap Fixed
01:38:522 (3,4,5,6,1) - star Fixed
01:40:733 (3) - 要stack?不stack? >< Stack
01:41:049 (1,2,3,4) - snap可以近一點><稍微疊也沒關西的 Fixed
01:43:416 (3,4) - 拜託別stack在這..Fixed
01:47:364 (1) - ^ 這裡用了NC 應該問題不大
01:48:627 (3) - slider短些 感覺01:49:100 - 有個拍 真沒聽出來orz
01:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以在跳些沒關西~(1~3太近OAO) 單純為了好看啦
01:56:837 (5) - 包覆(3)?不然 01:57:469 (1) - ..? 包不到啊orz
01:58:101 (1) - blanket 醜 Fixed
02:10:101 (1) - spin紅線開始(同前面說的~) Fixed
02:15:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 不懂為什這樣做...也沒有跳什麼的 2ha教我的:p
02:28:259 (2) - x180y240 Fixed
02:31:891 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 多邊形工具(ctrl+shift+D) 我都是手改..話說用工具我調不到這麼大啊orz
02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
02:42:942 (1) - 結束在白線@.@? Fixed
02:45:470 (3,4) - 太跳了吧=口= 還好啦 ..真的
02:47:995 (1) - 白線? Fixed
02:50:522 (3,4) - 一樣很跳.. orz
02:58:101 (3) - 包覆02:57:153 (6) - Fixed
03:01:101 (2) - dele? (你後面有break) 這裡是有個鼓音才加的
03:05:680 (1,2,3) - 節奏做跟後面03:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣的? 這裡是跟的鋼琴..要是還有modder挑我就改
03:19:891 (3,4,5) - 跟(2)的排列可以更好一些(弧 Fixed
03:23:049 (4) - x380y200 Fixed
03:25:890 (3) - slider短些 感覺03:26:364 - 有個拍 故意拖拍的..還有人挑我就改吧
03:26:837 (1) - 同^(03:27:311 - )
03:30:942 (5) - ^
03:31:890 (1) - ^
03:44:837 (1,2,3,4) - snap近些>~< Fixed
03:46:416 (1,2) - 平行? Fixed
03:47:048 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1Sncs ?
03:51:154 (1) - 改成slider試試~(03:51:469 - 結束) Fixed
03:48:943 (2,3) - 疊到了 Fixed
03:53:681 (6,1,2,3,4) - 結尾有點怪怪的...

增加了note
對了 關於你的前兩個breaktime我也是有點不能理解為何要斷在那邊... 因為rap的部分全斷就太長了..僅此而已

老實說我覺得很多slider都能再更好 包覆的地方也是>_<(可能我拉slider拉到病..") orz
抱歉以上有很多都是nazi的mod... 很好的mod

不過我覺得你節奏下的很好呢>A< 而且總覺得有點看到shia的style(? www 的確 我作圖就是因為接觸了S h i a的圖之後覺得其他的都索然無味才下決心當一名mapper的..mapflow方面也都是從S h i a的圖裏面學習的..這是第一張，還有點東施效顰..希望以後能作得更好

這首歌越聽越好聽lol 射個星星~加油! 謝謝！
good luck~~

• 00:21:470 - 00:41:680 kiai time
  03:57:469 这里可以用15%左右的音量

• offset这样不要紧么？

• 00:21:470 - 00:41:680 kiai time
  00:34:733 (7,1) - （353,307）放在这里更好看
  00:37:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的话来个六边形怎么样？
  

  320,240,37890,5,0,0:0:0
  184,159,38206,1,0,0:0:0
  180,315,38521,1,0,0:0:0
  274,160,38837,1,0,0:0:0
  139,237,39153,5,0,0:0:0
  139,237,39311,1,0,0:0:0
  272,316,39627,1,0,0:0:0
  272,316,39785,1,0,0:0:0

  00:42:469 (2) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:44:521 (1,2) - 这里最好不要搭上
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:59:364 (5) - 去掉NC
  02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个五边形怎么瘪了？
  

  432,144,154416,1,0,0:0:0
  293,219,154732,1,0,0:0:0
  360,76,155048,1,0,0:0:0
  390,230,155364,1,0,0:0:0
  390,230,155521,1,0,0:0:0
  390,230,155679,1,0,0:0:0
  274,123,155995,1,0,0:0:0

Autumn wrote:

Thanks for Thou Bad's Mod!
Ready to remap for the 5th time

1. 00:38:880 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760225
2. 00:51:196 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760236 往左再移一点
3. 00:57:828 (8) - 不好 建议取缔
4. silvercrow有点那啥.. 233
5. 01:18:038 (2,3) - 往下弯一点 (3)别叠上去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760245
6. 02:15:828 (2) - 衔接的不够自然
7. 02:39:038 (3) - 不好
8. 我觉得这么摆hard太难了怎么办 而且还ar8为什么不来个ar9的hard (四暗刻

1. 00:35:407 (3) - 开始的地方弯一点不会那么生硬 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760254
2. 节操呢, 怎么还有1/4的233
3. 02:28:775 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760256

1. There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 3).
2. Kiai Time on both difficulties should be the same.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
2. 01:50:564 (3,4) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.
3. 02:00:985 (2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.
4. 02:22:775 (3) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
5. 02:24:670 (5) - Try to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider if possible, it looks a bit ugly.
6. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
7. 02:57:828 (1,2) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.
8. 03:01:301 (5,6) - Same as above for the same reason.
9. 03:21:512 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
10. 03:50:880 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't use stacks please, they're confusing.

1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 01:02:564 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.
2. 01:22:143 - Kiai Time should start here, it's unsnapped right now.
3. 01:22:143 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
4. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
5. 02:03:196 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.
6. 02:15:828 (2,3) - These sliders could be stacked much better if you disable the grid snap.
7. 02:36:512 (4,5) - Same as above for the same reason.
8. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
9. 03:19:459 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden spacing change might be hard to read at first sight, I suggest you to change it.

dkun wrote:

Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you said in the Mapper's Words, but where does this video come from? Also, very nice background!

Just a small note in Normal:
01:10:143 (1) - feels a bit too short for Normal. Could you extend this, please? Starting it at 01:09:196 would work just as fine.
02:10:775 (1) - ^

Great set overall!

Love wrote:

I'm trying to encode the video. So far I'm having a problem trying to get the file size getting lowered. But I'll be back as soon as I fix this.

Edit: Here's the video. I wanted it to look better, but I can't without the file size just being all over the place. So I hope this can be better.

dkun wrote:

as I promised~

good luck.

dkun wrote:

mmm. your changes has left a green line unsnapped @ 01:22:143 in hard~

call me back.

kenethtey wrote:

歌曲跟影片配合的很好，希望能直接看影片。要是 osu 能有一个 mod 可以消除那些按钮只是看影片就好了

JeuXinTerdiTs wrote:

What's the last anime shown?