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Autumn
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Autumn

raririn wrote:

Hi~

  1. Normal = Just Suggestions for reference ovo
  2. Blue = Strongly suggest you do this :D
  3. Red = Unrankable stuff 0.0..


[General]
*首先是diff spread的问题 E-I自重啊 ok 我会补上其他难度
*BG尺寸是1365x768 按照rank标准应该改成1024x768.._. ok 更换了分辨率
*map的部分小于80% 这个..目前看以后Modder的建议吧 实在舍不得裁掉前面



[Easy]
*节奏没问题！只是SV太小了DS还是1.0 这样很容易造成很难看的overlap :/
00:21:470 (1) - 这种滑条建议3点o.o 为了降低一点难度与NM区分 就用滑条吧 :p

00:23:365 (3) - ._.难看的overlap出现了 Fixed
00:31:575 (2) - 这里有很明显的重音 加个finish？的确不过好响啊..看看下面的Modder有什么改变音量的建议再决定加不加

00:39:154 (1) - 转盘短了一些 同时我觉得也不需要结束得这么早 在后面的白线结束？ Fixed

00:45:470 (5) - 作为最低而且是Easy难度出现这样的遮挡既不好看又不好玩 Fixed
考虑这样
SPOILER
或这样
SPOILER
的节奏吧 不改SV的情况下之前的节奏实在是没有办法不遮挡 Fixed 改成了很简单的样式..

00:51:154 (7) - (nazi)移到(x=164,y=288)的位置 Fixed 更换了排列

00:53:364 - 不建议这里空这么多 并且00:54:628 (3) - 这个滑条是红线起对新手有一定的误导 把这里填上吧 Fixed

00:56:838 - 好像不知道这里喷一下的原因 至少在这个难度里看起来不是很必要 Fixed

01:43:891 - 这里有一个音而且01:44:207 - 这里没有vocal音 Fixed
加上01:42:628 (1) - 这一句实际结束在01:43:417 - 让新手很容易以为在01:43:891 - 这里会有一个note而把3提前 建议改一下这部分的节奏
Fixed
01:57:470 (5) - 同00:31:575 (2) - 建议finish 由于音量问题暂时保留

02:02:207 - 看不到放空这么多的理由... 主要是这段视频不错..嘛要是还有Modder说我就把这段也填了...

02:22:733 (2,3,4) - 节奏一直很松散 突然一下子变紧密了不太好吧 其实还好吧..主要是我实在不知道怎么改了..等等看看下面Modder的建议吧

02:35:366 (7) - unsnapped note Fixed

02:47:996 (1) - finish？Fixed

02:54:312 (2,3,4) - 在Easy里真是太不好了 Fixed

02:56:839 (6,7,8) - ^ Fixed

03:05:681 (1,2,3,4) - 这遮挡不好啊 如果保留的话就在03:07:575 (4) - NC Fixed

03:22:102 (4) - NC Fixed

P.S.关于NC 2ha说E的NC不要过5 这虽然不是规定但是的确比较好 建议调整一下NC ok 调整中



[Hard]
*这个难度的NC是乱的 重新理一下吧 初步整理

00:29:680 - 根据节奏这里应该有个note吧 Fixed

00:49:891 (1,1,1,1,1) - 不建议无意义NC 而且1和5颜色一样美感也没有啊_(:3」∠)_ 换成了一种颜色

00:54:626 (1) - unsnapped slider start Fixed

01:14:523 (1) - unsnapped slider end 根据Flower的建议做成了跳

..其实这个难度我不知道该怎么说 总之先这样吧 反正是以骗kd为主要目的(´∀｀) _(:3 」∠ )_
Good Luck~
Thanks for mod！
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
希望是2kd【不对】

IRC
23:29 tutuhaha: 我就说一下节奏上的问题,排列的问题就自己去找mod哈-A-.........
23:29 Autumn: ok
23:29 tutuhaha: 首先打开song setup
23:30 tutuhaha: storyboarding
23:30 tutuhaha: 把现在勾着的那俩都去掉
23:30 Autumn: ok
23:31 Autumn: 这个是一般都不要用吗
23:31 Autumn: Countdown
23:31 tutuhaha: 恩
23:31 tutuhaha: 不要用
23:31 Autumn: 了解~
23:31 tutuhaha: 我习惯是不用因为一煞风景二吵
23:32 Autumn: 我改了语音..所以体验不同 orz
23:32 tutuhaha: 00:29:207 (2)- 这个部分要是我的话我会把它移到00:29:364 (X)- 然后再在00:29:838 加个note
23:32 tutuhaha: 然后节奏就ok
23:33 tutuhaha: 00:45:470 (4,5)- 这个就合成一个slider就行了因为这块跟人声比较好
23:33 tutuhaha: 00:49:891 (1,2,3,4,5)- 这边这么排有点生硬
23:34 tutuhaha: 00:49:891 (1,2)- 照我这么听的话这俩应该靠近移到
23:34 tutuhaha: 一点
23:34 Autumn: ok~
23:34 tutuhaha: 00:50:207 (2,3)- 然后这边一个小跳
23:34 tutuhaha: 00:50:996 (x)- 然后这边加个note
23:35 tutuhaha: 00:50:522 (3,4)- 这个小跳控制的要比2和3大一点
23:35 tutuhaha: 但是全是小跳
23:35 tutuhaha: 这种细节部分遇到单一的节奏就尽量用小跳啊或者slider啊让他丰富起来
23:36 tutuhaha: 00:59:996 (1,2,3,4,5)- 这边也差不多
23:37 tutuhaha: 01:17:680 (x)- 这边加个note然后spinner移到01:17:996 (x)- 开始感觉会比较好
23:39 tutuhaha: 01:57:470 (6)- 没覆盖好
23:39 tutuhaha: 01:57:943 (X)- 这边可以加个note
23:40 tutuhaha: 02:15:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1)- 这块地方照我看来呢
23:40 tutuhaha: 02:15:470 (2,1)- 跳一下
23:40 tutuhaha: 02:15:785 (1,2)- 这个比前面1-2之间的间距要大
23:41 tutuhaha: 02:16:417 (1,2)- 这个比最一个1-2间距要小一点
23:41 tutuhaha: 02:17:049 (1,2)- 这个比第二个1-2间距要大
23:41 tutuhaha: 02:15:470 (2,1)- 然后每个2-1之间的跳间距一样
23:42 tutuhaha: 02:17:680 (1)- 然后最后这个要和前面2的间距是比以上所有都大的
23:42 tutuhaha: 然后
23:42 tutuhaha: 试着这样让他们转着圈，轨迹啊........
23:42 tutuhaha: 希望有表达到Orz
23:43 tutuhaha: 03:05:680 (1,2,3,4)- 这块太僵硬了，跟歌词啊跟歌词
23:44 tutuhaha: 03:10:733 (1,2,3,4,5)- 一样^
23:45 tutuhaha: 03:52:891 (4)- 这个是红线结尾O,O
23:45 tutuhaha: 好说完了-.-
23:47 Autumn: Thanks ^^
Normal做了一大半，当然不包括音效因为对待音效2ha永远是"哦谢特最后搞吧岂可修没人性"的态度:D!
http://puu.sh/1HYSq
先看一下难度OK否:O
我觉得你做的easy太简单了O_O......
Hard改了后感觉不错如果你愿意的话等我在线的时候可以过来勾搭我然后我会和你巴拉巴拉讲一些乱七八糟的东西【咦】

做了以后才知道严格意义上来说红线应该是21470这边开始的，因为第一个重拍是在这里所以长白线也应该从这里开始:o,在这个的基础上再往前推红线就没问题了，我个人支持红线放在11364 ;)~
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Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

tutuhaha wrote:

希望是2kd【不对】

Normal做了一大半，当然不包括音效因为对待音效2ha永远是"哦谢特最后搞吧岂可修没人性"的态度:D!
http://puu.sh/1HYSq
先看一下难度OK否:O
我觉得你做的easy太简单了O_O......
Hard改了后感觉不错如果你愿意的话等我在线的时候可以过来勾搭我然后我会和你巴拉巴拉讲一些乱七八糟的东西【咦】

做了以后才知道严格意义上来说红线应该是21470这边开始的，因为第一个重拍是在这里所以长白线也应该从这里开始:o,在这个的基础上再往前推红线就没问题了，我个人支持红线放在11364 ;)~
2ha新年快乐~
Normal难度刚好~
Easy因为做的比较早，不只是难度，节奏也显得单调，目前重做中，应该很快就能完成
关于红线和重音的问题你说的很对，等我完成了Easy会改掉
Ok..你在线的话我会联系的..
谢谢合作！ XD
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
http://puu.sh/1QPCL
做完了
SuperMoutarde
257 posts
Joined November 2012
SuperMoutarde
Hi, I can m4m. I am downloading your map now. Here's mine: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/73539
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi~ M4M :3 (我好像mod錯不是你給的那張圖orz)

[Hard]

00:23:049 (8,1) - 對著x256軸比較好看:3(x256/y296)如果改了00:23:996 (2,3,4) - 也改一下間距~
00:24:943 (1,2,3) - 這種藍線的三連拍我覺得有點開...(尤其你是用95bpm不是2倍>~<)不過現在這樣其實也可以lol whatever
00:27:942 (3,4) - 放遠離00:26:521 (5,6,7) - (像http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583088)原因是開hid我會以為是三連lol(?
00:29:362 (2,3) - 可以被 00:28:416 (5) - blanket
00:29:837 (4) - 往前一格做三連比較適合節奏吧(?
^(然後00:30:153 - +一個note)
00:35:207 (2) - 往下放不要整個疊..有點不好看:x
00:36:153 - 感覺可以加1拍
00:37:891 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 試試用多邊行工具產生的5角星星~
00:42:470 (2) - blanket (1) 包的不太好
00:43:575 (4) - 被(2)擋了 往上放一點?
00:45:942 (5) - 不要這個?
00:44:522 (1,2) - 疊到了
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4) - 做2 2連比較fit :3
00:53:521 (2) - dele 因為後面好空o.o..
00:57:470 (2) - 可以包覆(1)的尾巴包的更好~
00:58:100 (3) - 中間的點也許用1~2個拉就好 你用3個可是沒有用平衡..
01:13:574 (7) - 
368,148,73574,2,0,P|296:188|296:188|244:140|168:180|172:248,1,260
01:09:470 (1) - 這個spin不知道是按什麼設的><?(如果是"ku"...01:09:153 - 這裡)
01:16:733 (5) - stack (3) 可以更好
01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1) - 做正五邊形吧!
01:29:049 (5) - blanket 01:27:154 (1) - 's head
01:30:785 (2) - snap
01:38:522 (3,4,5,6,1) - star
01:40:733 (3) - 要stack?不stack? ><
01:41:049 (1,2,3,4) - snap可以近一點><稍微疊也沒關西的
01:43:416 (3,4) - 拜託別stack在這..
01:47:364 (1) - ^
01:48:627 (3) - slider短些 感覺01:49:100 - 有個拍
01:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以在跳些沒關西~(1~3太近OAO)
01:56:837 (5) - 包覆(3)?不然 01:57:469 (1) - ..?
01:58:101 (1) - blanket 醜
02:10:101 (1) - spin紅線開始(同前面說的~)
02:15:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 不懂為什這樣做...也沒有跳什麼的
02:28:259 (2) - x180y240
02:31:891 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 多邊形工具(ctrl+shift+D)
02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:42:942 (1) - 結束在白線@.@?
02:45:470 (3,4) - 太跳了吧=口=
02:47:995 (1) - 白線?
02:50:522 (3,4) - 一樣很跳..
02:58:101 (3) - 包覆02:57:153 (6) -
03:01:101 (2) - dele? (你後面有break)
03:05:680 (1,2,3) - 節奏做跟後面03:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣的?
03:19:891 (3,4,5) - 跟(2)的排列可以更好一些(弧
03:23:049 (4) - x380y200
03:25:890 (3) - slider短些 感覺03:26:364 - 有個拍
03:26:837 (1) - 同^(03:27:311 - )
03:30:942 (5) - ^
03:31:890 (1) - ^
03:44:837 (1,2,3,4) - snap近些>~<
03:46:416 (1,2) - 平行?
03:47:048 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1Sncs ?
03:51:154 (1) - 改成slider試試~(03:51:469 - 結束)
03:48:943 (2,3) - 疊到了
03:53:681 (6,1,2,3,4) - 結尾有點怪怪的...
對了 關於你的前兩個breaktime我也是有點不能理解為何要斷在那邊...

老實說我覺得很多slider都能再更好 包覆的地方也是>_<(可能我拉slider拉到病..")
抱歉以上有很多都是nazi的mod...

不過我覺得你節奏下的很好呢>A< 而且總覺得有點看到shia的style(? www

這首歌越聽越好聽lol 射個星星~加油!
good luck~~
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ M4M :3 (我好像mod錯不是你給的那張圖orz) 是的...不過沒關係 而且這張更長 辛苦了

[Hard]

00:23:049 (8,1) - 對著x256軸比較好看:3(x256/y296)如果改了00:23:996 (2,3,4) - 也改一下間距~ Fixed
00:24:943 (1,2,3) - 這種藍線的三連拍我覺得有點開...(尤其你是用95bpm不是2倍>~<)不過現在這樣其實也可以lol whatever 原来没有这么开的，如果还有mapper提意见我就remap
00:27:942 (3,4) - 放遠離00:26:521 (5,6,7) - (像http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/583088)原因是開hid我會以為是三連lol(? 前面有二連提示了，我想應該問題不大
00:29:362 (2,3) - 可以被 00:28:416 (5) - blanket 保持原狀其實也行
00:29:837 (4) - 往前一格做三連比較適合節奏吧(?
^(然後00:30:153 - +一個note) Fixed
00:35:207 (2) - 往下放不要整個疊..有點不好看:x 想往下也下不去了..已經到底了..不過還是稍微改進了形狀
00:36:153 - 感覺可以加1拍 在前面加了一拍
00:37:891 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 試試用多邊行工具產生的5角星星~ 已改
00:42:470 (2) - blanket (1) 包的不太好 Fixed
00:43:575 (4) - 被(2)擋了 往上放一點? Fixed
00:45:942 (5) - 不要這個? Removed
00:44:522 (1,2) - 疊到了 Fixed
00:46:732 (1,2,3,4) - 做2 2連比較fit :3 這裡鼓點是三下啊 QAQ
00:53:521 (2) - dele 因為後面好空o.o.. Fixed
00:57:470 (2) - 可以包覆(1)的尾巴包的更好~ Fixed
00:58:100 (3) - 中間的點也許用1~2個拉就好 你用3個可是沒有用平衡.. Fixed
01:13:574 (7) - 
368,148,73574,2,0,P|296:188|296:188|244:140|168:180|172:248,1,260
Fixed
01:09:470 (1) - 這個spin不知道是按什麼設的><?(如果是"ku"...01:09:153 - 這裡) Fixed
01:16:733 (5) - stack (3) 可以更好 Fixed
01:20:839 (1,2,3,4,1) - 做正五邊形吧! Fixed
01:29:049 (5) - blanket 01:27:154 (1) - 's head Fixed 其實這個AR下已經看不到了啦
01:30:785 (2) - snap Fixed
01:38:522 (3,4,5,6,1) - star Fixed
01:40:733 (3) - 要stack?不stack? >< Stack
01:41:049 (1,2,3,4) - snap可以近一點><稍微疊也沒關西的 Fixed
01:43:416 (3,4) - 拜託別stack在這..Fixed
01:47:364 (1) - ^ 這裡用了NC 應該問題不大
01:48:627 (3) - slider短些 感覺01:49:100 - 有個拍 真沒聽出來orz
01:50:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以在跳些沒關西~(1~3太近OAO) 單純為了好看啦
01:56:837 (5) - 包覆(3)?不然 01:57:469 (1) - ..? 包不到啊orz
01:58:101 (1) - blanket 醜 Fixed
02:10:101 (1) - spin紅線開始(同前面說的~) Fixed
02:15:154 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 不懂為什這樣做...也沒有跳什麼的 2ha教我的:p
02:28:259 (2) - x180y240 Fixed
02:31:891 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 多邊形工具(ctrl+shift+D) 我都是手改..話說用工具我調不到這麼大啊orz
02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
02:42:942 (1) - 結束在白線@.@? Fixed
02:45:470 (3,4) - 太跳了吧=口= 還好啦 ..真的
02:47:995 (1) - 白線? Fixed
02:50:522 (3,4) - 一樣很跳.. orz
02:58:101 (3) - 包覆02:57:153 (6) - Fixed
03:01:101 (2) - dele? (你後面有break) 這裡是有個鼓音才加的
03:05:680 (1,2,3) - 節奏做跟後面03:10:733 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣的? 這裡是跟的鋼琴..要是還有modder挑我就改
03:19:891 (3,4,5) - 跟(2)的排列可以更好一些(弧 Fixed
03:23:049 (4) - x380y200 Fixed
03:25:890 (3) - slider短些 感覺03:26:364 - 有個拍 故意拖拍的..還有人挑我就改吧
03:26:837 (1) - 同^(03:27:311 - )
03:30:942 (5) - ^
03:31:890 (1) - ^
03:44:837 (1,2,3,4) - snap近些>~< Fixed
03:46:416 (1,2) - 平行? Fixed
03:47:048 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/1Sncs ?
03:51:154 (1) - 改成slider試試~(03:51:469 - 結束) Fixed
03:48:943 (2,3) - 疊到了 Fixed
03:53:681 (6,1,2,3,4) - 結尾有點怪怪的...
增加了note
對了 關於你的前兩個breaktime我也是有點不能理解為何要斷在那邊... 因為rap的部分全斷就太長了..僅此而已

老實說我覺得很多slider都能再更好 包覆的地方也是>_<(可能我拉slider拉到病..") orz
抱歉以上有很多都是nazi的mod... 很好的mod

不過我覺得你節奏下的很好呢>A< 而且總覺得有點看到shia的style(? www 的確 我作圖就是因為接觸了S h i a的圖之後覺得其他的都索然無味才下決心當一名mapper的..mapflow方面也都是從S h i a的圖裏面學習的..這是第一張，還有點東施效顰..希望以後能作得更好

這首歌越聽越好聽lol 射個星星~加油! 謝謝！
good luck~~
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
Hi~ m4m here
[Easy]
  • 00:21:470 - 00:41:680 kiai time
    03:57:469 这里可以用15%左右的音量
[TuNormal]
  • offset这样不要紧么？
[Hard]
  • 00:21:470 - 00:41:680 kiai time
    00:34:733 (7,1) - （353,307）放在这里更好看
    00:37:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里的话来个六边形怎么样？
    320,240,37890,5,0,0:0:0
    184,159,38206,1,0,0:0:0
    180,315,38521,1,0,0:0:0
    274,160,38837,1,0,0:0:0
    139,237,39153,5,0,0:0:0
    139,237,39311,1,0,0:0:0
    272,316,39627,1,0,0:0:0
    272,316,39785,1,0,0:0:0
    00:42:469 (2) -
    SPOILER
    00:44:521 (1,2) - 这里最好不要搭上
    SPOILER
    00:59:364 (5) - 去掉NC
    02:34:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这个五边形怎么瘪了？
    432,144,154416,1,0,0:0:0
    293,219,154732,1,0,0:0:0
    360,76,155048,1,0,0:0:0
    390,230,155364,1,0,0:0:0
    390,230,155521,1,0,0:0:0
    390,230,155679,1,0,0:0:0
    274,123,155995,1,0,0:0:0
排列方面还需要再打磨一下，例如00:47:996 (3,4) - ，01:13:258 (6,7) - ，01:47:995 (2,3) - 看起来并不美观，可以再花点功夫修一下
音效方面finish可以再加一点，参照Normal难度，例如00:21:470 (5) - ，00:31:572 (1) - ，00:56:838 (1) - 等等，kiai time我建议每隔一条长白线下一个finish，另外个人觉得normal-finish挺合适的，可以试一下
我试着加了一下finish，可以参考一下 http://puu.sh/1YExN

听到这首歌就湿了，加油~
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Thanks for Thou Bad's Mod!
Ready to remap for the 5th time
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Autumn wrote:

Thanks for Thou Bad's Mod!
Ready to remap for the 5th time
Cut the song and video.
Remapped Hard 5/07
Removed Easy, added Normal 5/14
Hitsounds Done, Ready for pending 5/15
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
hi m4m

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
感觉video品质可以再好点

Artist 和 Title 错了 应该要这样写
Artist: WISE (这个我真的不知道要怎样写, 要写 "WISE by Tiara"
还是 "WISE" 然后 Tiara 放在 tag
还是 "Tiara" 然后 Source写着"WISE")
Title: Toki wo Tomete

[Hard]
NC的排放一下跟vocal一下跟白线感觉不是很好哦 而且我感觉NC好像是乱放的...

00:31:775 (4,5) - CTRL+G, 因为右上下感觉不是很好 总之就是flow不太好建议CTRL+G
00:33:038 (2,3) - 不是很美，感觉用普通的就好
SPOILER
00:36:354 (5) - 感觉太远
00:43:617 (4) - 感觉不是很好，会被误为和00:42:038 (1,2,3) - 一样. 建议放远点
01:19:617 (1) - 换SV建议要NC
01:20:880 (2) - ^
02:00:670 (1) - ^, 接下来的我不说了

好好玩 =v=

[Normal]

感觉还好 就是NC 0.0

GL!~
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
米桶's MOD

mintong89 wrote:

hi m4m

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
感觉video品质可以再好点原来的品质不错 但是太大了(22M)..论长度压成这样已经很不容易了QAQ

Artist 和 Title 错了 应该要这样写
Artist: WISE (这个我真的不知道要怎样写, 要写 "WISE by Tiara"
还是 "WISE" 然后 Tiara 放在 tag
还是 "Tiara" 然后 Source写着"WISE")
Title: Toki wo Tomete
已改 回头会找BAT检查一下的^^

[Hard]
NC的排放一下跟vocal一下跟白线感觉不是很好哦 而且我感觉NC好像是乱放的...重新安排了NC

00:31:775 (4,5) - CTRL+G, 因为右上下感觉不是很好 总之就是flow不太好建议CTRL+G 5到6是一个小跳 为了保持这种感觉我也想了很久 暂时保留
00:33:038 (2,3) - 不是很美，感觉用普通的就好
SPOILER
确实 但是这关联到后面的三角形,如果反过来就使flow逆转了不太舒服
00:36:354 (5) - 感觉太远 已改
00:43:617 (4) - 感觉不是很好，会被误为和00:42:038 (1,2,3) - 一样. 建议放远点
前面部分并没有跳 歌曲也不是很高潮的部分所以不会搞错的
01:19:617 (1) - 换SV建议要NC OK
01:20:880 (2) - ^ OK
02:00:670 (1) - ^, 接下来的我不说了 ALL Fixed

好好玩 =v= 谢谢 ^^


[Normal]

感觉还好 就是NC 0.0
重新安排了NC

GL!~

Thx for mod~ Updated
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
mod


Hard

  1. 00:38:880 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760225
  2. 00:51:196 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760236 往左再移一点
  3. 00:57:828 (8) - 不好 建议取缔
  4. silvercrow有点那啥.. 233
  5. 01:18:038 (2,3) - 往下弯一点 (3)别叠上去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760245
  6. 02:15:828 (2) - 衔接的不够自然
  7. 02:39:038 (3) - 不好
  8. 我觉得这么摆hard太难了怎么办 而且还ar8为什么不来个ar9的hard (四暗刻
Normal

  1. 00:35:407 (3) - 开始的地方弯一点不会那么生硬 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760254
  2. 节操呢, 怎么还有1/4的233
  3. 02:28:775 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760256
为什么我看成了二度落花沙耶加
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
AR3's cool mod

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

mod


Hard

  1. 00:38:880 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760225 好
  2. 00:51:196 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760236 往左再移一点 好
  3. 00:57:828 (8) - 不好 建议取缔 已ban
  4. silvercrow有点那啥.. 233
  5. 01:18:038 (2,3) - 往下弯一点 (3)别叠上去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760245 好
  6. 02:15:828 (2) - 衔接的不够自然 Ctrl+G
  7. 02:39:038 (3) - 不好 已ban
  8. 我觉得这么摆hard太难了怎么办 而且还ar8为什么不来个ar9的hard (四暗刻
其实既不跳也不连打的 BPM还低(好吧我就是不想做EZ 这么长的歌难度少点也利索 233

Normal

  1. 00:35:407 (3) - 开始的地方弯一点不会那么生硬 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760254 好
  2. 节操呢, 怎么还有1/4的233 也好 下面再喊不行就全换滑条
  3. 02:28:775 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/760256
好

为什么我看成了二度落花沙耶加 怎么看都不像了啦233 除了如≈加

多谢~~Updated
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
[General]
bg稍微有点不明所以
文件夹里有5个osb...
00:21:512 - 推荐在这里加个喷泉

[Normal]
00:48:038 (2) - 长度+1/4拍(折返后变+1/2拍)会比较跟歌词
01:30:354 - 加个圈 或者跟01:30:670 (1)放一起变个slider
01:43:617 (3) - 稍微再圆润一点
01:46:775 (3) - ^
01:47:722 (4) - 去掉?
01:57:512 - 弄喷泉的话也太长了 到01:57:670就足够了 另外这个时间点弄喷泉也很诡异 不推荐这么做
02:15:196 (4) - nc
02:30:354 (3) - 折返和尾加clap 总比不加要好
03:54:985 (1) - 感觉没啥必要啊 从03:54:985开始白红白红加4个圈不好么

[Hard]
01:57:512 - 同normal
03:39:670 (2,3) - 尾没叠好
03:46:775 (2) - 缩短1/4拍
03:56:249 (1) - 没必要啊

很不错啊 加把油赶紧rank掉吧妹子
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
JPY'S mod

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
bg稍微有点不明所以 不是只要萌妹子就行么°д°
文件夹里有5个osb... 删了4个
00:21:512 - 推荐在这里加个喷泉 好

[Normal]
00:48:038 (2) - 长度+1/4拍(折返后变+1/2拍)会比较跟歌词 √
01:30:354 - 加个圈 或者跟01:30:670 (1)放一起变个slider Silder
01:43:617 (3) - 稍微再圆润一点√
01:46:775 (3) - ^√
01:47:722 (4) - 去掉?√
01:57:512 - 弄喷泉的话也太长了 到01:57:670就足够了 另外这个时间点弄喷泉也很诡异 不推荐这么做已删
02:15:196 (4) - nc√
02:30:354 (3) - 折返和尾加clap 总比不加要好√
03:54:985 (1) - 感觉没啥必要啊 从03:54:985开始白红白红加4个圈不好么加了一个滑条

[Hard]
01:57:512 - 同normal√
03:39:670 (2,3) - 尾没叠好√
03:46:775 (2) - 缩短1/4拍√
03:56:249 (1) - 没必要啊已删

很不错啊 加把油赶紧rank掉吧妹子 (ball ball U... 我不是妹子orz 不过还是谢谢 我会加油的
Thx for mod! Updated~
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
  • [General]
  1. 我感觉标题和artist还是有点问题……按照原则性来说你要么就完全照搬CD上的
    即artist用Tiara title用時を止めてfeat. WISE 也就是说不要括号而且那个时是错的……不要打中文233
    不然就artist用Tiara feat. WISE 歌名是時を止めて。
    怎么说吧个人偏向第二种……毕竟WISE是和声的，一个vocal放标题还是挺猎奇的……
  2. TAGS加上这首曲的曲作者Jeff Miyahara。

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:23:091 (6) – 这个clap移到00:23:407 (7) –的结尾上去会比较好，现在听上去有违和感。
  2. 01:20:880 (1,2,3,4) – 这个形状看上去不是很好看？感觉弄成特殊形状会比较好（比如三角形正方形或者五角星什么的）
  3. 01:27:670 (4) – 感觉开头可以加个clap. 其实对于这种因为节奏导致不能加24clap的情况来说个人倾向是索性整段都不要24clap换用其他音效或者用clap加适合节奏的音效。不然就要在下节奏的时候就把音效的影响考虑进去……
  4. 03:01:933 - 这个break移到03:01:775开始比较好吧,就是改成没有蓝色的这样
    SPOILER
  5. 03:10:775 (1) – 前面2小节还是跟钢琴这里突然跟vocal这感觉很生硬。个人感觉这种转换至少要4小节换还比较好……特别是在这种慢段，而且combo很乱。
  6. 03:46:459 (1) –这边开始个人推荐用0.5x比较好……毕竟vocal完全慢了下来。

  • [Normal]
  1. AR略高或者说ODHP稍微低了一点，AR-1或者ODHP+1。
  2. 虽然说newcombo很多人可能不喜欢看到MOD里有这个，但是事实上new combo确实挺乱的。我看你第一part那边好像combo是跟vocal的，可是节奏确是跟鼓的……感觉统一一下比较好。
  3. 02:17:407 (4) – 尾巴上感觉可以加个finish.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Eveless' MOD

eveless wrote:

  • [General]
  1. 我感觉标题和artist还是有点问题……按照原则性来说你要么就完全照搬CD上的
    即artist用Tiara title用時を止めてfeat. WISE 也就是说不要括号而且那个时是错的……不要打中文233
    不然就artist用Tiara feat. WISE 歌名是時を止めて。
    怎么说吧个人偏向第二种……毕竟WISE是和声的，一个vocal放标题还是挺猎奇的……
    改成了第二种方案
  2. TAGS加上这首曲的曲作者Jeff Miyahara。
Done

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:23:091 (6) – 这个clap移到00:23:407 (7) –的结尾上去会比较好，现在听上去有违和感。Fixed
  2. 01:20:880 (1,2,3,4) – 这个形状看上去不是很好看？感觉弄成特殊形状会比较好（比如三角形正方形或者五角星什么的）
    采用了五角星
  3. 01:27:670 (4) – 感觉开头可以加个clap. 其实对于这种因为节奏导致不能加24clap的情况来说个人倾向是索性整段都不要24clap换用其他音效或者用clap加适合节奏的音效。不然就要在下节奏的时候就把音效的影响考虑进去……clap已加,另外后面的节奏也稍微调整了一下以配合24clap
  4. 03:01:933 - 这个break移到03:01:775开始比较好吧,就是改成没有蓝色的这样 记得是谁说Break一定要放在白线上来着...好吧改成没有蓝色的
    SPOILER
  5. 03:10:775 (1) – 前面2小节还是跟钢琴这里突然跟vocal这感觉很生硬。个人感觉这种转换至少要4小节换还比较好……特别是在这种慢段，而且combo很乱。 改了节奏跟钢琴,调整了NC
  6. 03:46:459 (1) –这边开始个人推荐用0.5x比较好……毕竟vocal完全慢了下来。
    一开始也是用了0.5..不过总感觉由于SV太慢flow流动不起来...看后面的意见再说吧


  • [Normal]
  1. AR略高或者说ODHP稍微低了一点，AR-1或者ODHP+1。 AR-1
  2. 虽然说newcombo很多人可能不喜欢看到MOD里有这个，但是事实上new combo确实挺乱的。我看你第一part那边好像combo是跟vocal的，可是节奏确是跟鼓的……感觉统一一下比较好。
    节奏是跟的Vocal,可能确实有点乱,也还在不断调整中..希望能有进步
  3. 02:17:407 (4) – 尾巴上感觉可以加个finish.Added

Thx for your helpful MOD! Updated
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Hard]
00:38:564 (5,6) - 5到6感觉有点绕手
00:56:880 (6) - finish
01:28:933 - 加个note,叠在01:29:091 (1) - 的滑条头
01:37:933 (6) - Nc (间距改变了上nc比较好)
01:38:564 (1) - Remove nc
03:53:722 (3) - ctrl+g?感觉flow好点

[Normal]
01:34:775 (4) - 放个soft的finish?
02:01:301 (3) - 感觉很奇怪?...第一个红点的部分往上提一点会好看些

[Other]
Goodluck

看了一眼论坛很是感动,加油
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
拉克修's MOD

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Hard]
00:38:564 (5,6) - 5到6感觉有点绕手 交换了头尾
00:56:880 (6) - finish OK
01:28:933 - 加个note,叠在01:29:091 (1) - 的滑条头 改变了部分节奏
01:37:933 (6) - Nc (间距改变了上nc比较好) 这个AR8下其实还可以
01:38:564 (1) - Remove nc 紫色的好看ww
03:53:722 (3) - ctrl+g?感觉flow好点 你说得对 不过这就有点太跳了

[Normal]
01:34:775 (4) - 放个soft的finish? 放了下感觉几乎听不到orz
02:01:301 (3) - 感觉很奇怪?...第一个红点的部分往上提一点会好看些 ok

[Other]
Goodluck

看了一眼论坛很是感动,加油 谢谢!
Thx for mod~ Updated
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Hi :3 m4m here

Hard
00:21:512 (3) - maybe NC
00:42:038 - 这段开始为什么不加一些whistle 感觉hitsound略单调 比如00:44:249 (5) - whistle
00:45:512 (4) - 头上whistle
00:49:301 (1) - ^
自己重新过一遍吧 我不一个个说了
01:01:933 - 这的break time不需要往后拉吧 有点奇怪
01:29:564 (2) - 把这个删掉然后调整一下前面的1的位置吧 感觉需要在可能的地方降低一下diff的难度
01:42:354 (1) - 干嘛不叠到4的头上
01:50:407 (7) - 这个也可以考虑删掉 把后面的1离远点
02:00:670 (1,2,3) - 感觉不特别像放减速的音 个人观点
02:17:091 (4) - 有点太近了
02:28:301 (2,3) - 感觉2的尾巴出去了不太好看
02:39:038 (3) - 感觉这个也可以删掉 把4CTRL+J再逆时针转个15度左右然后扔上去和5共尾巴
03:00:512 (6) - 这个也可以删掉 前面一段的1/4 note是要低音鼓的 这里啥也没
03:05:722 (1) - 我倒是觉得这一段适合减速
03:18:670 (4) - 感觉有点远 （352,376）如何 也不一定要这么近
03:46:459 (1) - 这段减速也很不错

Normal
00:34:143 (2) - 尾巴clap
00:53:091 (2) - 头上whistle 我记得你Hard里面都加了
01:22:143 (3) - 或许NC
01:39:196 (6) - 尾巴whistle 第二段你就加了
01:57:512 (3) - 感觉没必要3/4
02:30:354 (3) - 折返的clap很奇怪
02:35:407 (4,1) - 它们两个的形状组合得有点奇怪
03:41:091 (4) - 或许NC
03:42:354 (6) - 尾巴soft whsite

感觉不知道挑些什么 就这样吧
good luck
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Zero__wind's mod

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 m4m here

Hard
00:21:512 (3) - maybe NC
00:42:038 - 这段开始为什么不加一些whistle 感觉hitsound略单调 比如00:44:249 (5) - whistle
00:45:512 (4) - 头上whistle
00:49:301 (1) - ^
自己重新过一遍吧 我不一个个说了
添加了跟钢琴的whistle

01:01:933 - 这的break time不需要往后拉吧 有点奇怪 不要开始和结束于白线?
01:29:564 (2) - 把这个删掉然后调整一下前面的1的位置吧 感觉需要在可能的地方降低一下diff的难度 个人觉得没有超过Hard的范畴..
01:42:354 (1) - 干嘛不叠到4的头上 太近了
01:50:407 (7) - 这个也可以考虑删掉 把后面的1离远点 有鼓音
02:00:670 (1,2,3) - 感觉不特别像放减速的音 个人观点 去掉了减速
02:17:091 (4) - 有点太近了 交换了位置
02:28:301 (2,3) - 感觉2的尾巴出去了不太好看 调整了一下 不过没做太大变动因为会遮挡住滑条尾
02:39:038 (3) - 感觉这个也可以删掉 把4CTRL+J再逆时针转个15度左右然后扔上去和5共尾巴 鼓音啊 233
03:00:512 (6) - 这个也可以删掉 前面一段的1/4 note是要低音鼓的 这里啥也没 好
03:05:722 (1) - 我倒是觉得这一段适合减速 之前是的 但是感觉有点粘滞就没用 用缩小spacing代替
03:18:670 (4) - 感觉有点远 （352,376）如何 也不一定要这么近 缩短了
03:46:459 (1) - 这段减速也很不错 好多人都提了..好吧要是还有提到就改(主要是flow流动难度比较大 用跳又有点粘滞

Normal
00:34:143 (2) - 尾巴clap ok
00:53:091 (2) - 头上whistle 我记得你Hard里面都加了 ok
01:22:143 (3) - 或许NC ok
01:39:196 (6) - 尾巴whistle 第二段你就加了 ok
01:57:512 (3) - 感觉没必要3/4 ok
02:30:354 (3) - 折返的clap很奇怪 ok
02:35:407 (4,1) - 它们两个的形状组合得有点奇怪 已改
03:41:091 (4) - 或许NC ok
03:42:354 (6) - 尾巴soft whsite ok

感觉不知道挑些什么 就这样吧
good luck

Thx for mod! Updated
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
~General~
  1. There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 3).
  2. Kiai Time on both difficulties should be the same.
~Normal~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
  2. 01:50:564 (3,4) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.
  3. 02:00:985 (2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 02:22:775 (3) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  5. 02:24:670 (5) - Try to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider if possible, it looks a bit ugly.
  6. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
  7. 02:57:828 (1,2) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.
  8. 03:01:301 (5,6) - Same as above for the same reason.
  9. 03:21:512 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  10. 03:50:880 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't use stacks please, they're confusing.
~Hard~
  1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
  1. 01:02:564 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.
  2. 01:22:143 - Kiai Time should start here, it's unsnapped right now.
  3. 01:22:143 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
  4. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
  5. 02:03:196 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.
  6. 02:15:828 (2,3) - These sliders could be stacked much better if you disable the grid snap.
  7. 02:36:512 (4,5) - Same as above for the same reason.
  8. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.
  9. 03:19:459 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden spacing change might be hard to read at first sight, I suggest you to change it.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Andrea

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 3). Deleted 2 osb
  2. Kiai Time on both difficulties should be the same.
Fixed

~Normal~
  1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
Fixed
  1. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.Fixed
  2. 01:50:564 (3,4) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.Fixed
  3. 02:00:985 (2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.Fixed
  4. 02:22:775 (3) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.Fixed
  5. 02:24:670 (5) - Try to avoid the small overlap with the previous slider if possible, it looks a bit ugly.Fixed
  6. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.Fixed
  7. 02:57:828 (1,2) - This kind of stacks are not a good idea for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, since they can confuse beginners.Fixed
  8. 03:01:301 (5,6) - Same as above for the same reason.Fixed
  9. 03:21:512 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.Fixed
  10. 03:50:880 (1,2,3,4) - Again, don't use stacks please, they're confusing.
Fixed

~Hard~
  1. Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.
Fixed
  1. 01:02:564 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.Removed
  2. 01:22:143 - Kiai Time should start here, it's unsnapped right now.Fixed
  3. 01:22:143 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.Fixed
  4. 01:39:828 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.Fixed
  5. 02:03:196 - I don't understand why did you let the break start here.Removed
  6. 02:15:828 (2,3) - These sliders could be stacked much better if you disable the grid snap.Fixed
  7. 02:36:512 (4,5) - Same as above for the same reason.Fixed
  8. 02:40:459 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner.Fixed
  9. 03:19:459 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden spacing change might be hard to read at first sight, I suggest you to change it.
Fixed
Thx for mod! Updated
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you said in the Mapper's Words, but where does this video come from? Also, very nice background!

Just a small note in Normal:
01:10:143 (1) - feels a bit too short for Normal. Could you extend this, please? Starting it at 01:09:196 would work just as fine.
02:10:775 (1) - ^

Great set overall!
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

dkun wrote:

Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you said in the Mapper's Words, but where does this video come from? Also, very nice background!

Just a small note in Normal:
01:10:143 (1) - feels a bit too short for Normal. Could you extend this, please? Starting it at 01:09:196 would work just as fine.
02:10:775 (1) - ^

Great set overall!
Thanks for your suggestion! All fixed. With some tiny adjustments to make Normal easier.

Well the video is from a MADmovie which uses this song as the background music. It fits the song pretty well so I decided to use it.
I'm going to add some imformation about the song in the mapper's words :P
dkun
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
dkun
mmm, as a last check, offset -10 please!

call me back. :o
Love
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2010
Love
I'm trying to encode the video. So far I'm having a problem trying to get the file size getting lowered. But I'll be back as soon as I fix this.

Edit: Here's the video. I wanted it to look better, but I can't without the file size just being all over the place. So I hope this can be better.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Love wrote:

I'm trying to encode the video. So far I'm having a problem trying to get the file size getting lowered. But I'll be back as soon as I fix this.

Edit: Here's the video. I wanted it to look better, but I can't without the file size just being all over the place. So I hope this can be better.
Thank you very much for the encoding of the video!
Well done! Great quality! lol
Updated~
dkun
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
dkun
as I promised~

good luck. :o
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

dkun wrote:

as I promised~

good luck. :o
Edit: Rechecked and fixed a tiny snap issue as well as some rhythm arrangements not suitable for Normal.
It should work this time imo..I've rechecked it for 101th times lol
Sorry dkun, it's my fault :(
dkun
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
dkun
mmm. your changes has left a green line unsnapped @ 01:22:143 in hard~

call me back.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

dkun wrote:

mmm. your changes has left a green line unsnapped @ 01:22:143 in hard~

call me back.
Fixed~
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
Okay, now let's really get this down the right road.
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
Since I've modded it before, nothing else to say.

Ranked
dkun
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
dkun
:o

congrats on the first ranked map!
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Congratz! Autumn and also welcome Osu! mappers team ;)
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
gong xi \:D/
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2012
Fycho
gong xi~
Autumn
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Topic Starter
Autumn
Thank you, eveless :)
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