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Fun. - We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae)

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Tony
updated after 6 months. yay!
now let's get this to rank.
Chronotakular
Hello! Mod 4 Mod from your queue! (:

General:

-Love this song. I'm a huge P!atD and Fun. fan. (:
-Isn't there a music video for this song? Scratch that. I KNOW there is a music video for this song. Consider adding it, unless it makes the file to huge.
-I like your difficulty names. :D

[Relaxing]
This is an extremely clean map with a really identifiable beat. Almost no issue with it.

04:04:748 (2) - Yeah, I know, I'm picking on the second to last note. I don't even think it's necessary. I'd delete this, and move the slider back to where this note is now. Just for this difficulty, though.

[Interesting]
Another really well made map.

03:33:638 (1) - This spinner feels out of place. I'd get rid of it and chart normally here.
03:56:464 (3,4,5) - Something went awry here. Make these sliders end on the red ticks, and start on the white ticks. This is too hard for this difficulty, and the distance snapping is pretty tough too.

[Fun]
I think you should put the period after Fun on this difficulties name, but either or is fine.

00:10:945 (2) - I would move this to the white beat, and distance snap it.
01:31:040 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with circles 1 and 2 before it. It makes it just a little bit too hard to read.
02:06:573 (1,2) - I would try to make these more symmetrical, just so it's a little bit more pretty.
02:16:355 (2,3) - Consider removing this jump. It's just a little weird to me.
04:03:210 (1,2) - Hmm. Try this. Make the slider end on the red tick, and put the circle on the blue tick.
[]
This is an excellent map. I can't wait until this is ranked! I hope this helped some how, good luck! :oops:
Faust
Timing check on request.

Timing:

1st half:

BPM: 116.00, Offset: 213
BPM: 92.00, Offset: 41,592
BPM: 88.30, Offset: 88,548
BPM: 70.00, Offset: 90,756
BPM: 96.00, Offset: 91,041
BPM: 80.00, Offset: 109,791
BPM: 90.00, Offset: 110,916
BPM: 92.00, Offset: 111,249

2nd half: About 3:57 onwards

BPM: 93.00, Offset: 237,770
BPM: 90.00, Offset: 239,060
BPM: 86.00, Offset: 239,726
BPM: 82.00, Offset: 240,423
BPM: 88.00, Offset: 241,520
BPM: 89.00, Offset: 241,860
BPM: 78.00, Offset: 243,208
Topic Starter
Tony
uh oh. the timing seems awesomer now!

Updated Timing and changed some things from Chronotakular's mod! thanks guys :)
Ayesha Altugle
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41592,652.173913043478,4,2,0,70,1,0
49418,-80,4,2,0,70,0,0
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111249,-80,4,2,0,70,0,0
151683,-80,4,2,0,10,0,0
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215596,-80,4,2,0,70,0,1
235162,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
237770,645.161290322581,4,2,0,70,1,1
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239060,-80,4,2,0,50,0,0
239726,697.674418604651,4,2,0,40,1,0
239726,-80,4,2,0,40,0,0
240423,731.707317073171,4,2,0,50,1,0
240423,-80,4,2,0,40,0,0
241520,681.818181818182,4,2,0,40,1,0
241860,674.157303370787,4,2,0,30,1,0
241860,-77.5193798449612,4,2,0,30,0,0
243208,769.230769230769,4,2,0,30,1,0
244938,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
Topic Starter
Tony
so basically you did no changes lol. at least you confirmed this timing is good then. thank you :s
Faust
You switched the 90 BPM to 91 BPM.

???

I don't even.
Topic Starter
Tony
I verified both timing and I see exactly same thing. did I miss something?

what happens I don't even.
Faust
The map starting from 111249 is now 4ms behind ?
Topic Starter
Tony
my bad. fixed~ o3o
Charles445
Timing requested by forum PM

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243223,759.493670886076,4,2,0,70,1,0
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks Charles for the timing! :D updated the timing
jericho2442
modded the map, coming along good. done lots of suggestions and changes on the hardest diff to help it flow better

log
20:42 *jericho2442 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/201426 Fun. - We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae) [Fun]]
20:43 jericho2442: yoyo
20:43 Tony: I sawww I pm'd you
20:43 Tony: I think you didn't get my message
20:43 Tony: D:
20:43 jericho2442: i got nthing
20:43 Tony: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2552329
20:43 Tony: I said "jeriiii ♥"
20:43 Tony: and I sent that link lol
20:45 Tony: what's with ur internettt damn
20:45 jericho2442: nvm haha, first we will mod the map
20:45 jericho2442: will do insane first
20:46 Tony: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2552329 !!!!
20:46 jericho2442: "will mod first"
20:47 jericho2442: 00:12:368 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit, it feels out of place
20:48 jericho2442: 00:16:247 (4,1) - this one also feels out of place
20:49 jericho2442: 00:23:230 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern feels mapped wrong, you have constantly followed the vocal up to this point and now suddenly for one pattern you follow the rythm
20:50 jericho2442: i would advise to delete the tripbeat and follow the vocal more at this point
20:50 jericho2442: 00:33:057 (6,1) - again, i dont see a reason for this jump
20:51 Tony: hmm
20:51 Tony: will delete the 4 then
20:51 Tony: fixed the jumps
20:51 Tony: removed them
20:51 jericho2442: 00:37:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can you explain to me, the reason behind such a pattern? i cant understand it
20:52 jericho2442: 00:39:264 (1) - and you know this jump doesnt fit
20:52 jericho2442: thats why you used a new combo to make it readable
20:53 Tony: ok wait
20:53 jericho2442: 01:09:964 (7,1) - jump done for symmetry, correct?
20:54 Tony: I thought it's fun to have jumps where the cymbals and the music starts powerfull
20:54 Tony: 00:12:368 (6,1) - same here, it's readable since piano I guess
20:54 jericho2442: not complaining about that last one, just saying lol
20:54 Tony: wait
20:55 Tony: I was saying about the first one lol
20:55 jericho2442: the cymble is not in the music
20:55 jericho2442: your adding that
20:55 Tony: yep
20:55 Tony: xD
20:55 jericho2442: it doesnt relate to the song
20:55 Tony: ur rite
20:55 Tony: D:
20:55 Tony: u're*
20:56 jericho2442: ofc i am ;) *runs*
20:56 *Tony slaps jeri
20:57 Tony: 00:20:644 (5,1) - what about this?
20:58 jericho2442: works fine due to the slider reversing back helping it keep that consistent movement feeling
20:58 Tony: oh ok
20:58 Tony: what's a tripbeat
20:58 Tony: I feel noob
20:59 jericho2442: its a beat what consists of 2 packs of 1/2 notes, with the first set ending on a red tick and the second starting on it
20:59 jericho2442: creating a rhythm like a tripping motion xD
20:59 Tony: ohhhh
21:00 Tony: lol
21:00 jericho2442: bouncebabe says she feels nood too
21:00 jericho2442: noob*
21:00 Tony: ahahahahah
21:01 jericho2442: 02:11:475 (3,1) - prolly hard to do, but increasing the spacing between these two notes would help it all work better too, try it and see
21:02 jericho2442: 02:13:431 (5) - doesnt suit having the repeat slider here, either stream or make it like the other times with a normal 1/2 slider
21:02 Tony: 00:37:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this was an old idea, I thought it would play good lol
21:02 jericho2442: 02:15:388 (5,1) - this jump feels pointless but ohwell
21:04 jericho2442: advice here would be to follow the vocals more 03:05:116 (2,3,4) -
21:05 jericho2442: since the jump feels abit out of place for somereason, but i cant put my finger on why fully
21:07 jericho2442: 03:13:105 - would add a note here to help the flow going, i feel like i want to keep playing through this tiny break
21:07 jericho2442: 03:13:431 (2) - add a repeat to this slider, it then ends on the point he begins to sing again, giving it a really nice point to start the break
21:08 Tony: u so faaaassttt
21:08 jericho2442: dont worry, just take your time haha
21:08 Tony: 03:04:953 (1,2,3,4) - I'm here
21:08 Tony: xD
21:09 Tony: help
21:09 Tony: i dunno what to do
21:10 Tony: http://puu.sh/4ifl5.jpg?
21:10 Tony: http://puu.sh/4ifl5.jpg ?
21:10 jericho2442: 03:55:823 (2) - i would extend this slider to end on the next blue tick, it follows the vocals better and gives a nicer overall flow
21:10 jericho2442: and kk
21:11 jericho2442: try that http://puu.sh/4ifpN.jpg
21:12 jericho2442: 03:56:475 (3,4) - remove 4 and extend the 3 to end where the 4 did, try it and see if you agree it flows better with the song
21:13 jericho2442: 04:02:200 (2,1) - more space between these, the song is slowing down so itjus helps it be more readable imo
21:15 jericho2442: for the other diffs just a small mod http://puu.sh/4ifyo.txt
21:15 jericho2442: take your time checking everything kk
21:16 Tony: ok everything checked on [fun.]
21:16 Tony: lemme take an overall look
21:17 jericho2442: i aint got time to do a full recheck atm so i will post fornow with the log and then do a recheck soon as i can ok
21:17 jericho2442: ^^
21:17 Tony: kk
primrose
Name of artist/band should be "fun." instead of "Fun.". just my opinion
Topic Starter
Tony
true but this : http://puu.sh/4jtGp.jpg
Topic Starter
Tony
deleted video.
Andrea
IRC Modded.

SPOILER
21:48 Andrea: link me, I'll mod it nao
21:48 *Tony is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/297648 Fun. - We Are Young (feat. Janelle Monae) [Fun.]]
21:48 Andrea: irc mod k?
21:48 Tony: read posts about fun. or Fun.
21:48 Andrea: /lazy
21:48 Tony: ok
21:49 Tony: me too
21:49 Tony: LOL
21:49 Andrea: you added the . like the artist
21:49 Andrea: ok got it
21:49 Tony: well
21:49 Tony: a guy said
21:49 Tony: that the artist
21:49 Tony: should be
21:49 Tony: fun.
21:49 Tony: not Fun.
21:50 Andrea: let me check
21:50 Andrea: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sv6dMFF_yts
21:50 Andrea: official video
21:50 Andrea: Fun.
21:51 Andrea: also fix title
21:51 Tony: wikipedia says it
21:51 Tony: but http://puu.sh/4jtGp.jpg
21:51 Tony: feat. into ft. ???
21:52 Andrea: guess both are okay
21:52 Tony: what should fix to title then?
21:53 Andrea: Fun. - We Are Young ft. Janelle Monáe
21:53 Andrea: official video says this D:
21:53 Tony: OH LOL
21:53 Tony: ok xDD
21:53 Andrea: without () and ft. not feat.
21:53 Andrea: artist is correct
21:54 Andrea: also rename other diffs with . at the end too?
21:54 Andrea: for consistentcy
21:54 Andrea: Relaxing. Interesting. Fun.
21:54 Tony: ok
21:54 Tony: ahahah
21:54 Tony: ok
21:54 Tony: nice
21:54 Andrea: fix these and I'll redownload
21:55 Tony: ok
21:56 Tony: done
21:56 Andrea: redownloading
21:57 Tony: :3
21:57 Andrea: wow dat BG size is so weird
21:57 Tony: it still matters? LOL
21:58 Andrea: well, it's suggested to be resized properly
21:58 Tony: 1024 x 768?
21:59 Andrea: yeah or 1366x768
21:59 Andrea: both works
21:59 Tony: ok
22:00 Tony: done
22:00 Tony: into 1024x768
22:01 Andrea: alright
22:01 Andrea: Relaxing. seems good
22:01 Tony: yay
22:02 Andrea: let's go to Interesting.
22:02 Andrea: 01:31:357 (2) - Unsnapped slider end, gg
22:03 Andrea: 00:54:638 (3,4,5) - little spacing inconsistency (nazi)
22:03 Tony: uh
22:04 Tony: how can fix unsnapped slider?
22:04 Tony: D:
22:04 Tony: redo it
22:04 Tony: lemme try
22:04 Andrea: make a circle instead or try to resnap it manually
22:06 Tony: i'll make circles out of it
22:06 Andrea: best idea lol
22:06 Tony: and stack first (1) with (2)
22:06 Tony: ok?
22:06 Tony: LOL
22:06 Andrea: that works I guess
22:06 Tony: /lazy
22:07 Andrea: I'll go on last diff when you finished
22:07 Tony: done
22:07 Andrea: 01:30:571 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
22:07 Andrea: known as NC bug :v
22:08 Tony: bugs everywhere
22:09 Andrea: 01:59:736 (1,2,3) - these sliders have a really weird shape imo ;-;
22:09 Andrea: I'd prefer them normally curved instead
22:10 Tony: my creativity
22:10 Tony: is so ugly sometimes
22:10 Andrea: they run whole map imo xD
22:10 Andrea: ruin*
22:11 Andrea: 02:53:214 (1) - I don't think new combo is necessary...
22:12 Andrea: 03:57:272 (4) - this circle doesn't seem to follow anything, I'd remove it
22:13 Andrea: that's it~
22:13 Tony: "the"
22:13 Tony: the bar closes
22:13 Tony: wait
22:13 Andrea: he says it a bit later than that imo u.u
22:13 Tony: i'll remove white tick instead
22:13 Andrea: that might be a good idea o3o
22:15 Tony: almost done
22:17 Tony: done
22:17 Tony: lemme update
22:18 Tony: ok done
22:18 Tony: redownload to check bg~

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
Tony
nyaaan thx Gunther Andrea ♥
Kyouren
Why don't add video???
i think is good :o :? :(
Topic Starter
Tony
oh god... no
Kyouren
But i have a video before you delete that video!
BounceBabe
W-what... where is the video gone
Topic Starter
Tony
I'm fed up with it.
dkun
[Fun.]
02:02:344 (2) - Please stack this directly at the end of (1).
02:06:584 (1,2) - I'm sure these could loooook better.
02:27:453 (1,2,3) - Why are these not symmetrical?

Let me know and I'll recheck.
Cloudchaser
I think the featuring artist must be in the artist box instead on the title. ("Fun. ft. Janelle Monae") just saying. :c
Andrea

-Cloudchaser wrote:

I think the featuring artist must be in the artist box instead on the title. ("Fun. ft. Janelle Monae") just saying. :c
Official source says otherwise, so nope.
Topic Starter
Tony

dkun wrote:

[Fun.]
02:02:344 (2) - Please stack this directly at the end of (1). Fixed!
02:06:584 (1,2) - I'm sure these could loooook better.Rotated (1) a bit so the blanket looks better~
02:27:453 (1,2,3) - Why are these not symmetrical? Woops~ Fixed

Let me know and I'll recheck.
Done~ Thank you <33
dkun
TONIIIIIIIIIIIGHTTTTTTTTT

we. are. young.

so i'll set the world on fire........
Timorisu
Ok very early gz on the rank
Topic Starter
Tony
omg fire!!!! <333 thank you!!!
mancuso_JM_
Grats!!! Really nice song! :D
Topic Starter
Tony
thank you :D
2211178
congratz~
Stefan
Congrats!
Cloudchaser
Nice song heh <3 congratz
Andrea
Congrats Tony! :)
cc87_old
wow~ gratz :) :)
pw384
GJ
Kyouren
Gratz!!! Tony!!

WE ARE YOUNG!!!
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks guys~ :D :D
Axey
nice song!
Deif
Loved that song, Tony!
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks :3
Slow-ru
wow, it's ranked already
gratz
happy623
gratz <3
Aurele


Shouldn't the "(feat. Janelle Monae)" be included in the artist?
Luvdic

Gabe wrote:



Shouldn't the "(feat. Janelle Monae)" be included in the artist?

Andrea wrote:

-Cloudchaser wrote:

I think the featuring artist must be in the artist box instead on the title. ("Fun. ft. Janelle Monae") just saying. :c
Official source says otherwise, so nope.

Gabe I love you so much, please dont hate me

/me runs away!
Stefan

Gabe wrote:



Shouldn't the "(feat. Janelle Monae)" be included in the artist?
Even when the official source would say something different I'd perfer to use this form instead to put the second artist in the artist field. Looks just extremly unclean and spammy.
Aurele
oh alright, that's cool then c:
dkun

Stefan wrote:

Gabe wrote:



Shouldn't the "(feat. Janelle Monae)" be included in the artist?
Even when the official source would say something different I'd perfer to use this form instead to put the second artist in the artist field. Looks just extremly unclean and spammy.
I had the mapper follow the official. The official is what we use regardless of what examples you can cite.

This isn't my rule, but the ruleset I follow. If you have compliants about it, you know the proper way to get it amended.
Topic Starter
Tony
oh hiiii
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