Xinely wrote:

from m4m in my queue
Feel free to no kd my mod, this map already good and just opinion in here

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  General
  well because this is collab, make name mapper for collab in SB pls.. helpful to modder write who's part in their mod umm.We are the same group.We all decide not to do it

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  Replay
  00:01:436 (3,4) - try use this rhythm http://puu.sh/4xkMG.jpg ? follow music properly imo done
  00:06:527 (1) - 372,276? better for see based visual imo done
  00:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - try make them like http://puu.sh/4xkWd.jpg ? placement better imo done
  00:11:072 (4) - NC for consistency done
  00:15:981 (2,3) - try this overlap http://puu.sh/4y9Af.jpg ? done
  00:32:162 (5) - this placement make confuse imo, how about 152|248? keep
  00:35:254 (6) - NC because SV change keep
  00:44:344 (5) - add whistle in here because the music done
  00:51:254 (5) - ctrl+G for better flow to play? done
  01:25:254 (2) - better visual and more neat if you stacked with 01:24:163 (2) - ? done
  01:45:072 (5) - try ctrl+G this? done
  02:34:527 (7) - NC due SV change keep
  02:46:163 (7) - extend until 02:46:436 - ? sound better to me :3 keep
  03:58:890 - add note for follow vocal? I'll think about it
  04:19:254 (4) - ctrl+G for make jumpy and fun to play?keep
  04:33:436 (4) - NC for anti jump

Touhou :3
Good Luck ~

Garven wrote:

Bubble #1!

Scorpiour wrote:

just a warning:

different from hitsounds / mp3, You must get the permission from the skin-element maker BEFORE you use them in your mapset.

KSHR wrote:

gogo~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Bubble #2

1. I wondered if it is possible to add name labels for each part?
2. 02:22:890 - move this pulse to 02:23:254 - ?

1. 00:08:890 (5) - i'd like to split it into two notes due to the two group of guitar on 00:08:709 - & 00:09:072 -
2. 00:28:981 (4) - the whistle here is heard weird a bit so suggest to remove it
3. 00:44:344 (5) - add a clap to emphasize the drum?
4. 01:02:163 (3,4,5) - tbh the flow here is odd...make it horizontal maybe better
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:618 (5) - +clap?
6. 01:45:072 (5) - maybe..ctrl+g?
7. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - the reason of triplet here is?
8. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
9. 03:01:254 (1) - the spacing here is tricky a bit due to a similar placement at 02:51:527 (7) - where is 1/4
10. 03:10:618 (4,5) - claps heard weird
11. 03:16:345 (4,5,6) - still ... triplets start from white tick and also heard weird due to claps, and many similar following

Scorpiour wrote:

a recheck & some more suggestions before it goes

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Storyboard]

1. I wondered if it is possible to add name labels for each part? Is it necessary to add the name?Because it's an unanimous decision for us
2. 02:22:890 - move this pulse to 02:23:254 - ? add a pattern on 02:22:890

[Replay]

1. 00:08:890 (5) - i'd like to split it into two notes due to the two group of guitar on 00:08:709 - & 00:09:072 - fixed
2. 00:28:981 (4) - the whistle here is heard weird a bit so suggest to remove it fixed
3. 00:44:344 (5) - add a clap to emphasize the drum? fixed
4. 01:02:163 (3,4,5) - tbh the flow here is odd...make it horizontal maybe better fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:07:618 (5) - +clap? fixed
6. 01:45:072 (5) - maybe..ctrl+g? fixed
7. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - the reasons of triplet here is?Because you mentioned it last time .I thinked about for a long time .In fact I really listen it as a triplet .Besides,in kiai time I think it needs a strong beat.So I choose the triplet .I'm sorry Forgive my caprice
8. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
9. 03:01:254 (1) - the spacing here is tricky a bit due to a similar placement at 02:51:527 (7) - where is 1/4 fix
10. 03:10:618 (4,5) - claps heard weird removed
11. 03:16:345 (4,5,6) - still ... triplets start from white tick and also heard weird due to claps, and many similar followingchanged something

That's all

384059043 wrote:

sco和ntr的认证 不愧是神麻婆

Garven wrote:

384059043 wrote:

sco和ntr的认证 不愧是神麻婆

Aw, I don't count? q: