Hi there Lanturn, returning the favour with m4m.
Well this is retrospective since I'm writing this after I typed out the line of the mods, but the map in general and especially the hit sounds... AMAZING! Similar to what I tried to do in the map that you modded of mine. Though this is 10^5 times better. Ok, ok I'll calm down :3
Here we go:
General
I have nothing in general to say that would help you, but I figured that a better background image would suit better. I don't have anything against the picture in particular, it just looks a bit outdated that's all. It's an '07 anime right? Here are some in case you want them. I re-sampled them all just for you :3 In the order from most recommended:
Yes, I really like fan art and paintings ok! Don't feel obligated to use these alright? [Source: konachan/pixiv]
Hard
Normal
Easy
Ok well, phew. This song is awesome too, first time hearing it.
Well I'm not just a fan of Umi's, I'm now also a fan of yours! Lanturn-sama of the hitsounds. That whistle - so much better than the one I'm using ><
Anyway, that's all from me. Probs annoying you now. Feel free to use my suggestions if you want. I hope my mod/ramble is as helpful as yours was. Good luck with this one.. oh wait you won't need it. Byee~
Oh and here's a star o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
Well this is retrospective since I'm writing this after I typed out the line of the mods, but the map in general and especially the hit sounds... AMAZING! Similar to what I tried to do in the map that you modded of mine. Though this is 10^5 times better. Ok, ok I'll calm down :3
Here we go:
General
I have nothing in general to say that would help you, but I figured that a better background image would suit better. I don't have anything against the picture in particular, it just looks a bit outdated that's all. It's an '07 anime right? Here are some in case you want them. I re-sampled them all just for you :3 In the order from most recommended:
Yes, I really like fan art and paintings ok! Don't feel obligated to use these alright? [Source: konachan/pixiv]
Hard
- 00:03:255 (1) - Personally, I would have mapped the snares that you can hear at the start. On each of the white ticks and the two at 00:05:286 & 00:05:442. A spinner works fine though.
- 00:29:505 - Sounds strange if you don't map this beat. Maybe shorten 00:29:192 (6) slider and add a note where the tail was on the timeline. If you decide to do this, of course you have to add the whistle on (7), but I don't need to tell you that!
- 00:38:880 (5,6,7) - This part already sounds freaking amazing, but it in my opinion it would sound a bit better if you do the following:
- 00:38:880 (5) - Shorten this slider by a 1/4 note by leaving the tail where it is, and have the head here 00:39:036 on the blue tick.
- 00:38:880 - Add a note here with a whistle.
- 00:40:286 - Since I've moved the notes around a bit the numbers are different. So to avoid confusion, add whistle at this point which is on the end of the kick slider.
- 00:41:223 - A note here might work better.
- 01:12:473 (9) - Ok, so add a clap or whistle on the head and a whistle on the reverse part? Sounds pretty cool. Or make it a subtle (since it is barely audible in the song) by decreasing the volume a bit.
- 01:03:567 - You could also do with a note here.
- 01:13:567 - ^ Ahhh maybe not for these. Having a note there and not having it there both work. Even with a note here 01:13:723 would work. Your decision, of course.
- 01:22:630 (9) - NC perhaps?
- 01:22:942 (3,4,5) - Also add whistles on these. Any arrangement would do. It's subtle but that whistle will definitely make that bit sounds better! A gradual rise in volume to what it's currently at might work for this bit too 01:22:630 (1,2,3,4,5).
Normal
- 00:22:317 (3,4) - Wow I'm so picky, but perfectly blanket this. I'll get you back for exposing my dodgy blankets Move the tail of (4) up 1 square. Yes, that's right, 1 square (grid level 4 of course)
- 01:22:005 (5) - NC.
- 01:22:005 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ah I see you added some of those whistles here, which I talked about in Hard.
Easy
- 00:28:880 (4) - I think this note is too close to the edge for this diff.
- 00:33:255 (4) - ^
- 01:04:817 - How come you didn't do the two 1/2 notes with the whistles here? Add a note at this time with the whistle to keep it consistent. Look, you did it here 01:13:880 (1,2). I only noticed this because I played the harder diffs before this one with the awesome beat. Was tapping my foot and everything
Ok well, phew. This song is awesome too, first time hearing it.
Well I'm not just a fan of Umi's, I'm now also a fan of yours! Lanturn-sama of the hitsounds. That whistle - so much better than the one I'm using ><
Anyway, that's all from me. Probs annoying you now. Feel free to use my suggestions if you want. I hope my mod/ramble is as helpful as yours was. Good luck with this one.. oh wait you won't need it. Byee~
Oh and here's a star o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆