[cheesiest]
00:12:187 (4) - this should be a regular kat, listen to the song.
00:12:637 (6) - put a kat, there is a sequence of 4 instead of three where you mapped the 3 kats after that note. the first of the sequence is on this note.
(wip)
00:14:587 (23) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:15:187 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - These streams are a bit long, put that length for more intense parts.
00:16:987 (46) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:19:387 (65) - ^
00:17:437 (48,49,50,51,52) - If anything, make it similar to 00:12:637 (6,7,8,9,10) - !
00:21:187 (73) - Delete, the reversed crash stops right there: 00:21:037 (72) -
00:21:637 (76) - Honestly, this don sounds awkward. Change it to kat ?
00:32:137 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - You could've done the stream a bit more complicated
00:33:637 (173) - Same as 00:21:637 (76) -
00:34:537 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - , 00:36:037 (193) - repeat the two above
00:36:937 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - , 00:38:437 (213) - ^
00:43:837 (258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - Even though that stream is justifiable, make it worth the difficulty ? As in, putting more color switches.
00:45:487 (279,280,281) - I think you can add in more 1/2 notes in there, it would feel less empty.
00:49:537 (316,317) - Cutting the stream at this point makes it sound odd.
00:54:937 (358,359) - Add in more notes, it's empty now, you break errythin'
00:55:387 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398) - For some reason it plays weird. I think some parts can be reworked such as 00:56:737 (372,373,374,375,376,377,378) - , which is followed by 00:57:337 (379,380,381,382,383,384) -
01:28:985 (561,562) - Empty noting.
01:36:185 (614,615) - ^
01:38:435 (627,628) - Add a note and make it kdk instead ! It should play nicely and go along the song.
01:39:635 (634,635) - ^
01:44:885 (673,674,675) - Even though you are mapping to the melody, that sounds awkward as it is. Actually, the whole kiai is awkward to play as you've mapped to the melody and leaving out the whole drumming.
^ Will only apply once Dain wins the battle against BSS. *Gezo kept praying*[Futsuu]
The end is quite arg to play as every note overlap the rest. The only recommendation is to
exceptionally put SV changes so very few overlaps happen.
00:03:487 - Since you've mapped all the same occurrences of that drumming d k k k, you may want to add one kat there
00:09:787 (11) - the same sound is heard at 00:10:237 (12) -, so maybe kat on 11 or don on 12-13
00:11:737 (14) - the music starts to become more agitated here, we don't feel it ! maybe add more agitation there, as in more 1/1 notes. that's only an idea, up to you to change it or not.
00:19:837 (28) - even though that's what I call a "closing note", this is not really one here as the sound continues until the next note. maybe small kat instead ?
00:21:337 (29) - and the big note is better here imo. you hear a (ear-breaking) crash there, so...
00:40:537 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - a little bit awkward to play and I don't get what you're mapping to, especially 69-75. is it the melody or the drumming ?
00:58:537 (101,102,103,104,105) - maybe cut that on 104 so no overlap would show ? that's 300ms between 104 and 105 here, and these 300ms may confuse the player as the scrolling speed gets halved. another solution is to include a 2.00x timing section only on the 105, and put that to 1.0x before the first actual note of the 100 bpm section. illustration:
http://puu.sh/5l6Dj.png timeline
http://puu.sh/5l6E5.png timing
01:04:537 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - not a good idea to change the rhythm so suddenly.
01:31:385 (162,163,164,165,166,167) - A bit broken, you're focusing too much on the melody.
[Muzukashii]
You barely used 1/2s in the lower diff (futsuu), so why 1/4s already ?
Your gimmick starting here 01:02:137 - fails a bit at the end, you go from 120 to 110 in scrolling speed, try ending at 100 before it speeds up.
00:59:737 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Calm down that part a little bit, you're making the same paradox as in Kantan.
Your kiai focuses too much on the melody, which makes it sound a bit broken at parts, like here: 01:48:935 (321,322) - or this 01:52:985 (337,338,339,340,341) -
[Oni]
00:06:637 (12,13,14) - what, you never mapped that way on the other diffs, why change ? you don't even hear anything clear enough to have this mapped
00:09:187 (20) - ^
00:11:587 (27,28,29) - overmapping, the beginning of the excitation in the song is at 29, not before. there's indeed a sound but that's insignificant.
00:52:837 - I have the feeling that if you add a don here, it will sound less broken.
01:24:185 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417) - I don't see why you put kats there, there's no other sound than a kick.
01:37:535 - no matter which way you mapped this kiai, you totally missed a note here.
01:38:735 - ^
01:39:935 - ^
01:42:335 - ^
01:45:485 - add a note here, so you would have a nice transition to the next part of the kiai.
Some strange stuff happen in the kiai in this diff too, make sure notes are coherent between themselves rather than making standalone parts, that's the key of flow.
you will need more mods in order to get that ranked, best of luck to you, don't give up (welp knowing my ranking speed you won't at all else i hit you).