Amuro vs Killer - Mei [Taiko] · forum

Dainesl

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-09-17T19:36:11+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 August 2017 at 19:08:08

Artist: Amuro vs Killer
Title: Mei
Source: beatmania IIDX 12 HAPPY SKY
Tags: cheesiest 2DX 12th style human sequencer tatsh dj taka
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3226kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:

cheesiest's Inner Oni (5.12 stars, 799 notes)
Futsuu (2.04 stars, 260 notes)
Kantan (1.34 stars, 147 notes)
Muzukashii (3.26 stars, 488 notes)
Oni (4.14 stars, 666 notes)

Download: Amuro vs Killer - Mei
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WE'RE BACK BOYS!!!

Revived 5th August 2017, let's see what I can do with this.

I've changed 4 major parts of this map:

1. changed SV and OD/HP settings.
2. changed source to the specific game (even though the official website below says IIDX12 I'm writing it as IIDX 12 is that ok?)
3. remapped diffs to be way more consistent and high quality than before (could still be bad w)
4. altered some timing points in terms of volume and barlines

http://www.konami.jp/am/bm2dx/bm2dx12/

Last edited by Dainesl 2017-08-06T18:08:22+00:00, edited 86 times in total.

Tuxxy_old

204 posts

Joined May 2013

Tuxxy_old 2013-10-01T21:06:08+00:00

Timing sections seem absolutely fine.
Not much to say about the map itself, although it could do with a bit of lightening up, similair to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14243 but more simple \^o^/
So as you don't get lost whilst editing, it could be a good idea to split the notes into sections. I don't see this in many taiko maps, but it could be useful

xWillx

66 posts

Joined February 2011

xWillx 2013-10-05T16:16:15+00:00

General:
- Inconsistency with Song Setup Options (All diffs have wide screen support checked while Kantan does not)

Kantan
00:12:637 (9) - k (to accompany the clap sound in the background
00:15:037 (11) - ^
00:15:937 (12) - d (flows better)
00:17:437 (13) - k (to accompany the clap sound in the background
00:29:737 (28,29) - k k (you used d d k on the previous parts e.g. 00:23:767) so i think you should follow the pattern)
00:30:937 (31) - d
00:34:537 (34) - blue, wut? (change to d!)
00:38:167 (38) ^
00:57:337 (65) change to k
01:21:589 (11,13) - change to blye (consistent big reds seems boring)
01:38:585 (41) - change to d
01:39:785 (42) - k maybe (the pitch falls at 1:40:985)
01:43:385 (47,48) - k (pitch goes higher)
01:44:585 (49) - d
01:45:185 (51) - red, wut? (pitch clearly goes higher) -change to k
02:03:383 (70) - change to d (pitch falls and increases at the last spinner)

Futsuu
00:03:037 (3) - change to k (sounds better)
00:14:587 (15) - change to d (fit other patterns, i don't think dkd fits here)
00:15:037 (16) - change to k ^
00:16:987 (18) - change to k
00:45:337 (62) - change to k
00:51:337 (70) - change to k
01:22:255 (101,102) - change to k (add variation, all dons are boring)

Muzukashii
00:03:487 (4) - change to k (Same as the other patterns)
00:17:887 (29) - ^
00:24:937 (44) - ^
00:25:837 (46) - change to d
00:34:537 (69) - change to k (to match the echo sound)
01:09:337 (149, 151) - change to K to match the claps
01:28:685 - change to k
01:39:785 (231) - change to d
01:40:385 (235) - change to k

Might mod Oni and Inner oni if i don't get lazy.

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-10-05T16:44:38+00:00

Yay, a mod!

xWillx wrote:
General:
- Inconsistency with Song Setup Options (All diffs have wide screen support checked while Kantan does not) Okay, fixed

Kantan
00:12:637 (9) - k (to accompany the clap sound in the background Ok
00:15:037 (11) - ^ Ok
00:15:937 (12) - d (flows better) Ok
00:17:437 (13) - k (to accompany the clap sound in the background ok
00:29:737 (28,29) - k k (you used d d k on the previous parts e.g. 00:23:767) so i think you should follow the pattern) No, because I want to keep the consistency with the music.
00:30:937 (31) - d Same reason as before
00:34:537 (34) - blue, wut? (change to d!) Ok
00:38:167 (38) ^ Ok
00:57:337 (65) change to k Ok
01:21:589 (11,13) - change to blye (consistent big reds seems boring) I decided to change 01:21:589 (11,12) - instead. (blye, lel)
01:38:585 (41) - change to d Ok
01:39:785 (42) - k maybe (the pitch falls at 1:40:985) Ok
01:43:385 (47,48) - k (pitch goes higher) Changed that and the note after
01:44:585 (49) - d No, the pitch is still high
01:45:185 (51) - red, wut? (pitch clearly goes higher) -change to k Ok
02:03:383 (70) - change to d (pitch falls and increases at the last spinner) Ok

Futsuu
00:03:037 (3) - change to k (sounds better) Ok
00:14:587 (15) - change to d (fit other patterns, i don't think dkd fits here) I think it fits quite well
00:15:037 (16) - change to k ^ Ok
00:16:987 (18) - change to k Ok
00:45:337 (62) - change to k 00:45:337 (62,63) - Changed both of these to k
00:51:337 (70) - change to k Ok
01:22:255 (101,102) - change to k (add variation, all dons are boring) Changed this and the note before it to k

Muzukashii
00:03:487 (4) - change to k (Same as the other patterns) Ok
00:17:887 (29) - ^ Ok
00:24:937 (44) - ^ Ok
00:25:837 (46) - change to d Nah, I think k fits better here.
00:34:537 (69) - change to k (to match the echo sound) Ok
01:09:337 (149, 151) - change to K to match the claps Changed this and 01:11:518 (151) -
01:28:685 - change to k Ok
01:39:785 (231) - change to d No, because there's a high-pitched sound there.
01:40:385 (235) - change to k Ok

Might mod Oni and Inner oni if i don't get lazy.

Thanks for the mod

Krah

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1,023 posts

Joined March 2012

Krah 2013-10-05T20:38:59+00:00

Combo breaker of Uk's posts '-'

Mod by request.

[General]

- The spread is probably not really good. Specially between the muzu and the oni.
In the muzu you have only 1/2 and no 1/4 triplets but in the oni you have a lot of bicolor 1/4.
You probably need to add a few number of easy triplets in your muzu.
- You can remove all the tags beause it's already source / creator / title. Just keep cheesiest.

[Kantan]

- 00:36:337 (36) - k ?
- 01:26:585 (20) - d
- 01:35:885 (38) - k ? This note is more like 39.

[Futsuu]

- 00:18:937 - Add a k
- 00:28:537 (33) - - k
- 00:30:937 (36) - ^
- 00:35:737 (45) - ^
- 01:06:937 - Add a d.
- 01:46:985 (153) - k

[Muzukashii]

- 00:04:537 (5,6,7) - This pattern is really strange and doesn't fit the rythm of the song.
- 00:10:237 (14) - k
- 00:31:837 - Add a d
- 00:33:037 - ^
- 00:49:837 (116) - k ?
- 00:54:937 (129) - ^

[Oni]

- 00:10:687 (29) - k
- 00:42:187 - Add a d ?
- 00:45:562 - Add a k
- 01:20:707 (419,420,421,422,423) - Serioulsy all the previous part is fuching good but this one break all :s Consider to adding some notes in this combo ?

And I can't mod the inner, serioulsy it's impossible for me xD

Good map =)
Take my star

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-10-05T21:23:15+00:00

Another mod!

Krah wrote:
Combo breaker of Uk's posts '-' how dare you

Mod by request.

[General]

- The spread is probably not really good. Specially between the muzu and the oni.
In the muzu you have only 1/2 and no 1/4 triplets but in the oni you have a lot of bicolor 1/4.
You probably need to add a few number of easy triplets in your muzu. Alright.
- You can remove all the tags beause it's already source / creator / title. Just keep cheesiest. Sure

[Kantan]

- 00:36:337 (36) - k ? Ok
- 01:26:585 (20) - d This is already a d
- 01:35:885 (38) - k ? This note is more like 39. Decided to make 01:35:885 (38,39) - k and d respectively.

[Futsuu]

- 00:18:937 - Add a k made that a d, made 00:19:387 (21,22) - k
- 00:28:537 (33) - - k Sure
- 00:30:937 (36) - ^ I think d fits better 'cause of the sound
- 00:35:737 (45) - ^ Sure
- 01:06:937 - Add a d. Ok
- 01:46:985 (153) - k The decrease in pitch implies a d

[Muzukashii]

- 00:04:537 (5,6,7) - This pattern is really strange and doesn't fit the rythm of the song. Removed 6
- 00:10:237 (14) - k Ok
- 00:31:837 - Add a d Sure
- 00:33:037 - ^ ^
- 00:49:837 (116) - k ? I made the note before it a k.
- 00:54:937 (129) - ^ Sure

Also added some 1/4 triplets and other notes. Other changes were made to increase difficulty but I don't wanna list them all here.
[Oni]

- 00:10:687 (29) - k Alright
- 00:42:187 - Add a d ? ok
- 00:45:562 - Add a k I don't think it'd fit very well.
- 01:20:707 (419,420,421,422,423) - Serioulsy all the previous part is fuching good but this one break all :s Consider to adding some notes in this combo ? The music doesn't call for more notes here, so no.

And I can't mod the inner, serioulsy it's impossible for me xD

Good map =)
Take my star Thanks a lot

Alumetorz

408 posts

Joined October 2011

Alumetorz 2013-10-06T20:45:09+00:00

[Futsuu]

01:55:385 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - these 1/1s might be a bit too much, how about something like >this<
02:02:883 - I'd just say map this note, but you probably have a reasong to not?

[Muzu]

00:47:737 (120) - kat because of high pitch?
01:33:785 (238,247) - You could somehow try to switch these two notes, so you got kat on first big white tick and don on second one for better pitch mapping, just like how you did at 01:38:585 (257,267). (yes this is kinda nazi, but I suck)
01:55:985 (332,333,334,335,336,337,338) - here like in futsuu, I think it's a bit too much compared to the calm part, try removing some notes...

[Oni]

00:38:887 - Add don?
00:39:337 (188) - finish plox
00:43:687 (216,217,218,219,220,221) - place some kats for variation? 00:44:137 (219,220) - these two for example
00:48:037 (248,249,250,251) - Maybe try mapping to the blue ticks? It's an oni after all, I think it'd be okay...
00:55:687 (291) - How about donning this, so 00:55:537 (290,292) - these two are more emphasized to music?
00:56:287 (294) - ^
00:56:737 (297) - kat, because pitch?
01:06:937 (345) - maybe move note to 01:06:787?
01:25:685 (450,451,452,453) - Better remove these notes. I think there's a higher tension without them. Also it's very overmapped xP
01:48:785 (593) - kat, because pitch
01:55:385 (621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639) - Just like low diffs, try to lower the note density for at least a little bit.

[Inner]

00:44:737 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - try ddkkddkkd, because the pitch is changing and there would be some variation
01:25:460 (543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - pls, just remove these. v_v It's overmapped and wtf
01:28:985 (576) - don cause pitch?
01:36:185 (639) - ^
01:33:485 (605,606,607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - Try remapping this stream. It doesn't follow the music properly. Think of something better

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-10-06T21:02:31+00:00

Alumetorz wrote:
[Futsuu]
01:55:385 (171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - these 1/1s might be a bit too much, how about something like >this< Changed to this
02:02:883 - I'd just say map this note, but you probably have a reasong to not? I didn't feel it had enough emphasis compared to other notes.

[Muzu]
00:47:737 (120) - kat because of high pitch? Ok
01:33:785 (238,247) - You could somehow try to switch these two notes, so you got kat on first big white tick and don on second one for better pitch mapping, just like how you did at 01:38:585 (257,267). (yes this is kinda nazi, but I suck) Sure
01:55:985 (332,333,334,335,336,337,338) - here like in futsuu, I think it's a bit too much compared to the calm part, try removing some notes...changed tothis
[Oni]
00:38:887 - Add don? It doesn't really fit, i think
00:39:337 (188) - finish plox Ok
00:43:687 (216,217,218,219,220,221) - place some kats for variation? 00:44:137 (219,220) - these two for example I made 216 and 217 kats
00:48:037 (248,249,250,251) - Maybe try mapping to the blue ticks? It's an oni after all, I think it'd be okay... Okay, I made the notes between those like this
00:55:687 (291) - How about donning this, so 00:55:537 (290,292) - these two are more emphasized to music? Ok
00:56:287 (294) - ^ Ok
00:56:737 (297) - kat, because pitch? But the music isn't emphasized enough here
01:06:937 (345) - maybe move note to 01:06:787? Ok
01:25:685 (450,451,452,453) - Better remove these notes. I think there's a higher tension without them. Also it's very overmapped xP I removed those~
01:48:785 (593) - kat, because pitch I made 01:48:485 - be a kat instead.
01:55:385 (621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639) - Just like low diffs, try to lower the note density for at least a little bit. I made it look likethis
[Inner]
00:44:737 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - try ddkkddkkd, because the pitch is changing and there would be some variation
01:25:460 (543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,555,556,557) - pls, just remove these. v_v It's overmapped and wtf
01:28:985 (576) - don cause pitch?
01:36:185 (639) - ^
01:33:485 (605,606,607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635) - Try remapping this stream. It doesn't follow the music properly. Think of something better

Cheesiest will need to do the response to the Inner Oni 'cause it's his diff.

Thanks for the mod

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2013-10-06T23:16:54+00:00

Alumetorz wrote:
mod

yes to all
http://puu.sh/4Jw4j.rar

whosthebox

145 posts

Joined March 2012

whosthebox 2013-10-23T23:09:14+00:00

Modding as requested ^w^

Kantan

This is okey for me >:D

Futsuu

00:19:387 (22,23) - k K sounds better
00:30:937 (38) - k sounds better
00:33:337 (43) - ^
00:39:337 (53) - finish
00:40:537 (56) - k?
00:44:737 (65) - k and add a d 00:45:037 - there, it sounds better
00:45:937 - add a d?
00:49:837 - add a k here, there is a clear beat here
00:59:437 - ^
00:59:737 (92) - finish
01:28:085 - add a d?
01:28:685 add a k?
01:31:985 (140) - k sounds better
01:35:885 - add a k here, there is a clear beat here
01:40:685 (158,159) - k d maybe?
01:43:685 (165) - k?
02:05:458 (1) - change this spinner to a k

Muzukashii

between 00:21:337 and 00:39:337 - there are a lot of empty spaces that have beats that can, and some must be filled with notes, try making the rhythm in this part more consistent, instead of remarking some specific parts

00:05:737 - remove this d and add a k 00:05:437 - here and another k 00:06:037 - here
00:21:337 (33) - finish
00:30:787 (63) - k
00:45:637 (113) - remove this one, too many notes in a row
01:02:137 (169) - k
01:37:835 - d
01:38:435 (285) - k
01:38:585 (286) - d
01:45:485 (316) - remove this one, a break here goes good, and this is not obligatory in muzu
01:48:185 (329,330,331,332,333,334,335) - change this to k d d k d d k, sounds better, and add a k 01:49:085 - here, sounds better too
01:50:435 - d
02:02:338 (376) - k
02:05:458 (1) - again the spinner, replace it with a k

I'll mod oni and inner oni later ;w; i see if i can finish them today, i have to do something

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-10-24T18:44:57+00:00

whosthebox wrote:
Modding as requested ^w^

Kantan

This is okey for me >:D wheeee ;w;

Futsuu

00:19:387 (22,23) - k K sounds better okay
00:30:937 (38) - k sounds better
00:33:337 (43) - ^ yes to both
00:39:337 (53) - finish okay
00:40:537 (56) - k? changed this and the note after
00:44:737 (65) - k and add a d 00:45:037 - there, it sounds better added the circle, didn't change the note behind it to a k, so it's a kkddddk pattern
00:45:937 - add a d? ok
00:49:837 - add a k here, there is a clear beat here I added a d instead but made the previous note a k
00:59:437 - ^ ok
00:59:737 (92) - finish ok
01:28:085 - add a d? ok i guess
01:28:685 add a k? no because the pattern would be too long, this is a Futsuu.
01:31:985 (140) - k sounds better ok
01:35:885 - add a k here, there is a clear beat here ok
01:40:685 (158,159) - k d maybe? okay
01:43:685 (165) - k? okay, also changed note after it to k
02:05:458 (1) - change this spinner to a k nah, I want to emphasise the slow fading out of the song. Besides, it'd look awkward having a longer Kantan than Futsuu ;w;

Muzukashii

between 00:21:337 and 00:39:337 - there are a lot of empty spaces that have beats that can, and some must be filled with notes, try making the rhythm in this part more consistent, instead of remarking some specific parts Filled in most of the big gaps

00:05:737 - remove this d and add a k 00:05:437 - here and another k 00:06:037 - here Didn't remove the d, but added a k at 5,437ms
00:21:337 (33) - finish ok
00:30:787 (63) - k doesn't really fit imo...
00:45:637 (113) - remove this one, too many notes in a row ok
01:02:137 (169) - k ok
01:37:835 - d alright i guess
01:38:435 (285) - k ok
01:38:585 (286) - d ok
01:45:485 (316) - remove this one, a break here goes good, and this is not obligatory in muzu Okay, since it's the Kiai Time it would probably fit.
01:48:185 (329,330,331,332,333,334,335) - change this to k d d k d d k, sounds better, and add a k 01:49:085 - here, sounds better too I made it k d d d k d. I don't think the extra note fits particularly well in a Muzu...
01:50:435 - d sure
02:02:338 (376) - k ok
02:05:458 (1) - again the spinner, replace it with a k see last suggestion on Futsuu diff.

I'll mod oni and inner oni later ;w; i see if i can finish them today, i have to do something

Thank you ;w; if you're gonna mod the Oni+Inner, I can't KD both posts ;w;

whosthebox

145 posts

Joined March 2012

whosthebox 2013-10-26T21:08:50+00:00

finishing my mod

sorry for taking so long TT^TT

Oni

00:11:437 - add a k, there is a clear beat here
between 00:12:637 and 00:13:837 - try adding one note to create another triplet, there are too many 1/2 beats
00:14:887 (52,53,54) - ddk sounds better
00:17:287 - add a d and make 00:17:437 (67) - this one a k, it sounds better
00:19:687 - add a d here
well, until 00:39:937 - there are a lot of empty spaces, and some parts have a lot of 1/2 beats without any 1/4 stream, pretty similar to things i already pointed before, try filling them and adding some more streams, oni is supposed to be harder.

00:49:837 (264) - this sounds a lot better as a k
00:49:987 - there is a clear beat here, fill it with a d
00:52:387 - ^
01:06:937 - d?
01:20:883 (424,425) - finish
add a triplet 01:40:235 - here, i suggest making 01:40:385 (548) - a k, a ddk triplet sounds great here
fill the space between 01:42:185 and 01:42:485 -
add a note 01:49:085 here and 01:49:235 - here

cheesiest's Inner Oni

i really like this one

i couldn't find many things to change

00:19:837 (67,69,71) - these finishers don't fit here, the sound is fading here, and there's no need to remark the sound
00:55:537 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - change the last k of every triplet to a d
00:59:587 (397,398) - change this to k D
01:34:985 - add a note there
01:37:085 (619,620) - make this two d k, and the same 01:38:285 (626,627) - here and 01:39:485 (633,634) - here
01:40:985 (642) - d
01:45:785 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684) - add a d in the last note of each stream
01:49:235 - add a d here

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-10-26T21:23:08+00:00

whosthebox wrote:
finishing my mod sorry for taking so long TT^TT no problem

Oni

00:11:437 - add a k, there is a clear beat here It'd be inconsistent having all the other patterns being 1 1/2 beats apart entirely, then this being 1 1/2 and then 1
between 00:12:637 and 00:13:837 - try adding one note to create another triplet, there are too many 1/2 beats ok
00:14:887 (52,53,54) - ddk sounds better okay
00:17:287 - add a d and make 00:17:437 (67) - this one a k, it sounds better ok
00:19:687 - add a d here sure
well, until 00:39:937 - there are a lot of empty spaces, and some parts have a lot of 1/2 beats without any 1/4 stream, pretty similar to things i already pointed before, try filling them and adding some more streams, oni is supposed to be harder. This is gonna be a long(er) explanation, okay? From 00:19:837 - until 00:21:337 - there is barely any sound to work with. From then on I filled in a few empty spaces and added a few more triplets.

00:49:837 (264) - this sounds a lot better as a k okay
00:49:987 - there is a clear beat here, fill it with a d ok
00:52:387 - ^ okay, but i made the note before it a k
01:06:937 - d? sure
01:20:883 (424,425) - finish ok
add a triplet 01:40:235 - here, i suggest making 01:40:385 (548) - a k, a ddk triplet sounds great here woooo yes
fill the space between 01:42:185 and 01:42:485 - i did this
add a note 01:49: 085 here and 01:49:235 - here only added note at 1:49:085

cheesiest's Inner Oni

i really like this one i couldn't find many things to change

00:19:837 (67,69,71) - these finishers don't fit here, the sound is fading here, and there's no need to remark the sound
00:55:537 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - change the last k of every triplet to a d
00:59:587 (397,398) - change this to k D
01:34:985 - add a note there
01:37:085 (619,620) - make this two d k, and the same 01:38:285 (626,627) - here and 01:39:485 (633,634) - here
01:40:985 (642) - d
01:45:785 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684) - add a d in the last note of each stream
01:49:235 - add a d here

Thanks again!

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2013-10-26T22:04:34+00:00

whosthebox wrote:
cheesiest's Inner Oni

i really like this one i couldn't find many things to change

00:19:837 (67,69,71) - these finishers don't fit here, the sound is fading here, and there's no need to remark the sound !!yes
00:55:537 (360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371) - change the last k of every triplet to a d kk i suppose so
00:59:587 (397,398) - change this to k D good idea
01:34:985 - add a note there nah i don't feel it fits ): sorry
01:37:085 (619,620) - make this two d k, and the same 01:38:285 (626,627) - here and 01:39:485 (633,634) - here i feel that d fits better
01:40:985 (642) - d k fits better, imo
01:45:785 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684) - add a d in the last note of each stream nah, i feel that's kinda over mapping and it's obvious that it's phrased as 5 1/4ths
01:49:235 - add a d here ok :3

http://puu.sh/50mgz.rar

Yuzeyun

7,622 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2013-11-11T16:17:50+00:00

lulz 2 free kd
dropping the mod before as the mapper hasn't answered yet so here we go.

[Kantan]
For some reason, the difficulty isn't constant from the beginning to the end. I noticed the end (after the 100 to 200 bpm acceleration) was a bit harder than the whole beginning.
00:14:137 - Add a don here, I have felt something went missing. It would also be consistent with 00:11:737 (9,10) - , since that's quite the same stuff all over again
00:16:537 - ^
00:18:337 - As it's within the exact same "pattern" in the music, why not add a don like in here : 00:11:737 (9,10,11) - ? It would feel less empty as well as ^.

00:28:537 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - This pattern sounds quite odd, to be honest.
00:35:737 (36,37,38) - Here, invert 36 and 37. These two kats - 00:30:937 (32,39) - are both located to a bar line, but not 36.
00:33:337 (34) - You may apply a k here, but this is only an option.
00:39:337 (40) - Big don here. You only have a crash so...
00:40:537 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - I think you would better make the whole part equally as dense, either piano-based or drum-based the density of each instrument stay constant.
00:54:937 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - Somewhat odd-sounding in terms of how you made it, I'd rather put 68 out (would make people have more time to understand how to hit that big note, I mean 600 ms.
00:59:737 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - This part; although only dons, should be toned down a bit. You made a sort of paradox as the acceleration is less dense at the beginning.

The whole kiai is, as I said, has a lot more denser patterns than the rest. For instance, that one. 01:26:585 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - It contains about 2/15 of the notes of the whole chart, condensed in 1/20 of the song. You might want to equalize more this, instead.

If you say this is long... well fml

wait for the rest

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-11-12T19:37:11+00:00

Agh I'm late i'm late aghhhhhhh

very impatient, many anger thanks for finally doing this <3

_Gezo_ wrote:
lulz 2 free kd nope as I can't KD all five posts :3
dropping the mod before as the mapper hasn't answered yet so here we go.

[Kantan]
For some reason, the difficulty isn't constant from the beginning to the end. I noticed the end (after the 100 to 200 bpm acceleration) was a bit harder than the whole beginning. Does that mean I'd have to remap stuff? idk.
00:14:137 - Add a don here, I have felt something went missing. It would also be consistent with 00:11:737 (9,10) - , since that's quite the same stuff all over again Alright
00:16:537 - ^ ^
00:18:337 - As it's within the exact same "pattern" in the music, why not add a don like in here : 00:11:737 (9,10,11) - ? It would feel less empty as well as ^.

00:28:537 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - This pattern sounds quite odd, to be honest. I did this
00:35:737 (36,37,38) - Here, invert 36 and 37. These two kats - 00:30:937 (32,39) - are both located to a bar line, but not 36. Okay
00:33:337 (34) - You may apply a k here, but this is only an option. Applied.
00:39:337 (40) - Big don here. You only have a crash so... ...yea. Applied.
00:40:537 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - I think you would better make the whole part equally as dense, either piano-based or drum-based the density of each instrument stay constant. I based it on the piano.
00:54:937 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - Somewhat odd-sounding in terms of how you made it, I'd rather put 68 out (would make people have more time to understand how to hit that big note, I mean 600 ms. ye probably a bad idea on my part.
00:59:737 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - This part; although only dons, should be toned down a bit. You made a sort of paradox as the acceleration is less dense at the beginning. Yeah, that was also a bad idea...

The whole kiai is, as I said, has a lot more denser patterns than the rest. For instance, that one. 01:26:585 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118) - It contains about 2/15 of the notes of the whole chart, condensed in 1/20 of the song. You might want to equalize more this, instead. Well I got rid of some notes, but seriously, it's the Kiai Time. I can only do so much to balance it while keeping it emphasized...

If you say this is long... well fml

wait for the rest

i say bring it :3

also thank you

Yuzeyun

7,622 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2013-11-17T16:57:31+00:00

[cheesiest]

00:12:187 (4) - this should be a regular kat, listen to the song.
00:12:637 (6) - put a kat, there is a sequence of 4 instead of three where you mapped the 3 kats after that note. the first of the sequence is on this note.
(wip)
00:14:587 (23) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:15:187 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - These streams are a bit long, put that length for more intense parts.
00:16:987 (46) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:19:387 (65) - ^
00:17:437 (48,49,50,51,52) - If anything, make it similar to 00:12:637 (6,7,8,9,10) - !
00:21:187 (73) - Delete, the reversed crash stops right there: 00:21:037 (72) -
00:21:637 (76) - Honestly, this don sounds awkward. Change it to kat ?
00:32:137 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - You could've done the stream a bit more complicated

00:33:637 (173) - Same as 00:21:637 (76) -

00:34:537 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - , 00:36:037 (193) - repeat the two above
00:36:937 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - , 00:38:437 (213) - ^
00:43:837 (258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - Even though that stream is justifiable, make it worth the difficulty ? As in, putting more color switches.
00:45:487 (279,280,281) - I think you can add in more 1/2 notes in there, it would feel less empty.
00:49:537 (316,317) - Cutting the stream at this point makes it sound odd.
00:54:937 (358,359) - Add in more notes, it's empty now, you break errythin'
00:55:387 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398) - For some reason it plays weird. I think some parts can be reworked such as 00:56:737 (372,373,374,375,376,377,378) - , which is followed by 00:57:337 (379,380,381,382,383,384) -
01:28:985 (561,562) - Empty noting.
01:36:185 (614,615) - ^
01:38:435 (627,628) - Add a note and make it kdk instead ! It should play nicely and go along the song.
01:39:635 (634,635) - ^
01:44:885 (673,674,675) - Even though you are mapping to the melody, that sounds awkward as it is. Actually, the whole kiai is awkward to play as you've mapped to the melody and leaving out the whole drumming.

^ Will only apply once Dain wins the battle against BSS. *Gezo kept praying*

[Futsuu]

The end is quite arg to play as every note overlap the rest. The only recommendation is to exceptionally put SV changes so very few overlaps happen.
00:03:487 - Since you've mapped all the same occurrences of that drumming d k k k, you may want to add one kat there
00:09:787 (11) - the same sound is heard at 00:10:237 (12) -, so maybe kat on 11 or don on 12-13
00:11:737 (14) - the music starts to become more agitated here, we don't feel it ! maybe add more agitation there, as in more 1/1 notes. that's only an idea, up to you to change it or not.
00:19:837 (28) - even though that's what I call a "closing note", this is not really one here as the sound continues until the next note. maybe small kat instead ?
00:21:337 (29) - and the big note is better here imo. you hear a (ear-breaking) crash there, so...
00:40:537 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - a little bit awkward to play and I don't get what you're mapping to, especially 69-75. is it the melody or the drumming ?
00:58:537 (101,102,103,104,105) - maybe cut that on 104 so no overlap would show ? that's 300ms between 104 and 105 here, and these 300ms may confuse the player as the scrolling speed gets halved. another solution is to include a 2.00x timing section only on the 105, and put that to 1.0x before the first actual note of the 100 bpm section. illustration:
http://puu.sh/5l6Dj.png timeline
http://puu.sh/5l6E5.png timing

01:04:537 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - not a good idea to change the rhythm so suddenly.
01:31:385 (162,163,164,165,166,167) - A bit broken, you're focusing too much on the melody.

[Muzukashii]
You barely used 1/2s in the lower diff (futsuu), so why 1/4s already ?
Your gimmick starting here 01:02:137 - fails a bit at the end, you go from 120 to 110 in scrolling speed, try ending at 100 before it speeds up.

00:59:737 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Calm down that part a little bit, you're making the same paradox as in Kantan.

Your kiai focuses too much on the melody, which makes it sound a bit broken at parts, like here: 01:48:935 (321,322) - or this 01:52:985 (337,338,339,340,341) -

[Oni]
00:06:637 (12,13,14) - what, you never mapped that way on the other diffs, why change ? you don't even hear anything clear enough to have this mapped
00:09:187 (20) - ^
00:11:587 (27,28,29) - overmapping, the beginning of the excitation in the song is at 29, not before. there's indeed a sound but that's insignificant.
00:52:837 - I have the feeling that if you add a don here, it will sound less broken.
01:24:185 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417) - I don't see why you put kats there, there's no other sound than a kick.
01:37:535 - no matter which way you mapped this kiai, you totally missed a note here.
01:38:735 - ^
01:39:935 - ^
01:42:335 - ^
01:45:485 - add a note here, so you would have a nice transition to the next part of the kiai.

Some strange stuff happen in the kiai in this diff too, make sure notes are coherent between themselves rather than making standalone parts, that's the key of flow.

you will need more mods in order to get that ranked, best of luck to you, don't give up (welp knowing my ranking speed you won't at all else i hit you).

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-11-17T18:11:49+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
[Futsuu]

The end is quite arg to play as every note overlap the rest. The only recommendation is to exceptionally put SV changes so very few overlaps happen.
00:03:487 - Since you've mapped all the same occurrences of that drumming d k k k, you may want to add one kat there
00:09:787 (11) - the same sound is heard at 00:10:237 (12) -, so maybe kat on 11 or don on 12-13
00:11:737 (14) - the music starts to become more agitated here, we don't feel it ! maybe add more agitation there, as in more 1/1 notes. that's only an idea, up to you to change it or not.
00:19:837 (28) - even though that's what I call a "closing note", this is not really one here as the sound continues until the next note. maybe small kat instead ?
00:21:337 (29) - and the big note is better here imo. you hear a (ear-breaking) crash there, so...
00:40:537 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - a little bit awkward to play and I don't get what you're mapping to, especially 69-75. is it the melody or the drumming ?
00:58:537 (101,102,103,104,105) - maybe cut that on 104 so no overlap would show ? that's 300ms between 104 and 105 here, and these 300ms may confuse the player as the scrolling speed gets halved. another solution is to include a 2.00x timing section only on the 105, and put that to 1.0x before the first actual note of the 100 bpm section. illustration:
http://puu.sh/5l6Dj.png timeline
http://puu.sh/5l6E5.png timing

01:04:537 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - not a good idea to change the rhythm so suddenly.
01:31:385 (162,163,164,165,166,167) - A bit broken, you're focusing too much on the melody.

Changed all.

[Muzukashii]
You barely used 1/2s in the lower diff (futsuu), so why 1/4s already ? idk, someone said that I should put 1/4s in. Besides, it introduces the player to the Oni, which has a lot more of those.
Your gimmick starting here 01:02:137 - fails a bit at the end, you go from 120 to 110 in scrolling speed, try ending at 100 before it speeds up. Okay I did that.

00:59:737 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - Calm down that part a little bit, you're making the same paradox as in Kantan. Alright alright.

Your kiai focuses too much on the melody, which makes it sound a bit broken at parts, like here: 01:48:935 (321,322) - or this 01:52:985 (337,338,339,340,341) - changed it a bit.

[Oni]
00:06:637 (12,13,14) - what, you never mapped that way on the other diffs, why change ? you don't even hear anything clear enough to have this mapped
00:09:187 (20) - ^
00:11:587 (27,28,29) - overmapping, the beginning of the excitation in the song is at 29, not before. there's indeed a sound but that's insignificant.
00:52:837 - I have the feeling that if you add a don here, it will sound less broken.
01:24:185 (404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417) - I don't see why you put kats there, there's no other sound than a kick.
01:37:535 - no matter which way you mapped this kiai, you totally missed a note here.
01:38:735 - ^
01:39:935 - ^
01:42:335 - ^
01:45:485 - add a note here, so you would have a nice transition to the next part of the kiai.

Some strange stuff happen in the kiai in this diff too, make sure notes are coherent between themselves rather than making standalone parts, that's the key of flow.

changed all.

you will need more mods in order to get that ranked, best of luck to you, don't give up (welp knowing my ranking speed you won't at all else i hit you).

thanks for mod

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2013-11-20T18:48:00+00:00

mod

_Gezo_ wrote:
[cheesiest]

00:12:187 (4) - this should be a regular kat, listen to the song.
00:12:637 (6) - put a kat, there is a sequence of 4 instead of three where you mapped the 3 kats after that note. the first of the sequence is on this note.
(wip)
00:14:587 (23) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:15:187 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - These streams are a bit long, put that length for more intense parts.
00:16:987 (46) - Same as 00:12:187 (4)
00:19:387 (65) - ^
00:17:437 (48,49,50,51,52) - If anything, make it similar to 00:12:637 (6,7,8,9,10) - !
00:21:187 (73) - Delete, the reversed crash stops right there: 00:21:037 (72) -
00:21:637 (76) - Honestly, this don sounds awkward. Change it to kat ?
00:32:137 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168) - You could've done the stream a bit more complicated
00:33:637 (173) - Same as 00:21:637 (76) -

00:34:537 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188) - , 00:36:037 (193) - repeat the two above
00:36:937 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208) - , 00:38:437 (213) - ^
00:43:837 (258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278) - Even though that stream is justifiable, make it worth the difficulty ? As in, putting more color switches.
00:45:487 (279,280,281) - I think you can add in more 1/2 notes in there, it would feel less empty.
00:49:537 (316,317) - Cutting the stream at this point makes it sound odd.
00:54:937 (358,359) - Add in more notes, it's empty now, you break errythin'
00:55:387 (359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398) - For some reason it plays weird. I think some parts can be reworked such as 00:56:737 (372,373,374,375,376,377,378) - , which is followed by 00:57:337 (379,380,381,382,383,384) -
01:28:985 (561,562) - Empty noting.
01:36:185 (614,615) - ^
01:38:435 (627,628) - Add a note and make it kdk instead ! It should play nicely and go along the song.
01:39:635 (634,635) - ^
01:44:885 (673,674,675) - Even though you are mapping to the melody, that sounds awkward as it is. Actually, the whole kiai is awkward to play as you've mapped to the melody and leaving out the whole drumming.

^ Will only apply once Dain wins the battle against BSS. *Gezo kept praying*
Gezo's prayer was absorbed by the darkness.

yes to all except bolded. i added the note but i made dkd or i understood you wrong on that one idk; either one

Tuxxy_old

204 posts

Joined May 2013

Tuxxy_old 2013-12-01T09:04:46+00:00

Futsuu:
00:18:337 Kat
00:54:037 Don
01:07::537 Kat
01:24:785 Kat
01:47:585 Kat
01:56:585 Kat
01:58:985 Kat

Muzukashii
00:49:537
01:24:485 Kat here
01:25:085 Kat here
01:57:185 Kat here

Feel free to disagree with any of these points, plan to go on other diffs

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-12-01T21:41:35+00:00

Tuxxy wrote:
Futsuu:
00:18:337 Kat k
00:54:037 Don no
01:07:537 Kat 01:08:137 (127) - made this kat
01:24:785 Kat no
01:47:585 Kat 01:46:985 (209) - this instead.
01:56:585 Kat k
01:58:985 Kat k

Muzukashii
00:49:537 kat
01:24:485 Kat here
01:25:085 Kat here yes to both
01:57:185 Kat here k

Feel free to disagree with any of these points, plan to go on other diffs

will wait for that.

Tuxxy_old

204 posts

Joined May 2013

Tuxxy_old 2013-12-13T20:15:03+00:00

Oni:
00:14:768 kat
00:20:737 kat
00:30:337 kat
01:42:035 kat

not much to say on inner...

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2013-12-13T20:52:24+00:00

Tuxxy wrote:
Oni:
00:14:768 kat nah, don't want the section to be too intense
00:20:737 kat ok
00:30:337 kat ok
01:42:035 kat wouldn't really fit imo

not much to say on inner...

again thanks i guess

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-02-16T04:11:06+00:00

From Zenx' Mod Queue

buuuuuuuu I'm not bakaa ;w;

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problemssuoooo

BPM

Nuo Problemsss

Inner Oni

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:19:687 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Invert Colors (d > k, k > d) | The clap sound in the music falls on the red line, so i suggest to invert them

Minor Suggestion: ( Change if you want )
00:22:837 (81) - d > k | You used k to emphasize the snares, so i suggest to change this to kat
00:24:037 (92) - ^
00:25:237 (100) - ^
... and all the notes that come with a snare

00:28:612 (127) - Remove | I suggest to separate the stream here since a new rhythm starts
00:58:237 (385,389) - d > k | I suggest to have a repeating kat rhythm pattern here since the piano repeats itself

No other problems, very smooth kat rhythm and good spread of kats

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Oni

Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:33:337 (143,144) - d > k | I think you started the kat rhythm a bit too late here, it sounds delayed and the kat rhythm seems to be lost
00:34:837 - Same here, I suggest to add some kats around here to balance out the kat rhythm
01:48:485 - ^

No other problems, good emphasis with kats and good rhythms but you need to balance out the kat density for the sections that are similar or else they feel lacking in kats

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

[Muzu]

00:49:837 (127,128) - Change to Dk OR dK or DK since the music emphasizes
01:31:085 (241) - d > k | There is a lack of kats in this portion here, i suggest to balance it out by adding one kat here
01:55:385 (337) - d > K | Since the music used a cymbal I suggest a big kat here
02:03:883 (355,356) - k > d | Since the pitch rises and 357 & 358 are higher pitched than 355 and 356, I suggest to have 355 and 356 to be dons

[Futsuu]

01:55:385 (229) - d > k | Same reason as Muzu

Lazy to mod kantan cause cause cause err things.

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2014-02-16T12:12:51+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
From Zenx' Mod Queue

buuuuuuuu I'm not bakaa ;w;

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problemssuoooo

BPM

Nuo Problemsss

cheesiest get on this thing down here
Inner Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:19:687 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Invert Colors (d > k, k > d) | The clap sound in the music falls on the red line, so i suggest to invert them

Minor Suggestion: ( Change if you want )
00:22:837 (81) - d > k | You used k to emphasize the snares, so i suggest to change this to kat
00:24:037 (92) - ^
00:25:237 (100) - ^
... and all the notes that come with a snare

00:28:612 (127) - Remove | I suggest to separate the stream here since a new rhythm starts
00:58:237 (385,389) - d > k | I suggest to have a repeating kat rhythm pattern here since the piano repeats itself

No other problems, very smooth kat rhythm and good spread of kats

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:33:337 (143,144) - d > k | I think you started the kat rhythm a bit too late here, it sounds delayed and the kat rhythm seems to be lost Changed!
00:34:837 - Same here, I suggest to add some kats around here to balance out the kat rhythm Okay, I added two (might add more later but not sure yet)
01:48:485 - ^ Changed some notes to kats too

No other problems, good emphasis with kats and good rhythms but you need to balance out the kat density for the sections that are similar or else they feel lacking in kats

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

[Muzu]

00:49:837 (127,128) - Change to Dk OR dK or DK since the music emphasizes Changed to dK
01:31:085 (241) - d > k | There is a lack of kats in this portion here, i suggest to balance it out by adding one kat here Changed to kat
01:55:385 (337) - d > K | Since the music used a cymbal I suggest a big kat here Changed to kat, but I didn't make it big as I thought the cymbal was a bit soft for that ;;
02:03:883 (355,356) - k > d | Since the pitch rises and 357 & 358 are higher pitched than 355 and 356, I suggest to have 355 and 356 to be dons Changed that as well!

[Futsuu]

01:55:385 (229) - d > k | Same reason as Muzu changed to kat but didn't make it big (which by the way you forgot to show; you put k instead of K for this; how come?)

Lazy to mod kantan cause cause cause err things.

Thanks for the mod!

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-02-20T20:45:46+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Inner Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:19:687 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - Invert Colors (d > k, k > d) | The clap sound in the music falls on the red line, so i suggest to invert them !!!!!!!ok yes i changed

Minor Suggestion: ( Change if you want ) no to all. i feel they sound better the way they are!
00:22:837 (81) - d > k | You used k to emphasize the snares, so i suggest to change this to kat
00:24:037 (92) - ^
00:25:237 (100) - ^
... and all the notes that come with a snare

00:28:612 (127) - Remove | I suggest to separate the stream here since a new rhythm starts
00:58:237 (385,389) - d > k | I suggest to have a repeating kat rhythm pattern here since the piano repeats itself
yes^^^^^^ both of them

No other problems, very smooth kat rhythm and good spread of kats

diff

Jinyan

267 posts

Joined January 2011

Jinyan 2014-04-16T14:06:16+00:00

Here my mod for the M4M, sorry for the delay dainesl =s

as i've never did a mod for taiko, i did my best ^^'

Adivise
Change

cheesiest's Inner Oni

00:20:137 - 00:20:587 - 00:21:037 - why not adding a timeline for these three point and decrase the volume like you did for 00:32:137 -

00:24:037 (92) - add k there cause it's fits more with the beat and change the k to a d for 00:24:337 (95) -

00:41:212 (233,238,243) - Why don't you change this with a d as the intensity of the sound is a little lower than before/after

00:46:687 (283) - ^

00:52:687 (338) - ^

00:54:187 (349,355) - you can add here a k as the sound is like for 00:54:337 (351,357) -

00:56:737 (371) - The sound here is clearly in need for a k

01:13:748 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472) - I don't understand why you changed here when it's the same part for 01:09:609 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450) -

01:15:578 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483) - ^

01:18:078 (493,494,495,496) - 01:19:615 (503,504,505,506) - I think you should make it here like 01:18:865 (498,499,500,501) - it fits better, even if it's repetitive

01:27:710 (551) - change to d because of the low intensity?

01:29:510 (563) - ^

01:33:785 (591) - add k here

01:36:635 (618,619,620) - why not making a 1/6 here? it fits, and it make the diff a little funier

01:36:935 (621,629,637) - 01:36:935 (621,629,637) -

01:37:235 (623,631,639) - k

01:45:935 (685,690,695) - d

well, i'll be honest, i think you should check again your diff, Because where you should clearly put a d you put a k and inverse, I personally couldn't know exactly what you wanted to map, maybe it's because i'm not used to mod, so that's why i can't see through your map, but that's what i think, sorry if i was to hard with you, but i prefere to be honest than be hypocrite and lie and telling you that your diff is ok ^^'
Good Luck

Oni

00:09:637 (19) - Why k when you did d for 00:02:437 (2,13) -

01:08:587 (331) - Why this is not a k like you did for 01:03:787 (311,321) -

01:41:885 (516) - k?

That's all what i could find for this one, it's ok for me

Here dainesl, good luck for you o/

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2014-04-17T15:06:24+00:00

Jinyan wrote:
Here my mod for the M4M, sorry for the delay dainesl =s

as i've never did a mod for taiko, i did my best ^^'

Adivise
Change

Oni
00:09:637 (19) - Why k when you did d for 00:02:437 (2,13) - changed

01:08:587 (331) - Why this is not a k like you did for 01:03:787 (311,321) - changed

01:41:885 (516) - k? yeah I think that'll work~

That's all what i could find for this one, it's ok for me

Here dainesl, good luck for you o/

thanks for the mod, wait for cheesiest's response to your mod now

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-04-17T17:18:56+00:00

Jinyan wrote:
Here my mod for the M4M, sorry for the delay dainesl =s

as i've never did a mod for taiko, i did my best ^^'

Adivise
Change

cheesiest's Inner Oni
00:20:137 - 00:20:587 - 00:21:037 - why not adding a timeline for these three point and decrase the volume like you did for 00:32:137 -

00:24:037 (92) - add k there cause it's fits more with the beat and change the k to a d for 00:24:337 (95) - ok

00:41:212 (233,238,243) - Why don't you change this with a d as the intensity of the sound is a little lower than before/after ok

00:46:687 (283) - ^ ok

00:52:687 (338) - ^ i don't think it fits here good

00:54:187 (349,355) - you can add here a k as the sound is like for 00:54:337 (351,357) - i don't think this fits there well ):

00:56:737 (371) - The sound here is clearly in need for a k B) ok

01:13:748 (466,467,468,469,470,471,472) - I don't understand why you changed here when it's the same part for 01:09:609 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450) -

01:15:578 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483) - ^

01:18:078 (493,494,495,496) - 01:19:615 (503,504,505,506) - I think you should make it here like 01:18:865 (498,499,500,501) - it fits better, even if it's repetitive fixed the above 3

01:27:710 (551) - change to d because of the low intensity? n, i think it's better as kat

01:29:510 (563) - ^ ^^^

01:33:785 (591) - add k here yes

01:36:635 (618,619,620) - why not making a 1/6 here? it fits, and it make the diff a little funier there's no 1/6 there

01:36:935 (621,629,637) - 01:36:935 (621,629,637) -

01:37:235 (623,631,639) - k idk what you mean exactly by the bolded, but i think I did what you wanted me to do

01:45:935 (685,690,695) - d okay

well, i'll be honest, i think you should check again your diff, Because where you should clearly put a d you put a k and inverse, I personally couldn't know exactly what you wanted to map, maybe it's because i'm not used to mod, so that's why i can't see through your map, but that's what i think, sorry if i was to hard with you, but i prefere to be honest than be hypocrite and lie and telling you that your diff is ok ^^'
Good Luck

code

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Love

osu! Alumni

1,267 posts

Joined August 2010

Love 2014-04-19T12:18:48+00:00

My part, sorry this isn't much.

[cheesiest's Inner Oni]
00:21:487 (72) - Remove this. This is to stay consistent with the 1/1 pauses you have after almost every stanza in this section.
00:23:887 (90,91) - ^
00:28:687 (127,128) - ^
00:29:887 (137,138) - ^
00:31:087 (148) - ^
00:52:837 (339) - Make this a d. This would emphisize the higher pitch of 00:52:987 (340).
00:53:062 - Add a k here? This creates a nice rhythm.
00:54:412 - Add a note here so it stays consistent with the piano.
00:54:862 (356) - Remove this so this stays with the piano.
00:59:587 (396) - Change this into a k? The pitch of the piano stays high until the slow down.
01:04:537 (420) - Change this since the rhythm is going back to a lower pitch. The same is used at 01:09:337 (443).
01:29:285 - Add a k here. This is a random break and it feels weird to pause here.
01:54:635 - 01:55:010 - You could fill this up a little bit more.

Overall, you can add a little bit more to the piano. Some spots feel bland while others are a bit too much.

[Oni]
00:13:687 - Having this empty feels a little bit weird.
00:55:762 - Add a d here so this isn't just 1/2 dkdkdkd spam XD.
00:56:362 - ^
00:57:337 (290) - Change this to a k for the piano pitch.
00:57:562 - Add a k here so the piano is filled for this part. I feels a lot better to play.
01:25:685 (424,425,426) - These aren't really noticable. Maybe remove these? Having a pause here would feel nice.
01:27:035 - Try adding a kk here that goes into 01:27:185. This will help emphisize the piano a little bit more.
01:54:485 (603) - Change this to a k for the clap.
01:54:935 - Add a d here for the kick.

[Muzukashii]
1.4 SV
Adding a bit of notes from 00:11:737 to the rest of the map would be fine. This would help the spread since this Muzu is pretty easy.

Dainesl

898 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Dainesl 2014-04-19T12:50:48+00:00

Love wrote:
My part, sorry this isn't much.

[Oni]
00:13:687 - Having this empty feels a little bit weird. filled in with a don
00:55:762 - Add a d here so this isn't just 1/2 dkdkdkd spam XD. ok, I think that works well :3
00:56:362 - ^ ^
00:57:337 (290) - Change this to a k for the piano pitch. ok sure ;w;
00:57:562 - Add a k here so the piano is filled for this part. I feels a lot better to play. alright but the pattern doesn't really seem to flow as nicely
01:25:685 (424,425,426) - These aren't really noticable. Maybe remove these? Having a pause here would feel nice. alright, not like I did it in any other diff
01:27:035 - Try adding a kk here that goes into 01:27:185. This will help emphisize the piano a little bit more. sure, that'll work~
01:54:485 (603) - Change this to a k for the clap. alright, I guess 'cause I did it like 2 notes later
01:54:935 - Add a d here for the kick. alright

[Muzukashii]
1.4 SV yeah, wasn't sure about that when first making the map
Adding a bit of notes from 00:11:737 to the rest of the map would be fine. This would help the spread since this Muzu is pretty easy. okay, I got to exactly 400 dons/kats but no more because otherwise it'll end up being too hard imo ;w;

thanks for the mod~

Last edited by Dainesl 2014-04-21T20:09:05+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-04-19T17:48:09+00:00

Love wrote:
My part, sorry this isn't much.

[cheesiest's Inner Oni]
00:21:487 (72) - Remove this. This is to stay consistent with the 1/1 pauses you have after almost every stanza in this section. alright
00:23:887 (90,91) - ^
00:28:687 (127,128) - ^
00:29:887 (137,138) - ^
00:31:087 (148) - ^
00:52:837 (339) - Make this a d. This would emphisize the higher pitch of 00:52:987 (340). i changed the note before it to a D. seems to fit better imo
00:53:062 - Add a k here? This creates a nice rhythm. alright
00:54:412 - Add a note here so it stays consistent with the piano. mhmm
00:54:862 (356) - Remove this so this stays with the piano. kk
00:59:587 (396) - Change this into a k? The pitch of the piano stays high until the slow down. alright
01:04:537 (420) - Change this since the rhythm is going back to a lower pitch. The same is used at 01:09:337 (443). okay
01:29:285 - Add a k here. This is a random break and it feels weird to pause here. sure
01:54:635 - 01:55:010 - You could fill this up a little bit more. mhmm

Overall, you can add a little bit more to the piano. Some spots feel bland while others are a bit too much.

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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2014-04-29T06:17:53+00:00

Let see.

[Oni]

00:11:137 (23) - I would prefer changing this to kat as to follow the drum as well as for the pattern consistency, while you've used d k k k k before.
00:40:237 (188) - Changing this back to don? This can enhance the variation of the pattern and also can fit the music better as well.
00:40:312 - If you like, you could place a note here as to follow the instrument. (As you can hear the stream in the instrument.)
00:59:737 (311) - I would suggest changing this to big note so that it can fit the strong downbeat as well as the instrument.
01:19:709 (396) - I feel like a kat here for your pattern consistency. Consider it?
01:26:585 (428) - I would suggest a kat here for the high pitch.
01:43:535 (540,541,542) - I think ddk is better than dkk here, which to fit the music. Since only 1kat at the end could actually accentuate the note as well as the music.
01:55:385 (614) - Why don't make it a big note (a big don or big kat are both okay)? lol It just fits the music perfectly.

[cheesiest's Inner Oni]

The volume in some parts are too loud, such as N-90% S-100%, which are quite sudden and doesn't fit the overall feelings. I would say 75% or 80% should be enough.
00:15:187 (26,27,28,29,30) - kkddd sounds better than dkddd, seemingly the first k could fit into the instrument on the background music quite well.
00:15:787 (32,33,34,35,36) - ^, for consistency.
00:57:637 - I know you want to accentuate the piano, however, you could also add a note (don) here to both fit the drum and accentuate the piano.
00:58:087 - ^
01:22:922 (510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517) - For me, DDKKDDKK sounds better. Well, your choice.
02:02:883 (793) - How about changing this to don? As the pitch was lower than 02:02:338 (792) - and 02:03:383 (794) -

[Muzukashii]

00:11:137 (15) - I would prefer changing this to kat as to follow the drum.
00:25:237 - How about adding a note here? I feel really weird for the sudden empty here. I think a don should be ok.
01:02:137 (192) - I would change this to don if I were you as for the pattern consistency as well as to fit the music(pitch).
01:07:537 (203) - Change this to don? ^
01:55:385 (378) - You could change this to big kat to follow the strong downbeat there.

[Futsuu]

00:30:937 (52) - You could change this to big kat so that it could be fitted to the strong downbeat.
01:55:385 (229) - ^

[Kantan]

00:48:937 (55,56,57) - I am afraid that this would be a bit difficult for newbie about the alternating color notes. Although it is 1/1 only, considering this as a high bpm song, this could be very difficult for them.
01:55:385 (126) - A big kat here to follow the strong downbeat?

Good luck.

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