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ChouCho - starlog (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Konei wrote:




Rechecking as you requested ~
Let's see how it has been doing.

[-Umi-'s Normal]

  1. 00:09:995 (1) - Try to add claps to every part of the Slider, or at least to the start and the end to catch the heavy beats. Finish instead
  2. 00:13:567 (2) - The curve looks rather wry and not really symmetrical, I guess you can do a better one, right? fixed
  3. 00:20:710 - I really miss a note with a whistle here, I know you are following the vocals, but the note sounds missing because you followed the piano in the first part. You could do an 1/2 repeat Slider. Prefer follow the voice here
  4. 00:23:567 - Same here. ^
  5. 00:29:817 (5) - I feel really uncomfortable with this shape and I assume newbies will feel the same way. It's just not polished, try to make it less curvy and more structured. Fixed
  6. 00:49:990 (5) - Maybe use a NC to seperate this part from the KIAI and make it more introducing. Fixed
  7. 01:00:709 (3) - You could try to improve this blanket a bit, it doesn't look quite polished. Fixed
    SPOILER
  8. 01:21:780 (1) - Spacing is slightly off here, also you could take this oppurtunity to center this on the grid. Fixed]

That's all for now again.

In my opinion, the Hard difficulty still isn't fully ready yet, but you are on a good way.

Good luck for now!
thx for mod o/

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osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
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CircleSize:3
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YunoFanatic
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Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
chippy support ~! i hope be ranked!
CXu
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
CXu
Yo. Mod request from my queue. =3=~
As always I'm slow at mod requests, lol.

[General]
  1. Uhm, remove video from taikos? I mean, it's kinda silly to watch half a video at the bottom :P
  2. Try "0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,110" for the BG on taiko, so her face isn't partially covered by that black bar with title: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951869 vs. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951871
  3. For all diffs, try ending the last spinner at 01:29:756 - ? That's where the music actually fades out, so yeah.
  4. Everything else seems fine.
[Insane]
  1. OD 8? I just prefer to make accuracy more important :P
  2. 00:01:249 - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here, as well as at 00:02:678 - to accompany the piano better.
  3. 00:04:643 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's just me, but I really feel a stream from 00:04:467 - following the violin works better than the current arrange. While 00:04:643 (1) - follows that one drum beat, the triple at 00:04:820 - only gets the end of the violin part, and feels incomplete to me.
  4. 00:06:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah, mainly at 00:07:138 (5,6) - , since the stream doesn't follow the same path as the line (5,6). One posibility is to make the streams curve go the other way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951780 You'll have to rearrange a bit, but yeah.
  5. 00:16:067 (6) - Missed clap on purpose? I think a clap fits better anyhow.
  6. 00:16:424 - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well.
  7. 00:30:353 (5,6,1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. The syllables she sings are changing pitch, so using a zig-zag type of flow seems more apropriate to me. Try an arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951813 Or come up with something yourself of course.
  8. 00:41:955 (1,2) - Swap NC here, so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
  9. 00:43:562 (1) - Consider removing this NC, to be consistent with 00:39:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
  10. 00:47:847 (3,4,6) - A gradual increase in SV would feel much better, as it'll follow the pitch of that.. I guess guitar? It'll also make the speedup from 00:46:775 (7) - much less sudden, as 00:47:847 - is more a build-up to the chorus and therefore doesn't have the same "this-is-epic-lets-have-high-SV" feel to it imo. A gradual increase will be much subtler and fit as an actual "build"-up.
  11. 00:50:704 (1) - I don't really think such a slanted curve looks that good on a long slider like this, but maybe it's me. Anyhow, you can create a nice square/diamond-shape with 00:50:347 (2,1,2,3,4) -.
  12. 00:57:673 (6,1) - I would probably ctrl+h the (1) slider, so 00:57:495 (5,6,1) - doesn't become a straight line where the spacing is different, as you'll be deaccelerating with your cursor. Well, it'd probably require you to either mirror your map, or rearrange, so you can decide yourself if you feel it's worth the trouble :P
  13. 01:13:566 (3) - Either remove finish here, or add one at 00:56:423 (1) - , for consistency.
  14. 01:14:995 (1,2) - The drop from (1) to (2) is a bit sharp for my tastes, as the straight line doesn't follow the curve of (2). Consider moving (2) at least a little bit more to the left so it's a bit smoother.
  15. 01:22:852 (4) - Try using a drum hitclap or hitfinish instead? :P You actually do that in Easy.
  16. 01:25:372 (2,1) - This spacing is really awkward. The piano doesn't really change the intensity or anything, so the jump feels random and misplaced. Consider just distance snapping it instead, as it'll be much easier to read than this. Oh, and remove the NC from (1).
  17. 01:25:980 (2) - Consider extending this to 01:26:400 - . I know you're following the drums, but because of the use of soft whistles, it sounds more like you're following the piano rather than the drums imo. You don't have any hitsound to follow that drum either, so yeah.
Nice map, plays well and appropriate as an Insane.

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:01:249 (2) - Move this up a bit to followthe path from 00:00:714 (1) - ?
  2. 00:02:678 (2) - Similarily for this as above^ . It's not that noticeable, but it does flow a little better imo.
  3. 00:05:531 (2,3) - Sounds better when the whistles are on the sliderhead of both of these sliders, following the violin... Well yeah I think it's a violin.
  4. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - Try curve this the other way? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951939 The flow will follow the curve from (1), and then flow right into the (5) repeater.
  5. 00:08:388 (2,3) - Same as before, use whistles on head.
  6. 00:11:781 (4,1) - Watch out for spacing like this. From 00:12:138 - , there is a held note that doesn't change intensity or pitch, and the drums are going steady as well, so (4,1) and (1,2,3) should feel similar in-game. Currently, the jump makes the pattern feel awkward, and the jump feels out of place. I actually think you should remove 00:12:317 (1) - , and strictly follow that... idk violin? xd
  7. 00:13:388 (5) - Same reason as above, I'd remove this note. Still, the jump at (5,1) play better since it puts emphasis on the downbeat. But yeah, consider removing (5) here to follow the violin.. Yeah let's just hope I'm right that it's a violin.
  8. 00:18:388 (2,3) - Make a straight line? Move endpoint of (3) to 140;36. Just looks neater imo.
  9. 00:19:817 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Follow the vocals for this part? You follow vocals from 00:16:781 - to 00:26:245 - , so it's kind of weird that you don't do so here. Also, the constant 1/2 doesn't really fit with the calm part of the song imo.
  10. 00:21:960 (4,1) - I would probably drop this jump, but if you want it to emphasis the downbeat, you should move (4) so that there is an equal distance between (3,4,1). Feels much better to play imo as you'll get a smooth speed between these 3 notes.
  11. 00:26:603 (2,3) - Try to choose to follow either the piano or the vocals, as following both just makes this a bunch of 1/2. Imo, deleting these (2,3) and following the piano feels better because you're hitting few notes for the calmest part of the song. If you do this, add a whistle on 00:26:960 (4) - to follow the piano.
  12. 00:39:100 (5) - Unstack and space this following DS? Just feels better to me than a jump for some reason.
  13. 00:48:382 (2,3,4) - Try replace this with a 1/1 slider + note, following the guitar sound instead of using 1/2's. Currently 00:48:561 (3) - feels a bit excessive, following nothing in the song.
  14. 00:59:280 (1,2,3) - Move this so that the sliderends and (3) makes a perfect triangle. Just looks neater imo. Also, the jump at 01:00:352 (4) - also feels a bit random, considering the song doesn't seem to change intensity or anything, imo.
  15. 01:03:566 (1) - I like a ctrl+g flow better, mostly because the vocals aren't really strong here, so more emphasis on the downbeat doesn't feel right. So yeah, consider just using a curveflow by ctrl+g on this.
  16. 01:06:602 (1,2) - Swap NC. 01:06:602 (1) - Will end the previous combo by ending at the same place as the sentence/vocal ends, and the new combo at 01:07:138 (2) - will work for the buildup to the new kiai, as well as mark the 3/4 better. Also consider adding claps on all three to follow the drums in the music.
  17. 01:11:423 (3) - Try to ctrl+h and ctrl+g this, and make a symmetrical pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951997 It looks good, and it also has better flow between (1,2,3).
  18. 01:14:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move these patterns so that 01:16:066 (3,4) - and 01:14:816 (4) - stack? Just looks neater in general. Shouldn't interfere with spacing after it either.
It's cool, but might need a little more modding just to flesh it out a bit more, mostly because of how the spacing sometimes changes a bit randomly. I've only pointed out the ones I felt really were out of place, but others might think differently about them as well. Also, the chorus might be tad bit hard for a hard (sounds funny, yeah) because of the high SV, but the patterns are fairly simple with a lot of 1/1 sliders, so I guess it should be okay.

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:09:103 (3) - This overlap with 00:10:710 (2) - makes me sad :( There are countless other ways to arrange this part without the overlap, so consider trying out some other stuff :P
  2. 00:10:710 - Before this, the whistles were cool, but after this, they feel more random. Try to make your whistles follow the high-pitched violin beats.
  3. 00:15:531 (2) - Clap on end to follow the drums? Sounds better than having nothing at all.
  4. 00:16:424 (1) - Whistle. You use whistles on the piano notes otherwise in this calm part, except here.
  5. 00:24:995 (2) - Whistle on head. Same reason as above.
  6. 00:24:638 (1,2,3) - Since you actually use blankets like 00:22:495 (1) - and 00:19:638 (1) - , I think it'd probably look neater if you could manage to make (1) blanketed by both (2) and (3). If you need more space on-top, you can always point 00:23:210 (2) - down-right, and move 00:23:745 (3) - down a bit as well, and you'll get more space to work with.
  7. 00:36:424 (1) - Point this horizontally to the left? Gives a better flow into 00:37:138 (2,3) - as it'll be like a curve.
  8. 00:38:922 - Try adding a note here with clap.
  9. 00:49:990 (1) - Add a whistle here? Just so the buildup for kiai doesn't sound so empty and uninteresting.
  10. 01:07:852 (1) - Make the blanket for 01:09:280 (1) - more proper, just for neatness' sake.
  11. 01:21:780 (1,2,3) - This pattern goes right inside the previous pattern 01:20:530 (4,5) - , which doesn't really look good imo. Consider rearranging this so it doesn't overlap with everythings. Possibly, you can remove 1 repeat from 01:21:780 (1) - , and add a note at 01:22:495 - instead, as that'll make it easier to move the pattern more to the left, as well as being more consistent with the double at 01:19:637 (2,3) - . If you decide to keep the pattern as-is, please at least fix 01:21:780 (1,3) - so that they don't overlap like that by either moving it so it forms a triangle, or stack it with (1).
Good Normal. Some overlaps I don't like. Other than that, I guess you couuuld add a few more whistles like the other diffs, but since you said you don't like to use a lot of them, it's fine :P

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:424 (2) - You use a whistle+clap at 00:27:495 - in Insane. Consider doing that here as well.
  2. 00:50:704 (1) - Well, it's not completely symmetrical, so if you care, move the endpoint to 356;132
  3. 00:56:423 (1) - Same as above^ Try endpoint at 376;48
  4. 00:57:852 (2,1) - Try adding whistles on the repeaters, to follow the high-pitch vocal. If you like it, consider adding whistles on other 3/2 sliders with repeats like 01:04:995 (1) - etc.
  5. 01:14:995 (2,3) - Might want to avoid 3/2 rhythm like this. I know you use it at 00:39:278 (1,2) - as well, but they're sliders, so they're okay with the sliders leniency on timing. Here it's really easy to hit (3) too fast and get a 100/50. It's not really something that should be in the easiest diff imo, especially when every other 3/2 rhythm has been mapped with a repeatslider; makes this part stand out and not fit with how everything else is mapped imo. How you want to fix this is up to you though.
Generally a pretty solid easy. It's mostly just that last 3/2 part that bothers me a bit.

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All right, that's all. Try getting a few more mods, especially on the Hard. Not that it's bad or anything, but I think that's the one that still needs a little bit more work. Still, good job on the mapset, and poke me again after you think you're ready and I'll do a recheck :P Good luck!
Xinely
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Joined April 2012
Xinely

CXu wrote:

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:01:249 (2) - Move this up a bit to followthe path from 00:00:714 (1) - ? done
  2. 00:02:678 (2) - Similarily for this as above^ . It's not that noticeable, but it does flow a little better imo. done too
  3. 00:05:531 (2,3) - Sounds better when the whistles are on the sliderhead of both of these sliders, following the violin... Well yeah I think it's a violin. nice catch, fixed
  4. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - Try curve this the other way? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951939 The flow will follow the curve from (1), and then flow right into the (5) repeater. actually i not really like curve to up so i changed by my own
  5. 00:08:388 (2,3) - Same as before, use whistles on head. fixed before i saw this lol
  6. 00:11:781 (4,1) - Watch out for spacing like this. From 00:12:138 - , there is a held note that doesn't change intensity or pitch, and the drums are going steady as well, so (4,1) and (1,2,3) should feel similar in-game. Currently, the jump makes the pattern feel awkward, and the jump feels out of place. I actually think you should remove 00:12:317 (1) - , and strictly follow that... idk violin? xd yeah violin www , removed
  7. 00:13:388 (5) - Same reason as above, I'd remove this note. Still, the jump at (5,1) play better since it puts emphasis on the downbeat. But yeah, consider removing (5) here to follow the violin.. Yeah let's just hope I'm right that it's a violin. removed
  8. 00:18:388 (2,3) - Make a straight line? Move endpoint of (3) to 140;36. Just looks neater imo. hhmm fine
  9. 00:19:817 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Follow the vocals for this part? You follow vocals from 00:16:781 - to 00:26:245 - , so it's kind of weird that you don't do so here. Also, the constant 1/2 doesn't really fit with the calm part of the song imo.okay
  10. 00:21:960 (4,1) - I would probably drop this jump, but if you want it to emphasis the downbeat, you should move (4) so that there is an equal distance between (3,4,1). Feels much better to play imo as you'll get a smooth speed between these 3 notes. moved so have same spacing with next
  11. 00:26:603 (2,3) - Try to choose to follow either the piano or the vocals, as following both just makes this a bunch of 1/2. Imo, deleting these (2,3) and following the piano feels better because you're hitting few notes for the calmest part of the song. If you do this, add a whistle on 00:26:960 (4) - to follow the piano. omg i don't think until like that. nice :3
  12. 00:39:100 (5) - Unstack and space this following DS? Just feels better to me than a jump for some reason. moved
  13. 00:48:382 (2,3,4) - Try replace this with a 1/1 slider + note, following the guitar sound instead of using 1/2's. Currently 00:48:561 (3) - feels a bit excessive, following nothing in the song.okay removed (3)
  14. 00:59:280 (1,2,3) - Move this so that the sliderends and (3) makes a perfect triangle. Just looks neater imo. Also, the jump at 01:00:352 (4) - also feels a bit random, considering the song doesn't seem to change intensity or anything, imo.
  15. 01:03:566 (1) - I like a ctrl+g flow better, mostly because the vocals aren't really strong here, so more emphasis on the downbeat doesn't feel right. So yeah, consider just using a curveflow by ctrl+g on this. wanna make jump pattern here so i stacked with previous so i still can keep my jump
  16. 01:06:602 (1,2) - Swap NC. 01:06:602 (1) - Will end the previous combo by ending at the same place as the sentence/vocal ends, and the new combo at 01:07:138 (2) - will work for the buildup to the new kiai, as well as mark the 3/4 better. Also consider adding claps on all three to follow the drums in the music. okay
  17. 01:11:423 (3) - Try to ctrl+h and ctrl+g this, and make a symmetrical pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951997 It looks good, and it also has better flow between (1,2,3). oh u alright, fixed
  18. 01:14:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move these patterns so that 01:16:066 (3,4) - and 01:14:816 (4) - stack? Just looks neater in general. Shouldn't interfere with spacing after it either. ahahaha okay
It's cool, but might need a little more modding just to flesh it out a bit more, mostly because of how the spacing sometimes changes a bit randomly. I've only pointed out the ones I felt really were out of place, but others might think differently about them as well. Also, the chorus might be tad bit hard for a hard (sounds funny, yeah) because of the high SV, but the patterns are fairly simple with a lot of 1/1 sliders, so I guess it should be okay. lemme try a little remap
thanks 4 mod CXu :3
nice mod as usual ~

Update + remap spacing in kiai
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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

CXu wrote:

Yo. Mod request from my queue. =3=~
As always I'm slow at mod requests, lol.

[General]
  1. Uhm, remove video from taikos? I mean, it's kinda silly to watch half a video at the bottom :P well just keeping it for the people that wants it =w= also the people that don't want it just can tick the ''Disable Video''
  2. Try "0,0,"rsz_fate_kaleid.jpg",0,110" for the BG on taiko, so her face isn't partially covered by that black bar with title: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951869 vs. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951871 fixed
  3. For all diffs, try ending the last spinner at 01:29:756 - ? That's where the music actually fades out, so yeah. fixed it in my diffs don't know what the others wants~
  4. Everything else seems fine.
[Insane]
  1. OD 8? I just prefer to make accuracy more important :P fixed
  2. 00:01:249 - I kinda want a regular soft whistle here, as well as at 00:02:678 - to accompany the piano better. fixed
  3. 00:04:643 (1,2,3) - Maybe it's just me, but I really feel a stream from 00:04:467 - following the violin works better than the current arrange. While 00:04:643 (1) - follows that one drum beat, the triple at 00:04:820 - only gets the end of the violin part, and feels incomplete to me. I know but wouldn't it be too hard =w=? well centered the stream and fixed for now~
  4. 00:06:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah, mainly at 00:07:138 (5,6) - , since the stream doesn't follow the same path as the line (5,6). One posibility is to make the streams curve go the other way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951780 You'll have to rearrange a bit, but yeah. curved the stream~
  5. 00:16:067 (6) - Missed clap on purpose? I think a clap fits better anyhow.Yea it was on purpose actually but yea it has been mentioned several times so fixed
  6. 00:16:424 - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well. well there's the piano aswell =w=/
  7. 00:30:353 (5,6,1) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. The syllables she sings are changing pitch, so using a zig-zag type of flow seems more apropriate to me. Try an arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/951813 Or come up with something yourself of course. fixed it came up with something :3
  8. 00:41:955 (1,2) - Swap NC here, so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. fixed
  9. 00:43:562 (1) - Consider removing this NC, to be consistent with 00:39:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - fixed
  10. 00:47:847 (3,4,6) - A gradual increase in SV would feel much better, as it'll follow the pitch of that.. I guess guitar? It'll also make the speedup from 00:46:775 (7) - much less sudden, as 00:47:847 - is more a build-up to the chorus and therefore doesn't have the same "this-is-epic-lets-have-high-SV" feel to it imo. A gradual increase will be much subtler and fit as an actual "build"-up. fixed I guess
  11. 00:50:704 (1) - I don't really think such a slanted curve looks that good on a long slider like this, but maybe it's me. Anyhow, you can create a nice square/diamond-shape with 00:50:347 (2,1,2,3,4) -. made the square shape~
  12. 00:57:673 (6,1) - I would probably ctrl+h the (1) slider, so 00:57:495 (5,6,1) - doesn't become a straight line where the spacing is different, as you'll be deaccelerating with your cursor. Well, it'd probably require you to either mirror your map, or rearrange, so you can decide yourself if you feel it's worth the trouble :P Well changed the jump pattern instead seems fine now I guess :3
  13. 01:13:566 (3) - Either remove finish here, or add one at 00:56:423 (1) - , for consistency. added finish
  14. 01:14:995 (1,2) - The drop from (1) to (2) is a bit sharp for my tastes, as the straight line doesn't follow the curve of (2). Consider moving (2) at least a little bit more to the left so it's a bit smoother. moved it a bit to the left
  15. 01:22:852 (4) - Try using a drum hitclap or hitfinish instead? :P You actually do that in Easy. fixed
  16. 01:25:372 (2,1) - This spacing is really awkward. The piano doesn't really change the intensity or anything, so the jump feels random and misplaced. Consider just distance snapping it instead, as it'll be much easier to read than this. Oh, and remove the NC from (1). Yea fixed didn't want a jump here either but so many suggested it ><
  17. 01:25:980 (2) - Consider extending this to 01:26:400 - . I know you're following the drums, but because of the use of soft whistles, it sounds more like you're following the piano rather than the drums imo. You don't have any hitsound to follow that drum either, so yeah.fixed
Nice map, plays well and appropriate as an Insane.

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:424 (2) - You use a whistle+clap at 00:27:495 - in Insane. Consider doing that here as well.
  2. 00:50:704 (1) - Well, it's not completely symmetrical, so if you care, move the endpoint to 356;132
  3. 00:56:423 (1) - Same as above^ Try endpoint at 376;48
  4. 00:57:852 (2,1) - Try adding whistles on the repeaters, to follow the high-pitch vocal. If you like it, consider adding whistles on other 3/2 sliders with repeats like 01:04:995 (1) - etc.
  5. 01:14:995 (2,3) - Might want to avoid 3/2 rhythm like this. I know you use it at 00:39:278 (1,2) - as well, but they're sliders, so they're okay with the sliders leniency on timing. Here it's really easy to hit (3) too fast and get a 100/50. It's not really something that should be in the easiest diff imo, especially when every other 3/2 rhythm has been mapped with a repeatslider; makes this part stand out and not fit with how everything else is mapped imo. How you want to fix this is up to you though.
    all fixed
Generally a pretty solid easy. It's mostly just that last 3/2 part that bothers me a bit.

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All right, that's all. Try getting a few more mods, especially on the Hard. Not that it's bad or anything, but I think that's the one that still needs a little bit more work. Still, good job on the mapset, and poke me again after you think you're ready and I'll do a recheck :P Good luck!Alright~ :3/
Thanks for the mod CXu~ :3/!!!
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

CXu wrote:

Yo. Mod request from my queue. =3=~
As always I'm slow at mod requests, lol.

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:09:103 (3) - This overlap with 00:10:710 (2) - makes me sad :( There are countless other ways to arrange this part without the overlap, so consider trying out some other stuff :P Ok i changed a bit this part
  2. 00:10:710 - Before this, the whistles were cool, but after this, they feel more random. Try to make your whistles follow the high-pitched violin beats. Add some whistles
  3. 00:15:531 (2) - Clap on end to follow the drums? Sounds better than having nothing at all. fixed
  4. 00:16:424 (1) - Whistle. You use whistles on the piano notes otherwise in this calm part, except here. Ops fixed
  5. 00:24:995 (2) - Whistle on head. Same reason as above. fixed
  6. 00:24:638 (1,2,3) - Since you actually use blankets like 00:22:495 (1) - and 00:19:638 (1) - , I think it'd probably look neater if you could manage to make (1) blanketed by both (2) and (3). If you need more space on-top, you can always point 00:23:210 (2) - down-right, and move 00:23:745 (3) - down a bit as well, and you'll get more space to work with. I did my best >3<
  7. 00:36:424 (1) - Point this horizontally to the left? Gives a better flow into 00:37:138 (2,3) - as it'll be like a curve. yeah fixed
  8. 00:38:922 - Try adding a note here with clap. nice
  9. 00:49:990 (1) - Add a whistle here? Just so the buildup for kiai doesn't sound so empty and uninteresting. ok
  10. 01:07:852 (1) - Make the blanket for 01:09:280 (1) - more proper, just for neatness' sake. Fixed
  11. 01:21:780 (1,2,3) - This pattern goes right inside the previous pattern 01:20:530 (4,5) - , which doesn't really look good imo. Consider rearranging this so it doesn't overlap with everythings. Possibly, you can remove 1 repeat from 01:21:780 (1) - , and add a note at 01:22:495 - instead, as that'll make it easier to move the pattern more to the left, as well as being more consistent with the double at 01:19:637 (2,3) - . If you decide to keep the pattern as-is, please at least fix 01:21:780 (1,3) - so that they don't overlap like that by either moving it so it forms a triangle, or stack it with (1). I remapped this pattern >.<
Good Normal. Some overlaps I don't like. Other than that, I guess you couuuld add a few more whistles like the other diffs, but since you said you don't like to use a lot of them, it's fine :P hehe >.<
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All right, that's all. Try getting a few more mods, especially on the Hard. Not that it's bad or anything, but I think that's the one that still needs a little bit more work. Still, good job on the mapset, and poke me again after you think you're ready and I'll do a recheck :P Good luck!
Thx a lot for mod CXu o/

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[General]
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[Editor]
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Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
All updated~
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ Chippy and guests o.o/ form my queue !

General
Clear
Easy
00:03:035 - add whistle ?
00:25:531 - add whistle ? Piano and Vocal o.o
01:22:852 - clap → finish ?
Umi's Normal
00:14:638 - add clap ?
00:16:067 - ^
00:30:353 - ^
00:50:347 (2) - clap → fhish+Drum sampleset ?
Xinely's Hard
00:03:035 (3) - add whistle ?
00:20:353 (2) - add clap ?
00:20:710 (1,2) - Return Slider ?

00:27:495 (3) - clap → finish ?
00:46:597 (2) - x:244 y: 86 ?
01:25:561 (2,3) - slider~ ?

Insane
00:03:035 (3) - add whistle ?
00:07:674 (10) - remove clap
00:07:495 (8) - add clap
00:10:710 (1) - x:362 y:141 ?
01:25:980 - add whistle ?

good luck :D
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

iyasine wrote:

hi~ Chippy and guests o.o/ form my queue ! o.o/

General
Clear
Easy
00:03:035 - add whistle ? fixed
00:25:531 - add whistle ? Piano and Vocal o.o fixed
01:22:852 - clap → finish ? nope this should be Drum+clap so it's fine~

Insane
00:03:035 (3) - add whistle ? fixed
00:07:674 (10) - remove clap omg fixed
00:07:495 (8) - add clap fixed
00:10:710 (1) - x:362 y:141 ? nope too big jump >~>
01:25:980 - add whistle ? fixed

good luck :D
Thanks for the mod iyasine~ :3/!!
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo.

Testplayed each diff, seems like everything is fine. Here's the detailed and a bit nazi mod!

[General]
  1. That bright pink/purple colour may annoy players, consider fading it a bit. That's optional, but I'd be happy to see it a bit less bright. :) It may hurt players eyes.
  2. Source is correct, but typing that star on our keyboards is pretty hard. I'd add to tags Prisma Illya and/or Prismaillya. Just in case :)
[Easy]
  1. The diff itself is awesome. However, I didn't really like 3/2 sliders, they may be a bit confusing for beginners. I'd consider using OD1.
    Note: you don't have to do it unless you want to make diff a bit easier :)
  2. 00:03:213 (1) - spinner here feels weird because of the beat on 00:04:285. If you agree to reduce your HP, try to use something like this to reflect music better or this (but keep in mind that tail of (2) should be muted)
  3. 00:16:424 (1,2,3) - nazi - you could make a cute blanket-pattern here! Try to move (3) a bit, so you get something like this
  4. 00:30:353 (1,2,3) - nazi - you could make your flow a bit smoother here. Maybe it's just me, but using Ctrl+G on (2) would flow much better! Anyway, take a look at this!
  5. 01:24:637 (2) - this is the only 1/2 slider in the whole diff. It may confuse players a bit, but it's not a big deal. If it is possible, try to avoid it. If there's no way, it's fine.

    Great diff. Almost perfect!
[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:04:643 - ahh, c'mon! There's no need to ignore that clap! I'd map it. It's ok to have it mapped for a [Normal] diff and it makes your rhythm/pattern a bit more interesting!
  2. 00:23:210 (2) - nazi - try to make it aligned with (3) to make your flow smoother. See my example to understand what I'm talking about! example
  3. 00:40:527 - how about a circle here to emphasize vocals? That'd perfectly fit with your rhythm + it sounds really cool!
    Note: 00:43:383 - same happens here.
  4. 00:54:995 (3) - well, moving it some grids down would create an awesome smooth flow and a cute blanket! :)
    Note: if you agree to change the one above, change 01:09:280 (1,2,3,4) - this one as well!

    Good job!
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. C'mon! Increase your HP Drain by one tick! Your patterns are begging for it!
  2. 00:53:388 (4) - how about unstacking this circle to make a cute triangle-pattern. That'd improve your flow a lot.
  3. 00:56:245 (4,1) - ULTIMATENAZI - blanket here could be better. Well, at least try to fix it :< Well, to be honest, you could improve your blankets at all.
  4. 01:26:295 - start the spinner here or place a circle. Do something, you can;t just ignore that drum sound here!

    Pretty nice rhythm, but patterns could bbe neater. Anyway, that's a good diff!
[Insane]
  1. Increase the HP Drain by one tick! Make that diff insane, players will like it!
  2. 01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - nazi - didn't like the overlaps here. However, maybe it's just me. Feel free to leave them as they are.

    Nice diff!
Solid mapset. [Hard] could be done a bit neater, but that's a minor thing. Good job!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good luck!
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

Testplayed each diff, seems like everything is fine. Here's the detailed and a bit nazi mod! ^.^/

[General]
  1. That bright pink/purple colour may annoy players, consider fading it a bit. That's optional, but I'd be happy to see it a bit less bright. :) It may hurt players eyes. fixed
  2. Source is correct, but typing that star on our keyboards is pretty hard. I'd add to tags Prisma Illya and/or Prismaillya. Just in case :) lol yea :3 fixed~
[Easy]
  1. The diff itself is awesome. However, I didn't really like 3/2 sliders, they may be a bit confusing for beginners. I'd consider using OD1. alright changed to OD1
    Note: you don't have to do it unless you want to make diff a bit easier :)
  2. 00:03:213 (1) - spinner here feels weird because of the beat on 00:04:285. If you agree to reduce your HP, try to use something like fixed this :3this to reflect music better or this (but keep in mind that tail of (2) should be muted)
  3. 00:16:424 (1,2,3) - nazi - you could make a cute blanket-pattern here! Try to move (3) a bit, so you get something like this fixed~
  4. 00:30:353 (1,2,3) - nazi - you could make your flow a bit smoother here. Maybe it's just me, but using Ctrl+G on (2) would flow much better! Anyway, take a look at this! I prefer mine tho :? I'll consider changing it :3~
  5. 01:24:637 (2) - this is the only 1/2 slider in the whole diff. It may confuse players a bit, but it's not a big deal. If it is possible, try to avoid it. If there's no way, it's fine. I just thought this would be a nice way to end =w= also following vocal soo yea keeping it for now >~<

    Great diff. Almost perfect! \(=w=)/
[Insane]
  1. Increase the HP Drain by one tick! Make that diff insane, players will like it! alright fixed :3~
  2. 01:07:138 (1,2,3,1) - nazi - didn't like the overlaps here. However, maybe it's just me. Feel free to leave them as they are. I kinda like how they are overlapping tho >~< I have it at the other part too =w= but yea consider changing than =w=/

    Nice diff!
Solid mapset. [Hard] could be done a bit neater, but that's a minor thing. Good job!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod Bakari~!! \(^.^)/
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

iyasine wrote:

hi~ Chippy and guests o.o/ form my queue !

Xinely's Hard
00:03:035 (3) - add whistle ? sure
00:20:353 (2) - add clap ? mistake, fixed
00:20:710 (1,2) - Return Slider ? nope

00:27:495 (3) - clap → finish ? nope, this clap so fit imo
00:46:597 (2) - x:244 y: 86 ? okay but y:88
01:25:561 (2,3) - slider~ ? circle fine imo


good luck :D

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. C'mon! Increase your HP Drain by one tick! Your patterns are begging for it! no, too much big? :O , but okay added
  2. 00:53:388 (4) - how about unstacking this circle to make a cute triangle-pattern. That'd improve your flow a lot. okay
  3. 00:56:245 (4,1) - ULTIMATENAZI - blanket here could be better. Well, at least try to fix it :< Well, to be honest, you could improve your blankets at all. okay tried, i'm not master in blanket q.q
  4. 01:26:295 - start the spinner here or place a circle. Do something, you can;t just ignore that drum sound here! move spinner instead, put circle or map blue tick kinda odd to me so use spin for better

    Pretty nice rhythm, but patterns could bbe neater. Anyway, that's a good diff!
thanks 4 mod all >w<

Update
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
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Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

iyasine wrote:

hi~ Chippy and guests o.o/ form my queue !


Umi's Normal
00:14:638 - add clap ? Fixed
00:16:067 - ^ Fixed
00:30:353 - ^ Fixed
00:50:347 (2) - clap → fhish+Drum sampleset ? it dosen't really fit for me
good luck :D

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

Testplayed each diff, seems like everything is fine. Here's the detailed and a bit nazi mod!

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:04:643 - ahh, c'mon! There's no need to ignore that clap! I'd map it. It's ok to have it mapped for a [Normal] diff and it makes your rhythm/pattern a bit more interesting! Ok fixed
  2. 00:23:210 (2) - nazi - try to make it aligned with (3) to make your flow smoother. See my example to understand what I'm talking about! example Fixed
  3. 00:40:527 - how about a circle here to emphasize vocals? That'd perfectly fit with your rhythm + it sounds really cool!
    Note: 00:43:383 - same happens here. Not for me >3<
  4. 00:54:995 (3) - well, moving it some grids down would create an awesome smooth flow and a cute blanket! :)
    Note: if you agree to change the one above, change 01:09:280 (1,2,3,4) - this one as well! Nice fixed !

    Good job!
thx for mod :3

diff
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link
BeatmapID:277543
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[Difficulty]
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XuperX
1 post
Joined June 2013
XuperX
Damm why no one plays on this map? it a good one! i love it. thank you soo much for making it :)
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Chippy sama, Plz don't make me crazy again. STOP AND GRAYARD/ hahaha runs* :)
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
Yo, here's your recheck~~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. I have no idea if it matters, but you write these "Prismaillya Prisma Illya" tags in different orders in the difficulties. Might as well keep them consistent just to be safe :P
  2. Sorry if I repeat myself. I'll try to remember what I've suggested before and what I haven't, but yeah, my memory sucks sometimes :P
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are you able to make this stream look just a bit more even? So the curve looks smooth.
  2. 00:04:996 (7) - Makes sense to add a new combo here imo. It's similar to the NC at 00:07:853 (1) -
  3. 00:07:317 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream. Just make them look a little more... curvy I guess xD
  4. 01:24:995 (1,2,3) - I actually find if you extend (1) to end at 01:25:372 -, and delete (2) to play better, as you'll strictly follow the piano like this.
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:02:678 (2) - I still think you should move this down a bit so it makes more of a smooth curve with 00:02:142 (1) -
  2. 00:05:531 (2,3) - Hmm, I think you should either drop the jumps here, or add more of a jump at 00:08:388 (2,3) - , to be more consistent. It's kind of weird when the first tme it comes up, it's more intense than the second time in-game, while the song sounds identical :P
  3. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - Maybe make this curve the other way? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/966410 It'll give a gentle flow from (1) into the (5) repeater.
  4. 00:18:388 (3) - Well, try the endpoint at 140;36 :P (Yeah I'm just saying it again). It looks neater as I said previously, and it also improves the flow a little bit imo (as you don't get that slight bend in the flow).
  5. 00:51:600 (4,5) - This is a fairly big jump imo. It's the only "big" jump in the chorus that has a note involved. All the other jumps are between 2 sliders, which is easier to hit and more lenient in general. I also think the jump fits better if it's between 00:51:959 (5,1) - instead of 00:51:600 (4,5) - , since that'll give more emphasis on the downbeat at 00:52:138 - . But yeah, you should reduce the jump here a bit.
  6. 01:07:138 (1,2,3) - Add claps? to follow the drums that goes in the same rhythm as the vocals. Also gives a bit more power to these 3 notes before the chorus repeats.
  7. 01:25:561 (2) - Move this closer to (1)? Considering the gentleness of this part, even a small jump like this feels a bit forced to me.
  8. 01:26:295 (1) - I suggested this under [General] last time, but idk if you saw it or not: Consider ending this spinner on 01:29:756 - , as that's where I hear the song actually ending. xChippy has already done this, so it'll also be nice for consistency between GD's. Oh, and you don't need to map the drum at 01:26:295 - , as it's barely noticeable for a spinner to be on it anyway. Beginning the spinner at 01:26:400 - would just be following the piano instead of the drums :P Still, you're free to keep it as it is as well.
[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:18:567 (5) - Add a whistle here as well, as there is a piano note here.
  2. 00:24:638 (1,2,3,1) - Try moving 00:24:638 (1) - to 284;92, then move 00:24:995 (2) - to 228;198, 00:25:531 (3) - to 392;164 and 00:26:424 (1) - to 284;92. You don't need to change the shape of any of the sliders. See if you like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/966446 . I think it's more appropriate to stack 00:24:638 (1) - and 00:26:424 (1) - as hitbursts will look kinda ugly.
  3. 01:24:995 (1) - As I said in the last mod, under "General", I'd rather end the spinner at 01:29:756 - as that's where the music seems to end for me. xChippy has done this, so I guess it also goes for consistency across the GD's.
[Easy]
  1. Looks neat!
All right. Almost there~ Poke me again when you're done I guess xD
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

CXu wrote:

Yo, here's your recheck~~


[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:18:567 (5) - Add a whistle here as well, as there is a piano note here. Fixed
  2. 00:24:638 (1,2,3,1) - Try moving 00:24:638 (1) - to 284;92, then move 00:24:995 (2) - to 228;198, 00:25:531 (3) - to 392;164 and 00:26:424 (1) - to 284;92. You don't need to change the shape of any of the sliders. See if you like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/966446 . I think it's more appropriate to stack 00:24:638 (1) - and 00:26:424 (1) - as hitbursts will look kinda ugly.Fixed thx, I was a bit desesperate about this pattern xD
  3. 01:24:995 (1) - As I said in the last mod, under "General", I'd rather end the spinner at 01:29:756 - as that's where the music seems to end for me. xChippy has done this, so I guess it also goes for consistency across the GD's. ok fixed
thx for recheck :3

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osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
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go go >.</
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

CXu wrote:

Yo, here's your recheck~~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. I have no idea if it matters, but you write these "Prismaillya Prisma Illya" tags in different orders in the difficulties. Might as well keep them consistent just to be safe :P oh woops lol fixed :3
  2. Sorry if I repeat myself. I'll try to remember what I've suggested before and what I haven't, but yeah, my memory sucks sometimes :P lolol
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are you able to make this stream look just a bit more even? So the curve looks smooth. tried my best :3
  2. 00:04:996 (7) - Makes sense to add a new combo here imo. It's similar to the NC at 00:07:853 (1) - fixed~
  3. 00:07:317 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream. Just make them look a little more... curvy I guess xD fixed I think o-o
  4. 01:24:995 (1,2,3) - I actually find if you extend (1) to end at 01:25:372 -, and delete (2) to play better, as you'll strictly follow the piano like this. hmm.. alright :3 fixed~
[Easy]
  1. Looks neat! yay \(=w=)/
All right. Almost there~ Poke me again when you're done I guess xD
Thanks for rechecking CXu :3/~!!
Updated~ now wait for Xinely :3
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

CXu wrote:

Yo, here's your recheck~~

[General]
  1. Inconsistency in tags. I have no idea if it matters, but you write these "Prismaillya Prisma Illya" tags in different orders in the difficulties. Might as well keep them consistent just to be safe :P
  2. Sorry if I repeat myself. I'll try to remember what I've suggested before and what I haven't, but yeah, my memory sucks sometimes :P
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:02:678 (2) - I still think you should move this down a bit so it makes more of a smooth curve with 00:02:142 (1) - okay tried it
  2. 00:05:531 (2,3) - Hmm, I think you should either drop the jumps here, or add more of a jump at 00:08:388 (2,3) - , to be more consistent. It's kind of weird when the first tme it comes up, it's more intense than the second time in-game, while the song sounds identical :P okay lemme try add jump
  3. 00:06:781 (2,3,4) - Maybe make this curve the other way? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/966410 It'll give a gentle flow from (1) into the (5) repeater. omg you suggest this before too lol , sorry i prefer my flow ><
  4. 00:18:388 (3) - Well, try the endpoint at 140;36 :P (Yeah I'm just saying it again). It looks neater as I said previously, and it also improves the flow a little bit imo (as you don't get that slight bend in the flow). done
  5. 00:51:600 (4,5) - This is a fairly big jump imo. It's the only "big" jump in the chorus that has a note involved. All the other jumps are between 2 sliders, which is easier to hit and more lenient in general. I also think the jump fits better if it's between 00:51:959 (5,1) - instead of 00:51:600 (4,5) - , since that'll give more emphasis on the downbeat at 00:52:138 - . But yeah, you should reduce the jump here a bit. okay move (5) so become consistency spacing here
  6. 01:07:138 (1,2,3) - Add claps? to follow the drums that goes in the same rhythm as the vocals. Also gives a bit more power to these 3 notes before the chorus repeats. omg seems so cute, fixed <3
  7. 01:25:561 (2) - Move this closer to (1)? Considering the gentleness of this part, even a small jump like this feels a bit forced to me. okay
  8. 01:26:295 (1) - I suggested this under [General] last time, but idk if you saw it or not: Consider ending this spinner on 01:29:756 - , as that's where I hear the song actually ending. xChippy has already done this, so it'll also be nice for consistency between GD's. Oh, and you don't need to map the drum at 01:26:295 - , as it's barely noticeable for a spinner to be on it anyway. Beginning the spinner at 01:26:400 - would just be following the piano instead of the drums :P Still, you're free to keep it as it is as well.
aw okay

All right. Almost there~ Poke me again when you're done I guess xD
thanks 4 recheck CXu >w<
go go chippy ><
osu file format v12

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Updated~
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:996 (7) - Well, you didn't add a NC here, although you said fixed, so yeah :P
  2. Oh and since we're at it: add claps on 00:04:643 (3) - and 00:07:495 (8) - ? For the drum. And whistle on 00:04:467 (1) - 00:07:317 (6) - To indicate the violin.
[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:26:424 (1) - You didn't stack this properly with 00:24:638 (1) - The small irregularity in spacing won't be noticeable (it's like 1.03x and 0.97x so yeah :P), so stack it properly~
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:285 (1) - Whoops, this isn't snapped on the red line, so the head is silent.
OKAY, I hope that's all xD
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi

CXu wrote:

[Umi's Normal]
  1. 00:26:424 (1) - You didn't stack this properly with 00:24:638 (1) - The small irregularity in spacing won't be noticeable (it's like 1.03x and 0.97x so yeah :P), so stack it properly~ Ops i moved the slider when i remade a bit the shape >.<
diff
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49958
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:starlog (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:starlog (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ちょうちょ
Creator:xChippy
Version:Umi's Normal
Source:Fate/kaleid liner PRISMA☆ILLYA
Tags:Opening -Umi- Xinely qoot8123 プリズマ☆イリヤ Silver Link Prisma Illya Prismaillya
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420,204,65530,2,0,P|464:132|420:32,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,44,66245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,104,66602,2,0,L|220:156,1,60,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,194,68566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,68923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,88,69280,6,0,P|256:144|212:192,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,274,71423,2,0,P|251:246|232:204,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,89,72138,6,0,P|384:120|420:220,1,240
300,204,73209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,204,74637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,74995,6,0,P|368:208|444:132,2,180,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,101,76423,2,0,B|194:110|165:88|165:88|106:109,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,146,76959,2,0,P|55:233|96:317,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,96,79280,5,4,0:0:0:0:
84,172,79637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,172,79816,2,0,P|112:220|232:236,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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422,156,81066,2,0,P|443:104|419:38,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,104,82495,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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220,48,84280,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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xChippy
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orz =w=
Fixed all and updated~
CXu
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CXu
All right, here we go then. Good luck!

*Insert random animu girl blowing bubbles here*
xChippy
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Thank you CXu~ :3/!!!!#%#*(@($@
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Oh God!!!. Again Chippy sama~. :o :o
Breeze
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Breeze
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:781 (2) - (nazi) Weird spacing, 1-2 too close compare to others
Call me back
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
lol, Already rank this breeze. :(
Plz don't =w=
xChippy
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xChippy

Breeze wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:781 (2) - (nazi) Weird spacing, 1-2 too close compare to others
Fixed~
Call me back
Thanks Breeze~ :3/!!
Breeze
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RANKED
-Neipezi
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-Neipezi
gratz \o/
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Oh Kami. Help me!! :o
Icemixxa
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Icemixxa
Gratz :D/
Umi
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Umi
Gratz chippy :3/
xChippy
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xChippy

Breeze wrote:

RANKED
Thanks Breeze~!!#%^*(^#(*

And thanks all \(>w<)/
NewRulerNA
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NewRulerNA
missing video in Xinely's Hard. please fix this ;_;

edit:
gratz :)
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Breeze
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Breeze

NewRulerNA wrote:

missing video in Xinely's Hard. please fix this ;_;
Unrank for now, be back soon
Breeze
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Breeze
Should be fine now, no score wiped, enjoy!
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
lol ,anyway, Congratz now, Re-ranked!! :D :D
Alarido
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Alarido
RANKEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUU ^.^


Congratz xChippy-chan ^^
qoot8123
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Congratz~~ :)
Satellite
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Congratz~~ ;)
Kinomi
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Kinomi
gratz!
happy623
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happy623
gratz \^q^/
jonathanlfj
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yayy congratz
[Epicz]
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gratz chippy :P
xChippy
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Thanks everyone~!!@$$@% \(>w<)/
scanter
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congratz ~ \o/
Unsfamiliar
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Nice ^^

Good job Chippy and co :)
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Gratz !
ReySHeL
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gratz~ :D
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