MMzz wrote:

Hi. /*Hi~

[Oni]
OD 6, HP 7. /*Increased both to 6, HP7 would be a bit far as Muzukashii has 5.

00:59:094 (91) - d, to maintain rhythm /*Keeping as kat for vocals.
01:03:128 (107) - d ^ /*^
02:07:666 (338) - k, to maintain rhythm. /*^
02:11:700 (355) - k ^ /*^
02:14:221 (366,367,368,369) - Try k dkd? Maintains the rhythm and flow much better. k ddk works too if you don't want to use dkd. /*Made ddk for the triple

The placement of the notes was very good, the rhythm just needs some fixing up! It felt very random and unnatural. A major improvement from the last map I modded from you though. Good job! Next time try to make a really strong rhythm from the song's beat/vocals first, then add the 1/4 in where it feels natural. /*Thanks, also I've made some other improvements due this.

Tasha wrote:

Here with a Taiko mod for you

[Dekaane's Muzukashii]

01:18:758 (123) - Would recommend a kat here. Not a big deal if you don't though. /*Done

01:21:531 (127) - I'd say delete this note to make the buildup you're doing consistent. /*Done

Add a don to 01:28:338 and 01:28:590 for more buildup into 01:29:347. /*Both added.

01:49:515 (200,201,202,203,204) - This and the repeat sections at 01:51:531 (205,206,207,208,209) and 01:53:548 (210,211,212,213,214) - Would probably play better as d kd dk repeated through these 3 bars. I realize you're trying to do colour switching patterns here but I just don't really feel it fits this case. /*Done

01:56:826 (219,220,221,222) - If you apply the above mod, definitely make this dkkd because the colour switch on the kddk before it actually does work quite well here if you use it in conjunction with the kd dk patterns, as its a variation of them. If it's not clear what I mean by variation here, feel free to ask me in game and I'll give a better explanation. /*Done

[Dekaane's Oni]

01:18:758 (172) - Use a kat here to keep consistency. You use a kat every 2 white ticks everywhere else between 01:23:296 to 01:29:347, so this is very out of place /*Done

01:52:792 (287) - Unless you want to switch 01:51:531 (283,284,285,286) - to be ddkd like you used before, I'd recommend making this a kat /*Done

01:57:582 (303,304,305) - I'd recommend using d kd here. That way you start off the bar / measure with a strong downbeat (the don) and you keep consistency with previous patterns (that d kd dk pattern you use here) /*Added a don between (303) and (304) instead, following the piano better.

02:01:868 (315) - Delete for consistency as mentioned above. /*Made a don instead.

02:25:817 (418,419,420,421,422,423,424) - This section's rhythm seems really jerky to me. Perhaps try something like this instead? /*Done


02:33:884 (454) - Considering you've been using a don for every other part just like this, perhaps you should use a don here too? If you do this though, I'd highly suggest changing the notes up at 02:34:136 (455,456). My suggestion would be to remove 455 and make 456 a kat, but other things could work too. /*Done

[Comments]

Everything is looking pretty solid here. PM me for a recheck once you've done the mod here and we'll see about a Taiko approval mark.

Wolf wrote:

This is awesome.
Here:
Go!

AnreFM wrote:

Because what this map need is just a few more small stuffs orz
lolollol perfect mapset alarido, just a few things though

[Starin']
00:35:901 (3) - The notes end at a quite awkward position here, not really assembling a pattern. The 30 degree rotation is a right decision, but maybe you can make it a bit like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/926852 ► Fixed ^^

[Touchin']
00:53:548 (2) - Since the reverse slider isn't very visible here(only covered by hitburst), I suggest to at least change the combo color for this one. The current one(white a bit grayish) isn't very contrast with the reverse arrow. So try the green or other darker ones, so that the reverse arrow doesn't blend with the slider and become more visible ► Changed the colour ^^

[Deep Love]
02:52:540 (2) - I am a bit intrigued for this note.. The overlap isn't too good for a blanket here. Move this out of overlap and try blanketing if possible :v one of possible way is to tweak 02:51:531 (3) - a little bit so that it will possible to make blankets without overlaps orz ► Changed the pattern a bit, so bad overlaps were fired (:

[Dake's Muzu]
00:36:658 (94) - d
01:07:666 (89) - k
02:24:052 (301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) - lol feels a bit weird to me, try dkddkkdk pattern here
02:32:876 (329,330,331,332,333) - I feel kkkkd is a bit too powerful for the lyric imo, try ddkkd
02:49:010 (381,382,383,384,385) - Try kdkdd here. kkk doesn't sound very good here

lol i guess that's all you need, btw Oni is okay, but try to use more patterns on stream, Dake :v
I hope that helps you~ btw feel free to kd this or not if it help you

Wolf wrote:

This is awesome.

pimpG wrote:

Wolf wrote:

This is awesome.

this...is...SPARTAA!



sorry i don't have 300 kds atm

pimpG wrote:

Wolf wrote:

This is awesome.

this...is...SPARTAA!



sorry i don't have 300 kds atm

Wolf wrote:

pimpG wrote:

<quote="Wolf">This is awesome.</quote>

this...is...SPARTAA!



sorry i don't have 300 kds atm

I feel challenged....so
MORE
>:D

Wolf wrote:

Tô dentro!
Faz tempo que to querendo entrar em uma collab com o pessoal do Brasil!
Confirma quem vai ta dentro e vamo decidir os tempos

pimpG wrote:

sure

melhor mover o assunto pra outro lugar antes que alguem da staff reclame?

1. 00:10:187 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's a bit disturbing when the spacing goes further than .02x from the previous object. Make sure to keep a nice and consistent spacing.
2. 00:35:901 (3) - Can you reverse and move this slider to have a nicer flow? Since the slider is under the previous slider, it's having a terrible flow. I suggest you to do something like that:
   
   Example

   
3. 02:14:221 (2) - This slider is not symmetric. What I mean is, the end of the slider is not properly aligned with the beginning and then, the slider's tick is not placed in the center of the slider, which makes it unsymmetric. It's pretty easy to make it symmetric: make the red node in the center then, since both beginning and end nodes are perfectly placed, disable the grid snap and move your red node, just, a, bit! and here we go :3
4. 02:46:994 - I feel like a finish would sound pretty great in here. if you look at the previous circle, you're emphasizing the lyrics and the word repeats on the second circle. On the first circle, you've added a finish, why not doing the same for this circle? It's not terrible nor breaking your consistency, it's following the lyrics properly! This is your choice to add it or not.

1. 00:52:540 (1,2) - I really don't like how it's flowin'. You could either reverse the curve of the slider (1) or either CTRL+G on the slider (2) and rearrange the next circles.
2. 00:59:094 (3) - With the lyrics, it would be playing better if you delete the circle (4) and then add a reverse arrow to this slider.
3. 01:23:296 (1,1,1) - the spacings are not consistent, in a certain way. If you look at your easiest difficulty, you've made a triangle form, which makes a nice spacing between them. You could actually do something similar or either make a square form, etc.
4. 02:07:666 (4) - You could actually do something similar like I've mentioned you on 00:59:094 (3) - . I would actually suggest you the same thing on 02:11:700 (3,4) - , but no. The lyrics are different here, which does not sounds good with the reverse.

1. 00:05:649 (5,6,7,8) - This part is totally not the reflection of the previous four circles. You can do better by reversing them with CTRL+G, stacking all the circles with the previous and then, reversing them again. It would look perfect.
2. 01:04:641 (4) - To do like you've done to 00:43:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , you should be adding a new combo here and then, delete the new combo on 01:05:145 (1) - . To be honest, it shouldn't be so bad.
3. 01:06:658 (5,6,1,2,3) - OMG! THIS IS SO PERFECT!
4. 01:29:347 (5) - Feels like a new combo should be added here, don't you think?
5. 02:33:884 (5) - This combo is getting a bit long, it would be suggested to add a new combo here or, on the previous circle.

1. 00:08:170 - Add a clap here, it's too quiet and with your consistency, you should be adding one.
2. 01:27:330 (5) - Since the combo is first, too long, secondly have a different sound, you should be adding a new combo here.
3. 02:03:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aweh♥ that's cute♥

Gabe wrote:

Hai #modreqs.
Quick look :3 ^w^

Starin'

1. 00:10:187 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's a bit disturbing when the spacing goes further than .02x from the previous object. Make sure to keep a nice and consistent spacing. ► Fixed.
2. 00:35:901 (3) - Can you reverse and move this slider to have a nicer flow? Since the slider is under the previous slider, it's having a terrible flow. I suggest you to do something like that: ► Fixed.
   
   Example

   
   ► Good
3. 02:14:221 (2) - This slider is not symmetric. What I mean is, the end of the slider is not properly aligned with the beginning and then, the slider's tick is not placed in the center of the slider, which makes it unsymmetric. It's pretty easy to make it symmetric: make the red node in the center then, since both beginning and end nodes are perfectly placed, disable the grid snap and move your red node, just, a, bit! and here we go :3 ► Fixed.
4. 02:46:994 - I feel like a finish would sound pretty great in here. if you look at the previous circle, you're emphasizing the lyrics and the word repeats on the second circle. On the first circle, you've added a finish, why not doing the same for this circle? It's not terrible nor breaking your consistency, it's following the lyrics properly! This is your choice to add it or not. ► Fixed.

I really love this difficulty! It's pretty simple and it's ready to be ranked.

Touchin'

1. 00:52:540 (1,2) - I really don't like how it's flowin'. You could either reverse the curve of the slider (1) or either CTRL+G on the slider (2) and rearrange the next circles. ► Fixed as first alternative.
2. 00:59:094 (3) - With the lyrics, it would be playing better if you delete the circle (4) and then add a reverse arrow to this slider. ► Right ^^.
3. 01:23:296 (1,1,1) - the spacings are not consistent, in a certain way. If you look at your easiest difficulty, you've made a triangle form, which makes a nice spacing between them. You could actually do something similar or either make a square form, etc. ► Good idea (:
4. 02:07:666 (4) - You could actually do something similar like I've mentioned you on 00:59:094 (3) - . I would actually suggest you the same thing on 02:11:700 (3,4) - , but no. The lyrics are different here, which does not sounds good with the reverse. ► Applied only the first, where lyrics are equal.

Pretty simple and good, just like said on Easy. Also great for ranking!

Kissin'

1. 00:05:649 (5,6,7,8) - This part is totally not the reflection of the previous four circles. You can do better by reversing them with CTRL+G, stacking all the circles with the previous and then, reversing them again. It would look perfect. ► Fixed.
2. 01:04:641 (4) - To do like you've done to 00:43:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , you should be adding a new combo here and then, delete the new combo on 01:05:145 (1) - . To be honest, it shouldn't be so bad. ► Fixed by jonathanlfj -- yes, Kissin' is our collab.
3. 01:06:658 (5,6,1,2,3) - OMG! THIS IS SO PERFECT! ► by jflj -- Elite Mapper ♥ .
4. 01:29:347 (5) - Feels like a new combo should be added here, don't you think? ► Perfectly.
5. 02:33:884 (5) - This combo is getting a bit long, it would be suggested to add a new combo here or, on the previous circle. ► Added new combo here.

I think its my favorite difficulty. Also ready for ranking~!

Deep Love

1. 00:08:170 - Add a clap here, it's too quiet and with your consistency, you should be adding one. ► Added.
2. 01:27:330 (5) - Since the combo is first, too long, secondly have a different sound, you should be adding a new combo here. ► Placed NC too.
3. 02:03:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aweh♥ that's cute♥ ► Thanksiee~ .

Pretty good!

Actually, poke LunarSakuya to recheck your map and this time, tell her that I WANT HER TO RECHECK IT. even if she's busy. ♥ -- But get a Taiko icon first :3

Good luck!!

Tasha wrote:

Sorry for the long wait on this. Been away for a little while!

Rechecked everything and it all looks good, so lets get this going~

Gabe wrote:

Hai, thanks Tasha ♥

Gabe wrote:

no need

Gabe wrote:

no need

LunarSakuya wrote:

Starin'
00:40:943 (1) - NC ► Done.

Kissin'
00:11:952 (3) - try Ctrl + H for a pinwheel pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968888 Might look neater and more intentional ► Done.
00:20:775 (1) - Drum clap fits the bgm more here imo. And possibly drum sample set with the next 2 notes. You could lower the volume if it's too loud~ ► Done, fits better (:.
00:55:061 (1,2,3) - Highly suggest you space these out. The touching of the notes would usually imply a 1/4 rhythm or something smaller. Especially with a lower bpm/AR, this could cause confusion with some players. Try to follow 01:29:347 (1,2,3) - ► Good idea (:.
01:29:347 (1,2) - Finish on the heads ► Done.
01:31:363 (1) - ^ ► Done.
02:41:952 (1) - try curving the last half of the slider to blanket (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968893 Would look smoother with the other notes, as I found it strange this was the only angled slider ► Done. Although it's part of jonathanlfj, he authorised me, so I did it too (:

Deep Love
00:20:775 (1,2) - same as Kissin', consider using the drum sample set ► Done.
01:10:691 (5) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bgm ► Done.
01:13:212 (1) - ^ ► Done.
01:14:725 (6) - ^ on tail ► Done. Much better.
01:31:363 (9) - Finish ► Done.
02:21:784 (6) - ^ ► Done.
02:37:666 (1) - ^ on tail ► Done.
Yeah basically just watch out for potential finishes ► Added + 1 on 02:45:985 (2) - (at head), felt it needed here too.
02:53:548 (5) - Sounded a bit too loud, I'd slightly lower the volume to maybe around 40% ► Right ^^.

call me back~

LunarSakuya wrote:

i can feel the love in this collab

Gabe wrote:

I think its my favorite difficulty. Also ready for ranking~!

Shinchaechae wrote:

SPOILER

2013-08-20 23:19 Shinchaechae: *downloads* what about it?
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: took lots of work from me
2013-08-20 23:19 Shinchaechae: ooooh you made it?
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: yeah
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: except the Taiko diffs 
2013-08-20 23:20 Alarido: the Hard diff (called Kissin') is a collab 
2013-08-20 23:25 Shinchaechae: THIS MUST BE RANKED
2013-08-20 23:25 Shinchaechae: i really like it!! it's fun and it's not overmapped ^^
2013-08-20 23:25 Alarido: Just waiting Tasha for review Taiko diffs, 
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: Thanks~ ^^ 
2013-08-20 23:26 Shinchaechae: your style is kinda similar to grumd's! i love it~~
2013-08-20 23:26 Shinchaechae: ganbate~
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: ^^
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: grumd's? 
2013-08-20 23:27 Alarido: For this work I left symmetry, but it's not common 

About Chae-chan... maybe she referred to the whole mapset (or the standar diffs).