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Alarido
Peguei a Lunar in-game... mas foi-se com o vento do tempo...

Peguei o/a Tasha... vamo ver no q dá rs.
Aurele
Hai #modreqs.
Quick look :3

Starin'
  1. 00:10:187 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's a bit disturbing when the spacing goes further than .02x from the previous object. Make sure to keep a nice and consistent spacing.
  2. 00:35:901 (3) - Can you reverse and move this slider to have a nicer flow? Since the slider is under the previous slider, it's having a terrible flow. I suggest you to do something like that:
  3. 02:14:221 (2) - This slider is not symmetric. What I mean is, the end of the slider is not properly aligned with the beginning and then, the slider's tick is not placed in the center of the slider, which makes it unsymmetric. It's pretty easy to make it symmetric: make the red node in the center then, since both beginning and end nodes are perfectly placed, disable the grid snap and move your red node, just, a, bit! and here we go :3
  4. 02:46:994 - I feel like a finish would sound pretty great in here. if you look at the previous circle, you're emphasizing the lyrics and the word repeats on the second circle. On the first circle, you've added a finish, why not doing the same for this circle? It's not terrible nor breaking your consistency, it's following the lyrics properly! This is your choice to add it or not.
I really love this difficulty! It's pretty simple and it's ready to be ranked.

Touchin'
  1. 00:52:540 (1,2) - I really don't like how it's flowin'. You could either reverse the curve of the slider (1) or either CTRL+G on the slider (2) and rearrange the next circles.
  2. 00:59:094 (3) - With the lyrics, it would be playing better if you delete the circle (4) and then add a reverse arrow to this slider.
  3. 01:23:296 (1,1,1) - the spacings are not consistent, in a certain way. If you look at your easiest difficulty, you've made a triangle form, which makes a nice spacing between them. You could actually do something similar or either make a square form, etc.
  4. 02:07:666 (4) - You could actually do something similar like I've mentioned you on 00:59:094 (3) - . I would actually suggest you the same thing on 02:11:700 (3,4) - , but no. The lyrics are different here, which does not sounds good with the reverse.
Pretty simple and good, just like said on Easy. Also great for ranking!

Kissin'
  1. 00:05:649 (5,6,7,8) - This part is totally not the reflection of the previous four circles. You can do better by reversing them with CTRL+G, stacking all the circles with the previous and then, reversing them again. It would look perfect.
  2. 01:04:641 (4) - To do like you've done to 00:43:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , you should be adding a new combo here and then, delete the new combo on 01:05:145 (1) - . To be honest, it shouldn't be so bad.
  3. 01:06:658 (5,6,1,2,3) - OMG! THIS IS SO PERFECT!
  4. 01:29:347 (5) - Feels like a new combo should be added here, don't you think?
  5. 02:33:884 (5) - This combo is getting a bit long, it would be suggested to add a new combo here or, on the previous circle.
I think its my favorite difficulty. Also ready for ranking~!

Deep Love
  1. 00:08:170 - Add a clap here, it's too quiet and with your consistency, you should be adding one.
  2. 01:27:330 (5) - Since the combo is first, too long, secondly have a different sound, you should be adding a new combo here.
  3. 02:03:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aweh♥ that's cute♥
Pretty good!

Actually, poke LunarSakuya to recheck your map and this time, tell her that I WANT HER TO RECHECK IT. even if she's busy. ♥ -- But get a Taiko icon first :3

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
Alarido

Gabe wrote:

Hai #modreqs.
Quick look :3 ^w^

Starin'
  1. 00:10:187 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. It's a bit disturbing when the spacing goes further than .02x from the previous object. Make sure to keep a nice and consistent spacing. ► Fixed.
  2. 00:35:901 (3) - Can you reverse and move this slider to have a nicer flow? Since the slider is under the previous slider, it's having a terrible flow. I suggest you to do something like that: ► Fixed.
    ► Good :D
  3. 02:14:221 (2) - This slider is not symmetric. What I mean is, the end of the slider is not properly aligned with the beginning and then, the slider's tick is not placed in the center of the slider, which makes it unsymmetric. It's pretty easy to make it symmetric: make the red node in the center then, since both beginning and end nodes are perfectly placed, disable the grid snap and move your red node, just, a, bit! and here we go :3 ► Fixed.
  4. 02:46:994 - I feel like a finish would sound pretty great in here. if you look at the previous circle, you're emphasizing the lyrics and the word repeats on the second circle. On the first circle, you've added a finish, why not doing the same for this circle? It's not terrible nor breaking your consistency, it's following the lyrics properly! This is your choice to add it or not. ► Fixed.
I really love this difficulty! It's pretty simple and it's ready to be ranked.

Touchin'
  1. 00:52:540 (1,2) - I really don't like how it's flowin'. You could either reverse the curve of the slider (1) or either CTRL+G on the slider (2) and rearrange the next circles. ► Fixed as first alternative.
  2. 00:59:094 (3) - With the lyrics, it would be playing better if you delete the circle (4) and then add a reverse arrow to this slider. ► Right ^^.
  3. 01:23:296 (1,1,1) - the spacings are not consistent, in a certain way. If you look at your easiest difficulty, you've made a triangle form, which makes a nice spacing between them. You could actually do something similar or either make a square form, etc. ► Good idea (:
  4. 02:07:666 (4) - You could actually do something similar like I've mentioned you on 00:59:094 (3) - . I would actually suggest you the same thing on 02:11:700 (3,4) - , but no. The lyrics are different here, which does not sounds good with the reverse. ► Applied only the first, where lyrics are equal.
Pretty simple and good, just like said on Easy. Also great for ranking!

Kissin'
  1. 00:05:649 (5,6,7,8) - This part is totally not the reflection of the previous four circles. You can do better by reversing them with CTRL+G, stacking all the circles with the previous and then, reversing them again. It would look perfect. ► Fixed.
  2. 01:04:641 (4) - To do like you've done to 00:43:716 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , you should be adding a new combo here and then, delete the new combo on 01:05:145 (1) - . To be honest, it shouldn't be so bad. ► Fixed by jonathanlfj -- yes, Kissin' is our collab.
  3. 01:06:658 (5,6,1,2,3) - OMG! THIS IS SO PERFECT! ► by jflj -- Elite Mapper ♥ .
  4. 01:29:347 (5) - Feels like a new combo should be added here, don't you think? ► Perfectly.
  5. 02:33:884 (5) - This combo is getting a bit long, it would be suggested to add a new combo here or, on the previous circle. ► Added new combo here.
I think its my favorite difficulty. Also ready for ranking~!

Deep Love
  1. 00:08:170 - Add a clap here, it's too quiet and with your consistency, you should be adding one. ► Added.
  2. 01:27:330 (5) - Since the combo is first, too long, secondly have a different sound, you should be adding a new combo here. ► Placed NC too.
  3. 02:03:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aweh♥ that's cute♥ ► Thanksiee~ .
Pretty good!

Actually, poke LunarSakuya to recheck your map and this time, tell her that I WANT HER TO RECHECK IT. even if she's busy. ♥ -- But get a Taiko icon first :3

Good luck!!
Thank very much Gabe ♥ Now let's poke some Taiko bats ^.^

Att.
Topic Starter
Alarido
@Gabe: excuse me 'coz I'd forgot give you kd... now fixed (:

@Tasha: where you are??? We NEED you :3

I hope win the Ranking "Lottery"¹ very very soon as possible (:

No matter the world say, or what the forum title displays, Gabe is osu! Alumni for me ♥

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¹ I said "Lottery" 'coz it's more likely hard getting maps ranked, even for very active (and nice) pro mappers... and I hope that day in which the maps get ranked soon, unless the mapper be lazy or mean like few ppl (don't nominate them here, please (: )
karterfreak
Sorry for the long wait on this. Been away for a little while!

Rechecked everything and it all looks good, so lets get this going~ :)
Topic Starter
Alarido

Tasha wrote:

Sorry for the long wait on this. Been away for a little while!

Rechecked everything and it all looks good, so lets get this going~ :)

EEEEEEEEH ^.^ Very Very Thank yopu very much Tashaaaaa ^.^

*Fazendo q nem a Daiane dos Santos só q aki dentro de mim, vários duplos saltos mortais carpados yeeeeeeeeessssss!!!!*
AnreFM
yeeshh just a little bit more~ *runs
Topic Starter
Alarido
Finally I can feel the raising sun is coming soon in my osu!life ♥ it feels like 5:39 a. m.

EDIT: Sorry if you can't find me ingame online today. I'll try be there :3 just saying my broadband connection is a bit poor today, falling each 5 minutes and so on... this kind of problems is very common here in Rio, unfortunatelly ._.
DakeDekaane
Thanks Tasha <:
Aurele
Hai, thanks Tasha ♥
jonathanlfj

Gabe wrote:

Hai, thanks Tasha ♥
time to @LunarSakuya
Aurele
no need
Topic Starter
Alarido

Gabe wrote:

no need
Thank you very much gabeee~ ♥

BUBBLEAAADOOOOOOOOOO ^.^


Yeeee~
22:52 Gabe: boo!
22:52 Alarido: aaahh
22:52 Alarido: hehe
22:52 *Gabe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/254824 BRIGHT - Ichinen Nikagetsu Hatsuka [Deep Love]]
22:52 Gabe: let's do this
22:53 Alarido: spec you?
22:53 Gabe: no
22:53 Gabe: rechecking
22:53 Alarido: sure
22:53 Alarido: ready
22:54 Gabe: 01:05:145 (11) - while looking at the map, this object's combo seems to be wrong since it isn't following the previous object. I suggest you to add a new combo here and delete the combo on 01:05:901 (1) -
22:54 Alarido: done
22:55 Alarido: feels better (:
22:57 Alarido: also I curved a bit this 01:14:725 (6) - so it feels slightly better too
22:57 Gabe: oh, indeed
22:59 Gabe: Kissin'
22:59 Gabe: 00:12:708 (4) - don't you think you should do like you've done ^
22:59 Gabe: ?
23:00 Alarido: a flow break ><
23:01 Alarido: or just the blanket?
23:01 Gabe: I was not talking about the combo
23:01 Gabe: but making it more curved
23:03 Alarido: sure
23:03 Alarido: and curved 00:10:691 (2) - too, in the same fashion
23:03 Gabe: alright
23:08 Gabe: guess you can update
23:08 Alarido: right
23:11 Alarido: done
23:12 Alarido: updated (:
23:12 Gabe: c:
23:12 Gabe: Congratulation
23:12 Alarido: eeee ^^
23:13 Alarido: thank you very much Gabeee~ :3
23:13 Gabe: you're welcome (:
23:14 Alarido: the sun is almost raising on my osu!life ♥
23:14 Gabe: lawl (:
Raose
oh dang, congrats !
AnreFM
*chanting lvl 5 spells to summon BAT*
pimp
parabéns pela primeira bolha no seu map :)
jonathanlfj

Gabe wrote:

no need
lol fine, @LunarSakuya rank pls
LunarSakuya
Starin'
00:40:943 (1) - NC

Kissin'
00:11:952 (3) - try Ctrl + H for a pinwheel pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968888 Might look neater and more intentional
00:20:775 (1) - Drum clap fits the bgm more here imo. And possibly drum sample set with the next 2 notes. You could lower the volume if it's too loud~
00:55:061 (1,2,3) - Highly suggest you space these out. The touching of the notes would usually imply a 1/4 rhythm or something smaller. Especially with a lower bpm/AR, this could cause confusion with some players. Try to follow 01:29:347 (1,2,3) -
01:29:347 (1,2) - Finish on the heads
01:31:363 (1) - ^
02:41:952 (1) - try curving the last half of the slider to blanket (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968893 Would look smoother with the other notes, as I found it strange this was the only angled slider

Deep Love
00:20:775 (1,2) - same as Kissin', consider using the drum sample set
01:10:691 (5) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bgm
01:13:212 (1) - ^
01:14:725 (6) - ^ on tail
01:31:363 (9) - Finish
02:21:784 (6) - ^
02:37:666 (1) - ^ on tail
Yeah basically just watch out for potential finishes
02:53:548 (5) - Sounded a bit too loud, I'd slightly lower the volume to maybe around 40%

call me back~
Suimya
Gogo Almost there \:D/
Topic Starter
Alarido

LunarSakuya wrote:

Starin'
00:40:943 (1) - NC ► Done.

Kissin'
00:11:952 (3) - try Ctrl + H for a pinwheel pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968888 Might look neater and more intentional ► Done.
00:20:775 (1) - Drum clap fits the bgm more here imo. And possibly drum sample set with the next 2 notes. You could lower the volume if it's too loud~ ► Done, fits better (:.
00:55:061 (1,2,3) - Highly suggest you space these out. The touching of the notes would usually imply a 1/4 rhythm or something smaller. Especially with a lower bpm/AR, this could cause confusion with some players. Try to follow 01:29:347 (1,2,3) - ► Good idea (:.
01:29:347 (1,2) - Finish on the heads ► Done.
01:31:363 (1) - ^ ► Done.
02:41:952 (1) - try curving the last half of the slider to blanket (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/968893 Would look smoother with the other notes, as I found it strange this was the only angled slider ► Done. Although it's part of jonathanlfj, he authorised me, so I did it too (:

Deep Love
00:20:775 (1,2) - same as Kissin', consider using the drum sample set ► Done.
01:10:691 (5) - Finish on head, i hear cymbals in the bgm ► Done.
01:13:212 (1) - ^ ► Done.
01:14:725 (6) - ^ on tail ► Done. Much better.
01:31:363 (9) - Finish ► Done.
02:21:784 (6) - ^ ► Done.
02:37:666 (1) - ^ on tail ► Done.
Yeah basically just watch out for potential finishes ► Added + 1 on 02:45:985 (2) - (at head), felt it needed here too.
02:53:548 (5) - Sounded a bit too loud, I'd slightly lower the volume to maybe around 40% ► Right ^^.

call me back~


Thaaaanksie~ very much Lunar <3

Let's tread our path to glory, jonaaaaa~ and Dakeeee :3
DakeDekaane
It's happening

<:
LunarSakuya
(^_^)
jonathanlfj
congratulations~
(^_^)
Cancel
random scrollong here

grats
Oyatsu
Again, this map :o
Congratz~ :D :D
Topic Starter
Alarido
Thanksiiiiie~ Lunar <3

Thanks People ;3

Now Special Thanks to...

[pimpG]
Brigadãããão cara! A Big... a Gigantic Thank you very Much :3 For that day you came here and said something like "The map is bad, needs remap". First, I got desolated, but... a time after, I dive into this map for a "submarine-like work"... It was hard to remap and get mods... but now it's here, quality RANKED ♥ Thaaankyoooou pimp <3

[DakeDekaane]
Thanky you for your efforts on Taiko diffs. Since I saw the other Ranked versions had no Taiko diffs, the idea came and growed.
Including also thanks for Tasha and MMzz, and Taiko moders.

[jonathanlfj]
Aaaaaah ♥ Let's rejoice on our first RANKED Collab ♥ Sure, this is really the first collab I take part ^^ and, sure, I'll not forget some people said about it:

LunarSakuya wrote:

i can feel the love in this collab

Gabe wrote:

I think its my favorite difficulty. Also ready for ranking~!

Shinchaechae wrote:

SPOILER
2013-08-20 23:19 Shinchaechae: *downloads* what about it?
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: took lots of work from me
2013-08-20 23:19 Shinchaechae: ooooh you made it?
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: yeah
2013-08-20 23:19 Alarido: except the Taiko diffs
2013-08-20 23:20 Alarido: the Hard diff (called Kissin') is a collab
2013-08-20 23:25 Shinchaechae: THIS MUST BE RANKED
2013-08-20 23:25 Shinchaechae: i really like it!! it's fun and it's not overmapped ^^
2013-08-20 23:25 Alarido: Just waiting Tasha for review Taiko diffs,
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: Thanks~ ^^
2013-08-20 23:26 Shinchaechae: your style is kinda similar to grumd's! i love it~~
2013-08-20 23:26 Shinchaechae: ganbate~
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: ^^
2013-08-20 23:26 Alarido: grumd's?
2013-08-20 23:27 Alarido: For this work I left symmetry, but it's not common
About Chae-chan... maybe she referred to the whole mapset (or the standar diffs).
[AnreFM]
You modded the map twice, and helped a lot twice ;3 and supported it, and for stars too (:
Thank you very much Anreee~ and go blessing your maps too (:

[Special Dedication]
I wanna dedicate this map for... Lolitsune~

[and... that's it]
This is my first Ranked map, I hope it'll not the last too... So many songs to map, I hope rank one by one 'till my last day.

Thanks for all ♥ stars, supporting, advices, mods ♥

THAT'S IT. LET'S TREAD OUR PATH TO THE GLORY ♥
TOGETHER, not alone.
FOREVER and EVER ♥

Att.

P.S.: Well, today is Independece Day on my Country ^^ September 7th *singing the National Hymn*

"Sic itur ad astra."
"AD SUMUS"


Kinomi
>.</hi~hi~ gratz
Aurele
Congratulation!! ♥
Raose
can i get my own special box for people to thank :)))))))


oh and congrats :))))
DakeDekaane
Congrats Alarido on your first ranked, go for more~ :3
mingmichael
Cogratsss Alarido and Dekaane!!!! :D
Hatori-kun
Mapper brasileiro :D

Parabéns na first ranked!
pimp
parabens 8-)
AnreFM
OMG Gratz Alaridoooo *OuO*/
-Neipezi
gratz xDDD
Topic Starter
Alarido
Thanks to everyone ♥

*going to work hard on next maps*
Bariton
parabains
Arrival
Congratz Alarido ! ~
787B
Parabéns pelo primeiro mapa ranked :)
Topic Starter
Alarido
Obrigado a todos ;) de coração ^^

Thank you all ;) from my inside ♥


Merci^^ | Grazie^^ | Gracias^^ | Danke^^ | Cпасибо^^ | Terima kasih^^

감사합니다!^^ | ありがとう!^^ | 謝謝!^^ | Köszönöm^^

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@jonathanlfj: thank you very much for our first Ranked collab ♥
and, if you, someday, if you get interested on map that full version, feel free to call me for a Insane collab, or a Normal/hard guest diff (or both), and remember me I'll arrange the video for you too (:
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