Quiz-chan wrote:

Just passing by~

[General]
BG has wrong size. (AFAIK BGs have to be scaled to 1024x768 as maximum) {For 16:9, 1366x768 is accepted}

[Red Rose]
Being the easiest diff in the mapset and yet having 2,4 stars is a little high, eh?
Anyway, nothing to comment here.

[Crimson Rose]
woah, spacing isn't really consistent...

01:01:797 (1,2) - In my opinion, this doesn't really fit and doesn't flow too good. Why don't you just use normal arcs?
01:42:073 (1) - Doesn't this spinner end somehow.... offbeat? {I can't find the exact beat, so used another one further back.}
02:56:076 (2) - There is nothing audible in the background (well, for me) that deserves being mapped 1/4. Make 1/2 out of it.
02:58:476 (2) - Same for him.

[Crescent Rose]
01:42:073 (1) - Offbeat spinner again?
02:14:173 (1) - Erase clap on slider end.
02:18:223 (3,4,5,6,1) - Spacing issues among the pattern. {Added NC}
03:04:476 (1) - Definitely place a NC here.

[Redzero]
00:36:083 (1) - Might be considered a nazi suggestion: make this a better blanket.
01:01:797 (1) - Unappealing slider. Don't let the end touch the start.
01:30:973 (1,2) - Unappealing overlap. Please re-arrange this.

Awesome map is awesome. Have my star.~

Quiz-chan wrote:

[Redzero]
00:36:083 (1) - Might be considered a nazi suggestion: make this a better blanket. ok
01:01:797 (1) - Unappealing slider. Don't let the end touch the start. nah
01:30:973 (1,2) - Unappealing overlap. Please re-arrange this. ^

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

Alarido wrote:

[Redzero]
♥ Nice Diff!
01:52:423 (9) - Move to x:180 y:284, better pattern of 4 notes. lolwut?
01:54:148 (8) - Move 1 grid left for nicer quintuplet streamette (: em... yeah... but for perfect spacing need to move 01:54:298 (10,11) - 1 grid right

Alarido wrote:

M4M From My Queue (:
Thank you for helpful mod!

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[notice][Red Rose]
♥ Nice diff ^^
01:30:973 (4) - Move it 1 grid right to a slightly better spacing and mainly pattern symmetry
01:36:373 (1) - Move it 1 grid down, same reasons.
02:56:676 (3) - Move the last dot to x:(keep the same) y:316 (currently y is at 315)... Well you can ignore this 'coz does not affect visual symmetry -- do it if and only if you're perfectionist like Adrian Monk and me.

[Crimson Rose]
♥ Nice diff ^^

[Crescent Rose]
♥ Nice? More likely PERFECT *.*

and... That's it ^^

The video and song are AWESOME!!! Good choice ♥ Very strongly well fitting the Song-Video-Maps are among themselves!
It reminds me (dunno the reason but I feel your map could be compared with) that awesome ranked beatmap: Masayoshi Minoshima feat. nomico - Bad Apple!!

Very GL for Rank!

Deserves a !!!!

Att.

Hellzero wrote:

Alarido wrote:

[Redzero]
♥ Nice Diff!
01:52:423 (9) - Move to x:180 y:284, better pattern of 4 notes. lolwut?
01:54:148 (8) - Move 1 grid left for nicer quintuplet streamette (: em... yeah... but for perfect spacing need to move 01:54:298 (10,11) - 1 grid right

anyway thx for check.
JInxyjem plz fix "01:54:298 (10,11) - 1 grid right"

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165885,300,4,1,0,30,1,1

Loli Cjj wrote:

I'll mod this later. I fell in love with the music that I'm afraid I only looping the song without modding it.

But the diff is great, although from my quick view Crescent Rose doesn't looks like Insane (Hard with big spacing at the last kiai)

ololol

btw here's the better timing :

85,857.142857142857,4,2,0,15,1,0
74780,300,3,1,0,30,1,0
146810,461.538461538462,4,1,0,30,1,0
148685,465.116279069767,4,1,0,30,1,0
150545,491.803278688525,4,1,0,30,1,0
152512,500,4,1,0,30,1,0
154512,517.241379310345,4,1,0,30,1,0
156580,526.315789473684,4,1,0,30,1,0
165885,300,4,1,0,30,1,1

Or, if you hate to open .osu. . .
http://puu.sh/2ZV0s.png

Your hitsound should be more audible, I can't hear it clearly. Consider to use 60+ volume for soft sampleset

For some part, you could use taiko-normal-hitclap because I found that it fits!

Here is the mod with unchanged bpm.

=Red Rose=
1. 00:41:226 (1) - I hate how this slider broke the flow. {Doesn't feel flow-breaking imo, when taking sliderball leniency into account
2. 01:05:226 (1) - End this spinner at 01:08:601 because there is the exact place where the girl said "gold"
3. 01:29:173 (1) - Obviously ugly since it placed too near, but it has a long delay. Consider to place this somewhere else.
4. 01:25:873 (2) - How about put it at (387, 166) for a better look? And the flow is suddenly get sharp . . . so it's ugly
5. 01:42:073 (1) - End this spinner at 01:43:573
6. 01:57:973 - At this part you can start using whistle every strong strings plays. {I don't really like the sound}

=Crimson Rose=
1. 00:41:226 (1) - Instead of this slider that quite not good imo (flow uh), how about a cone shape? http://puu.sh/2ZWHG.jpg {Not that flow-breaking imo}
2. 01:05:226 (1) - End this spinner at 01:08:601 because there is the exact place where the girl said "gold"
3. 01:27:373 (4,1) - It's so empty. Add a beat pattern like this http://puu.sh/2ZWMD.jpg
4. 01:42:073 (1) - End this spinner at 01:43:573

=Crescent Rose=
1. 01:05:226 (1) - End this spinner at 01:08:601 because there is the exact place where the girl said "gold"
2. 01:42:073 (1) - End this spinner at 01:43:573
3. 01:58:873 (5) - orz, big spacing and it's quite hard to see since the combo color is quite dark, although it's far from black color (like thie bg). Consider to use NC or fix this.

=Hellzero=
I was hoping it has something related to rose, though, but it's up to you.
1. 01:31:423 (2) - One, the shape is ugly. Second, it's an ugy overlap. Third, spacing (200 bpm 1/2 3.0x is quite . . . mean). Try this http://puu.sh/2ZXDV.jpg


Yep, I love this song.
Remember that most of my mod is suggestion.
Good luck.

Searaphim wrote:

I love this song so much! I sure hope you're working hard on it ^.^ The current version is unplayable though it's obvious that it's because you're editing it though

neonat wrote:

Minor rhythm suggestions~

Crescent Rose

02:08:473 (10,11) - don't stack these 2 {Why not? It fits the music, unless theres another reason.}
02:13:123 - add a note
02:14:023 - ^
02:23:623 - ^
02:25:423 (2) - shorten slider to end at 02:25:723 and add a note at 02:25:873
why not add notes at 02:56:751 -, 02:56:826 and 02:56:901 like the other parts with similar music
Good luck~

Raging Bull wrote:

Wow this map is really nice.

Red:
nothing big to me.
02:15:073 (4) - Maybe make this into 1/1 slider and then add a note? It feels awkward to me as there is a strong beat but slider passes over it. Plus there's a large gap that should give beginners a good break already and time to read it.
02:26:798 (1) - Apparently I am told this spinner is unsnapped. Perhaps check it?

02:52:476 (4) -
02:59:676 (4) - Perhaps change these two sliders into 2/1 slider instead? I kinda like how the other sliders just end as new stanza begin as if it's slowly (I think?) it build tension as it ends on downbeat. The repeat kinda ruins that moment for me. {Interesting, but the slider placements feel wonky if I do that, though...

Crimson:
00:39:514 (5) - Maybe make this a 2/1 slider? to me the silence is kinda awkward as she is saying rest. If you do add slider, maybe make it a bit slower like x.8 also? Seems like a good place for slowdown.
02:53:076 (1) - Normally I would keep NC on downbeats, but since you didn't earlier. Remove NC for consistency?
Then you got a few here and there that has NC and don't because of how slider end ends on downbeat, but up to you to make them the same or not.

Crescent:
02:20:323 (2,3) - Well this kinda surprise me. There wasn't exactly a 1/2 jump you mapped after the music calmed down (cannot find the term x_x) so this jump was kinda unexpected. Perhaps use normal distance snapping here? I mean 02:19:573 (1,2,3,4) - is the only part that seemed fast pace compared to then notes after this. {It feels ok to me, and the next similar tune also has similar jumps.
02:56:151 (2,3,4,5) - Streams kinda felt weird to me here. I prefer if you just made it a circle really. If you wanted to make it harder, perhaps make the music with similar melody like at 02:47:676 (4,5,6,7,1) - a jump instead? {It's the beginning of a pattern of 2 streams and then 5 1/2s, though, so I would prefer to keep it like this.}
02:54:876 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This one I don't mind.
03:00:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - If you do keep the streams, can you at least make these the same spacing like the rest of the streams? Felt kinda weird for me to see spaced streams and then a stack one in the middle and the more spaced streams after.

Hellozero:
02:45:876 (1) - Perhaps add finish to beginning? Feels bland to me since kiai started and nothing to really back it up with hitsound.
02:56:076 (4) - For parts in the music with similar melody and mapped like this, perhaps remove 1 repeat and add circle? I think having to click the circle at 02:56:376 has a better feel than just holding it as slider ends.

Not much but yeah, good song. Good luck.

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Hellzero=
I was hoping it has something related to rose, though, but it's up to you.
1. 01:31:423 (2) - One, the shape is ugly. Second, it's an ugy overlap. Third, spacing (200 bpm 1/2 3.0x is quite . . . mean).

neonat wrote:

Redzero
02:04:123 - something should be here instead of being in the middle of a slider
03:02:601 (8) - remove
03:02:901 - add a note

Raging Bull wrote:

Hellozero:
02:45:876 (1) - Perhaps add finish to beginning? Feels bland to me since kiai started and nothing to really back it up with hitsound. added
02:56:076 (4) - For parts in the music with similar melody and mapped like this, perhaps remove 1 repeat and add circle? I think having to click the circle at 02:56:376 has a better feel than just holding it as slider ends. really good idea, added

01:08 Teara: wow, that huge increase in difficulty in Crescent Rose
01:08 JInxyjem: as in from Crimson > Crescent or Crescent itself
01:09 *Teara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/219394 Jeff Williams feat. Casey Lee Williams - Red Like Roses [Crescent Rose]]
01:12 Teara: started off as hard, to insane, to wtf, haha, u die now
01:12 Teara: while I understand that the music allows it, its still a little overkill
01:12 Teara: especially the streams

01:17 Teara: at the start, I get constent +10 -> +20 ms early
01:18 Teara: 00:26:764 -> and up its 15+ms early
01:21 Teara: 01:12:085 -> 0ms - 1ms late
01:21 Teara: so good
01:21 Teara: 01:56:681 > 0ms
01:22 Teara: 02:14:473 - > 3 - 7 ms early
01:24 Teara: and the end 10 to 15ms late

01:31 Teara: one thing I can say thou for the current map
01:31 Teara: 02:00:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -  this will prob have to change. 
01:32 JInxyjem: crescent or
01:32 Teara: while the idea is nice, it just doesnt play nice
01:32 Teara: Crescent
01:32 Teara: Rose*

Flower wrote:

[Redzero]
before 01:08:642 - there is heavy overmap. I don't get the point that you add so many notes that there is no beat in the music. it's necessary to remap this part. because it's insane and if I remove overmap it will be boring
01:23:473 (2,3) - ctrl+G for better flow. distance to the next 1 is not a problem. yeah, good flow
01:41:473 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? no
01:42:598 (3,4) - move down a bit, so that it's not overlapped with 01:41:623 (6) - overlapped? o.o
01:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - make better shape. use "convert slider into stream" as a help =_=

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
IN your three diffs, it's a good idea if you use claps as a pattern, between 01:14:773 - and 02:26:773 - , like in Redzero.
combo 2,4,6,8 are too similar to 1,3,5,7. try some more distinct colours. {I have ensured that 2 is never used right after 1, and etc, except the start where the colour theme is very obvious. The colour choices fit the Red, White, Black, Yellow (RWBY) theme.}
I think the first red section should be 70 instead of 140. please consider. {There's a light "boom" sound on downbeat with 140, so I'm keeping it}
01:41:773 - you need to recheck timing around here. in Redzero the downbeat notes are put on blue ticks.{Maybe, but it's a relatively small part affected.
02:26:773 (1) - start at 02:26:810 -

[Redzero]
before 01:08:642 - there is heavy overmap. I don't get the point that you add so many notes that there is no beat in the music. it's necessary to remap this part.
01:23:473 (2,3) - ctrl+G for better flow. distance to the next 1 is not a problem.
01:41:473 (5,6) - try ctrl+G?
01:42:598 (3,4) - move down a bit, so that it's not overlapped with 01:41:623 (6) -
01:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - make better shape. use "convert slider into stream" as a help
Good diff.

[Crescent Rose]
if you want to keep the distance spacing, please turn grid snap off and re-arrange the notes, because there is noticeable spacing inconsistency between notes while the grid snap is not always accurate. {They're accurate enough for me, the ones I'm more concerned about are spacing that breaks patterns, which grid snap helps.} {Did a spacing recheck for over-the-top grid snaps, anyway.}
before 01:08:642 - there is heavy overmap. same as Redzero, you should remap this part {It is mapped to the soft beat at the back.}
02:07:273 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't really get the sudden jump. reducing distance is not a bad idea. {Accelerates to the main jump at (6 to 11), instead of an even more sudden jump. There was also a jump used at the same tune at 02:00:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8).}

[Crimson Rose]
same as previous diff, please turn grid snap off and re-arrange the notes {same as above.}
01:20:923 - add a note

[Red Rose]
after 02:45:890 - strongly recommended that you keep distance spacing on kiai time, the same as previous parts. Sudden speed up confused the player. {Distance multiplier is unchanged; spacing change is due to BPM change and thus I feel it's fitting.}

Good luck~

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Charles445 wrote:

feat. goes in artist, not title.