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PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko]

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sheela
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Joined October 2011
sheela
[General]
The first kiai time that ends at 00:59:646 should end at 00:59:289 ?
The third kiai time that ends at 01:48:932 should end at 01:48:574 ?

[Easy]
00:26:074 (2) - Copy and paste 00:26:074 (2) and do Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G so they could be alike.
00:46:610 (1) - Maybe it should end at 00:47:503 ? So the newbies could take time to find 00:48:217 (1) even if it shows fast.
01:17:146 (4) - x: 392 y:184 and 01:17:503 (5) - x:320 y:216? It's because of the distance.
01:55:717 (4) - Put it more closer to the end of the trail.

[Normal]
00:34:467 (5) - x:464 y:112 so it won't be stack?
00:46:789 (1) - Start it at 00:46:610 and reduce a tick when the beat snap divisor is at 1/2?
01:18:574 (7) - Stack with 01:17:146 (5) or move it to another place because it's overlap and ugly.
01:36:074 (1) - Start it at 01:35:896 and reduce a tick when the beat snap divisor is at 1/2?

[Insane]
00:39:824 (1) - The end of it don't fit with the music. Extend it to 00:41:432 .
00:58:396 (1) - Start it at 00:58:574 and end it at 00:59:289 ?

[LilyWhite's Insane]
00:30:271 (4) - x:100 y:188 and 00:30:360 (1) - x:88 y:176 so they could match with the little stream.
00:32:146 (2) - Prev: somewhere at 1.00x so it could be the same as 00:26:432 (2) .
00:41:432 (5,1) - In this part, I think there's something that doesn't fit.
00:42:324 - Add note?

[Tsusuko's Hard]
01:09:467 (3) - Stack with 01:09:646 (4) ?
01:42:682 (9) - NC?

Good Luck!
Dolphin
1,167 posts
Joined January 2012
Dolphin
http://puu.sh/47tSc.zip Changed all the hitsounds from .ogg to .wav

I always thought osu! supported .ogg :|

Anyways they should work now.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
UPDATD
Pizza Kun
455 posts
Joined March 2011
Pizza Kun
M4M ^^ my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110918



[Insane]

Consider mapping this part 00:14:289 (1,1) - all break
00:30:182 (7,1) - Stack in slider start
00:30:896 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:34:824 (8,9) - ^
00:36:967 (3) - Move in 132 || 56
00:41:789 (1) - This rithm is better:

00:44:646 (10) - NC
00:57:503 (6) - In 264||144
00:59:646 (1) - Stack on 2 start
01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Stack 4 on 01:04:110 (2) -
01:14:824 (3,3) - Stack
01:25:182 (1,2,3) - Stack 3 on 01:24:467 (2) - End
01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read


[LilyWite's Insane]

01:07:503 (4,1) - Stack
01:10:182 (3) - Move 3° anchor point in 300||136
01:23:932 (6,7) - Like this?
SPOILER
01:33:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Centre all

[m1ng's Oni]

00:15:717 (1,2,3,4,1) - KDDKK
00:18:753 (1,2,3) - KDD
00:28:217 (2) - Katsu
00:41:967 (3,4,7,8) - All katsu
00:52:592 - Add don
01:05:003 (1,1) - Katsu
01:07:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DDKDDDK
01:12:502 (4,5,6) - Katsu
01:31:074 (1) - Katsu
01:41:878 - add don
01:42:055 (1) - Katsu
01:42:146 (2) - Add don
01:56:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - DDKKDDK
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
m4m, from #modreqs
Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110799

[Tsusuko's Hard]

01:16:432 (10) - Add reverse selection

01:19:824 (1) - Don't add new note here, being a Hard I think it sounds better

01:20:182 - If you do that then add new combo here ofc (?

[Insane]

00:50:003 (2) - Maybe reverse selection? o3o
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M ^^ my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110918



[Insane]

Consider mapping this part 00:14:289 (1,1) - all break its ok no i want to keep my heart not be bothered
00:30:182 (7,1) - Stack in slider start ok
00:30:896 (2,3) - Fix blanket fixed
00:34:824 (8,9) - ^ its ok to me wel done ok
00:36:967 (3) - Move in 132 || 56 ok
00:41:789 (1) - This rithm is better: sound good thanks

00:44:646 (10) - NC ok
00:57:503 (6) - In 264||144 no this is jump
00:59:646 (1) - Stack on 2 start jump again but i move it somewhere
01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Stack 4 on 01:04:110 (2) - ok
01:14:824 (3,3) - Stack ok
01:25:182 (1,2,3) - Stack 3 on 01:24:467 (2) - End ok
01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read this is a falling notes but ill think

TY FOR MOD!

Inyuschan wrote:

m4m, from #modreqs
Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110799

[Insane]

00:50:003 (2) - Maybe reverse selection? o3o nup D:

TY FOR MODS~!
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
mod as req

[Ono's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:646 (1) - add finish powerful sound
  2. 00:35:717 (1) - remove finish and 00:36:074 (1) - add finish sound is better
  3. 00:59:646 (1,1) - remove finish?
  4. 00:59:646 (1,1) - ^
  5. 01:25:360 (1) - add finish 00:36:074 (1) - if you add a finish here
  6. 01:48:932 (1,1) - remove finish
  7. 01:54:646 (1,1) - ^

[Ono's Oni]
  1. 00:20:003 (1,1) - remove finish and 00:20:003 - k 00:20:360 - d 00:20:717 (1) - K sound fit
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - add finish
  3. 01:25:360 (34) - ^
    nice map!

[m1ng's Oni]
  1. 00:20:539 - add d there is a sound here
  2. 01:12:145 (2,3) - k clap sound
  3. 01:13:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ddkkkkd is better
  4. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish

GL~
(//・ω・)っ＝＝＝＝＝
YunoFanatic
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Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

ReySHeL wrote:

mod as req

[Ono's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:646 (1) - add finish powerful sound
  2. 00:35:717 (1) - remove finish and 00:36:074 (1) - add finish sound is better
  3. 00:59:646 (1,1) - remove finish?
  4. 00:59:646 (1,1) - ^
  5. 01:25:360 (1) - add finish 00:36:074 (1) - if you add a finish here
  6. 01:48:932 (1,1) - remove finish
  7. 01:54:646 (1,1) - ^

[Ono's Oni]
  1. 00:20:003 (1,1) - remove finish and 00:20:003 - k 00:20:360 - d 00:20:717 (1) - K sound fit
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - add finish
  3. 01:25:360 (34) - ^
    nice map!

[m1ng's Oni]
  1. 00:20:539 - add d there is a sound here
  2. 01:12:145 (2,3) - k clap sound
  3. 01:13:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ddkkkkd is better
  4. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish

GL~
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tenchu rechel :3
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From QAT-Queue!


just as a reminder, i need to go sleep now =v= Will edit this tomorrow with my mod! :)
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
m4m~

[General]

  1. For now,Taiko Bg is Unrankable. Delete Taiko BG and adjust this on all of taiko diff.
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,90
  2. Check Widescreen support and Check off Letterbox during breaks on All of Diff.
[Easy]

  1. 01:21:432 (2) - slider point on end of slider 1 grid up
  2. 01:22:860 (1) - End here 01:24:467
  3. 01:25:360 - Breaktime start on here is better
  4. 01:41:432 (4) - like this.
    preview
    316,336,101432,2,0,B|316:232|316:232|388:264|456:168|428:120,1,270
  5. 01:49:289 (1) - Red Slider point move to slider star
    SPOILER
  6. 01:54:646 (3) - NC
[Normal]

  1. 00:33:574 (4) - NC
  2. 00:52:503 (1,1) - so close. spin reduce on here 00:53:574
  3. 01:06:074 (2) - perfectly stack on 01:04:646 (4)'s end of slider.
  4. 01:17:146 (5) - NC
  5. 01:18:574 (7) - perfectly stack on 01:17:146 (5)
  6. 01:21:967 (4) - make repeat
  7. 01:22:503 (1) - end here 01:24:467
  8. 01:26:789 (4) - NC?
  9. 01:28:574 (7,1) - maybe spin's place is little awakward. spin move to 01:29:646 and (7) note make repeat plz.
  10. 01:41:432 (6,7) - this rhythem is so awakward.
  11. 01:54:646 (5) - NC
  12. 01:56:789 (7) - perfectly stack on 01:54:646 (5)
[lilywhite]

  1. 00:53:574 (3) - Ctrl+G
  2. 01:16:789 (1) - blanket with 01:16:253 (5)
  3. 01:22:682 (5) - remove this
  4. 01:24:289 (2) - circle note is more better. (Circle note place is 01:24:467)
  5. 01:47:860 (5) - slider point on end of slider move to (528,120)
[Tsusuko]

  1. 00:31:610 (4) - NC
  2. 00:35:717 (7) - 1 grid right. not straight!
  3. 00:52:503 (5) - NC
  4. 00:53:396 (7) - ^
  5. 01:07:146 (6) - ^
  6. 01:42:682 (9) - ^
[Insane]

  1. 00:20:717 (2) - Add Finish
  2. 00:35:717 - Add note
  3. 00:39:824 (1) - this spin is strange. making note is better.
  4. 00:44:646 (3) - NC?
  5. 00:49:646 (1) - expand to 00:49:914
  6. 00:57:146 (5) - NC
  7. 01:30:717 - Add note
  8. 01:32:324 (1) - strange
  9. 01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - this rhythem is awakward.try this rhythem.
    SPOILER
ok! that's all!
GL 8-)
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
tenchu <3
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,813 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito

cdhsausageboy wrote:

SPOILER
Taiko mod from modding queue, everything is suggestion ._.

Ono's muzukashii
00:01:789 and 00:03:396 : delete kat because no sound in music that time? Mapped to the little high pitch and the 1/8 sound.
00:06:789 : add kat sound goes only up to 00:06:610
00:09:914 : change to don ok
00:45:986 and 00:46:253 and 00:58:753: change to big kat fine as it is.
01:01:253 and 01:01:771 and 01:03:396 and 01:07:057 and 01:46:610 and 01:57:682 delete kat changed first four.

Ono's oni
00:01:789 delete kat sounds better in this way
01:13:932 to 01:19:289 keep sv multiplier at 0.5
01:19:646 to 01:22:592 keep sv multiplier at 1.0
01:23:932 to 01:24:467 change sv multiplier back to 0.5

I'm fine with the SV. Asked already around if it is okay.
Thank you for mod!

@YunoFanatic: Please don't delete my BG, it's my standart one. :/
Download: http://puu.sh/491K4.zip
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Yo again, from QAT Queue, dat post before D: It doesn't work to edit my last post. op ><


[General]

Why isn't the video included?
The song is really short already, why did you first start to map it from 0:22 on? You should consider mapping it.

[Easy]

I think the slidershapes need some work, also the patterns. For an easy, consistency is quite important, in order not to confuse the player! I'll list up a few examples above for you.

00:26:074 (2,3,4) - For example this - it looks a bit messed up, because there is actually a curve, then it goes straight, and then there's another curve. This should be a bit more consistent! Also, what about a blanketing here? 00:26:074 (2) - http://puu.sh/491qo.jpg It would make it looking neater.
00:28:574 (5) - I don't like the rhythm here tbh. I've got a suggestion for you: 00:28:574 (5) - Move that slider to 00:28:932 -, and add a circle 00:28:574 - ! It fits the lyrics perfectly.
00:37:146 (1,2,3) - Well, I can see the SV is different here, but the DS as well, and this is what bothers me. I don't even understand the SV change, why is it there? I sugegst removing it
00:48:217 (1,2,3) - Watch out for the blanketing please! In cases like this, it's very important. (With blanketing i actually mean, that it fits the other slider ( or circle) perfectly, here is what I mean: http://puu.sh/491FK.jpg
00:51:789 (4) - This should be symmetric, shouldn't it? :D
01:01:074 (2,1) - Hm, what about removing the overlap? Ctrl + J on Slider 1 could work.
01:05:003 (2) - http://puu.sh/491R0.jpg Imo, this rhythm is way better. I won't mod this out again - please make sure that you put all notes like this in another way, because like this, it's really really odd!
01:40:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another major issue in my opinion, because it has overlaps, and the rhythm is messed up, as mentioned above. I mapped a small part for you, to get an idea. Also use it for the further checking of this easy!
Suggestion
56,192,98217,6,0,P|148:212|256:180,1,180
300,136,99289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,99646,2,0,L|344:316,2,90
280,48,101074,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,101432,2,0,P|145:54|104:88,2,90
180,136,102503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,102860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,220,103217,1,0,0:0:0:0:

For the blankets, to make it easier for you, i'll list them up here:
01:06:074 (4,5) -
01:15:717 (3,4) -
01:20:003 (1,2,3) -
01:43:932 (6,7) -
01:41:432 (4,5) -
01:49:289 (1,2) -
01:54:646 (1,2) -

Okay, I'd like you to check your map again, and with your knew knowledge about overlapping / blanketing / rhythm, I'm sure you can improve your map very easily! If you need help, you can always ask me for further help, but that's it for now

[Normal]

Overall, the same issues as in Easy. I won't mod this out, because I want you to go over your diff again and fix the blankets, and overlappings yourself (The rhythm is better here!) I still mod out what I would actually suggest :P

00:26:967 (4) - If you could make a pattern, where this circle is at 360 164, it would be great, because it has a better flow!
00:28:574 (7,1) - Don't make them touch themselves please :C Looks a bit unproffessional >< Make also sure to tidy up 00:30:360 (1) - the slidershape of this, the curve should be bigger.
00:33:574 (1) - CTRL + G would be so much better, you have an up down flow then.. try to fix that please :c
00:34:467 - You can avoid the weird overlap when you delete this one here. It's rather unnecessary and makes things easier.
00:38:574 (4,5) - Just make one big slider out of it, please, the rhythm is not good here, and there's kinda no way a normal player would enjoy to play this, because he'd be frustrating missing it all the time ><
00:37:503 (3,4) - The lyrics are in the foreground, as usual. You should keep sticking to it! Some circles will do that.
00:44:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For this part, I suggest that you use 00:46:253 (6) - four of these sliders!
01:18:574 (3,1) - Weird flow, you can see this yourself: The slider end goes to the left while the new slider is just on the right side. It's not so smooth, if you understand what i mean! http://puu.sh/49aU5.jpg Look here :)
01:29:646 (1) - Special reason why you don't map this part? I'd like to see something here, since it leads in the kiai perfectly.

Please take care about your rhythm, and the flow here especially! I'm sure you can get some further ideas when you applied ^.

[Tsuzuko's Hard]

00:53:396 (7) - I would put a NC here to emphasize the .. gnoc gnoc or w/e she's saying D:
01:09:467 (3) - NC because of making everything readable. Or maybe you could even make the distance between those two circles a bit bigger, just to give it some more action.
01:42:682 (9) - Same as above! It would also be nice because the combo is quite long.
01:58:753 (5) - And same as above. haha!

Really good map! Can't say much about it. Just these NC's are bothering me!


[LilyWhite's Insane]

00:26:967 (4) - It would be nicer if you replaced this one by two circles, to emphasize this 4 syllable word more. http://puu.sh/49btc.jpg Something like this would be incredibly fun!
00:28:396 (3,4,5) - Bad flow between them. It's just, the flow between 3 and 4 is nice, what lets you think 5 is really displaced there. I suggest CTRL + G, for some more consistency, and give it a better flow.
00:31:253 (3,4,1) - Uhm yeah.. can't really enjoy this part. http://puu.sh/49bz8.jpg Smth like this wouldn't break the flow so much, because slider 4 is currently really.. bleh
00:34:646 (4) - What about CTRL + H? 00:33:574 (2) - Would give a nice pattern with this one here.
00:33:574 (2,3,4) - :( I want to show you why I really dislike these kind of flows, you need to work on that definetly, it's the main reason why this diff makes my stomach a bit upset. http://puu.sh/49bHl.jpg Bad drawing, I know, but it shows what I want. The red line is just straight down and irritates the players as well, most likely they will think it should be there, the other way round. What i suggest is this: http://puu.sh/49bKK.jpg This is really nice playable and doesn't frustrate the player! I hope this explains my mod a bit, lol
01:00:360 (3,4) - I'm sure you know what you should do here after ^? :P Try CTRL + G once.
01:01:342 (5) - NC here because mushroom should be emphasized!
01:35:003 (5) - I would add a NC to split the pattern into two parts.

Well yeah, i'd really like you to overthink some of the flow problems, and even fix further ones. But you're on a good way!

[Insane]

Especially in insane. 00:16:437 - this part SHOULD BE MAPPED!! It's such an exciting and funny to listen part.
00:24:467 - She starts singing here, you should add something.
00:25:003 (2) - I know, i might be annoying, but mapping to the lyrics is here the better choice imo. And this doesn't fit, it's too long, you should shorten it! D:
00:26:074 (1) - You use 3/4 sliders sometimes, but not here?! Shorten it to 00:26:342 - and add a circle 00:26:432 - here.
00:27:503 (1) - What about 260 184? Would give a straight line with the slider before (flow) Just adjust the triangle pattern, you could also rotate that a bit, to make it more interesting!
00:28:574 (1) - Think about a reverse slider here. Rhythm things, just a suggestion from myside. Fits the lyrics!
00:29:467 (3,4,5,6,7) - ..random placing?
00:30:360 (1) - This antijump isn't confortable to play. Please space it properly!
00:31:253 (3) - Usually, sliders starting on the red tick sound weird - that's the case here. It's rather a better idea to use a circle here!
00:31:789 (4) - Why not making it like 00:26:074 (1) - ?
00:34:467 (5) - Avoid the overlap with 3 please :P You have enough space to place it, so you better use it! o3o
00:35:182 (9) - Nobody will get that, most people will be in a rush due to the triplet, and will just go on clicking > miss. Fix the spacing please!
00:36:967 (3,4) - Flow is good here, what emphasizes the bad flow of 00:37:324 (4,5) - . Think of a placing which is better harmonised with 3 and 4! A curve wouldn't be bad, i suppose.
00:38:753 (1) - she says 'bo', can you hear that? Would be sad if you didn't emphasize it. Try this rhythm ! 00:38:753 - starting from here: http://puu.sh/49cnN.jpg
00:43:217 (3) - Delete NC, consistency.
00:45:717 (3) - NC, consistency
00:49:646 (1) - make it longer, so it reaches the next blue tick *-* It'll sound so cool and fitting!
00:51:253 (1,2,3) - mh.. i can see what you've done here, but not sure. The spacing increase is quite big, and people will have problems reading it. consider shorten it a bit!
00:52:324 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Did you just place this randomly, or is it mapped to something on purpose? Because like this, it's just random.. I'd really wish that this emphasizes the song a bit more, especially the lyrics. Just putting stuff there isn't a good sultion!
00:55:360 (1) - Same suggestion as above (blue tick)
01:06:610 (4) - Bad flow, for the slider shape I suggest CTRL H + J, then stack the slider start with the slider start of this 01:05:717 (2) - .

Well, most of the issues are the same, please go over your map again and try fixing some stuff, and if you really did this, you can ask me for a recheck. But, if you didn't even try to improve it by yourself, I'll just let it be, so it's up to you!



I hope I could help your mapset a bit :P Just tidy up some slider shapes, rhythm, flow issues, and i'm sure, it'll improve much! See you then :)
YunoFanatic
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Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
thanks! for modding! i hope you understand that im still a osu! beginner mapper!
Apex_old
736 posts
Joined May 2010
Apex_old
Easy:

00:28:574: It might be my personal opinion but the 6th circle isn't on the same y position with the 7th slider, which makes it look not symmetrical and bad. Position changed from 136,168 to 136,152
00:45:182: like ^,2nd circle isn't on the same y position with the 4th circle Position changed from 208,180 to 208,192
00:49:289: 2nd slider sounds wrong, move it to 00:49:646, but that would over lap with the 3rd slider, therefore shrink the 3rd slider so it won't return and move it from 00:50:360 to 00:50:717
00:59:932: ^
SPOILER
01:20:003: 1st slider sounds wrong, shrink it by 2 1/2 beats and move it to 01:20:360
like this
01:38:217: Beats are on time but what is this
?

Insane:
01:32:503: Personal Opinion, but you can try to make a mushroom-esque slider here.
Slider

After so much Kudosu given and so many modders, I can't really find a fault. And it's quite an excellent map compared to your meager experience. Or it's that I'm a noob.
Last edited by Apex_old , edited 2 times in total.
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
[General]
  1. sliderslide sounds bad.why not try muting it? http://puu.sh/49phc.wav



[Easy]
  1. I strongly recommend you to use the same spacing throughout the difficulty,the current one seems to be messy for an easy...
  2. 00:37:146 (1,2,3) - spacing here could be done better.
  3. 00:49:289 (2) - unreasonable rhythm to me D; Sth like this would be better imo
  4. 00:55:003 - same thing here
  5. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - well...you know XD



[Normal]
  1. Use consistent spacing is also needed in this diff,that would make this quite clean,you know.
  2. 00:34:646 (5) - Shouldn't this slider end at 00:35:182? w
  3. 00:41:432 - why break here?
  4. 00:48:217 (1) - bad shape,could be easily done better :D
  5. 01:31:432 (1,1) - rhythm here is a bit off...try this?
  6. 01:41:432 (6,7,8) - 7 is wrong without doubts.Change to this plz




[Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:35:182 (5,6,7) - spacing
  2. 01:30:717 (8,9,10) - try this?




[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:24:646 (1) - (nazi)down one grid?
  2. 00:48:217 - whistle sounds so random :o
  3. 01:58:932 (5) - soft whistle is better since the music comes down here?




[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 - these finishes are just annoying D:
  2. 00:24:646 (1,2,3) - too hard to read...According to the rhythm this pattern is odd too..
  3. 00:43:217 (1,2) - 00:41:789 (1,2) - Ctrl+H plz
  4. 00:52:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rhythm here,you may go to the other Insane for the correct one> >



Good for a newbie,but still needs more work i think...Well,gl with ranking!
happy623
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happy623
req via PM

Sorry for late

General

  1. Remove Widescreen support, you didnt added any sb here
  2. IMO, the combo colors are similar, consider change another colors instead :

Easy

  1. Please use the same distance spacing to map Easy, considerating how newbies play this diff, if you use different distance spacing to map Easy, they cannot catch the notes easily, after you used the same ds for this diff, feel free to poke me and I will mod this diff again :oops: the followings are just some issues instead of placing problem :
  2. Unify them into 0.75x is enough imo :
  3. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - hey , objects are less than 10ms
  4. 00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 Beat snap divisor here, it might a bit hard to the newbies, try to use sliders instead, if you take this, apply to 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - too :
  5. 01:17:860 (1,1) - this spinner is too close to 01:20:003 (1) -, newbies wont have enough time the recover and catch the slider especially in high BPM , consider drag the slider at least ONE white tick space, so, place the slider at 01:20:360 -

Normal

  1. AR-1?
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - ermm, dont overlap with 00:34:646 (5) - ? Seems neater imo
  3. 01:06:074 (2) - ^ overlap issues
  4. 01:17:146 (5) - ^
  5. 01:32:682 (1) - remove NC, its not really needed imo
  6. 01:33:932 (2) - NC here? you did it at 00:44:646 (1) - too, if you take this , please NC 01:35:003 (4) too, because you make a NC at 00:45:717 (1) -, keep the consistency is important
  7. 01:34:467 (3) - I suggest not to overlap with 01:32:682 (1) - , its hard to read

Tsusuko's Hard

  1. 00:59:646 (1) - well I think it can be louder xD, if you take this, apply to 01:48:932 (1) - too
  2. 01:09:467 (3,4) - ctrl G? it seems to be fit with the music
    Nice diff great :D

LilyWhite's Insane

  1. 00:49:199 (4) - this note seems to be overmapped ;w; please remove it
  2. 00:51:699 (3) - ^, btw you missed a drum hit at 00:52:057 -
  3. 01:26:074 (3) - this flow better imo :
    SPOILER
  4. 01:35:360 (6,7) - NC here to keep your NC pattern consistently, since you put NC at 00:46:074 (1)
  5. 01:53:217 (4) - ^, keep the NC pattern

Insane

  1. You start at 00:14:289 - in this diff, but in Easy and Normal, you start at 00:24:646 -, its better to make them the same
  2. 00:52:682 (2,3) - remove this 2 notes, and put a note at 00:52:771 -, its fit
  3. 00:58:396 - add a note here
  4. 01:00:003 (2,4) - add finish on this two sliders' head, you missed them, try to spend some time and listen the music carefully, you can find there are more place for putting finish, like 01:05:717 (2) - or 01:06:074 (3) -
  5. 01:08:039 - add a note here too, try to follow the drum hit more than the vocal
  6. 01:32:324 (5) - nazi, stack with 01:31:432 (2) - 's head
  7. 01:35:003 (3) - NC, since you NC at 00:45:717 (1) - , to keep consistency again
  8. 01:39:646 (7) - NC? It looks nice imo 8-)
  9. 01:41:789 (5) - NC here seems better, since the melody changed
  10. 01:42:235 (7) - you better remove this note since its overmapped
  11. 01:52:860 (1) - remove this NC, its seems to be overused
  12. 01:54:646 (1,2) - suggestion to make this more fun :
    SPOILER
  13. 01:56:967 - add note, same reason as above

Good Luck with ranking ;)
YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
Stop first D: ill get to update! as for the easy imo
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osu! Alumni
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Leader


You asked me to mod this map some times ago, so I am gonna do it from QAT queue.

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:896 (5,6,7,8) - I'd move (5) up a bit for better flow, then what about flipping (6) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945499? Of course (7,8) will stay under slider tail.
  2. 00:18:039 (4) - Why this slider almost touch the previous slider? Consider fixing it. Anyway, I think this should end 1/4 before, if you do it remember to add a note on blue note tick
  3. 00:18:753 (6,7) - I'd remove repeat and make a slider (1/1 or 1/2, your choice) starting from 00:19:110 -
  4. 00:24:289 (3) - Kinda nazi, but whatever: move down a bit to avoid a tiny, but ugly overlap with 00:23:574 (1) -
  5. 00:24:914 (2) - I couldn't hear a sound here, so it should be removed (and also that 2.68 distance from 00:25:003 (3) - is not fitting at all)
  6. 00:25:003 (3) - I'd replace this slider with a beat (with clap) and 1/2 slider on red tick, so vocals will be followed moarrr
  7. 00:28:039 (4) - What about moving it 1/2 ahead? Obviously add a note on 00:28:039 if you do that
  8. 00:34:824 (8) - Replace it with a 1/2 slider
  9. 00:36:074 (1,3) - Nazi, but you could fix the blanket between these two sliders just by moving down (1) a bit
  10. 00:45:717 (1) - I don't see a reason why this should be a new combo, just remove it.
  11. 00:42:503 (1,2,1) - Same for these two, maybe add a new combo on 00:43:932 (3) -
  12. 00:50:003 (2) - Spacing may look weird here, I'd reduce distance between (1) and (2)
  13. 00:51:253 (1,2,3) - I'd stack (1) and (2) on 3, also try to fix (3)'s tail so it's well stacked on 00:50:539 (4) - 's tail
  14. 00:52:324 - I think a note is missing here.
  15. 00:52:503 (1,2,3) - Also, rhythm should be like this: http://puu.sh/49DIi.jpg
  16. 00:56:610 (4,1,2) - Spacing is the same but rhythm is different, it's quite weird..
  17. 01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Why is this triplet so spaced..? You could make it stacked.
  18. 01:18:753 (9) - Change it with a 1/1 slider, that break is way too big imo
  19. 01:25:182 (1,2,3) - I'd move the entire pattern a little to the left to avoid overlaps. Also you should reduce spacing from the notes, they are too spaced now.
  20. 01:32:503 (6) - Well, that's not so good to see, at least make it symmetrical or try to rework to a new shape
  21. 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if it's intentional or not, but these sliders are not -perfectly- placed: I suggest you to move 01:33:932 (1) - more to the left if you aren't going to change the slider before, to avoid a bad overlap. Then copy&paste every slider and use Rotate 90° clockwise function from Edit, this will make the pattern a lot cleaner
  22. 01:36:074 (1) - Spinner should start 1/2 before imo.
  23. 01:39:646 (7,8,9,10,11) - They are TOO spaced, consider changing spacing to 0.8x or so, there's no need to make such stream so spaced.
  24. 01:42:235 (7,8) - I'd stack these two notes, now they look like they are 1/2 spaced, to be honest
  25. 01:54:646 (1,2) - Mhm, space them more to avoid overlap?
[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:41:432 (5) - Try to move red points a bit to the right, sliderball should "fall" when it's on red tick 00:41:610
  2. 00:50:003 (2) - I'd personally move it closer to slider, like x:284 y:144, also you did like I suggested in similar patterns, so consider changing this.
  3. 01:45:003 (2) - Doesn't look so good, stack on (1), maybe?
Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:44:467 (8) - I'd unstack it since you stacked notes only when they were 1/4
    Solid diff.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:074 (3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong here
  2. 00:30:360 (1,2) - Rework on two last sliderpoints of 00:30:360 (1) - , you should avoid such overlaps
  3. 00:52:503 (1) - I think this part could be mapped, don't add a random spinner like this
  4. 01:29:289 (1) - Same as above
  5. 00:54:289 (1) - What about making it like the opposite of 00:55:003 (2) - (using flip horizzontaly/vertically options)
  6. 01:07:503 (4) - I'd change this circle with a 1/1 slider
  7. 01:21:074 (3) - I'd make this slider similar to 01:19:646 (1,2) -
[Easy]

  • Check AIMod and fix wrong spacing.
  1. 00:40:003 (1) - Same as I said in Normal, don't overuse spinners
  2. 00:57:146 (1) - Same as above
  3. 01:17:860 (1) - ^
  4. 01:02:503 (1) - Flip horizzontaly and then fix spacing, it should be better.
  5. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - What the hell happened here
Insane and Easy need some more work but it's a nice map overall, I hope this mod helped you, good luck
YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
oh my god LEADER CHAAAAN! TENCHU :3 Ive been waiting for your answer though D:
YunoFanatic
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Gonna update soon
YoshiOST
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YoshiOST
For that taiko,

Ono's Muzukashii
Originally this sounds jarring from the previous pattern please consider this :D
00:20:896 (1,2,3,1) -
00:21:074 (3) - don
00:21:253 (1) - kat
01:12:324 (3) - maybe add a kat here just maybe

None For Ming's Oni.. the beats kinda overwhelmed me ;/

Ono's Oni
00:44:289 (2) - don
00:44:467 (1) - kat is moved from the don spot

e.e there's nothing blaring about these taiko maps, they should be fine left alone but I feel the button mashing becomes more skill than the fun sounding to play part. :?

Mostly the changes are opinion so no kudos if you don't like it :/ bub-eye
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
hmm, why hasn't this map been bubbled yet? :S

Guess I'll do a recheck at this map:

[Easy]
00:26:074 - 00:29:646 This rhythm can sure be a heartthrob for new players x.x Try keeping the rhythm simple and easy, like this:

00:33:574 (3) - Remove,and simply place a hit circle at 00:34:110.
00:46:610 (1) - Might be a little challenging, you might wanna remove it. But that's just imo.
00:49:289 (2) - Move to 00:49:646, and try this rhythm.

00:55:003 (2) - Move to 00:55:360.
00:56:074 (3) - Remove and place a hit circle at 00:56:789.
00:57:146 (1) - Needs to end at 00:58:932.
01:02:503 (1) - Bad overlap, I suggest you flip it horizontally so its at the left of the map.
01:07:146 (4) - Remove and place a hit circle at 01:07:503.
01:20:003 (1) - Appears to early after the spinner. Move it to 01:20:360.
01:20:360 - This:

01:38:217 (1,2,3) - Ergh...
01:42:503 (4,5,6) - Watch out for DS especially in Easy/Normal mode. these objects appear to far from each other.
01:42:860 (5) - NC. Also Shorten it to a 1/1 slider, and move to 01:43:217. Here you should add a hit circle. Helps emphasize the finish hitsound in the music.

You really need to work on the rhythm :S I feel that's the major issue that's holding you beatmap back from being bubbled!

[Normal]
00:30:360 - 00:35:360 Should have the same rhythm and objects as 00:24:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). The notes practically repeat in the music if you listen closely. Soo just copy all the highlighted objects above,and replace them at 00:30:360 (but being re-arranged of course)
00:52:503 (1) - Really bad spot for s spinner, remove it.
00:49:289 (2) - Move to 00:49:646, and use this rhythm,:

00:53:932 - Add a note here, with a finish hitsound.
01:17:146 (5) - NC
01:19:646 (1) And 01:21:074 (3) should be made similar in shape, could make a pretty neat symmetry here.
01:27:503 (6) - NC
01:29:289 (1) - Another badspot to use a spinner, remove it please. You can use this rhythm to replace it if you want:

01:31:432 (1) - Move to 01:31:074.
01:32:682 (1) - Move to 01:32:503.
01:54:646 (5) - NC
01:54:646 (5,6) - Bad overlap try to make it look more neater.

Same issue with Easy mode.

[Lilywhites mushroom]
01:31:253 - Missing a note here.
Now here's a well-made diff :) Though the flow is a bit questionable.

[Tsusuko's Hard]
Really good :) I enjoyed testing it!

[Insane]
00:31:699 - Since it is insane mode,I suggest you adding in a note here.
00:44:646 (1,2) - Make them more symmetrical with the vertical axis.
00:49:557 - Add a note
00:52:324 - ^
00:52:682 (2) - Move to 00:52:771, and remove 00:52:860 (3). You need to follow the beat of the music.
00:55:271 - Add a note
01:29:646 (7,8) - Should look similar in shape for better visual appeal.

Looks so-so for an Insane mode.

Well this map does needs some work still, especially for the rhythm, but your getting there! ^^
Hope this helps~!
YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
Updated D: sorry for the distance in easy :< my brother touched easy omgus
Cloudchaser
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Cloudchaser
If you want a mod, catch me in-game. I'd like to do a IRC mod \:3/
YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
im on cp xD maybe catching you is a better idea
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
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hoshisorakiseki
result:

diff:easy
ok

diff:normal
00:26:074 (3,4,5) - same of the next one
01:21:074 (3,4) - same of the next one
01:25:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same of the next one
01:41:432 (6,7) - i think the newbie can't to catch it

diff:Tsusuko's Hard
ok

diff:LilyWhite's Insane
ok

diff:insane:
ok

all of taiko:
sorry. i seldom play the taiko mode.

i think it's not so good. because i'm noob new in map/mod.
CET 6
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CET 6
HI~

Easy

01:32:503 (3) maybe can be moved to x:376 y:136
01:34:467 (2) maybe can try to overlay 01:32:146 (2)
01:52:146 (1,2) looks chaos


Normal

00:49:289 (2) maybe can be moved to x:424 y:208 then the end of 00:48:217 (1) looks be blanketed
00:51:432 (4) maybe can x:276 y:348 ( use 00:50:360 (3) to blanket it
i think this diff is a little bit lack of "blanket" it may not the best way ,but it makes maps looks more orderly especially in easy or normal diff


Other diffs look good ！
That‘s all
Good luck ！ :)
Aldwych
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Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Hi lady carrey! Modding queue :

General


I don't remember if it's true but use the same combo colours in same osu! diff.
Try to have the same kiai time timing.
- 00:47:682 : gnocchi! =D

Eazy


About the hitsound i won't say all but for the claps :

- Start from 00:24:646 and 1 clap / 2 white bar (next clap wil be at 00:25:360 etc...) to the 1st spinner.
- Continue the clap at 00:38:574 (same pattern)
- etc etc..

- 00:29:646 : Whistle instead of finish imo.
- 00:38:217 : I don't like this circle because there's no important sound for an easy here.
- 00:55:360 : I prefer see this slider at (360;244)
- 01:00:003 : This slider has not a really god curve imo.
- 01:02:142 : 2 solutions here => Put this circle at the same position of the red slider n°1 (before), or put the next slider at the same position as the red slider mentionned before.
- 01:34:467 : Same position as the red circle n°2 before.

Normal


Same thing about hitsound.

- 00:37:860 : I don't like how this circle is so close of the next slider you know.
- 00:55:003 : Same thing against the last red slider before this one.
- 01:06:074 : The 3 sliders may be all around (the world) the previous red circle.
- 01:17:146 : Take care to put this slider as the same position as the 3rd circle of this combo.
- 01:18:217 : I could say the same here but as you wish.
- 01:42:324 : Say Y position as the previous circle.
- 01:52:860 : Why not use the same slider as the next one?
- 01:54:646 : And pay attention of the position with the previous objects.
- 01:55:717 : ^
- 01:56:789 : ^

Tsusujo's hard


- 01:07:860 : Same X position as the previous end's slider?
- 01:36:967 : I prefer see this spinner finish here.

Any else to say. Generally it looks nice. GJ

Insayne


00:20:717 : This whistle seems too loud to hear, maybe decrease the volume here?
00:27:503 : Put it perfectly on the middle?
00:43:932 : A combo for 1 object? Beuh! ¦:<
00:57:503 : Be carefull about the position in comparaison of the previous objects.
01:03:753 : It touches a little the HP bar be carefull about it.
01:15:896 : Position again.
01:16:789 : Try to made a pattern with this multiple circles.
01:25:717 : Move it a little down, put the same Y position as the previous slider.
01:26:074 : Strage slider here.

That's all for it. GL for ranking. :D
YunoFanatic
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updated thanks
KanaRin
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KanaRin
Mod request by Yunofantic.

Overall three diffs are very nice, only some hitsounds problem here.

I will list here first.

[m1ng's Oni]

  1. 00:57:949 - add a kat here? I can hear the background drums is not the end at 00:57:860 (1) - .
  2. 01:11:788 (1,2,3) - Those notes should be k instead of d, we can hear a small-drum there. Sounds better and fits the background drums.
  3. 01:13:216 (1) - by the background drums, how about kkdkkkkkd? that means you need to add a kat at 01:13:307 -
  4. 01:47:235 - yeah, add a kat here, same reason as above.
  5. Nice.
[Ono's Muzukashii]

  1. the diff is very nice, but that's a bit hard as a Muzukashii , too many 2-plets (aabc: \OOOO/) . I suggest you to reduce the difficulty for this diff as well. Edit: Actually I think that's okay but I dont sure about normal players
[Ono's Oni]

  1. Perfect.
Call me back.
mingmichael
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mingmichael

KanaRin wrote:

Mod request by Yunofantic.

Overall three diffs are very nice, only some hitsounds problem here.

I will list here first.

[m1ng's Oni]

  1. 00:57:949 - add a kat here? I can hear the background drums is not the end at 00:57:860 (1) - . oh sorry, i didn't listen it carefully D: changed~
  2. 01:11:788 (1,2,3) - Those notes should be k instead of d, we can hear a small-drum there. Sounds better and fits the background drums. oh yeah@_@ changed changed~
  3. 01:13:216 (1) - by the background drums, how about kkdkkkkkd? that means you need to add a kat at 01:13:307 - i changed this, because i followed the background drums (sorry i forgot add note at 01:13:307 -)
  4. 01:47:235 - yeah, add a kat here, same reason as above. changed too
  5. Nice. yay /o/

Call me back.
thanks KanaRin for your mods~! usefull all of them o/
btw, here's my diff, Yuno
http://puu.sh/4d31i.osu
YunoFanatic
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KanaRin arigatou for reading the message >w<

updated
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
I will check the Muzukashii after I woke up. For now I need to sleep. zzzzz
bigfrog
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bigfrog
hi...from queue

General
ahh...how to use grid 4?
it's will be more neat,for example:1.14,1.25
then i said down i mean one grid is gird 4 one grid ._.

Easy
00:28:932(5) let red point in the middle of this slider
00:37:146(1,2) blanket
00:44:646(1,2) try stack 00:41:789(1) end [00:42:860(2,1,2) two grid right]
01:21:074(2) this looks better
01:34:467(2) stack 01:32:146(2) please,and fix some distance
01:40:716(1) two grid up for stack under 01:37:860(1) looks better~
01:42:146(3) keep it stack
01:54:646(3,4) this please

Normal
00:30:360(1,2) this...
00:33:932 add a note
00:51:432(4) stack (2) end
01:06:789(3,4) blanket
01:17:146(5) stack 01:15:360(2) start
01:21:967(4) move to 01:22:146
01:29:289(8) stack (6) start
01:43:217(1,2) symmetry

Tsusuko's Hard
i can find anything 0.0

LilyWhite's Insane
00:28:039(2,3) blanket
00:30:092(2,3,4,5) not same distance?
01:01:789(7,8) blanket
01:08:574(2,3) parallel
01:11:789(1) vertical please

Insane
00:18:932(6,7) parallel
00:23:574(1) ctrl+g?
00:32:146(7) x376 y628
01:20:360(3,4) symmetry
01:55:262(6) this please...it's very easy to be confusion

that all~
good luck for rank =w=
YunoFanatic
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thanks! for moe mod!
Overwrite
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Overwrite
Whoa I'm late

bigfrog wrote:

LilyWhite's Insane
00:28:039(2,3) blanket Fixed.
00:30:092(2,3,4,5) not same distance? Fixed.
01:01:789(7,8) blanket Fixed.
01:08:574(2,3) parallel No. I like it as it is.
01:11:789(1) vertical please Fixed.
Sankyuu~
osu file format v12

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YunoFanatic
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Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
M4M as I requested Ingame (I guess)

Please take the time to answer my suggestions, thanks ;)

General thoughts: None I guess, this mapset has been improving quite alot when I last checked this so good job on that :)

I will skip Lilywhite's insane, taikos and the hard diff because the owner said so :)

Easy>

I'd say +1 HP because HP1 is too easy for easy, atleast I think so, so think about this!
00:14:289 (1) - Volume 100%?!?! Reduce it, pleeeeease!
00:20:003 (1) - ^
00:24:646 (1,2) - I'm not sure if these sliders have the same shape, but just to make sure copy the 00:24:646 (1) - and paste it then :P
00:55:360 (2) - Today isn't 2009 or anything, I would prefer if you would reshape this slider!
01:19:646 (8) - Missed NC?
01:37:503 - 01:37:860 (1) - Give some time to rest here, beginners might not be able to catch 01:37:860 (1) - :--( so I suggest you end your spinner here 01:37:146 -
00:39:289 (4) - Object's end is not snapped!
00:40:003 (5) - ^
00:41:074 (6) - ^

Anyway, this diff seem to have some big spacing moments, for example: 01:55:717 (4,5) - It's just an easy, don't do this! Or atleast I dont recommend doing this >:

Normal>

00:14:289 (1) - Again with the volume!
00:20:003 (1) - ^
00:37:860 (4) - This current place for this note doesn't fit, either stack it with 00:36:074 (1) - or move it's place.
00:51:432 (4) - 00:49:289 (2) - Not stacked perfectly.
01:31:074 (10) - NC
01:32:146 (12) - 01:31:074 (10) - Not stacked perfectly.
01:33:217 (13) - x:256 y:72?

Insane>

00:14:289 - So now you have the reduced volume, did you forgot to do that in your lowest diff too? Seems so >:
00:18:039 (4) - I dislike this slider, it has an ugly shape >:
00:20:003 (1) - 00:14:289 (1) - I know these two are meant to be symmetric, you know? But things like 00:19:646 (8,1) - This (aka overlap) are not nice, I can see this overlap from playing this diff too so I recommend changing it :)
00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you follow the basic NC tactic here? 00:45:717 (3,4) - These two should be NC'd.
00:51:253 (1,2) - Not sure but I think these aren't stacked perfectly.
00:57:324 - This break always confuses me while playing this diff, I recommend doing something it if some1 else says about it, but IMO it doesn't feel right.
01:18:932 (10,1) - Not stacked perfectly.
01:26:610 (1,2) - I feel like these two have the ideal spacing, but suddenly 01:27:324 (3) - this is so close? I don't know if it was meant to be like this but I feel like you should add more spacing to 01:27:324 (3) - .
01:16:967 (2) - 01:17:503 (5) - I personally would like if these two were on the same line (y:104) but it's fine, just pointing this out.
01:28:753 (3) - This has an awkward shape, maybe trying to make it straight would be better or adding more curve?
01:29:646 (7,8) - Should have the same shape I assume?
01:31:075 (1,2,3) - These should too? Not sure how do you want these to be.
01:32:324 (5) - 01:31:432 (2) - Not stacked perfectly if you wanted to do that!
01:35:539 (1) - Remove NC
01:38:217 (3) - This slider is meh, I recommend doing it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/961072
01:40:896 (3) - 01:40:182 (1) - Overlap ):
01:41:253 (4) - 01:39:914 (4) - Not stacked perfectly if you wanted to do this!
01:48:932 (1,1) - Make these two the same shape?
01:50:003 (3) - See the previous slider suggestion with the link on it, make it here too? :)
01:53:396 (7) - 01:54:646 (1,2) - I'm not a big fan of 2 reverse arrow sliders in insanes, I think you could come up with some ideas and avoid these? Just my opinion D:

Anyway nice mapset here, it's improved alot! I hope I could help with this :)

Best of luck with this, I hope you get this ranked some day soon ;)

I'll throw a star also o/

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YunoFanatic
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Asphyxia wrote:

M4M as I requested Ingame (I guess)

Please take the time to answer my suggestions, thanks ;)

General thoughts: None I guess, this mapset has been improving quite alot when I last checked this so good job on that :) it doesnt

I will skip Lilywhite's insane, taikos and the hard diff because the owner said so :)

Easy>

I'd say +1 HP because HP1 is too easy for easy, atleast I think so, so think about this! ill think hmm ill ask potatoer
00:14:289 (1) - Volume 100%?!?! Reduce it, pleeeeease! orz forgotten
00:20:003 (1) - ^
00:24:646 (1,2) - I'm not sure if these sliders have the same shape, but just to make sure copy the 00:24:646 (1) - and paste it then :P i did it on purpose .. chnged
00:55:360 (2) - Today isn't 2009 or anything, I would prefer if you would reshape this slider! but i like that :D changed
01:19:646 (8) - Missed NC? ^
01:37:503 - 01:37:860 (1) - Give some time to rest here, beginners might not be able to catch 01:37:860 (1) - :--( so I suggest you end your spinner here 01:37:146 - right
00:39:289 (4) - Object's end is not snapped!
00:40:003 (5) - ^
00:41:074 (6) - ^ all fixed found a new way to place the slider

Anyway, this diff seem to have some big spacing moments, for example: 01:55:717 (4,5) - It's just an easy, don't do this! Or atleast I dont recommend doing this >: i do not really know what distance since i used 1.2 because 2.0 is really to near :(

Normal>

00:14:289 (1) - Again with the volume! okiokkikokioki
00:20:003 (1) - ^
00:37:860 (4) - This current place for this note doesn't fit, either stack it with 00:36:074 (1) - or move it's place.
00:51:432 (4) - 00:49:289 (2) - Not stacked perfectly. fixed
01:31:074 (10) - NC
01:32:146 (12) - 01:31:074 (10) - Not stacked perfectly. fixed
01:33:217 (13) - x:256 y:72? hmm i dont think so

my poor eye didnt see the stacking was so bad

Insane>

00:14:289 - So now you have the reduced volume, did you forgot to do that in your lowest diff too? Seems so >:
00:18:039 (4) - I dislike this slider, it has an ugly shape >: chnged
00:20:003 (1) - 00:14:289 (1) - I know these two are meant to be symmetric, you know? But things like 00:19:646 (8,1) - This (aka overlap) are not nice, I can see this overlap from playing this diff too so I recommend changing it :) moved the slider that overlaps instead make a jump between that 2
00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you follow the basic NC tactic here? 00:45:717 (3,4) - These two should be NC'd. they said it was bad anyway fixed
00:51:253 (1,2) - Not sure but I think these aren't stacked perfectly. err ok
00:57:324 - This break always confuses me while playing this diff, I recommend doing something it if some1 else says about it, but IMO it doesn't feel right. no i like making people cry
01:18:932 (10,1) - Not stacked perfectly. oki
01:26:610 (1,2) - I feel like these two have the ideal spacing, but suddenly 01:27:324 (3) - this is so close? I don't know if it was meant to be like this but I feel like you should add more spacing to 01:27:324 (3) - . i dont know to D:
01:16:967 (2) - 01:17:503 (5) - I personally would like if these two were on the same line (y:104) but it's fine, just pointing this out. dun
01:28:753 (3) - This has an awkward shape, maybe trying to make it straight would be better or adding more curve? curve
01:29:646 (7,8) - Should have the same shape I assume? k
01:31:075 (1,2,3) - These should too? Not sure how do you want these to be. i want it curved
01:32:324 (5) - 01:31:432 (2) - Not stacked perfectly if you wanted to do that! ok
01:35:539 (1) - Remove NC why? ok
01:38:217 (3) - This slider is meh, I recommend doing it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/961072 oki
01:40:896 (3) - 01:40:182 (1) - Overlap ): fxed
01:41:253 (4) - 01:39:914 (4) - Not stacked perfectly if you wanted to do this! ok
01:48:932 (1,1) - Make these two the same shape? ok
01:50:003 (3) - See the previous slider suggestion with the link on it, make it here too? :) im lazy ok
01:53:396 (7) - 01:54:646 (1,2) - I'm not a big fan of 2 reverse arrow sliders in insanes, I think you could come up with some ideas and avoid these? Just my opinion D: i like making people cry. ok

Anyway nice mapset here, it's improved alot! I hope I could help with this :)

Best of luck with this, I hope you get this ranked some day soon ;) once i attempted i just got broke

I'll throw a star also o/ \o a r i g a t o u

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making people cry gomen for the trouble
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