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PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko]

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Dolphin
Sorry for taking forever. I have been very busy lately! ;;

I finally went around and looked for potential hitsounds that fit well with the music

http://puu.sh/44Tjb.zip

Of course, use only the ones you want to use. I just picked out the ones that reflect the song the best.
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Dolphin wrote:

Sorry for taking forever. I have been very busy lately! ;;

I finally went around and looked for potential hitsounds that fit well with the music

http://puu.sh/44Tjb.zip

Of course, use only the ones you want to use. I just picked out the ones that reflect the song the best.
Dont bother \:D/ thanks!
Updated :3 ill get the gders..
Ayu
feel free to be a potato
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Ayu wrote:

feel free to be a potato
the gif below the picture shows my expression :D
Graphite Edge
m4m as requested!

Mods to improve the patterns only (since im new to modding :3)

[Normal]
00:33:574 (4) - Move to x:368 y:276
00:34:467 (5) - ^ x:456 y:164

[Insane]
00:29:646 (4) - should be moved to x:336 y:128
00:30:003 (6) - ^ x:412 y:184
00:30:182 (7) - ^ x:260 y:184
00:39:467 (3) - ^ x:424 y:204
00:50:539 (8) - ^ x:380 y:96
00:51:074 (1) - ^ x:296 y:248
00:51:253 (2) - ^ x:256 y:344
00:51:342 (3) - ^ x:216 y:340
01:23:932 (5) - Flip Horizontally and ^ x:384 y:176
abdomsisn
MY NOOB MOD XD

EASY
00:33:574 (3) - looks better
00:37:146 (1,2,3) - move 2 and 3 to the right side of 1's end?
00:48:217 (1,2,3) - make them blanket to look better?
01:02:146 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:15:717 (3) - ^
so many things like that ↑ but they're not nessecery, just my own suggestions
and also it's a good map

NORMAL
00:26:967 (4,5) - make them in a straight line?

good map and ..... blanket blanket blanket orz

INSANE
you can use an arc+straight line to make a slider.

good rhythm and good map XD

Lily'S INSANE
00:29:646 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them have same ds
00:46:074 (1,2,3) - make them become a 60° 60° 60°△,you can use the ctrl+shift+d
01:47:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - make them have same ds
good blanket and good map

TSU'S HARD
01:19:289 (7,8,1) - rhythm?
01:28:753 (3) - blanket

almost perfectXD, i'm so pleasant for modding this difficultyXD
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
Thanks for modding! i have fixed some of your mod some of your mod i fixed some of your mod leave at it is xD too lazy to taype and besides nazi :*
IZIMAKO
I receive your mod request (I'll mod only Easy, Normal)

I change some slider's position

Because their is too close to feel comfortable.

Use uploaded osu file, If you can't feel satisfaction, Just Click "Update Last Pending Version"

[Easy]

Changed osu File : http://puu.sh/45nmv.osu

<Changeed Slider List>
  1. 00:33:216 (1) -
  2. 00:37:146 (1) -
  3. 00:53:932 (1) -
  4. 01:05:003 (2) -
  5. 01:06:074 (3) -
  6. 01:38:217 (1) -
  7. 01:50:717 (2) -
  8. 01:52:146 (1) -

[Normal]

Changed osu File : http://puu.sh/45nnI.osu

<Changed Slider List>
  1. 00:28:574 (7) -
  2. 00:30:360 (1) -
  3. 01:18:574 (7) -

[P.S.]
Sorry about my poor moding.
But your map have gotten many moding. So it hard to find problem.
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

IZIMAKO wrote:

I receive your mod request (I'll mod only Easy, Normal)

I change some slider's position

Because their is too close to feel comfortable.

Use uploaded osu file, If you can't feel satisfaction, Just Click "Update Last Pending Version"

[Easy]

Changed osu File : http://puu.sh/45nmv.osu

<Changeed Slider List>
  1. 00:33:216 (1) -
  2. 00:37:146 (1) -
  3. 00:53:932 (1) -
  4. 01:05:003 (2) -
  5. 01:06:074 (3) -
  6. 01:38:217 (1) -
  7. 01:50:717 (2) -
  8. 01:52:146 (1) -

[Normal]

Changed osu File : http://puu.sh/45nnI.osu

<Changed Slider List>
  1. 00:28:574 (7) -
  2. 00:30:360 (1) -
  3. 01:18:574 (7) -

[P.S.]
Sorry about my poor moding.
But your map have gotten many moding. So it hard to find problem.
Ill review does..! thanks for the help..
lkx_Shore
well
just goodluck
Overwrite

abdomsisn wrote:

Lily'S INSANE
00:29:646 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them have same ds Isn't it alerady the case?
00:46:074 (1,2,3) - make them become a 60° 60° 60°△,you can use the ctrl+shift+d Same here?
01:47:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - make them have same ds Fixed.
good blanket and good map
Thank you.
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mushroom mother.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47503
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:マッシュルームマザー
Artist:PinocchioP
ArtistUnicode:ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Insane
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku vocaloid onosakihito lilywhite vahn10 mingmichael
BeatmapID:288553
BeatmapSetID:102307

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,55,251,187

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257,139,74289,6,0,P|243:186|256:231,1,87.500000834465,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,114,74646,2,0,P|201:77|325:91,2,175.00000166893,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,192,75539,2,0,L|48:237,2,43.7500004172325,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,198,75896,2,0,P|245:171|254:124,1,87.500000834465,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,270,76253,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,260,76432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,135,76610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,308,76789,6,0,P|217:340|325:277,1,175.00000166893,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,172,77324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
113,66,77503,2,0,P|148:55|197:65,1,87.500000834465,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,105,77860,2,0,P|349:141|325:231,1,131.250001251698,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,240,78217,2,0,P|336:286|384:304,1,87.500000834465,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,78574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,132,78753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,28,78932,2,0,L|336:8,2,43.7500004172325,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,64,79289,2,0,P|127:98|185:208,1,175.00000166893,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,138,79824,5,4,0:0:0:0:
332,260,80003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,80182,2,0,P|135:206|110:175,2,87.500000834465,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,321,80717,2,0,P|330:338|375:322,1,87.500000834465,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,317,80985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,300,81074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
358,173,81253,6,0,P|375:126|326:80,1,87.500000834465,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,133,81610,2,0,P|142:163|130:221,1,87.500000834465,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,235,81967,2,0,P|403:239|437:175,1,175.00000166893,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,164,82503,1,4,0:0:0:0:
154,303,82682,1,4,0:0:0:0:
39,35,83932,6,4,L|38:126,1,87.500000834465
150,191,84289,2,0,L|150:98,1,87.500000834465,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,40,84824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
409,61,84914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
414,81,85003,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,101,85092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,122,85182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,142,85271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,162,85360,6,0,P|454:208|366:281,1,175.00000166893,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,151,85896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,23,86074,2,0,P|312:71|265:89,1,87.500000834465,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,219,86432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,120,86610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,251,86789,2,0,P|259:291|346:279,1,131.250001251698,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,279,87146,2,0,P|385:240|426:231,2,87.500000834465,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,87682,2,0,P|279:70|243:46,2,87.500000834465,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,206,88217,6,0,P|150:278|206:322,1,131.250001251698,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,317,88574,2,0,L|302:316,2,87.500000834465,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,186,89110,1,2,0:0:0:0:
107,138,89289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,153,89467,2,0,P|277:122|233:105,1,87.500000834465,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,272,89824,2,0,P|292:323|268:370,2,87.500000834465,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,104,90360,2,0,P|268:75|376:128,2,175.00000166893,0|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,298,91432,6,0,L|109:222,1,87.500000834465,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,91789,2,0,L|174:249,1,87.500000834465,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,206,92146,2,0,P|304:157|192:104,2,175.00000166893,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,93039,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,284,93217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,172,93396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,308,93574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,76,93932,6,4,L|160:76,1,87.500000834465
256,176,94289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,276,94467,2,4,L|344:276,1,87.500000834465
256,176,94824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,179,95003,2,0,L|156:92,1,87.500000834465,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,95360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,176,95539,2,4,L|356:264,1,87.500000834465
256,192,95896,12,2,97146,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97503,6,0,P|288:148|252:56,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,97860,2,0,L|136:52,2,100,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,98396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,264,98574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,260,98753,2,0,P|100:224|92:176,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,328,99199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,308,99289,2,0,P|330:188|275:186,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,106,99824,2,0,L|119:64,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,233,100182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,169,100360,6,0,P|231:121|222:70,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,224,100717,2,0,P|196:255|116:169,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,158,101253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,328,101432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,215,101610,2,0,P|396:166|382:116,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,214,102057,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,328,102324,1,4,0:0:0:0:
8,168,102682,6,0,P|0:220|112:312,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,184,103217,2,0,P|145:140|93:135,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,262,103574,2,0,P|230:243|251:194,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,208,103932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,297,104110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,155,104289,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,297,104467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,129,104646,6,0,B|380:77|336:75|320:75|320:75|301:33,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,42,105003,1,8,0:0:0:0:
133,84,105182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,177,105360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,375,105539,2,0,P|226:363|197:318,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,242,106074,6,0,P|150:255|136:360,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,364,106432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,167,106610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,106789,2,0,P|316:308|344:360,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,198,107146,2,0,B|278:184|278:184|288:136|258:110|227:113|215:128,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,268,107503,5,6,0:0:0:0:
409,253,107592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,234,107682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,216,107771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
updated but in WIP i gotto fix insane..
Asagi Mutsuki
Before modding.... THIS


Strange that the other diffs doesn't have this problem
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Before modding.... THIS


Strange that the other diffs doesn't have this problem

yes there are inconsistancies so i putted it on WIP i havent sleep plz :< tomorrow ill fix this
DexFrild
Hi~ ^_^

[Easy]
• 00:46:432 (1) - Start spinner here.
• 00:49:289 (2,3,4) - Make it more symmetric.

• 01:15:717 (3) - Make it more playable
• 01:20:360 (1) - Looks a bit ugly. Maybe it would be better:
• 00:38:217 (1,2) - ^ • 00:41:432 (5) - ^ • 01:42:860 (1,2,3,4) - Recheck Distance
• 01:50:717 (2) - Make it more beautiful
• 01:54:646 (1,2)

And I looked your map in AIBat.
SPOILER
[m1ng's Oni]
Audio Lead-In
There is only 1075 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Snapping
01:37:769 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:037 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:38:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:287 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:39:644 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:40:180 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:40:894 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:430 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:519 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:41:787 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:055 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:680 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:42:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:037 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:43:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:287 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:644 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:44:912 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:45:180 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:45:537 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:45:894 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:430 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:46:787 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:055 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:144 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:47:769 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:037 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:48:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:49:287 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:49:644 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:180 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:269 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:537 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:50:894 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:162 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:430 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:519 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:51:787 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:144 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:412 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:680 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:52:769 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:037 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:305 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:394 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:53:930 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:287 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:54:644 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:180 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:55:894 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:430 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:56:787 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:055 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:144 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:680 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
01:57:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:037 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:394 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
01:58:930 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:49:287 - snap to 01:49:289
01:58:930 - snap to 01:58:932


Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:49:287, ends on 01:58:930


[Insane]
Spinner Length
00:58:574 (1) - This spinner is 715 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 1000 on auto.

Spinner New Combo
00:48:217 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.


[LilyWhite's Insane]
Spinner Length
01:13:217 (1) - This spinner is 714 ms long, which is shorter than 750 ms; check that it gets at least 1000 on auto.

Good song :3 Good luck with rank!
Horo
irc mod

funyaa~
01:38 YunoFanatic: can i get a mod from you?
01:38 YunoFanatic: plz?
01:38 Horo: uh
01:38 Horo: not tonight
01:38 Horo: i dont have time
01:38 Horo: forum pm link
01:38 YunoFanatic: ohh
01:38 YunoFanatic: maybe nxt time
01:38 Horo: ok
01:38 Horo: do you just want a play test?
01:38 YunoFanatic: yep
01:39 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/288555 PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Normal]]
01:39 Horo: diff?
01:39 Horo: normal?
01:39 Horo: or your insane
01:40 YunoFanatic: easy,normal and insane
01:40 YunoFanatic: other gders map is okay
01:40 YunoFanatic: ijust created and updated that three
01:43 Horo: that first triplet
01:43 Horo: is awk
01:43 Horo: imo
01:43 Horo: in the insane
01:43 Horo: also
01:43 Horo: flip the second section entirely
01:43 YunoFanatic: ok
01:43 Horo: that part right after the first break
01:43 Horo: ctrl h
01:44 YunoFanatic: after the first break
01:44 YunoFanatic: 00:20:403
01:44 YunoFanatic: this one>
01:45 Horo: yes
01:45 Horo: but
01:45 Horo: consider
01:45 Horo: http://puu.sh/46gEZ.jpg
01:45 Horo: for sliders
01:45 Horo: and ctrl h
01:45 Horo: to make a heart
01:45 YunoFanatic: i was doing a hreat it seems i failed
01:45 Horo: hahah
01:45 Horo: try those points
01:46 Horo: 00:29:646 (4) - swap with 6, ctrl+G
01:47 Horo: 00:32:146 (5) - move away from (4) a bit
01:47 YunoFanatic: done
01:47 Horo: 00:36:074 (7) - consider putting somewhere else, e.g. starting from a different point
01:47 Horo: kinda big pause to be in same spot
01:48 YunoFanatic: top right would be ok>?
01:48 Horo: sure
01:48 Horo: whatever look sgood to you
01:48 Horo: 00:46:253 (4) - ctrl+j
01:48 YunoFanatic: ok!
01:49 Horo: 00:55:003 (5) - ctrl+g, ctrl+h, slide back where it was
01:49 Horo: 00:56:610 (4) - ctrl g
01:50 Horo: modding because good song haha
01:50 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - timing seems awkward, i know its a downbeat but rest follows voice
01:51 Horo: consider redoing 5 - spinner
01:51 YunoFanatic: lol
01:51 YunoFanatic: 5 spinner in here?
01:51 Horo: nono
01:52 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - to the spinner
01:52 YunoFanatic: sht i just did it xD
01:52 Horo: haha
01:52 Horo: k
01:52 YunoFanatic: wait look
01:52 Horo: 00:59:646 (1) - from here on is really good
01:52 Horo: during the kiai
01:52 Horo: good section
01:53 YunoFanatic: oh
01:53 Horo: 01:05:896 (2) - and 3 both, ctrl G
01:53 Horo: actually
01:53 Horo: only maybe
01:53 Horo: on those
01:53 Horo: you think about it
01:53 YunoFanatic: ok..
01:54 YunoFanatic: when you said 5 spinner i made this imo
01:54 YunoFanatic: http://puu.sh/46gQW.png
01:54 Horo: ok
01:54 YunoFanatic: is it ok?
01:55 Horo: yeah seems fine, i can see the rhythm
01:55 Horo: but i cant actually see where the sliders are
01:55 YunoFanatic: ok! thanks!
01:55 Horo: 01:16:789 (7) - get this off the slider
01:56 YunoFanatic: dun
01:56 Horo: 01:33:932 (1) - thru 4, considering +scale
01:57 YunoFanatic: ok
01:57 Horo: 01:51:967 (2) - consider delete
01:57 Horo: same as before
01:57 Horo: 01:54:289 (4) - clap
01:58 YunoFanatic: all done as said
01:58 Horo: going back through for hitsounds
01:58 YunoFanatic: so it doesnt need to be remmaped?
01:58 Horo: have people suggested that?
01:59 YunoFanatic: only one
01:59 YunoFanatic: unitedwesin
01:59 Horo: i personally dont really believe in remapping
01:59 Horo: hm
01:59 YunoFanatic: the new bat
01:59 Horo: im not an expert at beatmapping by any stretch
01:59 YunoFanatic: oh brother your kidding
02:00 Horo: 00:34:824 (5) - slider start clap
02:01 Horo: kill the clap at the end of it
02:01 YunoFanatic: dun
02:01 Horo: 00:38:396 (5) - slider end whistle
02:01 Horo: 00:43:932 (7) - whistle
02:01 YunoFanatic: dun dun
02:02 Horo: 00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - consider whistle
02:02 Horo: sounds kinda weird
02:02 Horo: instead of clap
02:02 YunoFanatic: kkk
02:02 Horo: 00:50:539 (8) - slider start whistle
02:03 Horo: 00:48:753 (2) - end clap
02:03 Horo: no finish
02:03 YunoFanatic: dun
02:03 Horo: 00:48:217 (1) - should have finish and clap
02:04 YunoFanatic: start finish end clap right?
02:04 Horo: start should have both
02:04 Horo: end should have clap
02:04 Horo: also
02:04 Horo: with 1/4 divisor
02:04 YunoFanatic: oh
02:04 Horo: keep the claps going on white ticks
02:04 YunoFanatic: only white ticks
02:05 Horo: well
02:05 Horo: mostly
02:05 Horo: to keep the rhythm going
02:05 Horo: do that for most of hte phrases
02:05 Horo: but
02:05 Horo: for example
02:05 YunoFanatic: ok!
02:05 Horo: 00:50:539 (8) - make that slider head a whistle, end a clap
02:05 Horo: and do stuff like that to make it interesting
02:06 YunoFanatic: ok
02:06 Horo: 00:53:217 (9) - slider head and end whistle
02:06 Horo: middle nothing
02:06 YunoFanatic: ok
02:06 Horo: 00:53:217 (9) - after this, put a note on that red tick
02:06 Horo: NC
02:07 YunoFanatic: exhange nc with the one?
02:07 Horo: yea
02:07 Horo: but i mean
02:07 Horo: not on the slider
02:07 Horo: put it on the new note you make
02:07 Horo: actually
02:07 Horo: no
02:07 Horo: dont
02:07 Horo: keep it on the one
02:07 Horo: add the note on the other combo
02:08 Horo: and maybe break it up so no 10
02:08 YunoFanatic: ok ok
02:08 YunoFanatic: dun
02:08 Horo: keep doing the hitsounds like that
02:08 YunoFanatic: ok!! thanks
02:08 Horo: 00:59:646 (1) - from here, sections like this
02:09 Horo: at the end of the choruses
02:09 Horo: try claps every other white tick
02:09 YunoFanatic: yep
02:09 YunoFanatic: it might sound good
02:09 Horo: you were doing that, but it kinda died, keep it consistent
02:09 YunoFanatic: ok
02:09 Horo: 01:15:896 (6) - do something more interesting here
02:10 Horo: 2 sliders maybe
02:10 Horo: that 1/3 doesnt make sense
02:10 Horo: well
02:10 Horo: not a third
02:10 Horo: but you know what i mean
02:11 YunoFanatic: yes
02:11 YunoFanatic: 2 slider
02:11 Horo: 01:35:896 (1) - move to
02:11 Horo: 01:36:074 (1) -
02:11 Horo: stretch to 01:37:146
02:12 Horo: 01:48:574 (1) - consider putting note right in center here
02:12 Horo: and make
02:12 Horo: 01:48:932 (1) -
02:12 Horo: a slider
02:12 Horo: for flow
02:13 Horo: one more time thru
02:13 Horo: simply for NCs
02:13 YunoFanatic: ok
02:13 Horo: 00:35:717 (7) - add note stacked on slider end
02:14 Horo: 00:36:074 (8) - NC
02:14 Horo: 00:36:967 (1) - remove NC
02:14 Horo: 00:42:503 (3,6) - consider NC
02:14 Horo: maybe weird
02:15 Horo: 00:49:646 (5) - nc
02:15 YunoFanatic: yay nc
02:15 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hlY.jpg try this
02:16 Horo: 00:51:253 (2,3,4) - tbh these dont really fit with your map
02:16 YunoFanatic: i think triplets in there is good though
02:17 Horo: ok
02:17 Horo: move back into play field then
02:17 Horo: XD
02:17 YunoFanatic: but after the triplets the slider one ill replace with nre one
02:17 YunoFanatic: new*
02:17 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hpc.jpg this aint good hahahah
02:17 YunoFanatic: you like this song
02:17 Horo: get in the playfield
02:18 YunoFanatic: why keep laughing D:
02:18 Horo: no, its not funny, just those triplets are off the screen
02:18 Horo: unrankable
02:18 Horo: move them in a bit
02:18 Horo: also
02:18 Horo: 00:52:324 (6) - NC
02:18 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - NC
02:18 YunoFanatic: they are now in the creen
02:19 Horo: k
02:19 Horo: 01:01:074 (5) - NC
02:19 Horo: 01:02:503 (10) - NC
02:19 YunoFanatic: remember in
02:19 YunoFanatic: 00:57:146
02:19 YunoFanatic: i maked them spinners
02:19 YunoFanatic: you said so
02:20 Horo: oh yeah
02:20 Horo: i didnt change anything thre
02:20 Horo: sorry
02:20 Horo: wait
02:20 Horo: you made
02:20 Horo: those
02:20 Horo: all spinners?
02:20 Horo: what
02:20 Horo: i meant
02:20 YunoFanatic: :D
02:20 Horo: wow
02:20 Horo: ok
02:20 Horo: lol
02:20 Horo: w/e
02:20 Horo: you should make them symmetrical sliders
02:20 YunoFanatic: oh sht
02:20 YunoFanatic: as what you said make 5 spinner thats what i did
02:22 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hwk.jpg
02:22 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hwq.jpg
02:22 Horo: do that
02:23 YunoFanatic: jump
02:23 Horo: yea
02:23 Horo: 01:03:753 (5) - nc
02:23 Horo: 01:15:182 (4) - nc
02:24 Horo: 01:15:896 (6) - ctrl G
02:24 YunoFanatic: ok
02:24 Horo: 01:16:789 (7) - stack on slider end of 6
02:24 Horo: 01:16:967 (8,9) - move up vertically a bit
02:25 Horo: 01:18:217 (1) - move up to the top right of 10
02:25 Horo: in fact
02:25 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hAB.jpg
02:26 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hC1.jpg this too
02:26 Horo: 01:23:932 (6) - nc
02:27 Horo: 01:30:896 (1,2,3,4,1) - move all these over to the white tick
02:27 Horo: ticks*
02:28 YunoFanatic: move them all in the white ticks?
02:28 YunoFanatic: the last spinner the end of that should end in the red tick/
02:28 Horo: thats fine
02:28 Horo: cut it a bit after you move it
02:28 Horo: 01:45:360 (2,3,4) - spread out
02:29 Horo: 01:45:896 (4) - ctrl g
02:29 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hGE.jpg make sure this parts ncs are like this
02:29 Horo: 01:54:110 (3,4) - whistles
02:30 Horo: 01:52:503 (5) - nc
02:30 Horo: 01:52:503 (5) - kill nc
02:30 Horo: 01:53:396 (4) - nc?
02:30 YunoFanatic: dun
02:31 Horo: and thats pretty much it
02:31 YunoFanatic: dun
02:31 Horo: go thru and redo hitsounds
02:31 YunoFanatic: thanks! for the help
02:31 Horo: np
02:31 YunoFanatic: kds?
02:31 Horo: i can post log
02:31 Horo: sure
02:31 Horo: ill go thru and do the other diffs tomorrow if you want

ganbatte~!
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Horo wrote:

irc mod

funyaa~
01:38 YunoFanatic: can i get a mod from you?
01:38 YunoFanatic: plz?
01:38 Horo: uh
01:38 Horo: not tonight
01:38 Horo: i dont have time
01:38 Horo: forum pm link
01:38 YunoFanatic: ohh
01:38 YunoFanatic: maybe nxt time
01:38 Horo: ok
01:38 Horo: do you just want a play test?
01:38 YunoFanatic: yep
01:39 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/288555 PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Normal]]
01:39 Horo: diff?
01:39 Horo: normal?
01:39 Horo: or your insane
01:40 YunoFanatic: easy,normal and insane
01:40 YunoFanatic: other gders map is okay
01:40 YunoFanatic: ijust created and updated that three
01:43 Horo: that first triplet
01:43 Horo: is awk
01:43 Horo: imo
01:43 Horo: in the insane
01:43 Horo: also
01:43 Horo: flip the second section entirely
01:43 YunoFanatic: ok
01:43 Horo: that part right after the first break
01:43 Horo: ctrl h
01:44 YunoFanatic: after the first break
01:44 YunoFanatic: 00:20:403
01:44 YunoFanatic: this one>
01:45 Horo: yes
01:45 Horo: but
01:45 Horo: consider
01:45 Horo: http://puu.sh/46gEZ.jpg
01:45 Horo: for sliders
01:45 Horo: and ctrl h
01:45 Horo: to make a heart
01:45 YunoFanatic: i was doing a hreat it seems i failed
01:45 Horo: hahah
01:45 Horo: try those points
01:46 Horo: 00:29:646 (4) - swap with 6, ctrl+G
01:47 Horo: 00:32:146 (5) - move away from (4) a bit
01:47 YunoFanatic: done
01:47 Horo: 00:36:074 (7) - consider putting somewhere else, e.g. starting from a different point
01:47 Horo: kinda big pause to be in same spot
01:48 YunoFanatic: top right would be ok>?
01:48 Horo: sure
01:48 Horo: whatever look sgood to you
01:48 Horo: 00:46:253 (4) - ctrl+j
01:48 YunoFanatic: ok!
01:49 Horo: 00:55:003 (5) - ctrl+g, ctrl+h, slide back where it was
01:49 Horo: 00:56:610 (4) - ctrl g
01:50 Horo: modding because good song haha
01:50 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - timing seems awkward, i know its a downbeat but rest follows voice
01:51 Horo: consider redoing 5 - spinner
01:51 YunoFanatic: lol
01:51 YunoFanatic: 5 spinner in here?
01:51 Horo: nono
01:52 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - to the spinner
01:52 YunoFanatic: sht i just did it xD
01:52 Horo: haha
01:52 Horo: k
01:52 YunoFanatic: wait look
01:52 Horo: 00:59:646 (1) - from here on is really good
01:52 Horo: during the kiai
01:52 Horo: good section
01:53 YunoFanatic: oh
01:53 Horo: 01:05:896 (2) - and 3 both, ctrl G
01:53 Horo: actually
01:53 Horo: only maybe
01:53 Horo: on those
01:53 Horo: you think about it
01:53 YunoFanatic: ok..
01:54 YunoFanatic: when you said 5 spinner i made this imo
01:54 YunoFanatic: http://puu.sh/46gQW.png
01:54 Horo: ok
01:54 YunoFanatic: is it ok?
01:55 Horo: yeah seems fine, i can see the rhythm
01:55 Horo: but i cant actually see where the sliders are
01:55 YunoFanatic: ok! thanks!
01:55 Horo: 01:16:789 (7) - get this off the slider
01:56 YunoFanatic: dun
01:56 Horo: 01:33:932 (1) - thru 4, considering +scale
01:57 YunoFanatic: ok
01:57 Horo: 01:51:967 (2) - consider delete
01:57 Horo: same as before
01:57 Horo: 01:54:289 (4) - clap
01:58 YunoFanatic: all done as said
01:58 Horo: going back through for hitsounds
01:58 YunoFanatic: so it doesnt need to be remmaped?
01:58 Horo: have people suggested that?
01:59 YunoFanatic: only one
01:59 YunoFanatic: unitedwesin
01:59 Horo: i personally dont really believe in remapping
01:59 Horo: hm
01:59 YunoFanatic: the new bat
01:59 Horo: im not an expert at beatmapping by any stretch
01:59 YunoFanatic: oh brother your kidding
02:00 Horo: 00:34:824 (5) - slider start clap
02:01 Horo: kill the clap at the end of it
02:01 YunoFanatic: dun
02:01 Horo: 00:38:396 (5) - slider end whistle
02:01 Horo: 00:43:932 (7) - whistle
02:01 YunoFanatic: dun dun
02:02 Horo: 00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - consider whistle
02:02 Horo: sounds kinda weird
02:02 Horo: instead of clap
02:02 YunoFanatic: kkk
02:02 Horo: 00:50:539 (8) - slider start whistle
02:03 Horo: 00:48:753 (2) - end clap
02:03 Horo: no finish
02:03 YunoFanatic: dun
02:03 Horo: 00:48:217 (1) - should have finish and clap
02:04 YunoFanatic: start finish end clap right?
02:04 Horo: start should have both
02:04 Horo: end should have clap
02:04 Horo: also
02:04 Horo: with 1/4 divisor
02:04 YunoFanatic: oh
02:04 Horo: keep the claps going on white ticks
02:04 YunoFanatic: only white ticks
02:05 Horo: well
02:05 Horo: mostly
02:05 Horo: to keep the rhythm going
02:05 Horo: do that for most of hte phrases
02:05 Horo: but
02:05 Horo: for example
02:05 YunoFanatic: ok!
02:05 Horo: 00:50:539 (8) - make that slider head a whistle, end a clap
02:05 Horo: and do stuff like that to make it interesting
02:06 YunoFanatic: ok
02:06 Horo: 00:53:217 (9) - slider head and end whistle
02:06 Horo: middle nothing
02:06 YunoFanatic: ok
02:06 Horo: 00:53:217 (9) - after this, put a note on that red tick
02:06 Horo: NC
02:07 YunoFanatic: exhange nc with the one?
02:07 Horo: yea
02:07 Horo: but i mean
02:07 Horo: not on the slider
02:07 Horo: put it on the new note you make
02:07 Horo: actually
02:07 Horo: no
02:07 Horo: dont
02:07 Horo: keep it on the one
02:07 Horo: add the note on the other combo
02:08 Horo: and maybe break it up so no 10
02:08 YunoFanatic: ok ok
02:08 YunoFanatic: dun
02:08 Horo: keep doing the hitsounds like that
02:08 YunoFanatic: ok!! thanks
02:08 Horo: 00:59:646 (1) - from here, sections like this
02:09 Horo: at the end of the choruses
02:09 Horo: try claps every other white tick
02:09 YunoFanatic: yep
02:09 YunoFanatic: it might sound good
02:09 Horo: you were doing that, but it kinda died, keep it consistent
02:09 YunoFanatic: ok
02:09 Horo: 01:15:896 (6) - do something more interesting here
02:10 Horo: 2 sliders maybe
02:10 Horo: that 1/3 doesnt make sense
02:10 Horo: well
02:10 Horo: not a third
02:10 Horo: but you know what i mean
02:11 YunoFanatic: yes
02:11 YunoFanatic: 2 slider
02:11 Horo: 01:35:896 (1) - move to
02:11 Horo: 01:36:074 (1) -
02:11 Horo: stretch to 01:37:146
02:12 Horo: 01:48:574 (1) - consider putting note right in center here
02:12 Horo: and make
02:12 Horo: 01:48:932 (1) -
02:12 Horo: a slider
02:12 Horo: for flow
02:13 Horo: one more time thru
02:13 Horo: simply for NCs
02:13 YunoFanatic: ok
02:13 Horo: 00:35:717 (7) - add note stacked on slider end
02:14 Horo: 00:36:074 (8) - NC
02:14 Horo: 00:36:967 (1) - remove NC
02:14 Horo: 00:42:503 (3,6) - consider NC
02:14 Horo: maybe weird
02:15 Horo: 00:49:646 (5) - nc
02:15 YunoFanatic: yay nc
02:15 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hlY.jpg try this
02:16 Horo: 00:51:253 (2,3,4) - tbh these dont really fit with your map
02:16 YunoFanatic: i think triplets in there is good though
02:17 Horo: ok
02:17 Horo: move back into play field then
02:17 Horo: XD
02:17 YunoFanatic: but after the triplets the slider one ill replace with nre one
02:17 YunoFanatic: new*
02:17 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hpc.jpg this aint good hahahah
02:17 YunoFanatic: you like this song
02:17 Horo: get in the playfield
02:18 YunoFanatic: why keep laughing D:
02:18 Horo: no, its not funny, just those triplets are off the screen
02:18 Horo: unrankable
02:18 Horo: move them in a bit
02:18 Horo: also
02:18 Horo: 00:52:324 (6) - NC
02:18 Horo: 00:57:146 (5) - NC
02:18 YunoFanatic: they are now in the creen
02:19 Horo: k
02:19 Horo: 01:01:074 (5) - NC
02:19 Horo: 01:02:503 (10) - NC
02:19 YunoFanatic: remember in
02:19 YunoFanatic: 00:57:146
02:19 YunoFanatic: i maked them spinners
02:19 YunoFanatic: you said so
02:20 Horo: oh yeah
02:20 Horo: i didnt change anything thre
02:20 Horo: sorry
02:20 Horo: wait
02:20 Horo: you made
02:20 Horo: those
02:20 Horo: all spinners?
02:20 Horo: what
02:20 Horo: i meant
02:20 YunoFanatic: :D
02:20 Horo: wow
02:20 Horo: ok
02:20 Horo: lol
02:20 Horo: w/e
02:20 Horo: you should make them symmetrical sliders
02:20 YunoFanatic: oh sht
02:20 YunoFanatic: as what you said make 5 spinner thats what i did
02:22 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hwk.jpg
02:22 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hwq.jpg
02:22 Horo: do that
02:23 YunoFanatic: jump
02:23 Horo: yea
02:23 Horo: 01:03:753 (5) - nc
02:23 Horo: 01:15:182 (4) - nc
02:24 Horo: 01:15:896 (6) - ctrl G
02:24 YunoFanatic: ok
02:24 Horo: 01:16:789 (7) - stack on slider end of 6
02:24 Horo: 01:16:967 (8,9) - move up vertically a bit
02:25 Horo: 01:18:217 (1) - move up to the top right of 10
02:25 Horo: in fact
02:25 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hAB.jpg
02:26 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hC1.jpg this too
02:26 Horo: 01:23:932 (6) - nc
02:27 Horo: 01:30:896 (1,2,3,4,1) - move all these over to the white tick
02:27 Horo: ticks*
02:28 YunoFanatic: move them all in the white ticks?
02:28 YunoFanatic: the last spinner the end of that should end in the red tick/
02:28 Horo: thats fine
02:28 Horo: cut it a bit after you move it
02:28 Horo: 01:45:360 (2,3,4) - spread out
02:29 Horo: 01:45:896 (4) - ctrl g
02:29 Horo: http://puu.sh/46hGE.jpg make sure this parts ncs are like this
02:29 Horo: 01:54:110 (3,4) - whistles
02:30 Horo: 01:52:503 (5) - nc
02:30 Horo: 01:52:503 (5) - kill nc
02:30 Horo: 01:53:396 (4) - nc?
02:30 YunoFanatic: dun
02:31 Horo: and thats pretty much it
02:31 YunoFanatic: dun
02:31 Horo: go thru and redo hitsounds
02:31 YunoFanatic: thanks! for the help
02:31 Horo: np
02:31 YunoFanatic: kds?
02:31 Horo: i can post log
02:31 Horo: sure
02:31 Horo: ill go thru and do the other diffs tomorrow if you want

ganbatte~!
thanks.... when i send you the picture if that was a heart i heard you laugh yo mean :D
Asagi Mutsuki
Taiko mod from modding queue, everything is suggestion ._.

Ono's muzukashii
00:01:789 and 00:03:396 : delete kat because no sound in music that time?
00:06:789 : add kat
00:09:914 : change to don
00:45:986 and 00:46:253 and 00:58:753: change to big kat
01:01:253 and 01:01:771 and 01:03:396 and 01:07:057 and 01:46:610 and 01:57:682 delete kat

Ono's oni
00:01:789 delete kat
01:13:932 to 01:19:289 keep sv multiplier at 0.5
01:19:646 to 01:22:592 keep sv multiplier at 1.0
01:23:932 to 01:24:467 change sv multiplier back to 0.5

m1ng's oni
00:15:807 : delete don
00:17:324 to 00:17:682 make it a ddddk 1/4 stream
00:20:182 : hard to explain, change it like the pic below (circled part) :P

00:47:503 to 00:47:682 : change it to kkkk 1/6 stream since you already have some 1/6 streams at the beginning (if don't know i'll post screenshot later otL)
00:52:771 and 01:42:057 : change to big note (prefers big kat)

Other thingies
00:24:646 to 00:36:253 and 01:13:932 to 01:19:646 change volume softer (I tried 60% and is ok)
Dolphin
Add "Redownload this map if you downloaded before *date you added hitsounds*" as a note to people who downloaded this before the time you added the hitsounds, or else they will not get the new hitsounds.

Btw hitsounds are nowhere to be found in the Song Folder. You might wanna fix that.
mingmichael

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Taiko mod from modding queue, everything is suggestion ._.

m1ng's oni
00:15:807 : delete don
00:17:324 to 00:17:682 make it a ddddk 1/4 stream
00:20:182 : hard to explain, change it like the pic below (circled part) :P

00:47:503 to 00:47:682 : change it to kkkk 1/6 stream since you already have some 1/6 streams at the beginning (if don't know i'll post screenshot later otL)
00:52:771 and 01:42:057 : change to big note (prefers big kat)

Other thingies
00:24:646 to 00:36:253 and 01:13:932 to 01:19:646 change volume softer (I tried 60% and is ok)
sorry, i didn't changed anything. but i'll think again about 2parts at my diff. let see from another modders
sheela
[General]
The first kiai time that ends at 00:59:646 should end at 00:59:289 ?
The third kiai time that ends at 01:48:932 should end at 01:48:574 ?

[Easy]
00:26:074 (2) - Copy and paste 00:26:074 (2) and do Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G so they could be alike.
00:46:610 (1) - Maybe it should end at 00:47:503 ? So the newbies could take time to find 00:48:217 (1) even if it shows fast.
01:17:146 (4) - x: 392 y:184 and 01:17:503 (5) - x:320 y:216? It's because of the distance.
01:55:717 (4) - Put it more closer to the end of the trail.

[Normal]
00:34:467 (5) - x:464 y:112 so it won't be stack?
00:46:789 (1) - Start it at 00:46:610 and reduce a tick when the beat snap divisor is at 1/2?
01:18:574 (7) - Stack with 01:17:146 (5) or move it to another place because it's overlap and ugly.
01:36:074 (1) - Start it at 01:35:896 and reduce a tick when the beat snap divisor is at 1/2?

[Insane]
00:39:824 (1) - The end of it don't fit with the music. Extend it to 00:41:432 .
00:58:396 (1) - Start it at 00:58:574 and end it at 00:59:289 ?

[LilyWhite's Insane]
00:30:271 (4) - x:100 y:188 and 00:30:360 (1) - x:88 y:176 so they could match with the little stream.
00:32:146 (2) - Prev: somewhere at 1.00x so it could be the same as 00:26:432 (2) .
00:41:432 (5,1) - In this part, I think there's something that doesn't fit.
00:42:324 - Add note?

[Tsusuko's Hard]
01:09:467 (3) - Stack with 01:09:646 (4) ?
01:42:682 (9) - NC?

Good Luck!
Dolphin
http://puu.sh/47tSc.zip Changed all the hitsounds from .ogg to .wav

I always thought osu! supported .ogg :|

Anyways they should work now.
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
UPDATD
Pizza Kun
M4M ^^ my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110918



[Insane]

Consider mapping this part 00:14:289 (1,1) - all break
00:30:182 (7,1) - Stack in slider start
00:30:896 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:34:824 (8,9) - ^
00:36:967 (3) - Move in 132 || 56
00:41:789 (1) - This rithm is better:

00:44:646 (10) - NC
00:57:503 (6) - In 264||144
00:59:646 (1) - Stack on 2 start
01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Stack 4 on 01:04:110 (2) -
01:14:824 (3,3) - Stack
01:25:182 (1,2,3) - Stack 3 on 01:24:467 (2) - End
01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read


[LilyWite's Insane]

01:07:503 (4,1) - Stack
01:10:182 (3) - Move 3° anchor point in 300||136
01:23:932 (6,7) - Like this?
01:33:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Centre all

[m1ng's Oni]

00:15:717 (1,2,3,4,1) - KDDKK
00:18:753 (1,2,3) - KDD
00:28:217 (2) - Katsu
00:41:967 (3,4,7,8) - All katsu
00:52:592 - Add don
01:05:003 (1,1) - Katsu
01:07:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - DDKDDDK
01:12:502 (4,5,6) - Katsu
01:31:074 (1) - Katsu
01:41:878 - add don
01:42:055 (1) - Katsu
01:42:146 (2) - Add don
01:56:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - DDKKDDK
Nyukai
m4m, from #modreqs
Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110799

[Tsusuko's Hard]

01:16:432 (10) - Add reverse selection

01:19:824 (1) - Don't add new note here, being a Hard I think it sounds better

01:20:182 - If you do that then add new combo here ofc (?

[Insane]

00:50:003 (2) - Maybe reverse selection? o3o
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M ^^ my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110918



[Insane]

Consider mapping this part 00:14:289 (1,1) - all break its ok no i want to keep my heart not be bothered
00:30:182 (7,1) - Stack in slider start ok
00:30:896 (2,3) - Fix blanket fixed
00:34:824 (8,9) - ^ its ok to me wel done ok
00:36:967 (3) - Move in 132 || 56 ok
00:41:789 (1) - This rithm is better: sound good thanks

00:44:646 (10) - NC ok
00:57:503 (6) - In 264||144 no this is jump
00:59:646 (1) - Stack on 2 start jump again but i move it somewhere
01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Stack 4 on 01:04:110 (2) - ok
01:14:824 (3,3) - Stack ok
01:25:182 (1,2,3) - Stack 3 on 01:24:467 (2) - End ok
01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - Hard to read this is a falling notes but ill think

TY FOR MOD!

Inyuschan wrote:

m4m, from #modreqs
Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/110799

[Insane]

00:50:003 (2) - Maybe reverse selection? o3o nup D:

TY FOR MODS~!
ReySHeL
mod as req

[Ono's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:646 (1) - add finish powerful sound
  2. 00:35:717 (1) - remove finish and 00:36:074 (1) - add finish sound is better
  3. 00:59:646 (1,1) - remove finish?
  4. 00:59:646 (1,1) - ^
  5. 01:25:360 (1) - add finish 00:36:074 (1) - if you add a finish here
  6. 01:48:932 (1,1) - remove finish
  7. 01:54:646 (1,1) - ^

[Ono's Oni]
  1. 00:20:003 (1,1) - remove finish and 00:20:003 - k 00:20:360 - d 00:20:717 (1) - K sound fit
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - add finish
  3. 01:25:360 (34) - ^
    nice map!

[m1ng's Oni]
  1. 00:20:539 - add d there is a sound here
  2. 01:12:145 (2,3) - k clap sound
  3. 01:13:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ddkkkkd is better
  4. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish

GL~
(//・ω・)っ=====
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

ReySHeL wrote:

mod as req

[Ono's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:14:646 (1) - add finish powerful sound
  2. 00:35:717 (1) - remove finish and 00:36:074 (1) - add finish sound is better
  3. 00:59:646 (1,1) - remove finish?
  4. 00:59:646 (1,1) - ^
  5. 01:25:360 (1) - add finish 00:36:074 (1) - if you add a finish here
  6. 01:48:932 (1,1) - remove finish
  7. 01:54:646 (1,1) - ^

[Ono's Oni]
  1. 00:20:003 (1,1) - remove finish and 00:20:003 - k 00:20:360 - d 00:20:717 (1) - K sound fit
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - add finish
  3. 01:25:360 (34) - ^
    nice map!

[m1ng's Oni]
  1. 00:20:539 - add d there is a sound here
  2. 01:12:145 (2,3) - k clap sound
  3. 01:13:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ddkkkkd is better
  4. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish

GL~
(//・ω・)っ=====
tenchu rechel :3
Irreversible

From QAT-Queue!


just as a reminder, i need to go sleep now =v= Will edit this tomorrow with my mod! :)
GugUCorn
m4m~

[General]

  1. For now,Taiko Bg is Unrankable. Delete Taiko BG and adjust this on all of taiko diff.
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"MushroomMother.jpg",0,90
  2. Check Widescreen support and Check off Letterbox during breaks on All of Diff.
[Easy]

  1. 01:21:432 (2) - slider point on end of slider 1 grid up
  2. 01:22:860 (1) - End here 01:24:467
  3. 01:25:360 - Breaktime start on here is better
  4. 01:41:432 (4) - like this.
    316,336,101432,2,0,B|316:232|316:232|388:264|456:168|428:120,1,270
  5. 01:49:289 (1) - Red Slider point move to slider star
  6. 01:54:646 (3) - NC
[Normal]

  1. 00:33:574 (4) - NC
  2. 00:52:503 (1,1) - so close. spin reduce on here 00:53:574
  3. 01:06:074 (2) - perfectly stack on 01:04:646 (4)'s end of slider.
  4. 01:17:146 (5) - NC
  5. 01:18:574 (7) - perfectly stack on 01:17:146 (5)
  6. 01:21:967 (4) - make repeat
  7. 01:22:503 (1) - end here 01:24:467
  8. 01:26:789 (4) - NC?
  9. 01:28:574 (7,1) - maybe spin's place is little awakward. spin move to 01:29:646 and (7) note make repeat plz.
  10. 01:41:432 (6,7) - this rhythem is so awakward.
  11. 01:54:646 (5) - NC
  12. 01:56:789 (7) - perfectly stack on 01:54:646 (5)
[lilywhite]

  1. 00:53:574 (3) - Ctrl+G
  2. 01:16:789 (1) - blanket with 01:16:253 (5)
  3. 01:22:682 (5) - remove this
  4. 01:24:289 (2) - circle note is more better. (Circle note place is 01:24:467)
  5. 01:47:860 (5) - slider point on end of slider move to (528,120)
[Tsusuko]

  1. 00:31:610 (4) - NC
  2. 00:35:717 (7) - 1 grid right. not straight!
  3. 00:52:503 (5) - NC
  4. 00:53:396 (7) - ^
  5. 01:07:146 (6) - ^
  6. 01:42:682 (9) - ^
[Insane]

  1. 00:20:717 (2) - Add Finish
  2. 00:35:717 - Add note
  3. 00:39:824 (1) - this spin is strange. making note is better.
  4. 00:44:646 (3) - NC?
  5. 00:49:646 (1) - expand to 00:49:914
  6. 00:57:146 (5) - NC
  7. 01:30:717 - Add note
  8. 01:32:324 (1) - strange
  9. 01:41:789 (5,6,7,8) - this rhythem is awakward.try this rhythem.
ok! that's all!
GL 8-)
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
tenchu <3
OnosakiHito

cdhsausageboy wrote:

SPOILER
Taiko mod from modding queue, everything is suggestion ._.

Ono's muzukashii
00:01:789 and 00:03:396 : delete kat because no sound in music that time? Mapped to the little high pitch and the 1/8 sound.
00:06:789 : add kat sound goes only up to 00:06:610
00:09:914 : change to don ok
00:45:986 and 00:46:253 and 00:58:753: change to big kat fine as it is.
01:01:253 and 01:01:771 and 01:03:396 and 01:07:057 and 01:46:610 and 01:57:682 delete kat changed first four.

Ono's oni
00:01:789 delete kat sounds better in this way
01:13:932 to 01:19:289 keep sv multiplier at 0.5
01:19:646 to 01:22:592 keep sv multiplier at 1.0
01:23:932 to 01:24:467 change sv multiplier back to 0.5

I'm fine with the SV. Asked already around if it is okay.
Thank you for mod!

@YunoFanatic: Please don't delete my BG, it's my standart one. :/
Download: http://puu.sh/491K4.zip
Irreversible


Yo again, from QAT Queue, dat post before D: It doesn't work to edit my last post. op ><


[General]

Why isn't the video included?
The song is really short already, why did you first start to map it from 0:22 on? You should consider mapping it.

[Easy]

I think the slidershapes need some work, also the patterns. For an easy, consistency is quite important, in order not to confuse the player! I'll list up a few examples above for you.

00:26:074 (2,3,4) - For example this - it looks a bit messed up, because there is actually a curve, then it goes straight, and then there's another curve. This should be a bit more consistent! Also, what about a blanketing here? 00:26:074 (2) - http://puu.sh/491qo.jpg It would make it looking neater.
00:28:574 (5) - I don't like the rhythm here tbh. I've got a suggestion for you: 00:28:574 (5) - Move that slider to 00:28:932 -, and add a circle 00:28:574 - ! It fits the lyrics perfectly.
00:37:146 (1,2,3) - Well, I can see the SV is different here, but the DS as well, and this is what bothers me. I don't even understand the SV change, why is it there? I sugegst removing it
00:48:217 (1,2,3) - Watch out for the blanketing please! In cases like this, it's very important. (With blanketing i actually mean, that it fits the other slider ( or circle) perfectly, here is what I mean: http://puu.sh/491FK.jpg
00:51:789 (4) - This should be symmetric, shouldn't it? :D
01:01:074 (2,1) - Hm, what about removing the overlap? Ctrl + J on Slider 1 could work.
01:05:003 (2) - http://puu.sh/491R0.jpg Imo, this rhythm is way better. I won't mod this out again - please make sure that you put all notes like this in another way, because like this, it's really really odd!
01:40:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another major issue in my opinion, because it has overlaps, and the rhythm is messed up, as mentioned above. I mapped a small part for you, to get an idea. Also use it for the further checking of this easy!
Suggestion
56,192,98217,6,0,P|148:212|256:180,1,180
300,136,99289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,99646,2,0,L|344:316,2,90
280,48,101074,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,101432,2,0,P|145:54|104:88,2,90
180,136,102503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,208,102860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,220,103217,1,0,0:0:0:0:

For the blankets, to make it easier for you, i'll list them up here:
01:06:074 (4,5) -
01:15:717 (3,4) -
01:20:003 (1,2,3) -
01:43:932 (6,7) -
01:41:432 (4,5) -
01:49:289 (1,2) -
01:54:646 (1,2) -

Okay, I'd like you to check your map again, and with your knew knowledge about overlapping / blanketing / rhythm, I'm sure you can improve your map very easily! If you need help, you can always ask me for further help, but that's it for now

[Normal]

Overall, the same issues as in Easy. I won't mod this out, because I want you to go over your diff again and fix the blankets, and overlappings yourself (The rhythm is better here!) I still mod out what I would actually suggest :P

00:26:967 (4) - If you could make a pattern, where this circle is at 360 164, it would be great, because it has a better flow!
00:28:574 (7,1) - Don't make them touch themselves please :C Looks a bit unproffessional >< Make also sure to tidy up 00:30:360 (1) - the slidershape of this, the curve should be bigger.
00:33:574 (1) - CTRL + G would be so much better, you have an up down flow then.. try to fix that please :c
00:34:467 - You can avoid the weird overlap when you delete this one here. It's rather unnecessary and makes things easier.
00:38:574 (4,5) - Just make one big slider out of it, please, the rhythm is not good here, and there's kinda no way a normal player would enjoy to play this, because he'd be frustrating missing it all the time ><
00:37:503 (3,4) - The lyrics are in the foreground, as usual. You should keep sticking to it! Some circles will do that.
00:44:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For this part, I suggest that you use 00:46:253 (6) - four of these sliders!
01:18:574 (3,1) - Weird flow, you can see this yourself: The slider end goes to the left while the new slider is just on the right side. It's not so smooth, if you understand what i mean! http://puu.sh/49aU5.jpg Look here :)
01:29:646 (1) - Special reason why you don't map this part? I'd like to see something here, since it leads in the kiai perfectly.

Please take care about your rhythm, and the flow here especially! I'm sure you can get some further ideas when you applied ^.

[Tsuzuko's Hard]

00:53:396 (7) - I would put a NC here to emphasize the .. gnoc gnoc or w/e she's saying D:
01:09:467 (3) - NC because of making everything readable. Or maybe you could even make the distance between those two circles a bit bigger, just to give it some more action.
01:42:682 (9) - Same as above! It would also be nice because the combo is quite long.
01:58:753 (5) - And same as above. haha!

Really good map! Can't say much about it. Just these NC's are bothering me!


[LilyWhite's Insane]

00:26:967 (4) - It would be nicer if you replaced this one by two circles, to emphasize this 4 syllable word more. http://puu.sh/49btc.jpg Something like this would be incredibly fun!
00:28:396 (3,4,5) - Bad flow between them. It's just, the flow between 3 and 4 is nice, what lets you think 5 is really displaced there. I suggest CTRL + G, for some more consistency, and give it a better flow.
00:31:253 (3,4,1) - Uhm yeah.. can't really enjoy this part. http://puu.sh/49bz8.jpg Smth like this wouldn't break the flow so much, because slider 4 is currently really.. bleh
00:34:646 (4) - What about CTRL + H? 00:33:574 (2) - Would give a nice pattern with this one here.
00:33:574 (2,3,4) - :( I want to show you why I really dislike these kind of flows, you need to work on that definetly, it's the main reason why this diff makes my stomach a bit upset. http://puu.sh/49bHl.jpg Bad drawing, I know, but it shows what I want. The red line is just straight down and irritates the players as well, most likely they will think it should be there, the other way round. What i suggest is this: http://puu.sh/49bKK.jpg This is really nice playable and doesn't frustrate the player! I hope this explains my mod a bit, lol
01:00:360 (3,4) - I'm sure you know what you should do here after ^? :P Try CTRL + G once.
01:01:342 (5) - NC here because mushroom should be emphasized!
01:35:003 (5) - I would add a NC to split the pattern into two parts.

Well yeah, i'd really like you to overthink some of the flow problems, and even fix further ones. But you're on a good way!

[Insane]

Especially in insane. 00:16:437 - this part SHOULD BE MAPPED!! It's such an exciting and funny to listen part.
00:24:467 - She starts singing here, you should add something.
00:25:003 (2) - I know, i might be annoying, but mapping to the lyrics is here the better choice imo. And this doesn't fit, it's too long, you should shorten it! D:
00:26:074 (1) - You use 3/4 sliders sometimes, but not here?! Shorten it to 00:26:342 - and add a circle 00:26:432 - here.
00:27:503 (1) - What about 260 184? Would give a straight line with the slider before (flow) Just adjust the triangle pattern, you could also rotate that a bit, to make it more interesting!
00:28:574 (1) - Think about a reverse slider here. Rhythm things, just a suggestion from myside. Fits the lyrics!
00:29:467 (3,4,5,6,7) - ..random placing?
00:30:360 (1) - This antijump isn't confortable to play. Please space it properly!
00:31:253 (3) - Usually, sliders starting on the red tick sound weird - that's the case here. It's rather a better idea to use a circle here!
00:31:789 (4) - Why not making it like 00:26:074 (1) - ?
00:34:467 (5) - Avoid the overlap with 3 please :P You have enough space to place it, so you better use it! o3o
00:35:182 (9) - Nobody will get that, most people will be in a rush due to the triplet, and will just go on clicking > miss. Fix the spacing please!
00:36:967 (3,4) - Flow is good here, what emphasizes the bad flow of 00:37:324 (4,5) - . Think of a placing which is better harmonised with 3 and 4! A curve wouldn't be bad, i suppose.
00:38:753 (1) - she says 'bo', can you hear that? Would be sad if you didn't emphasize it. Try this rhythm ! 00:38:753 - starting from here: http://puu.sh/49cnN.jpg
00:43:217 (3) - Delete NC, consistency.
00:45:717 (3) - NC, consistency
00:49:646 (1) - make it longer, so it reaches the next blue tick *-* It'll sound so cool and fitting!
00:51:253 (1,2,3) - mh.. i can see what you've done here, but not sure. The spacing increase is quite big, and people will have problems reading it. consider shorten it a bit!
00:52:324 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Did you just place this randomly, or is it mapped to something on purpose? Because like this, it's just random.. I'd really wish that this emphasizes the song a bit more, especially the lyrics. Just putting stuff there isn't a good sultion!
00:55:360 (1) - Same suggestion as above (blue tick)
01:06:610 (4) - Bad flow, for the slider shape I suggest CTRL H + J, then stack the slider start with the slider start of this 01:05:717 (2) - .

Well, most of the issues are the same, please go over your map again and try fixing some stuff, and if you really did this, you can ask me for a recheck. But, if you didn't even try to improve it by yourself, I'll just let it be, so it's up to you!



I hope I could help your mapset a bit :P Just tidy up some slider shapes, rhythm, flow issues, and i'm sure, it'll improve much! See you then :)
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
thanks! for modding! i hope you understand that im still a osu! beginner mapper!
Apex_old
Easy:

00:28:574: It might be my personal opinion but the 6th circle isn't on the same y position with the 7th slider, which makes it look not symmetrical and bad. Position changed from 136,168 to 136,152
00:45:182: like ^,2nd circle isn't on the same y position with the 4th circle Position changed from 208,180 to 208,192
00:49:289: 2nd slider sounds wrong, move it to 00:49:646, but that would over lap with the 3rd slider, therefore shrink the 3rd slider so it won't return and move it from 00:50:360 to 00:50:717
00:59:932: ^
01:20:003: 1st slider sounds wrong, shrink it by 2 1/2 beats and move it to 01:20:360
01:38:217: Beats are on time but what is this

Insane:
01:32:503: Personal Opinion, but you can try to make a mushroom-esque slider here.

After so much Kudosu given and so many modders, I can't really find a fault. And it's quite an excellent map compared to your meager experience. Or it's that I'm a noob.
a32
[General]
  1. sliderslide sounds bad.why not try muting it? http://puu.sh/49phc.wav



[Easy]
  1. I strongly recommend you to use the same spacing throughout the difficulty,the current one seems to be messy for an easy...
  2. 00:37:146 (1,2,3) - spacing here could be done better.
  3. 00:49:289 (2) - unreasonable rhythm to me D; Sth like this would be better imo
  4. 00:55:003 - same thing here
  5. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - well...you know XD



[Normal]
  1. Use consistent spacing is also needed in this diff,that would make this quite clean,you know.
  2. 00:34:646 (5) - Shouldn't this slider end at 00:35:182? w
  3. 00:41:432 - why break here?
  4. 00:48:217 (1) - bad shape,could be easily done better :D
  5. 01:31:432 (1,1) - rhythm here is a bit off...try this?
  6. 01:41:432 (6,7,8) - 7 is wrong without doubts.Change to this plz




[Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:35:182 (5,6,7) - spacing
  2. 01:30:717 (8,9,10) - try this?




[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:24:646 (1) - (nazi)down one grid?
  2. 00:48:217 - whistle sounds so random :o
  3. 01:58:932 (5) - soft whistle is better since the music comes down here?




[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 - these finishes are just annoying D:
  2. 00:24:646 (1,2,3) - too hard to read...According to the rhythm this pattern is odd too..
  3. 00:43:217 (1,2) - 00:41:789 (1,2) - Ctrl+H plz
  4. 00:52:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - Bad rhythm here,you may go to the other Insane for the correct one> >



Good for a newbie,but still needs more work i think...Well,gl with ranking!
happy623
req via PM

Sorry for late

General

  1. Remove Widescreen support, you didnt added any sb here
  2. IMO, the combo colors are similar, consider change another colors instead :

Easy

  1. Please use the same distance spacing to map Easy, considerating how newbies play this diff, if you use different distance spacing to map Easy, they cannot catch the notes easily, after you used the same ds for this diff, feel free to poke me and I will mod this diff again :oops: the followings are just some issues instead of placing problem :
  2. Unify them into 0.75x is enough imo :
  3. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - hey , objects are less than 10ms
  4. 00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 Beat snap divisor here, it might a bit hard to the newbies, try to use sliders instead, if you take this, apply to 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - too :
  5. 01:17:860 (1,1) - this spinner is too close to 01:20:003 (1) -, newbies wont have enough time the recover and catch the slider especially in high BPM , consider drag the slider at least ONE white tick space, so, place the slider at 01:20:360 -

Normal

  1. AR-1?
  2. 00:36:074 (1) - ermm, dont overlap with 00:34:646 (5) - ? Seems neater imo
  3. 01:06:074 (2) - ^ overlap issues
  4. 01:17:146 (5) - ^
  5. 01:32:682 (1) - remove NC, its not really needed imo
  6. 01:33:932 (2) - NC here? you did it at 00:44:646 (1) - too, if you take this , please NC 01:35:003 (4) too, because you make a NC at 00:45:717 (1) -, keep the consistency is important
  7. 01:34:467 (3) - I suggest not to overlap with 01:32:682 (1) - , its hard to read

Tsusuko's Hard

  1. 00:59:646 (1) - well I think it can be louder xD, if you take this, apply to 01:48:932 (1) - too
  2. 01:09:467 (3,4) - ctrl G? it seems to be fit with the music
    Nice diff great :D

LilyWhite's Insane

  1. 00:49:199 (4) - this note seems to be overmapped ;w; please remove it
  2. 00:51:699 (3) - ^, btw you missed a drum hit at 00:52:057 -
  3. 01:26:074 (3) - this flow better imo :
  4. 01:35:360 (6,7) - NC here to keep your NC pattern consistently, since you put NC at 00:46:074 (1)
  5. 01:53:217 (4) - ^, keep the NC pattern

Insane

  1. You start at 00:14:289 - in this diff, but in Easy and Normal, you start at 00:24:646 -, its better to make them the same
  2. 00:52:682 (2,3) - remove this 2 notes, and put a note at 00:52:771 -, its fit
  3. 00:58:396 - add a note here
  4. 01:00:003 (2,4) - add finish on this two sliders' head, you missed them, try to spend some time and listen the music carefully, you can find there are more place for putting finish, like 01:05:717 (2) - or 01:06:074 (3) -
  5. 01:08:039 - add a note here too, try to follow the drum hit more than the vocal
  6. 01:32:324 (5) - nazi, stack with 01:31:432 (2) - 's head
  7. 01:35:003 (3) - NC, since you NC at 00:45:717 (1) - , to keep consistency again
  8. 01:39:646 (7) - NC? It looks nice imo 8-)
  9. 01:41:789 (5) - NC here seems better, since the melody changed
  10. 01:42:235 (7) - you better remove this note since its overmapped
  11. 01:52:860 (1) - remove this NC, its seems to be overused
  12. 01:54:646 (1,2) - suggestion to make this more fun :
  13. 01:56:967 - add note, same reason as above

Good Luck with ranking ;)
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
Stop first D: ill get to update! as for the easy imo
Leader


You asked me to mod this map some times ago, so I am gonna do it from QAT queue.

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:896 (5,6,7,8) - I'd move (5) up a bit for better flow, then what about flipping (6) like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945499? Of course (7,8) will stay under slider tail.
  2. 00:18:039 (4) - Why this slider almost touch the previous slider? Consider fixing it. Anyway, I think this should end 1/4 before, if you do it remember to add a note on blue note tick
  3. 00:18:753 (6,7) - I'd remove repeat and make a slider (1/1 or 1/2, your choice) starting from 00:19:110 -
  4. 00:24:289 (3) - Kinda nazi, but whatever: move down a bit to avoid a tiny, but ugly overlap with 00:23:574 (1) -
  5. 00:24:914 (2) - I couldn't hear a sound here, so it should be removed (and also that 2.68 distance from 00:25:003 (3) - is not fitting at all)
  6. 00:25:003 (3) - I'd replace this slider with a beat (with clap) and 1/2 slider on red tick, so vocals will be followed moarrr
  7. 00:28:039 (4) - What about moving it 1/2 ahead? Obviously add a note on 00:28:039 if you do that
  8. 00:34:824 (8) - Replace it with a 1/2 slider
  9. 00:36:074 (1,3) - Nazi, but you could fix the blanket between these two sliders just by moving down (1) a bit
  10. 00:45:717 (1) - I don't see a reason why this should be a new combo, just remove it.
  11. 00:42:503 (1,2,1) - Same for these two, maybe add a new combo on 00:43:932 (3) -
  12. 00:50:003 (2) - Spacing may look weird here, I'd reduce distance between (1) and (2)
  13. 00:51:253 (1,2,3) - I'd stack (1) and (2) on 3, also try to fix (3)'s tail so it's well stacked on 00:50:539 (4) - 's tail
  14. 00:52:324 - I think a note is missing here.
  15. 00:52:503 (1,2,3) - Also, rhythm should be like this: http://puu.sh/49DIi.jpg
  16. 00:56:610 (4,1,2) - Spacing is the same but rhythm is different, it's quite weird..
  17. 01:04:824 (4,5,6) - Why is this triplet so spaced..? You could make it stacked.
  18. 01:18:753 (9) - Change it with a 1/1 slider, that break is way too big imo
  19. 01:25:182 (1,2,3) - I'd move the entire pattern a little to the left to avoid overlaps. Also you should reduce spacing from the notes, they are too spaced now.
  20. 01:32:503 (6) - Well, that's not so good to see, at least make it symmetrical or try to rework to a new shape
  21. 01:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if it's intentional or not, but these sliders are not -perfectly- placed: I suggest you to move 01:33:932 (1) - more to the left if you aren't going to change the slider before, to avoid a bad overlap. Then copy&paste every slider and use Rotate 90° clockwise function from Edit, this will make the pattern a lot cleaner
  22. 01:36:074 (1) - Spinner should start 1/2 before imo.
  23. 01:39:646 (7,8,9,10,11) - They are TOO spaced, consider changing spacing to 0.8x or so, there's no need to make such stream so spaced.
  24. 01:42:235 (7,8) - I'd stack these two notes, now they look like they are 1/2 spaced, to be honest
  25. 01:54:646 (1,2) - Mhm, space them more to avoid overlap?
[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:41:432 (5) - Try to move red points a bit to the right, sliderball should "fall" when it's on red tick 00:41:610
  2. 00:50:003 (2) - I'd personally move it closer to slider, like x:284 y:144, also you did like I suggested in similar patterns, so consider changing this.
  3. 01:45:003 (2) - Doesn't look so good, stack on (1), maybe?
Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:44:467 (8) - I'd unstack it since you stacked notes only when they were 1/4
    Solid diff.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:074 (3,4,5) - Spacing is wrong here
  2. 00:30:360 (1,2) - Rework on two last sliderpoints of 00:30:360 (1) - , you should avoid such overlaps
  3. 00:52:503 (1) - I think this part could be mapped, don't add a random spinner like this
  4. 01:29:289 (1) - Same as above
  5. 00:54:289 (1) - What about making it like the opposite of 00:55:003 (2) - (using flip horizzontaly/vertically options)
  6. 01:07:503 (4) - I'd change this circle with a 1/1 slider
  7. 01:21:074 (3) - I'd make this slider similar to 01:19:646 (1,2) -
[Easy]

  • Check AIMod and fix wrong spacing.
  1. 00:40:003 (1) - Same as I said in Normal, don't overuse spinners
  2. 00:57:146 (1) - Same as above
  3. 01:17:860 (1) - ^
  4. 01:02:503 (1) - Flip horizzontaly and then fix spacing, it should be better.
  5. 01:38:217 (1,2,3) - What the hell happened here
Insane and Easy need some more work but it's a nice map overall, I hope this mod helped you, good luck
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oh my god LEADER CHAAAAN! TENCHU :3 Ive been waiting for your answer though D:
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