osuplayer111 wrote:

Starts Suggestions:
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.

[Soft]
Some objects aren't snapped correctly.
Use AIMod for some help, too much objects unsnapped.

[Relax]
Here too, some objects unsnapped.
00:02:028 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:04:099 (2,3) - ^

GbL wrote:

I suggest only use more spacing in Soft, the rest looks good.
Star.

1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看

1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧

Breeze wrote:

废话不多说,直接mod:

[Soft]

1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看

[Relax]

1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧

不错
star~

Kytoxid wrote:

Generally, there was a bit too much lead-in time, in my opinion.

[Soft]
00:11:003 (1,2,3) - Try to keep spacing within a combo to be exact, especially the difference between touching and not touching. Here, 1-2 is closer than 2-3.
If I was to be picky, you should keep the spacing consistent within the whole song (either 1/4 stacked, or 1/4 not stacked), but if you don't change around too much, it's not THAT noticeable, although perhaps more so with Easy mod.
00:30:019 (5) - Not snapped.
01:23:094 (2) - Move a bit to line up with 3?
01:29:078 (1,2,3) - Nicer triangle?

[Relax]
00:14:099 (2,3) - Angle looks a bit weird, shift 3 up a bit?
00:22:028 (4) - Right 1 grid?
00:55:040 (6,7) - There was a few shifts in 1/4 spacing up until now, but it was constant within their phrases, this was the first one I noticed while playing.
00:56:044 (1,2,3) - I like nicer triangles. You don't have to, of course.
01:03:011 (1) - Left a grid.
01:17:069 (1,2,3) - More nicer triangles? This one actually looked a little bad.

Very soothing song, and nice maps in general, starred.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Artist name is a little bit weird.
OK... 'Nam Goo-min' is right in Korea. 'Nam' is family name. And 'Goo-min' is first name.
'Nam,Goo-min' seems likes Nam and Goo-min. change the artist name to 'Nam Goo-min'.

[Soft]
00:27:069 (1) - move to left by 1 grid?

[Relax]
01:12:049 (7) - How about make it likes this? I think more fit at song.
01:15:082 (6) - ^ same suggestion
01:37:069 (1,2) - I suggest this makes to a slider. Also, audio volume 10 at end of slider may works better in my opinion.
01:39:036 (1,2) - ^
01:41:003 (1,2) - ^
01:43:053 (1,2) - ^
01:43:094 (1,2) - ^
01:44:036 (1,2) - ^

Nice instrument. Star

Armin wrote:

[Soft]
Nice, the maps with the hitsounds are great

[Relax]
00:14:366 (1,2) Whistles at the start
00:18:324 Whistle at the start
00:37:699 (1,3) Whistles at the start
00:43:324 Whistle on the second repeat

Omg, I don't see problems! O_O
Starred

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

NICE MAP
没什么大毛病。
个人感觉哨音加多了，有点吵，然后hard里的3连删掉，跟曲不合。

jump设置很Nice。

Shinxyn wrote:

Wow, relaxing song

Soft-
It's quite nice, only things that I didn't like was..

SPOILER

00:41:044 (1,1,2,3) - The spinner feels too rushed, and notes came too quick after the spinner, kinda felt too fast for this section's pace, maybe (if you want) extend the spinner to 00:43:032 and keep it empty till 00:44:036 (1), the other spinner of this length (at 01:31:003) was fine since the section felt faster
01:06:086 (1) - I suggest making individual timing panels for the finish hitsounded notes (make them quieter by 2-3 more ticks please)
01:43:053 (1,1,1) - don't need hitsounds here (like Relax?~)
01:46:003 (1) - extend this a whole beat (to the next white tick), it doesn't sound right where you ended it

Relax
I am picky-

SPOILER

00:41:003 (1) - maybe lower this volume by a tick or two
01:37:090 (2,2,2,2,2,2) - completely silencing these felt odd, cuz players wouldn't know if they hit or not...
01:46:003 (1) - same as Soft

SPOILER

I honestly think using soft whistle (or any default hitsound for that matter) doesn't match the music, it would work if you used them on your own beats, but it doesn't seem that way, in other words, I think there might be a bit too much whistles >_< (ignore me in this matter). And the volume increase near the end of the map, it increased too much for my taste, it got too loud.

Lokamp wrote:

Soft
00:31:003 (7) - new combo here
01:24:036 (3) - ^
01:26:044 (6) - whistle the start and the end of this slider 0_0?Don't understand why...
01:43:053 (1,1,1) - move these beats: 1 square left (green), 1 square right (yellow) and 1 square up (red)
Fixed~
Relax
00:09:036 (5) - new combo here
00:12:069 (5) - ^
00:59:036 (1,2,3,4) - start these sliders with soft finish
01:03:011 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:049 (4) - finish here
Fixed new combo,I add finish but its too loud,then I try to turn down the volume that part,but stll doesn't fit...so I have to give up...
Nice calm song! A star for you ^^ (maybe try to add a little more finish hitsounds...)

aerisu wrote:

Always suggestions, but :

I prefered when the finals notes are in the direction of middle screen instead of in the direction outside ( Err, I don't know how to tell this in english, but I wanted to say that I prefer the previous end )

For 1 : 37, maybe try sliders?

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Does someone has the old version of [Relax] ? I really prefer the old end

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod, sorry it took so long


[Soft]
No Problems found. I think it's flawless. Great job

[Relax]
00:56:086 (2,3) - make 2 a whistle, 3 a finish? whistle sound well~but finish too loud>_<
01:06:086 (3) - Feels morenatural if it's moved forward 1/4 beat. Up to you Uh...I won't change~
01:12:049 (7) - Move 3 lvl3 grid spaces down? Fixed~
No problems found

Great job starred

aerisu wrote:

aerisu wrote:

maybe would i have done curving sliders for the end

In case you didn't see what I mean : I placed sliders in different angle, so you can choose what you want If you want curves ( Personnaly I like the yellow and blue one, but not the green ^^ )

( Of course, once again, I placed them randomly : change as your like, colour, sens, places, etc... )

Love

scar1410 wrote:

star~

bmin11 wrote:

Oh I remember this song. Talesweaver! One of the finenest online game <3
Probably one of the most regonizable BM (Second Run as well).
Not gonna mod, but can you change [Relax] into other names that might give you a feeling of [Hard]? It is somewhat hard you know...

Shulin wrote:

Kudos star

I want to see this ranked now

Mafiamaster wrote:

I love the ending <3

Mafiamaster wrote:

Overall~
There are two .osb files in your folder. There should only be one.Deleted~
But I recommend remaking your SB since the SB starts way before the start of the map.
I hope it could shows in lead-in time,so Ill keep it~:)
Soft~
01:13:116 (7,8,9) - Even these out.
Resnap your notes.

Adventure~
Resnap your notes here too, I see some notes just barely move when I resnap.

Fixed~
I love the ending <3

aerisu wrote:

For me, Relax sounds better than adventure

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

This is such a soothing map. I love the difficulty names as well.

There aren't any problems with the mapping, at least for me.

I noticed a sectionpass.wav and a sectionfail.wav inside the Beatmap Folder. But there isn't any opportunity for them to be used considered the only break is too short for a O or X. Can you remove them? If you have any good reason to why you want them kept, tell me.
Oooops..I just forgot to delete them,I put them in folder in advance when its in WIP.Already Delete~
Also, I noticed a duplicate of this beatmap in your Pending Beatmap Directory. Want me to take care of that? I would ask you online, but well, you're not online! Haha.
About that...Its all because my mistake when change the artist's name... I had send PM to peppy to delete that,but no response yet.Could you help me?
Star.

whymeman wrote:

[Soft]

01:14:036 (1,2) - The spacing doesn't seem right. When you compare it to 01:12:049 (6,7), you can see it looks more far apart than it is supposed to be.
Fixed~
[Adventure]

01:37:028 ~ 01:41:086 - Could try to keep the slowdown constant, not starting from each slider.
Fixed~
Also..... the .wav files for the sectionpass and sectionfail are still not being used since the breaks are too short. Unless you are REALLY going to use them, please remove it out of the song folder.
Deleted~
I'll do a recheck once the fixes are looked into. Just remind me to do so after.