00:09:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would respace this with a different pattern (kinda confusing and hard to fc the way it is)
00:26:72 (8) - new combo?
00:31:69 (8,9) - I would separate these 2 (dont stack them)
00:40:78 (6,7,8,9) - dont like these all together
00:54:32 (1) - auto should be able to get 2000 on it really (you might be able to get away with this)--same for all other short spinners
00:57:24 (8,9,10,11) - doesnt look good to me

overall:
looks nice but I think some areas seem kinda lacking in hitsounds- maybe add some more?
*star*

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [hvick225's Hard].osu

Good^^

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [hvick225's Hard].osu

star=_=

star

star

happy, star

Technically speaking, we need a Lunatic. I'm not so sure about the Ex Stage.

Also, is there an original Japanese title for this song?

finished

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [yaya].osu

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

finished

我刚刚回国签了工作，很多事情要忙=. =所以没来得及处理这些，大概这个周末我就有时间了，anyway，谢谢yaya啦><

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [Normal].osu

关于音效。

音效不要一加加一片，或者一个都不加。首先，歌的重音都在白线上，那么音效就要着重下在白线，红线是弱拍，不要下太多，否则很难听。可以规律性的加音效，比如隔几拍放一个拍手啦之类的。

你都加完我再看一下吧。

然后我的难度我改了点

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [yaya's hard].osu

OK.. I'll try making Normal diff. Before do it, mod first.

Each diffs have different offset. No good.
Offset of hvick225's diff is seems correct. But it is too far from start point.
Set first offset at -690. This value is based on hvick225's diff.

And change the name 'yaya's hard' to 'yaya's Hard'

That's all now..

star~

Star

给翠香星星

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Hi Suck
我知道你尝试新的作图技巧不过有些东西还是想让你知道:

为什么要设置多个timing?即便timing有了新的offset 后面的音仍然不准 比如00:21:024 (2,1,2,3,4)
再就是不要用timing来变速(我觉得0.5x绿线足够了,你那种变速反而不舒服)
我的建议是把红线删了 你几条红线offset都没设置好
我汗 刚刚发现你前面一些note全部都是在蓝线上 所以你第一条TIMING就没设置好
bpm:175
offset 336
(notes在红线前面也没关系)

00:00:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 反应不过来 Music Tack的Lead in second设置为3秒
00:31:070 (9) - slider和circle重叠
01:46:027 (5) - 位置稍微改变，至少移出slider底下比较好
01:51:007 (7) - ^


建议是连打部分的Streams之间的间距可以大一点 不然有时候难分清 当然这个随你喜好了
音效还是比较仓促= = 你可以参考下其他的触手图是怎么放音效的
YAYA 和 hvick的难度还好 不过后者音效太囧了 需要修改
总之这个图还要大修

Star for later

Done

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [Tsuka's Remix].osu

Star

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Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [James2250's Normal].osu

*few fixes made*

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [James2250's Normal].osu

Gotta love intense jumpiness

阿姨洗铁路

lol this is suck.. 6xMisses xD

ok looks fine

Nice song, I wanna see this ranked.

很迟的星

nice mapset :3

star

lunatic's slider speed is too slow for me

I really like what I see here.

[James2250's Normal]:
00:29:478 (2) - Hmm...New combo?
00:33:078 (1,1) - This seems to be a very wide jump for the easiest difficulty. I'm not quite sure about any solution to this without some sort of rearrangement of the whole pattern...What do you think? Do you think a person around the Normal range can get to that note? o3o (Oooh, read 47:993)
00:35:307 (4,1) - Same as above.
00:37:707 (4) - Why not add one more repeat?
00:45:250 (4,1) - Hm...Another jump. o.o Don't worry about it too much because... (look down)
00:47:993 (4,1) - Okay, it seems this difficulty is going to be having a lot of things related to jumps. It might just be beyond repair then. XD
00:49:707 (1,2) - Do you think this gap is too wide? Perhaps make it tighter? Like at 00:56:564 (1) - or something.
02:04:107 (1) - A bit on the combo underspaced side?

[Lunatic]:
00:21:250 (9) - New combo? :0
00:59:817 (4,5,6) - Suggestion: Would someone be able to read that (4) is on the right and (5) is on the left with the current location (1) is at? The hitburst may block it. But I don't know, maybe it's just slow me. (My suggestion might be to rearrange the spacing XD)
01:32:559 (6) - New combo? >w>
01:56:564 (8) - New combo? If you don't like it here, try (9)?
02:06:160 (7,1) - I'm unsure if someone can tell there's actually a 1/2 gap here. It reminds me of Kanbu's unreadable streams. :X I got it on Test Mode simply because I knew there was one coming...

[Yaya]:
Nice. =)

[Tsuka's Remix]:
A-OK. owo

[hvick225's Ex Stage]:
Extra delicious? :p

Sorry if it seems like a lot. =^= The main problem here with this map seems to really be the easiest difficulty's...well, difficulty. There seems to be a lot of jumps that can trick up a regular player... at least in my eyes. The difficulty spread is pretty big on Insanes too.

I suppose the best solution would be to add an Easy, although that'd make it 6 difficulties. I'm fine with that, but I don't if other people are going to see this as a giant amount of difficulties in the map. XD If you aren't willing to make an Easy, but don't mind having one though, I can always whip up an Easy map for you. :T

Oh yeah. Also heard that blank .osbs should be removed. So remove that .osb in your folder and do a full submission. Hopefully it won't pop up again, but if it does, you know what to do.

Other than that, I really like this map! Catchy song, pretty awesome difficulties.

ok I lowered the hp drain + overall diff by 1 and redid the entire difficulty (there are no jumps anymore) happy kirby?

While im here I might as well do some quick modding

make yaya's background 1024x768..yes its only 1025x768 but its still over the allowed limit
put all of the guest difficulty mappers names in the tags (and make the tags the same on all difficulties)

by the way a quick note about your diff

Lunatic:
if you go on ctrl+shift+A you will see many of your notes arn't snapped (and yes I checked them myself) go on timing and click resnap all notes then check ctrl+shift+A again)

no other obvious complaints while glancing over them
good luck getting this ranked soon

Download: Cle - Broken Moon Remix (Suck) [James2250's Normal].osu

[quote="James2250"]ok I lowered the hp drain + overall diff by 1 and redid the entire difficulty (there are no jumps anymore) happy kirby?

While im here I might as well do some quick modding

make yaya's background 1024x768..yes its only 1025x768 but its still over the allowed limit
put all of the guest difficulty mappers names in the tags (and make the tags the same on all difficulties)

by the way a quick note about your diff

Lunatic:
if you go on ctrl+shift+A you will see many of your notes arn't snapped (and yes I checked them myself) go on timing and click resnap all notes then check ctrl+shift+A again)

no other obvious complaints while glancing over them
good luck getting this ranked soon [quote]

Fixed all problems, thank you ><

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

I really like what I see here.

[James2250's Normal]:
00:29:478 (2) - Hmm...New combo?
00:33:078 (1,1) - This seems to be a very wide jump for the easiest difficulty. I'm not quite sure about any solution to this without some sort of rearrangement of the whole pattern...What do you think? Do you think a person around the Normal range can get to that note? o3o (Oooh, read 47:993)
00:35:307 (4,1) - Same as above.
00:37:707 (4) - Why not add one more repeat?
00:45:250 (4,1) - Hm...Another jump. o.o Don't worry about it too much because... (look down)
00:47:993 (4,1) - Okay, it seems this difficulty is going to be having a lot of things related to jumps. It might just be beyond repair then. XD
00:49:707 (1,2) - Do you think this gap is too wide? Perhaps make it tighter? Like at 00:56:564 (1) - or something.
02:04:107 (1) - A bit on the combo underspaced side?

[Lunatic]:
00:21:250 (9) - New combo? :0
00:59:817 (4,5,6) - Suggestion: Would someone be able to read that (4) is on the right and (5) is on the left with the current location (1) is at? The hitburst may block it. But I don't know, maybe it's just slow me. (My suggestion might be to rearrange the spacing XD)
01:32:559 (6) - New combo? >w>
01:56:564 (8) - New combo? If you don't like it here, try (9)?
02:06:160 (7,1) - I'm unsure if someone can tell there's actually a 1/2 gap here. It reminds me of Kanbu's unreadable streams. :X I got it on Test Mode simply because I knew there was one coming...

[Yaya]:
Nice. =)

[Tsuka's Remix]:
A-OK. owo

[hvick225's Ex Stage]:
Extra delicious? :p

Sorry if it seems like a lot. =^= The main problem here with this map seems to really be the easiest difficulty's...well, difficulty. There seems to be a lot of jumps that can trick up a regular player... at least in my eyes. The difficulty spread is pretty big on Insanes too.

I suppose the best solution would be to add an Easy, although that'd make it 6 difficulties. I'm fine with that, but I don't if other people are going to see this as a giant amount of difficulties in the map. XD If you aren't willing to make an Easy, but don't mind having one though, I can always whip up an Easy map for you. :T

Oh yeah. Also heard that blank .osbs should be removed. So remove that .osb in your folder and do a full submission. Hopefully it won't pop up again, but if it does, you know what to do.

Other than that, I really like this map! Catchy song, pretty awesome difficulties.

James2250 made some changes, and I fixed all problems except
[Lunatic]:
02:06:160 (7,1) - I'm unsure if someone can tell there's actually a 1/2 gap here. It reminds me of Kanbu's unreadable streams. :X I got it on Test Mode simply because I knew there was one coming...

I dont know if I should add note there, if you think I have to, then I will add one, thank you for your modding XD It's alot, and really help

Okay, let's do this.