Hey Gamu~ from in-game :>
[General]
[General]
- Shouldn't you add -Umi- into your tags, since it can be searched in-game?
- 00:01:683 (1,1,1) - This placement might be a bit crowded. How about increase their spacing gradually, just like how the music goes? It will be much better and nicer for the placement! You can take a look at the example picture if you accept this~
- 00:03:748 (2) - This should be placed at 1/8 line (00:03:694 - ). By listening the music here about 5 times, I'm sure that the vocal appears at that 1/8 line. You should move this to there, and end it as same as where it ends now.
- 00:22:988 (3,4,5) - Change these notes to a regular triangle? cuz I have obsessive-compulsive disorderIf you accept that, you can move (2) into this triangle's center :p
- 00:36:683 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Ugly patterns ;_; Change them to a hexagon by using "create polygon circles"?
- 00:49:944 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can make a jump between them, just like how you did in 00:56:901 (1,2,3,4) -. Both patterns follows the same vocal, which is kinda high pitch. Jump might be fun, right?
- 01:07:118 (6,1) - Don't you think this jump is too far? Well, just saying, cuz I'm noob at osu!
- 01:12:879 (2,3,4) - This stream might be a bit weird since it follows vocals and that clap sound at the same time. The players might be confused since most of players will listen to the music and beat those objects. To solve this problem, I'll suggest you to change these three notes to a 1/2 slider, and add a S:C4 green lines at 01:12:988 -, where the clap sound appears. That's the way more better, imo!
- 01:16:031 (1,1,1) - Those nces are unnecessary, because it isn't hard to read. Remove them.
- 01:48:640 (4,5) - Jump pls. Try to move (5) to x:336, y:352 to make a regular jump between (4,1).
- 01:51:575 (3) - ;_; That slider.
The patterns during kiai time are just <3
- 00:51:031 (7,1) - Not sure of this, but are you making a jump here? If yes, you should increase the spacing between more a bit. Players won't think it's a jump if the spacing is too small, they'll think "isn't the rhythm here changing?" and just beating it in a wrong way.
- 01:11:466 (4) - I can hear a quiet finish sound in the music, how about add a finish to emphasize it?
I love this diff very much. Nice job iyasine-chan!
- 01:52:118 (6) - Change to a 1/2 slider to follow the vocal at 01:52:335 - ?
- 00:19:944 - / 00:20:814 - / 00:21:683 - / 00:32:118 - Where are the claps?
- 01:22:988 (5) - Add a finish at the begin of the slider, and add a clap at the end of the slider.
- 02:01:248 (1) - oops. Might be a bit dangerous, so please move it some girds up.
Except those hitsounds, others are just nice and clean.