[General]
- On all diffs except Skystar and the Taikos:
Sorry but the kiai at 01:13:070 and 01:13:832 is too much. I would recommend following [Skystar]'s kiai times.[Umi's Easy]
- 00:03:029 (3) - Finish at the end of this slider for hitsound consistency. Like what you did at 00:10:088 (4).
- 00:06:559 (3) - Same as above.
- 00:06:559 (3) - I also suggest you reverse (Ctrl+G) this for better flow.
- 00:12:291 (2) - Suggestion: It would look better if you place this above like
this.
[Normal]
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Decrease to Tick Rate 1? The ticks at the 1/3 part at the start are placed wrongly because of this.
- 00:08:324 (1) - The finish at the repeat is unneeded and noisy IMO.
- 00:15:898 (3,4) - I disagree with the stack here. The flow suddenly got interrupted. I suggest you spread it out with spacing instead of stacking.
- 00:25:448 (4,5) - Same as above, although this is more forgivable since a spinner follows afterwards.
- 00:30:975 (4) - The slider here flows awkwardly. I recommend a more S-shaped slider that follows on the direction of the previous slider. Something like
this.
- 00:33:451 (2) - Add finish at the start. I hear the cymbals there.
- 00:38:022 (1,1) -
The overlap here is confusing especially for a Normal. The previous slider is almost covered completely by the previous one. I highly recommend changing it.- 00:51:736 (1) - [nazi] Move this down by one grid, so the slidertrack coincides with the previous slider's start. Like
this?
- 01:03:927 (1) - [nazi] Same as above.
- 01:05:451 (4) - Very unaesthetic overlap with 01:03:927 (1) . I recommend you change them.
- 01:17:641 (1) - I wouldn't recommend adding a spinner here. It seems abrupt to add one here.
[Flower's Normal]
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Decrease to Tick Rate 1? The ticks at the 1/3 part at the start are placed wrongly because of this.
- 00:12:730 (2,3) - IMO you should reserve the stacks for the 1/2 notes. Space these normally for better flow.
- 00:37:641 (5) - Normal finish at the end? The music there is loud and warrants for one.
- 01:06:594 (3) -
Align this with the end of the slider at (2)? Flows better that way.
- 01:18:403 (4,5) - Same comment with the stacks, but I guess this one is fair enough, because of the repetitiveness of the music at that part.
[Rainbow's Hard]
- 00:07:882 (1,2,3,4) - Just a personal preference, but maybe change the combo to
this. The outwards flow fits more since the pattern is at the corner.
- 00:25:830 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 back. There is a distinct beat at 00:26:975.
- 00:30:022 (3) - I don't see why you suddenly deviate from the spacing here. All other sliders in the combos ahead are spaced properly.
- 00:32:213 (2) - Flows kind of awkwardly. I recommend changing the direction to something like
this.
- 00:38:784 (1) -
The short spinner doesn't really fit IMO. It's sudden and the transition to 00:39:736 (1) plays badly because of it. Change it to a slider?
- 00:47:165 (1) - Finish at the start? The music fits for a finish there.
- 00:48:689 (3) - Same as above.
- 00:53:260 (4) - Same as above.
- 00:56:213 (2) - Similar to 00:32:213 (2). I suggest something like
this. Also add a finish at the end ^.
- 01:02:213 (2) - Add finish at the end. Similar reason to the ones before this.
- 01:09:070 (3,1) - I recommend increasing the spacing here, or adding a note at 01:09:641. The spacing here is very similar to 01:08:879 (2,3) and the anti-jump plays badly.
- 01:09:832 (1) - Add finish at the end. Similar reasons.
- 01:11:165 (1,2,3,4,5) - May I recommend
thispattern for better flow?
- 01:23:260 (2) - Similar to 00:32:213 (2). I suggest something like
this- 01:26:594 (1) - The music is gradually becoming softer here. Remove the finish at the end.
[m2004's Insane]
- 00:02:147 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Make the 1/3 spacing here similar to the previous notes? Or at the very least space them further. The minute overlaps don't look that good aesthetically.
- 00:04:794 (1,2,3) - Same as above.
- 00:22:774 (1) - [nazi] Move right so it won't overlap 00:22:392 (10). Looks ugly IMO.
- 00:24:302 (1,3) - Move these two sliders apart to not make them overlap (2). ^
- 00:45:070 (1,2,3) - IMO a stream here instead of sliders would play better.
- 00:58:117 (2) - I don't hear as much emphasis here for a triple. I suggest you delete this note.
- 01:10:498 (3) - Same as above.
- 01:10:975 (5) - Make these into notes which you stack instead? Plays better IMO.
- 01:26:403 (4) -
Lower the spacing here? A 1/4 jump like this without the leniency of a slider is very unforgiving for the average difficulty level of this diff.[Jiyuu no Tsubasa]
- This is based on the .osu you posted in the thread.
- 00:06:117 (1) -
This should be in 1/3. - 00:11:412 (1) -
This should be in 1/3. Also, remove the new combo here.
- 00:11:853 (2) - New combo here instead.
- 00:12:730 (1) - Remove the new combo here. ^
- 00:33:832 (6) - New combo here to be consistent with your combo patterning.
- 00:34:594 (1) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:25:070 (1) - The drum finish here sounds off. I suggest removing it.
[Skystar]
- I think this diff has been modded to death, so I'll keep it short.
- 00:57:450 (1,2,3) - The overlap here really looks horrible IMO. I recommend you change it.
[Firce777's Muzu]
- I recommend adding some k's at the start of the song. Having it all d seems boring IMO.
- 01:10:975 (280,281) - Switch these two. The k fits better at the part where the vocal is emphasized.
- 01:24:689 (342,343,344) -
ddk here seems pretty hard for a Muzu. I've talked with another BAT and they agree with me. Make it ddd?
[Firce777's Oni]
- 00:07:294 (21) - k here to emphasize the higher pitch?
- 00:57:927 (343) - Remove the note here. IMO better to separate the stream to give an emphasis to the music at 00:57:832.
- 01:10:117 (445) - Similar to above. Remove note to emphasize 01:10:128.
That's it. Don't really like very high 1/4 spacing, but I guess it's the map's gimmicks.