SPOILER

1. 00:02:703 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you started these sliders 1/2 later, and put a note 1/2 before them as this plays a lot better
2. 00:38:316 (1) - Just a personal opinion here, I think x0.5 is overkill for this slider, and will cause the player to lose his combo on 99% of the first tries, how about using x0.75
3. 00:43:769 (1) - This slider feels a lot more intuitive, however if you fixed the previous slider I suggest you fix this one too
4. 00:48:540 (3,4,5) - This tripple is placed 1/2 too early, there's no sound on the blue tick here, there's enough other places to put a tripple
5. 01:02:342 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in this pattern
6. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat

1. 00:11:564 (2,3) - Should be a better blanket + the slider looks a bit cramped right now (Fixing the blanket will fix that look too)
2. 00:14:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this should be 100% symmetric, do this by using the smallest grid:
   -00:15:483 (7) - 2 grids to the right
   -00:15:313 (6,8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:654 (8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:824 (9) - 1 grid down
   
   
3. 00:17:698 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Copy paste the previous pattern to here and press CTRL+G (Don't forget the hitsounds)
4. 00:19:743 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
5. 00:20:425 (3) - Add whistle on start
6. 00:28:774 (1,2) - A bit more curve would look better imo, additionally you could flip (2) with CTRL+J for better flow (Try to make it a blanket over 00:29:456 (1) - )
7. 00:29:796 (2,3,4,5) - Use x1.0 spacing like you did with the rest of this part
8. 00:34:056 (5) - Add a clap
9. 00:37:635 (4,5) - Same as before, a bit more curve and CTRL+J (5)
10. 00:40:020 (2) - CTRL+H flows better imo (don't forget the spacing)
11. 00:41:724 (5,6,7) - Incorrect spacing
12. 00:48:199 (2,3,4) - I suggest rearranging these like this: http://puu.sh/3R2gl.jpg (Better flow/looks) Try to stack00:48:370 (3) - with 00:49:051 (1) -
13. 00:50:414 (4,5) - Use x1.3 spacing here for consistency
14. 00:50:585 (5,6,7) - Fix this spacing
15. 00:53:141 (7,8,9) - Make this a better looking triangle
16. 00:53:652 (1,2,3) - After you fixed the above listed triangle, copy paste them and press CTRL+H and J to make this a smooth looking pattern (Use ctrl+G to arrange the notes)
17. 01:00:127 (2,3,4) - Give this a bit more curve, place (2) a bit higher, (3) a bit lower, keep the spacing intact between these notes though http://puu.sh/3R2sh.jpg
18. 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4) - NC on these notes
19. 01:09:840 (4,6) - unnecessary overlap
20. The claps from 01:01:490 - till 01:11:884 - are missplaced, put them on every upbeat, aka every 2nd white line in the measure
    
21. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, use a clap every upbeat again
22. 01:16:485 (5,1) - Spacing
23. 01:18:530 (4) - Replace this slider by a copy of 01:17:848 (1) - (Use CTRL+H and J) Mind the spacing and add a repeat to it
24. 01:31:310 (10,11,12,1) - Flows weird, try using a symmetric triangle pattern: http://puu.sh/3R2Nx.jpg (Fix the spacing between 01:31:650 (3,1) - after you've done this)
25. 01:32:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - NC
26. 01:34:206 (5) - stack with the start of 01:33:014 (1) -
27. 01:34:377 (1,2,3,4) - To fix the spacing with the previous object you can place these 4 sliders a bit lower

• 
  I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it

1. 00:07:304 (3) - Remove this whistle
2. 00:09:690 (3,4) - (4) should be a better blanket over the end of (3)
3. 00:16:506 (1) - Such sliders should be symmetric or really close to it, the lower part clearly has less curve than the upper part in the current state
4. 00:18:550 (4,1) - Fix this blanket
5. 00:19:573 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:277 (4) - Place this slider somewhere around the height of the previous slider, more flow and fits the song as it stops with a high note
7. 00:37:976 (3,4) - Copy 1 slider and paste it to so they're the same, then fix the blanket of these
8. 00:50:926 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
9. 00:51:266 (2) - the curve of the last part of this slider could look a lot better
10. 00:52:289 (3,4) - Same as listed before
11. 00:52:970 (4) - Remove whistle on the start
12. 00:55:697 (5,1) - Blanket
13. 01:01:490 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat
16. 01:33:525 (2,3) - Blanket

1. I suggest you use x1.0 speed for the whole diff, it can be pretty confusing for new players to encounter SV changes
2. Also keep in mind to use the same spacing for the whole diff (x0.8) It varied a bit in the intro
3. 00:42:406 (1) - The objects after this spinner are too short after it. Shorten the spinner to 00:43:769 - and add a note here 00:45:132 -
4. 00:54:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It bothered me a bit that this is almost the same just repeated, try removing the repeat on 00:58:764 (3) - and adding a note at 01:00:127 - (Might have to move stuff around to get the spacing/looks right here
5. 01:10:351 (5) - Would look a lot better if this slider was symmetric like the rest of the pattern http://puu.sh/3R3xC.jpg (Mind the spacing after fixing this)
6. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - Space these out a bit more to prevent confusion
7. 01:18:189 (6,7,1) - Spacing
8. 01:35:570 (1) - Start this spinner 1/1 later and put a note here with a finish

Kyshiro wrote:

Haelo

General
Copy paste from AIbat:

SPOILER

Pie's insane

1. 00:02:703 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you started these sliders 1/2 later, and put a note 1/2 before them as this plays a lot better
2. 00:38:316 (1) - Just a personal opinion here, I think x0.5 is overkill for this slider, and will cause the player to lose his combo on 99% of the first tries, how about using x0.75
3. 00:43:769 (1) - This slider feels a lot more intuitive, however if you fixed the previous slider I suggest you fix this one too
4. 00:48:540 (3,4,5) - This tripple is placed 1/2 too early, there's no sound on the blue tick here, there's enough other places to put a tripple
5. 01:02:342 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing in this pattern
6. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat

Insane

1. 00:11:564 (2,3) - Should be a better blanket + the slider looks a bit cramped right now (Fixing the blanket will fix that look too)
2. 00:14:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Patterns like this should be 100% symmetric, do this by using the smallest grid:
   -00:15:483 (7) - 2 grids to the right
   -00:15:313 (6,8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:654 (8) - 1 grid to the left
   -00:15:824 (9) - 1 grid down
   
   
3. 00:17:698 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Copy paste the previous pattern to here and press CTRL+G (Don't forget the hitsounds)
4. 00:19:743 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
5. 00:20:425 (3) - Add whistle on start
6. 00:28:774 (1,2) - A bit more curve would look better imo, additionally you could flip (2) with CTRL+J for better flow (Try to make it a blanket over 00:29:456 (1) - )
7. 00:29:796 (2,3,4,5) - Use x1.0 spacing like you did with the rest of this part
8. 00:34:056 (5) - Add a clap
9. 00:37:635 (4,5) - Same as before, a bit more curve and CTRL+J (5)
10. 00:40:020 (2) - CTRL+H flows better imo (don't forget the spacing)
11. 00:41:724 (5,6,7) - Incorrect spacing
12. 00:48:199 (2,3,4) - I suggest rearranging these like this: http://puu.sh/3R2gl.jpg (Better flow/looks) Try to stack00:48:370 (3) - with 00:49:051 (1) -
13. 00:50:414 (4,5) - Use x1.3 spacing here for consistency
14. 00:50:585 (5,6,7) - Fix this spacing
15. 00:53:141 (7,8,9) - Make this a better looking triangle
16. 00:53:652 (1,2,3) - After you fixed the above listed triangle, copy paste them and press CTRL+H and J to make this a smooth looking pattern (Use ctrl+G to arrange the notes)
17. 01:00:127 (2,3,4) - Give this a bit more curve, place (2) a bit higher, (3) a bit lower, keep the spacing intact between these notes though http://puu.sh/3R2sh.jpg
18. 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4) - NC on these notes
19. 01:09:840 (4,6) - unnecessary overlap
20. The claps from 01:01:490 - till 01:11:884 - are missplaced, put them on every upbeat, aka every 2nd white line in the measure
    
21. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, use a clap every upbeat again
22. 01:16:485 (5,1) - Spacing
23. 01:18:530 (4) - Replace this slider by a copy of 01:17:848 (1) - (Use CTRL+H and J) Mind the spacing and add a repeat to it
24. 01:31:310 (10,11,12,1) - Flows weird, try using a symmetric triangle pattern: http://puu.sh/3R2Nx.jpg (Fix the spacing between 01:31:650 (3,1) - after you've done this)
25. 01:32:162 (2,3,4,5,6) - NC
26. 01:34:206 (5) - stack with the start of 01:33:014 (1) -
27. 01:34:377 (1,2,3,4) - To fix the spacing with the previous object you can place these 4 sliders a bit lower

Xin's Normal

• 
  I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it

1. 00:07:304 (3) - Remove this whistle
2. 00:09:690 (3,4) - (4) should be a better blanket over the end of (3)
3. 00:16:506 (1) - Such sliders should be symmetric or really close to it, the lower part clearly has less curve than the upper part in the current state
4. 00:18:550 (4,1) - Fix this blanket
5. 00:19:573 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:277 (4) - Place this slider somewhere around the height of the previous slider, more flow and fits the song as it stops with a high note
7. 00:37:976 (3,4) - Copy 1 slider and paste it to so they're the same, then fix the blanket of these
8. 00:50:926 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
9. 00:51:266 (2) - the curve of the last part of this slider could look a lot better
10. 00:52:289 (3,4) - Same as listed before
11. 00:52:970 (4) - Remove whistle on the start
12. 00:55:697 (5,1) - Blanket
13. 01:01:490 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat
16. 01:33:525 (2,3) - Blanket

Easy

1. I suggest you use x1.0 speed for the whole diff, it can be pretty confusing for new players to encounter SV changes
2. Also keep in mind to use the same spacing for the whole diff (x0.8) It varied a bit in the intro
3. 00:42:406 (1) - The objects after this spinner are too short after it. Shorten the spinner to 00:43:769 - and add a note here 00:45:132 -
4. 00:54:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It bothered me a bit that this is almost the same just repeated, try removing the repeat on 00:58:764 (3) - and adding a note at 01:00:127 - (Might have to move stuff around to get the spacing/looks right here
5. 01:10:351 (5) - Would look a lot better if this slider was symmetric like the rest of the pattern http://puu.sh/3R3xC.jpg (Mind the spacing after fixing this)
6. 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - Space these out a bit more to prevent confusion
7. 01:18:189 (6,7,1) - Spacing
8. 01:35:570 (1) - Start this spinner 1/1 later and put a note here with a finish

Fixed everything in Easy & Insane, ty for mod!!!!!

Kyshiro wrote:

Xin's Normal

• 
  I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it Probably, you still don't know my mapping style , I use a lot of rare blankets, which are not necessarily perfect. This is intentional . If you want , you can check my 3 ranked maps

1. 00:07:304 (3) - Remove this whistle why ? , I'm following the piano sounds
2. 00:09:690 (3,4) - (4) should be a better blanket over the end of (3)
3. 00:16:506 (1) - Such sliders should be symmetric or really close to it, the lower part clearly has less curve than the upper part in the current state
4. 00:18:550 (4,1) - Fix this blanket
5. 00:19:573 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:21:277 (4) - Place this slider somewhere around the height of the previous slider, more flow and fits the song as it stops with a high note
7. 00:37:976 (3,4) - Copy 1 slider and paste it to so they're the same, then fix the blanket of these
8. 00:50:926 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
9. 00:51:266 (2) - the curve of the last part of this slider could look a lot better
10. 00:52:289 (3,4) - Same as listed before
11. 00:52:970 (4) - Remove whistle on the start
12. 00:55:697 (5,1) - Blanket
13. 01:01:490 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:15:804 (1) - The part starting from here definitely needs hitsounds, try using a clap every upbeat I think it is unnecessary
16. 01:33:525 (2,3) - Blanket

I fixed some blankets

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XinCrin wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

I see there's a lot of incorrect blankets etc. in this diff, they don't have to be 100% perfect but at least make them look prettier, listed most of them in the mod, if you feel there's more that need a change, go ahead and do it Probably, you still don't know my mapping style , I use a lot of rare blankets, which are not necessarily perfect. This is intentional . If you want , you can check my 3 ranked maps

XinCrin wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

Probably, you still don't know my mapping style , I use a lot of rare blankets, which are not necessarily perfect. This is intentional . If you want , you can check my 3 ranked maps

AnimeStyle wrote:

~Star~Star~

Rank this so fast as you can >.<

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello m4m here as you requested

[General]

1. Easy has different Audioleadin value. Make Sure you have the same since you start mapping from the same point.

I think I fixed it.

[E]

1. 00:12:416 (2) - I actually do not suggest these kinds of overlap in a Easy diff. Kinda unfriendly to new babies. They are not able to recognize the second slider :S I think it's fine, if someone complains about it I will change it.
2. 00:19:232 (1) - Why not something like: Done.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:31:500 (5) - same as before ^
   
4. 00:40:702 (x) - would be great if you add a circle at x=308 y=184 Added.
5. 00:49:903 (1) - add on fin on head will be better? Added.
6. 01:11:714 (2) - add a whistle on head

Done.

[N]

1. 00:14:461 (2) - make a better symmetrical shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:506 (1) - This will be better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:16:485 (1) - In order to make a better blanket maybe move the end tick left a bit
   
   Nice sliders in this diff! Very beautiful!

[i]

1. 00:17:187 (3) - Try Ctrl+G Done.
2. 00:20:254 (x) - Try add a circle at x=280 y=328 Fine without it.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:21:277 (7) - Move the spinner behind and start from 00:21:447, add a circle instead, for better rhythm Done.
4. 00:30:478 (6) - I would expect a consistent spacing with previous notes like 00:29:796 (2,3,4,5) - Fixed.
5. 01:13:759 (2,3) - Would be cool if you use New Combo Done
6. 01:18:530 (4) - should have a clap on tail Ok.
7. 01:22:790 (9,10,11) - why not Done.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Otherwise looks kinda restricted

[K‘s H]

1. 00:12:757 (2) - Try Ctrl+G
   
   Nice diff

[P‘s I]

1. Nothing to poke at
   Maybe because I'm tired T. T
   
   Gonna go to bed T. T~
   
   So that's it and Good Luck =3=

Megurine Luka wrote:

[K‘s H]

1. 00:12:757 (2) - Try Ctrl+G I've put it like this on purpose >: Plays a bit different, I like how this works
   
   Nice diff

Megurine Luka wrote:

[N]
Nice sliders in this diff! Very beautiful!

wtf

Megurine Luka wrote:

[N]

1. 00:14:461 (2) - make a better symmetrical shape? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:506 (1) - This will be better: Sure
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:16:485 (1) - In order to make a better blanket maybe move the end tick left a bit Done
   
   Nice sliders in this diff! Very beautiful! Thank you <3

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 34227
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Runaway (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:Runaway (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Groove Coverage
ArtistUnicode:Groove Coverage
Creator:Asphyxia
Version:Xin's Normal
Source:
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XinCrin wrote:

@Kyshiro Tell me , Do you affects something like my work ?
Please do not criticize my style, I don't like your style too because it is very boring to see , circular and straight sliders only . But I dont criticize your slider .
It saddens me that you do not take the time to at least take a bit creativity to make better your sliders and no just make the same slider in all diff.
You need examples ? :



Same sliders everywhere , Some creative slider ? , no :v
~

Darky wrote:

WARNING. it's my 2nd mod. I'm not so skilled.

Pie's Insane:

about similar moment with nc: nc like 00:32:864 (6) - and 00:38:316 (1) - , 00:43:769 (1) and others - it's strange D:

00:57:230 (3,1) - 00:59:957 (9,1) - 01:01:320 (7,1) - and others.. Dont like

00:29:967 (1) - - nc? O_o NO! D:
00:30:989 (1) - nc.
00:31:500 (1) - remove nc
00:32:182 (7) - nc.
00:36:272 (6) - rounds 00:35:931 (4) - ? bad rounds, or it seemed to
00:47:347 (4) - nc i guess
mb 01:24:835 (2) - nc better then 01:24:664 (1) - . I know, 01:24:664 (1) - main note, but.. oh, dont know..



Oh, about nc: nc like 00:32:864 (6) - and 00:38:316 (1) - , 00:43:769 (1) - It's strange D:

Insane:
With the location of circle all good

00:02:874 (2) :

- I like this No change on this.

00:13:012 (7) - delete. Not in a voice. Done
00:20:254 (3) - mb there must be something. and 00:19:743 (2,4) - Revise it somehow. I think it's fine?

agian D: i think nc 00:29:796 (2) - better then 00:29:456 (1) -. No change.
00:40:361 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:19:041 (5) - nc? No.
01:31:821 (1) - i said in Pie's diff, dont like this nc. Okay.

Xin's Normal:

00:04:237 (4) - rework on this
00:08:327 (1,2) - bad round
00:33:545 (5) - down, like this:


00:36:953 (1,2) - bad round. Here for example:


00:40:702 (3,4) - ^
00:50:244 (2) - i said, more straighter please
00:53:311 (1,2) - bad round

Easy:

Nice diff ty :3
but..
01:21:256 (4) - for begginer it's hard. Changed into something else.



Oh, forgot Kyshiro's Hard:

AR 6 or 7.
01:24:920 (2) - mb there must be something.
and.. Thats all o_O

Nice mapset :3
Good luck

Darky wrote:

Xin's Normal:

00:04:237 (4) - rework on this why ? lol
00:08:327 (1,2) - bad round
00:33:545 (5) - down, like this: Hmm , no . I prefer a straight blanket , flows better imo


00:36:953 (1,2) - bad round. Here for example: Fixed


00:40:702 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:50:244 (2) - i said, more straighter please Hmm , As i said
00:53:311 (1,2) - bad round

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Raging Bull wrote:

Hi. Mods are suggestions. Feel free to ignore them. Please explain if you disagree instead of just "no"

General:
Like Bakari said. Slider slide is too loud. Perhaps use slider silence? Slider slide doesn't sound loud at all to me, so no change.

Easy:
01:01:831 (3) - I'm not usually the one to like these sliders. It starts on a weak part of the music and the slider slides over the stronger part of it. Perhaps you should do ctrl+G kind of pattern? That way you can click on the downbeat instead of completely missing over it. I thought about it but I think it's better without it, sorry.
01:04:898 (2) - Not really tick hitsound fan, but perhaps add the tick hitsound here? I don't see why you stopped doing it here honestly.I think I fixed it
01:24:323 (1) - Same. Perhaps ctrl+G with 8 and arrange from there? ^
01:28:413 (3) - I don't understand? edit: no change
Normal:
00:08:327 (1) - Perhaps make blanket little neater?
00:11:053 (1) - ^?
00:21:277 (1) - Personally I think slider starting here seems better. The lyrics fade into the background well so instead of a click into a spinner, I think spinner here is even better.
00:38:998 (4) - Minus 1 repeat and then add note on downbeat? Feels much more powerful to begin the kiai again than just letting slider end on downbeat.
00:50:585 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do this? http://puu.sh/3XBtN.jpg That stop between 3,4 is awkward. I think putting notes like in screenshot remove the awkwardness and improves flow.
00:54:334 (x) - Add note? Feels empty here especially since there is a prominent sound at this spot.
01:01:490 (1) - Make blanket little neater?
01:18:530 (5,6) - Personally I think ctrl+G timeline pattern would play much better. The sound on 5 seems to have a good "carry" sound to me which makes it ideal for a slider. Plus 6 on downbeat is awesome for me instead of dragging slider end there
01:19:552 (1) - Not usually a fan of sliders starting on tick 2/4. Weak area emphasized. Strong area ignored. Perhaps readjust this pattern?
01:30:117 (1) - Make blanket little neater?
01:33:525 (2,3) - I rather you remove repeat on 2 and add note on downbeat. But if you do keep that. Can you at least add a note on 01:34:547 (x) and start slider at 01:34:888 (x) instead? Same thing with weak part emphasized strong part deemphasized

Hard:
I found it funny how hard is between the two insanes.
weeeellll I really actually liked it. Great job.

Insane:
00:01:340 (1,2) - Perhaps you can do something with these two notes instead? Feels weird the notes are close and then a jump afterwards. I think it's fine just this way, tried to change the place of (2) but I think it fits there.
00:14:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm not sure why, but here seems rather boring for me. Although it's probably because I'm not a fan of back and forth jumps (especially if they are small jumps) Perhaps you can move the notes around for a different jump pattern? I honestly like this, imo something new?
00:17:698 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing? ^
01:00:809 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like the anti jumps here are rather flow breaking. You've been mapping with big spacing and then the music doesn't exactly have a slow down to me imo, but stronger beats for these. Maybe make these a jump instead? I personally love antijumps and I think they're fun, so I do not want to change my antijumps, sorry. (I don't think it kills the flow either)
01:16:656 (1) - I would probably move the note to x424 y36 or something similar. After a star jump, I usually make sure at the end of the star, it should still jump to the next pattern. So basically instead of after 5,1 to normal spacing. I think 5,1 jump 1,2 normal spacing would be better. Hope you can understand it orz haha. Yeah I undertand But I feel like that it isn't necessary to jump to the next pattern, you get it? >.< sorry I can't explain very well~
You seem very inconsistent in NC pattern. Starting from 01:17:848 (1) - . Maybe NC at every stanza? Because the NCs after this are very inconsistent. Basically 01:19:211 (6) - NC
01:19:893 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:575 (1) - NC
01:21:256 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:938 (1) - NC.
etcetc I think I fixed this, thanks!
01:32:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing with the anti jump. Maybe make it regular jump instead? See answer ^

Pie Insane:
00:20:765 (1,2,3) - Personally if you shorten 5 and move 1,2,3 to 00:20:595 (x) it would seem much better. It just seems so awkward to start on a red tick and end on white tick. 00:19:232 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe this? http://puu.sh/3XCaQ.jpg Follows the lyrics better imo.
00:38:316 (1) - x.5 such a strong slowdown. (God I hate the tick changes still) perhaps make it .75 instead?
00:43:769 (1) - Even this one perhaps. Especially since you made 00:43:258 (4,5,6,7) a jump, players might move too fast on this slider.
00:47:347 (4,1,1) - Just make these a jump? Don't see the point of these anti jumps since I don't think it builds up to anything. (At least that's how I would use anti jumps, if it builds up something)


Good luck.

Thanks for your mod!!!

Raging Bull wrote:

Normal:
00:08:327 (1) - Perhaps make blanket little neater? Fixed
00:11:053 (1) - ^? Ok
00:21:277 (1) - Personally I think slider starting here seems better. The lyrics fade into the background well so instead of a click into a spinner, I think spinner here is even better. Hmm , I prefer follow the music lol
00:38:998 (4) - Minus 1 repeat and then add note on downbeat? Feels much more powerful to begin the kiai again than just letting slider end on downbeat. The voice sounds a bit repeat in this pace . So , this repeat flows good with this slider
00:50:585 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe do this? http://puu.sh/3XBtN.jpg That stop between 3,4 is awkward. I think putting notes like in screenshot remove the awkwardness and improves flow. Imo , that suggestion doesn't follow very well the music . So , i will no change it
00:54:334 (x) - Add note? Feels empty here especially since there is a prominent sound at this spot. Ok
01:01:490 (1) - Make blanket little neater? . . . Okay
01:18:530 (5,6) - Personally I think ctrl+G timeline pattern would play much better. The sound on 5 seems to have a good "carry" sound to me which makes it ideal for a slider. Plus 6 on downbeat is awesome for me instead of dragging slider end there Ok
01:19:552 (1) - Not usually a fan of sliders starting on tick 2/4. Weak area emphasized. Strong area ignored. Perhaps readjust this pattern? Nope , it's a normal diff , not a hard or insane diff . This could do a bit hard to read to beginners imo
01:30:117 (1) - Make blanket little neater? Ok
01:33:525 (2,3) - I rather you remove repeat on 2 and add note on downbeat. But if you do keep that. Can you at least add a note on 01:34:547 (x) and start slider at 01:34:888 (x) instead? Same thing with weak part emphasized strong part deemphasized That idea will do a bit strange this pattern imo . I will not change it

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1. You could try increasing HP-drain to 8 which would put your diff at 5 stars and place it below the hard diff in song select. Up to you.
   
2. 00:00:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda nazi, your star formations are a bit off. Remember you can use the "Create Polygon Circle" function under the "Compose" tab in order to create perfect shapes like stars. Try it out!
   
3. 00:08:164 (1,2,3) - Try symmetry. Place the 2 directly opposite the grid from the 1's head and then the 3 in the center under the next pattern.
   
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4. 00:19:749 (2) - I don't really like this, I feel it's not following the vocals nicely like we were. Try deleting it and replacing with two circles. A rhythm like this might be nice:
   
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5. 00:32:697 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't see how these anti-jumps are fitting to the music at all here. I hear nothing in the song that suggests something like this, especially not starting on the red tick 00:32:697. I suggest replace this with some nice 1/2 sliders like so:
   
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   00:32:697(7) to 00:34:231(1)
   If you really want to do anti-jumps here, then split the 1/2 sliders there into two circles and have each set of two be an anti jump. Just example:
   
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6. 00:34:231 (1) - Finish on the head seems nice.
   
7. 00:39:683 (1) - ^
   
8. 00:49:053 (1,2) - NC seems more better on the 2 which would follow your combo patterns in this section.
   
9. 00:49:053 (1,2,3,4) - How about add a nice triplet in here and instead of a gap at 00:49:735 have a 1/2 slider with a jump to the 00:49:905 (1)? I don't really like this pattern/placement as it is.
   
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   That is with previous combo suggestion included.
10. 00:53:312 (8,9,1,2,3) - I think the jumping would fit the song nicer if you move the NC to the 8 and then had your jumps towards the bottom of the screen there on that downbeat. Right now you have the jump between 00:53:312 (8,9,1) not fitting well with much in the song imo.
    
11. 00:56:038 (1) - Try a finish here.
    
12. 01:11:712 (5) - Try reducing SV here to like .75 and then extend the slider to end at 01:12:053. That has a nice effect imo. Your setup right now feels awkward imo.
    
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13. 01:08:987 (1) - Give this slider less of a curve. Make it more consistent with the 01:06:942 (5) sliders, it will have a nicer flow.
    
14. 01:27:386 (1) - Finish on the head is nice.

1. 00:17:023 (1,2,3) - Try to move these 1/2 forward to follow the music better. The way you place this large jump is really strange because the music calls for a jump 1/2 later than you map it.
   
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2. 00:20:260 (5) - Pretty awkward imo. The slider is not following a hold in the piano, nor the vocals. If you placed it at 00:20:431 which is 1/2 later, then you could follow the vocals nicely. You could place a circle at 00:20:260 stacked on its head, and then alter the rhythm after it a bit. Try this and see if you like:
   
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3. 00:47:349 (4) - NC here makes a nicer pattern imo. Seems strange to me when one of the three circles centered here is not a NC.
   
4. 00:48:542 (3,4,5) - Feels strange in play. You misplaced this triplet, try to move it 1/2 forward so that it follows the music.

1. 00:45:475 (1,2,3) - Missing claps on offbeats here? Seems strange that it wouldn't start until the second measure.

1. 00:00:497 (2,4) - Made these slider angled the same way for a nice echo effect.
   
2. 00:05:438 (5,1) - Swap NC's seems much nicer to follow melody.
   
3. 00:08:334 (1) - Seems lonely without some whistles here, try one on the head, maybe on the tail also to follow in your whistle pattern from before.
   
4. 00:09:356 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern is kind of not so great imo. Try placing the circles so that there is similar distance between all of them. Right now the 00:09:697 (3,5) are closer together than normal spacing and it looks bad.
   
5. 00:10:379 (5,6) - Swap the whistles seems nicer here imo. The three whistles in a row 00:09:697 (3,4,5) fits the melody better than the lone offbeat whistle at 00:10:720 (6) when the melody changes.
   
6. 00:11:060 (1) - A bit ugly and unfitting when the whole bottom portion is without a curve. Try curving it a bit, here's an example:
   
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   Seems to fit your mapping better imo.
7. 01:22:275 - If you want the slidertick clap to sound, you'll need to switch to sample set 2 here. But you didn't do this for other sliders, so why have these green lines here?
   
8. 01:32:327 - Lots of useless green lines in here.

1. 00:02:882 (3) - I'd rotate it like 45 degrees or so. That way you could avoid this bad overlap with the 00:05:608 (1,2).
   
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2. 00:16:512 (3) - It would be ideal if you could shorten this to end at 00:17:875. It follows the music better for the Easy here. When it ends at 00:18:216 on the offbeat, the rhythm on the 4 is difficult to understand.
   
3. 00:19:238 (1,2) - Try to equalize spacing here to .8. The anti-jump is pretty difficult to understand.
   
4. 00:33:890 (4) - Delete this seems nicer. Try not to use so much consecutive 1/2 in an Easy diff. It can start to feel like a Normal really fast.
   
5. 00:34:231 (1) - Clap on repeat.
   
6. 00:40:705 (4) - Delete seems nicer. It's not necessary, you can follow vocals without it.
   
7. 00:48:201 (5,6) - Try deleting the 6 and moving the 5 to 00:48:542 for a more fitting rhythm here. You could add a circle to 00:48:201 then if you wanted to.
   
8. 00:49:905 (1) - Remove the finish from the end and make it soft sample set like your Insane diff. That sounds much better.
   
9. 00:52:972 (4) - I suggest delete this and switch the NC from the 00:54:336 (1) to the 00:53:313 (5).
   
10. 00:54:675 (2) - Try a finish on the end.
    
11. 00:58:423 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Work more on your placements here. You overlap the same portion of the screen too much and it gets messy.
    
12. 01:04:898 - This section sounds really strange since you're using two different claps. The sliderticks have a different clap than the circles that fall on offbeats...You should make each the same clap. You'll have to add another custom slidertick clap that is the default normal clap.
    
13. 01:12:394 (3) - NC is nice.
    
14. 01:15:802 (1) - Finish on the end is nice.
    
15. 01:18:186 (4,5,1) - Try to equal this spacing out. It's not good to have large spacing increases like this in an Easy diff.
    
16. 01:21:253 (4,5,6) - Large spacing inconsistencies here. I'm guessing you want to move the 5 down into a blanket.
    
17. 01:23:639 (7,8) - Spacing.
    
18. 01:27:386 (4) - Missing finish? ;_;

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey!
Sorry so late. =w= <3

[Insane]

1. You could try increasing HP-drain to 8 which would put your diff at 5 stars and place it below the hard diff in song select. Up to you. Lol okay, let's make it harder!
   
2. 00:00:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda nazi, your star formations are a bit off. Remember you can use the "Create Polygon Circle" function under the "Compose" tab in order to create perfect shapes like stars. Try it out! I think I fixed it now...
   
3. 00:08:164 (1,2,3) - Try symmetry. Place the 2 directly opposite the grid from the 1's head and then the 3 in the center under the next pattern.
   
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   Done, thanks.
   
4. 00:19:749 (2) - I don't really like this, I feel it's not following the vocals nicely like we were. Try deleting it and replacing with two circles. A rhythm like this might be nice: Yeah done, I like it more too
   
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5. 00:32:697 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I really don't see how these anti-jumps are fitting to the music at all here. I hear nothing in the song that suggests something like this, especially not starting on the red tick 00:32:697. I suggest replace this with some nice 1/2 sliders like so:
   
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   00:32:697(7) to 00:34:231(1)
   If you really want to do anti-jumps here, then split the 1/2 sliders there into two circles and have each set of two be an anti jump. Just example:
   
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   I want to keep those as it is, sorry no change on the antijumps.
   
6. 00:34:231 (1) - Finish on the head seems nice. Done
   
7. 00:39:683 (1) - ^ ^
   
8. 00:49:053 (1,2) - NC seems more better on the 2 which would follow your combo patterns in this section. K
   
9. 00:49:053 (1,2,3,4) - How about add a nice triplet in here and instead of a gap at 00:49:735 have a 1/2 slider with a jump to the 00:49:905 (1)? I don't really like this pattern/placement as it is.
   
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   I like it just the way it is, sorry no change.
   That is with previous combo suggestion included.
10. 00:53:312 (8,9,1,2,3) - I think the jumping would fit the song nicer if you move the NC to the 8 and then had your jumps towards the bottom of the screen there on that downbeat. Right now you have the jump between 00:53:312 (8,9,1) not fitting well with much in the song imo.
    K done
11. 00:56:038 (1) - Try a finish here. I like it, added :3
    
12. 01:11:712 (5) - Try reducing SV here to like .75 and then extend the slider to end at 01:12:053. That has a nice effect imo. Your setup right now feels awkward imo. Done
    
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13. 01:08:987 (1) - Give this slider less of a curve. Make it more consistent with the 01:06:942 (5) sliders, it will have a nicer flow. Done.
    
14. 01:27:386 (1) - Finish on the head is nice.

Done

Placements a bit messy, but mostly fine, it's a fun map. Also the hitsounds in this diff get a little bit loud for my tastes, I can't hear the music as well as I'd like to. 90% is kind of crazy for normal sample set imo. You could try reducing the volume at some spots. The problem is, I don't hear the hitsounds if I lower the volume, but since people keep complaining about it, I will change it, thanks.

[Pie's Insane]

1. 00:17:023 (1,2,3) - Try to move these 1/2 forward to follow the music better. The way you place this large jump is really strange because the music calls for a jump 1/2 later than you map it.
   
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2. 00:20:260 (5) - Pretty awkward imo. The slider is not following a hold in the piano, nor the vocals. If you placed it at 00:20:431 which is 1/2 later, then you could follow the vocals nicely. You could place a circle at 00:20:260 stacked on its head, and then alter the rhythm after it a bit. Try this and see if you like:
   
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3. 00:47:349 (4) - NC here makes a nicer pattern imo. Seems strange to me when one of the three circles centered here is not a NC.
   
4. 00:48:542 (3,4,5) - Feels strange in play. You misplaced this triplet, try to move it 1/2 forward so that it follows the music.

[Kyshiro's Hard]

1. 00:45:475 (1,2,3) - Missing claps on offbeats here? Seems strange that it wouldn't start until the second measure.

[Xin's Normal] I fixed some stuff

1. 00:00:497 (2,4) - Made these slider angled the same way for a nice echo effect. Done
   
2. 00:05:438 (5,1) - Swap NC's seems much nicer to follow melody. Done
   
3. 00:08:334 (1) - Seems lonely without some whistles here, try one on the head, maybe on the tail also to follow in your whistle pattern from before. K
   
4. 00:09:356 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern is kind of not so great imo. Try placing the circles so that there is similar distance between all of them. Right now the 00:09:697 (3,5) are closer together than normal spacing and it looks bad. I can't change this, going to leave as it is.
   
5. 00:10:379 (5,6) - Swap the whistles seems nicer here imo. The three whistles in a row 00:09:697 (3,4,5) fits the melody better than the lone offbeat whistle at 00:10:720 (6) when the melody changes. Done
   
6. 00:11:060 (1) - A bit ugly and unfitting when the whole bottom portion is without a curve. Try curving it a bit, here's an example:
   
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   Seems to fit your mapping better imo.
   Can't change.
   
7. 01:22:275 - If you want the slidertick clap to sound, you'll need to switch to sample set 2 here. But you didn't do this for other sliders, so why have these green lines here? Idk here, no change tho
   
8. 01:32:327 - Lots of useless green lines in here.

K removed green lines

Same as Insane about hitsounds. I feel they can get too loud. Try reducing at least the loudest section below 90% orz. K..

[Easy]

1. 00:02:882 (3) - I'd rotate it like 45 degrees or so. That way you could avoid this bad overlap with the 00:05:608 (1,2).
   
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   It doesn't overlap with those anymore.
   
2. 00:16:512 (3) - It would be ideal if you could shorten this to end at 00:17:875. It follows the music better for the Easy here. When it ends at 00:18:216 on the offbeat, the rhythm on the 4 is difficult to understand. K
   
3. 00:19:238 (1,2) - Try to equalize spacing here to .8. The anti-jump is pretty difficult to understand. I moved the 00:20:601 (2) - more up.
   
4. 00:33:890 (4) - Delete this seems nicer. Try not to use so much consecutive 1/2 in an Easy diff. It can start to feel like a Normal really fast. K done
   
5. 00:34:231 (1) - Clap on repeat. Ok
   
6. 00:40:705 (4) - Delete seems nicer. It's not necessary, you can follow vocals without it. K
   
7. 00:48:201 (5,6) - Try deleting the 6 and moving the 5 to 00:48:542 for a more fitting rhythm here. You could add a circle to 00:48:201 then if you wanted to. No change on this, sorry. I like it just the way it is now.
   
8. 00:49:905 (1) - Remove the finish from the end and make it soft sample set like your Insane diff. That sounds much better. Ok
   
9. 00:52:972 (4) - I suggest delete this and switch the NC from the 00:54:336 (1) to the 00:53:313 (5). Ok
   
10. 00:54:675 (2) - Try a finish on the end. Doesn't sound that great for me, so no.
    
11. 00:58:423 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Work more on your placements here. You overlap the same portion of the screen too much and it gets messy. Ok
    
12. 01:04:898 - This section sounds really strange since you're using two different claps. The sliderticks have a different clap than the circles that fall on offbeats...You should make each the same clap. You'll have to add another custom slidertick clap that is the default normal clap. I personally think it's fine just this way.
    
13. 01:12:394 (3) - NC is nice. K
    
14. 01:15:802 (1) - Finish on the end is nice. K
    
15. 01:18:186 (4,5,1) - Try to equal this spacing out. It's not good to have large spacing increases like this in an Easy diff. I fixed a bit.
    
16. 01:21:253 (4,5,6) - Large spacing inconsistencies here. I'm guessing you want to move the 5 down into a blanket. Done!
    
17. 01:23:639 (7,8) - Spacing. :)))) oekay
    
18. 01:27:386 (4) - Missing finish? ;_;

Oh noes, added :-D

It's not bad for a first Easy. Honestly it feels much more like a Normal diff than an Easy because you use a nearly constant 1/2 rhythm. It's nice to try and have a smaller note density and to use more sliders. Using lots of circles in 1/2 in a row can be difficult for an Easy player.
Also hitsounds are too loud imo. 100% :O Well, the point was that my easy would be maybe a bit harder since normal diff is a bit harder as well, so but yeah fixed some hitsounds etcetc

Cool! Nice mapset!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Kyshiro's Hard]

1. 00:45:475 (1,2,3) - Missing claps on offbeats here? Seems strange that it wouldn't start until the second measure.

Frostmourne wrote:

adjusted something in Easy plus HP7 to make it easier on Insane.

Good luck for your first map!

BounceBabe wrote:

The mp3 needs a better fade-out

jericho2442 wrote:

so you agree that the mp3 has a bad problem. if "you know " that it needs fixing then gogo fix, also try to find a better mp3, this is a bad quality youtube rip with a lossy encode

popping since....well the mapper agrees the mp3 needs improvements so popping for the mapper to fix what he/she wants to fix

jericho2442 wrote:

i would advise you to start the fade out at the start of your last spinner, not too long or short, also make the spinnger get more silent with it. too sudden sounds bad and too long as well. here is a mod too since i rebubble checked Ok, fixed the fade-in

Pie´s Insane
00:14:468 (4,5) - this jump feels used for difficulty and not because the song asked for it, i would advise to remove the jump
00:16:852 (3,1) - this jump is just kinda nonsense, it follows nothing and doesnt suit your map at all, i heavily suggestion removing this jump
00:19:919 (3,4,5,1) - this part sounds out of time to the song, this is a major problem and needs a little remap. i would advise to move the 00:20:260 (5) - to start at 00:20:431 - and place a normal note at 00:20:260 then remap the small section after to follow the new timing, then it actually follows the song unlike right now it going against the song
00:29:801 (2) - works much better with thsi note removed
00:32:611 (6) - this too
00:47:349 (4,1,1) - no need to NC all these, just put a nc on the 4 if you have to and remove the other two, the combo spam is totally unneeded

Insane
have to admit this insane flows much better
00:53:483 (2,3,4) - this jump is not needed, i really advise normal spacing here I want to keep it that way, so no change on this sorry.
01:00:809 (1,1,1,1) - this newcombo spam is really not needed, one is enough. Fix'd
01:06:942 (5) - should really have a new combo here for your pattern
01:07:794 (1) - combo removed here and put on 01:08:305 (5) - then follow that same rhythm for this section onwards, works much better Fixed ^ and also this.
01:11:712 (5) - make this a repeat slider so it ends where the next note normally starts, you will notice it just follows the map and song much better True, fixed.
01:27:131 (7) - removing this note follows the song better too, creating a triple patterns instead of a quad Ok fixed
01:32:157 (1,1,1,1,1) - again so many newcombos just aint needed

Sharpy wrote:

No stars, but amazing beatmap, I love it <3

jericho2442 wrote:

ok me happy with it now perfected offset as well. katty pie had her diff removed due to point blank refusing to even check any more mods given to his/her diff, dissapointing but that is the guest dif mappers wish so yea. i still wish him/her best of luck on the next map eventhough it didnt work out positive here.

waiting on the mapper to remove katty pie from tags then will rebubble and thank you for helping to make the set better Asphyxia o/

Gero wrote:

More Nightcore :3/ Congratz Guys :3

YunoFanatic wrote:

Asphyxia <3 Friend congrats for the rank i wish ill be soon to be up there ^^

Oyatsu wrote:

Congratz! for first ranked

-Bakari- wrote:

YEAH CONGRATULATIONS

now map more nightcore!

jebwizoscar wrote:

congratulations

Konei wrote:

Oh cool, congratz :>

HelloSCV wrote:

cool , gratz~~

XinCrin wrote:

Oh So pro

Grats !!