-Bakari- wrote:
Yo.
[General]
- Don't be lazy and don't cut songs. Or at least cut them properly, end of the song is totally unexpected and sounds strange! I didn't. It's a maikel cut.
- Add members of that band to tags, they deserve it! axel konrad dj novus melanie munch Ok I added them to tags
- Sliderslide sound should be muted because it is really annoying and doesn't fit with music. What's more claps in non-kiai parts are too loud. And claps are a bit overused.
[Easy][Xin's Normal]
- I strongly recommend you to reduce HP Drain by one tick to make this diff playable for beginners! (because of some patterns it is too hard to pass with HP3) Done
Note: also, try to use AR3. it fits with your SV and patterns much better, I think ^- 00:11:053 (1,2) - such things confuse beginners a lot! Which direction to go, which slider to click. Try to avoid stacks, this is the easiest diff! I honestly think this is okay, so didn't change this.
- 00:15:824 (2,1) - reverse of the slider is too close to the circle. So, players may mistakenly hit the tail. What's more it doesn't looks really good, can't you change this pattern somehow? Changed.
Note: 00:30:137 (4,5) - same things as on two previous suggestions! :< No change.- 00:42:406 (1,1) - beginners need some time to recover after the spinner. So, try to leave some empty space after spinner! Done.
- 01:12:396 (3,1,1) - it is too hard for beginners to read your rhythm here because of stacks. Try to use regular spacing if it is possible! Done.
- 01:18:189 (6) - 2x reversed sliders are confusing because 2nd reverse-arrow appears too late and beginners can't notice it. What's more such sliders are VERY uncomon for [Easyy] diffs, so they will bug beginners a lot. Consider replacing it with a 1x reversed slider and a circle! Changed the first and the third one, second I think it's fine.
Note: 01:21:256 (4) - 01:26:368 (3) - same :<[Kyshiro's Hard]
- 00:45:814 - you should map this part to be consistent with other diffs! This part mapped even in [Easy] diff!
Note: if you still want to keep it unmapped, add a break or set HP drain to 3 :<
Nothing else to say, awesome diff![Insane]
- Your HP and OD are too low. I'd set OD to7 and HP to 6, so we can get better-balanced and more challenging diff! Try it, it fits wmuch better, I think.
- 00:21:958 - you could place a spinner here as it done in other diffs.So, you will emphasize that sound and make mapset more consistent.
Since there're two [Insane] diffs [Hard] could be a little bit easier. But what done is done, I like it, anyway.I think the placement is okay, if some1 else will say something about it, I'll take a look at it.
- 00:32:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreasonable spacing changes/antijumps here bug me a lot. I'm sure that you should fix them. OR AT LEAST emphasize them with new combos. Done, added NC to every one of them.
- 00:41:043 (5) - have you missed a new combo here? Added
In general, this diff isn't that bad. Rhythm is ok, but placement is a little bit messy. Try to work on it a little bit more and feel free to poke me again. :<
[Pie's Insane]~~~~~~~~~~~~
- This is [Insane] diff, therefore it should be insane! Set OD to 8, it will help you to make this diff more challenging and enjoyabl for skilled players!
- 00:04:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nazi - this pattern looks a little bit messy,you can make it look much better by using Polygonal Circle Creation tool! Just press Ctrl+Shift+D in the editor. example / tool
Note: 00:15:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - it also helps to make neat star patterns- 00:09:349 (1) - nazi - jumps looks good but it reflects nothing in music. Try to reduce distance or keep regular spacing here to follow music closer!
- 00:38:316 (1) - well, I think that you should remove slowdown from this slider because it desn't reflects music well. Anyway, it's up to you.
- 00:47:347 (4,1) - cute but unreadable antijumps. Please, swap NCs 00:47:347 (4,1) - here and remove NC from 00:47:688 (1) - so, you'll get cute and understandable comboing, see?
- Spacing in the end of the map looks too big, but this is is [insane] diff, so I think it's not a big deal.
Good luck!
Ty for mod!!!
