livetune adding Fukase(from SEKAI NO OWARI) - Take Your Way · forum

Rakuen

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-07-02T17:16:47+00:00

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Nicely mapped >.o /

00:50:161 - Preview Point
01:11:653 - KIAI time ends here
Backgroun needs to be resized to 1024x768 (16:9) in order to be ranked

[Easy]
>.o)b

[Normal]
Recommend to use distance snap for all notes, your current common DS is x1.1
00:07:623 - Add something here

[Hard]
00:35:832 (1) - This slider follow distance snap

[Survive]
>.o)b

Feel like it can be ranked >.o /

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-02T17:42:53+00:00

fixed something
thank you~~

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-07-03T08:29:11+00:00

Yo! From my queue

[survive]
00:02:026 (1) - move NC on 00:01:803(3), you know why but if no -> 00:02:026(1) placed on downbeat and it requires NC
00:01:355 (1) - remove NC
00:03:929 (1) - move NC on 00:03:594(3), you know why.
00:03:146 (1) - remove NC
01:03:594 (1) - move NC on 01:02:698(4)
01:04:713 (1) - move NC on 01:04:489(8), you know why.
00:33:146 - add note for a smooth flow
01:00:235 - add note, sounds is really good and for a smooth flow

[hard]
same as in survive -
00:01:579 (1) - move NC on 00:01:803(2)
00:03:146 (1) - move NC on 00:03:594(3)
00:04:265 (1) - remove NC
00:04:937 (3) - NC
00:53:071 (4) - add note for a smooth flow

[normal]
00:07:623 - add note and move NC on this pattern from 00:08:071(1) IMO better rhytm
00:18:370 (1) - move NC on 00:17:922(4), you know why.
00:26:653 (1) - remove NC
00:53:967 (1) - move NC on 00:53:743(3)
00:57:773 (1) - ^ on 00:57:325(3)
00:51:952 (1) - remove NC
00:55:534 (1) - ^
01:10:086 (1) - ^
01:13:892 (1) - ^
01:17:026 (1) - ^

[easy]
00:41:653 (1) - move NC on 00:41:206(3), you know why
01:01:355 (1) - move NC on 01:00:907(4)
01:17:474 (1) - move NC on 01:17:026(3)
01:19:265 (1) - move NC on 01:18:817(3)

The main problem of your map that you have violated the sequence of NC. I strongly recommend to use my recommendations, because it is very important. That's all.

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

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Yasora 2013-07-03T11:43:28+00:00

about nc, I want to have same amount of notes in a combo on certain section
btw applied some mods
thanks~

translated by someone. my bad english kkkk X''D

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-07-05T15:21:05+00:00

hi from queue.

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]At Kiai Part, i wish you can use S:C1 instead than use S:Original. if you denied can you explain why you use S:Original?

[Survive]

00:03:146 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you can make a 6-shaped star
00:06:952 (3) - NC and 00:07:176 (1) - remove, it make more clear
00:07:847 (4,5,6) - little ugly, make 6 down a bit so it's can see more curve
00:55:982 (2) - i prefer to make a straight slider at here
01:12:549 (5) - ugly, too curve.

[Hard]

00:08:407 (4) - i think for Hard is little bit hard, i suggest use two note instead than this slider
00:43:892 - why you didn't put note at here, 00:44:564 - this too. it's not fun imo :<
01:11:206 (4) - +clap

[Normal]

np

[Easy]

np, but i think this CS is too big...

Good Luck~

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-05T16:22:33+00:00

almost fixed all
thank you very much~

btw I used default clap in kiai because I feel it's more fit with vocal instead the custom o3o

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-06T15:49:26+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

* And no complaints nor suggestions for [Easy], [Normal] and [Hard].

[Survive]

00:23:967 (1,2,3,4) - why not make these notes like this? → http://puu.sh/3wpU6.jpg ← In other words: setting 00:24:191 (2) at x:320 y:36 and 00:24:638 (4) at x:300 y:120 .

Aaaaand that's it ^^

Oh man! So beauty and perfect song ! So wise choice ^^ and the Survive animation feels really awesome <3

LET'S RANK as soon as possible, my BATs

Att.

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-06T16:27:43+00:00

alright, seems interesting lol
thank you~

GIDZ

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Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2013-07-08T11:25:11+00:00

Easy:
~00:52:847 (5) - Add clap on slider tail to keep the patter.
~00:56:877 (4) - ^Same for slider head.
~Didn't find anything else.

Normal:
~00:10:758 (1,2,3,4) - Snap this with 0.8x distance spacing? Jumps too far for newbies.
~00:14:340 (1,2,3,4) - ^
~00:17:026 (2,3,4,1) - ^
~00:27:773 (2,3) - ^
~00:35:385 (2) - ^
~00:40:310 (1,2,3) - ^
~00:49:713 (3) - ^
~Everything else fine.Just my distance snapping suggestions.

Hard:
~00:56:877 (4) - Clap?
~01:07:176 (3) - ^On slider end?
~01:20:609 (1) - You could decrease the volume of this note.It's too loud for me atm, why not try 50%?

Survive:
~00:23:967 (1,2,3) - Maybe put these notes further more apart for a more fun jump.
~You could add a triplet here and distance snap it by 0.8x, cuz there's a gap.It shouldn't be that easy for insane. Suggestion --> http://puu.sh/3xN1c.jpg
~01:17:138 - Add circle for a triplet.

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-08T12:04:18+00:00

fixed some
thanks >3<~

pieguyn

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Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2013-07-09T04:46:11+00:00

hi, from my queue

[General]
01:22:400 - why kiai doesn't extend until here o.o
01:25:982 - 5% volume?

[Easy]
maybe try slidertick hitsounds on this diff to fill in all the missing claps (e.g. 00:58:668 - )

[Normal]
01:07:623 (3) - missing clap on start

[Hard]
00:32:026 (1) - add whistle

[Survive]
00:03:929 (1) - add clap like at 00:00:235 (2) -
00:31:131 (4) - add whistle on end? matches piano imo
01:02:250 (3) - try ctrl+G? here vocals are soft, so it might be better

01:03:146 (5) - clap on end to match previous pattern
01:17:698 (3) - clap on end to match previous pattern

that's it, sorry I couldn't find much ._.//
nice map and good luck ~

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-09T05:50:45+00:00

fixed some
thanks >3<~

alvinheriadi

95 posts

Joined December 2012

alvinheriadi 2013-07-27T09:43:20+00:00

Text shown in red means unrankable stuff (you must fix it)

[Normal]

00:01:579 (2) - Hapus ini, susah bagi pemula
00:03:370 (4) - ^

Maaf cuma mod kecil, karena kebanyakan mod

Cuma, kok suara orang yg nyanyi itu mirip Kagamine Len?

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-27T16:22:49+00:00

makasih mod nya~

oh ya? ga nyadar lol

new page yey

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-07-27T20:56:08+00:00

I forgot to recheck, sorry.

Bubbles, Bubbles everywhere

Alarido

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Alarido 2013-07-27T21:02:34+00:00

\^.^/ You won a bubble Yasora ^^

So so so near of glorious day ^^

Krah

osu! Alumni

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Krah 2013-07-27T21:25:42+00:00

J'ai craqué gabe :s

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-07-27T21:27:16+00:00

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-07-27T21:29:07+00:00

thanks gabe \o3o/

Breeze

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Breeze 2013-08-14T16:12:31+00:00

[Survive]

00:49:041 (6) - NC better, it's a big jump

[Normal]

00:52:847 (2) - Slider end, clap instead of whistle would be better
01:07:623 (3) - Slider head, I guess you have mistaken this clap to whistle

[Easy]

00:52:847 (5) - Reverse point, shouldn't this be a clap?
00:56:877 (4) - Slider head, ^, well, it seems you do it on purpose, nothing wrong, all depends on yourself

Call me back when you are ready

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-08-14T16:17:27+00:00

♥

Yasora

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Yasora 2013-08-15T03:20:43+00:00