Hi.
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>Easy
Good luck on the way
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>Easy
- 00:03:594 (3) - Not even a visible issue, but maybe place it exactly below 00:00:011 (1)?
- 00:20:609 - The finish is not needed, IMO; go ahead and keep the drum sampleset, but finish makes it sound unnecessarily loud.
- 01:17:026 (3,1) - Move (3) one grid up and (1) one grid right so the blanket pattern will look nicer? The spacing between 01:17:474 (1,2) will be inconsistent though, so fix them if you do this.
- ...134 BPM + 1,5 SV for a Normal is... oh well, whatever works, I guess.
- 00:17:922 (4,1) - I'm sure enough the NC here needs to be swapped...
- 00:20:385 (4) - ...and that this needs to be NC'd to follow the stanzas accordingly.
- 00:28:220 (3,1) - What's with the spacing here? Looks slightly... different from the usual ones.
- 00:29:340 (2,3) - ^
- 00:46:579 (3) - One grid up so it won't touch 00:46:131 (2)?
- 00:57:325 (3,1) - Uh, swap NC? I don't see why should you place the NC on the current (1)...
- 01:19:937 (2) - The flow here would be better if you make it look like this.
- 00:14:564 (4) - Why going for NCs every two stanzas at all sudden? I don't think there's a reason to do that here, so NC this?
- 00:17:922 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think it's obvious why.
- 00:19:713 (3) - NC?
- 00:28:444 (1) - Move the middle anchor point to (200,192) so the blanket pattern of 00:27:773 (4,1) looks better?
- 00:40:758 (4,1) - Why is the spacing 0.99x? Also, I think the flow is weird around here...
- 01:06:952 - Uh, add a clap here since you added it on a similar part in the kiai time?
- 01:10:534 - ^
- 00:03:929 (4) - Uh, NC since this is the beginning of a new rhythm pattern?
- 00:07:176 - 00:20:832 - Why are you suddenly using drums here while the previous diffs don't have them? This inconsistency just seems to have no reason...
- 00:29:340 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks random. I'd move 00:30:012 (7,1) to (344,284).
Good luck on the way