Tari wrote:

Modding diffs needed or requested, but not all.

[General]

1. 1366x768 BG size is allowed? Guess you learn something new everyday /*Yup, since widescreen support update, widescreen BGs are allowed
   
2. Your preview time doesn't seem to express the "major" part of the music, i'd rather you start it at the end of this slider : 00:55:890 (1) -
   
3. All these diffs , hmm I thought max was 8. /*Limit was removed a quite long ago.
   Everything seems fine.

[Easy]

1. 00:14:951 (2) - Slider could be improved slightly , the end point of the slider and the middle point of the slider could be moved up , this shall make it look slightly better. /*But it forms a mirror of 45° for the previous slider o3o
2. 01:18:598 (2) - Same for this one, could be slightly polished. /*This is ok
3. 00:24:067 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - To be honest, this part really lacks hitsounds. However, in this section there is actually a 2/4 clap pattern you could possibly follow , maybe try the pattern with the claps? the claps don't sound very bad in this section , they actually fit well with the music if you add them according to the 2/4 clap pattern. , this applies to other diffs as well. /*It's not lacking of hitsounds, I set the Normal sampleset for every upbeat there, I really don't find many of the default hitsounds fitting with the song and I'm not good finding custom ones :c
4. 00:43:293 (2) - You missed a whistle to the start of this slider I believe. /*You're right, done
5. 00:43:956 (3) - If you do the above, you should do this also for consistency in hitsounds. /*Ok
6. 00:45:282 (1,2) - Also add a whistle to both these sliders end too please , you added whistles in this section, but you neglected to add them here so it's a bit strange. /*Ok
7. 01:11:802 (2,3) - Try to add some variety in slider shape , especially in easy (where you have room to make really nice sliders) Here something you should try but not limited to : http://puu.sh/2CHn2.jpg /*I want to keep my sliders, make a nice pattern with 01:14:454 (1).
8. 00:05:503 (3) - Well, this rhythm is pretty inaccurate , or in-intuitive to this rhythm: 00:58:542 (4) - its not very similar to this , which I found little off , but for this sldier, you were pretty consistent with it in the kiai , so I don't think it'll be a big issue , but I just want to point it out. /*Yeah, it's almost the same rhythm, but I used different to make it the more suitable to the respective part
9. 00:15:780 (3) - Whistle here sounds nice at least for me. /*I don't like how it sounds, explained a bit above
10. 01:19:427 (3) - Yup,~ add here for consistency with hitsounds. /*As above
11. 00:16:111 (1) - Make the two red slider points in this slider line up please. /*That's on purpose :c

[Normal]

1. 00:07:492 (1,2) - You need to add whistles here , like you did in the easy diff you should also do it here. /*I didn't do in Easy that, I feel the guitar too heavy to add whistles.
2. 00:15:780 (3) - Whistle here sounds nice, like in easy diff~ /*Explained in Easy
3. 01:19:427 (3) - Same as above ^ /*As above
4. I think in normal, there shouldn't be so many 1/2 pauses or breaks in the map, try to use most of the white ticks as possible , generally , normal diffs are suppose to be like that and with a drop of 1/4th rhythms. /*o3o
5. 00:28:045 - If you gave the top advice one some thought , then I suggest adding a note here . /*I like to give players a bit of breath here as it's still calm.
6. 00:30:697 - ^ Same for here /*^
7. 00:32:354 (3) - Whistle to the slider end sounds nice to me , oh and also here , more fun rhythm can be used here , it also seems to play better to me if you do this : http://puu.sh/2CIfG.jpg /*Ok, but I don't like how whistle sound
8. 00:54:730 (4) - Suggest you make this curved, the slider path of this touches the other looks making overlapping bad , and no need for image on this , just curve it more so it at least doesn't touch. /*Ok
9. 01:05:669 (6) - Double click fits better , so two circle for this please? /*Plays better as a slider for me, but I'll see what people says here.
10. 01:27:050 (1) - For this last part , try something that has slightly more clicking than easy , so that this diff feels slightly harder , anything can work (3 circles or slider with circle) one of those two. /*Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:27:216 (3) - Don't stack this note please , putting it to the top right of this slider , feels generally better in gameplay. /*Ok
2. 00:47:934 (1) - Pretty bad jump , not very predictable and placement around this section is pretty messy , In this pattern and previous pattern try make slightly better placement please and remove jump also >3< /*I really don't know why I put a jump there, thanks.
3. 00:59:537 (2,3) - Slider fits better , there quite irregular amount of stacking before and I think a slight reduction won't hurt. /*Not slider, but unstacked
4. 01:10:144 (2,3) - Same as above. /*As above
5. 01:05:669 (6) - This whole pattern , after a long slider you put a note on top of the slider end , This note kinda ruins pattern in a way , because its not doing that. Try to do this : http://puu.sh/2CJJf.jpg /*Oops, done
6. 01:09:150 (1) - Add finish to start please~ /*Done
7. 00:58:542 (1) - Same as above ^ , for consistency. /*Done

[Dekaane]

1. 00:47:934 (1,2,3,4) - Make it pentagon shape , like this http://puu.sh/2CKbZ.jpg /*Liked the idea, but fixed in my own way
2. 01:18:929 (5,6,7,8,9) - Spread this triangle a bit farther , there really close together :< like this : http://puu.sh/2CKhQ.jpg /*Actually is a pentagon shape with 1 missing point (not in the music, just in the pattern)
3. 01:09:150 (1) - Missed finish here I believe. /*Added
4. 00:59:868 (1,2,3,4) - Surely , these two must be the same 01:10:476 (1,2,3,1) - , but right now , they are clearly not . there new combo in note 1 and no whistle there either :< /*Due to vocals in the last one, both are different
5. 00:08:818 - There seem's to be a important beat missing here , maybe you should add a note here? :3 /*Maybe, but I'm following just vocals there and sounds a bit weird to me :c
6. 00:16:111 (1,2) - This part could of been more fun!!! Here something you can do to make it more fun if you want : http://puu.sh/2CKwi.jpg , http://puu.sh/2CKxr.jpg Solid diff , /*It'd be overmapping as there's nothing in the music 00:16:774 and 00:17:437, and I'm really against overmapping

Done~
The map is fine , but I'm concerened about all these diffs.

Good luck!

1. 00:00:000 - Add some Audio lead in.
2. 00:00:200 (1,2) - Snap together
3. 00:35:172 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Pattern doesn't fit the audio - confusing
4. 00:42:962 (2,3) - Snap together
5. 00:51:249 (4,5) - Space these apart
6. 00:55:890 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:56:553 (3,4) - ^
8. 00:57:216 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:58:542 (1) - Out of place
10. 00:59:537 (1,2,1) - Confusing, I would change positions to make the rhythm more obvious.
11. 01:03:846 (1,3) - Snap together
12. 01:04:177 (2,4) - ^
13. 01:06:498 (1,2) - Space these apart
14. 01:07:161 (3,4) - ^
15. 01:07:824 (1,2) - ^
16. 01:08:487 (3,4) - ^
17. 01:09:150 (1) - If you're going to copy paste sections, at least flip them. This is also out of place.
18. 01:10:476 (2,3,4,5,6) - Distance? Maybe a pentagon shape (paste, rotate 72, repeat, rearrange)
19. 01:11:470 (1,2) - Flip vertical for better flow
20. 01:19:757 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2) - Flip selection. Map feels extremely repetitive like this.

1. 00:23:072 (1,2) - Space these apart
2. 00:32:603 - Missing note here
3. 00:33:514 (1) - Slider end volume should be low imo
4. 01:22:409 - why kiai?
5. This difficulty will take some time for players to play because they have to learn the timing and pay attention to approach circles to get the timing right. not sure about that.

1. Why two "normal"? One is usually enough. What is the problem?
2. 00:40:973 (3) - Move it 2 or 3 grid up. (i don't want them aligned but i don't like their position right now) nope o3o
3. 00:42:630 (1) - Note parallel with the previous slider. Move the end point one grid right. no change this is parallel
4. 00:43:625 (3) - Do the same change but mirrored. ^
5. 01:27:050 (1) - I would say finish on the three notes. nope sounds bad imo

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: CHOIR JAIL (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 24067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:CHOIR JAIL (TV Size)
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:DakeDekaane
Version:Gero's Normal
Source:Tasogare Otome x Amnesia
Tags:opening op Dusk Maiden of ReySHeL Gero ShiauKe Irreversible pkhg
BeatmapID:226826
BeatmapSetID:80650

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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