1. Extra (5.22 stars, 737 notes)
2. Hard (3.01 stars, 489 notes)
3. H'z Normal (2.32 stars, 340 notes)
4. Laurier's Insane (4.97 stars, 856 notes)
5. TK'S Muzukashii (3.14 stars, 887 notes)
6. TK'S Oni (4.22 stars, 1212 notes)
7. ts8zs' Easy (1.61 stars, 218 notes)

[TimingPoints]
233,545.454545454546,4,2,0,58,1,0
15233,615.384615384615,7,2,0,58,1,0
19540,307.692307692308,4,2,0,68,1,0
19616,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,60,0,0
29540,-76.9230769230769,4,1,0,70,0,0
71232,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,90,0,1
90770,-76.9230769230769,4,1,0,70,0,0
132770,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
152463,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
172155,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
194155,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0

Azmato wrote:

[Genaral]
보컬이랑 노트와 매치가 자연스럽지 못함... 어느정도는 보컬에 따라줘야 될듯함

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:00:219 (1,3,4) - 둥근 슬라이더
00:12:218 (6) - ^
00:13:309 (1,2,3,4) - 초반부터 점프는 ㄴㄴ
00:19:455 (1,2,3) - 힛사를 살려내는걸 추천
00:24:223 노트추가
00:28:762 (1,2) - 3 이랑 겹치지 말고 띄우는걸 추천 (http://puu.sh/3DgsC.jpg 이런식으로)
01:19:703 (3) - 꺾이는 점을 슬라시작점이랑 더 가깝게
01:48:165 (1,2,3,4) - 이전 노트배치랑 비슷하게 (비슷한 타이밍에서 비슷한 노트가 나와야 안헷갈릴듯)
01:55:088 (4,5,6) - 6을 좀더 아래 배치하거나 이 3개 모양을 역삼각형으로 만드는게 좋을듯
01:59:550 , 01:59:857 힛사를 죽이는게 좋을듯
02:21:242 (7) - 슬라 모양을 02:20:011 (4) 이거랑 비슷하게
02:26:165 (3) - 위에꺼랑 비슷하거나 완전히 둥근걸 추천
02:32:780 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 클랩
02:36:473 (3,4) , 02:37:088 (6,1) , 02:37:703 (1) , 02:38:319 (3) , 02:38:934 (3,4,7,8,3,4,7,8) - 클랩
02:54:319 (5) - 간격
03:05:396 (8) - 7 왼쪽보다는 아래쪽이 좋을듯
03:07:242 (4,1) - 둘이 간격을 좀더 떨어뜨리는게 좋을듯 안그럼 헷갈림
03:17:088 (4) - 삭제후 3에서 리버스 하는걸 추천
03:23:396 (1) - nc삭제

toloveruu wrote:

From my queue.
I may have missed some things as I was half asleep doing this >.<

~ General ~
The default combo colors are boring. Try to at least use something like this:

SPOILER

Fun map :3

~ Insane ~
Reduce the amount of streams at the beginning of the song. Very overmapped there.
01:04:165 (6) - Stack with 01:03:550 (2). fixed
01:05:857 (7) - ^ fixed
01:30:011 (4) - Move to x:412 y:192. fixed
01:30:165 (5) - Move to x:300 y:272. fixed
01:30:319 (6) - Stack with the end of 01:29:703 (3). fixed
01:30:473 (7) - Move to x:384 y:272. fixed
01:30:626 (8, 9) - Move to x:272 y:192. fixed
01:44:934 (6, 9) - Try to stack with 01:43:550 (7). fixed
01:54:626 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6) - Delete these, go to 'Compose' and click Create Polygon Circles. Distance snap: 2.0x, Offset angle: 145 degrees, Repeat: 1, Points: 5. Then move that to x:128 y:146. You'll have to fix the timing yourself at the top though. For (6) add a circle where (4) is. <Thanks~
01:56:165 (3) - Not perfectly stacked. fixed
01:58:319 (1) - Move to x:312 y:272. fIXED
01:58:473 (2) - Move to x:156 y:164. fIXED
01:58:626 (3) - Move to x:356 y:164. fIXED
01:58:780 (4) - Move to x:200 y:272. fIXED
01:58:934 (5) - Move to x:260 y:80. fIXED
01:59:088 (6) - Stack with 01:58:319 (1). fIXED
02:03:242 (2) - Stack with 02:02:319 (3). fIXED
03:24:626 (3) - Move to x:220 y:196. fIXED
03:24:934 (5) - Move to x:140 y:204. fIXED
03:25:088 (6) - Move to x:232 y:120. fIXED
03:25:242 (7) - move to x:104 y:136.

Saten wrote:

1st offset 233 (110bpm)

2nd offset 15233 (97,50bpm)

3rd offset 19540 (195bpm)


Or you can replace the current timing with this below (with snapped green lines as well)

[TimingPoints]
233,545.454545454546,4,2,0,58,1,0
15233,615.384615384615,7,2,0,58,1,0
19540,307.692307692308,4,2,0,68,1,0
19616,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,60,0,0
29540,-76.9230769230769,4,1,0,70,0,0
71232,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,90,0,1
90770,-76.9230769230769,4,1,0,70,0,0
132770,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
152463,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0
172155,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,1
194155,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,100,0,0

just open the .osu in notepad and replace the previous one with this.

Don't forget to resnap all the objects


I also removed the audio track from the video to save some file space
http://puu.sh/3CX4K/0fc8a7c384.flv


Good luck with this!

MineC24 wrote:

PM request~

All Diffs (timing)

Saten이 한 오프셋 조절에서 실수를 한듯...
일단 사텐이 말한대로 00:15:233 에다가 BPM 97.5의 빨간 타이밍선 만들고,

00:19:455 의 194.98 짜리 빨간 타이밍을 지우고,

또 하나 00:19:608에 194.98 짜리 빨간 타이밍에서
BPM을 195.00 으로 설정하고, 오프셋을 19540 으로 해주세요...

(사텐이 글 써준 타이밍 코드로 그냥 대입하는 방법도 있어요.
.osu 파일을 메모장으로 열고, TimingPoints 라는 항목을 사텐이 써준 숫자 코드로 바꾸면 되요)

이건 노래의 싱크과 직결되는거니 꼭 수정하시길...

(수정 하고나서, Resnap All notes 를 눌러주면 거의 다 해결되요. 리스냅 올 노트를 하기 전에는 Beat Snap divisor을 1/4로 꼭 해야해요)
(리스냅 올 노트를 해도 몇몇개는 안될수도 있으니, 하고나서 간단히 둘러보면서 체크하시길...)

Normal

AR - 1 (노말치고는 높은 느낌...)

00:22:916 (6) - 전에 나오는 슬라에 겹치네요...

Insane

00:13:323 (1,2,3,4) - 모양이 약간 부자연스러운...
00:23:531 (1,2,3) - 이건 1/4 슬라에 리버스를 더하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:01:088 (7) - Ctrl + G 하는게 더 좋아보여요
01:03:088 (8) - ^ (패턴의 반복에서 한구간을 바꿔놓으면 재미있을듯 ㅋㅋ)
01:10:780 (1) - 조금 전에 나오는 노트랑 겹쳐서 보기에 안좋은듯...
01:58:473 (2) - x:160 y:164, 01:58:934 (5) - x:260 y;88 로 (이러면 더 별모양이 살아나요)
02:38:780 (2) - 전에 나오는 슬라이더에 가려져요...
02:54:011 (3,4,5) - 부자연스러워요..
03:34:319 (8) - 마지막 노트답게 뉴콤보설정 + Finish 사운드 추가

에딧상에서의 노트과 노트간의 겹침 패턴이 많은데요, (스택말고 에딧으로 노트를 찍고 조금 후에 나오는 잔상같은거에 애매하게 노트가 겹치는것)
이걸 몇몇 매퍼들은 지적할지도 몰라요... 어느정도 고치는 것을 추천해요

[Navy] wrote:

Thanks.. How to removed the audio track from the video? I have better video..(480p)

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Harez wrote:

your timing isn't correct yet, so i can't do full M4M for you now

here's the correct timing, fix it first~

1. In the normal, you should follow distance snap as a general rule.
   Because there are a lot of points where i do not follow, you should fix it.
   
   Points

   1. 00:20:453 (2,3)

   1. 00:24:453 (2,1)

   1. 00:26:299 (3,4,5)

   1. 00:49:069 (1,2)

   1. 01:01:378 (1,2)

   1. 01:14:455 (3,4)

   1. 01:16:148 (1,2)

   1. 01:19:686 (1,2)

   1. 01:27:687 (4,1)

   1. 02:10:766 (2,1)

   1. 02:15:997 (3,4)

   1. 02:17:689 (1,2)

   1. 02:32:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2)

   1. 02:43:537 (5,1)

   1. 02:53:999 (4,1)

   1. 02:56:768 (6,1)

   1. 03:19:539 (3,4)

   1. 03:25:385 (4,5)

   1. 03:27:231 (2,1)

   There may be the place that i miss elsewhere.Please check it well.

1. In the normal, you shouldn't overlap sliders, slider-circle as a general rule.(Other than a timing is early)
   Because there are a lot of points where i do not follow, you should fix it.
   
   
   Points

   1. 00:20:453 (2)

   1. 00:21:837 (5,6,1)

   1. 00:43:531 (1,2)

   1. 00:52:762 (3,5)

   1. 01:16:917 (2)

   1. 01:19:686 (1)

   1. 01:29:687 (3,5)

   • 01:51:842 (3,5)

   1. 02:18:459 (2,3)

   1. 02:31:229 (3,5,6)

   1. 03:03:846 (4,2)

   1. 03:13:077 (4,6)

   1. 03:16:769 (3,4)

   1. 03:28:770 (2,3)

1. 00:28:222 (1) - Make the end of the spin 00:29:315

1. 01:57:150 (4) - move at 01:57:546

1. 02:32:767 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 2-3 4-1 are same timing. but distance are quite different.A player is at a loss in this.

• 1. if you aren't finish this beatmap yet, please move it to Work in Progress
     
     
  2. seems you aren't using soft-hitclap.wav here, delete it pls
     
     
  3. use this BG, pls http://puu.sh/3IFVu.jpg *Right Click, Save As...*
     
     
  4. Disable countdown, it's bugged
     
     
  5. Add 2 seconds to Audio Lead-in pls
     
     
  6. Preview Time isn't snapped well, it must be in 01:10:776
  [Insane]
  • 1. why using 1.4 Slider Velocity and 1.2x - 1.5x multiplier?
       
       
    2. 00:00:230 (1) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail
       
       
    3. 00:01:320 (2) - remove whistle on tail, add whistle on repeat
       
       
    4. 00:02:957 (4) - remove whistle on tail, add whistle on head
       
       
    5. 00:04:048 (5) - remove this note, this note isn't necessary
       
       
    6. 00:04:593 (1) - add whistle on tail
       
       
    7. 00:05:684 (2) - ^
       
       
    8. 00:06:775 (3,4) - add whistle
       
       
    9. 00:09:502 (1,2) - ^
       
       
    10. 00:10:048 (3) - add whistle on head, repeat, and tail
        
        
    11. 00:10:866 (4) - add whistle on head
        
        
    12. 00:12:230 (5) - add whistle on head and tail
        
        
    13. 00:13:320 (1,3,4) - add whistle
        
        
    14. 00:15:366 (1) - i suggest you to silence this spinner
        
        
    15. 00:19:393 - add note to fit the drums
        
        
    16. From 00:19:546 (2) - to end, try hitsounding like this
        SPOILER

        
        
        
    17. 00:24:315 (1) - remove New Combo
        
        
    18. 00:24:469 (9) - *New Combo here
        
        
    19. 00:28:776 (1,2,3) - try like this?
        SPOILER

        
        
        
    20. 00:38:930 (1) - how about stack it with (2)
        
        
    21. 00:40:469 (9) - New Combo
        
        
    22. 00:40:776 (1) - *Remove New Combo
        
        
    23. 00:41:699 (7) - New Combo
        
        
    24. 00:42:007 (1) - *Remove New Combo
        
        
    25. Also.. try to New Combo-ing note every downbeat, it's make diff more tidy
        
        
    26. 02:52:161 - move green tick to 02:53:238 (1) - to fit with the songs
    Tips:
    You can stack notes if you try to make an anti-jump instead of make it same distance as normal jump
    
    Note:
    Because Normal and Hard doesn't finish yet, so i can't mod it well D:
    
    There has so many random jump and anti-jump in Insane diff :/
    
    You can poke me in-game if you want to ask some question about my mods xD
    
    Good luck, here's a star for you /o/

TKSalt wrote:

hi~
can i make taiko 2diffs? (Oni/Muzu

Harez wrote:

okay i'm ready

[General]

• 1. if you aren't finish this beatmap yet, please move it to Work in Progress
     
     
  2. seems you aren't using soft-hitclap.wav here, delete it pls
     
     
  3. use this BG, pls http://puu.sh/3IFVu.jpg *Right Click, Save As...*
     
     
  4. Disable countdown, it's bugged
     
     
  5. Add 2 seconds to Audio Lead-in pls
     
     
  6. Preview Time isn't snapped well, it must be in 01:10:776
  [Insane]
  • 1. why using 1.4 Slider Velocity and 1.2x - 1.5x multiplier? difficult to change.. how to?
       
       
    2. 00:00:230 (1) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail
       
       
    3. 00:01:320 (2) - remove whistle on tail, add whistle on repeat
       
       
    4. 00:02:957 (4) - remove whistle on tail, add whistle on head
       
       
    5. 00:04:048 (5) - remove this note, this note isn't necessary
       
       
    6. 00:04:593 (1) - add whistle on tail
       
       
    7. 00:05:684 (2) - ^
       
       
    8. 00:06:775 (3,4) - add whistle
       
       
    9. 00:09:502 (1,2) - ^
       
       
    10. 00:10:048 (3) - add whistle on head, repeat, and tail
        
        
    11. 00:10:866 (4) - add whistle on head
        
        
    12. 00:12:230 (5) - add whistle on head and tail
        
        
    13. 00:13:320 (1,3,4) - add whistle
        
        
    14. 00:15:366 (1) - i suggest you to silence this spinner
        
        
    15. 00:19:393 - add note to fit the drums
        
        
    16. From 00:19:546 (2) - to end, try hitsounding like this
        SPOILER

        
        
        
    17. 00:24:315 (1) - remove New Combo
        
        
    18. 00:24:469 (9) - *New Combo here
        
        
    19. 00:28:776 (1,2,3) - try like this?
        SPOILER

        
        
        
    20. 00:38:930 (1) - how about stack it with (2)
        
        
    21. 00:40:469 (9) - New Combo
        
        
    22. 00:40:776 (1) - *Remove New Combo
        
        
    23. 00:41:699 (7) - New Combo
        
        
    24. 00:42:007 (1) - *Remove New Combo
        
        
    25. Also.. try to New Combo-ing note every downbeat, it's make diff more tidy
        
        
    26. 02:52:161 - move green tick to 02:53:238 (1) - to fit with the songs
    Tips:
    You can stack notes if you try to make an anti-jump instead of make it same distance as normal jump
    
    Note:
    Because Normal and Hard doesn't finish yet, so i can't mod it well D:
    
    There has so many random jump and anti-jump in Insane diff :/
    
    You can poke me in-game if you want to ask some question about my mods xD
    
    Good luck, here's a star for you /o/

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

모딩 왔어어~ >ㅅ<

인세인

01:12:315 (5) - 모양 어색

00:29:084 (3) - 여기에 피니시 추가

00:39:238 (2) - 살짝만 더 뻗어줬으면 ..

00:49:699 (3) - 조금만 더 휘어지게 !

00:50:930 (2) - 모양 어색

00:55:853 (4) - 이건 약간 직선으로 뻗는 모양으로 바꿔줬으면 ..

01:01:084 (5) - 이것도 조금 더 휘어지게 !

01:04:469 (4) - ''

01:42:315 (2) - ''

01:55:238 (2) - Ctrl + G

02:14:930 (4) - 직선으로 뻗는 모양

02:22:622 (1) - ''

배치는 내가 흠잡을덴 없는거 같고 'ㅅ' ...
수고해 !

Chronotakular wrote:

Hello there!

[Normal]

02:22:622 (1) - I would move this away from the note before it. The current spacing implies the note occurs before it does. After a few playthroughs, I can say it's actually not that bad. You should still consider it though.
02:32:776 (2,4,2) - Hmm. Should these notes be stacked? They aren't hard to hit or misleading or anything. I just think it would be easier to hit, and look nicer, though it's not a big deal.
03:28:776 (2) - I would move this a little up and to the left, it would be a lot easier to hit that way.

[TK's Muzukashii]

I had no problem with hitting any of the notes in this song. Seems to be on a very clear beat.

[Hard]

01:06:930 (1,3,5) - I would move these farther apart, from their previous note. After 2 or 3 plays, I would hit these early every time. {Still true after 5/6 plays}
01:31:238 (3) - This note is probably okay, I would just move it farther away. Near the top-left corner.
01:55:392 (7) - This is hard to read. I would move it off the previous slider just a tad, to make it more obvious the note is there.
02:21:699 (6,7,8,9) - Consider moving these around a bit. I had trouble seeing them even after a few plays.

[TK's Oni]

Well, the parts I could keep up with were good.

[Insane]

01:03:084 (3) - Hard to read because of the speed. Consider making it like the two before it. Never mind. It's okay.
02:40:622 (5) - This note is throwing me off, even after a few playthroughs. Maybe I just suck? {Still hard for me to hit after 5 or 6 playthroughs}
03:23:853 (3) - Erm. I'm not too sure why this note is here. It doesn't seem to match the song very well. Maybe moving it forward or backwards will help? Oh, it's mapped to a lyric. Once I got that down, I could hit it everytime. Okay. It's good then.
03:31:699 (4,5,6) - I'd move this combo a little bit further away from 1,2, and 3. I keep hitting it early. {Yeah, I still keep hitting it early.}


Hope I helped somehow! Sorry, I suck at modding Taiko. D: Good luck!

Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/3T9sB.osu
my diff

1. There are unsnapped notes in Easy diff.
2. Always use a constant distance snap in low diffs (Easy/Normal)

1. I'll repeat, Always use a constant distance for each note in the diff, It's really important when you map this kind of diff!~
2. AR is too high! one tick less please :3
3. The rhythm is inconsistent :<
4. 00:08:411 (4) - make it more blanket with 00:09:502 (1) - .
5. 00:23:084 (6) - New combo because downbeat.
6. 00:44:161 (1,2) - make (1) blanket with (2) http://puu.sh/3XmC3.png .
7. 00:46:622 (1) - fix distance.
8. 00:48:469 (2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:49:699 (1) - new combo
10. 00:54:007 (4) - move to 152|244 and new combo.
11. 00:58:930 (1,2,3,4) - fix distance >.<
12. 01:01:392 (5) - unsnapped note! | 01:02:776 (6) - make it blanket with (5).
13. 01:21:084 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~ >w<
14. 02:11:392 (4) - ^
15. 02:15:238 (1) - repeat section is unsnapped~
16. 02:17:699 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~
17. 02:20:776 (4) - ^
18. 02:28:161 (1) - unsnapped note

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary).
2. Use distance snap owo
3. expected difficulty
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of dif.
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie.
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

1. 00:34:161 (103) - k

1. Nothing!

1. I'll just give it a fast look with important issues. I think this diff is good in aspect like rhythm but beauty of the diff have to improve more. (it's good but those sliders urrrg)
2. 01:02:469 (4) - Remove this slider and change it for circles~ you miss notes like 01:02:776 -
3. 01:08:469 (4,5) - weird flow
4. 01:28:776 (6) - unnecessary. Remove or change it.
5. 02:01:699 (1) - (1) is touching 02:01:084 (6) - and looks ugly for me, move it a bit and it will look better.
6. 03:13:084 (1) - Ugly slider ;w;

1. Nothing else to say, very good mapped and everything. I've played this in Standard mode and I think this is a funny diff~

-Cloudchaser wrote:

M4M request from my queue~

General

1. There are unsnapped notes in Easy diff.
2. Always use a constant distance snap in low diffs (Easy/Normal)

Easy

1. I'll repeat, Always use a constant distance for each note in the diff, It's really important when you map this kind of diff!~
2. AR is too high! one tick less please :3
3. The rhythm is inconsistent :<
4. 00:08:411 (4) - make it more blanket with 00:09:502 (1) - .- fixed!
5. 00:23:084 (6) - New combo because downbeat.- fixed!
6. 00:44:161 (1,2) - make (1) blanket with (2) http://puu.sh/3XmC3.png .- fixed!
7. 00:46:622 (1) - fix distance.- fixed!
8. 00:48:469 (2,3,4) - ^- fixed!
9. 00:49:699 (1) - new combo- fixed!
10. 00:54:007 (4) - move to 152|244 and new combo.- fixed!
11. 00:58:930 (1,2,3,4) - fix distance >.<- fixed!
12. 01:01:392 (5) - unsnapped note! | 01:02:776 (6) - make it blanket with (5).- fixed!
13. 01:21:084 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~ >w<- fixed!
14. 02:11:392 (4) - ^- fixed!
15. 02:15:238 (1) - repeat section is unsnapped~- fixed!
16. 02:17:699 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~- fixed!
17. 02:20:776 (4) - ^- fixed!
18. 02:28:161 (1) - unsnapped note

- fixed!

H's Normal

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary).
2. Use distance snap owo
3. expected difficulty
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of dif.
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie.
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

- WIP So postpone
TK's Muzukashii/Oni

both diffs are good enough at least for me :3

Muzukashii:

1. 00:34:161 (103) - k

[/color]- fixed!

Oni:

1. Nothing!

Hard

1. I'll just give it a fast look with important issues. I think this diff is good in aspect like rhythm but beauty of the diff have to improve more. (it's good but those sliders urrrg)
2. 01:02:469 (4) - Remove this slider and change it for circles~ you miss notes like 01:02:776 -
3. 01:08:469 (4,5) - weird flow
4. 01:28:776 (6) - unnecessary. Remove or change it.
5. 02:01:699 (1) - (1) is touching 02:01:084 (6) - and looks ugly for me, move it a bit and it will look better.
6. 03:13:084 (1) - Ugly slider ;w;

all fixed!
Laurier's Insane

1. Nothing else to say, very good mapped and everything. I've played this in Standard mode and I think this is a funny diff~

Go go go! I hope see this ranked a day owo good luck

Megurine Luka wrote:

LOL this is not called M4M it's called Jin 4 Jin

Just kidding lol

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine.
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag

[E]

1. Firstly please open your Aimod and enable the “check the distance snap” on the top. Fix all the distance problem according to this. The reason is Easy/Normal often need strictly follow the distance snap in order to help new babies to play osu! in a better way.
2. 01:48:160 (1) - unsnap
3. 01:51:237 (4) - ^
4. 00:05:684 (2) - Try x=320 y=168
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:08:411 (4) - end at 00:08:684 fits better imo
6. 00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - make a diamond shape?
7. 00:25:084 (2) - why change to soft hitsound? The changing is too sudden imo, There is no indication from the music so I don't understand this change 0.0
8. 00:28:161 (1) - This spinner is kinda short. Not a big deal but I think it could be a little bit hard for new players. So better change it into sliders.
9. 00:43:546 (3) - Try x=176 y=280, also adjust 00:42:315 (2) - a bit.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:45:392 (2) - x=32 y=276 looks better imo
11. 00:54:007 (7) - maybe try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:00:776 (4) - spacing
13. 01:01:392 (5) - I think this fits better:
    
14. 01:05:699 (4) - Try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:08:776 (3) - you can copy and paste 01:07:546 (2) - and then ctrl+j and ctrl+h then move to this position.
16. 01:21:084 (1) - Try this
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:23:546 (3) - spacing
    
18. Basically I don't mod a map which copy and paste then ctrl+j and ctrl+h... but you're a new mapper so I would not say anything about it. Just fix what I mentioned above will be ok.
    Next time please don't copy and paste.

[N]

1. You said ignore this diff first, so I will skip it.

[H]

1. 00:02:957 (4) - curve down would be better?
2. 00:07:866 (5) - try x=150 y=248 for a better triangle
3. 00:39:853 (3) - use the same slider as 00:39:238 (2) -
4. 00:40:469 (5) - curve up?
5. 00:42:315 (3) - encircle better
6. 00:42:776 (4) - ctrl+g would be better?
7. 01:12:776 (4) - try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:14:469 (3) - use straight slider like 01:14:007 (2) -
9. 01:15:238 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:18:469 (1) - stack perfectly
11. 01:19:699 (5) - ctrl+g and encircle better
12. 01:22:930 (7) - use the same slider as 01:22:161 (5) -
13. 01:30:622 (3) - del one turn
14. 02:02:776 (4) - x=280 y=144
15. 02:12:315 (7) - x=184 y=208
16. 02:21:238 (4) -
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:16:776 (6,7) - make them parallel?
18. 03:20:776 (6) - x=244 y=104

[I]

1. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
2. 02:19:238 (2) - stack better?
3. 02:24:776 (4) - curve up would be better/
4. 02:38:622 (1) - ctrl+g
5. 02:53:238 (9) - add fin here and del the fin on 02:53:392 (1) - 's head
6. 02:54:315 (4) - could add a fin on this head if you do ^

Done~
Good Luck!

TKSalt wrote:

@[Navy]
this taiko diffs is my diffs.
why do you change?
please don't change taiko diffs.....

if you don't know how to handle guest diffs,
i think should not recruit a guest.


@-Cloudchaser
thanks for modding!

Link

-Cloudchaser wrote:

H's Normal >w> it's H'z

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary). :< i always use 1/2 patterns, except for 01:50:007 (1,2) - because it's fit perfectly
2. Use distance snap owo 1/1 has 1.0, some note in kiai has 1.1 ~ 1.2, 1/2 has 0.8, so i think it's fine
3. expected difficulty done
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped hmm, it's all snapped correctly, i use 1/16 snapping for kiai flash
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of diff. hehe
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie. it's not stacked
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine. i leave this to Navy
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag ^

Megurine Luka wrote:

LOL this is not called M4M it's called Jin 4 Jin

Just kidding lol

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine. -fixed!
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag

[E]

1. Firstly please open your Aimod and enable the “check the distance snap” on the top. Fix all the distance problem according to this. The reason is Easy/Normal often need strictly follow the distance snap in order to help new babies to play osu! in a better way. try my best..
2. 01:48:160 (1) - unsnap -fixed!
3. 01:51:237 (4) - ^-fixed!
4. 00:05:684 (2) - Try x=320 y=168-fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:08:411 (4) - end at 00:08:684 fits better imo-fixed!
6. 00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - make a diamond shape?-fixed!
7. 00:25:084 (2) - why change to soft hitsound? The changing is too sudden imo, There is no indication from the music so I don't understand this change 0.0-fixed! I don't know,either. hehe
8. 00:28:161 (1) - This spinner is kinda short. Not a big deal but I think it could be a little bit hard for new players. So better change it into sliders.-fixed!
9. 00:43:546 (3) - Try x=176 y=280, also adjust 00:42:315 (2) - a bit.-fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:45:392 (2) - x=32 y=276 looks better imo-fixed!
11. 00:54:007 (7) - maybe try this:-fixed!
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:00:776 (4) - spacing-fixed!
13. 01:01:392 (5) - I think this fits better:-fixed!
    
14. 01:05:699 (4) - Try this:-fixed!
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:08:776 (3) - you can copy and paste 01:07:546 (2) - and then ctrl+j and ctrl+h then move to this position.-fixed!
16. 01:21:084 (1) - Try this
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:23:546 (3) - spacing-fixed!
    
18. Basically I don't mod a map which copy and paste then ctrl+j and ctrl+h... but you're a new mapper so I would not say anything about it. Just fix what I mentioned above will be ok.
    Next time please don't copy and paste.

[N]

1. You said ignore this diff first, so I will skip it.

[H]

1. 00:02:957 (4) - curve down would be better?
2. 00:07:866 (5) - try x=150 y=248 for a better triangle
3. 00:39:853 (3) - use the same slider as 00:39:238 (2) -
4. 00:40:469 (5) - curve up?
5. 00:42:315 (3) - encircle better
6. 00:42:776 (4) - ctrl+g would be better?
7. 01:12:776 (4) - try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:14:469 (3) - use straight slider like 01:14:007 (2) -
9. 01:15:238 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:18:469 (1) - stack perfectly
11. 01:19:699 (5) - ctrl+g and encircle better
12. 01:22:930 (7) - use the same slider as 01:22:161 (5) -
13. 01:30:622 (3) - del one turn
14. 02:02:776 (4) - x=280 y=144
15. 02:12:315 (7) - x=184 y=208
16. 02:21:238 (4) -
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:16:776 (6,7) - make them parallel?
18. 03:20:776 (6) - x=244 y=104

all fixed!

[I]

1. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
2. 02:19:238 (2) - stack better?
3. 02:24:776 (4) - curve up would be better/
4. 02:38:622 (1) - ctrl+g
5. 02:53:238 (9) - add fin here and del the fin on 02:53:392 (1) - 's head
6. 02:54:315 (4) - could add a fin on this head if you do ^

by Laurier
I don't do anything.


Done~
Good Luck!

litoluna wrote:

yuikonnu<3

fight~star~*

Quilt wrote:

Hz's Normal it's H'z, not Hz's ;3;

SPOILER

00:56:007 (6,7,8) - i think this point shoud put 1/2 reverse slider.so i think this map need more rest point. these notes is hard a little for newbie player done

02:02:930 (1,2) - here is really overlap should move these slidersno idea what i've done here... orz

Quilt wrote:

m4m

Easy

SPOILER

00:40:469 (3) - i think 2/1 slider fit song fixed

00:42:315 (2,3) - delete (3) then (2) strech 1/2 fixed

00:44:161 (1,2) - (1) strech 1/2 then delete (2) and add 1/2 slider on 00:46:007 fixed

00:46:622 (1) - i think it should devive into two. so put 3/2 slider on 00:46:622 and 00:47:546. i think 3 more reverce slider make confuse to newbie player fixed

01:42:007 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? fixed

01:43:853 (2,3) - same as 00:42:315 (2,3) - fixed

01:46:930 (2) - delete it then add note on 01:46:930 and add 2/1 slider on 01:47:238 fixed

02:14:622 (4) - this slider should move like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920535 fixed

02:25:084 (1) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920538 fixed

02:48:315 (1,2) - move 1/2 later

fixed

Hz's Normal

SPOILER

00:56:007 (6,7,8) - i think this point shoud put 1/2 reverse slider.so i think this map need more rest point. these notes is hard a little for newbie player

02:02:930 (1,2) - here is really overlap should move these sliders

Hard

SPOILER

i point out only 1 things on this map
this map should conside "flow" if you have more importance "flow", this map is better xD

I'll try my best

Laurier Insane

SPOILER

なにもいうことがないですlol

that's all
plz send me chat if you have a question.

1. 00:42:315 (2,1) - avoid overlap
2. 00:48:469 (3,1) - ^
3. 01:09:853 (1,1) - For Easy-diff it's too difficult because of short time from spinner-end to next slider-start
4. 02:28:161 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap
5. 02:58:161 (2,1) - ^

1. 00:23:546 (3,1) - stack correctly
2. 00:48:007 (4,6) - For Normal, this overlap on the start of 00:48:776 (6) - is too difficult
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - it's less visible because of too closely-spaced notes
4. 02:30:007 (1,2,3) - it is better to avoid this overlap
5. 02:49:853 (1,2,3) - move to the time after 00:00:154

1. 00:10:866 (5) - exchange slider-start for end
2. 01:16:161 (1,2) - avoid overlap on slider-start

1. 01:00:469 (3,4) - DS:1.4x
2. 02:24:469 (3,4) - avoid overlap

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:42:315 (2,1) - avoid overlap -fixed!
2. 00:48:469 (3,1) - ^ -fixed!
3. 01:09:853 (1,1) - For Easy-diff it's too difficult because of short time from spinner-end to next slider-start -fixed!
4. 02:28:161 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap -fixed!
5. 02:58:161 (2,1) - ^

-fixed!
[H'z Normal]

1. 00:23:546 (3,1) - stack correctly
2. 00:48:007 (4,6) - For Normal, this overlap on the start of 00:48:776 (6) - is too difficult
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - it's less visible because of too closely-spaced notes
4. 02:30:007 (1,2,3) - it is better to avoid this overlap
5. 02:49:853 (1,2,3) - move to the time after 00:00:154

[Hard]

1. 00:10:866 (5) - exchange slider-start for end -fixed!
2. 01:16:161 (1,2) - avoid overlap on slider-start

-fixed!
[Laurier's Insane]

1. 01:00:469 (3,4) - DS:1.4x
2. 02:24:469 (3,4) - avoid overlap

I like yuikonnu~ Good song!
~Good Luck~

MFZ wrote:

From my queue :3

[Easy]
HP +1 would be better imo -fixed

00:13:320 (1) - reNC, no point in this NC imo :3 -fixed

01:12:007 (1) - sounds a little bit weird and confusing, I recommend putting a 1/1 slider on the previous red tick(http://puu.sh/43rP5.jpg)-fixed thanks!


[]

[H'z Normal]

is this really NORMAL? ;_;

00:19:393 (1,2) - Doesn't look good, unstack
00:48:776 (6) - This is going to be unreadable for most people, especially since it's Normal(but I wouldn't do it even in hard diff)
00:56:007 (6,1,1,1,1,1) - this part is kinda unreadable in rhythmic sense
02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - wat, such patterns should be in insanes, not in normals ;_;

[]

[Hard]
AR -1 I think 8 is okay

00:42:776 (6) - NC - -fixed
01:49:853 - put a circle here (x:188 y:268) -fixed

[]

[Insane]

Looks OK :3

[]

Good mapset, good luck on ranking it! :3

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

+1 star cuz M4M

[General]
Good.

[Easy]
Try to follow full Distance Snap with the map
Too many notes on red ticks, it looks quite imbalanced
00:00:230 - Not suggested to map this part for Easy
00:15:502 - Spinner can be considered to start here
00:01:320 (2) - Try not to stack the reverse hit with next slider
00:02:139 (3) - (3) is half hidden, change it if possible
00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - Remove claps
00:23:084 (1) - Follow 0.8x or 0.9x DS (Distance Snap) , but not suggested to change DS for Easy tho
00:22:930 - Add a circle
00:27:546 (6) - Extend it to 00:28:007 -
00:39:238 (1) - Try not to put Circle for first note, seems it's harder to score than slider
00:44:161 (1) - DS
00:44:161 (1) - Or make the curve to be like image below if you wanna keep the DS

Image

00:46:007 (2) - Make DS same with 00:46:622 (1) -
01:09:853 (1) - Spinner is quite short for Easy
01:11:699 (1) - Not suggest to put on red tick for first hit
01:15:546 (4) - DS
01:19:853 (5) - Move it to 01:19:699 - and extend the slider to 01:20:469 -
01:28:469 (2) - Make it more curvy seems 01:26:622 (1) - is curved
01:40:469 - Make a slider here and ends at 01:40:776 -
01:47:853 (4,1) - Different color of AR stack makes confusing
01:48:161 (1) - Try not to make it bounce 2 times because this slider previously 01:45:699 (1) - only bounces 1 time
02:02:930 (5) - This slider is strange, follow 1/2 instead of 1/4
02:15:238 (1) - Distance Snap
02:48:622 (1) - ^
02:49:238 (2) - ^
02:52:315 - KIAI ends here and starts at 02:53:238 - here again (for a flash effect, and matching with the cover)
02:54:622 (1) - Try to follow 1/2
03:29:546 (4) - Replace it with 2 sliders with no reverse
03:34:315 (1) - Remove it and extend the spinner to this timing

fixed everything except 2~3 things

[H'Z Normal]
Mapping is nice, just a little comments
Slider vel is a little fast for normal
Consider to make it as "Normal+" or "Hard" , the tapping, stacks and slider vel doesn't suit for normal
For 3 mins song, hard usually takes 4 - 4.5 star for system rating
00:29:084 (1) - Clap
00:29:084 (1) - Follow DS
00:57:853 (1) - Don't stack with previous circle
02:00:161 (3,4,1) - Can't see any rehearsing sign before (not sure how to express), it's not a nice stack for normal
02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Too confusing for normal

[Hard]
Reduce Approach Rate by: -1
00:50:930 (7) - Change the slider to 1/2 ticks
01:10:315 (1) - Make it bounces 1 more time
02:06:007 (4) - Make this curve at another sider (curve to up)
02:52:161 - Timing follow H'Z Normal or mods mentioned on Easy diff

all fixed~

[Laurier's Insane]
Nothing much to mod for this diff
AR: -1 looks better for me

ts8zs wrote:

[Hard]
00:01:320 (2) - last point 360,224
00:12:230 (6) - ctrl+G?
00:41:699 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931694
00:57:853 (1) - NC
02:00:930 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931697
02:30:007 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931699
03:05:546 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931700
03:09:392 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931701
need more attitions to small things:3
03:13:084 (1) - move 3rd point up
[Laurier's Insane]
00:34:161 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:35:853 (2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931713
00:49:084 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:50:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931715
01:03:546 (5,6) - Exchange position
02:02:315 (1) - NC to help read map
02:04:315 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931717
02:06:315 (5) - Ctrl+G
02:13:238 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:21:084 (5) - 320,204
02:21:853 (3,4) - exchange position
02:23:699 (1) - Ctrl+G
02:24:161 (2) - Ctrl+G
03:05:238 (3,4) - exchange position
03:06:622 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:08:007 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:08:315 (1,2) - exchange position
03:21:084 - NC to help read map
03:25:238 (1) - Ctrl+G
03:29:853 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:30:161 (1) - Ctrl+G
03:34:315 (1) - NC:3

[H'z Normal]
SV is too high,I think 1.0 is betterXD
AR4 or CS4,choose one:3
00:29:084 (1) - plz don't accel XD
01:48:622 (2,3,4) - change a patten
more like a hard,but nothing bothers._.
01:59:084 (2) - remove nc
02:02:930 (1,2,3) - change a patten
02:44:161 (4,1) - swap nc
[Easy]
00:01:320 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931758
00:07:866 - Remove this clap._.
all clap._. lazy to mod this

ts8zs wrote:

just my feelling,refuse to change just write no,needn't explain,I won't be angry if you refuse to change:3
[TKsalt's Oni]
00:02:684 (6,7,8) - kd k - not fit the music.
00:04:593 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - d d k k d d k kd - ok.
00:29:084 (91,92,93,94,95) - dkkdk - kkddk
01:27:392 (437,438,439,440,441) - kkddk - noo
01:39:546 (491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - kkddkkkdkdk - keep.
02:12:161 (684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691,692) - kkdkdkdkd - no.
02:18:469 (731) - NC here to prove del 730 not effect next modding XD
> 02:18:315 (730) - remove
02:32:161 (95,96) - k K
02:53:007 (220) - k - ok.
03:26:315 (435,436,437,438,439) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931807 - why. not fit at all.
[Muzu]
00:02:684 (6,7,8) - kd k - no.
00:04:593 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - d d k k d d k kd - ok.
02:14:160 (522,523,524,525) - kd k d - no.
02:46:776 (663) - k - nice :3c
03:10:930 (776,777,778) - ddk - ok.
03:18:776 (814,815,816) - kkk - ^
GJ:3

1. 01:08:622 (1) - move the tale to (312,136). Near from 01:09:084 (2) - a bit.
2. 02:02:315 (1) - I think you should follow the vocal here. How about like this rhythm?
   
   image

   
3. 02:05:392 - You need somthing emphasis here imo. I suggest add note here like this.
   
   image

   
4. 02:46:161 (1,2,3) - How about to make regular triangle?
5. 02:49:853 (1) - Move to a little up?
   
   image

   
6. 02:58:469 (3) - I prefer if you move this like making regular triangle with 02:57:084 (1,2) -
   
   image

   
7. 03:26:315 (1) - end at 03:27:853 -
8. 03:34:315 (1) - I think you're interpret synth by using this slider, but I also think it's superfluous. I recommend to put just "circle" instead of the slider.

1. 00:56:007 (6) - add finish at 00:56:315 -
2. 01:21:546 (2) - add finish at 01:22:161 - (considering 01:24:622 - )
3. 01:27:084 (4) - add finish on the head.
4. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - I think it's hard to see when I considering this is Normal. You'll have to change many places to fix here, but I think you should do this.
5. 02:11:392 (4) - add finish.
6. 02:17:699 (1) - add finish on the head.
7. 02:19:392 (5) - ^
8. 02:23:699 (3) - ^
9. 02:51:392 (5) - keep 1.00x
10. 02:53:238 (1,2) - add finish on 02:53:238 (1) - 's head or 02:53:699 (2) - or both.
11. 02:54:622 (1) - add finish on the head.
12. 02:55:699 (3) - add finish.
13. 02:58:776 (4) - ^
14. 02:59:392 (1) - add finish on the head.
15. 03:03:084 (3) - add finsih.
16. 03:04:161 (6) - add finish on the tale.

1. 00:00:230 - to 00:15:502 - As here is so calm part, you should remove all whistles imo. I think it's superfluous.
2. 00:19:546 (1) - add clap or finish on the tale. Same sound is ringing at 00:19:546 (1) - as 00:19:546 -
3. 00:23:084 (2) - add clap on the head?
4. 00:28:161 (1) - add finish?
5. 00:39:238 (2) - add finish on the head,
6. 00:43:238 (2) - add clap on the tale.
7. 00:45:853 (6) - add clap on the head.
8. 00:54:007 (1) - add finish.
9. 00:56:315 (8) - ^
10. 01:06:315 (1) - add finish at 01:06:315 -
11. 01:07:546 (3) - add clap at 01:07:853 -
12. 01:08:622 (5) - add finish on the tale.
13. 01:09:853 (9) - add finish on the head.
14. 01:48:161 (1) - add finish on the head.
15. 01:48:622 (2) - ^
16. 01:49:084 (3) - add finish on the head and tale.
17. 01:50:622 (1) - add finish on the head.
18. 01:58:161 (1) - add finish.
19. 02:00:315 (3) - add finish on the tale.
20. 02:07:853 (1) - add finish on the head.
21. 02:10:161 (1) - add finish on the tale.
22. 02:11:392 (5) - add finish on the head.
23. 02:20:776 (3) - I recommend to make blanket with 02:21:238 (4) -
24. 02:52:238 - I don't think you need KIAI flash here.
25. 03:14:622 (1) - remove finish and add clap.
26. 03:14:930 (2) - add finish on the head.
27. 03:17:853 (10) - add finish.
28. 03:21:238 (7) - add finish on the tale.
29. 03:28:622 - How about to add note at same place as 03:28:776 (6) - to depict clap sounds?
30. 03:31:084 (1) - add finish at 03:31:392 -

1. You can add many more finishes, check out with my Hard's mod for reference.
2. 00:00:230 - to 00:14:411 - remove all whistles. same as Hard.
3. 01:28:161 (8,1) - stack?
4. 02:20:776 (3) - Ctrl+G?
5. 03:15:853 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Why don't you use exact star?
6. 03:23:699 - add note here.
7. 03:25:392 (1) - Ctrl+G?
8. 03:30:622 - I think you should add some notes here like this.
   
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1. I strongly recommend changing soft-whistle2 to this because current soft-whistle2 makes a discord...
   (Japanese:不協和音が出来てるので、soft-whistle2をこっちに変えてください。。。)
2. 00:42:469 (6,7,8) - こういうリズムにして、circleを頭の方にstackさせると、バスドラとスネアの間にstreamを挟めるので自然になる気がします。
   
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3. 01:27:084 (3) - もし01:27:699 (3) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちの頭にもfinish入れるべきだと思います。
4. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
5. 01:49:853 (3,4,5,6) - ここは曲に合わせた音取りにするべきだと思います。
   
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6. 02:19:392 (3) - もし02:18:776 (1) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちにもあった方が。
7. 02:53:238 - 曲を聴いてみるとstreamはここまでじゃないかなぁと。
8. 02:58:776 (4) - 頭にadd finish、理由は今までと同じ。
9. 03:34:315 (4) - NC?

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think.
2. 01:31:238 (349) - change to K. I think 01:30:776 - < 01:31:238 -
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here I think.
4. 03:34:315 (887) - change to D is better imo.

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think.
2. 01:43:084 - add d to follow vocal.
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here.
4. 03:34:315 (1211) - D?

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M request from my queue

[Ts8zs' Easy]

1. 01:08:622 (1) - move the tale to (312,136). Near from 01:09:084 (2) - a bit. keep ds
2. 02:02:315 (1) - I think you should follow the vocal here. How about like this rhythm?good idea
   
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3. 02:05:392 - You need somthing emphasis here imo. I suggest add note here like this.now is fun:3
   
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4. 02:46:161 (1,2,3) - How about to make regular triangle? how to?fixed
5. 02:49:853 (1) - Move to a little up? ^
   
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6. 02:58:469 (3) - I prefer if you move this like making regular triangle with 02:57:084 (1,2) - fixed
   
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7. 03:26:315 (1) - end at 03:27:853 - already
8. 03:34:315 (1) - I think you're interpret synth by using this slider, but I also think it's superfluous. I recommend to put just "circle" instead of the slider.slider is hard to miss:3

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416,144,122315,6,0,P|416:48|344:8,1,160
344,96,123238,2,0,L|304:96,1,40
224,128,123699,2,0,L|136:128,3,80,0|6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,124930,6,2,B|40:120|72:184|72:184|48:256,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,126007,2,0,L|312:256,2,160
80,88,127853,6,0,B|112:64|112:64|152:64|152:64|184:88|184:88|224:88|224:88|256:64|256:64|296:64|296:64|328:40|328:40|368:40,2,320,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,144,130622,6,0,L|8:184,1,40
88,216,131084,2,0,L|88:256,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,131699,2,2,B|128:128|128:128|160:104|160:104|200:104|200:104|232:80|232:80|272:80|272:80|304:104|304:104|352:104,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,133084,6,0,P|424:152|368:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,133853,2,0,B|223:215|223:215|192:240,1,120
152,320,134622,2,0,P|184:328|240:312,1,80
312,296,135238,6,2,B|392:296|392:296|432:272,1,120
368,208,136007,2,2,P|376:168|368:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,136776,2,2,L|136:176,2,80
320,136,137699,6,0,P|328:184|272:256,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,138469,2,0,L|440:304,2,40
304,328,139084,2,0,L|240:352,2,40
296,240,139699,6,0,P|272:208|264:160,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,140315,2,0,B|240:72|208:96|208:96|160:96,1,120
40,104,141238,2,0,P|64:176|184:224,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,142315,6,0,L|352:216,2,80,0|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,143392,2,0,B|168:144|168:144|168:64|168:64|256:16|320:104|312:160|280:200,1,360
208,240,145084,6,2,B|168:240|168:240|168:320|168:320|80:368|16:280|16:224|48:152|128:144|128:144|160:144|160:144|192:120|192:120|232:120,1,560
320,120,147546,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,48,147853,6,0,P|408:144|344:208,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,148930,2,0,L|224:312,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,150007,6,0,L|120:96,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,248,151238,2,0,L|208:248,1,160
296,248,152161,2,2,L|360:232,2,40,2|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,156469,6,8,L|152:168,1,40
224,112,156930,2,0,L|264:112,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,157392,2,4,L|416:168,1,80,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,161084,6,0,L|352:296,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,161699,2,12,L|312:128,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,162315,6,0,P|136:104|136:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,163238,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|328:120|328:120|360:144|360:144|400:144,1,200
408,232,164315,6,0,B|368:232|368:232|336:256,1,80
264,312,164930,2,0,B|224:312|224:312|192:288,1,80
136,224,165546,2,0,B|136:184|136:184|112:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,166161,6,0,L|48:256,1,40
48,344,166622,2,0,L|0:384,2,60,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,167392,2,0,L|208:304,1,80
168,224,168007,6,0,L|304:224,1,120
344,296,168776,2,0,B|392:256|384:184|352:152|352:152|360:112,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,169853,6,0,L|184:80,3,80,4|4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,171084,2,0,B|88:120|88:120|88:160|88:160|112:192|112:192|112:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,172622,6,2,L|408:272,2,80,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,173699,2,0,L|312:176,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,174622,6,0,P|144:168|160:224,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,175392,2,0,L|280:280,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,248,176161,2,2,P|415:286|407:326,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,177084,6,0,P|280:184|240:160,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,177853,2,0,L|352:32,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,16,178469,2,0,L|224:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,179084,6,0,L|72:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,232,179699,2,0,B|88:248|128:232|128:232|168:256,1,120
232,312,180469,6,0,B|272:328|304:312|304:312|360:312,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,181699,2,2,B|256:208|256:208|264:184|264:184|264:136,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,182315,6,0,P|232:72|312:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,183084,2,0,B|408:96|448:112|448:112|488:104,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,183853,2,0,P|496:232|488:272,1,80
408,232,184469,6,0,B|368:248|328:232|328:232|288:248,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,185238,2,0,P|168:288|128:280,1,80,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,186007,2,2,P|160:112|168:72,2,80
248,112,186930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,72,187238,2,2,L|384:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,188007,2,0,L|448:336,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,224,188930,6,0,B|328:248|328:248|304:208|256:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,189699,2,0,P|208:288|168:296,1,80
40,336,190469,6,0,L|40:280,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,191084,2,0,L|40:104,1,40
144,40,191699,6,0,L|144:80,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,192315,2,0,L|144:256,1,40
248,336,192930,6,2,L|248:288,1,40
248,160,193546,2,2,L|248:112,1,40
320,72,194007,6,2,L|320:24,1,40
72,144,198007,6,0,P|144:120|200:136,1,120
272,152,198776,2,0,L|320:152,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199238,12,8,201084,0:0:0:0:
208,136,203853,6,0,P|240:113|280:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204315,12,0,205699,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206315,12,0,207853,0:0:0:0:
40,152,208776,6,0,P|80:136|136:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,209392,2,0,P|264:144|312:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,210161,2,0,P|432:136|456:176,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,211084,6,2,L|368:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,211699,2,2,L|288:344,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,212315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,280,212622,2,2,B|128:224|168:208|200:200|200:200|200:144|160:96|160:96|272:96,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,214315,6,2,L|376:192,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M request from my queue



[Laurier's Insane]

1. I strongly recommend changing soft-whistle2 to this because current soft-whistle2 makes a discord...
   (Japanese:不協和音が出来てるので、soft-whistle2をこっちに変えてください。。。)
2. 00:42:469 (6,7,8) - こういうリズムにして、circleを頭の方にstackさせると、バスドラとスネアの間にstreamを挟めるので自然になる気がします。
   
   image

   
   no
3. 01:27:084 (3) - もし01:27:699 (3) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちの頭にもfinish入れるべきだと思います。2つともfinish入れると違和感出るのでnoでー
4. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?　こういう意味のないncはあんま必要ないかなーと思ってます
5. 01:49:853 (3,4,5,6) - ここは曲に合わせた音取りにするべきだと思います。
   
   image

   
   今のままでも変更しても大差ないように思うので、ちょっと保留で。指摘多いようなら変更します
6. 02:19:392 (3) - もし02:18:776 (1) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちにもあった方が。
7. 02:53:238 - 曲を聴いてみるとstreamはここまでじゃないかなぁと。歌に合わせて全部streamにしたほうがやりやすいんじゃないかな？
8. 02:58:776 (4) - 頭にadd finish、理由は今までと同じ。
9. 03:34:315 (4) - NC?

That's all. good luck

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M request from my queue
[TK'S Muzukashii]

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think. - 恐らくこのままで問題無いです。
2. 01:31:238 (349) - change to K. I think 01:30:776 - < 01:31:238 - - 落ち着くパートなのでそのままで。
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here I think. - KIAIの位置は全diffで統一した方が良いはず…ですが確かにその方が良いので変更しました。
4. 03:34:315 (887) - change to D is better imo. - 最後までピッチが上がってるのでDで下げてしまうのはちょっと違和感を覚えました。

[TK's Oni]

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think.
2. 01:43:084 - add d to follow vocal. - nice!
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here.
4. 03:34:315 (1211) - D?

Good Taiko difs.

That's all. good luck

11t wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue~

[General]

Such a nostalgic melody ;_;
tutuhaha's Kisaragi Attention map was one of the first I played when I first started osu, so this brings back some memories

[Jumping]

00:49:084 (1,2) - One of the main sources of ambiguity in free-spacing maps like this is an inconsistent rhythm. More specifically, an inconsistency in the time between successive notes. Because you distance your objects here in so many ways, from spacing them relatively closely to spacing them all the way across the map, the player really cannot rely on standard spacing to tell them when to hit the next note. It's pretty much going to be confusing no matter where you place 00:49:392 (2) on the map in this case, because for the last 20 seconds the player has been constantly jumping around the map to hit notes spaced consistently at 1/2 beats apart. When you suddenly introduce these two notes that are meant to be hit a full beat apart, it can easily catch a player off-guard.

The dangerous side-effect of this is that after the first time this catches the player off-guard, they'll be constantly wary of its presence in the map, and they won't be able to trust in your rhythm anymore. This is important, because it's either your spacing or your rhythm that the player needs to be able to trust, and they definitely can't trust spacing in jumpy maps.

I don't see a reason why you couldn't do something like this instead, for example:


It's not going to accentuate the staccato in the vocals here like a single hitcircle would but it does make this section much less ambiguous and play more smoothly.

Another trick would be to stack the notes; this, as I'm sure you're familiar with, is used rather frequently in jumpy maps to deal with full-beat spacings.

click

Laurier actually uses this quite a lot in his guest difficulty in this mapset, and I think it works.

There are places where this isn't a problem, either due to slider shapes, an exaggerated enough difference in spacing, etc., but I'll point out some of the sections that were problematic for me personally, on a scale of 1-5, 1 being least problematic, 5 being most.

00:56:315 (8,1) - 5 -fixed
01:03:853 (4,1) - 4, due to similar spacing at 01:03:392 (1,2,3,4) -fixed
01:08:622 (1,2) - 5, slider leniency actually makes this gap quite small and I see a spam of notes and I want to spam. I cry when I miss/50 all of them. -fixed
01:30:315 (5,6) - 4, the spacing is too small -fixed
01:55:238 (3,4) - 3, you have HUGE spacing like 01:54:007 (6,7) and then right after it you have this -fixed
03:13:699 (8,9) - 3 -fixed
03:06:930 (5,1) - 3 I don't know how to do..
03:21:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2, not a huge issue, but could you maybe try something like this instead?

click

I think it works a bit better, but that's just my opinion.

I activitely reflected your opinion!

In general, I think this map could benefit from being a bit more neatly organized. I mean, meticulous symmetry doesn't look your style, but you have a bunch of pseudo-symmetry like 00:56:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) that are sort of organized, but not perfectly, and it just looks a tad awkward in my opinion.

The map plays nicely though, aside from those confusing full-beat timings. Your jumps are fun!

[Laurier's Insane]

02:29:699 (3,4) - I'm not sure I like this one. The easy solution would be to CTRL+G these two here, but that's boring. I think simply unstacking (3) from the slider release would help.

03:20:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is somewhat awkward. I think it's the difference in timing between this stack 03:20:546 (2,3) and the other two stacks and the fact that you double back to the (2,3) with (8). Why not just replace this with some fun triangular jumps instead?

03:22:776 (1,2) - I'm not sure how well this one works, especially coming from 03:22:161 (3,4). I think you should move (2) out from underneath the slider.

This is a great map! The patterns you've got here are really interesting and amazingly fun to play through. It flows beautifully, overall.

[Hard]

Space these out so that they don't overlap:
00:47:546 (3,4)
00:54:315 (2,3)
01:51:853 (4,5)
02:24:161 (5,6,7)
02:56:776 (7,1)
03:09:392 (1,2)
03:32:930 (1,2)

02:02:315 (3,4) - Blanket 3 around 4 so that they don't touch.
02:54:622 (1,2) - Consider blanketing 2 around the end of 1.
03:04:469 (1,2) - ^

>> all fixed!

I'm not sure how concerned you are about symmetry, but I think these small fixes can only improve your map and not damage it in any way, so I wanted to point them out.

Other than those aesthetic issues, I think the map is properly spaced, the rhythm is consistent, and everything flows nicely. Good work!

[Closing]

Great song, great maps. While to be honest I find some of your patterns a bit on the messy side, and I think the mapset could use a bit more symmetry and geometry, aside from a few issues they all play smoothly, and that's the most important thing for any map. So good work!

Good luck with ranking!

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, from your modding queue =D (M4M)

[Hard]
HP = 5
00:11:684 - Please add a slider here (who finish at 00:11:957 )
00:15:502 - 00:19:320 Can you add a spinner or a break time in this part ?
00:47:546 (3,4) - Distance snap - fixed
00:54:315 (2,3) - ^
00:55:084 (4,5) - So Hard Jump =/ -fixed
01:49:853 - Here try this :

SPOILER

GOOD
02:13:622 (2,3,4) - ^ :

SPOILER

02:15:699 (2,3,4) - ^ (Same image)
02:42:315 - Maybe a circle here ?
02:52:238 - The "mini" kiai time must start at 02:52:161 v-fixed
02:56:776 (7,1) - Distance snap -fixed
03:08:469 (3,4) - Hard
03:23:392 (4,1) - Distance snap -fixed
03:32:930 (1,2) - ^ -fixed

|Jumping]
HP = 6 (or it's impossible xD)
OD = 7
00:11:684 - Something here ?
02:51:546 (1) - This slider is too short =3
The rest is good, Good Luck *u*

Awaken wrote:

Jin!!I love this song !!>w<
[Jumping]
00:12:230 (1) - this slider seems not beautiful
00:33:084 (5) - you can try this
00:39:853 (3) - maybe blancket with 00:39:238 (1)?
00:48:007 (4) - ctrl+g
00:48:007 (4) - ctrl+g
01:29:392 (3) - it seems more beautiful~
01:41:392 (3) - ctrl+g
02:02:930 (1) - stack with 02:01:546 (6)?
02:16:315 (4) - blancket with 02:16:161 (3)?
02:51:238 (12,13) - you can jump these two 0w0
03:03:546 (7) - it's so close to last slider
03:18:469 (6,7,8) - you shouldn't overlay these three. someone will think wrong.
03:23:853 (1) - are you sure that not blancket?
03:30:622 - 03:30:930 mapping here may be more complete
all fixed! Thanks ~

[Laurier's Insane]
00:08:957 (8) - maybe get a regular triangle with 6,7?
01:17:853 (4) - blancket with 3?

Can't find more
Very good map~
Good Luck~

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue!

TS8ZS'S EASY

00:58:622 (1) - maybe if you make this slider start at 00:58:622 - it's easyer to read for the beginner and the rythm is also better in my opinion.
01:29:699 (2) - what if you make this start at 01:29:699 - ?
01:18:776 (2,3) - I'm not sure of this part of the rhytm... maybe it's better in this way:

SPOILER

but that's just a suggestion
02:04:930 (1,2) - what do you think of this rhythm?

SPOILER

02:22:315 (1,2) - what I suggest to do in this part is to delete one reverse of the first slider, then mote this 02:23:392 (2) - to 02:23:238 - and make it end at 02:24:776 -
02:32:161 (3) - delete one reverse?
02:36:469 (1,2,3) - what do you think of using drum hitsounds for these 3?
03:21:238 - what if you map also this part? it's such a short breack time...

H'Z NORMAL

00:23:546 (3,1) - was it intentional to unstack them?
01:07:392 (1) - this slider can be confusing... maybe delete it and simply add a note at 01:07:546 -
01:27:546 (5,6) - these notes are too high in the screen imo... I see them under the score, maybe you can place them more down.
01:58:622 (1) - fix spacing well here, since there is a change of velocity
02:02:622 (4,1,2,3) - this is reeeally confusing for a normal diff! try to make something else, some other pattern where you can easylly see the notes and sliders
well the diff is well made, but maybe it's a bit too hard for a normal diff. what I suggest is to decrease the velocity sometimes... for example in this part 00:46:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I mean eaven if it's only for a little time it can be confusing and too fast, think about it.

HARD

01:50:007 (5) - what do you think of moving this slider to 01:50:161 - and make it end at 01:50:315 - and add a note at 01:50:007 - ? fixed
03:16:776 (7,8,9,10,1) - what do you think of this rhythm?

SPOILER

I like fast rhythm~
03:23:699 - add a note here? fixed
good diff.

JUMPING

00:54:930 (3,4) - stack them perfectly fixed
01:42:007 (6) - what if you make a little blancket with 01:42:469 (8) - ? fixed
03:03:699 (8,10) - if you move them at x:148 - y:188 these will meke a better triangle with 03:03:546 (7,9) - fixed

that's all! I love the song, so really good luck with this map for rank!

1. In jumping. It's HP6 and OD5 for AR9? It's a little bit low don't you think? Raise the HP and OD by at least 1.

1. 00:44:469 (2,3) - (nazi) they aren't exactly symetrical
2. 01:59:392 (1,2) - This kind of stack is too hard for an Easy. Destack them.
3. 02:23:392 (2,1) - Ok, i knwo there are A LOT of overap in your diff and i understand that it doesn't bothe some people to have overlap that's why i didn't mention any of them before but this one...... Seriously, no. It's not aesthetical at all!
4. 02:59:084 (1,2) - Why not curving it into a blanket like in the rest of your diff?
   
   
5. 03:14:007 (1) - Considering the logic of the pattern 03:10:469 (1,2,1,2,1,2) shouldn't it be pointed in the other direction?

1. 00:29:699 (1) - Maybe Finish or Clap on the head? This sound is really powerful and just a whistle doesn't seem to be enough imo.
2. 00:33:853 (1) - ^ (on the tail)
3. 02:36:469 (1,2,3) - Lower the volume here. The hitsound are a little bit too loud.

1. The title should be H's Normal! Right?

1. 01:48:161 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of acceleration is maybe a little bit too exagerate for a Normal diff. Maybe try a softer one?
2. 01:49:084 (3,4) - Move it to x=124 y=164 (and the other slider with it) in order to center the end of 01:48:622 (2) in 01:49:084 (3,4).
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - With the low AR is really hard to read. Nearly impossible i must say!
4. 02:31:238 (3) - Move it to x=400 y=152? You can still make it end where you want while having a better readable overlap.

1. 00:11:957 - Add a note here? It follows the guitar and fill the gap of 3/2 into a gap of 1/1 more instinctif to play.
2. 00:15:502 - Add a break or a spinner?
3. 01:49:853 (4,5) - The right rythm here should be:
   
4. 03:30:622 - Add a 1 beat long slider here. No need for the void here in the map.

1. 00:59:546 (3,5) - (nazi) Small overlap you could avoid
2. 01:06:007 (4) - (nazi) move it 1 grid up then right for better blanket
3. 01:45:084 (5,1) - same as 00:59:546 (3,5)
4. 02:13:238 (2,3) - This jump is really confusing because the position of the slider 2 makes it looking like there is another arrow. If it was a harder diff with a higher SV that would be good but here, it's confusing imo.
5. 02:15:699 (2) - ^
6. 02:22:622 (1,2) - Make a better blanket here.
7. 02:43:238 (3) - (nazi) Moves it 2 grid up for a better blanket.
8. 03:08:469 (3,4) - It's also confusing to play with the low AR and the flow here isn't good.

1. 02:44:622 (1,2) - Why this combo have only two objects?

1. 00:11:957 - Same as in Hard

1. 00:10:048 (3,4) - Why such a harsh jump? I know you want a jumpy map but jump still have to fit the song. Quiet = small jump/no jump, loud=big jump. Making big jump in the quiet part doesn't make any sense.
2. 00:57:853 (7) - Actially these two notes would have made a good jump since they are both "powerful"! So, why are they in a slider?
3. 01:15:392 (6,7) - Why an anti-jump here? It breaks the flow for no purpose since the song don't suggest any anti-jump.
4. 01:59:392 (1) - Same as 00:57:853 (7)

1. 00:12:230 (1) - Why the lonely combo? It wasn't there in your Hard map.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Old M4M:

[General]
Difficulty

1. In jumping. It's HP6 and OD5 for AR9? It's a little bit low don't you think? Raise the HP and OD by at least 1.

Okay~

[Ts8zs' Easy]
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:44:469 (2,3) - (nazi) they aren't exactly symetrical
2. 01:59:392 (1,2) - This kind of stack is too hard for an Easy. Destack them.
3. 02:23:392 (2,1) - Ok, i knwo there are A LOT of overap in your diff and i understand that it doesn't bothe some people to have overlap that's why i didn't mention any of them before but this one...... Seriously, no. It's not aesthetical at all!
4. 02:59:084 (1,2) - Why not curving it into a blanket like in the rest of your diff?
   
   
5. 03:14:007 (1) - Considering the logic of the pattern 03:10:469 (1,2,1,2,1,2) shouldn't it be pointed in the other direction?

Hitsound

1. 00:29:699 (1) - Maybe Finish or Clap on the head? This sound is really powerful and just a whistle doesn't seem to be enough imo.
2. 00:33:853 (1) - ^ (on the tail)
3. 02:36:469 (1,2,3) - Lower the volume here. The hitsound are a little bit too loud.

[H'z Normal]

1. The title should be H's Normal! Right?

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 01:48:161 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of acceleration is maybe a little bit too exagerate for a Normal diff. Maybe try a softer one?
2. 01:49:084 (3,4) - Move it to x=124 y=164 (and the other slider with it) in order to center the end of 01:48:622 (2) in 01:49:084 (3,4).
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - With the low AR is really hard to read. Nearly impossible i must say!
4. 02:31:238 (3) - Move it to x=400 y=152? You can still make it end where you want while having a better readable overlap.

[Hard]
Rythm

1. 00:11:957 - Add a note here? It follows the guitar and fill the gap of 3/2 into a gap of 1/1 more instinctif to play. fixed
2. 00:15:502 - Add a break or a spinner? fixed
3. 01:49:853 (4,5) - The right rythm here should be:
   fixed
4. 03:30:622 - Add a 1 beat long slider here. No need for the void here in the map.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:59:546 (3,5) - (nazi) Small overlap you could avoid fixed
2. 01:06:007 (4) - (nazi) move it 1 grid up then right for better blanket fixed
3. 01:45:084 (5,1) - same as 00:59:546 (3,5)
4. 02:13:238 (2,3) - This jump is really confusing because the position of the slider 2 makes it looking like there is another arrow. If it was a harder diff with a higher SV that would be good but here, it's confusing imo. fixed
5. 02:15:699 (2) - ^ fixed
6. 02:22:622 (1,2) - Make a better blanket here. fixed
7. 02:43:238 (3) - (nazi) Moves it 2 grid up for a better blanket. fixed
8. 03:08:469 (3,4) - It's also confusing to play with the low AR and the flow here isn't good.

fixed
NC

1. 02:44:622 (1,2) - Why this combo have only two objects?

fixed

[Jumping]
Rythm

1. 00:11:957 - Same as in Hard

fixed
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:10:048 (3,4) - Why such a harsh jump? I know you want a jumpy map but jump still have to fit the song. Quiet = small jump/no jump, loud=big jump. Making big jump in the quiet part doesn't make any sense. fixed
2. 00:57:853 (7) - Actially these two notes would have made a good jump since they are both "powerful"! So, why are they in a slider? Yeah~You're right
3. 01:15:392 (6,7) - Why an anti-jump here? It breaks the flow for no purpose since the song don't suggest any anti-jump. fixed
4. 01:59:392 (1) - Same as 00:57:853 (7)

NC

1. 00:12:230 (1) - Why the lonely combo? It wasn't there in your Hard map.

In the Normal there are huge change in the SV but no SV change at all in the Hard. Why? There are moment when the SV in the Normal is actually higher than in the Hard. I asked Kurai (Bat manager) about it and he told me "it's not unrankable but it's really bad". change 1.1~1.2 in kiai time
~Good luck~

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wa_ wrote:

Hi!
M4M from my queue. Some suggestions and opinions, so don't take it really seriously.

[Jumping]
00:05:684 (2) - What about to use shape from previous slider? It would be more consistent.
00:19:393 - 00:28:161 - This part might be a bit less jumpy, if I were You, I'd make this part more calm and resign to large jumps (like 00:25:084 (3,4,5) ). Look at Laurier's diff - there are shorter distances between notes. I know it's Jumping diff, but jumps at this moment wouldn't match.
00:23:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream's shape doesn't look good and transition into slider is a bit rough.
00:48:776 (7) - Try to reverse it, may be played better.
00:54:622 (2) - Reverse for better flow?
01:08:161 (3) - You can improve shape to more circular:

SPOILER

01:24:622 (6) - Similar to above.
01:26:315 (1,3) - Try to make blanket with these notes?
01:29:699 (4) - Transition from this slider to next circle may be easier when you shorten slider to white tick and add note (when I was playing this map first time, I got confused and didn't know, when slider ends and how to go to next circle). But if You don't want to do it, just ignore it. I mean something like this:

SPOILER

(if You decide to do it, please change position of 01:30:622 (6) to obtain better flow)
01:41:392 (3) - Reversing that note would improve flow.
01:48:623 (2) - It'll look better when You remove overlap with previous slider.
01:49:084 (3) - Make this section more smooth by reversing slider.
02:02:930 (4) - Blanket with next slider would be cool. (If You want to help yourself, reverse temporarily "covered" slider. Like this:

SPOILER

02:13:238 (2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders... As always I suggest You something smoother:

SPOILER

02:17:084 (6) - Please make this slider "normally" circular. You did pattern like this really good earlier - at 02:14:315 (5,6,7).
02:44:622 (1,2,3) - What about to change a bit pattern? (but it may not flow)

SPOILER

02:46:546 (8) - Move it a bit down to make stream's shape better.
02:51:546 (1) - That spinner... It's really confusing with fast jumps and 1/4 triplets before, so it's really hard to get 300 ._.
03:01:084 (4) - It would be nice when You add blanket with previous slider.
03:12:161 (2,3) - I suggest You to reverse these notes and move new (2) to (236,324). It should flow better.
03:13:084 (7) - This slider looks strange... Maybe try something like this?

SPOILER

03:23:853 (1) - Better blanket would be great.
03:25:392 (1,2) - Try to reverse these sliders separately.
I generally don't like playing jumps, but this map have some kind of "magic"

[Insane]
01:31:084 (7,8) - These notes were confusing as stacked. Maybe unstack (8)?
03:17:238 (4) - Nazi - fix blanket with (6).
This diff is just perfect :3

[Hard]
00:47:084 (2,3) - Try to replace these shapes with something other.
01:06:007 (4) - Flow would be better, if You reverse this slider. But don't do that if You find that spacing can be too hard for Hard difficulty (2.57!)
01:13:238 (6) - Maybe try to move slider to (24,288).
01:25:084 (6) - I hope that making blanket with previous slider is possible
02:23:084 (2) - Fix blanket.
02:30:007 (1) - Shape still can be improved. Try this: (putted an assistant circle to help with making better shape)

SPOILER

(if necessary, stack perfectly (2) under slider tail)
02:42:315 - Put a circle here?
03:09:392 (1) - I hope that this slider won't make problems (it has negative x values).
03:13:084 (1) - You can improve this shape.

[Normal]
Just note: This difficulty have really large slider velocity (and changes). With high BPM and low AR it could be really hard to play. Maybe try to use AR6 (if it's rankable for Normal difficulty). I had really big problems with parts like 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern would be really nice but with Approach Rate 8+. In addition, rhythm of this difficulty reminds me Hard difficulty. In my opinion, You should remove some notes (mostly 1/2 circles) and re-arrange some patterns to make it more readable at AR 5-6. But mapped really good in overall :3

Absolutely love this song and map <3 Hope I'll see it ranked soon Good luck!

1. 00:43:546 (10) - NC
2. 00:46:315 (7) - Form a circle?
   http://puu.sh/5daph.jpg
   
3. 01:19:392 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
   
4. 01:30:622 (6) - Move it to 01:30:776 - and adding a circle here ?
   http://puu.sh/5dawI.jpg
   
5. 02:26:161 (7) - NC
6. 02:59:084 (8) - ^
7. 03:33:853 (7,1) - Try this:
   http://puu.sh/5daFF.jpg

Autumn wrote:

Hi~From my queue. sorry for late!
So many mods already so I'll be brief ><

[Jumping]

1. 00:43:546 (10) - NC
2. 00:46:315 (7) - Form a circle?
   http://puu.sh/5daph.jpg
   
3. 01:19:392 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
   
4. 01:30:622 (6) - Move it to 01:30:776 - and adding a circle here ?
   http://puu.sh/5dawI.jpg
   
5. 02:26:161 (7) - NC
6. 02:59:084 (8) - ^
7. 03:33:853 (7,1) - Try this:
   http://puu.sh/5daFF.jpg

Nice song! GL~

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

그냥 제안인데
Jumping보다는 Insane이 낫다고 봄

Moway wrote:

Hi there, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]

This difficulty has a ton of spacing issues, like a lot a lot. Spacing on the map fluctuates between 1.00-1.20 and as a result makes it look really sloppy. I'm not going to point out every instance that this happens because there is spacing issues between almost every object (no exaggeration). You really need to go through this map with a 1.1x distance snap (I'm assuming this was the intention) and clean up all of the issues. I'll try not to mention spacing next because this would make this mod be really, really long. I'm a bit surprised that no one brought this up earlier given how many mods this mapset has, but there you go.

AR3, definitely for this difficulty.

Sorry to say, but in my opinion this difficulty needs a ton of work. The spacing needs to be fixed between almost every object, which is not good. There were a lot of other problems as well that I addressed, but I know that I didn't get everything that I wanted to get to here since there are other difficulties to mod.　Because I like small gird,this really bothers nothing,and overlap dont make an effect as big as you think

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64,104,81392,2,0,B|104:88|104:88|144:96|192:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,82161,6,0,L|392:72,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,288,84315,2,2,P|136:304|184:296,1,80,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,85084,2,2,L|392:288,2,80
232,240,86007,6,0,P|192:176|200:144,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,86622,2,0,B|328:160|328:160|368:160|392:128,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,87392,2,0,L|224:72,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,72,88469,6,0,P|440:152|464:224,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,89546,2,0,B|320:232|320:232|216:216|160:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,90622,2,0,L|56:288,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,95853,6,4,P|256:216|304:200,1,80
80,168,99546,6,0,B|112:192|112:192|152:192|152:192|184:168|184:168|224:168|224:168|256:192|256:192|296:192,1,240
384,192,100776,1,12,0:0:0:0:
424,112,101084,2,8,L|480:112,1,40
352,40,101699,6,0,L|248:40,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,88,102315,2,8,L|136:88,1,40
256,184,102930,6,0,L|344:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,240,103546,2,8,L|480:240,1,40
352,328,104161,6,0,L|256:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,272,104776,2,8,L|136:272,1,40
56,184,105392,6,0,L|152:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,106007,2,8,L|280:128,1,40
336,128,106469,6,0,L|368:176,2,40,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,107238,2,0,B|320:264|320:264|368:248|416:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,108161,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,344,108622,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,208,109084,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,208,109546,2,0,B|368:168|368:168|328:168|328:168|328:128|328:128|304:96|304:96|304:56,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,110622,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,128,110930,2,0,L|448:232,1,80
448,296,111546,2,0,B|416:320|416:320|376:320|376:320|344:344|344:344|304:344|272:312,2,200
384,232,113392,6,0,B|304:232|304:232|272:208|272:208|184:208,1,200
128,144,114469,2,0,B|160:120|160:120|200:120|200:120|232:96|232:96|272:96|272:96|304:120|304:120|344:120|344:120|376:144,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,115853,6,0,B|312:248|312:248|328:288|312:328,1,120
232,288,116622,2,0,L|136:288,1,80
112,208,117238,6,0,B|192:208|192:208|224:184|224:184|264:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,118161,2,2,B|352:144|352:144|328:112|328:112|328:72|328:72|304:40|304:40|280:72|280:72|240:72|240:72,1,240
152,72,119392,5,6,0:0:0:0:
64,56,119699,1,6,0:0:0:0:
88,136,120007,6,0,B|88:216|88:216|112:248,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,184,120776,2,0,L|264:184,1,80
344,184,121392,2,0,L|344:248,2,40
344,96,122007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,122315,6,0,P|416:48|344:8,1,160
344,96,123238,2,0,L|304:96,1,40
224,128,123699,2,0,L|136:128,3,80,0|6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,124930,6,2,B|40:120|72:184|72:184|48:256,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,126007,2,0,L|312:256,2,160
80,88,127853,6,0,B|112:64|112:64|152:64|152:64|184:88|184:88|224:88|224:88|256:64|256:64|296:64|296:64|328:40|328:40|368:40,2,320,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,144,130622,6,0,L|8:184,1,40
88,216,131084,2,0,L|88:256,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,131699,2,2,B|128:128|128:128|160:104|160:104|200:104|200:104|232:80|232:80|272:80|272:80|304:104|304:104|352:104,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,133084,6,0,P|424:152|368:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,133853,2,0,B|223:215|223:215|192:240,1,120
152,320,134622,2,0,P|184:328|240:312,1,80
312,296,135238,6,2,B|392:296|392:296|432:272,1,120
368,208,136007,2,2,P|376:168|368:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,136776,2,2,L|136:176,2,80
320,136,137699,6,0,P|328:184|272:256,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,138469,2,0,L|440:304,2,40
304,328,139084,2,0,L|240:352,2,40
296,240,139699,6,0,P|272:208|264:160,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,140315,2,0,B|240:72|208:96|208:96|160:96,1,120
40,104,141238,2,0,P|64:176|184:224,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,142315,6,0,L|352:208,2,80,0|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,143392,2,0,L|296:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,32,144161,2,0,P|416:104|384:184,1,160
328,256,145084,2,2,B|256:224|256:224|208:216,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,145853,2,0,P|88:216|48:184,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,146622,2,2,B|240:80|240:80|256:48|296:32,1,160
320,120,147546,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,48,147853,6,0,P|408:144|344:208,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,148930,2,0,L|224:312,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,150007,6,0,L|120:96,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,248,151238,2,0,L|208:248,1,160
296,248,152161,2,2,L|360:232,2,40,2|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,156469,6,8,L|152:168,1,40
224,112,156930,2,0,L|264:112,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,157392,2,4,L|416:168,1,80,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,161084,6,0,L|352:296,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,161699,2,12,L|312:128,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,162315,6,0,P|136:104|136:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,163238,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|328:120|328:120|360:144|360:144|400:144,1,200
408,232,164315,6,0,B|368:232|368:232|336:256,1,80
264,312,164930,2,0,B|224:312|224:312|192:288,1,80
136,224,165546,2,0,B|136:184|136:184|112:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,166161,6,0,L|48:256,1,40
48,344,166622,2,0,L|0:384,2,60,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,167392,2,0,L|208:304,1,80
168,224,168007,6,0,L|304:224,1,120
344,296,168776,2,0,B|392:256|384:184|352:152|352:152|360:112,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,169853,6,0,L|184:80,3,80,4|4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,171084,2,0,B|88:120|88:120|88:160|88:160|112:192|112:192|112:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,172622,6,2,L|408:272,2,80,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,173699,2,0,L|312:176,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,174622,6,0,P|144:168|160:224,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,175392,2,0,L|280:280,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,248,176161,2,2,P|415:286|407:326,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,177084,6,0,P|280:184|240:160,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,177853,2,0,L|352:32,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,16,178469,2,0,L|224:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,179084,6,0,P|128:144|88:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,232,179699,2,0,B|88:248|128:232|128:232|168:256,1,120
232,312,180469,6,0,B|272:328|304:312|304:312|360:312,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,181699,2,2,B|256:208|256:208|264:184|264:184|264:136,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,182315,6,0,P|232:72|312:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,183084,2,0,B|408:96|448:112|448:112|488:104,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,183853,2,0,P|496:232|488:272,1,80
408,232,184469,6,0,B|368:248|328:232|328:232|288:248,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,185238,2,0,P|168:288|128:280,1,80,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,186007,2,2,P|160:112|168:72,2,80
248,112,186930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,72,187238,2,2,L|384:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,188007,2,0,L|448:336,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,188930,6,0,B|328:264|328:264|312:224|264:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,189699,2,0,P|208:288|168:296,1,80
40,336,190469,6,0,L|40:280,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,191084,2,0,L|40:104,1,40
144,40,191699,6,0,L|144:80,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,192315,2,0,L|144:256,1,40
248,336,192930,6,2,L|248:288,1,40
248,160,193546,2,2,L|248:112,1,40
320,72,194007,6,2,L|320:24,1,40
72,144,198007,6,0,P|144:120|200:136,1,120
272,152,198776,2,0,L|320:152,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199238,12,8,201084,0:0:0:0:
208,136,203853,6,0,P|240:113|280:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204315,12,0,205699,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206315,12,0,207853,0:0:0:0:
40,152,208776,6,0,P|80:136|136:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,209392,2,0,P|264:144|312:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,210161,2,0,P|432:136|456:176,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,211084,6,2,L|368:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,211699,2,2,L|288:344,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,212315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,280,212622,2,2,B|128:224|168:208|200:200|200:200|200:144|160:96|160:96|272:96,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,214315,6,2,L|368:192,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: