Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/3T9sB.osu
my diff

1. There are unsnapped notes in Easy diff.
2. Always use a constant distance snap in low diffs (Easy/Normal)

1. I'll repeat, Always use a constant distance for each note in the diff, It's really important when you map this kind of diff!~
2. AR is too high! one tick less please :3
3. The rhythm is inconsistent :<
4. 00:08:411 (4) - make it more blanket with 00:09:502 (1) - .
5. 00:23:084 (6) - New combo because downbeat.
6. 00:44:161 (1,2) - make (1) blanket with (2) http://puu.sh/3XmC3.png .
7. 00:46:622 (1) - fix distance.
8. 00:48:469 (2,3,4) - ^
9. 00:49:699 (1) - new combo
10. 00:54:007 (4) - move to 152|244 and new combo.
11. 00:58:930 (1,2,3,4) - fix distance >.<
12. 01:01:392 (5) - unsnapped note! | 01:02:776 (6) - make it blanket with (5).
13. 01:21:084 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~ >w<
14. 02:11:392 (4) - ^
15. 02:15:238 (1) - repeat section is unsnapped~
16. 02:17:699 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~
17. 02:20:776 (4) - ^
18. 02:28:161 (1) - unsnapped note

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary).
2. Use distance snap owo
3. expected difficulty
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of dif.
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie.
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

1. 00:34:161 (103) - k

1. Nothing!

1. I'll just give it a fast look with important issues. I think this diff is good in aspect like rhythm but beauty of the diff have to improve more. (it's good but those sliders urrrg)
2. 01:02:469 (4) - Remove this slider and change it for circles~ you miss notes like 01:02:776 -
3. 01:08:469 (4,5) - weird flow
4. 01:28:776 (6) - unnecessary. Remove or change it.
5. 02:01:699 (1) - (1) is touching 02:01:084 (6) - and looks ugly for me, move it a bit and it will look better.
6. 03:13:084 (1) - Ugly slider ;w;

1. Nothing else to say, very good mapped and everything. I've played this in Standard mode and I think this is a funny diff~

-Cloudchaser wrote:

M4M request from my queue~

General

1. There are unsnapped notes in Easy diff.
2. Always use a constant distance snap in low diffs (Easy/Normal)

Easy

1. I'll repeat, Always use a constant distance for each note in the diff, It's really important when you map this kind of diff!~
2. AR is too high! one tick less please :3
3. The rhythm is inconsistent :<
4. 00:08:411 (4) - make it more blanket with 00:09:502 (1) - .- fixed!
5. 00:23:084 (6) - New combo because downbeat.- fixed!
6. 00:44:161 (1,2) - make (1) blanket with (2) http://puu.sh/3XmC3.png .- fixed!
7. 00:46:622 (1) - fix distance.- fixed!
8. 00:48:469 (2,3,4) - ^- fixed!
9. 00:49:699 (1) - new combo- fixed!
10. 00:54:007 (4) - move to 152|244 and new combo.- fixed!
11. 00:58:930 (1,2,3,4) - fix distance >.<- fixed!
12. 01:01:392 (5) - unsnapped note! | 01:02:776 (6) - make it blanket with (5).- fixed!
13. 01:21:084 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~ >w<- fixed!
14. 02:11:392 (4) - ^- fixed!
15. 02:15:238 (1) - repeat section is unsnapped~- fixed!
16. 02:17:699 (1) - Make this slider more beautiful~- fixed!
17. 02:20:776 (4) - ^- fixed!
18. 02:28:161 (1) - unsnapped note

- fixed!

H's Normal

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary).
2. Use distance snap owo
3. expected difficulty
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of dif.
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie.
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

- WIP So postpone
TK's Muzukashii/Oni

both diffs are good enough at least for me :3

Muzukashii:

1. 00:34:161 (103) - k

[/color]- fixed!

Oni:

1. Nothing!

Hard

1. I'll just give it a fast look with important issues. I think this diff is good in aspect like rhythm but beauty of the diff have to improve more. (it's good but those sliders urrrg)
2. 01:02:469 (4) - Remove this slider and change it for circles~ you miss notes like 01:02:776 -
3. 01:08:469 (4,5) - weird flow
4. 01:28:776 (6) - unnecessary. Remove or change it.
5. 02:01:699 (1) - (1) is touching 02:01:084 (6) - and looks ugly for me, move it a bit and it will look better.
6. 03:13:084 (1) - Ugly slider ;w;

all fixed!
Laurier's Insane

1. Nothing else to say, very good mapped and everything. I've played this in Standard mode and I think this is a funny diff~

Go go go! I hope see this ranked a day owo good luck

Megurine Luka wrote:

LOL this is not called M4M it's called Jin 4 Jin

Just kidding lol

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine.
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag

[E]

1. Firstly please open your Aimod and enable the “check the distance snap” on the top. Fix all the distance problem according to this. The reason is Easy/Normal often need strictly follow the distance snap in order to help new babies to play osu! in a better way.
2. 01:48:160 (1) - unsnap
3. 01:51:237 (4) - ^
4. 00:05:684 (2) - Try x=320 y=168
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:08:411 (4) - end at 00:08:684 fits better imo
6. 00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - make a diamond shape?
7. 00:25:084 (2) - why change to soft hitsound? The changing is too sudden imo, There is no indication from the music so I don't understand this change 0.0
8. 00:28:161 (1) - This spinner is kinda short. Not a big deal but I think it could be a little bit hard for new players. So better change it into sliders.
9. 00:43:546 (3) - Try x=176 y=280, also adjust 00:42:315 (2) - a bit.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:45:392 (2) - x=32 y=276 looks better imo
11. 00:54:007 (7) - maybe try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:00:776 (4) - spacing
13. 01:01:392 (5) - I think this fits better:
    
14. 01:05:699 (4) - Try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:08:776 (3) - you can copy and paste 01:07:546 (2) - and then ctrl+j and ctrl+h then move to this position.
16. 01:21:084 (1) - Try this
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:23:546 (3) - spacing
    
18. Basically I don't mod a map which copy and paste then ctrl+j and ctrl+h... but you're a new mapper so I would not say anything about it. Just fix what I mentioned above will be ok.
    Next time please don't copy and paste.

[N]

1. You said ignore this diff first, so I will skip it.

[H]

1. 00:02:957 (4) - curve down would be better?
2. 00:07:866 (5) - try x=150 y=248 for a better triangle
3. 00:39:853 (3) - use the same slider as 00:39:238 (2) -
4. 00:40:469 (5) - curve up?
5. 00:42:315 (3) - encircle better
6. 00:42:776 (4) - ctrl+g would be better?
7. 01:12:776 (4) - try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:14:469 (3) - use straight slider like 01:14:007 (2) -
9. 01:15:238 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:18:469 (1) - stack perfectly
11. 01:19:699 (5) - ctrl+g and encircle better
12. 01:22:930 (7) - use the same slider as 01:22:161 (5) -
13. 01:30:622 (3) - del one turn
14. 02:02:776 (4) - x=280 y=144
15. 02:12:315 (7) - x=184 y=208
16. 02:21:238 (4) -
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:16:776 (6,7) - make them parallel?
18. 03:20:776 (6) - x=244 y=104

[I]

1. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
2. 02:19:238 (2) - stack better?
3. 02:24:776 (4) - curve up would be better/
4. 02:38:622 (1) - ctrl+g
5. 02:53:238 (9) - add fin here and del the fin on 02:53:392 (1) - 's head
6. 02:54:315 (4) - could add a fin on this head if you do ^

Done~
Good Luck!

TKSalt wrote:

@[Navy]
this taiko diffs is my diffs.
why do you change?
please don't change taiko diffs.....

if you don't know how to handle guest diffs,
i think should not recruit a guest.


@-Cloudchaser
thanks for modding!

Link

-Cloudchaser wrote:

H's Normal >w> it's H'z

1. This diff isn't a Normal diff, It's hard for be a diff for newbie players. Always use 1/2 patterns instead 1/4 (unless it is necessary). :< i always use 1/2 patterns, except for 01:50:007 (1,2) - because it's fit perfectly
2. Use distance snap owo 1/1 has 1.0, some note in kiai has 1.1 ~ 1.2, 1/2 has 0.8, so i think it's fine
3. expected difficulty done
4. There are some inherits points unsnapped hmm, it's all snapped correctly, i use 1/16 snapping for kiai flash
5. You've created good patterns (esthetically) but some are Hard for this kind of diff. hehe
6. 00:24:776 (1) - don't stack here! it's hard to see for a newbie. it's not stacked
   That's all for this diff. If you follow these tips this diff will improve quite better.

Megurine Luka wrote:

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine. i leave this to Navy
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag ^

Megurine Luka wrote:

LOL this is not called M4M it's called Jin 4 Jin

Just kidding lol

[General]

1. Change "shizennotekip" in tag to "Shizen no Teki P" would be better, or you can add it directly which is also fine. -fixed!
2. Add Vocaloid3 自然の敵P in tag

[E]

1. Firstly please open your Aimod and enable the “check the distance snap” on the top. Fix all the distance problem according to this. The reason is Easy/Normal often need strictly follow the distance snap in order to help new babies to play osu! in a better way. try my best..
2. 01:48:160 (1) - unsnap -fixed!
3. 01:51:237 (4) - ^-fixed!
4. 00:05:684 (2) - Try x=320 y=168-fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:08:411 (4) - end at 00:08:684 fits better imo-fixed!
6. 00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - make a diamond shape?-fixed!
7. 00:25:084 (2) - why change to soft hitsound? The changing is too sudden imo, There is no indication from the music so I don't understand this change 0.0-fixed! I don't know,either. hehe
8. 00:28:161 (1) - This spinner is kinda short. Not a big deal but I think it could be a little bit hard for new players. So better change it into sliders.-fixed!
9. 00:43:546 (3) - Try x=176 y=280, also adjust 00:42:315 (2) - a bit.-fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:45:392 (2) - x=32 y=276 looks better imo-fixed!
11. 00:54:007 (7) - maybe try this:-fixed!
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:00:776 (4) - spacing-fixed!
13. 01:01:392 (5) - I think this fits better:-fixed!
    
14. 01:05:699 (4) - Try this:-fixed!
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:08:776 (3) - you can copy and paste 01:07:546 (2) - and then ctrl+j and ctrl+h then move to this position.-fixed!
16. 01:21:084 (1) - Try this
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:23:546 (3) - spacing-fixed!
    
18. Basically I don't mod a map which copy and paste then ctrl+j and ctrl+h... but you're a new mapper so I would not say anything about it. Just fix what I mentioned above will be ok.
    Next time please don't copy and paste.

[N]

1. You said ignore this diff first, so I will skip it.

[H]

1. 00:02:957 (4) - curve down would be better?
2. 00:07:866 (5) - try x=150 y=248 for a better triangle
3. 00:39:853 (3) - use the same slider as 00:39:238 (2) -
4. 00:40:469 (5) - curve up?
5. 00:42:315 (3) - encircle better
6. 00:42:776 (4) - ctrl+g would be better?
7. 01:12:776 (4) - try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:14:469 (3) - use straight slider like 01:14:007 (2) -
9. 01:15:238 (5) -
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:18:469 (1) - stack perfectly
11. 01:19:699 (5) - ctrl+g and encircle better
12. 01:22:930 (7) - use the same slider as 01:22:161 (5) -
13. 01:30:622 (3) - del one turn
14. 02:02:776 (4) - x=280 y=144
15. 02:12:315 (7) - x=184 y=208
16. 02:21:238 (4) -
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:16:776 (6,7) - make them parallel?
18. 03:20:776 (6) - x=244 y=104

all fixed!

[I]

1. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
2. 02:19:238 (2) - stack better?
3. 02:24:776 (4) - curve up would be better/
4. 02:38:622 (1) - ctrl+g
5. 02:53:238 (9) - add fin here and del the fin on 02:53:392 (1) - 's head
6. 02:54:315 (4) - could add a fin on this head if you do ^

by Laurier
I don't do anything.


Done~
Good Luck!

litoluna wrote:

yuikonnu<3

fight~star~*

Quilt wrote:

Hz's Normal it's H'z, not Hz's ;3;

SPOILER

00:56:007 (6,7,8) - i think this point shoud put 1/2 reverse slider.so i think this map need more rest point. these notes is hard a little for newbie player done

02:02:930 (1,2) - here is really overlap should move these slidersno idea what i've done here... orz

Quilt wrote:

m4m

Easy

SPOILER

00:40:469 (3) - i think 2/1 slider fit song fixed

00:42:315 (2,3) - delete (3) then (2) strech 1/2 fixed

00:44:161 (1,2) - (1) strech 1/2 then delete (2) and add 1/2 slider on 00:46:007 fixed

00:46:622 (1) - i think it should devive into two. so put 3/2 slider on 00:46:622 and 00:47:546. i think 3 more reverce slider make confuse to newbie player fixed

01:42:007 (3) - reduce 1 reverse? fixed

01:43:853 (2,3) - same as 00:42:315 (2,3) - fixed

01:46:930 (2) - delete it then add note on 01:46:930 and add 2/1 slider on 01:47:238 fixed

02:14:622 (4) - this slider should move like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920535 fixed

02:25:084 (1) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920538 fixed

02:48:315 (1,2) - move 1/2 later

fixed

Hz's Normal

SPOILER

00:56:007 (6,7,8) - i think this point shoud put 1/2 reverse slider.so i think this map need more rest point. these notes is hard a little for newbie player

02:02:930 (1,2) - here is really overlap should move these sliders

Hard

SPOILER

i point out only 1 things on this map
this map should conside "flow" if you have more importance "flow", this map is better xD

I'll try my best

Laurier Insane

SPOILER

なにもいうことがないですlol

that's all
plz send me chat if you have a question.

1. 00:42:315 (2,1) - avoid overlap
2. 00:48:469 (3,1) - ^
3. 01:09:853 (1,1) - For Easy-diff it's too difficult because of short time from spinner-end to next slider-start
4. 02:28:161 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap
5. 02:58:161 (2,1) - ^

1. 00:23:546 (3,1) - stack correctly
2. 00:48:007 (4,6) - For Normal, this overlap on the start of 00:48:776 (6) - is too difficult
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - it's less visible because of too closely-spaced notes
4. 02:30:007 (1,2,3) - it is better to avoid this overlap
5. 02:49:853 (1,2,3) - move to the time after 00:00:154

1. 00:10:866 (5) - exchange slider-start for end
2. 01:16:161 (1,2) - avoid overlap on slider-start

1. 01:00:469 (3,4) - DS:1.4x
2. 02:24:469 (3,4) - avoid overlap

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Easy]

1. 00:42:315 (2,1) - avoid overlap -fixed!
2. 00:48:469 (3,1) - ^ -fixed!
3. 01:09:853 (1,1) - For Easy-diff it's too difficult because of short time from spinner-end to next slider-start -fixed!
4. 02:28:161 (1,2,3) - avoid overlap -fixed!
5. 02:58:161 (2,1) - ^

-fixed!
[H'z Normal]

1. 00:23:546 (3,1) - stack correctly
2. 00:48:007 (4,6) - For Normal, this overlap on the start of 00:48:776 (6) - is too difficult
3. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - it's less visible because of too closely-spaced notes
4. 02:30:007 (1,2,3) - it is better to avoid this overlap
5. 02:49:853 (1,2,3) - move to the time after 00:00:154

[Hard]

1. 00:10:866 (5) - exchange slider-start for end -fixed!
2. 01:16:161 (1,2) - avoid overlap on slider-start

-fixed!
[Laurier's Insane]

1. 01:00:469 (3,4) - DS:1.4x
2. 02:24:469 (3,4) - avoid overlap

I like yuikonnu~ Good song!
~Good Luck~

MFZ wrote:

From my queue :3

[Easy]
HP +1 would be better imo -fixed

00:13:320 (1) - reNC, no point in this NC imo :3 -fixed

01:12:007 (1) - sounds a little bit weird and confusing, I recommend putting a 1/1 slider on the previous red tick(http://puu.sh/43rP5.jpg)-fixed thanks!


[]

[H'z Normal]

is this really NORMAL? ;_;

00:19:393 (1,2) - Doesn't look good, unstack
00:48:776 (6) - This is going to be unreadable for most people, especially since it's Normal(but I wouldn't do it even in hard diff)
00:56:007 (6,1,1,1,1,1) - this part is kinda unreadable in rhythmic sense
02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - wat, such patterns should be in insanes, not in normals ;_;

[]

[Hard]
AR -1 I think 8 is okay

00:42:776 (6) - NC - -fixed
01:49:853 - put a circle here (x:188 y:268) -fixed

[]

[Insane]

Looks OK :3

[]

Good mapset, good luck on ranking it! :3

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

+1 star cuz M4M

[General]
Good.

[Easy]
Try to follow full Distance Snap with the map
Too many notes on red ticks, it looks quite imbalanced
00:00:230 - Not suggested to map this part for Easy
00:15:502 - Spinner can be considered to start here
00:01:320 (2) - Try not to stack the reverse hit with next slider
00:02:139 (3) - (3) is half hidden, change it if possible
00:20:469 (2,3,4,5) - Remove claps
00:23:084 (1) - Follow 0.8x or 0.9x DS (Distance Snap) , but not suggested to change DS for Easy tho
00:22:930 - Add a circle
00:27:546 (6) - Extend it to 00:28:007 -
00:39:238 (1) - Try not to put Circle for first note, seems it's harder to score than slider
00:44:161 (1) - DS
00:44:161 (1) - Or make the curve to be like image below if you wanna keep the DS

Image

00:46:007 (2) - Make DS same with 00:46:622 (1) -
01:09:853 (1) - Spinner is quite short for Easy
01:11:699 (1) - Not suggest to put on red tick for first hit
01:15:546 (4) - DS
01:19:853 (5) - Move it to 01:19:699 - and extend the slider to 01:20:469 -
01:28:469 (2) - Make it more curvy seems 01:26:622 (1) - is curved
01:40:469 - Make a slider here and ends at 01:40:776 -
01:47:853 (4,1) - Different color of AR stack makes confusing
01:48:161 (1) - Try not to make it bounce 2 times because this slider previously 01:45:699 (1) - only bounces 1 time
02:02:930 (5) - This slider is strange, follow 1/2 instead of 1/4
02:15:238 (1) - Distance Snap
02:48:622 (1) - ^
02:49:238 (2) - ^
02:52:315 - KIAI ends here and starts at 02:53:238 - here again (for a flash effect, and matching with the cover)
02:54:622 (1) - Try to follow 1/2
03:29:546 (4) - Replace it with 2 sliders with no reverse
03:34:315 (1) - Remove it and extend the spinner to this timing

fixed everything except 2~3 things

[H'Z Normal]
Mapping is nice, just a little comments
Slider vel is a little fast for normal
Consider to make it as "Normal+" or "Hard" , the tapping, stacks and slider vel doesn't suit for normal
For 3 mins song, hard usually takes 4 - 4.5 star for system rating
00:29:084 (1) - Clap
00:29:084 (1) - Follow DS
00:57:853 (1) - Don't stack with previous circle
02:00:161 (3,4,1) - Can't see any rehearsing sign before (not sure how to express), it's not a nice stack for normal
02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - Too confusing for normal

[Hard]
Reduce Approach Rate by: -1
00:50:930 (7) - Change the slider to 1/2 ticks
01:10:315 (1) - Make it bounces 1 more time
02:06:007 (4) - Make this curve at another sider (curve to up)
02:52:161 - Timing follow H'Z Normal or mods mentioned on Easy diff

all fixed~

[Laurier's Insane]
Nothing much to mod for this diff
AR: -1 looks better for me

ts8zs wrote:

[Hard]
00:01:320 (2) - last point 360,224
00:12:230 (6) - ctrl+G?
00:41:699 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931694
00:57:853 (1) - NC
02:00:930 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931697
02:30:007 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931699
03:05:546 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931700
03:09:392 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931701
need more attitions to small things:3
03:13:084 (1) - move 3rd point up
[Laurier's Insane]
00:34:161 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:35:853 (2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931713
00:49:084 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:50:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931715
01:03:546 (5,6) - Exchange position
02:02:315 (1) - NC to help read map
02:04:315 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931717
02:06:315 (5) - Ctrl+G
02:13:238 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:21:084 (5) - 320,204
02:21:853 (3,4) - exchange position
02:23:699 (1) - Ctrl+G
02:24:161 (2) - Ctrl+G
03:05:238 (3,4) - exchange position
03:06:622 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:08:007 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:08:315 (1,2) - exchange position
03:21:084 - NC to help read map
03:25:238 (1) - Ctrl+G
03:29:853 (4) - Ctrl+G
03:30:161 (1) - Ctrl+G
03:34:315 (1) - NC:3

[H'z Normal]
SV is too high,I think 1.0 is betterXD
AR4 or CS4,choose one:3
00:29:084 (1) - plz don't accel XD
01:48:622 (2,3,4) - change a patten
more like a hard,but nothing bothers._.
01:59:084 (2) - remove nc
02:02:930 (1,2,3) - change a patten
02:44:161 (4,1) - swap nc
[Easy]
00:01:320 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931758
00:07:866 - Remove this clap._.
all clap._. lazy to mod this

ts8zs wrote:

just my feelling,refuse to change just write no,needn't explain,I won't be angry if you refuse to change:3
[TKsalt's Oni]
00:02:684 (6,7,8) - kd k - not fit the music.
00:04:593 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - d d k k d d k kd - ok.
00:29:084 (91,92,93,94,95) - dkkdk - kkddk
01:27:392 (437,438,439,440,441) - kkddk - noo
01:39:546 (491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - kkddkkkdkdk - keep.
02:12:161 (684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691,692) - kkdkdkdkd - no.
02:18:469 (731) - NC here to prove del 730 not effect next modding XD
> 02:18:315 (730) - remove
02:32:161 (95,96) - k K
02:53:007 (220) - k - ok.
03:26:315 (435,436,437,438,439) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/931807 - why. not fit at all.
[Muzu]
00:02:684 (6,7,8) - kd k - no.
00:04:593 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - d d k k d d k kd - ok.
02:14:160 (522,523,524,525) - kd k d - no.
02:46:776 (663) - k - nice :3c
03:10:930 (776,777,778) - ddk - ok.
03:18:776 (814,815,816) - kkk - ^
GJ:3

1. 01:08:622 (1) - move the tale to (312,136). Near from 01:09:084 (2) - a bit.
2. 02:02:315 (1) - I think you should follow the vocal here. How about like this rhythm?
   
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3. 02:05:392 - You need somthing emphasis here imo. I suggest add note here like this.
   
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4. 02:46:161 (1,2,3) - How about to make regular triangle?
5. 02:49:853 (1) - Move to a little up?
   
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6. 02:58:469 (3) - I prefer if you move this like making regular triangle with 02:57:084 (1,2) -
   
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7. 03:26:315 (1) - end at 03:27:853 -
8. 03:34:315 (1) - I think you're interpret synth by using this slider, but I also think it's superfluous. I recommend to put just "circle" instead of the slider.

1. 00:56:007 (6) - add finish at 00:56:315 -
2. 01:21:546 (2) - add finish at 01:22:161 - (considering 01:24:622 - )
3. 01:27:084 (4) - add finish on the head.
4. 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - I think it's hard to see when I considering this is Normal. You'll have to change many places to fix here, but I think you should do this.
5. 02:11:392 (4) - add finish.
6. 02:17:699 (1) - add finish on the head.
7. 02:19:392 (5) - ^
8. 02:23:699 (3) - ^
9. 02:51:392 (5) - keep 1.00x
10. 02:53:238 (1,2) - add finish on 02:53:238 (1) - 's head or 02:53:699 (2) - or both.
11. 02:54:622 (1) - add finish on the head.
12. 02:55:699 (3) - add finish.
13. 02:58:776 (4) - ^
14. 02:59:392 (1) - add finish on the head.
15. 03:03:084 (3) - add finsih.
16. 03:04:161 (6) - add finish on the tale.

1. 00:00:230 - to 00:15:502 - As here is so calm part, you should remove all whistles imo. I think it's superfluous.
2. 00:19:546 (1) - add clap or finish on the tale. Same sound is ringing at 00:19:546 (1) - as 00:19:546 -
3. 00:23:084 (2) - add clap on the head?
4. 00:28:161 (1) - add finish?
5. 00:39:238 (2) - add finish on the head,
6. 00:43:238 (2) - add clap on the tale.
7. 00:45:853 (6) - add clap on the head.
8. 00:54:007 (1) - add finish.
9. 00:56:315 (8) - ^
10. 01:06:315 (1) - add finish at 01:06:315 -
11. 01:07:546 (3) - add clap at 01:07:853 -
12. 01:08:622 (5) - add finish on the tale.
13. 01:09:853 (9) - add finish on the head.
14. 01:48:161 (1) - add finish on the head.
15. 01:48:622 (2) - ^
16. 01:49:084 (3) - add finish on the head and tale.
17. 01:50:622 (1) - add finish on the head.
18. 01:58:161 (1) - add finish.
19. 02:00:315 (3) - add finish on the tale.
20. 02:07:853 (1) - add finish on the head.
21. 02:10:161 (1) - add finish on the tale.
22. 02:11:392 (5) - add finish on the head.
23. 02:20:776 (3) - I recommend to make blanket with 02:21:238 (4) -
24. 02:52:238 - I don't think you need KIAI flash here.
25. 03:14:622 (1) - remove finish and add clap.
26. 03:14:930 (2) - add finish on the head.
27. 03:17:853 (10) - add finish.
28. 03:21:238 (7) - add finish on the tale.
29. 03:28:622 - How about to add note at same place as 03:28:776 (6) - to depict clap sounds?
30. 03:31:084 (1) - add finish at 03:31:392 -

1. You can add many more finishes, check out with my Hard's mod for reference.
2. 00:00:230 - to 00:14:411 - remove all whistles. same as Hard.
3. 01:28:161 (8,1) - stack?
4. 02:20:776 (3) - Ctrl+G?
5. 03:15:853 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Why don't you use exact star?
6. 03:23:699 - add note here.
7. 03:25:392 (1) - Ctrl+G?
8. 03:30:622 - I think you should add some notes here like this.
   
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   drums.

1. I strongly recommend changing soft-whistle2 to this because current soft-whistle2 makes a discord...
   (Japanese:不協和音が出来てるので、soft-whistle2をこっちに変えてください。。。)
2. 00:42:469 (6,7,8) - こういうリズムにして、circleを頭の方にstackさせると、バスドラとスネアの間にstreamを挟めるので自然になる気がします。
   
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3. 01:27:084 (3) - もし01:27:699 (3) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちの頭にもfinish入れるべきだと思います。
4. 01:31:084 (7) - NC?
5. 01:49:853 (3,4,5,6) - ここは曲に合わせた音取りにするべきだと思います。
   
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6. 02:19:392 (3) - もし02:18:776 (1) - の頭にfinish入れるなら、こっちにもあった方が。
7. 02:53:238 - 曲を聴いてみるとstreamはここまでじゃないかなぁと。
8. 02:58:776 (4) - 頭にadd finish、理由は今までと同じ。
9. 03:34:315 (4) - NC?

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think.
2. 01:31:238 (349) - change to K. I think 01:30:776 - < 01:31:238 -
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here I think.
4. 03:34:315 (887) - change to D is better imo.

1. 00:19:393 - You should check "Omit first bar line" here I think.
2. 01:43:084 - add d to follow vocal.
3. 02:53:699 - KIAI should be start here.
4. 03:34:315 (1211) - D?

Cah-m wrote:

Hi~ M4M request from my queue

[Ts8zs' Easy]

1. 01:08:622 (1) - move the tale to (312,136). Near from 01:09:084 (2) - a bit. keep ds
2. 02:02:315 (1) - I think you should follow the vocal here. How about like this rhythm?good idea
   
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3. 02:05:392 - You need somthing emphasis here imo. I suggest add note here like this.now is fun:3
   
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4. 02:46:161 (1,2,3) - How about to make regular triangle? how to?fixed
5. 02:49:853 (1) - Move to a little up? ^
   
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6. 02:58:469 (3) - I prefer if you move this like making regular triangle with 02:57:084 (1,2) - fixed
   
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7. 03:26:315 (1) - end at 03:27:853 - already
8. 03:34:315 (1) - I think you're interpret synth by using this slider, but I also think it's superfluous. I recommend to put just "circle" instead of the slider.slider is hard to miss:3

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232,344,108622,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,208,109084,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,208,109546,2,0,B|368:168|368:168|328:168|328:168|328:128|328:128|304:96|304:96|304:56,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,110622,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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112,208,117238,6,0,B|192:208|192:208|224:184|224:184|264:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,118161,2,2,B|352:144|352:144|328:112|328:112|328:72|328:72|304:40|304:40|280:72|280:72|240:72|240:72,1,240
152,72,119392,5,6,0:0:0:0:
152,72,119699,1,6,0:0:0:0:
88,136,120007,6,0,B|88:216|88:216|112:248,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,184,120776,2,0,L|264:184,1,80
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344,96,122007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,122315,6,0,P|416:48|344:8,1,160
344,96,123238,2,0,L|304:96,1,40
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80,64,124930,6,2,B|40:120|72:184|72:184|48:256,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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432,88,133084,6,0,P|424:152|368:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,133853,2,0,B|223:215|223:215|192:240,1,120
152,320,134622,2,0,P|184:328|240:312,1,80
312,296,135238,6,2,B|392:296|392:296|432:272,1,120
368,208,136007,2,2,P|376:168|368:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,136776,2,2,L|136:176,2,80
320,136,137699,6,0,P|328:184|272:256,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,138469,2,0,L|440:304,2,40
304,328,139084,2,0,L|240:352,2,40
296,240,139699,6,0,P|272:208|264:160,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,140315,2,0,B|240:72|208:96|208:96|160:96,1,120
40,104,141238,2,0,P|64:176|184:224,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,142315,6,0,L|352:216,2,80,0|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,143392,2,0,B|168:144|168:144|168:64|168:64|256:16|320:104|312:160|280:200,1,360
208,240,145084,6,2,B|168:240|168:240|168:320|168:320|80:368|16:280|16:224|48:152|128:144|128:144|160:144|160:144|192:120|192:120|232:120,1,560
320,120,147546,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,48,147853,6,0,P|408:144|344:208,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,148930,2,0,L|224:312,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,150007,6,0,L|120:96,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,248,151238,2,0,L|208:248,1,160
296,248,152161,2,2,L|360:232,2,40,2|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,156469,6,8,L|152:168,1,40
224,112,156930,2,0,L|264:112,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,157392,2,4,L|416:168,1,80,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,161084,6,0,L|352:296,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,161699,2,12,L|312:128,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,162315,6,0,P|136:104|136:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,163238,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|328:120|328:120|360:144|360:144|400:144,1,200
408,232,164315,6,0,B|368:232|368:232|336:256,1,80
264,312,164930,2,0,B|224:312|224:312|192:288,1,80
136,224,165546,2,0,B|136:184|136:184|112:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,216,166161,6,0,L|48:256,1,40
48,344,166622,2,0,L|0:384,2,60,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,167392,2,0,L|208:304,1,80
168,224,168007,6,0,L|304:224,1,120
344,296,168776,2,0,B|392:256|384:184|352:152|352:152|360:112,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,169853,6,0,L|184:80,3,80,4|4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,171084,2,0,B|88:120|88:120|88:160|88:160|112:192|112:192|112:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,172622,6,2,L|408:272,2,80,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,173699,2,0,L|312:176,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,174622,6,0,P|144:168|160:224,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,175392,2,0,L|280:280,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,248,176161,2,2,P|415:286|407:326,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,177084,6,0,P|280:184|240:160,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,177853,2,0,L|352:32,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,16,178469,2,0,L|224:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,179084,6,0,L|72:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,232,179699,2,0,B|88:248|128:232|128:232|168:256,1,120
232,312,180469,6,0,B|272:328|304:312|304:312|360:312,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,181699,2,2,B|256:208|256:208|264:184|264:184|264:136,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,182315,6,0,P|232:72|312:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,183084,2,0,B|408:96|448:112|448:112|488:104,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,183853,2,0,P|496:232|488:272,1,80
408,232,184469,6,0,B|368:248|328:232|328:232|288:248,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,185238,2,0,P|168:288|128:280,1,80,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,186007,2,2,P|160:112|168:72,2,80
248,112,186930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,72,187238,2,2,L|384:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,188007,2,0,L|448:336,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,224,188930,6,0,B|328:248|328:248|304:208|256:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,189699,2,0,P|208:288|168:296,1,80
40,336,190469,6,0,L|40:280,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,191084,2,0,L|40:104,1,40
144,40,191699,6,0,L|144:80,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,192315,2,0,L|144:256,1,40
248,336,192930,6,2,L|248:288,1,40
248,160,193546,2,2,L|248:112,1,40
320,72,194007,6,2,L|320:24,1,40
72,144,198007,6,0,P|144:120|200:136,1,120
272,152,198776,2,0,L|320:152,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199238,12,8,201084,0:0:0:0:
208,136,203853,6,0,P|240:113|280:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204315,12,0,205699,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206315,12,0,207853,0:0:0:0:
40,152,208776,6,0,P|80:136|136:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,209392,2,0,P|264:144|312:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,210161,2,0,P|432:136|456:176,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,211084,6,2,L|368:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,211699,2,2,L|288:344,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,212315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,280,212622,2,2,B|128:224|168:208|200:200|200:200|200:144|160:96|160:96|272:96,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,214315,6,2,L|376:192,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: