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yuikonnu - Otsukimi Recital [Osu|Taiko]

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NavyYa
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Joined February 2013
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NavyYa

wa_ wrote:

Hi!
M4M from my queue. Some suggestions and opinions, so don't take it really seriously.

[Jumping]
00:05:684 (2) - What about to use shape from previous slider? It would be more consistent.
00:19:393 - 00:28:161 - This part might be a bit less jumpy, if I were You, I'd make this part more calm and resign to large jumps (like 00:25:084 (3,4,5) ). Look at Laurier's diff - there are shorter distances between notes. I know it's Jumping diff, but jumps at this moment wouldn't match.
00:23:853 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream's shape doesn't look good and transition into slider is a bit rough.
00:48:776 (7) - Try to reverse it, may be played better.
00:54:622 (2) - Reverse for better flow?
01:08:161 (3) - You can improve shape to more circular:
SPOILER
01:24:622 (6) - Similar to above.
01:26:315 (1,3) - Try to make blanket with these notes?
01:29:699 (4) - Transition from this slider to next circle may be easier when you shorten slider to white tick and add note (when I was playing this map first time, I got confused and didn't know, when slider ends and how to go to next circle). But if You don't want to do it, just ignore it. I mean something like this:
SPOILER
(if You decide to do it, please change position of 01:30:622 (6) to obtain better flow)
01:41:392 (3) - Reversing that note would improve flow.
01:48:623 (2) - It'll look better when You remove overlap with previous slider.
01:49:084 (3) - Make this section more smooth by reversing slider.
02:02:930 (4) - Blanket with next slider would be cool. (If You want to help yourself, reverse temporarily "covered" slider. Like this:
SPOILER
02:13:238 (2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders... :D As always I suggest You something smoother:
SPOILER
02:17:084 (6) - Please make this slider "normally" circular. You did pattern like this really good earlier - at 02:14:315 (5,6,7).
02:44:622 (1,2,3) - What about to change a bit pattern? (but it may not flow)
SPOILER
02:46:546 (8) - Move it a bit down to make stream's shape better.
02:51:546 (1) - That spinner... It's really confusing with fast jumps and 1/4 triplets before, so it's really hard to get 300 ._.
03:01:084 (4) - It would be nice when You add blanket with previous slider.
03:12:161 (2,3) - I suggest You to reverse these notes and move new (2) to (236,324). It should flow better.
03:13:084 (7) - This slider looks strange... Maybe try something like this?
SPOILER
03:23:853 (1) - Better blanket would be great.
03:25:392 (1,2) - Try to reverse these sliders separately.
I generally don't like playing jumps, but this map have some kind of "magic" :)

[Insane]
01:31:084 (7,8) - These notes were confusing as stacked. Maybe unstack (8)?
03:17:238 (4) - Nazi - fix blanket with (6).
This diff is just perfect :3

[Hard]
00:47:084 (2,3) - Try to replace these shapes with something other.
01:06:007 (4) - Flow would be better, if You reverse this slider. But don't do that if You find that spacing can be too hard for Hard difficulty (2.57!)
01:13:238 (6) - Maybe try to move slider to (24,288).
01:25:084 (6) - I hope that making blanket with previous slider is possible :D
02:23:084 (2) - Fix blanket.
02:30:007 (1) - Shape still can be improved. Try this: (putted an assistant circle to help with making better shape)
SPOILER
(if necessary, stack perfectly (2) under slider tail)
02:42:315 - Put a circle here?
03:09:392 (1) - I hope that this slider won't make problems (it has negative x values).
03:13:084 (1) - You can improve this shape.

[Normal]
Just note: This difficulty have really large slider velocity (and changes). With high BPM and low AR it could be really hard to play. Maybe try to use AR6 (if it's rankable for Normal difficulty). I had really big problems with parts like 02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern would be really nice but with Approach Rate 8+. In addition, rhythm of this difficulty reminds me Hard difficulty. In my opinion, You should remove some notes (mostly 1/2 circles) and re-arrange some patterns to make it more readable at AR 5-6. But mapped really good in overall :3

Absolutely love this song and map <3 Hope I'll see it ranked soon :) Good luck!

Thanks for the mod ! xD
I fixed lots of my slider shapes~ :D
ts8zs
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[General]
AudioFilename: Otsukimi Recital.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1996
PreviewTime: 70703
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:Otsukimi Recital
TitleUnicode:オツキミリサイタル
Artist:yuikonnu
ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
Creator:[Navy]
Version:Ts8zs' Easy
Source:
Tags:utaite Jin ia kisaragi attention souzou forest kagerou project kagepro imagination mekaku city record Shizen no Teki P TKSalt Harez laurier Vocaloid3 自然の敵P
BeatmapID:280683
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Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi~From my queue. sorry for late!
So many mods already so I'll be brief ><

[Jumping]
  1. 00:43:546 (10) - NC
  2. 00:46:315 (7) - Form a circle?
    http://puu.sh/5daph.jpg
  3. 01:19:392 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
  4. 01:30:622 (6) - Move it to 01:30:776 - and adding a circle here ?
    http://puu.sh/5dawI.jpg
  5. 02:26:161 (7) - NC
  6. 02:59:084 (8) - ^
  7. 03:33:853 (7,1) - Try this:
    http://puu.sh/5daFF.jpg
Nice song! GL~
Pretty Rhythm
654 posts
Joined February 2012
Pretty Rhythm
그냥 제안인데
Jumping보다는 Insane이 낫다고 봄
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

Autumn wrote:

Hi~From my queue. sorry for late!
So many mods already so I'll be brief ><

[Jumping]
  1. 00:43:546 (10) - NC
  2. 00:46:315 (7) - Form a circle?
    http://puu.sh/5daph.jpg
  3. 01:19:392 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
  4. 01:30:622 (6) - Move it to 01:30:776 - and adding a circle here ?
    http://puu.sh/5dawI.jpg
  5. 02:26:161 (7) - NC
  6. 02:59:084 (8) - ^
  7. 03:33:853 (7,1) - Try this:
    http://puu.sh/5daFF.jpg
Nice song! GL~

Thanks~ Sorry for late check..

I fixed them all~
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

그냥 제안인데
Jumping보다는 Insane이 낫다고 봄
이게 인센난이도면 ..ㅎㄷㄷ
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Modding this map soon! :3
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hi there, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]

This difficulty has a ton of spacing issues, like a lot a lot. Spacing on the map fluctuates between 1.00-1.20 and as a result makes it look really sloppy. I'm not going to point out every instance that this happens because there is spacing issues between almost every object (no exaggeration). You really need to go through this map with a 1.1x distance snap (I'm assuming this was the intention) and clean up all of the issues. I'll try not to mention spacing next because this would make this mod be really, really long. I'm a bit surprised that no one brought this up earlier given how many mods this mapset has, but there you go.

AR3, definitely for this difficulty.

00:03:502 (3,1) - I would recommend unstacking these and doing some rearranging here, since the 2nd approach circle coming in can makes this a bit confusing for beginners.
00:24:315 (1) - I would advise you to get rid of short 1/2 sliders on the Easy diff. Without a repeat and the low SV makes these look like two circles, and this can be confusing. For this one, I suggest deleting this slider and adding a circle at 00:24:469 - instead.
00:29:699 (1,3) - This overlap doesn't look so good.
00:35:238 (2,3) - this rhythm doesn't really make a lot of sense. Here is my suggestion, which I think fits the music much better. http://puu.sh/5myGW.jpg
00:47:546 (3,1) - nazi thing here, but fix this overlap.
00:54:622 (2,3) - I did an alteration here to get rid of the 1/2 slider, see what you think of it. http://puu.sh/5myNk.jpg
01:03:392 (1,2) - fix the overlap here, looks messy
01:04:161 (2,1) - with the next slider also
01:08:622 (1) - delete this slider and add a 1/1 slider at 01:08:469. This will also fix a polarity problem you have here.
01:10:161 (3,2) - fix this overlap
01:18:161 (1,3) - fix this overlap
01:20:007 (3,2) - nazi overlap fix
01:29:546 (2) - this slider sounds weird since the vocal pick up there is pretty weak. Stick to white lines here, which feel stronger. http://puu.sh/5mz2i.jpg
01:30:622 (4) - extend this slider to end at 01:31:238. This matches the music pretty well and it also gets rid of the 1/2 slider.
01:35:853 (1) - delete this, it's pretty unnecessary
01:41:084 (3) - just make this a circle instead, It fits well enough.
01:42:315 (2) - ^
01:43:546 (2) - ^
01:44:776 (2) - ^
01:46:007 (2) - ^
01:47:238 (2,3) - definitely fix this overlap, doesn't look great
01:55:853 (1,1) - fix up this overlap
01:58:161 (2) - not a fan of this slider for the easy diff, mainly that the slider track gets all bunched up so that it is more difficulty to tell what is happening. Space it out more so that the player has more room to distinctly tell where the slider track is.
02:02:007 (4,2) - unstack these, can be confusing to read
02:02:315 (1,2,3) - two problems here. The short 1/2 slider and the double repeating slider, both of which are going to confuse beginners and are also inconsistent with your mapping. Take the pattern you did from 01:00:469 (1,2,3) and use it here again.
02:04:930 (1) - This slider isn't so great because you miss the really strong beat at 02:05:392. I would say end this slider here then add a circle at 02:05:699.
02:07:853 (1) - This feels really odd compared how you mapped the first similar section. I would say keep consistent between the two. This is how you did it the first time: 01:05:699 (1,2,1,2). Keep consistency here.
02:07:853 (1,3) - Definitely fix this overlap. Unless the player has snaking sliders on then this huge overlap will cause problems.
02:22:315 (1,3) - fix this overlap here
02:25:084 (4) - lower the end point here
02:36:469 (1,2,3) - delete these, they feel random and they're not needed.
02:41:084 (1,2) - delete these. It's better to start where the actually strong part of the song is, like how the Normal is mapped.
02:46:622 (2) - this slider is causing some bad problems here. It's snapped to a weird rhythm, which isn't suitable for your Easy diff and it messes up the polarity for the following objects. Here's the rhythm I would use for this section, which fixes up polarity problems and also fits the music nicely. http://puu.sh/5mA29.jpg
02:49:853 (1) - better here to remove a repeat and add a circle at 02:50:776 - instead. This matches the music pretty well since you put a circle where the strong drum hit happens.
03:07:238 (2,3) - polarity problem, this one will confusing so i highly suggest changing this one. Extend (2) to 03:07:699 I think, which works alright while keeping that repeating slider.
03:10:469 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - These don't work at all for me. I think this part needs to be remapped.
03:18:007 (1,2,1) - you can get rid of these, these odd breaks in the breaks (huehue) are pretty unnecessary to me.
03:24:315 (1,1) - these two spinners in a row are kind of boring, and are actually pretty bad to use on your Easy diff. Map this part out, and you can match the music instead of the vocal.

Sorry to say, but in my opinion this difficulty needs a ton of work. The spacing needs to be fixed between almost every object, which is not good. There were a lot of other problems as well that I addressed, but I know that I didn't get everything that I wanted to get to here since there are other difficulties to mod.

[Normal]

HP+1 and OD+1, would make the settings balance better. I think they are fine for this diff too, since this is almost a Hard diff.

SV settings may be a problem. The SV changes seem a bit over the top for a Normal, but we will see.

00:13:866 (2,3) - i would recommend changing this a bit, since the overlap gives the illusion of these being equally spaced tick-wise. Somewhere like (280,196) looks better to me since it is clear that (3) happens later.
00:18:230 - 0% volume is unrankable. Increase to 5% here.
00:19:393 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - you need to halve the combos here. Right now this is inconsistent with the rest of the map
00:23:546 (3,1) - fix this stack here, looks sloppy
00:40:469 (3,4,5,6) - having 4 circles spaced 1/1 is kind of boring, so I suggest putting a 1/1 slider at 00:41:084.
00:45:084 - consider adding a circle here, which would put an object on the drum beat so this part doesn't feel so empty.
00:45:853 (1) - remove NC here for consistency
00:48:469 (5,6) - this overlap here is not suitable for your Normal diff (it is even sometimes too difficult for Hard diffs as well!).
00:52:622 (3,6) - a little overlap fix here
00:56:007 (6) - clap on the repeat
00:56:622 (1,1,1,1) - don't do this on your Normal difficulty. SV increases with these combos should not be on your Normal diff, so definitely change this up.
00:58:930 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You need to halve the combos in this section. There's too many combos where you have very few objects, which isn't great.
01:00:469 (1,2) - these are weird to me because this is the only section where you map completely to the drums. It's really inconsistent with the rest of the section so I suggest you remap these matching the vocal like the rest of this part does.
01:06:930 (2,1) - these play better unstacked imo
01:10:776 (2,1) - ^
01:13:392 (6,1) - I don't like this stack here because you have flow going from 01:12:776 (4,5,6), and the stack at the end just kind of ruins it. I would say unstack.
01:15:853 (6,1) - this stack is also not fitting to the music, unstack these ones.
01:18:315 - There needs to be a circle here to match that strongn vocal
01:20:161 (5) - this needs to be changed because it goes off the playing field. Even though only silghtly, it still does so it must be adjusted.
01:20:776 - Add a 1/2 slider here at least. There is a drum roll here that must be mapped.
01:45:084 (5,6) - I'd say straighten these out. The SV is pretty low so right now they look too cramped up when they're curved and right next to each other.
01:47:392 (5) - This is a weird way to map this part after you matched the claps so much before. I suggest deleting this circle and adding a 1/1 slider instead at 01:47:238, which would match the bass slide and also give you places to hitsound so it doesn't sound empty here.
01:48:622 (2,3,4) - this isn't great for your Normal diff at all, too much of (4) is obscured. Rearrange these so that the sliders are more visible.
01:58:161 (1,1,1) - again, here the SV changes and combos don't fit a Normal diff. also, this pattern is inconsistent with the first one you did at 00:56:622 (1,1,1,1), so pick a rhythm and map both parts with that rhythm.
02:02:469 (3,4,1,2,3) - This formation 100% needs to be remapped. Way, way too much overlapping.
02:14:930 (6,3) - fix this stack
02:16:776 (4,2) - overlap here doesn't look super great
02:27:238 (5,1) - unstack these. This part with the triangle formation before says that you want each word mapped with spaced objects, so you have to continue that here.
02:30:007 (1,2,3) - this is really bad for a Normal diff. All of the slider paths are obscured, which makes it hard to read.
02:32:315 (5) - NC here for consistency
02:52:776 - add a repeating 1/2 slider here to match the drum roll. I think you really need it for this one.
03:01:699 - add a 1/2 slider here

I will stop here, since I think I have given you a lot to work on for now. I think your easier diffs need a lot of work, especially the Easy. The Normal also needs a lot of work and I am worried about your spread. Your Normal feels too difficult right now. We'll see, but for now I'll leave you with this. Good luck!
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

Moway wrote:

Hi there, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]

This difficulty has a ton of spacing issues, like a lot a lot. Spacing on the map fluctuates between 1.00-1.20 and as a result makes it look really sloppy. I'm not going to point out every instance that this happens because there is spacing issues between almost every object (no exaggeration). You really need to go through this map with a 1.1x distance snap (I'm assuming this was the intention) and clean up all of the issues. I'll try not to mention spacing next because this would make this mod be really, really long. I'm a bit surprised that no one brought this up earlier given how many mods this mapset has, but there you go.

AR3, definitely for this difficulty.

Sorry to say, but in my opinion this difficulty needs a ton of work. The spacing needs to be fixed between almost every object, which is not good. There were a lot of other problems as well that I addressed, but I know that I didn't get everything that I wanted to get to here since there are other difficulties to mod.　Because I like small gird,this really bothers nothing,and overlap dont make an effect as big as you think
Thx for mod
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NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa
Updated! Thx~
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
No kudosu!
Your video file has a mp3 file in it. Consider removing it to save space.

Have a star for good luck! Sorry for not having the time to look at this! :(
HeShu
194 posts
Joined February 2013
HeShu
Hi from my mod fabric m4m part ! (I've been quite slow, sorry -_-)

Ts8zs' Easy
09:502 Try to put the head of the slider right in front of the previous slider
32:007 It's overlapped
48:469 The slider tail is overlapped
50:315 Slider completely overlapped
1:04:161 Slider tail overlapped
1:05:666 ^
1:11:546 ^
and it goes on and on. You really need to fix all thoses overlapping problem bro :?

I'm not a huge fan of almost full slider map, but if it's your choice, no problem with that ^^

H'z Normal
Same as above, overlapping is quite a problem here for whole mapset. Please fix it
00:19:392 to next break need to have better hitsound. Rythm is good but hitsound are missing :(
00:41:699 Check this slider, it's too long and doesn't fit the rythm
Rest is good.

As I said above I'm not a huge fan of slider style, and maybe some part would be more reactive if they were more note instead of sliders.
Why the end isn't mapped ? Your map is actually unrankable because less than 85% of the map is mapped :s

Hard
It was a lot better, not that much to say, just... why so many overlap ? :o

Please fix them !

Jumping & Laurier's Insane

Both out of my playing skills :o
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
No thx
osu file format v12

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ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
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Pretty Rhythm
654 posts
Joined February 2012
Pretty Rhythm
이제 랭크조건 바뀌어서 뒤에다가 인세인 하드 써야됨 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
그냥 점핑 말고 인세인 ㄱㄱ
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
I've just had a try for Laurier's diff
and found that a finish sound seems to be missing on 02:17:699 (1) -
hope you could fix this
no kd

rank this plz
Good luck
KantoKun
1,114 posts
Joined December 2011
KantoKun
little mod =w=

mod



  • timing i think offset : 19530 is ok more =w=

    diff : jumping , change to insane or jumping insane or extra , another name can't rank

    add Nico Nico Douga in source or tag
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

kantokun wrote:

little mod =w=

mod



  • timing i think offset : 19530 is ok more =w=

    diff : jumping , change to insane or jumping insane or extra , another name can't rank

    add Nico Nico Douga in source or tag
Thank you! :)
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
m4m~

[General]

  1. Don't check 'wide screen support'
[Ts8zs's Easy]

  1. Introduction Part(00:00:230 ~ 00:19:392)'s volume is little loud. down to 30~40%
  2. 00:22:622 - Why you expand the break time? i think it's useless.
  3. 00:33:853 (1) - add finish on end of slider
  4. 00:36:315 (3) - it's awkward rhythm. At leat, it start on 00:36:622.
  5. 00:48:469 (1) - remove whistle on trunk of slider. it's not feat.
  6. 00:57:853 ~ 00:58:161 - recommend add rhythm on here.
  7. 01:57:238 (1) - remove finish
  8. 02:03:699 (3) - 2 repeats may make comfusion to Easy Player.
  9. 02:04:930 (1) - blanket
[H'z Normal]

  1. 00:14:684 (3) - NC.
  2. 00:43:546 (4) - it's overlap with (1). this may make confusion to normal player.
  3. 01:14:776 (3,4) - blanket
  4. 01:20:161 (3,1) - ^
  5. 02:07:238 (3) - clap on end of slider
  6. 02:11:699 - In slidertick, Sound can't change. :( 60% is proper
  7. 02:56:469 (5) - clap on end of slider
  8. 03:00:469 (3) - NC?
[TK MUZU]

  1. 00:48:930 (156) - k
  2. 00:57:238 (197,199) - k d
  3. 01:50:238 (411) - d?
  4. 01:58:776 (453,455) - same with 2nd mod
  5. 02:36:469 (617,618) - there is no clap sound on 618. 618 moves to 02:36:776
おにモヂンクは。。。むずかしい！！ :o

[Hard]
AR 7

  1. 00:23:853 (4) - 클랩 빼주세요 어색하네요
  2. 00:25:546 (4) - 앞 슬라이더 잘 감싸도록
  3. 00:46:622 (1,2,3,4) - 피니쉬도 같이 넣어보세요
  4. 00:48:469 (5) - 앞뒤로 클랩
  5. 01:06:007 (4) - Ctrl+G 점프 넣어봅시다!
  6. 01:10:776 (2) - 뉴콤보
  7. 01:11:238 (1) - 슬라이더 마지막에 피니쉬 넣어주세요
  8. 01:19:699 (5) - 4번 노트 잘 감싸주세요
  9. 01:26:315 (9) - 피니쉬
  10. 01:45:699 (6) - 뉴콤보
  11. 01:58:161 (1) - 01:59:084 까지 줄이고, 01:59:392 01:59:699 - 이 부분에 리듬 추가해보세요
  12. 03:12:315 (2) - 3번 슬라이드에 겹치는 것은 어떤가요?
쿠도스 2개 냠냠 굿럭! 8-)
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa
하나 빼고 다 고쳤습니다 감사합니다!
AR8은 포기할수가없는..ㅋㅋ
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
Introduction Part(00:00:230 ~ 00:19:392)'s volume is little loud. down to 30~40% no
00:22:622 - Why you expand the break time? i think it's useless. no
00:33:853 (1) - add finish on end of slider no
01:57:238 (1) - remove finish no
other fixed
._.
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264,200,83546,6,2,B|224:216|184:200|184:200|144:224,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,84315,2,2,P|136:304|184:296,1,80,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,85084,2,2,L|392:288,2,80
232,240,86007,6,0,P|192:176|200:144,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,86622,2,0,B|328:160|328:160|368:160|392:128,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,87392,2,0,L|224:72,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,72,88469,6,0,P|440:152|464:224,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,89546,2,0,B|320:232|320:232|216:216|160:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,90622,2,0,L|56:288,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,95853,6,4,P|256:216|304:200,1,80
80,168,99546,6,0,B|112:192|112:192|152:192|152:192|184:168|184:168|224:168|224:168|256:192|256:192|296:192,1,240
384,192,100776,1,12,0:0:0:0:
424,112,101084,2,8,L|480:112,1,40
352,40,101699,6,0,L|248:40,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,88,102315,2,8,L|136:88,1,40
256,184,102930,6,0,L|344:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,240,103546,2,8,L|480:240,1,40
352,328,104161,6,0,L|256:328,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,272,104776,2,8,L|136:272,1,40
56,184,105392,6,0,L|152:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,106007,2,8,L|280:128,1,40
336,128,106469,6,0,L|368:176,2,40,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,107238,2,0,B|320:264|320:264|368:248|416:272,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,108161,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,344,108622,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,208,109084,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,208,109546,2,0,B|368:168|368:168|328:168|328:168|328:128|328:128|304:96|304:96|304:56,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,110622,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,128,110930,2,0,L|448:232,1,80
448,296,111546,2,0,B|416:320|416:320|376:320|376:320|344:344|344:344|304:344|272:312,2,200
384,232,113392,6,0,B|304:232|304:232|272:208|272:208|184:208,1,200
128,144,114469,2,0,B|160:120|160:120|200:120|200:120|232:96|232:96|272:96|272:96|304:120|304:120|344:120|344:120|376:144,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,115853,6,0,B|312:248|312:248|328:288|312:328,1,120
232,288,116622,2,0,L|136:288,1,80
112,208,117238,6,0,B|192:208|192:208|224:184|224:184|264:184,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,118161,2,2,B|352:144|352:144|328:112|328:112|328:72|328:72|304:40|304:40|280:72|280:72|240:72|240:72,1,240
152,72,119392,5,6,0:0:0:0:
64,56,119699,1,6,0:0:0:0:
88,136,120007,6,0,B|88:216|88:216|112:248,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,184,120776,2,0,L|264:184,1,80
344,184,121392,2,0,L|344:248,2,40
344,96,122007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,122315,6,0,P|416:48|344:8,1,160
344,96,123238,2,0,L|304:96,1,40
288,184,123699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,124007,2,0,L|136:128,2,80,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,124930,6,2,B|40:120|72:184|72:184|48:256,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,126007,2,0,L|312:256,2,160
80,88,127853,6,0,B|112:64|112:64|152:64|152:64|184:88|184:88|224:88|224:88|256:64|256:64|296:64|296:64|328:40|328:40|368:40,2,320,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,144,130622,6,0,L|8:184,1,40
88,216,131084,2,0,L|88:256,2,40,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,131699,2,2,B|128:128|128:128|160:104|160:104|200:104|200:104|232:80|232:80|272:80|272:80|304:104|304:104|352:104,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,133084,6,0,P|424:152|368:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,133853,2,0,B|223:215|223:215|192:240,1,120
152,320,134622,2,0,P|184:328|240:312,1,80
312,296,135238,6,2,B|392:296|392:296|432:272,1,120
368,208,136007,2,2,P|376:168|368:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,136776,2,2,L|136:176,2,80
320,136,137699,6,0,P|328:184|272:256,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,280,138469,2,0,L|440:304,2,40
304,328,139084,2,0,L|240:352,2,40
296,240,139699,6,0,P|272:208|264:160,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,140315,2,0,B|240:72|208:96|208:96|160:96,1,120
40,104,141238,2,0,P|64:176|184:224,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,142315,6,0,L|352:208,2,80,0|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,143392,2,0,L|296:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,32,144161,2,0,P|416:104|384:184,1,160
328,256,145084,2,2,B|256:224|256:224|208:216,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,145853,2,0,P|88:216|48:184,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,146622,2,2,B|240:80|240:80|256:48|296:32,1,160
320,120,147546,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,48,147853,6,0,P|408:144|344:208,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,148930,2,0,L|224:312,2,80,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,150007,6,0,L|120:96,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,248,151238,2,0,L|208:248,1,160
296,248,152161,2,2,L|360:232,2,40,2|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,156469,6,8,L|152:168,1,40
224,112,156930,2,0,L|264:112,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,157392,2,4,L|416:168,1,80,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,161084,6,0,L|352:296,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,161699,2,12,L|312:128,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,56,162315,6,0,P|136:104|136:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,163238,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|328:120|328:120|360:144|360:144|400:144,1,200
408,232,164315,6,0,B|368:232|368:232|336:256,1,80
248,256,164930,2,0,B|208:256|208:256|176:232,1,80
128,160,165546,2,0,B|128:120|128:120|104:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,152,166161,6,0,L|48:192,1,40
48,280,166622,2,0,P|40:312|48:352,2,60,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,320,167392,2,0,L|208:320,1,80
168,240,168007,6,0,L|304:240,1,120
344,312,168776,2,0,B|392:272|384:200|352:168|352:168|360:128,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,88,169853,6,0,L|184:88,3,80,4|4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,88,171084,2,0,B|88:120|88:120|88:160|88:160|112:192|112:192|112:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,172622,6,2,L|408:272,2,80,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,173699,2,0,L|312:176,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,104,174622,6,0,P|144:168|160:224,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,175392,2,0,L|280:280,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,248,176161,2,2,P|415:286|407:326,2,80,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,177084,6,0,P|280:184|240:160,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,177853,2,0,L|352:32,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,16,178469,2,0,L|224:88,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,179084,6,0,P|128:144|88:152,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,232,179699,2,0,B|88:248|128:232|128:232|168:256,1,120
232,312,180469,6,0,B|272:328|304:312|304:312|360:312,2,120,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,232,181699,2,2,B|256:208|256:208|264:184|264:184|264:136,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,112,182315,6,0,P|232:72|312:80,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,183084,2,0,B|408:96|448:112|448:112|488:104,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,183853,2,0,P|496:232|488:272,1,80
408,232,184469,6,0,B|368:248|328:232|328:232|288:248,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,185238,2,0,P|168:288|128:280,1,80,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,152,186007,2,2,P|160:112|168:72,2,80
248,112,186930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,72,187238,2,2,L|384:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,248,188007,2,0,L|448:336,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,188930,6,0,B|328:264|328:264|312:224|264:208,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,189699,2,0,P|208:288|168:296,1,80
40,336,190469,6,0,L|40:280,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,191084,2,0,L|40:104,1,40
144,40,191699,6,0,L|144:80,1,40,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,192315,2,0,L|144:256,1,40
248,336,192930,6,2,L|248:288,1,40
248,160,193546,2,2,L|248:112,1,40
320,72,194007,6,2,L|320:24,1,40
72,144,198007,6,0,P|144:120|200:136,1,120
272,152,198776,2,0,L|320:152,2,40,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199238,12,8,201084,0:0:0:0:
208,136,203853,6,0,P|240:113|280:113,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204315,12,0,205699,0:0:0:0:
256,192,206315,12,0,207853,0:0:0:0:
40,152,208776,6,0,P|80:136|136:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,209392,2,0,P|264:144|312:112,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,210161,2,0,P|432:136|456:176,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,211084,6,2,L|368:296,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,211699,2,2,L|288:344,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,296,212315,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,280,212622,2,2,B|128:224|168:208|200:200|200:200|200:144|160:96|160:96|272:96,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,96,214315,6,2,L|368:192,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
Fix v3.a (random version ;-;) http://puu.sh/6N7Vb.rar

  1. Inconsistent AudioLeadIn
  2. Inconsistent Tags
  3. Fix Source
  4. Fix Preview Time
  5. Inconsistent Colour Combos
  6. Fix Ts8zs to ts8zs
  7. etc.
Includes ts8zs' last update and my update

thank you

mod fix

TaMul wrote:

[H'z Normal]

  1. 00:14:684 (3) - NC. nice idea
  2. 00:43:546 (4) - it's overlap with (1). this may make confusion to normal player. hmm... i will think for it later
  3. 01:14:776 (3,4) - blanket fix
  4. 01:20:161 (3,1) - ^ ^
  5. 02:07:238 (3) - clap on end of slider ^
  6. 02:11:699 - In slidertick, Sound can't change. :( 60% is proper have different ways
  7. 02:56:469 (5) - clap on end of slider ups fix
  8. 03:00:469 (3) - NC? yea
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
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TKS

TaMul wrote:

[TK MUZU]

  1. 00:48:930 (156) - k - fixed.
  2. 00:57:238 (197,199) - k d - changed some notes.
  3. 01:50:238 (411) - d? - unacceptable pattern for Muzu.
  4. 01:58:776 (453,455) - same with 2nd mod - changed some notes.
  5. 02:36:469 (617,618) - there is no clap sound on 618. 618 moves to 02:36:776 - current pattern is following clap + snare sounds. its fine imo.
おにモヂンクは。。。むずかしい！！ :o
むずかしい！！
but still good mod. thanks!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ecital.rar
NavyYa
141 posts
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Topic Starter
NavyYa
Updated!
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Easy
03:23:853 (1,1) - perhaps this:


Normal
00:29:084 (1) - is this sped up slider really needed?
01:13:699 (1,2) - not tooo crazy about this overlap
01:44:315 (3) - possibly something like this:

02:14:930 (5) - looks kinda bad putting this circle under the middle of the slider. Possibly move this someone else?
02:44:238 - the hitsounded slider tick sounds kinda weird here

Hard
01:16:161 (1,2) - you don't have to change this overlap, but there better options
01:23:546 (1,2) - spacing
01:45:699 (1) - maybe something like this:

I basically just copied (2) and control+G to reverse it
01:49:853 (4) - new combo here?
02:25:084 (1) - reverse the direction of this one:

this should flow better from (7) of the previous combo to (1).
02:56:469 (6,7) - [nazi] Make these parallel?
03:05:546 (1) - i think i understand why this new combo is here, but is it really need. (you don't have to change this)


(WILL FINISH LATER)

EDIT:
Extra
00:13:320 (1) - possibly center this between (2,3,4)
00:30:469 (5) - could be shaped better

Overall: I believe that the overall note placement of this map could have better which would have helped with the flow

Laurier's diff is fine
wendao
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Joined August 2012
wendao

ouranhshc wrote:

Normal
00:29:084 (1) - is this sped up slider really needed? >///< yes i guess, but i reduced the speed a bit
01:13:699 (1,2) - not tooo crazy about this overlap fix'd a bit
01:44:315 (3) - possibly something like this: i guess it's fine

02:14:930 (5) - looks kinda bad putting this circle under the middle of the slider. Possibly move this someone else? fix'd
02:44:238 - the hitsounded slider tick sounds kinda weird here i think it's fine?!?!
thanks, http://puu.sh/6YgCy.rar
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
owo Sorry for late M4M ~ ! >o<'' From my queue~
[ts8zs' Easy]
00:31:392 (2) -Remove clap please.
[H'z Normal]
00:29:084 (1) -Why changed the slider velocity? Change the slider velocity to the normal one.

I checked the other diffs they were really fine. o3o This map should be ranked now~ >w<
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

ouranhshc wrote:

Easy
03:23:853 (1,1) - perhaps this:


Normal
00:29:084 (1) - is this sped up slider really needed?
01:13:699 (1,2) - not tooo crazy about this overlap
01:44:315 (3) - possibly something like this:

02:14:930 (5) - looks kinda bad putting this circle under the middle of the slider. Possibly move this someone else?
02:44:238 - the hitsounded slider tick sounds kinda weird here

Hard
01:16:161 (1,2) - you don't have to change this overlap, but there better options fixed
01:23:546 (1,2) - spacing
01:45:699 (1) - maybe something like this:

I basically just copied (2) and control+G to reverse it fixed
01:49:853 (4) - new combo here? fixed
02:25:084 (1) - reverse the direction of this one: fixed

this should flow better from (7) of the previous combo to (1).
02:56:469 (6,7) - [nazi] Make these parallel? fixed
03:05:546 (1) - i think i understand why this new combo is here, but is it really need. (you don't have to change this)


(WILL FINISH LATER)

EDIT:
Extra
00:13:320 (1) - possibly center this between (2,3,4)
00:30:469 (5) - could be shaped better

Overall: I believe that the overall note placement of this map could have better which would have helped with the flow

Laurier's diff is fine
Thanks for the mod~ :)
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa
Updated!

+ 100 sp lol

When I can rank this???
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
1st, a BAT should buuble it before its ranked.
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao

Lapis Aoki wrote:

[H'z Normal]
00:29:084 (1) -Why changed the slider velocity? Change the slider velocity to the normal one.
i don't know what do you mean

if you meant back to 1.5x.. no, i will keep the consistency from now on, 0.8x for slow down part, 1.0x normal, 1.2x for speed up

if you meant back to 1.0x.. no, because it's fit the song xD yeah, seriously, it's fit the song

sorry, no change D;
wendao
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wendao
did some minor fix here

sorry can't puush for now :/
Ajo Joestar
78 posts
Joined May 2013
Ajo Joestar
Hi.
Extra
00:00:230 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Why don't you use a smaller spacing ? This part is really slow with a huge spacing.
00:28:161 (1) - I'd add the stream and so, i don't like the spiner.
01:30:622 (6,1) - try to stack it, it feels weird this way.
02:31:853 (5,6) - same here ^ ^
03:01:392 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I'd use more spacing, spread it more since it's kiai,
LQA20Ans
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LQA20Ans
101SP ㄷㄷ...
힘내세요 :(
NavyYa
141 posts
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Topic Starter
NavyYa

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

101SP ㄷㄷ...
힘내세요 :(

ㅋㅋ..그냥 안하려고요
wendao
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Joined August 2012
wendao
STAPH, WHERE'S THE BAT?? IT'S +102 SP NOW!!!
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Graveyard ~ ? ;w; Why BAT's why ~ ;-;
bilqiscutee
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Joined January 2014
bilqiscutee
i like this map, but i just play mania mode only-_- I wish there was a mania mode u.u
jst hope.. :)
Angelo
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Joined November 2012
Angelo
Hello !
Here is my mod (i'm a newbie modder/it's my 2nd mod lol) :

[General]
Remove the sound from the video, and the file will be lighter, go here for more help ;)
[ ts8zs' Easy]
  1. Maybe add a capital letter (Ts8zs instead of ts8zs) for the name of the diff because the T in your username is in capital :roll: yes I'm a perfectionist
  2. 00:35:238 (2) - I don't like this slider, you should do something like this instead of this, and it's a bit off the grid
  3. 01:10:930 (1) - Maybe add a Finish sound on the slider because of this 02:12:776 - ?
  4. 01:29:699 (2) - I don't this one too, you should do something like this instead of this
  5. 02:22:315 (1) - Modify the slider and add a circle like this to add a whistle sound on the slider and then add a whistle sound on the circle you have placed because of this 01:20:776 (1) -
  6. 02:46:622 (2) - Replace this with something like this ?
  7. 02:48:007 (1) - This sounds weird, you should do something like this instead of this
  8. 03:09:699 (2) - Modify this slider to something like this instead of this because i think it sounds weird
  9. 03:19:238 (1) - The spinner should stop later maybe because it sounds weird too, you should do this instead of this
That's all for your diff Ts8zs ;)
[ H'z Normal]
  1. 01:17:238 (3,4) - The hitsounds sounds weird here, change them please :?
  2. 01:21:084 (1) - It's my opinion but, i think it's better to change this slider to something like this and add timing points
  3. 02:44:007 (1) - The hitsound on the slidertick sounds weird
That's all for you diff Harez ;)
[ Hard]
  1. 03:14:930 (2) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here, replace it with a whistle hitsound maybe ?
  2. 03:31:084 (1) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here too, remove it please :?
That's all for your diff NavyYa ;)
[ Laurier's Insane]
  1. 02:53:392 (1) - This slider is a little bit weird, so i think you should do something like this instead of this
  2. 03:31:853 (2) - Add a Clap hitsound here
  3. 03:32:007 - Add a Finish hitsound here
  4. 03:32:315 - ^
  5. 03:32:622 (1) - ^
  6. 03:32:930 (3) - ^
  7. 03:33:238 (5) - ^
  8. 03:33:853 - ^
That's all for your diff Laurier ;)
[ Extra]
  1. 01:44:776 - I'm not sure about this but i think you should add a whistle hitsound here because i think it sounds good with the others hitsounds
  2. 01:45:084 - ^
  3. 01:45:699 - ^
  4. 01:46:161 - ^
  5. 02:32:161 - ^
  6. 02:32:315 - ^
  7. 03:13:699 - ^
  8. 03:14:007 - ^
  9. 03:14:161 - ^
  10. 03:14:930 (2) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here, remove it maybe ?
  11. 03:31:084 - Add a Clap hitsound here maybe ?
  12. 03:31:238 - Replace the Finish hitsound with a Clap ?
  13. 03:31:392 - Add a Clap hitsound here maybe ?
  14. 03:31:699 - ^
  15. 03:31:853 - ^
  16. 03:32:007 - ^
  17. 03:32:315 - ^
  18. 03:32:622 - ^
  19. 03:34:315 - Add a Finish hitsound here ?
That's all for your diff, yeah i know it's only about hitsounds but now it will sounds better i think ^^

That was my mod, i hope it will be helpful for you !
I ♥ the music and the mapset,
Your map will be ranked for sure ;)

Good luck ! :)

+sorry for my bad english :/
Last edited by Angelo , edited 3 times in total.
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
fix the 1st thing only

http://puu.sh/8HsZk.osu

to NavyYa: you forgot to capitalize the y at Navyya in your Hard diff
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

Angelo wrote:

Hello !
Here is my mod (i'm a newbie modder/it's my 2nd mod lol) :

[General]
Remove the sound from the video, and the file will be lighter, go here for more help ;)
[ ts8zs' Easy]
  1. Maybe add a capital letter (Ts8zs instead of ts8zs) for the name of the diff because the T in your username is in capital :roll: yes I'm a perfectionist
  2. 00:35:238 (2) - I don't like this slider, you should do something like this instead of this, and it's a bit off the grid
  3. 01:10:930 (1) - Maybe add a Finish sound on the slider because of this 02:12:776 - ?
  4. 01:29:699 (2) - I don't this one too, you should do something like this instead of this
  5. 02:22:315 (1) - Modify the slider and add a circle like this to add a whistle sound on the slider and then add a whistle sound on the circle you have placed because of this 01:20:776 (1) -
  6. 02:46:622 (2) - Replace this with something like this ?
  7. 02:48:007 (1) - This sounds weird, you should do something like this instead of this
  8. 03:09:699 (2) - Modify this slider to something like this instead of this because i think it sounds weird
  9. 03:19:238 (1) - The spinner should stop later maybe because it sounds weird too, you should do this instead of this
That's all for your diff Ts8zs ;)
[ H'z Normal]
  1. 01:17:238 (3,4) - The hitsounds sounds weird here, change them please :?
  2. 01:21:084 (1) - It's my opinion but, i think it's better to change this slider to something like this and add timing points
  3. 02:44:007 (1) - The hitsound on the slidertick sounds weird
That's all for you diff Harez ;)
[ Hard]
  1. 03:14:930 (2) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here, replace it with a whistle hitsound maybe ?
  2. 03:31:084 (1) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here too, remove it please :?
That's all for your diff NavyYa ;)
[ Laurier's Insane]
  1. 02:53:392 (1) - This slider is a little bit weird, so i think you should do something like this instead of this
  2. 03:31:853 (2) - Add a Clap hitsound here
  3. 03:32:007 - Add a Finish hitsound here
  4. 03:32:315 - ^
  5. 03:32:622 (1) - ^
  6. 03:32:930 (3) - ^
  7. 03:33:238 (5) - ^
  8. 03:33:853 - ^
That's all for your diff Laurier ;)
[ Extra]
  1. 01:44:776 - I'm not sure about this but i think you should add a whistle hitsound here because i think it sounds good with the others hitsounds
  2. 01:45:084 - ^
  3. 01:45:699 - ^
  4. 01:46:161 - ^
  5. 02:32:161 - ^
  6. 02:32:315 - ^
  7. 03:13:699 - ^
  8. 03:14:007 - ^
  9. 03:14:161 - ^
  10. 03:14:930 (2) - Finish hitsound sounds weird here, remove it maybe ?
  11. 03:31:084 - Add a Clap hitsound here maybe ?
  12. 03:31:238 - Replace the Finish hitsound with a Clap ?
  13. 03:31:392 - Add a Clap hitsound here maybe ?
  14. 03:31:699 - ^
  15. 03:31:853 - ^
  16. 03:32:007 - ^
  17. 03:32:315 - ^
  18. 03:32:622 - ^
  19. 03:34:315 - Add a Finish hitsound here ?
That's all for your diff, yeah i know it's only about hitsounds but now it will sounds better i think ^^

That was my mod, i hope it will be helpful for you !
I ♥ the music and the mapset,
Your map will be ranked for sure ;)

Good luck ! :)

+sorry for my bad english :/
Thanks! your mod is very helpful for me~
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
야~ 이런모딩만 벌써 3번짼가 4번째다!

소스에 니코니코 동화는 언랭요소. 네. 그렇다고 합니다.. 태그로 옮기시면 참 좋을듯 합니다.

이런걸로 쿠도스 받긴 이제 양심에 찔리지..않습니다 하하.하..
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

Losertic wrote:

야~ 이런모딩만 벌써 3번짼가 4번째다!

소스에 니코니코 동화는 언랭요소. 네. 그렇다고 합니다.. 태그로 옮기시면 참 좋을듯 합니다.

이런걸로 쿠도스 받긴 이제 양심에 찔리지..않습니다 하하.하..
ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 님살아계셨네요 오랜만이에여 ㅋㅋ
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
lol to be completely honest, i don't think the "extra" is hard enough to be an extra :I maybe just rename to insane?

also if you can catch me online i'd like to irc mod this
Alplaza
42 posts
Joined December 2012
Alplaza
Can I make an Overjoy ( something above Extra ) ? I really hate scanter's too-less-hits style . I don't mind die earlier ( the music is terrible ! ) but maybe I'll have to mute yuikonnu anyway .
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa
Remapped Extra. and again challenge to rank

Let's do it
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
wow

probably I will remap my Normal diff :o
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
1,380 posts
Joined July 2011
TKS

wendao wrote:

wow

probably I will remap
NavyYa
141 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
NavyYa

wendao wrote:

wow

probably I will remap my Normal diff :o

I have to rename normal diff.

What name do you want?
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
wendao's Normal obviously

also add wendao2000 to tags, kept Harez
superSSS
67 posts
Joined April 2014
superSSS
TK's Oni
02:21:238 (750) - add finish
02:32:315 (827) - delete finish
02:51:546 (936,937,938,939,940,941,942,943,944) - change ddkkkkddk
01:32:776 (467,468,469) - delete 01:32:776 - add don
01:02:776 (278) - add finish
Extra
01:14:776 (5) - change
weed96
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Joined March 2015
weed96
좋다 ㅎㅎㅎㅎㅎㅎ
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