Yo.
[General]
Good luck!
[General]
Try to drag start of your break to 01:03:580 (2) - and end of your break to 01:51:415. So, it will make more sense with music,
- Try to reduce HP Drain and OD by one tick to make diff a bit easier. Song is relaxing, therefore diffs should be relaxing, too!
- 00:38:730 (1,1) - it's intentional, right? Since BPM is slow, it's ok to have 1/1 gap here. I'm just making sure that it's done on purpose.
- 00:51:155 (1,3) - nazi - that'd be great if you could make it into a blanket slider. Blanket sliders fits with this song much better, they feel "more relaxing". example
- 01:53:279 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - such things are really stressful for beginners. They have to click 8(!) notes ina row, that's too much for them. Please, replace some of circles with sliders!
- 01:58:248 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if such things are acceptable for the easiest diff. I'd recommend you to make something easier readable here. For example, this pattern
Note: example is ugly, but you can see my idea, right? - 02:23:097 (3,4,5,6) - try to use Ctrl+G on them and listen to rhythm, sounds much better, imo. If you agree, don't forget to fix spacing and hitsounds!]
- To get better balanced diff spread and more challenging diff set OD and HP to 4. Try it and you'll like it! Even for the slow song, it fits much better, imo.
Diff looks good. But it feels more like [Normal+] because 1/2 notes here make it too hard. BPM is slow, but song is relaxing. So, I'v expected something easier. Anyway, diff itself has cute rhythm and reasonable patterns, so it's ok.
- If you agreed with my suggestions about diff settings on other diffs, set HP Drain here to 6. So, we can keep diff spread more balanced.
- 00:27:238 (6) - I'm not sure, but I'd place here a Nw Combo to emphasize vocals. Also, NC here will fit with your rhythm pretty good.
- 01:04:512 - consider adding a circle (or adding a repeat to 01:04:201 (4)) - to emphasize music. It will also make your rhythm more consistent.
Note: 01:09:482 - 01:15:383 - same. Please, do not ignore such beats. - 02:13:157 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - placement looks a little bit random. I think you can re-arrange it to something better-looking, bu it's totally up to you. TRIANGLES <3
Rest looks great! I like 02:19:370 (4,5,6) - patterns like this one.
Good luck!