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Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 31. August 2013 at 19:48:27

Artist: After School
Title: Bang!
Tags: Virgin k-pop Sonnyc
BPM: 120
Filesize: 22757kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bang! (4,94 stars, 479 notes)
  2. Normal (3,02 stars, 211 notes)
  3. Sonnyc's Hard (4,47 stars, 279 notes)
Download: After School - Bang!
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I’m shining with a blinding light, follow me Oh! Oh! Oh!
Sneer out the fake words Ha! Ha! Ha!
Only thing you have is being pretty, you’re no more No! No! No!
Throw it into the electrifying music Bang! Bang! Bang!
We are!! Oh~ After!! School Up!! All of you move! Check it out!! Try taking everything!! A-ha! A-ha! A-ha!
Right now!! Oh~ After!! School Up!! Everyone go crazy!! shout!! like this again!! A-ha! A-ha! A-ha!

Because I love After School and this Song <3
Hope you will like and enjoy it ~

Thanks to XinCrin for the skin elements ~

Mapset

Normal - Done

Another Hard by Sonnyc - Done

Bang! - Done
Last edited by Dark_Ai , edited 26 times in total.
Lally
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Lally
\o3o/
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
We are Pending bby \o3o/ Ready for mod ~
ty you for the stars ~ C:
Kurai
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Kurai
Yes, yes, yes, yes ! *O*
Roxas
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Roxas
Fixed the offset and some other things in IRC! :)
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
Thank you hentai for mod >w< and thanks very much kurai for stars o3o

Updated ~
rezoons
rezoons
Hi :),

Mod because you asked by PM:

[Général]
  1. I think the offset and/or the bpm is bad. Listen to 01:10:280 to 01:12:780 at 50%, we can clearly hear that the clap in the music and the clap of your hitsounds aren't at the same time.
    I'm really bad at finding timing so i can't really help you with this but you need to do a timing check.
    I moved all the note 1/8 beat earlier (offset=10217) and it seems way better but try to find a more precise timing.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:217 (1,2,1) - The 3/4 are really to hard for a "Normal" diff. I would suggest you to use this timing instead:

    I know the timing isn't perfect but it's the only idea i had which allow to skip the two 3/4.
  2. 00:48:217 (1,2) - Maybe Drum Finish on the head of these slider? There ere very "powrful" sound in the music so i think it deserve a hitsound here. (And if you apply it here apply it also at the same other place like this in this diff and the other diff (like 01:28:217 (1,2)))
  3. 00:56:217 (1) - ^
  4. 01:08:717 (6,1) - I think you can try to avoid this unesthetic overlap.
  5. 01:15:717 (4) - Move it to x=332 y=76 for a perfect square with 01:14:217 (1,2,3).
  6. 01:41:717 (6) - One grid up for a perfect paralellogram.
  7. 01:42:217 (1,2,3,4) - I think the flow would be better if instead of going back and forth at 01:43:217 (3) you put 01:43:717 (4) a little bit ahead of
  8. 01:43:217 (3) and make it finish at 01:42:717 (2) instead of making it start here (like you are currently doing) a little bit like this:
    It kept the aesthetic of the triangle 01:42:217 (1,3,5) and improve the flow imo. (But maybe there is a better way to do it than the one i used)
  9. 01:52:217 (1) - Make it finish 1/4 beat later on the clap in the song (and put a clap on the spinner)
  10. 02:09:717 (4) - x=436 y=180 for a perfect parallelogram with 02:06:217 (1,2,3).
  11. 02:18:217 (1) - x=340 y=144? Guess why ^^
  12. 02:47:217 (3,4,5) - I find it a little bit weird because it's the only stack of the diff. Stack are a little bit hard for beginner player but in a Normal diff i think it's ok it's just that..... It will surprise them to see one. (And not the good kind of surprise)
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:217 (1,4) - It's a little bit confusing... I don't know if it's rankable or not but it's definitely confusing to play.
  2. 00:40:967 (4,1,2,3,1) - The flow here is a little bit.... disturbing. I would suggest to swap 00:40:717 (3,4) then move 00:41:217 (1) where 00:41:467 (2) is then 00:41:467 (2) where 00:41:717 (3) is then 00:41:717 (3) where 00:41:217 (1) is. It solves the little problem i have with your pattern which is 00:41:217 (1,2,3,1). The spacing makes you believe that 00:42:217 (1) is 1/2 beat later which can be confusing while playing in HD. But if it was an intended trap then let it as it is.
  3. 00:45:092 - add a note? (There is a note in the vocals AND in the music so why not putting a note here)
  4. 00:53:092 - ^
  5. 00:56:217 (1,2,3) - Too bad i would have see jump in this part of the song not anti jump. I would suggest to move these sliders further from the center of the playfield.
  6. 01:25:092 - add a note. (You did it at 01:32:967 (3,4,5,6,7))
  7. 01:28:217 (1,2,3) - Yeah! That was more what i expected from 00:56:217 (1,2,3).
  8. 01:36:217 (1,2,3) - Why do you put jump sometimes and anti-jumps other times? It's the same song each time.
  9. 01:52:217 (1) - Same as in the "Normal" diff.
  10. 02:07:967 (7,1,2) - Well i have the same kind of problem than 00:40:967 (4,1,2,3,1).
  11. 02:14:217 (3) - Replace it by a 1/2 beat long slider?
  12. 02:24:967 (1) - Make it 1/4 beat longer if i hear correctly.
  13. 02:32:717 (1) - Remove NC?
  14. 02:40:717 (1) - ^ (You never did this kind of weird NC previously in the diff. If you want to keep them at least do the same in the other place like this in the other kiai)
  15. 02:46:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow is definitely awkward. Why not:
  16. 03:09:717 (5,6,7) - Another weird flow. Curve 03:09:717 (5) and it will be much better imo.
  17. 03:14:217 (1) - Add a note here and start the spinner 1/4 beat later?
~Good Luck~
Dark_Ai
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Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Thank you for modding :3
I almost changed everything

Updated ~
Andrea
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Andrea

Roxas wrote:

Fixed the offset and some other things in IRC! :)
Please provide the log, it's always necessary.
Roxas
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Roxas

Andrea wrote:

Please provide the log, it's always necessary.
I quitted osu quickly and I didn't save the log, you can deny the kudosu idc :)
ts8zs
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ts8zs
move redline to 00:00:280 - ?
[Normal]
AR4?
03:09:030 (2) - Del this note?
01:54:530 - Drag break start here?
Nothing big problems,I can only check out some slider not fit approachcircle very well
so they are
01:31:280 (3) -
01:43:780 (4) -
02:37:280 (3) -
[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:46:280 (1) - not fit 3's head
01:26:280 (1) - ^
[Hard]
02:25:030 (1,1) - 02:25:030 (1) - end at 02:26:280 -
03:09:780 (5) - NC
03:13:280 (6) - not fit 7's approachcircle very well

Good map:3
Star~
Kodora
Kodora
As requested

[General]

  1. You need to have easiest diff below 3 stars, 3.5 is too high :х I suggest you map easy because your normal is already pretty cool to make it easier
  2. I feel offset a bit wrong, try to get someone who good at timing to check it
[Hard]

*I personally suggest you use AR 8 OD 7 here. AR 8 will make your diff much more readable, and higher OD will make it more challenging - this is hardest diff in mapset at least. Also suggesting raise HP Drain by 1 tick

  1. 00:45:030 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: change this please to 2 1/4 sliders. This stream is estecially looks not so good and feels too slow even with dt, so i suggesting change this to sliders for better playability
  2. 00:47:280 (3,4,5) - nazi: make this spacing perfect. Also, why so clamped? >_> Try to use x0.6 ds at lest, looks more pretty imo.
  3. 01:09:780 (3) - add whistle here for consistency
  4. 01:13:780 (3) - ^
  5. 01:27:280 (3,4,5) - clamped spacing again :х
  6. 01:35:280 (5,6) - try something like this?

    SPOILER
  7. 01:40:280 (1,2) - I understand fact that you did it for nice pattern but please, change those notes to slider, it follows music better. Also this pattern is already not so good to hit, espacially with ar 7 :х
  8. 01:43:780 (5,1) - swap nc follow pattern
  9. 01:45:030 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change to sliders for same reasons. Those mini-streams really too slow and looks not so good. Also, it even sounds better as a sliders
  10. 01:52:280 (1) - add finish instead of clap
  11. 02:02:780 (2) - add whistle here for consistency
  12. 02:06:780 (4) - ^
  13. 02:17:280 (3) - ^
  14. 02:18:780 (3) - ^
  15. 02:25:030 (1,1) - this part is perfectly mapable, wht you add spinnerspam here, espacially with enough short spinners? This playes bad, please remove spinners and map this part >_>
  16. 02:41:280 (5,6) - make it less linear please
  17. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - omg someone still using this pattern <3 dont change pls
  18. 03:09:030 (4,1) - Swap NC follow pattern?
[Sonnyc's Hard]

  1. 00:36:280 - Add note here, why you ignoring strong beat?
  2. 00:49:780 (3,1) - try to make perfect banked here, this overlap looks not so pretty
  3. 01:29:780 (3,1) - ^
  4. 02:05:780 (5) - Delete this whistle, it doesnt fit.
  5. 02:08:280 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning, reverse & end of slider follow lyrics
  6. map to the end please >_>
[Normal]

  1. 00:46:280 (1) - add finish?
  2. 01:03:280 (3,4,5) - um, feels a bit too challenging for a normal diff, consider replace it with 1/2 reverse slider
  3. 02:22:030 (1,1) - please map first spinner, this spinner spam looks not so good.
  4. 02:40:280 (8) - add finish to the beginning of slider
Nice map, good luck.
Dark_Ai
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Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:

move redline to 00:00:280 - ? I dont thinj it needs ><
[Normal]
AR4? okay
03:09:030 (2) - Del this note? okay
01:54:530 - Drag break start here? okay
Nothing big problems,I can only check out some slider not fit approachcircle very well hmm
[box=so they are]01:31:280 (3) -
01:43:780 (4) -
02:37:280 (3) -

[Hard]
02:25:030 (1,1) - 02:25:030 (1) - end at 02:26:280 - I dont like it :c
03:09:780 (5) - NC did
03:13:280 (6) - not fit 7's approachcircle very well hm

Good map:3
Star~ Thank you alot :3

Kodora

Kodora wrote:

As requested

[General]

  1. You need to have easiest diff below 3 stars, 3.5 is too high :х I suggest you map easy because your normal is already pretty cool to make it easier I think the normal is easy enought to be the easiest Diff
  2. I feel offset a bit wrong, try to get someone who good at timing to check it
[Hard]

*I personally suggest you use AR 8 OD 7 here. AR 8 will make your diff much more readable, and higher OD will make it more challenging - this is hardest diff in mapset at least. Also suggesting raise HP Drain by 1 tick okay

  1. 00:45:030 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: change this please to 2 1/4 sliders. This stream is estecially looks not so good and feels too slow even with dt, so i suggesting change this to sliders for better playability done
  2. 00:47:280 (3,4,5) - nazi: make this spacing perfect. Also, why so clamped? >_> Try to use x0.6 ds at lest, looks more pretty imo. I like it like it is now :c
  3. 01:09:780 (3) - add whistle here for consistency okay
  4. 01:13:780 (3) - ^ ^
  5. 01:27:280 (3,4,5) - clamped spacing again :х I like it
  6. 01:35:280 (5,6) - try something like this? okay

    SPOILER
  7. 01:40:280 (1,2) - I understand fact that you did it for nice pattern but please, change those notes to slider, it follows music better. Also this pattern is already not so good to hit, espacially with ar 7 :х hmkay
  8. 01:43:780 (5,1) - swap nc follow pattern hmm I dont like this way
  9. 01:45:030 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change to sliders for same reasons. Those mini-streams really too slow and looks not so good. Also, it even sounds better as a sliders okay
  10. 01:52:280 (1) - add finish instead of clap no since you can hear a clap and not a finish there ><
  11. 02:02:780 (2) - add whistle here for consistency kk
  12. 02:06:780 (4) - ^ ^
  13. 02:17:280 (3) - ^ ^
  14. 02:18:780 (3) - ^ ^
  15. 02:25:030 (1,1) - this part is perfectly mapable, wht you add spinnerspam here, espacially with enough short spinners? This playes bad, please remove spinners and map this part >_> I think the spinner fit really well there.. :c
  16. 02:41:280 (5,6) - make it less linear please I like it
  17. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - omg someone still using this pattern <3 dont change pls ööh lol
  18. 03:09:030 (4,1) - Swap NC follow pattern? okay
[Normal]

  1. 00:46:280 (1) - add finish?
  2. 01:03:280 (3,4,5) - um, feels a bit too challenging for a normal diff, consider replace it with 1/2 reverse slider
  3. 02:22:030 (1,1) - please map first spinner, this spinner spam looks not so good. the same as Hard I think it fit much better
  4. 02:40:280 (8) - add finish to the beginning of slider
Nice map, good luck. Thank you for modding

Updated ~
Natsu
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Natsu
HI~ Dark_Ai mod as you request o3o

Mod Info:
  1. Unrankable stuff
  2. Should Fix but up to you
  3. Subjetive/Suggestions/Nazi things

General:
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours problem is on Sonyc diff

Hard
  1. HP +1?
  2. 00:13:780 maybe you want to try Ctrl G here cuz the map flow better and the little jump make it more interesting to play imo
  3. 00:19:280 add clap on the tail
  4. 00:20:280 add NC 00:20:780 remove NC 00:22:280 add NC to be consistent with your every stanza NC?
  5. 00:28:280 NC here too make the pattern more readable take in consideration 00:28:280 this got a little overlaped by previous circle a new combo colour make it better for play imo
  6. 00:33:780 remove finish and add clap sound alot better also for consistency with 00:29:280 (1,2,3) -
  7. 00:37:280 yeah the simetry with next slider look cool but when you play it it feel weird since you can hear the strong vocals at 00:37:280 - 00:37:530 - 00:37:780 - thats why I preffer if you do somethink like u did on 00:29:280 (1,2,3) -
  8. 00:48:280 (1,2,3) - add finish on the head of the three sliders also add drum sampleset sound very nice
  9. 00:52:280 NC and remove it from 00:53:030 then add NC at 00:54:280 and remove it from 00:54:780 just for consistency with your comboing
  10. 01:03:655 use atleast 0.5 distance with previous and next actually is so hard to notice
  11. 01:13:780 remove whistle finish is enought
  12. 01:25:030 nc to make the stream more readable also you change the 1/4 distance here o.o
  13. 01:28:280 (1,2,3) - same as 00:48:280
  14. 01:52:280 add a circle with finish here following the hitsound pattern as previous combos then start the spinner on 01:52:405 follow alot better the music imo
  15. 02:21:530 ctrl g for better flow :o
  16. 02:22:030 (1) - extend this spinner in 1/4 for consistency with the next two?
  17. 02:28:030 remove this circle to soon after spinner imo
  18. 02:32:780 (4,5,6) - this pattern going to flow better in this way (check img) also make a fun jump in 02:33:780 (6,1) - you shoulld try ;)
    SPOILER
  19. 02:58:280 same suggestion as 01:52:280

Sonnyc Hard:
  1. mmm i suggest to you map the first break since normal have it mapped too .-.
  2. 00:36:280 add circle actually sound so empty ignoring the downbeat x_x
  3. 00:46:280 remove whistle and add finish fit alot better the song
  4. 00:48:280 (1,2,3) - same as hard
  5. 00:54:280 remove whistle and add finish sound alot better in this part of the song
  6. 00:59:280 - 01:00:530 - 01:01:280 - you are mapping mainly the vocals i dont see the reason why you ignore they x_x
  7. 01:13:780 finish sound better here
  8. 01:16:030 (4,1) - this manual stack look and play really bad stack it properly better
  9. 01:29:780 (3,1) - this slider touching the other is on purpose? cuz it look really bad imo
  10. 01:39:280 you should add somethink here feel realy empty also play bad without somethink there
  11. 01:41:280 ^
  12. 02:19:530 ctrl g better flow imo also make a fun jump with next
  13. 02:49:280 this should be mapped
  14. 02:44:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - the rhythm there is really bad in my opinion maybe you can take a look and map some important spots cuz actually feel really bad whe you are playing :/

Normal:
  1. OD -1 play and fit better for a easy/normal
  2. mmm why do you use CS4 on the easy diff this will be better with cs3 newbies feel easy play big circle also some new players enjoy playing this diffs with hr well is just my opinion
  3. 00:24:280 Finish on the head since fit alot with the song also you add it on the other diffs
  4. 00:25:530 remove clap from slider body
  5. 00:33:780 same as hard o3o
  6. 00:38:280 (2) - swap NC
  7. 00:40:280 you forget finish here
  8. 00:48:280 (1,2,3) - same as hard
  9. 01:13:780 finish for consistency with your other diff?
  10. 01:18:280 (1,2,3,4) - fix the distance plz
  11. 02:47:280 (3,4,5) - convert 4 and 5 in a slider since this 3 circles are to hard to hit for a newbie
  12. 03:11:280 (2,3) - fix the distance
    about the normal I think is easy enought just complaining about circle size



Good map and good luck :3/
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
>Bang!
>Tags: virgin

oh.

Insane:
00:25:780 - I'd put a note here for hitsounding purposes (and it flows a little bit better like that)
00:39:780 (5) - I'd change the way this is shaped so it looks like this: http://puu.sh/3XdI8.jpg
01:17:280 (5) - NC to signify jump
01:45:030 (4,5,6) - Long slidertrains like this generally don't play well
01:47:780 (6) - This pattern felt weird because I'm made to go back on itself, and I can't get my arm from not going to where (4) is rather than where (6) is.
01:52:280 (1) - Add finish instead of clap?
02:25:030 (1,1) - Multiple spinners like this are really weird to play, since players will grow entirely unconfident of when the spinner spam will stop
03:14:405 (1) - Put a whistle here or something

Hard:
00:50:280 (1) - Would it be possible to curve this in a way so there's no overlap?
01:30:280 (1) - ^
01:45:030 (2) - It'd be nice if this slider similar to (1)
LOL THIS GUY SONNYC with his not mapping the same length as the other diffs

Normal:
00:26:280 (1,2,3,4,1) - Slidertrains really aren't that good to have in a map. They're kind of weird to play. You can lower the difficulty a lot by just having notes (and maybe 1/1 rather than 1/2).
01:04:280 (1) - This may be a bit much for a normal diff

Biggest concern is the normal diff. You could break down the complexity of a lot of the rhythms so it's not so much 1/2. I'm all for having 1/2 in a map, but too much is bad.

Or you could make an easy diff.
Dark_Ai
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Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Thank you all for the mod ><

I will take a look tomorrow :3

Natsu

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Dark_Ai mod as you request o3o

Mod Info:
  1. Unrankable stuff
  2. Should Fix but up to you
  3. Subjetive/Suggestions/Nazi things

General:
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours problem is on Sonyc diff

Changed everything except
Hard
  1. 00:37:280 yeah the simetry with next slider look cool but when you play it it feel weird since you can hear the strong vocals at 00:37:280 - 00:37:530 - 00:37:780 - thats why I preffer if you do somethink like u did on 00:29:280 (1,2,3) - I dont think its reall wrong there so I like it like it is now >//<
  2. 02:28:030 remove this circle to soon after spinner imoIf I remove it, it sound feel too empty there, so I prefer to add it ._.

Changed everything except
Normal:



Good map and good luck :3/

CDFA

CDFA wrote:

>Bang!
>Tags: virgin

oh.

Changed everything except

Insane:
00:25:780 - I'd put a note here for hitsounding purposes (and it flows a little bit better like that) there is no sound for a circle so I prefer to dont add one ><
01:45:030 (4,5,6) - Long slidertrains like this generally don't play well I like it
01:47:780 (6) - This pattern felt weird because I'm made to go back on itself, and I can't get my arm from not going to where (4) is rather than where (6) is. ^
01:52:280 (1) - Add finish instead of clap? no because you can hear a clap sound there ant not afinish >///<
02:25:030 (1,1) - Multiple spinners like this are really weird to play, since players will grow entirely unconfident of when the spinner spam will stop but I think it fit as well

Normal:
00:26:280 (1,2,3,4,1) - Slidertrains really aren't that good to have in a map. They're kind of weird to play. You can lower the difficulty a lot by just having notes (and maybe 1/1 rather than 1/2). hmm ._.
01:04:280 (1) - This may be a bit much for a normal diff I dont think so ><

Biggest concern is the normal diff. You could break down the complexity of a lot of the rhythms so it's not so much 1/2. I'm all for having 1/2 in a map, but too much is bad.

Or you could make an easy diff. I think the normal is easy enought to be the easiest diff there ._.
Last edited by Dark_Ai , edited 1 time in total.
riffy
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riffy
What? Virgin in tags? Sounds like you're uploading some porn

Just appearing in the thread to give you a star!
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc

-Bakari- wrote:

What? Virgin in tags? Sounds like you're uploading some porn
xD
NewRulerNA
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Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
as your request
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]
  1. this is WIP? lowest diff's star rating is 3.0. you must adjust Normal to be 3.0 or less.
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:530 - why did not put circle? this section has the same melody as 00:16:530 - . would be better to add note here or remove 00:16:530 (4) - imo.
  2. 00:14:280 (1,2) - (stupid) about distace...it is a mistake simply imo. try to move (1) to x188 y336.
  3. 00:21:280 (4) - suggest to exchange two circles. may be tedious because 00:18:280 ~ 00:20:780 - have also the same rhythm. so would be better to add a change imo.
  4. 00:49:780 - should be set additions: drum. because it have same sounds at 00:48:280 - 00:49:030 - .
  5. 01:02:280 (1,2) - x:468 y:32 ? reason is same as 00:14:280 (1,2).
  6. 01:29:780 - same as 00:49:780
  7. 02:10:780 (2) ~ 02:21:530 (5) - these rhythm would be better to change more easier.
    1. adjust star rating on lowest diff
    2. 02:02:280 (1) ~ 02:09:780 (4) -
    1. 02:10:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -

      1. 02:10:280 (1) - 1/1 slider
      2. 02:11:280 (2) - ^
      3. 02:12:280 (3) - ^
      4. 02:13:280 (4) - ^
    2. 02:18:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
      you did not follow 02:18:030 - , so not put circle at 02:20:030 - .
  8. 02:34:280 (1,2,3) - forgot to add drum-finish?
[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:15:780 - I guess forgot to add clap
  2. 00:36:030 - add whistle. this section have a pattern that is different from the other. so would be better to emphasise with whistle.
  3. 01:16:030 (4) - same as above
  4. 02:11:530 (4) - this whistle may be mistake, remove whistle at overall.
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:280 (4) - ctrl+G? vocal is largest at 00:17:780 - . so I suggest to add jump to emphasise it. will be fun!
  2. 00:25:905 (3) - this bule tick may confuse players. exchange 3/4 slider please >_<
  3. 02:14:280 - forgot to add whistle?

mod time: 1 hour
too short mod

good luck :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
>After School >Bang >Virgin YOU SHOULD ADD THE VIDEO

[General]

  • Nothing.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:530 (2) - can't you replace it with something else. 3/4 beats are really too sudden for this kind of songs! Try something like this. It's probably sounds a bit worse, but it's more playable for sure!
  2. 02:22:030 (1,1) - double spinners are confusing bor beginners. They're not used to see second spinner right after the first one! Try to replace it with one loong spinner or map one of the spinner.
    Note: 02:28:280 (1) - 02:58:280 (1,1) - this circle is appears too soon after spinner. This is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners! probably it's their first time playing osu

    Good job!
[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:49:780 (3,1) - nazi - I like your flow so much, but this thing looks a little bit off. Try to avoid this overlap to make it look better?
    Note: 01:29:780 (3,1) - not sure if it's intentional or you're just copypasting the same mistake..
  2. 02:49:280 - please, place a circle here to emphasize vocals. I'm sure it is needed here to keep your rhythm and patterns consistent!
    Note: 02:51:530 (4) - same happens here. Try my rhythm here! example
[Hard]
Can't you rename it to something different to make diff spread more interesting. Like..uh.. [Bang] o3o/ Like Normal/GD-Hard/Bang mapset.
  1. Try to increase HP Drain by one tick to make mapset a bit more challenging and interesting! Make it really hard! <3
  2. 01:49:530 (5,6) - nazi - to make smoother flow and minor jump use Ctrl+G on these two circles. It'll make a nice and more readable triangle!
  3. 02:26:280 (1,1) - too soon after spinner! Give players some time to notice the circle and to finish spinning!
  4. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - nazi - move (4,5) somewhere else. Stack looks really confusing!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Kodora

Kodora wrote:

As requested

[Sonnyc's Hard]

  1. 00:36:280 - Add note here, why you ignoring strong beat? // To follow the lyric.
  2. 00:49:780 (3,1) - try to make perfect blanked here, this overlap looks not so pretty // k
  3. 01:29:780 (3,1) - ^
  4. 02:05:780 (5) - Delete this whistle, it doesnt fit. // Was just adding Whistle in every white ticks, and deleting only here will be weird.
  5. 02:08:280 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning, reverse & end of slider follow lyrics // It was my own way to emphasize "One Two Three".
  6. map to the end please >_>
Natsu

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Dark_Ai mod as you request o3o

General:
  1. Inconsistency in combo colours problem is on Sonyc diff // I made it different because it was too dark with Ai's color.

Sonnyc Hard:
  1. mmm i suggest to you map the first break since normal have it mapped too .-. // Mapped only where lyric existed.
  2. 00:36:280 add circle actually sound so empty ignoring the downbeat x_x
  3. 00:46:280 remove whistle and add finish fit alot better the song // Then I shall delete all whistles. Anyways, I think Whistle fits better than a noisy Finish.
  4. 00:48:280 (1,2,3) - same as hard // mm Fixed.
  5. 00:54:280 remove whistle and add finish sound alot better in this part of the song
  6. 00:59:280 - 01:00:530 - 01:01:280 - you are mapping mainly the vocals i dont see the reason why you ignore they x_x // A few place for a change can be nice imo
  7. 01:13:780 finish sound better here // I don't think so,,
  8. 01:16:030 (4,1) - this manual stack look and play really bad stack it properly better // It was my intention to make the reverse arrow more visible.
  9. 01:29:780 (3,1) - this slider touching the other is on purpose? cuz it look really bad imo // k
  10. 01:39:280 you should add somethink here feel realy empty also play bad without somethink there
  11. 01:41:280 ^
  12. 02:19:530 ctrl g better flow imo also make a fun jump with next // I have no jump in this difficulty, and a jump in such a calm place would play bad imo
  13. 02:49:280 this should be mapped
  14. 02:44:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - the rhythm there is really bad in my opinion maybe you can take a look and map some important spots cuz actually feel really bad whe you are playing :/ // But it fits the instrument, dont they?

Good map and good luck :3/
CDFA

CDFA wrote:

>Bang!
>Tags: virgin

oh.

Hard:
00:50:280 (1) - Would it be possible to curve this in a way so there's no overlap? // k
01:30:280 (1) - ^
01:45:030 (2) - It'd be nice if this slider similar to (1) // Just fixed it like the previous pattern 01:42:280 (1,2).
LOL THIS GUY SONNYC with his not mapping the same length as the other diffs <_<
EDIT : WT more mods??

ProModderNA

NewRulerNA wrote:

as your request
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:15:780 - I guess forgot to add clap // Thanks.
  2. 00:36:030 - add whistle. this section have a pattern that is different from the other. so would be better to emphasise with whistle. // I usually put whistle in high sounding part of the music, and I don't think here is the place.
  3. 01:16:030 (4) - same as above
  4. 02:11:530 (4) - this whistle may be mistake, remove whistle at overall. // Fix
mod time: 1 hour
too short mod

good luck :)
Bakari

-Bakari- wrote:

>After School >Bang >Virgin YOU SHOULD ADD THE VIDEO

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:49:780 (3,1) - nazi - I like your flow so much, but this thing looks a little bit off. Try to avoid this overlap to make it look better?
    Note: 01:29:780 (3,1) - not sure if it's intentional or you're just copypasting the same mistake.. // idk,~
  2. 02:49:280 - please, place a circle here to emphasize vocals. I'm sure it is needed here to keep your rhythm and patterns consistent! // Following the instrument here.
    Note: 02:51:530 (4) - same happens here. Try my rhythm here! example // ^ But found that I should reduce the reverse~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!
diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 06-After-School-Bang.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42280
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bang!
TitleUnicode:Bang!
Artist:After School
ArtistUnicode:After School
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:
Tags:Virgin k-pop Sonnyc
BeatmapID:285545
BeatmapSetID:106777

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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108,164,114030,6,0,P|96:216|120:284,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,114780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,328,115030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,115280,2,0,P|412:244|416:216,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,44,116030,6,0,B|280:40|280:40|248:64|204:64,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,52,116780,2,0,P|128:92|152:132,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,117280,2,0,P|205:213|209:253,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,117780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,332,118030,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,348,118280,2,0,B|408:360|452:348|452:348|472:320,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,228,119030,2,0,B|388:216|344:228|344:228|324:256,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,332,119780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,284,120030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,120280,6,0,B|200:180|152:192|152:192|120:176,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,92,121030,2,0,P|112:80|152:84,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,108,121530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,156,121780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,140,122030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,122280,6,0,L|432:208,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,300,122780,2,0,L|392:328,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,123280,2,0,L|248:284,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,123780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,192,124030,6,0,P|256:152|228:136,1,71.9999978027344,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,144,124530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,68,124780,2,0,P|52:108|44:152,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,125280,2,0,P|60:264|68:308,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,372,125780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,324,126030,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,126280,2,0,B|344:324|324:280|384:248,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,228,127030,2,0,P|436:164|352:156,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,127780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,224,128030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,128280,6,0,P|224:60|280:24,2,143.999995605469
360,360,130030,6,0,B|392:296|392:296|444:312|484:280,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,204,130780,2,0,P|364:204|332:220,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,131280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,352,131530,2,0,B|184:316|192:264|192:264|192:204,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,132280,6,0,P|152:128|112:160,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,144,132780,2,0,P|36:184|68:224,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,133280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,133530,2,0,P|224:300|208:320,2,71.9999978027344,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,140,134280,6,0,B|248:128|284:144|284:144|316:160|348:156,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,135030,2,0,P|440:192|392:244,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,135780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,136030,2,0,B|200:256|220:288|220:288|184:276|148:296,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,136780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,137280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,137780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,60,138030,6,0,B|96:40|132:40|132:40|156:64|196:64,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,138780,2,0,P|280:116|256:144,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,184,139280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,139530,2,0,P|88:196|96:232,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,284,140030,6,0,B|196:300|220:328|220:328|292:328,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,140780,2,0,P|380:284|360:256,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,141280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,141530,2,0,P|216:144|256:120,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,100,142030,6,0,B|316:28|228:-4|164:64|164:64|128:108|88:144|44:136,1,359.999989013672
52,40,143530,2,0,B|112:48|132:96|132:96|152:148|176:212|248:224|296:208|328:176,1,359.999989013672
384,100,145030,5,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,145280,2,0,P|428:224|412:272,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,284,145780,2,0,P|319:314|315:354,1,71.9999978027344
256,192,146280,12,0,147780,0:0:0:0:
184,120,148280,6,0,P|152:184|184:264,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,262,149280,2,0,P|360:184|328:120,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,48,150280,6,0,P|100:96|72:196,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,151030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,151280,2,0,P|188:288|180:236,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,328,152280,6,0,P|328:248|396:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,153030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,276,153280,2,0,L|248:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,132,154280,6,0,L|136:212,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,360,155030,2,0,L|133:299,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,280,155780,2,0,L|210:260,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,156280,6,0,B|296:148|348:188|348:188|344:148,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,56,157030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,92,157280,2,0,B|428:160|428:160|472:188|472:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,336,158280,6,0,P|244:324|196:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,240,159030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,159280,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,172,159530,2,0,P|112:208|104:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,160280,6,0,P|328:332|388:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,161030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,161280,2,0,P|279:122|296:224,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162280,12,0,163780,0:0:0:0:
180,80,164280,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,164530,2,0,L|256:180,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,165030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,268,165530,2,0,B|272:288|240:288|220:268,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,166280,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,312,166655,2,0,L|160:292,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,167030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,292,167280,2,0,L|372:304,8,20,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,100,168280,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,168530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,168655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,172,168780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,244,169030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,60,169530,2,0,P|212:60|284:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,252,170280,6,0,B|376:288|376:288|356:336|300:344,1,120
300,344,170780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,328,171030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,171530,2,0,P|344:164|404:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,328,172280,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
just had a test
offset seems late
try 10275 (-5)
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
NewRulerNA

NewRulerNA wrote:

as your request
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]
  1. this is WIP? lowest diff's star rating is 3.0. you must adjust Normal to be 3.0 or less. I think the normal is easy enough for this mapset >////<
[Normal]
Changed everything

[Hard]
Changed everything


mod time: 1 hour
too short mod

good luck :) Thank you owo//

BAKA-DESU o3o

-Bakari- wrote:

>After School >Bang >Virgin YOU SHOULD ADD THE VIDEO OwO HUEHUEHUE

[General]

  • Nothing.
[Normal]
  1. 02:22:030 (1,1) - double spinners are confusing bor beginners. They're not used to see second spinner right after the first one! Try to replace it with one loong spinner or map one of the spinner. but but it fits well ;-; and it feels kinda out if I map this part ><
    Note: 02:28:280 (1) - 02:58:280 (1,1) - this circle is appears too soon after spinner. This is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners! probably it's their first time playing osu

    Good job! o///o
[Hard]
Can't you rename it to something different to make diff spread more interesting. Like..uh.. [Bang] o3o/ Like Normal/GD-Hard/Bang mapset.
Sure o3o
  1. Try to increase HP Drain by one tick to make mapset a bit more challenging and interesting! Make it really hard! <3 okay o.o
  2. 02:26:280 (1,1) - too soon after spinner! Give players some time to notice the circle and to finish spinning! like I said on Natsu's mod >////<
  3. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - nazi - move (4,5) somewhere else. Stack looks really confusing! I like it ._. dunt kill me (/w\)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck! thank you o3o/ and for star

Thank you all for mod >///<

Updated ~


EDIT: uuh Zero__wind yeah >< about timing and offset I gonna ask some people >///< ty for checking <3
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
Hi!

Normal
[Normal]

  1. 00:11:780 (2) - Drum finish sounds nice in the end, maybe use sampleset to change it?
  2. 00:15:280 (3) - ^ but no finish, just drum , Nvm I see you add some drum finishes, but might want to add more?
  3. 00:18:280 (1) - ^ possibly places you can add it
  4. 00:25:530 (2) - ^ This one for sure, it sounds really nice here
  5. 00:32:280 (3) - ^ I'll stop here now, cause you should know where to put it ><
  6. 00:26:280 - Also I feel you should decrease volume to 55%, why keep constant 60% ORZ
  7. 00:53:280 (1,2) - Maybe just use two circles instead or do a reverse repeat arrow slider? this rhythm seems off to me
  8. 00:42:280 - For all the kiai parts, increase volume to 65%? I don't understand how you do volume sorry.
  9. 01:06:280 - Change volume of green line here to 55%
  10. 01:08:780 (6,7) - Move slider 6 endpoint up more? the slider looks crowded and almost touch.
  11. 01:22:780 (2) - Just an suggestion, but whistle to the reverse? apply this to other kiai's too if you want
  12. 01:26:780 (2) - ^
  13. 01:38:280 - Volume change to 55%
  14. 01:33:280 (6,7) - How about remove 7 and reverse 6? Like this : http://puu.sh/3Y1YB.jpg
  15. 02:02:280 - Use 50% volume here
  16. 02:39:280 (6,7) - ^ but like this : http://puu.sh/3Y2dK.jpg
  17. 01:36:280 (2) - New combo? its not consistent with other parts
  18. 02:42:280 (2) - ^
  19. 02:10:280 (1,2) - Center this and make it symmetry, looks kinda unbalanced.

Hard
[Hard]

  1. 00:17:280 (3) - Center it? http://puu.sh/3Y2uP.jpg
  2. 00:36:280 - This is intentional? if not add note and whistle :P
  3. 00:10:280 - Volume here of this section should be higher than this section 00:26:280 - Change this section to 55% and add green line volume change to 50% 00:26:280 - here
  4. 01:08:280 (5) - Flip vertically? (Ctrl+J)
  5. 00:58:280 - Volume here 55%
  6. 01:06:280 - Volume here, 50%
  7. 01:19:530 (2) - Bad overlap, maybe stack and move like this : http://puu.sh/3Y2Ug.jpg
  8. 02:08:280 (1) - Use circles would be better, would fit with the combo better, to get combo effect
  9. 02:49:530 (6) - Use reverse slider, and center, http://puu.sh/3Y39j.jpg
Insane
[Insane]

  1. 00:25:530 (2) - Stacking it feels way better to me. http://puu.sh/3Y3gV.jpg
  2. 00:39:280 (4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/3Y3tI.jpg
  3. 00:26:280 - Volume change like normal, should be 55%
  4. 01:06:280 - ^
  5. 01:34:030 - I feel notes can be still added here :>
  6. 01:36:280 (1,2,3) - Boring pattern, curve the sliders for variety? http://puu.sh/3Y3Dz.jpg
  7. 01:50:780 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try pentagon? http://puu.sh/3Y3I3.jpg , http://puu.sh/3Y3Is.jpg
  8. 02:02:280 - Volume change to 50%
  9. 02:16:280 (1,2,3,4) - Try for a square? http://puu.sh/3Y3P3.jpg
  10. 02:58:280 (4) - Fix stacking, its not at same location as 02:57:030 (2) - slider end

Done, thanks for your request.
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623


as your request o/

General

  1. just suggestion, add 애프터스쿨(After School) and 뱅(Bang) ?
  2. add a video? xD

Normal

  1. 00:29:280 (1) - remove NC here, to keep your NC pattern consistently
  2. 00:46:780 (2) - nazi o/ try to blanket with 00:46:280 (1) - ? move the middle anchor 2 grid down
  3. 00:52:280 (4) - move it 1 grid right to make blanket with 00:51:280 (3)
  4. 00:53:280 (1) - remove this NC and put the NC at 00:53:280 (1) -, this is your NC pattern in the 1st kiai
  5. 01:16:780 (1) - remove the NC, same reason as above
  6. 01:34:280 (8) - nc here instead of 01:34:780 (1) - ? if you change this , change 02:40:280 (8) too
  7. 02:25:280 (1) - hmm, make this spinner louder? :D Since the voice is going up, apply to all your diffs if you do that

Sonnyc's Hard

  1. 02:26:280 (1) - same as Normal, increase this spinner volume? because voice goes up
  2. nice diff 8-)

Bang!

  1. 00:37:280 (4) - same as the NC issue, NC here instead of 00:36:530 (1)
  2. 02:34:530 (2) - put it like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 02:58:280 (4) - nazzzzzi, stack it with 02:57:030 (2) - 's tail?

:oops: nothing much to say, sry the mod is short XD
Good Luck!
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai

Tari wrote:

Hi!

Normal
[Normal]

  1. changed everything expect the volume... because I like the current one ><

Insane
[Insane]

  1. 00:39:280 (4,5) - Try this : http://puu.sh/3Y3tI.jpg ah no thanks but I dont wanna change my pattern
  2. 01:36:280 (1,2,3) - Boring pattern, curve the sliders for variety? http://puu.sh/3Y3Dz.jpg I like my pattern
  3. 01:50:780 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try pentagon? http://puu.sh/3Y3I3.jpg , http://puu.sh/3Y3Is.jpg same as above
  4. 02:16:280 (1,2,3,4) - Try for a square? http://puu.sh/3Y3P3.jpg ^
    didnt change volumes here too

Done, thanks for your request.
happy623

happy623 wrote:



as your request o/

General

  1. just suggestion, add 애프터스쿨(After School) and 뱅(Bang) ?
  2. add a video? xD I'm searching for a good one ;____;

Normal

  • changed everything expect:
  1. 02:25:280 (1) - hmm, make this spinner louder? :D Since the voice is going up, apply to all your diffs if you do that because I like the current sounds

Bang!

Change everything

:oops: nothing much to say, sry the mod is short XD
Good Luck!

Thank you both a lot for mod :33

Updated ~
- Vahe -
- Vahe -
nice map ^^ After School <3

and it would be awesome if it had a video, like mentioned before.
Not sure if you want to add a video though, but if you do maybe this will help http://puu.sh/43Vig
I hope its the correct size/resolution and what not. I tried it out and it seems to work best with around -40ms video offset.
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
aah well thank you really much but it says its too large D:
- Vahe -
- Vahe -

Dark_Ai wrote:

aah well thank you really much but it says its too large D:
:( sorry.
Is there a size limit ?
I can change the size and reupload
btw with too large you mean file size right (~31 MB) ? not resolution

Filesize can not exceed 24 MB with video hmmm...
Reuploaded http://puu.sh/43YvD (16,8 MB) or http://puu.sh/43YC1 (19.6 MB)
Hope one these works size-wise :)
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
sorry I can't modding :o
but,nice map. I support star~
good luck :) :)
p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
modding time



[Normal]
The displaced slider-circle combos look a bit weird but if that is what you intended to do then fine with me. It just seemed a bit odd since some other combos use perfectly alligned slider-slider or slider-circle follows.
01:52:275 (1) - either remove the clap from the ending (if you want to match the vocals) or shorten this spinner by 1/4 to end on the blue tick where the actual clap in the song is. I'd prefer to just remove the clap since ending on the vocals feels more natural here.
01:54:525 - why did you drag the break time here? I can't see any reason to do so...
02:09:775 (4) - maybe your mp3 is damaged? I can't hear them sing "4" on this note! If you want you can remove this note to break the constant 1/1 pattern that will be going for 20 seconds in this part. You know, to have a little more variation (but it is not a must so try if you like it or not)



[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:36:275 - oh you... (I love and hate this at the same time! Good job ;) )
02:22:025 (1,2) - ♥
02:47:275 (4) - I think you tried to follow the drum roll here but I don't think cutting it before the end of the drum roll is a good idea. It feels incomplete and out of place here. It would be much better to just follow the vocals by using a repeat slider here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/936882
02:52:275 (1) - Your map is 24 seconds shorter than the other maps of the set. I have no problem with slightly different lengths if the outro allows for it, but 24 seconds is too much for me to consider this difficulty a "complete" part of the mapset.



[Bang!]
00:44:275 (1) - missed drum finish
00:52:275 (1) - ^same, add drum finish to match the song
01:00:275 (1) - ^same
01:24:275 (1) - ^same
01:32:275 (1) - ^same, add drum finish on slider start
01:45:025 (4,5,6) - maybe you could try to use a slider stream arrangement here. Anything should look much better than the crooked chain: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/936811
01:45:525 (6,7) - ...and if you want to match the vocals you should use a single repeat slider here (or 3 circles): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/936845
01:52:400 (1) - weird hitsounding on the spinner. If you want to keep the clap you'll have to end it on the actual clap in the song on the previous blue tick. If you want to end it on the vocals, just remove the clap (which sounds best imo).
02:04:775 (2) - missed whistle (to make it consistent with 02:02:275 (1,2) -
02:06:025 (1,2) - I'd prefer if you use the drum sampleset on these silent triplets (or at least the first 2 notes of each triplet) just to make them audible. Normal sampleset would bee too intrusive but the soft sampleset is just too feint. Drum sampleset works perfectly imo.
02:08:775 (2) - add whistle for consistency
02:14:025 (1,2) - Again try to use drum sampleset for this triplet
02:20:775 (3) - missing whistle on slider start (to make it consistent with 02:18:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )
02:22:025 (1,1,1) - I don't like this spinner placement personally :| I can see it working with the vocals but it plays really weird with the shortest spinner in the middle. I couldn't see any pattern and couldn't guess the third spinner on my first attempt. You could try to start the 2nd spinner in the middle on the downbeat @02:24:275 - to have a kind of build-up before the KIAI. Or you could just merge the 1st and 2nd spinner into one long spinner. (Or you map the first two spinners with other hit objects following the vocals *cough*). I think you CAN come up with something ;)
02:29:775 (3) - add a drum finish to match the song
02:32:275 (1) - missed a finish here (all the other KIAIs had one on this note)
02:38:275 (1) - add a drum finish here to match the song

Mostly missing hitsounds and minor inconsistencies. I would really like to see you mapping the long spinner part properly. I didn't test it but it sounds like it could be done following the vocals here.





Overall very solid mapset. Beatplacement variations would've been nice especially since the song has some very cool beat patterns that are never really used (except for one small glimpse in 'Sonnyc's Hard'). Video quality is a bit low for the huge size but it is still inside the limitations so no problem here. If you can make Sonnyc map the rest of his difficulty so the drain times are comparable I can check this mapset again as soon as possible ;)

Until then have a star and keep it up!
WilliaMnaK93120
1 post
Joined August 2012
WilliaMnaK93120
Good job i hope this map will be ranked i like it !
PrivatHansi1
164 posts
Joined December 2011
PrivatHansi1
Viel glück mit deiner Map Ai \:D/
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc

p3n wrote:

modding time


[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:36:275 - oh you... (I love and hate this at the same time! Good job ;) )
02:22:025 (1,2) - ♥
02:47:275 (4) - I think you tried to follow the drum roll here but I don't think cutting it before the end of the drum roll is a good idea. It feels incomplete and out of place here. It would be much better to just follow the vocals by using a repeat slider here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/936882 // Fix
02:52:275 (1) - Your map is 24 seconds shorter than the other maps of the set. I have no problem with slightly different lengths if the outro allows for it, but 24 seconds is too much for me to consider this difficulty a "complete" part of the mapset. // Uhh,,, mapped.


Overall very solid mapset. Beatplacement variations would've been nice especially since the song has some very cool beat patterns that are never really used (except for one small glimpse in 'Sonnyc's Hard'). Video quality is a bit low for the huge size but it is still inside the limitations so no problem here. If you can make Sonnyc map the rest of his difficulty so the drain times are comparable I can check this mapset again as soon as possible ;)

Until then have a star and keep it up!
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42275
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Bang!
TitleUnicode:뱅
Artist:After School
ArtistUnicode:애프터스쿨
Creator:Dark_Ai
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:
Tags:Virgin k-pop Sonnyc
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188,128,128275,6,0,P|224:60|280:24,2,143.999995605469
360,360,130025,6,0,B|392:296|392:296|444:312|484:280,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,204,130775,2,0,P|364:204|332:220,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,280,131275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,352,131525,2,0,B|184:316|192:264|192:264|192:204,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,132275,6,0,P|152:128|112:160,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,144,132775,2,0,P|36:184|68:224,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,133275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,133525,2,0,P|224:300|208:320,2,71.9999978027344,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,140,134275,6,0,B|248:128|284:144|284:144|316:160|348:156,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,116,135025,2,0,P|440:192|392:244,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,240,135775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,212,136025,2,0,B|200:256|220:288|220:288|184:276|148:296,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,136775,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,236,137275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,137775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,60,138025,6,0,B|96:40|132:40|132:40|156:64|196:64,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,68,138775,2,0,P|280:116|256:144,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,184,139275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,139525,2,0,P|88:196|96:232,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,284,140025,6,0,B|196:300|220:328|220:328|292:328,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,140775,2,0,P|380:284|360:256,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,141275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,141525,2,0,P|216:144|256:120,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,100,142025,6,0,B|316:28|228:-4|164:64|164:64|128:108|88:144|44:136,1,359.999989013672
52,40,143525,2,0,B|112:48|132:96|132:96|152:148|176:212|248:224|296:208|328:176,1,359.999989013672
384,100,145025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,145275,2,0,P|428:224|412:272,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,284,145775,2,0,P|319:314|315:354,1,71.9999978027344
256,192,146275,12,0,147775,0:0:0:0:
184,120,148275,6,0,P|152:184|184:264,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,262,149275,2,0,P|360:184|328:120,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,48,150275,6,0,P|100:96|72:196,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,151025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,151275,2,0,P|188:288|180:236,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,328,152275,6,0,P|328:248|396:172,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,188,153025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,276,153275,2,0,L|248:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,132,154275,6,0,L|136:212,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,360,155025,2,0,L|133:299,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,280,155775,2,0,L|210:260,1,80,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,156275,6,0,B|296:148|348:188|348:188|344:148,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,56,157025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,92,157275,2,0,B|428:160|428:160|472:188|472:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,336,158275,6,0,P|244:324|196:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,240,159025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,159275,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,172,159525,2,0,P|112:208|104:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,336,160275,6,0,P|328:332|388:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,161025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,80,161275,2,0,P|279:122|296:224,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162275,12,0,163775,0:0:0:0:
180,80,164275,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,164525,2,0,L|256:180,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,80,165025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,268,165525,2,0,B|272:288|240:288|220:268,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,192,166275,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,312,166650,2,0,L|160:292,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,167025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,292,167275,2,0,L|424:328,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,100,168275,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,168525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,168650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,172,168775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,244,169025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,60,169525,2,0,P|212:60|284:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,252,170275,6,0,B|376:288|376:288|356:336|300:344,1,120
300,344,170775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,328,171025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,171525,2,0,P|344:164|404:164,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,180275,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,124,180525,2,0,P|180:124|112:96,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,124,181525,2,0,P|332:124|400:96,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,182275,5,2,0:0:0:0:
138,260,182775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,260,183275,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,212,183525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,202,183650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,100,184275,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,184,184525,2,0,P|16:224|8:276,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,188,185275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,256,185525,2,0,P|228:296|240:332,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,188,186275,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,186525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,36,186775,2,0,P|256:28|296:36,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,187275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,187,187525,2,0,P|397:150|395:111,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,240,188275,6,0,B|336:300|416:288|416:288|408:304|404:320,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,336,189025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,236,189275,2,0,P|480:176|400:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,190025,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,190275,2,0,B|168:164|160:216|160:216|132:200|96:200,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,248,191025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,312,191275,2,0,P|168:332|240:300,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,192275,6,0,B|312:200|312:200|341:223|354:266,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,193025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,266,193275,2,0,B|171:223|200:200|200:200|200:120,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,194025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,194275,12,0,196025,0:0:0:0:
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
sonnyc dont forget the two preview mods ._.

well okay

Updated ~
p3n
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947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
re-check time~

[General]
Add sliderborder settings to all .osu files to match your skin: "SliderBorder: 245,245,245" (could also use 255,255,255 if you want pure white, but the hitcircle overlays are not pure white)

Add the "!" to the Korean Song Title as well.



[Normal]
00:21:275 (4) - spacing to next note is too small, try moving this a bit to match your 1,00x spacing to 00:21:775 (5) -
00:30:775 (1) - spacing to previous note is too high (should be ~1,00x)
02:02:275 (1) - spacing to next slider is too high (should be ~1,00x)
02:12:275 (3) - another spacing error. You can try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/954068
80,180,132275,2,0,P|120:125|179:108,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:


[Sonnyc's Hard]
Video is not playing for this diff. Add it at the same offset as the other maps.



[Bang!]
Nice change for the long spinner part. Really like it!



Edit:
I am away due to my work so I will probably check your mod reply on saturday if my hotel's wifi allows me to connect to osu.
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