[General]
-From 02:11:507 to 02:22:174 : I'd add some whistles here.
-03:42:174 Make a tiny section of kiai here? Just for the initial kiai bursts.
[Lunatic]
00:47:674 (2) - Why don't you move it at the left of 00:48:007 (4) - ? (x:304 ; y:240) Makes it more readable and fun.
00:56:840 (1) - While testing it I really felt there was gonna be a jump there. So, I'd suggest CTRL + G.
00:58:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why didn't you make the jumps like here 00:47:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? I'd suggest something like this01:04:007 - I highly suggest you to add a note here. If you do it, stack it on the begin of this slider 01:04:174 (1) - . Or maybe elsewhere, your call.
01:08:340 (6) - With this slider you're slightly breaking the flow you were using in the seconds before [Like these 01:05:507 (5,6) - 01:06:840 (5,6) - ] What I mean is that you were using 2 sliders for that part of the song, but with 01:08:340 (6) - you're not using 2 sliders anymore because the rhythm changes and you want to follow it - I understand it, but I'd suggest you to use 2 notes instead of 01:08:340 (6) - this slider)
01:13:674 (6) - ^
01:19:007 (6) - ^
01:24:840 (1,2,3,4) - Why using 1/8? Maybe slider velocity got broken? Fix them or explain.
01:36:840 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:26:507 (2) - (CTRL+H) + (CTRL+J) + (CTRL+G) ?
02:32:007 - I highly suggest you to add a note here. [Just like the 01:04:007 (?) - suggestion I wrote up]
02:36:340 (6) - Same suggestions of 01:08:340 (6) - I wrote up.
02:41:674 (6) - ^
02:47:007 (6) - ^
02:52:840 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8?
03:04:840 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:41:674 (4) - Please remove this slider and place two hitcircles instead. If you do it, make some jumps with the 03:41:507 (3,4,5,6) - notes. Something like this. Or maybe you can make a pattern on your own.
03:48:840 (3) - I'd place a hitcircle here instead of the spinner, and then move the spinner on the following blue tick.
[Hard]
01:37:507 - I'd add a note here.
[Normal]
-From 02:11:507 to 02:22:174 : I'd add some whistles here.
-03:42:174 Make a tiny section of kiai here? Just for the initial kiai bursts.
[Lunatic]
00:47:674 (2) - Why don't you move it at the left of 00:48:007 (4) - ? (x:304 ; y:240) Makes it more readable and fun.
00:56:840 (1) - While testing it I really felt there was gonna be a jump there. So, I'd suggest CTRL + G.
00:58:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why didn't you make the jumps like here 00:47:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? I'd suggest something like this01:04:007 - I highly suggest you to add a note here. If you do it, stack it on the begin of this slider 01:04:174 (1) - . Or maybe elsewhere, your call.
01:08:340 (6) - With this slider you're slightly breaking the flow you were using in the seconds before [Like these 01:05:507 (5,6) - 01:06:840 (5,6) - ] What I mean is that you were using 2 sliders for that part of the song, but with 01:08:340 (6) - you're not using 2 sliders anymore because the rhythm changes and you want to follow it - I understand it, but I'd suggest you to use 2 notes instead of 01:08:340 (6) - this slider)
01:13:674 (6) - ^
01:19:007 (6) - ^
01:24:840 (1,2,3,4) - Why using 1/8? Maybe slider velocity got broken? Fix them or explain.
01:36:840 (1,2,3,4) - ^
SPOILER
02:11:507 (1,2) - Fix the distance please.Btw if you're using 1/8, I really find them inappropriate.. Hard to read and play.
02:26:507 (2) - (CTRL+H) + (CTRL+J) + (CTRL+G) ?
02:32:007 - I highly suggest you to add a note here. [Just like the 01:04:007 (?) - suggestion I wrote up]
02:36:340 (6) - Same suggestions of 01:08:340 (6) - I wrote up.
02:41:674 (6) - ^
02:47:007 (6) - ^
02:52:840 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8?
03:04:840 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:41:674 (4) - Please remove this slider and place two hitcircles instead. If you do it, make some jumps with the 03:41:507 (3,4,5,6) - notes. Something like this. Or maybe you can make a pattern on your own.
03:48:840 (3) - I'd place a hitcircle here instead of the spinner, and then move the spinner on the following blue tick.
[Hard]
01:37:507 - I'd add a note here.
[Normal]