瞎了又神曲+神谱
thank youCharles445 wrote:
Try this
被人说Lan和Hard差太多..打算再搞个insane出来AR8Foreverends wrote:
所以說...ar9真的沒問題嗎?QAQ
lkx_Shore wrote:
[General]
喷泉的确太多了,下这么多有点麻木,部分喷泉替换成soft-finish 100%更带感
我看了下,你是每当他“啊♂”一次就喷一次,但有的“啊♂”其实并没有高潮的感觉,所以不必要kiai暂时不改
00:14:863 - 不必要
00:42:100 - soft finish
00:45:258 - 不必要
00:46:837 - 不必要
00:48:416 - 不必要
01:13:679 - 不必要
01:16:837 - 不必要
01:18:416 - 不必要
01:19:995 - 不必要
01:37:363 - 不必要
02:37:363 - 不必要
02:46:837 - 不必要
02:51:574 - 不必要
02:53:153 - 不必要
02:54:732 - 不必要
想象一下玩家玩一张好图却被喷泉喷/闪了一脸,那会是什么心情
[Lan]
00:48:021 (5) - 头whistle这里故意不加whistle的加了很难听
01:23:548 - 这一段求降音或soft,02:23:548 - 也同求降到30%
02:30:061 (2) - x340 y136好点这位置没什么感觉``依然扔中间
l1106188 wrote:
早灣 >w<
Request from PM.
"re" 意思是 "remove"
黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色 是要討論的問題
紅色 是unrankable[general]
- Kiai time 不同 ~其实就是少了这里一条线00:06:969 - 删绿线的时候不小心删掉了:c
kiai time- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:13:284
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:14:863 , ends on 00:16:837
- [Lan] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:627 , ends on 00:06:969
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:08:942 , ends on 00:13:284
簡單來說就是Easy跟Insane少了一條 ends: 00:06:969 - 然後 starts: 00:14:863 -- 噴泉想辦法減少一些吧 :3, 玩最難難度, 有時因為噴泉,瞎了沒看到於是MISS了 ...
[Easy]
- 無用的綠線:
00:08:942 - 這條應該改成沒kiai time才對 你看错了吧..- 感覺AR有些慢, 試試+1三围先不改``等多点意见
- 00:42:100 (4) - NC, 因為01:13:679 (1) - 有NCFixed
- 00:56:311 (3) - re finish, 咱覺得這"咚!"有些多餘Fixed
- 02:54:732 (1) - 這slider的形狀有點怪異.., 如果是咱 咱這邊就不會想要blanket感觉是蠢了点``
[Normal]
- 02:56:311 (1,2,3) - 感覺這裡, overlap不太適合歌曲, 要有移動的感覺, 試試分開他們吧曾经想过分开``但是想不到排列``所以就stack放着``现在随便摆了个看看行不行吧
[Hard]
- 01:46:837 (1,1,1) - 試試看這個, 因為01:46:837 (1,1) - 在test play的時候, 容易照成100的產生, 原因咱想是因為, 01:46:837 (1) - 的緩速加01:46:837 (1,1) - 距離, flow角度 这里加减速的原因就是让人打的时候不会断,顶多就是出个100 所以先不改了
- 02:20:784 (3,4) - 試試這樣, 有點前進又有點滯留, 也比較符合歌曲 lol?我主要怕anti jump 被人喷_(:3 」∠)_
- 02:22:363 (3,4,5) - ^^
- 02:56:311 (4,5,6) - 同Normal既然前面都用了anti jump这里也一起吧``
[Lan]
就這些了~ 歌曲好聽, 音效選得不錯 只是Lan難度 ...嗯 咱無能為力 ~ star
- 00:42:495 (3) - 被那該死的噴泉擋住了...OTZ喷泉的事莫慌,暂时先不改
- 00:46:442 (5) - 這裡是否不應該用緩速, 感覺這緩速不適合歌曲, 外加 因為這緩速 突然來個00:46:442 (5,1) - 大跳加速, 很容易得出100, 这里并没有缓速``只是相对于之前1.5慢点而已``这里的节奏本来就是销魂的拉一下然后又恢复正常的速度然后再销魂的拉一下,所以衍生到SV就是1.5--->1.0--->1.5
- 00:48:021 (5) - 這裡別用緩速吧~原因咱認為不適合歌曲^
- 01:18:021 (5,1) - 同00:46:442 (5,1) -^
- 01:18:613 (2) - 縮減一下距離吧, 太大以至於這邊很容易按不到..我稍微拉近点吧
- 01:19:600 (5) - 同00:48:021 (5) - ^
- 01:37:758 (3) - 試試縮減一些距離, 因為不是slider, 很容易按出100 ~这里不是一样的距离的话我自己打会被坑(其实这里坑的是01:37:758 (3,4) - 这里的stack而不是第一个circle)
- 01:23:548 - 試試20%音量, 30%的聲音有些吵雜..30不够小么_(:3 」∠)_
- 02:23:548 - ^这里忘了调音量了_(:3 」∠)_
- 02:16:442 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀圖, 如果想保持, 請讓slider方向轉一下, 包含02:16:639 (4) - fixed
- 02:37:758 (3,4) - 同01:37:758 (3) - 这里不改.-.
咱mod到insane才發現原來這譜面還沒完成, 所以combo顏色還沒下定義沒錯吧?!若真的要用這個顏色, 紅色要改一下~这图本身没有Insane的_(:3 」∠)_被人说Hard太简单了其实是I太鬼畜了所以后来补的``然后做了下发现还是略难``目前等小草莓的GD中
good luck 藍翼醬~ insane做好了~需要mod在跟咱說一次~咱想說一個地方Lan難度的
00:36:969 (7) - 雖然可能不會被接受, 不過咱還是說一下好了, 在test play的時候, 不知道為甚麼會把這個看成單一的circle, 但其實是slider, 咱在想可能是因為combo顏色(應該會改吧 combo顏色)跟被00:36:574 (5) - 的分數檔住了一些暂时先不动等combocolour选好后可能会搞成左边4个同一个颜色右边4个同一个颜色?
改了个E``过会再改...Strawberry wrote:
Modding here~
request from pm.
[ General]
- everything looks fine, but the abusive kiai. they are really make me feel disappointed..等SB到再全部一起从新弄KIAI
such like these part00:38:942 ~ 00:51:574
01:10:521 ~ 01:23:548
02:07:363 ~ 02:23:548 .
[ Easy]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- strongly recommended CS 2 --> 3. too bored and seems really crowded(such as 00:40:521 (2,3)) even if it's a Easy. and the difficulty is also clearly imo. No need to use the lowest CS, so consider it?
- 01:48:811 (1) - let the blanket more perfect and true-up the slider to make it symmetrical with 01:47:626 (2)? such asFixed
- 01:51:574 (1) - move the middle anchor of this slider to turn the curve slider upward so that it can has a better flow imo. Fixed
- 02:43:679 (1) - so crowded with (2). try to move the fourth anchor 1 grid down? sorry for nazi this. xp这里我已经重新拉过了``不过还没上传来着
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:19:995 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the whistle which on that tail..a bit noisy since the bgm is very quiet.. Fixed
- 00:23:153 (1) - the whistle problem, same place as above. Fixed
- 01:06:574 (4) - same as above, sounds really useless whistle on that tail. there hasn't any beat to support it, so just wired. 这里跟前面是完全不同的一种情况``00:19:995 (1,2,3,4) - 01:04:205 (1,2,3,4) - 要删也是删这里的01:04:205 (1) -
- 02:42:100 (1) - lost a whistle on that whistle. it should be here from bgm and has consistency imo~.. :p
[ Normal]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:04:995 (2) - how about to move it 1 grid down for a perfect cover of (1)'s tail?~ :3
- 00:31:837 (4) - seems bad. move it 1 grid up for these overlapped slider.~
some problem for the same reason..i point out here so that you can fix them easily. (if it's your style, just ignore them, awkward however.
00:33:415 (2) - same reason as above, just move 1 grid down it.
00:36:573 (2) - a grid right.
00:38:152 (4) - a grid left and up.
00:43:679 (3) - same as above.
00:58:679 (2) - up 1 grid.
01:00:258 (4) - up 1 grid
01:15:258 (3) - 1 grid right and up, to make the same spacing by the slider body as between (1,2).
01:18:021 (2) - 1 grid up or tinier moving without grid snap.
01:19:600 (2) - as above, 1 grid right.
01:21:179 (2) - a grid up.
01:22:758 (2) - 1 grid right.
02:18:416 (3) - 1 grid down.
02:35:784 (1) - ^
02:38:350 (2) - ^
02:41:311 (4) - ^
02:39:732 (2) - 1 grid down and right?- 01:02:626 (3) - from some suggestion, i'd prefer to make the curve upward for a better flow.
- 02:26:311 (1) - upward curve as above?
- 02:56:705 (2,3) - nc here to make a burst? o.o..
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:20:784 (2) - remove the whistle on that head~ if you followed the same point in Easy diff. :3
- 00:23:942 (2) - same as above.
[ Hard]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:21:574 (1) - Ctrl+G to make a better flow? i feel the spacing with (2) is ok for the whole difficulty. anyway, it's up to you.
- 00:33:416 (3) - hmm..can't understand the nc. lonely and useless. o.o consistent with other place?
- 01:47:232 (1) - so hard for a easy Hard. try ctrl+g it?
- 01:47:626 (1) - if you followed above, change the nc color to light purple?
- 02:28:679 (3,4,5,6) - really confused for the whole difficulty imo.. the attack when i first try it's a triangle pattern, however they are repeats.. anyway, ctrl+g (5,6) can slove this problem i think.. if you think it's ok for now.. it's ok then. :d
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 02:55:916 (3) - maybe you lost a whistle on that tail. :3
[ Insane]
uncompleted o.o
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:05:982 (1) - bring forward 1/4 tick can catch the bgm imo..
- 00:10:521 (2) - no need to change the sv to x0.5, i mean that x0.75 is enough completely, really easy to make people break combo here because it has a distance with the previous slider..
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- Clear.
Let's see Lan..
[ Lan]
love this style.
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:21:179 (5) - ctrl+g is much more fun to play, whether with the last or the next note. :3
- 00:46:048 (1) - add a here here for the sv changed suddenly.
- 00:47:626 (4) - ^
- 02:19:403 (2) - i'd prefer to ctrl+g it to avoid the bit anti jump.. :d
- 02:19:600 (3) - 同上.
- 02:30:159 - add a circle between (2) and (3)? a bit confuse me for now..
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:13:284 (1) - the whistle which is put on that start noise me really, not fit the weak beat from bgm i feel.. remove it? :3
- 00:23:548 (2) - sounds wired.. just change the drum clap to soft whistle additions? :d
- 00:27:692 (4) - put a whistle on that sliderbody?~ it can make a chain so that the whistle is not very sudden.. anyway, pretty from my heard. xD
- 00:30:850 (8) - ^
- 00:34:009 (4) - same as above~. :3
- 00:37:167 (8) - ^
- 00:40:126 (5) - soft whistle additions here? sounds good for me.
- 01:00:061 (3) - same point as 00:27:692 (4).~ (omit the rest of same thing.
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Good luck then. lol
昨天下午看过下效果``感觉燃不起来``怎么破cmn_891127 wrote:
http://puu.sh/1RbN7
没留意还有这个BK_(:3」∠)_Ibuki Suika wrote:
ALDO?
MiddleIsland最喜欢的曲子,希望不要坑了;_;
这纯粹是为了美观吧._.Lan wings wrote:
没留意还有这个BK_(:3」∠)_Ibuki Suika wrote:
ALDO?
MiddleIsland最喜欢的曲子,希望不要坑了;_;
关于打酱油的绿线:没看到这是中断kiai的绿线么 kiai time全难度必须一致的 GD除外ts8zs wrote:
[lan]
00:05:784 (1) - 下面不圆故意弄不圆的
00:26:311 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→← change to →←←→ 看下面
00:27:100 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→← change to →←←→你复读错了←→←→ change to →←→←
00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
00:32:626 (1,2,3,4) - now is ←→←→←→←→ change to ←←→→←←→→no change
00:33:416 (1,2,3,4) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
00:35:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←no change
总是用撕裂梗太没创意了._.
00:48:416 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928232 不好看 虽然我的也不好看
01:01:048 (1) - Ctrl+gno change
01:01:442 (3) - Ctrl+gno change
01:04:798 (4) - Ctrl+g 才对._.手误 Fixed
01:07:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←我不复读了 为何你总那么纠结方向
01:02:232 (3,4) - now is ←← change to →→
01:34:403 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:11:508 (2) - Ctrl+G 这个时候撕裂才对嘛._.
02:11:902 (4) - Ctrl+G
02:13:284 (3,4) - now is ←← change to →→
02:34:403 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:55:916 (6) - Ctrl+G
好图……感觉你蛮喜欢这种歌……锯子+锤子=拆钢琴._.
[Hard]
02:43:284 (1) - 加reverse 然后加个note这里跟的是小提琴
02:53:153 (4) - 放远一点Fixed
[Normal]
01:18:416 (1) - 和2不是很fit 01:16:837 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 这段我想着remap的摆的太搓 然后忘了...
01:21:574 (1) - 和2不是很fit^
02:10:423 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:13:580 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:16:738 - 这绿线打酱油._.
[Easy]
好久没见到这么大圈了
00:40:521 (2,3) - 弧度稍微大点Fixed
02:10:423 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:13:580 - 这绿线打酱油._.
02:16:738 - 这绿线打酱油._.
↓其实这些都有调音量↓才不是AImodWarning: [Easy] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 01:46:146 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:12:051 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:15:209 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:18:367 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Easy] 02:20:982 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:34:353 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:34:748 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 00:06:969 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:34:353 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:34:748 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Lan] 02:38:942 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:16:837 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:18:317 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:33:120 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:33:515 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:45:751 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:46:146 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:12:051 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:12:150 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:15:209 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:15:307 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:18:367 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:18:465 有多余的timing线
颜色这么相似……._.Lan wings wrote:
关于打酱油的绿线:没看到这是中断kiai的绿线么 kiai time全难度必须一致的 GD除外切换kiai和调过音量音效的都不应该提示才对……所以在我看的时候就没有kiai._.ts8zs wrote:
[lan]
01:07:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - now is →←→←→←→← change to →→←←→→←←我不复读了 为何你总那么纠结方向感觉蛮好玩的所以就……233 ._.
好图……感觉你蛮喜欢这种歌……锯子+锤子=拆钢琴._. 居然不吐槽
[Hard]
02:43:284 (1) - 加reverse 然后加个note这里跟的是小提琴 我也是根据小提琴改的啊._.
[Easy]
好久没见到这么大圈了
00:40:521 (2,3) - 弧度稍微大点Fixed
↓其实这些都有调音量↓调音量应该不会提示啊好奇怪是不是坏掉了啊._.
另外 在你post之前我把这段的喷泉全删了 因为还是会挡note.... 被调戏了._.
Purple:Fixed
Pink:Ignore
233BakaHuang wrote:
是不是这歌啊 我mark一下 过几天帮你看看啊 莫慌
我说的风雅啊...........http://osu.ppy.sh/s/94790BakaHuang wrote:
是不是这歌啊 我mark一下 过几天帮你看看啊 莫慌
Q.QAsphyxia wrote:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I didn't find anything, I'm so sorry!
take this star instead (:
谢star :3judgment light wrote:
实在太赞 star送上
我觉得这个挺好读的啊..见别人玩1PC也没被坑过AngelHoney wrote:
02:54:633 (8,9) - 这是故意的还是>_>? (难道2013年的OSU已经这么鬼畜了么
Regou wrote:
hi~
[Lan]
01:06:969 (7,1) - 不要重疊吧/.\7都放到中间的位置了不stack你书书后面的1该放哪
01:18:021 (2) - 總是覺得完的太慢,可以在紅線停?後面同理前面不拖一下怎么显得出后面的急促感
01:37:363 (1,2) - 你真是鬼畜不能多說,好評
02:20:686 - add note?跟后面做对比02:22:166 (3,4,5) -
02:38:350 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?不懂你这啥flow
gl~
thank you very much!Nazalion wrote:
awesome map !!
<3 it
[Lan]
02:25:521 - make slider until 02:25:620 i think Ignore
02:45:061 - add just 1 beat Ignore
02:49:961 - http://puu.sh/4d0Q1.jpg => make like this Ignore
02:56:311 - make slider until 02:56:640 Ignore
02:56:705 - ^ until 02:57:034 Ignore
02:57:100 - ^ until 02:57:429 Ignore
done
hope your map got ranked
thx mod and star!sheela901 wrote:
[Easy]
00:24:732 (3) - Curve it for a flow?Fixed
01:07:363 (1) - Ctrl+J for also a flow?Ignore
02:57:495 (1) - Remove NC?same another diff
[Normal]
02:43:679 (1) - Remove NC?Ignore
02:46:837 (1) - ^?Ignore
[Hard]
00:51:771 (1) - Start it at 00:51:673 ?Ignore
02:47:232 (1,1,1) - Put them more close to each other.Ignore
[Lan]
00:23:942 (3) - Ctrl+J so it could be closer to 00:24:238 (4) since they're a 1/4 beat.Here is intentional
Good Luck and star!