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[General]
Change (TV size) to (TV Size)
[Hard]
00:08:719 (1,2,3) - 按照音高来说我觉得2不应该向下凹毕竟这还是个高音，建议垂直坐标按照音高排列即可、
00:09:844 (4) - 整个滑条（即点击滑条整体而不是两头)加上whistle再降点音量配合音乐的效果音如何？
00:11:344 (1) - flow感觉不是很好，如图
对我而言我个人偏向于绿线而不是红线，也就是这样的。如果你按照我这样改其实后面的也不用动，意外的效果不错。
00:13:594 (4) - 补个clap然后降低音量?不然加个soft默认clap也行。以及我觉得在这里用弯的折返效果反而不如直的折返来得好。你可以对比一下效果
00:18:844 (3) - 结尾clap同^
00:15:844 (4,1) - 试试改成这样？00:18:844 (3,4,1) - 在转向1的flow不是那么好，虽然我这图可能画的不是那么好不过……我觉得蓝线和绿线都是可以参考的flow
00:22:969 (1,2,3) - 3连这么放加上那么弯的一个sldier感觉非常不好看，建议改平一点如00:24:844 (5,6) -
略别扭的感觉，特别是yasa和前后都有个过渡+反差因素在里面，感觉就这么处理也略平淡，当然flow也是一方面。暂时给出2种方案
00:28:219 (4) - ki这个音很平缓，对比之前00:26:344 (1) - 的shii，这个hibiki的ki在这里已经有收的感觉了，从音量和感情以及音的长短来说我个人都觉得这个ki不应该和shii一样那么圆，反而是选择用比较平缓的一个slider来处理。
00:36:094 (2) - flow不是很好，说老实话，3/4slider+1/2slider你和米桶都有一个相同的问题就是喜欢圆+圆，并且衔接的角度以及slider本身的弧度都比较大，一个容易造成审美疲劳，第二个1/2slider本身并不长，配合3/4两个都做出角度比较大形状的时候就不是那么好看了。个人推荐要么索性就直，要么索性就微微有点弧度。
^感觉再写下去就变成我在作图了，于是到此为止。
如果不改的话找我要泡也行，当然能做到更好的话希望你能做到更好。
基本上我的观点也很明显了，如果能懂我的意思的话……那么后面也能尝试着自己改动一些。
如果不能的话我也只能233了。
Change (TV size) to (TV Size)
[Hard]
00:08:719 (1,2,3) - 按照音高来说我觉得2不应该向下凹毕竟这还是个高音，建议垂直坐标按照音高排列即可、
00:09:844 (4) - 整个滑条（即点击滑条整体而不是两头)加上whistle再降点音量配合音乐的效果音如何？
00:11:344 (1) - flow感觉不是很好，如图
对我而言我个人偏向于绿线而不是红线，也就是这样的。如果你按照我这样改其实后面的也不用动，意外的效果不错。
00:13:594 (4) - 补个clap然后降低音量?不然加个soft默认clap也行。以及我觉得在这里用弯的折返效果反而不如直的折返来得好。你可以对比一下效果
00:18:844 (3) - 结尾clap同^
00:15:844 (4,1) - 试试改成这样？00:18:844 (3,4,1) - 在转向1的flow不是那么好，虽然我这图可能画的不是那么好不过……我觉得蓝线和绿线都是可以参考的flow
00:22:969 (1,2,3) - 3连这么放加上那么弯的一个sldier感觉非常不好看，建议改平一点如00:24:844 (5,6) -
略别扭的感觉，特别是yasa和前后都有个过渡+反差因素在里面，感觉就这么处理也略平淡，当然flow也是一方面。暂时给出2种方案
00:28:219 (4) - ki这个音很平缓，对比之前00:26:344 (1) - 的shii，这个hibiki的ki在这里已经有收的感觉了，从音量和感情以及音的长短来说我个人都觉得这个ki不应该和shii一样那么圆，反而是选择用比较平缓的一个slider来处理。
00:36:094 (2) - flow不是很好，说老实话，3/4slider+1/2slider你和米桶都有一个相同的问题就是喜欢圆+圆，并且衔接的角度以及slider本身的弧度都比较大，一个容易造成审美疲劳，第二个1/2slider本身并不长，配合3/4两个都做出角度比较大形状的时候就不是那么好看了。个人推荐要么索性就直，要么索性就微微有点弧度。
^感觉再写下去就变成我在作图了，于是到此为止。
如果不改的话找我要泡也行，当然能做到更好的话希望你能做到更好。
基本上我的观点也很明显了，如果能懂我的意思的话……那么后面也能尝试着自己改动一些。
如果不能的话我也只能233了。
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[General]
The offset is a little bit off, the correct one should be 2370. Before change it check my mod, I used the unsnapped elements to mod.
I'd suggest to add custom numbers too 'cause not all the skins fit these hitcircles.
[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - Make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:06:844 (4) - Same as above, make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:08:344 (1) - Move this note 1 square to left in the grid level, so you obtain 00:06:094 (3) - this note flipped horizontally. Then I'd move 00:09:094 (2) - this slider too since 00:08:344 (1,2) - these two elements were in the same x coord
00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:00:094 (4,1) - Fix this blanket a little bit
01:05:344 (1,2,3) - Try to make a perfect triangle
[Hard]
00:04:219 (4) - Change this slider with 00:03:094 (2) - this one rotated by 180°
00:15:844 (4) - Add whistle on this slider (no head/end)
00:18:844 (3,4) - Fix this blanket
00:18:844 (3) - Clap S 20% on its end? You did the same 00:13:594 (4) - here
00:30:281 (3) - Add a note here, it fits the vocal
00:36:844 (3,5) - Since you unstacked 00:37:219 (4,6) - these two notes I'd unstack these two too
00:38:344 (1,2) - In my opinion these two elements are really close... I'd fix the spacing
00:48:844 (2) - Move this slider at x:372 y:352, now it's stacked under 00:47:344 (1) - 's middle. Anyway 00:47:344 (1,2) - these two elements are really close...
00:51:094 (2,3) - Same, again. I think that these two elements are too close
00:55:781 (2,3,4,1) - Increase the spacing a bit here (x1.8 should be fine) and try to make a curved stream:
01:00:469 (4,5,6) - Stack these notes or make a linear triple, a curved and tiny triple is a bit weird
01:01:594 (7,2) - Make a blanket with these two elements and then fix 01:02:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern
01:05:344 (1) - This note is stacked under 01:04:594 (6) - this slider and then when you play the map 01:05:344 (1) - this note breaks 01:05:344 (1,2,1) - this line. Move 01:04:594 (6) - at x:236 y:304 to unstack it or find another idea to place it
01:13:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd not stack them all, a manual stack/correct spacing between the sliders would be better
Good luck Azure :3The offset is a little bit off, the correct one should be 2370. Before change it check my mod, I used the unsnapped elements to mod.
I'd suggest to add custom numbers too 'cause not all the skins fit these hitcircles.
[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - Make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:06:844 (4) - Same as above, make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:08:344 (1) - Move this note 1 square to left in the grid level, so you obtain 00:06:094 (3) - this note flipped horizontally. Then I'd move 00:09:094 (2) - this slider too since 00:08:344 (1,2) - these two elements were in the same x coord
00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:00:094 (4,1) - Fix this blanket a little bit
01:05:344 (1,2,3) - Try to make a perfect triangle
[Hard]
00:04:219 (4) - Change this slider with 00:03:094 (2) - this one rotated by 180°
00:15:844 (4) - Add whistle on this slider (no head/end)
00:18:844 (3,4) - Fix this blanket
00:18:844 (3) - Clap S 20% on its end? You did the same 00:13:594 (4) - here
00:30:281 (3) - Add a note here, it fits the vocal
00:36:844 (3,5) - Since you unstacked 00:37:219 (4,6) - these two notes I'd unstack these two too
00:38:344 (1,2) - In my opinion these two elements are really close... I'd fix the spacing
00:48:844 (2) - Move this slider at x:372 y:352, now it's stacked under 00:47:344 (1) - 's middle. Anyway 00:47:344 (1,2) - these two elements are really close...
00:51:094 (2,3) - Same, again. I think that these two elements are too close
00:55:781 (2,3,4,1) - Increase the spacing a bit here (x1.8 should be fine) and try to make a curved stream:
01:00:469 (4,5,6) - Stack these notes or make a linear triple, a curved and tiny triple is a bit weird
01:01:594 (7,2) - Make a blanket with these two elements and then fix 01:02:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern
01:05:344 (1) - This note is stacked under 01:04:594 (6) - this slider and then when you play the map 01:05:344 (1) - this note breaks 01:05:344 (1,2,1) - this line. Move 01:04:594 (6) - at x:236 y:304 to unstack it or find another idea to place it
01:13:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd not stack them all, a manual stack/correct spacing between the sliders would be better
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[Hard]
Since the bpm is slow and the diff itself is not so hard, so i advise AR-1
[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - there are no “new combo”‘s icon after the spinner, tho this is not a big problem...
[Hard]
Since the bpm is slow and the diff itself is not so hard, so i advise AR-1
[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - there are no “new combo”‘s icon after the spinner, tho this is not a big problem...
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[General]
RDG EDBG.png is almost 2M big, I think maybe we can reduce the size of this file? so we can save some place and let people download this map faster.(如果转成JPG我感觉至少能减少1.5M容量 因为我没觉得有必要PNG呀 如果实在要PNG的话转个新的PNG似乎也能省不少地方）
nothing else :3
RDG EDBG.png is almost 2M big, I think maybe we can reduce the size of this file? so we can save some place and let people download this map faster.(如果转成JPG我感觉至少能减少1.5M容量 因为我没觉得有必要PNG呀 如果实在要PNG的话转个新的PNG似乎也能省不少地方）
nothing else :3
Topic Starter
改成jpg重新上傳了，謝謝妮妮!Nymph wrote:
[General]
RDG EDBG.png is almost 2M big, I think maybe we can reduce the size of this file? so we can save some place and let people download this map faster.(如果转成JPG我感觉至少能减少1.5M容量 因为我没觉得有必要PNG呀 如果实在要PNG的话转个新的PNG似乎也能省不少地方）
nothing else :3
=A= ranked.
Topic Starter
Thanks eveless' bubble and Nymph's rank ヾ(●´▽｀●)ノ
Gratz!
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恭喜 :O!
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咦Az姑姑又rank惹
Uh, no offense, but why is this ranked? It's got 0 difficulty, it's just a PP whoring map, it's cute, but 'Hard' is so badly labelled.
Topic Starter
it's just a slow song and I love this anime...Hula wrote:
Uh, no offense, but why is this ranked? It's got 0 difficulty, it's just a PP whoring map, it's cute, but 'Hard' is so badly labelled.
if you don't like a simple map, you can skip it
Congratz! Azure. So fast ^^
We also need slow songs and maps for beginners/medium playersHula wrote:
Uh, no offense, but why is this ranked? It's got 0 difficulty, it's just a PP whoring map, it's cute, but 'Hard' is so badly labelled.
please :3, every map can get ranked, no matter it is hard or not. The mapper like the anime and this song so he map for this, I think it is enoughHula wrote:
Uh, no offense, but why is this ranked? It's got 0 difficulty, it's just a PP whoring map, it's cute, but 'Hard' is so badly labelled.