[General]

1. 因为有hitcircle的皮肤所以你需要在[Color]下方手动添加Sliderborader的值以防与玩家自定义的皮肤冲突
   白色值是255,255,255
   具体的可以参考 ↓
   
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   随便开了一张自己的图做示范截图了0.0 这个值不是白色的，你只要把数字改成三个255就好

[N]

1. 00:23:344 (4) - 感觉0.0太直了，总觉得那么温柔的歌好像用弯一点的好点，类似
   
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2. 00:47:344 (4) - 略丑0.0感觉还不如
   
3. 01:12:844 (4) - 同样觉得略丑了囧
   

[H]

1. 00:12:844 (3) - 感觉不如
   
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2. 总体觉得有些减速稍微有一些突然，就是有种好像不应该减速但是减了速也没啥问题的那种感觉。所以大概可以考虑把减速的sldier设定成一个专门的combo color用以区分0.0 比如减速的都用浅黄色什么的

[General]
The offset is a little bit off, the correct one should be 2370. Before change it check my mod, I used the unsnapped elements to mod.
I'd suggest to add custom numbers too 'cause not all the skins fit these hitcircles.

[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - Make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:06:844 (4) - Same as above, make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:08:344 (1) - Move this note 1 square to left in the grid level, so you obtain 00:06:094 (3) - this note flipped horizontally. Then I'd move 00:09:094 (2) - this slider too since 00:08:344 (1,2) - these two elements were in the same x coord
00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:00:094 (4,1) - Fix this blanket a little bit
01:05:344 (1,2,3) - Try to make a perfect triangle

[Hard]
00:04:219 (4) - Change this slider with 00:03:094 (2) - this one rotated by 180°
00:15:844 (4) - Add whistle on this slider (no head/end)
00:18:844 (3,4) - Fix this blanket
00:18:844 (3) - Clap S 20% on its end? You did the same 00:13:594 (4) - here
00:30:281 (3) - Add a note here, it fits the vocal
00:36:844 (3,5) - Since you unstacked 00:37:219 (4,6) - these two notes I'd unstack these two too
00:38:344 (1,2) - In my opinion these two elements are really close... I'd fix the spacing
00:48:844 (2) - Move this slider at x:372 y:352, now it's stacked under 00:47:344 (1) - 's middle. Anyway 00:47:344 (1,2) - these two elements are really close...
00:51:094 (2,3) - Same, again. I think that these two elements are too close
00:55:781 (2,3,4,1) - Increase the spacing a bit here (x1.8 should be fine) and try to make a curved stream:
01:00:469 (4,5,6) - Stack these notes or make a linear triple, a curved and tiny triple is a bit weird
01:01:594 (7,2) - Make a blanket with these two elements and then fix 01:02:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern
01:05:344 (1) - This note is stacked under 01:04:594 (6) - this slider and then when you play the map 01:05:344 (1) - this note breaks 01:05:344 (1,2,1) - this line. Move 01:04:594 (6) - at x:236 y:304 to unstack it or find another idea to place it
01:13:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd not stack them all, a manual stack/correct spacing between the sliders would be better