Hi~
[General]
if possible, I recommend you changing the whistle to soft or some special one like this:
http://puu.sh/3yAPt.wav lack of hitsounds in the kiai of most easier diffs. please think of some cool sound pattern.
[Another]
00:04:907 (4,5) - Highly recommend that you ctrl+G, as the jump feels more "dynamic".
00:07:478 (4) - reverse arrow partially overlapped. please consider this.
00:07:649 - add whistle? it represents a rising atmosphere
00:09:192 - ^
00:10:392 - ^
00:17:507 - add a note? sounds more intense
00:29:078 (2) - missing soft clap?
00:29:249 - add whistle? the 3/2 whistle pattern sounds more regular
00:30:792 - add soft clap?
00:34:564 (2) - ^
00:34:735 - add whistle?
00:40:049 - add soft clap?
00:42:792 (2) - ^
00:45:535 - ^
00:48:278 (2) - ^
00:49:992 (5) - not sure. extend by 1/4? plays cooler
00:52:478 (4) - it should be at 00:52:649 - imo.
01:13:992 (5) - try moving 1/2 earlier. if so, also move 01:16:735 (5) - 01:19:478 (5) - 01:22:221 (5) -
01:56:849 (4) - move 1/4 later? it sounds better.
02:04:049 (1,2,3,4) - looks quite like 1/4 stream, especially as after the 1/4 slider. try this:
[Hyper]
00:07:649 - 00:10:392 - add whistle? same as Another
00:41:764 (7) - increase spacing imo. not so goodlooking
01:37:307 - try removing the whistle. if so, also add whistle to 01:37:478 - 01:37:992 - 01:38:507 - .
(then adjust some other hitsound pattern lol)
01:42:792 (2,4) - 4's reverse arrow is overlapped. make some rotation.
01:46:907 (3) - space more
[Standard]
cool sliders...
00:34:221 (1) - rotate this so that the following 3 won't overlap it's tail
00:40:564 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing inconsistency
00:45:707 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:392 (5) - NC? 8 notes in a combo seems too long as a normal level.
01:20:849 (4) - ^
01:53:764 (1) - finish
01:56:507 - better add a break here
02:19:821 (2) - simply copy 1? current pattern looks not so good
just like a toilet lid[Beginner]
00:07:478 (2,3,1) - tiny spacing inconsistency
00:28:735 (1,2,3) - ^
00:32:849 (4,5,1) - ^
01:05:764 (3) - try this?
368,144,65764,2,0,B|383:185|423:202|461:184|461:184|496:136,2,160,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:53:078 (1) - finish
02:18:449 (1,2,3) - tiny spacing inconsistency
[TK'S Oni]
00:06:107 (26) - change to d? responds better to the previous bars. if so, do the same to 00:08:849 (40) -
01:01:821 - 01:04:564 - add k? sounds cooler imo
01:13:992 (400) - move 1/2 early? if so, do the same to 01:16:735 (408) - 01:19:478 (418) - 01:22:221 (426) -
02:12:364 (789) - k?
02:17:849 (837) - ^
[TK'S Muzukashii]
01:52:907 (406) - k?
02:04:221 (441) - ^
02:08:507 (459,460) - k d, imo
Good luck~