hi! thanks your request

[General]

1. Artist:原田ひとみ should not open space

[Easy]

1. 00:44:885 (1) - add clap?
2. 00:45:340 (2) - add clap end slider?
3. 00:57:612 (3) - add 1/2 slider? early slider clap,end slider finish
4. 00:58:521 (4) - add circle with clap if you add 1/2 slider 00:57:612 (3) here

[Normal]

1. 00:31:930 (4) - delete it?

[Hard]

1. 01:16:703 (5) - revers slider here and 01:17:612 (5) - add cicle here

[Insane]

1. Nice diff!

that's all!

gl

hopperhtkn wrote:

hi! thanks your request

[General]

1. Artist:原田ひとみ should not open space Fixed '-'

[Easy]

1. 00:44:885 (1) - add clap? Fixed
2. 00:45:340 (2) - add clap end slider? Fixed
3. 00:57:612 (3) - add 1/2 slider? early slider clap,end slider finish It's an easy diff 1/2 slider not really recomended :/
4. 00:58:521 (4) - add circle with clap if you add 1/2 slider 00:57:612 (3) here i didn't >.<

[Normal]

1. 00:31:930 (4) - delete it? i prefer keep this note >.<

[Hard]

1. 01:16:703 (5) - revers slider here and 01:17:612 (5) - add cicle here other way :3

[Insane]

1. Nice diff! thx >3<

that's all!

gl

ありがとうございます hopper-さん ! and also thx for what u said me in-game

-海-さん!!!!


[General]

Tags: yozuca* for doing the song lyrics | Optional I guess, but yozuca* is pretty popular now

AIBat loves you:

Missing skin element:
approachcircle.png - needed for any skin that uses custom circles or sliders. even the default one works.

Hard Difficulty:
00:14:430 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:612 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

Audio Lead-In: (Normal, Hard, Insane)
There is only 1851 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
Add 149 lead-in time to your 1511 (1660) on all diffs. (including your easy, which has a normal lead in time I guess)

Starting position:
Add a timing point (red line)on 00:00:794 - This is why your claps, kiai time, and everything else aren't in their correct spot. Nightcore mod will haunt you for life if you don't fix this. Keep the old one as well though because you need it for the proper BPM

[Easy]
Small suggestion to spice up the map a bit, though you probably wouldn't like it based on your style: This follows the main sound much better and it'll be really nice for an easy difficulty if there is more variety in it.

1. 00:02:612 (2,3,4) - Delete the the (2) slider. Convert (3) and (4) into a slider
2. 00:06:249 (4,1) - Same idea, Delete the (4) slider, and convert the tail end and the (1) into a slider.
3. 01:18:976 (2) - same suggestion | Delete this
4. 01:22:612 (3) - ^
   --------
5. 00:11:249 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/3w7hA.jpg | I highly suggest matching the finishes here because the reverse on the (3) slider is an empty note.

[Normal]
Seems a bit hard for a Normal. I'll probably be suggesting lots of notes that you really don't need to worry about having in there. It should make the song a bit more fun to play and seem like less of a struggle for some half notes. Your mapping style is pretty different from mine so I don't really expect you to make many changes

Also, why not raise the AR by 1? just so it matches with your other difficulties. (232 / 444 / 676 / 787 is the current. 4 to 7 is a pretty big jump in AR)

1. 00:06:249 (6) - reduce the length of this by 1/2
2. 00:08:749 (4) - Delete this, This circle feels more forced than anything, and it makes the next little bit flow much better.
3. 00:36:476 (4) - Delete this and place a circle where its tail end is on 00:36:703 -
4. 00:42:612 (1,2,3) - Try these placings or something similar. having notes right in the middle after a spinner can be hard to see for people that use big hit bursts like the classic 300 one. This also makes the slider feel more symmetrical if its in the middle: http://puu.sh/3w8mP.jpg | Don't forget to readjust the next (1) circle that you can see its outline for on the pic.

[Hard]

1. 00:12:840 (4,1) - Instead of using a spinner, how about a long slow slider? http://puu.sh/3w8zw.jpg
2. 00:48:067 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you try using a bit of symmetry here? I think it would look much cleaner like this: http://puu.sh/3w8MV.jpg (forgot to NC in this pic) and http://puu.sh/3w8NF.jpg for the (4)
3. 00:56:476 (1,2,3) - This isn't very clean.. try copy+paste/horizontal flipping from the previous (4,5) and then placing the (3) at 56/104
4. 00:58:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move the (1) to 220/156 Copy paste and rotate it for 2,3,4 to keep it symmetrical and in the center | Move the (5) to 112/336 | and try moving the (6) to 32/146 | Leave (7) alone.
5. 01:19:885 (4,5) - make this a horizontal flip of either one so it matches your symmetry that you use up ahead.
6. 01:23:521 (1) - I would horizontal flip this because to me, it doesn't play like a jump and it'll probably catch people off guard.

[Insane]

1. 00:07:840 (4) - I think this would play better on the (1) instead of the (2) as it creates more of a circular motion
2. 00:16:476 - for the amount you love vocals. I think it would be great if you could squeeze a note in this spot instead of making this a 1/1 slider.
3. 00:51:249 (8) - two suggestions: Turn this into a single circle, or extend this slider by 1/2 It plays funny and hits nothing on its tail end when its a 1/2 slider
4. 00:51:703 (1,2) - would play better as a 1/1 slider due to both vocals and the music even as following the bass isn't that important
5. 00:56:021 (3,4) - The (3) slider plays strange as well. It would be better to turn this into a reverse slider, or convert it into pure circles.
6. 01:22:158 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a note in the missing spot. you are missing a key drum hit.
7. 01:24:090 - and 01:24:317 - Add notes. this means you'll be making this a stream. the drums in the background really call for a stream here, so I would highly suggest it.

Nice mapset, take a

Thats really about it though. Couldn't find much else to suggest.

Lanturn wrote:

-海-さん!!!!


[General]

Tags: yozuca* for doing the song lyrics | Optional I guess, but yozuca* is pretty popular now Fixed

AIBat loves you:

Missing skin element:
approachcircle.png - needed for any skin that uses custom circles or sliders. even the default one works. Fixed

Hard Difficulty:
00:14:430 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Fixed
00:42:612 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Fixed

Audio Lead-In: (Normal, Hard, Insane)
There is only 1851 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
Add 149 lead-in time to your 1511 (1660) on all diffs. (including your easy, which has a normal lead in time I guess) Fixed

Starting position:
Add a timing point (red line)on 00:00:794 - This is why your claps, kiai time, and everything else aren't in their correct spot. Nightcore mod will haunt you for life if you don't fix this. Keep the old one as well though because you need it for the proper BPM other way : Change the first timing point

[Easy]
Small suggestion to spice up the map a bit, though you probably wouldn't like it based on your style: This follows the main sound much better and it'll be really nice for an easy difficulty if there is more variety in it.

1. 00:02:612 (2,3,4) - Delete the the (2) slider. Convert (3) and (4) into a slider
2. 00:06:249 (4,1) - Same idea, Delete the (4) slider, and convert the tail end and the (1) into a slider.
3. 01:18:976 (2) - same suggestion | Delete this
4. 01:22:612 (3) - ^
   --------
5. 00:11:249 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/3w7hA.jpg | I highly suggest matching the finishes here because the reverse on the (3) slider is an empty note.
   all fixed >3<

[Normal]
Seems a bit hard for a Normal. I'll probably be suggesting lots of notes that you really don't need to worry about having in there. It should make the song a bit more fun to play and seem like less of a struggle for some half notes. Your mapping style is pretty different from mine so I don't really expect you to make many changes

Also, why not raise the AR by 1? just so it matches with your other difficulties. (232 / 444 / 676 / 787 is the current. 4 to 7 is a pretty big jump in AR) prefer keep the AR to 4

1. 00:06:249 (6) - reduce the length of this by 1/2
2. 00:08:749 (4) - Delete this, This circle feels more forced than anything, and it makes the next little bit flow much better.
3. 00:36:476 (4) - Delete this and place a circle where its tail end is on 00:36:703 -
4. 00:42:612 (1,2,3) - Try these placings or something similar. having notes right in the middle after a spinner can be hard to see for people that use big hit bursts like the classic 300 one. This also makes the slider feel more symmetrical if its in the middle: http://puu.sh/3w8mP.jpg | Don't forget to readjust the next (1) circle that you can see its outline for on the pic. fixed the rest

[Hard]

1. 00:12:840 (4,1) - Instead of using a spinner, how about a long slow slider? http://puu.sh/3w8zw.jpg nice idea fixed
2. 00:48:067 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you try using a bit of symmetry here? I think it would look much cleaner like this: http://puu.sh/3w8MV.jpg (forgot to NC in this pic) and http://puu.sh/3w8NF.jpg for the (4) Fixed
3. 00:56:476 (1,2,3) - This isn't very clean.. try copy+paste/horizontal flipping from the previous (4,5) and then placing the (3) at 56/104 I understood nothing xD so no change
4. 00:58:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move the (1) to 220/156 Copy paste and rotate it for 2,3,4 to keep it symmetrical and in the center | Move the (5) to 112/336 | and try moving the (6) to 32/146 | Leave (7) alone. same here
5. 01:19:885 (4,5) - make this a horizontal flip of either one so it matches your symmetry that you use up ahead. more or less fixed
6. 01:23:521 (1) - I would horizontal flip this because to me, it doesn't play like a jump and it'll probably catch people off guard. i don't think so

[Insane]

1. 00:07:840 (4) - I think this would play better on the (1) instead of the (2) as it creates more of a circular motion yeah fixed
2. 00:16:476 - for the amount you love vocals. I think it would be great if you could squeeze a note in this spot instead of making this a 1/1 slider. no, prefer my way
3. 00:51:249 (8) - two suggestions: Turn this into a single circle, or extend this slider by 1/2 It plays funny and hits nothing on its tail end when its a 1/2 slider same here
4. 00:51:703 (1,2) - would play better as a 1/1 slider due to both vocals and the music even as following the bass isn't that important same
5. 00:56:021 (3,4) - The (3) slider plays strange as well. It would be better to turn this into a reverse slider, or convert it into pure circles. Fixed
6. 01:22:158 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a note in the missing spot. you are missing a key drum hit. Fixed
7. 01:24:090 - and 01:24:317 - Add notes. this means you'll be making this a stream. the drums in the background really call for a stream here, so I would highly suggest it. I'm not following the drum here ^^

Nice mapset, take a

Thats really about it though. Couldn't find much else to suggest.

thx a lot for mod it was helfull :3 and also thx for star lanturn no baka :3

i'll mod your map tonight or tomorow ( a bit tired)

She's so kawaii

So I try so hard to make her squee

Insane:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - It'd be cool if there were hitsounds on this or something to make it more interesting
00:23:298 (2) - This feels really awkward. I know you're worked up to a wall here, but my arm is forced to shoot in the opposite direction it wants to go, and then I have to do a slider that is the complete opposite direction. Patterns are nice, but playability :3
01:03:298 (2) - CTRL + H or something?
01:13:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could probably be more effective making some nice long sliders rather than having this slowdown
01:17:161 (6,7) - Add claps to the end of these sliders
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
00:00:343 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - Same as Insane
00:28:070 (3) - I know why you did this and in a musical phrase sense it works, but consider maybe having a 1/2 slider with only one repeat, and then a 1/1 slider. Sliders with lots of repeats that aren't for effects or anything tend to not be liked and hard to read
00:33:752 (3) - Remake this with just 1 midpoint
00:35:570 (2) - ^
01:06:707 (2) - Add clap
01:17:843 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^

Normal:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard
00:36:707 (4) - Add clap
00:57:161 (1) - Add clap

Easy:
00:00:798 (1,1,2,1) - Same as Normal:

mya.

CDFA wrote:

She's so kawaii ne !

So I try so hard to make her squee

Insane:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - It'd be cool if there were hitsounds on this or something to make it more interesting Fixed
00:23:298 (2) - This feels really awkward. I know you're worked up to a wall here, but my arm is forced to shoot in the opposite direction it wants to go, and then I have to do a slider that is the complete opposite direction. Patterns are nice, but playability :3 Hum more or less fixed >.<
01:03:298 (2) - CTRL + H or something? No i prefer like it's now
01:13:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could probably be more effective making some nice long sliders rather than having this slowdown yeah fixed
01:17:161 (6,7) - Add claps to the end of these sliders Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

Hard:
00:00:343 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - Same as Insane Fixed
00:28:070 (3) - I know why you did this and in a musical phrase sense it works, but consider maybe having a 1/2 slider with only one repeat, and then a 1/1 slider. Sliders with lots of repeats that aren't for effects or anything tend to not be liked and hard to read fixed better now :3
00:33:752 (3) - Remake this with just 1 midpoint No arrow's shape
00:35:570 (2) - ^ ^
01:06:707 (2) - Add clap Fixed
01:17:843 (3) - Add clap on end of slider Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

Normal:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard Fixed
00:36:707 (4) - Add clap Fixed
00:57:161 (1) - Add clap Fixed

Easy:
00:00:798 (1,1,2,1) - Same as Normal: Fixed

mya.

thx a lot for mod :3 !

Just some suggestions..

Normal

01:11:480 (3) - repeat and put a finish at the end?

Insane

00:31:707 (8) - instead of repeating the slider, don't repeat and put notes at 00:32:389 and 00:32:616
00:46:252 (5) - ^
00:48:525 (1) - shorten so it repeats at 00:48:752 end at 00:48:980 and put notes at 00:49:207 and 00:49:434
01:24:093 - add a note?

Good luck

neonat wrote:

Just some suggestions..

Normal

01:11:480 (3) - repeat and put a finish at the end? i follow the voice here :3

Insane

00:31:707 (8) - instead of repeating the slider, don't repeat and put notes at 00:32:389 and 00:32:616 fixed for this one
00:46:252 (5) - ^ not here
00:48:525 (1) - shorten so it repeats at 00:48:752 end at 00:48:980 and put notes at 00:49:207 and 00:49:434 i prefer like it's now
01:24:093 - add a note? i'm not following the drum here

Good luck

thx for mod :3

Mod de l'espace !
comme promis...
My modding is NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB.

[General]
Je ne sais pas si t'auras des problèmes avec ça, AImod dit que ton BG est supérieur à 1024*768.

[Easy]

00:16:707 (4) - si tu regarde bien, tu peux faire un meilleur blanket pour (3) il faut que tu arrange le slider pour que la queue soit stacked sur le début de : 00:19:434 (1)
00:33:298 (1,2) - quand c'est pas centré c'est moche pour ce genre de pattern, arrange toi pour centrer ça, si tu l'as fait, replaces les notes qui vont après.
00:42:616 (1) - Je sais pas si t'as fait exprès ou pas, mais il vaut mieux le mettre au centre pour un joueur qui termine de spin.
00:59:889 (2) - better blanket pour (3)
01:17:161 (1) - ça le fait mieu de mettre un finish sur le reverse.
01:20:798 (2) - ^

[Normal]

00:02:161 (4) - awh, make this slider better, il est tout tordu c'est MOCHE. fais comme ça :
00:27:843 (2) - l'overlap est bizarre, j'aime pas trop, quand un overlap est moche ou bizarre, ça peut facilement devenir an unrankable issue.
00:37:161 (1) - Add finish au début du slider
00:43:752 (3) - You can make this slider better :
01:03:980 (4,5,6) - pour un joueur débutant c'est très dure à play ce genre de choses, (5) ne devrait pas être stacked sur (6)

[Hard]

00:00:343 (1,1,2,3) - Please, centre.
00:10:570 (6,7) - ton pattern est beau sauf à la fin, 4 grid down.
00:13:070 (5) - Finish au début du slider
00:33:752 (3) - awh god, this slider, change it please :
00:35:570 (2) - pareil...
00:54:434 (3) - better blanket for (1), change juste la position de la queue du slider
00:56:480 (1,2,3) - fait plutôt un triangle équilatéral.
01:12:389 (4) - add finish, it's better


[Insane]

00:23:298 (2) - 1 grid down
00:40:570 (3) - grid right, comme ça il sera bien au centre
00:40:116 (2) - ^
00:47:843 (9,10) - pour le rythme, je préfère ça :
00:54:207 (8) - 2 grid right
00:57:616 (3) - 1 grid left
00:57:389 (2,3) - pour un meilleur mouvement, je te suggère de décaler ces 2 notes plus haut (déplace manuellement, awh chinese mapping) :
00:57:843 (4) - add finish
01:11:934 (1) - ^ (end)
01:20:798 (1,2) - wut ? ce sont pas les mêmes sliders ? tu sais ce que tu dois faire...
01:23:525 (1,2,3,4) - Square classique, perso, le squares, it's just boring... => 01:23:752 (2,3) - Ctrl+G


Pal mal la map, dans toutes les diffs tu as la possibilité de faire de meilleurs patterns en utilisant le centre par exemple mais tu gâches ça , ce qui est dommage...
Good Luck ~

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Mod de l'espace !
comme promis...
My modding is NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB.

[General]
Je ne sais pas si t'auras des problèmes avec ça, AImod dit que ton BG est supérieur à 1024*768. Pas un probleme c'est soit 1064x768 soit 1366x768 ^^

[Easy]

00:16:707 (4) - si tu regarde bien, tu peux faire un meilleur blanket pour (3) il faut que tu arrange le slider pour que la queue soit stacked sur le début de : 00:19:434 (1) Fixed
00:33:298 (1,2) - quand c'est pas centré c'est moche pour ce genre de pattern, arrange toi pour centrer ça, si tu l'as fait, replaces les notes qui vont après. ça me dérange pas personellement
00:42:616 (1) - Je sais pas si t'as fait exprès ou pas, mais il vaut mieux le mettre au centre pour un joueur qui termine de spin. Fixed
00:59:889 (2) - better blanket pour (3) Rien changé trés bien comment c'est
01:17:161 (1) - ça le fait mieu de mettre un finish sur le reverse. Fixed
01:20:798 (2) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

00:02:161 (4) - awh, make this slider better, il est tout tordu c'est MOCHE. fais comme ça : Fixed

SPOILER

00:27:843 (2) - l'overlap est bizarre, j'aime pas trop, quand un overlap est moche ou bizarre, ça peut facilement devenir an unrankable issue. Je garde ça en tete je changerai plus tard peut etre
00:37:161 (1) - Add finish au début du slider Fixed
00:43:752 (3) - You can make this slider better : Plus ou moins fixed

SPOILER

01:03:980 (4,5,6) - pour un joueur débutant c'est très dure à play ce genre de choses, (5) ne devrait pas être stacked sur (6) Pas pour moi >.<

[Hard]

00:00:343 (1,1,2,3) - Please, centre. Fixed
00:10:570 (6,7) - ton pattern est beau sauf à la fin, 4 grid down. Fixed
00:13:070 (5) - Finish au début du slider Fixed
00:33:752 (3) - awh god, this slider, change it please : No forme en flèche je garde

SPOILER

00:35:570 (2) - pareil... same
00:54:434 (3) - better blanket for (1), change juste la position de la queue du slider Fixed
00:56:480 (1,2,3) - fait plutôt un triangle équilatéral. nop je prefere comme c'est
01:12:389 (4) - add finish, it's better Fixed


[Insane]

00:23:298 (2) - 1 grid down Fixed
00:40:570 (3) - grid right, comme ça il sera bien au centre Fixed
00:40:116 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:47:843 (9,10) - pour le rythme, je préfère ça : pas moi >.<
00:54:207 (8) - 2 grid right Fixed
00:57:616 (3) - 1 grid left Fixed
00:57:389 (2,3) - pour un meilleur mouvement, je te suggère de décaler ces 2 notes plus haut (déplace manuellement, awh chinese mapping) : Fixed

SPOILER

00:57:843 (4) - add finish Fixed
01:11:934 (1) - ^ (end) Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - wut ? ce sont pas les mêmes sliders ? tu sais ce que tu dois faire... Fixed
01:23:525 (1,2,3,4) - Square classique, perso, le squares, it's just boring... => 01:23:752 (2,3) - Ctrl+G ouep sympa fixed


Pal mal la map, dans toutes les diffs tu as la possibilité de faire de meilleurs patterns en utilisant le centre par exemple mais tu gâches ça , ce qui est dommage... Question de préférence
Good Luck ~

Merci pour le mod :3

Yah! Umi >w<
Mod request from in-game PM =w=

xChippy wrote:

Yah! Umi >w<
Mod request from in-game PM =w=

[Easy]
00:07:161 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:37:161 (1) - Finish on head
00:40:570 (1) - Add clap?
00:16:707 (4,1) - Stack them
00:48:525 (2,5) - Stack them~
00:26:252 (5) - nazi =w= spacing is 1.06 it may not affect playing but no harm fixing it =w=
01:09:889 (2) - same nazi as above =w=
00:55:343 (4,1) - Swap NC's :3

[Normal]
00:22:161 (4,1) - The distance here ><, imo just unstack 4 and place it with DS =w=
00:44:889 (1) - 55|203 flows better imo and for the sake of DS too :3
00:50:798 (4) - Don't really like how this one looks like ><. but it's just personal preference =w= But i prefer mine >3<
01:03:298 (3,5) - Align these :3?
00:07:161 (1) - Clap slider end
00:15:116 (4) - Add finish to slider end
00:29:434 (4) - ^
00:49:434 Add a clap with slider tick =w=
01:11:025 (2) - Clap at slider end?
00:32:843 (6) - a 1/2 slider instead =w=?
00:40:343 (5) - add note?

[Hard]
00:07:616 (3) - Add clap~
00:37:161 (1) - Add finish to head
00:04:434 (1) - move the last anchor point a little so it evenly spreads around (2)
00:07:616 (3) - 1 grid down to stack
00:33:752 (3,2) - make these the same if you stack them you'll see they're different

[Insane]
01:24:093 I clearly hear a drum soo maybe add a note here and stack it on 01:23:980 (3) - ? if you do stack 01:24:207 (4) - with 01:23:980 (3) - too seems the best option here and also looks not bad :3.
00:07:616 (3) - add clap
00:29:889 (1) - NC =w=?
01:03:298 (2) - remove clap from tail

That's all I could find =w=
Gogo Umi >w<
(╯°□°)╯︵

Wow it was a great mod 98% fixed (no reply = fixed), thx a lot for mod and star chippy >3< !!

IRC mod, Sorry youmi for not equality mod. Anyway, Good luck will be ranked hehe ^^

thx for mod yatsu

You have reminded me I still need to watch this show thank you very much!


Insane

00:00:343 (1) - The whistle is creating some weird dissonances almost every time it appears. Whilst you could get multiple pitches to fit the chord progression that is so much effort to do just to even work out how best to fill some of the open chords, so my ears will thank you if you get rid of it from every diff please. x.x

00:22:048 (8,9) - It feels odd playing this and there's nothing in the music which (8) should be there at all actually so I would get rid of it myself.

00:34:434 (3,4,5) - I don't like where (5) is, perhaps stack it on top of (3) instead of the slider?
00:36:252 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as above.

01:09:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space between (4) and (5) doesn't suit the way you've used hit circles in the rest of the map in that there's never a gap of more than 1/2 a tick unless it's really obviously in the music. Turning (4) into a slider would solve that but then would break the pattern which is also not good... Personally myself I would want to come up with a completely new pattern like this? Though I am useless with patterns like that please for the love of god don't use that on in it was just the 1st thing I could come up with. ;_;

01:23:980 (3,4,5,1) - There's a missing note in between (4) and (1), more pattern breaking, sorry!


Hard


00:12:843 (4,5) - Stack pls.

00:34:889 (4) - I would make this a hit circle + slider myself.
01:16:934 (1) - 2 hit circles rather than a slider.


Normal

00:42:616 (1,2) - Change into one slider, I'm also tempted to say it is happening too soon after the spinner ends so maybe shorten the spinner a bit?
00:58:980 (1) - Same as before with spinner

01:02:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm seems rather complex, I would make (1) and (3) longer whilst getting rid of (2) and (4)

01:09:889 (1) - Shorten the slider and replace the end with a hit circle


Easy

00:15:343 (1) - Definitely happens too soon after the spinner. Make the spinner shorter or delete this note.

00:19:434 (1) - Missing claps either side of the slider

00:19:434 (1) - Missing clap at end of slider

00:33:525 (1) - Make this 1 tick later, keeps things on the beat and helps with timing the next slider too though I'd still be very wary doing red beats on an easy map.

00:42:616 (1) - Too soon after spinner again.

00:43:752 (2) - I would get rid of this slider and put a 2 tick one like so.
00:48:525 (2) - Missing clap

01:15:343 (2) - Add clap at end of slider

01:19:889 (1) - Add claps both ends of slider



Well I've gotta say this mod took a little longer than expected since I started transcribing this song in Sibelius and started messing around with rearraging the piece. x.x
But in any case the map set is well done overall good luck getting it ranked! ^^

spaminabox wrote:

You have reminded me I still need to watch this show thank you very much! Ahah you're welcome ;3


Insane

00:00:343 (1) - The whistle is creating some weird dissonances almost every time it appears. Whilst you could get multiple pitches to fit the chord progression that is so much effort to do just to even work out how best to fill some of the open chords, so my ears will thank you if you get rid of it from every diff please. x.x that's why i lower the volum for somes whistle

00:22:048 (8,9) - It feels odd playing this and there's nothing in the music which (8) should be there at all actually so I would get rid of it myself. no change

00:34:434 (3,4,5) - I don't like where (5) is, perhaps stack it on top of (3) instead of the slider? no change
00:36:252 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as above. other way here

01:0989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space between (4) and (5) doesn't suit the way you've used hit circles in the rest of the map in that there's never a gap of more than 1/2 a tick unless it's really obviously in the music. Turning (4) into a slider would solve that but then would break the pattern which is also not good... Personally myself I would want to come up with a completely new pattern like this?

SPOILER

Though I am useless with patterns like that please for the love of god don't use that on in it was just the 1st thing I could come up with. ;_; Keep my pattern >3<

01:23:980 (3,4,5,1) - There's a missing note in between (4) and (1), more pattern breaking, sorry! drum stop a 4


Hard


00:1243 (4,5) - Stack pls. it was stack before, but i prefer whithout

00:3489 (4) - I would make this a hit circle + slider myself. dont really like this
01:16:934 (1) - 2 hit circles rather than a slider. same :/


Normal

00:42:616 (1,2) - Change into one slider, I'm also tempted to say it is happening too soon after the spinner ends so maybe shorten the spinner a bit? not a problem for me
00:58:980 (1) - Same as before with spinner same

01:02:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm seems rather complex, I would make (1) and (3) longer whilst getting rid of (2) and (4) it folow the voice >.<

01:0989 (1) - Shorten the slider and replace the end with a hit circle other way


Easy

00:15:343 (1) - Definitely happens too soon after the spinner. Make the spinner shorter or delete this note. I don't think so

00:19:434 (1) - Missing claps either side of the slider Fixed

00:19:434 (1) - Missing clap at end of slider Fixed

00:33:525 (1) - Make this 1 tick later, keeps things on the beat and helps with timing the next slider too though I'd still be very wary doing red beats on an easy map. I prefer like it's now

00:42:616 (1) - Too soon after spinner again. same as above

00:43:752 (2) - I would get rid of this slider and put a 2 tick one like so. no change >.<

SPOILER

00:48:525 (2) - Missing clap Fixed

01:15:343 (2) - Add clap at end of slider Fixed

01:1989 (1) - Add claps both ends of slider Fixed



Well I've gotta say this mod took a little longer than expected since I started transcribing this song in Sibelius and started messing around with rearraging the piece. x.x
But in any case the map set is well done overall good luck getting it ranked! ^^

anyways thx for mod !

from my queue ~


feel moe power mod >o<






Good Luck ~ :3

Xinely wrote:

from my queue ~


feel moe power mod >o<Moe Moe Kyun <3

• 
  General

1. add sliderborder due u use skin Fixed , http://puu.sh/3yslE.png
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 165,74,255
   Combo2 : 255,128,192
   Combo3 : 255,156,0
   Combo4 : 79,255,79
   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

2. omg BG 2,56 MB, too much big size, you can ask me to resize if you want to reduce the size ~ No change for the moment but f i have another reflexion i'll call u ;3

• 
  Easy

1. 00:09:889 (1,3) - - how about to it branket? http://puu.sh/3yCVV.jpg Code useless i can make it by my own (branket pro!)
   

   216,80,11707,2,0,P|144:96|112:164,2,150,0|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:13:298 (1) - end in 00:14:434 - ? it's kinda odd to me if you end in red tick when music "tet tet tet tet" still not end Fi fi fixed
3. 00:38:980 (3) - just make it like http://puu.sh/3yDcT.jpg ? fixed
4. 00:46:252 (3) - high vocal in start, give whistle? -Umi- give a whistle to xinely
5. 00:48:525 (2,3) - it's so nazi, different 1 in y coordinate LOL eeh ? fixed >.<
6. 00:49:889 (5) - whistle in head? fixed
7. 00:53:070 (2) - maybe u will reject it, but imo it's better rhythm if you make http://puu.sh/3yDpu.jpg gomen REJECTED!
8. 00:56:707 (3) - finish in tail? if you fell too much loud, try whistle instead fixed with whistle
9. 01:03:980 (2) - whistle in repeat? fixed
10. 01:08:070 (5) - whistle in head? fixed
11. 01:09:434 (1) - maybe nazi thing again. 180,308? fixed
12. 01:10:798 (3) - same as 00:56:707 (3) - fixed
13. 01:24:434 (3) - add whistle too to consistency with 01:17:161 (1,2) - ? fixed

• 
  Normal

1. AR+1 to better spread with all diff fixed
2. 00:15:798 (1) - red anchor 252,64? fixed
3. 00:17:843 (4) - not issue, but place in 416,200? easier to catch imo well i didn't really see the difference but fixed xD
4. 00:25:798 (6) - since normal, stack when 1/1 i think it's kinda confuse to read when use HD, put in 304,180? fixed >.< Too many reflexion about it
5. 00:39:661 (4) - nazi, 1 grid left? to make nice hamburger :3 *q*
6. 00:46:252 (3) - same as easy, whistle in head? fixed
7. 00:49:889 (3) - whistle in head? fixed
8. 00:51:707 (1) - fix spacing 1,11x? i think better use 1,2 xD Why not xD
9. 00:53:070 (2) - whistle in repeat? fixed
10. 01:00:798 (3) - whistle in head? fixed
11. 01:06:252 (1,2) - maybe u can make it more branket. u are branket maniac so you can fix it without my suggestion :p Hum it's fine for me
12. 01:07:616 (2) - whistle in tail fixed
13. 01:24:434 (3) - same as easy :3 fixed

• 
  Hard

1. 00:05:116 (2,3) - you can make it better if you copy paste from (1) and then rotate it 45 degree http://puu.sh/3yE25.jpg Yeah not bad fixed :3
2. 00:12:843 (4) - 1 grid down to staight wiht (5)? up the 5
3. 00:21:707 (5) - ctrl+J for better flow? not for me >3<
4. 00:33:752 (3) - 288,292? it's better imo lol hum yeah x)
5. 00:36:480 (1) - no need NC imo right
6. 00:45:798 (4) - whistle in end xD fixed
7. 00:49:889 (3) - whistle head xD (omg lazy wrote again, just aplly all whistle hitsound if you follow that in all diff lol) fixed x 4 for the others '-'
8. 01:18:525 (4) - ctrl+G? better to read imo yeah *-*
   

• 
  Insane

1. 00:07:161 (1,2,3,4) - you are make this part in Hard diff with jump, why no in insane, insane is highest diff so you must to make jump in insane too lol fixed Jump !
2. 00:09:889 (5,7) - make branket so consistency with 00:08:070 (1,3) -? no
3. 00:12:161 (2) - NC for anti jump fixed
4. 00:12:843 (4) - this one too same as above AND fixed

Good Luck ~ :3

thx for mod moenely >3< !

[General]
The map is great
In some cases the not are not placed very well but is ok

[Easy]
00:00:798 (1) - You can elevate more the volume until 00:11:252 (2) - but it is'nt a big problem
00:38:980 (3) - This slider does not fit with the song move the end to 00:38:980 -

[Normal]
00:00:798 (1) - The same as easy
00:02:161 (4) - Delete the reverse, does'nt sound good
00:27:843 (2) - The slider may end here 00:27:843 (2) -
00:28:525 (3) - Place a circle
00:39:661 (4) - To close from the other note
00:49:889 (3) - Make the slider finish here
00:50:570 (4) - Add a circle
01:10:570 (2) - Too close from the past note
01:11:025 (3) - To close from the next one

[Hard]
I did'nt find many problems here

Sorry for the bad mod and good luck

ushiromiya _maria wrote:

[General]
The map is great thx :3
In some cases the not are not placed very well but is ok

[Easy]
00:00:798 (1) - You can elevate more the volume until 00:11:252 (2) - but it is'nt a big problem I prefer with low volum
00:38:980 (3) - This slider does not fit with the song move the end to 00:38:980 - More or less fixed :3

[Normal]
00:00:798 (1) - The same as easy same as easy, prefer low volum ^^
00:02:161 (4) - Delete the reverse, does'nt sound good I'll keep in mind
00:2743 (2) - The slider may end here 00:2743 (2) - I don't understand what you mean sorry :/
00:28:525 (3) - Place a circle ^
00:39:661 (4) - To close from the other note Same spacing
00:4989 (3) - Make the slider finish here I don't understand what you mean sorry :/
00:50:570 (4) - Add a circle ^
01:10:570 (2) - Too close from the past note Same spacing
01:11:025 (3) - To close from the next one^

[Hard]
I did'nt find many problems here

Sorry for the bad mod and good luck

Thx for mod !

yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
consider adding "2nd" and "ending" since this is the 2nd ending in the anime.
i find that the timing sounds too early. try a 1002(+18) because i find that's the correct timing in this song IMO. confirm it with someone else to make sure.
please note that i'm modding with your offset, so if you apply my suggestions with any coding, remember to re-snap the notes.

[Easy]
00:11:707 (3) - i think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning, so to fix this problem, add a finish at the beginning to show emphasis in the cymbals in the BGM.
00:30:780 (2) - for this one, replace this for a drum finish at the end since the drums sound differently and it sounds a lot similar to the drums in the BGM IMO.
00:32:598 (4) - same as above, but this time, add the drum finish instead.
00:40:570 (1,1) - the gap between the spinner and the slider is too soon and too awkward to follow for beginners since the repeat ends at an odd spot for beginners, so for this one, you should end the spinner at 00:42:616, leave that gap for beginners to recover, and add a circle at 00:44:434 so that it'd be a lot easier and more straightforward for beginners to follow during gameplay.
00:48:525 (2) - for this one, it's the clap that's missing for consistency in the claps, so add a clap in this part since it feels empty and it breaks consistency with the hitsound pattern during gameplay.

[Normal]
00:03:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally, i find that the stack in this movement pattern breaks the sense of flow in this map since i feel that it suddenly stops here, so for this one, it'd flow a lot smoother if you can space them all out to represent that smooth transition and flow in this part of the song during gameplay. from what i see, it should look something like this.
00:27:843 (2) - for this one, i think it'd be more readable and less confusing if you adjusted the slider like this. the bad slider overlap like that would feel somewhat confusing and awkward to follow as well during gameplay IMO.
00:47:161 (5) - i think that re-adjusting the slider like this would feel more smoother and more flowy during gameplay IMO.
00:50:798 (4) - the flow behind this slider looks bad and a bit sloppy to follow IMO, so for this one, you should remove one of the points of the slider to show that smoothness in the diff during gameplay.
01:12:161 - the flow suddenly stops once the end of (4) is hit. the slider might tell the player that the flow here is still going, so for this one, add a circle, and a slider that starts at 01:12:389, and ending it at 00:13:070 for a smoother transition in this part of the song during gameplay.

[Hard]
00:14:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think that moving this pattern here would be more neater since (2) and the 2nd (1) would be stacked at the beginning of (5) and (4), making the transition feel smoother and neater during gameplay IMO.
00:33:752 (3) - use a 3-point curved slider so that it'd look nicer and smoother to follow as well during gameplay. it should look something like this
00:35:570 (2) - ^
01:16:934 (1) - personally in a somewhat slow song like this, i think that 2 circles would be more readable than a 1/4 slider. it might throw off players at this level during gameplay IMO.
01:23:525 (1) - i say that you replace this for 2 1/2 sliders with a jump followed by a circle to represent the BGM in this part, which might be a fun pattern to do if you know where to put these notes .

[Insane]
00:10:798 (7) - with the current pattern going on, this note here breaks the whole pattern because it's not placed correctly IMO, so in this case, make this slider look like (5), and the direction it should be pointing is this direction. that way, the flow and transition is steady and easier to follow during gameplay.

and that's it. the map has potential, and i feel that it's almost ready for a bubble, so here's a star and GL on the map .

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo here's your mod from my random queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
consider adding "2nd" and "ending" since this is the 2nd ending in the anime. Fixed
i find that the timing sounds too early. try a 1002(+18) because i find that's the correct timing in this song IMO. confirm it with someone else to make sure. Fixed but +15
please note that i'm modding with your offset, so if you apply my suggestions with any coding, remember to re-snap the notes.

[Easy]
00:11:707 (3) - i think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning, so to fix this problem, add a finish at the beginning to show emphasis in the cymbals in the BGM. Fixed
00:30:780 (2) - for this one, replace this for a drum finish at the end since the drums sound differently and it sounds a lot similar to the drums in the BGM IMO. Fixed and also in all diffs
00:32:598 (4) - same as above, but this time, add the drum finish instead. ^
00:40:570 (1,1) - the gap between the spinner and the slider is too soon and too awkward to follow for beginners since the repeat ends at an odd spot for beginners, so for this one, you should end the spinner at 00:42:616, leave that gap for beginners to recover, and add a circle at 00:44:434 so that it'd be a lot easier and more straightforward for beginners to follow during gameplay. More or less fixed, just delete the reverse slider and finished the spinner where you said, i think it's okay now ? '-'
00:48:525 (2) - for this one, it's the clap that's missing for consistency in the claps, so add a clap in this part since it feels empty and it breaks consistency with the hitsound pattern during gameplay. Fixed

[Normal]
00:03:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally, i find that the stack in this movement pattern breaks the sense of flow in this map since i feel that it suddenly stops here, so for this one, it'd flow a lot smoother if you can space them all out to represent that smooth transition and flow in this part of the song during gameplay. from what i see, it should look something like this. Yeah better fixed
00:27:843 (2) - for this one, i think it'd be more readable and less confusing if you adjusted the slider like this. the bad slider overlap like that would feel somewhat confusing and awkward to follow as well during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:47:161 (5) - i think that re-adjusting the slider like this would feel more smoother and more flowy during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:50:798 (4) - the flow behind this slider looks bad and a bit sloppy to follow IMO, so for this one, you should remove one of the points of the slider to show that smoothness in the diff during gameplay. Fixed
01:12:161 - the flow suddenly stops once the end of (4) is hit. the slider might tell the player that the flow here is still going, so for this one, add a circle, and a slider that starts at 01:12:389, and ending it at 00:13:070 for a smoother transition in this part of the song during gameplay. Nice, Fixed

[Hard]
00:14:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think that moving this pattern here would be more neater since (2) and the 2nd (1) would be stacked at the beginning of (5) and (4), making the transition feel smoother and neater during gameplay IMO. Fixed

SPOILER

253,321,14434,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,14661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,270,14889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,15116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,191,15343,6,0,P|353:173|369:157,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:33:752 (3) - use a 3-point curved slider so that it'd look nicer and smoother to follow as well during gameplay. it should look something like this After lot and lot of reflexion on this, finally fixed x)
00:35:570 (2) - ^ ^
01:16:934 (1) - personally in a somewhat slow song like this, i think that 2 circles would be more readable than a 1/4 slider. it might throw off players at this level during gameplay IMO. right, fixed
01:23:525 (1) - i say that you replace this for 2 1/2 sliders with a jump followed by a circle to represent the BGM in this part, which might be a fun pattern to do if you know where to put these notes . Fixed just look ;3

[Insane]
00:10:798 (7) - with the current pattern going on, this note here breaks the whole pattern because it's not placed correctly IMO, so in this case, make this slider look like (5), and the direction it should be pointing is this direction. that way, the flow and transition is steady and easier to follow during gameplay. ok, fixed

and that's it. the map has potential, and i feel that it's almost ready for a bubble, so here's a star and GL on the map .

Yay, thx a lot >3</ (Edit : finally fixed offset) so All fixed :3

Yo.

[General]

1. I don't really like your current BG. It seems pretty cool on 16:9 display, but 4:3 display makes it look weird. Look closer to this screenshot, we can't see head of that guy in the left. Considr changing your BG, so everyone will be able to enjoy it.
2. Source is meant to be Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu Ni!
3. Don't forget to add Silver Link to tags since you use their animation. Oh, and adding The Idiot, the Test, and Summoned Creatures english title to tags would be a great idea! So, just copy this code to your tags
   

   Silver Link The Idiot and Summoned Creatures

   Note: don't remove old tags, ofc

[Easy]

1. Consider using lower HP Drain. Diff has some long gaps, so to make it more beginner friendly we can reduce HP Drain by one tick!
2. 00:11:722 (3) - nazi - it's too close to slider (take a look at (2)!). I'd move it a bit far away, so it will look better. If you take a look at my example, you'll understand what I mean.
3. 00:15:358 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here is pretty good, but we can make it better. If you start this part with slider, beginners will be able to catch rhythm easier! Basically, i want you to do something like this.
4. 00:21:722 (3) - nazi - since (3)'s tail is too close to (2) beginners may mistakenly hit it. If there's any way to change it without ruining your flow - go ahead and change it!
5. 00:32:631 (4) - nooo! why did you break your cute 1/1 rhythm here. It may confuse beginners, so I'd recommend you to keep rhythm consistent here. How? It's pretty easy, take a look at this example and you'll see that sliders can help you!
6. 00:38:995 (3,4) - how about using Ctrl+G on (3) and unstacking (4)? I think it will make your flow smoother, try it!
7. 00:43:767 (2) - NC bug. Add a new combo here, so we can get this bug fixed!
   [00:49:904 (5,1,2) - nazi - the whole pattern could be a bit neater. I know, you can do it :< Anyway, if you're too lazy let it be. example
   Note: I mentioned this because it looks really messy. All your patterns are neat and this one looks really strange here :<

[Normal]
Gap between [Easy] and [Normal] is pretty huge. So it looks like "E H I I". Try to make [Normal] a bit easier, if you feel like doing it.

1. 1/2 objects are a bit overlapped. That little overlap makes them look messy. Try to avoid iit next time. Probably it'll be better if you will make such patterns more overlappy or you can try to avoid such overlaps.
   Note: as I said you don't have to change anything at this diff. Just keep it mind for your future maps But I'd be happy if you change it now, tbh.
2. 00:30:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - as I've mentioned earlier, you should make it a bit easier! For example, try to avoid long 1/2 patterns like this one.
3. 00:33:313 (1,2,3,4) - but when you map somethink tricky like this, it's ok to use more 1/2s to emphazise rhythm!
4. 01:11:495 (4) - it's better to emphasize end of kiai section by NC and loud beat. So, placing 1/2 slider with NC at 01:11:722 - will work much better.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:176 (3,1) - spacing here is kinda random. To be honest, I wanted to see consistent spacing here.
   Note: you should Ctrl+G 00:05:131 (2) - this slider for the same reason as above. It's really ruins your flow, imo.
2. 00:58:995 (1,2,3,4) - such jumps ruin your calm, curvy and awesome flow. I'd reduce spacing and make them prettier. Anyway, it's totally up to you!
   
   Jumps are a bit overused here. Song is calm, so there's no need to be that jumpy. But SV is low, so that's probably ok. Get more opinions about it, anyway!

[Insane]

1. 00:04:449 (1,2) - even if this is the hardest diff, that x3,9+ jump is totally unfitting here. Please, please, I'm begging you, reduce distance of such jumps! They ruin your flow completely.
2. 00:14:449 (1) - isn't it too early after spinner? Players need some time to focus on objects!
3. 00:25:131 (7) - try to disable "snaking sliders" and play this pattern. It becomes unreadable, because we can't see where's head and where's tail of this slider. So, consider unstacking it a bit.
4. 00:29:222 (6,7,8,9) - such stacks are pretty hard to read, please unstack this triplet to make pattern more playable!
5. 01:01:722 (6) - thisjump fits here, but it can be much better if you reduce distance of jump! So, it will not break your flow that much

~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo.

[General]

1. I don't really like your current BG. It seems pretty cool on 16:9 display, but 4:3 display makes it look weird. Look closer to this screenshot, we can't see head of that guy in the left. Considr changing your BG, so everyone will be able to enjoy it. change into 1024x768
2. Source is meant to be Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu Ni! second season ;3
3. Don't forget to add Silver Link to tags since you use their animation. Oh, and adding The Idiot, the Test, and Summoned Creatures english title to tags would be a great idea! So, just copy this code to your tags fixed
   

   Silver Link The Idiot and Summoned Creatures

   Note: don't remove old tags, ofc

[Easy]

1. Consider using lower HP Drain. Diff has some long gaps, so to make it more beginner friendly we can reduce HP Drain by one tick! I'll ask opinion about this ^^
2. 00:11:722 (3) - nazi - it's too close to slider (take a look at (2)!). I'd move it a bit far away, so it will look better. If you take a look at my example, you'll understand what I mean. intentional
3. 00:15:358 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm here is pretty good, but we can make it better. If you start this part with slider, beginners will be able to catch rhythm easier! Basically, i want you to do something like this. sorry but i prefer mine >.<
4. 00:21:722 (3) - nazi - since (3)'s tail is too close to (2) beginners may mistakenly hit it. If there's any way to change it without ruining your flow - go ahead and change it! Move the (3)
5. 00:32:631 (4) - nooo! why did you break your cute 1/1 rhythm here. It may confuse beginners, so I'd recommend you to keep rhythm consistent here. How? It's pretty easy, take a look at this example and you'll see that sliders can help you! In this part i follox the voice in all diff, so i don't really want change this :/
6. 00:38:995 (3,4) - how about using Ctrl+G on (3) and unstacking (4)? I think it will make your flow smoother, try it! Fixed
7. 00:43:767 (2) - NC bug. Add a new combo here, so we can get this bug fixed!
   [00:49:904 (5,1,2) - nazi - the whole pattern could be a bit neater. I know, you can do it :< Anyway, if you're too lazy let it be. example Fixed
   Note: I mentioned this because it looks really messy. All your patterns are neat and this one looks really strange here :<

[Normal]
Gap between [Easy] and [Normal] is pretty huge. So it looks like "E H I I". Try to make [Normal] a bit easier, if you feel like doing it.

1. 1/2 objects are a bit overlapped. That little overlap makes them look messy. Try to avoid iit next time. Probably it'll be better if you will make such patterns more overlappy or you can try to avoid such overlaps.
   Note: as I said you don't have to change anything at this diff. Just keep it mind for your future maps But I'd be happy if you change it now, tbh.
2. 00:30:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - as I've mentioned earlier, you should make it a bit easier! For example, try to avoid long 1/2 patterns like this one.
3. 00:33:313 (1,2,3,4) - but when you map somethink tricky like this, it's ok to use more 1/2s to emphazise rhythm!
4. 01:11:495 (4) - it's better to emphasize end of kiai section by NC and loud beat. So, placing 1/2 slider with NC at 01:11:722 - will work much better.
   
   Well i changed nothing, but it's look like a normal+ i guess ^^

[Hard]

1. 00:02:176 (3,1) - spacing here is kinda random. To be honest, I wanted to see consistent spacing here. Fixed
   Note: you should Ctrl+G 00:05:131 (2) - this slider for the same reason as above. It's really ruins your flow, imo. I don't think so
2. 00:58:995 (1,2,3,4) - such jumps ruin your calm, curvy and awesome flow. I'd reduce spacing and make them prettier. Anyway, it's totally up to you! i like this part ^^
   
   Jumps are a bit overused here. Song is calm, so there's no need to be that jumpy. But SV is low, so that's probably ok. Get more opinions about it, anyway!

[Insane]

1. 00:04:449 (1,2) - even if this is the hardest diff, that x3,9+ jump is totally unfitting here. Please, please, I'm begging you, reduce distance of such jumps! They ruin your flow completely.
2. 00:14:449 (1) - isn't it too early after spinner? Players need some time to focus on objects! Reduce the spinner
3. 00:25:131 (7) - try to disable "snaking sliders" and play this pattern. It becomes unreadable, because we can't see where's head and where's tail of this slider. So, consider unstacking it a bit.
4. 00:29:222 (6,7,8,9) - such stacks are pretty hard to read, please unstack this triplet to make pattern more playable!
5. 01:01:722 (6) - thisjump fits here, but it can be much better if you reduce distance of jump! So, it will not break your flow that much
   
   About the rest no change sorry, i kinda like these jumps and stackings and i don't think it ruin the flow it's more about preference here :3

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Good luck!

thx a lot again bakari :3 !

Okay, after two days of IRCmodding:

1. A lot of change in the hitsounds: Inconsistencies, some addons;
2. blanket imperfection in Hard
3. made sure the artist and the title are alright
4. added some new tags
5. new combo changes
6. etc.

Bubbled

Thx Gabe >3< !

Gogo !

GOGOGO FOR RANKED UMI

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Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Wrong source, it should be Baka to Tesuto to Shoukanjuu, and also put baka to test into tags
2. About Artist, -> http://www.haradahitomi.com Hitomi Harada is shown on her official website but not Harada Hitomi, so that i think you'd better to use Hitomi Harada as well
3. i suggest add audio-lead-in to 2000ms

[Insane]

1. 00:25:131 (7) - split into two sliders due to the drum 00:25:585 - & 00:25:813 - , for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:29:449 (8,9,10) - move to 236:285?
3. 00:43:767 (1) - here. the slider end on a downbeat which is both a stress and also the start point of kiai, where player may expect a "press" to emphasize the sense. However, compared with note or slider head, the slider end is too weak so that i suggest you to split it into an 1/1 slider and then a note with NC, like this. pay attention to the hitsounds
   
4. 00:47:858 (10) - here's another case of "slider end on downbeat" , i hope you can make the beat here like this:
   
5. 00:48:540 (2) - head weid a bit, how about a note->slider->note structure (syncopation)?
   
6. 00:59:449 (2) - the flow here is weid a bit, i may choose to apply ctrl+g to 00:59:449 (2) - 00:59:904 (3) - 01:00:358 (4) - separately, and move 01:01:495 (5) - to 417:76
7. 01:11:722 (8) - NC here for both downbeat and kiai end
8. 01:22:176 (3) - the shape is looked odd a bit, can you make it more smooth?

[Hard]

1. 00:29:449 (2,3,4) - suggest to stack them
2. 00:43:767 (1) - As i said in Insane already, slider end on downbeat issue
3. 00:48:085 (1) - weird beat... how about slider+slider+note like this:
   
4. 01:15:358 (3) - adjust the shape to make it symmetrical?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. in general NC is messed a bit, try to move NCs to downbeat :>
2. 00:33:313 (1) - feeling....narrow, how about this shape?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:43:767 (3) - Same as Insane

That's all~

well all fixed >.<

thx a lot !

OH, GOD. So amazing for me when I din't look at this map 5 days ago . Bubbled ><

Scorpiour wrote:

About Artist, -> http://www.haradahitomi.com Hitomi Harada is shown on her official website but not Harada Hitomi, so that i think you'd better to use Hitomi Harada as well[/color]

i think otherwise.

well after asked to somes japanese friends, back to Harada Hitomi. ^^

confirmed the translate issues with japanese staffs, irc recheck with mapper and fixed some NC in normal

Rebubbled~~

thx again scorpiour :3

Ranked ♥

thx melophobia ! >3<

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I hate you Umi

gratz!!

congratz umi! :3

Bravo Umi :3!

so fast o.o
umi gratz maou happy too about this :3

Wut... So fast...
GRATZ Umi

thx everyone o/ !

omg i haven't mod and it's already ranked owo

Gratz

This map suck!!!!!!

Félicitation -Umi- pour le speedrank et la map de qualité ^^

J'adore tout particulièrement la Hard (un peu troll des joueuers HD) et la Insane.

ahah fat play, content que t'aime bien >.< mais bon je sais qu'en avançant je ferai bcp mieux !

Plz look forward my next project ;3 > http://osu.ppy.sh/s/103911

Hard / Insane too strong

You're serious ? xD Where DT/HR ?

Nice. J'ai test la hard avec osu Android hmmhmmm hmmm hmmm no comment ! Mais gratz bravo tousa

xD thx heanday, i miss you >.< !